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PinocchioP - Mushroom Mother [Osu|Taiko]

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YunoFanatic
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YunoFanatic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, March 20, 2014 at 8:48:46 AM

Artist: PinocchioP
Title: Mushroom Mother
Tags: hatsune miku vocaloid onosakihito lilywhite tsusuko mingmichael
BPM: 168
Filesize: 3915kb
Play Time: 01:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.65 stars, 105 notes)
  2. LilyWhite's Insane (4.9 stars, 293 notes)
  3. m1ng's Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 656 notes)
  4. Normal (4.05 stars, 125 notes)
  5. Ono's Taiko Muzukashii (4.81 stars, 445 notes)
  6. Ono's Taiko Oni (4.94 stars, 599 notes)
  7. Tsusuko's Hard (4.94 stars, 259 notes)
Download: PinocchioP - Mushroom Mother
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
SECOND ATTEMPT FOR RANK
My First Standard For Ranking
Easy: Done
Normal: Done
Tsusuko's Hard: Done
LilyWhite's Insane: Done
Ono's Muzakashii: (Taiko hard) Done
m1ng's Oni: (Taiko insane) Done
Ono's Oni: (Taiko insane) Done
Hitsound: Done
BPM and OFFSET: OK NOW!
Very special thank you to those who helped me and to the modders! and testplayed!
Asphyxia
LilyWhite
Tsusuko
OnosakiHito
mingmichael
Dolphin
Coli Hou
KanaRin
YGOkid8
-Bakari-
Garven
Irreversible
PROGUY
Sonnyc
Zero__wind
Cxu
LexaaLovesU
BIGGEST MUSHROOM FAMILY!

BATS WHERE ARE YOU?
REDOWNLOAD ON 8/22/13 ADDED HITSOUND D:
REDOWNLOAD ON 9.12/13 ADDED NEW BG!
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GIDZ
1,002 posts
Joined January 2013
GIDZ
From your mod request :D

General:
~Wrong timing

My check
~Offset is 24597 ms
~BPM: 167.85
Update with this timing setup first.If u r not sure,post in t/13795 and they will help you.
Fix this first and open Aimod (CTRL+SHIFT+A), you will find a bunch of work to do,I'll mod it when u fix this and update it ^^ Good luck :D
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

gideon5504 wrote:

From your mod request :D

General:
~Wrong timing

My check
~Offset is 24597 ms
~BPM: 167.85
Update with this timing setup first.If u r not sure,post in t/13795 and they will help you.
Fix this first and open Aimod (CTRL+SHIFT+A), you will find a bunch of work to do,I'll mod it when u fix this and update it ^^ Good luck :D
FIXED~!
GIDZ
1,002 posts
Joined January 2013
GIDZ
General:
~Offset is still wrong X.X
~I don't think u need that many timing points,1 should be enough or 2 max.
~Too many notes too hard to read.
~Notes are not placed in a flow of rhythm.
~Too many jump beats.This creates a drag to the whole song.
~Keep slider velocity to 1 in timing. (NOT TIMING SETUP)
~~I STRONGLY RECOMMEND YOU ASK AN EXPERIENCED WIP MODDER TO DEAL WITH THIS UNFINISHED MAP

Normal:
~Your notes are too hard to read for beginners,try to put less circles.
~00:30:174 - Don't change the rhythm suddenly,beginners can't read that.
~00:35:889 - Too many circles,replace some of them with sliders for beginners to play easily.
~00:40:174 (1) - Remove spinner,it doesn't make game play flow.
~00:41:960 - Pls make an obvious pattern for beginners to read.
~00:59:461 (2,3) - Don't block the circles with the slider.

Hard:
~00:37:139 - What is this? 0.o
~01:02:674 - PLS snap these sliders to the correct beat and arrange them properly for game play.
~01:08:032 (4) - Doesn't make game play flow with the cursore ending the other way and having to jump back to the 1/2 beat notes.

Insane:
~00:24:460 (1) - This slider's end does not make cursor movement flow.
~00:24:460 (1) - What's this?? 0.o
~01:22:317 - Unnecessary break,add notes here instead.
~01:28:031 (6) - Same problem with cursor movement not being in flow.
~01:33:924 - PLS distance snap the notes.
~01:35:710 ~ 01:36:603 - Replace with spinner intead,it makes game play flow better.
~01:44:638 - What is this? 0.o
~01:51:602 - Distance snap.

Very messy beat map >< Try to fix the flow of notes in rhythm.Good luck :D
Overwrite
218 posts
Joined December 2012
Overwrite
Hello, from modding queue.
First thing I can say is that the timing is incorrect, all those timing points aren't needed. Tempo is correct but offset isn't (1075)
The beatmap is INCREDIBLY messy, and with a lot of mistimed hitcircles/sliders. Also, Normal is way too hard. Think about making it easier.
Also, (personal opinion) Insanely Mushroom's circles are way too small. I'd have seen here a circle size of 4 and an approach rate of 9.
I'm incredibly sorry, but for now, I can't mod the map with precision. :o
I suggest re-doing the difficulties so I can mod it after, okay? :oops:
(Yeah and, PM me when it's done, my tiny brain might forget :s
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic
Currently my offset is done
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Overwrite
218 posts
Joined December 2012
Overwrite
Okay, I checked your beatmap again and...
I'm sorry but it's still mistimed :(
Also, with a lot of mistimed beats on every difficulty, I can't point them out all ><

Also, you're wondering about how to place hitsounds, right? Well:
To add a clap-style hitsound, click the clap icon (or press R) before adding your beat.
For a whistle-hitsound, click the whistle icon (or press W) before adding your beat.
For a finish-hitsound, click the finish icon (or press E) before adding your beat.
Sliders work differently:
If you generate the slider with selected hitsounds... They will play on ALL the slider's beats.
To get a slider with only certain parts with hitsounds...
1. Generate one without any hitsounds.
2. See that strange bar with all the beats you placed on the top? Go to the slider you generated on it, and double-click on the beat you want to apply a hitsound at.
3. Then, simply add your hitsounds by pressing the needed buttons (Such as R for clap, W for whistle, etc...)
I hope you understood! :)

Also...
-Delete all timing points on all difficulties except the first one.
-This song got stuck in my head.
-No LilyWhite don't make a guest diff this is not your job as a modder.
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Okay before anything, your second timing point is off-tune, which is the reason why its screwing up more then half your entire map! Why you have too much timing points in your map! Do keep it simple, don't over-complicate it.
If anything, keep your first Timing point. Erase all your timing points (red lines). If anything, the second timing point you should have is at 01:37:497, with the same BPM (then again, it's not really necessary, since the chorus already begins at the white tick...

...And that's it. Again, I see your placing so many offests here and there, that's not really needed to be there. Don't make it 10 times difficult then it is, alright? :) Take it easy.

What I see:



What it should look like:
Nice and simple, see? Try replacing your entire timing and all modes with this layout.

However, once you do this, you'll need to resnap your entire objects (hit circles/sliders) due to the fact that they will appear... bizarre now that they're no longer in sync with your previous ones.
You can simply resnap them all by pulling down the Timing tab. Select Resnap Current Selection.

And this will pop up.
Click yes.

And voila! All your notes will be snapped, based on your timing point! (Though I can't guarantee they will be on the right timing with the song. You may need to revise your hit circles/sliders)

Also some of the inherited I see you using should actually be bookmarks, not timing points.
Bookmarks help highlight certain parts of the music you'll want to keep note of (like when break time will end, where Kai starts etc).

Here you can simply click + to add a bookmark, or - to erase one.

eg. Place a bookmark at 01:13:926, instead of an inherited timing point, cause I can see that that's where the break ends. A bookmark will appear as a blue tickmark on your timeline.
Well, I hope I've covered the basics for you.

Sorry for the long explanation...
once you've completed this, let me know and I promise to do a real mod later :D

Hope this helps!

If your still confused or need further explanation, don't hesitate to ask!
YunoFanatic
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Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Okay before anything, your second timing point is off-tune, which is the reason why its screwing up more then half your entire map! Why you have too much timing points in your map! Do keep it simple, don't over-complicate it.
If anything, keep your first Timing point. Erase all your timing points (red lines). If anything, the second timing point you should have is at 01:37:497, with the same BPM (then again, it's not really necessary, since the chorus already begins at the white tick...

...And that's it. Again, I see your placing so many offests here and there, that's not really needed to be there. Don't make it 10 times difficult then it is, alright? :) Take it easy.

What I see:



What it should look like:
Nice and simple, see? Try replacing your entire timing and all modes with this layout.

However, once you do this, you'll need to resnap your entire objects (hit circles/sliders) due to the fact that they will appear... bizarre now that they're no longer in sync with your previous ones.
You can simply resnap them all by pulling down the Timing tab. Select Resnap Current Selection.

And this will pop up.
Click yes.

And voila! All your notes will be snapped, based on your timing point! (Though I can't guarantee they will be on the right timing with the song. You may need to revise your hit circles/sliders)

Also some of the inherited I see you using should actually be bookmarks, not timing points.
Bookmarks help highlight certain parts of the music you'll want to keep note of (like when break time will end, where Kai starts etc).

Here you can simply click + to add a bookmark, or - to erase one.

eg. Place a bookmark at 01:13:926, instead of an inherited timing point, cause I can see that that's where the break ends. A bookmark will appear as a blue tickmark on your timeline.
Well, I hope I've covered the basics for you.

Sorry for the long explanation...
once you've completed this, let me know and I promise to do a real mod later :D

Hope this helps!

If your still confused or need further explanation, don't hesitate to ask!
uguuuu .3. done
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Overwrite
218 posts
Joined December 2012
Overwrite
Finally, here's my mod .u.

General
You reversed Source and tags xD
Huge distance problems. That makes your beatmap very messy.


Normal
00:30:175 NC.
00:33:389 NC.
00:38:478 Slider end not correctly timed.
00:39:907 ^
00:44:639 NC.
00:48:210 Kiai time and slider 1 beginning start here.
00:50:264 Slider end not correctly timed.
00:51:246 NC.
00:53:389 NC.
01:02:496 NC.
01:15:264 Slider end not correctly timed.
01:17:496 Break time or notes. But not complete emptiness.
01:20:085 Slider end not correctly timed.
01:28:032 NC?
01:42:675 NC.
01:47:317 Weird slider pattern.
01:51:246 NC?

Hard
00:35:889 Circle (1) at Circle (2)'s position, and vice-versa.
00:44:460 NC.
00:44:996 Remove NC.
00:48:210 Kiai time starts here.
00:53:032 Slider (1) must be here.
01:16:692 Slider beginning not correctly timed.
01:21:246 Remove NC.
01:30:532 Weird slider pattern.
01:33:567 Remove NC.
01:33:925 Add NC.
01:55:264 Weird slider pattern, and slider end not correctly timed.

Insanely Mushroom
00:14:461 Mistimed slider
00:20:176 Same.
00:26:158 Same.
00:28:301 Same.
00:33:658 Mistimed slider end.
00:33:836 Mistimed slider.
00:35:443 Mistimed slider end.
00:38:479 Same.
00:41:336 Same.
00:51:158 WHAT EVEN
00:55:622 Mistimed slider end.
00:56:336 Mistimed slider end.
01:17:676 Weird slider pattern.
01:20:622 Same as above, plus mistimed slider end.
01:23:836 Mistimed slider end.
01:27:140 Weird slider pattern.
01:33:836 The whole pattern until the next spinner is mistimed.
01:38:301 Weird timing with (2), (3), (4).
01:40:176 Jump + stream =/= Good.
01:40:801 Mistimed slider end.
01:40:979 Mistimed slider beginning.
01:45:265 Mistimed beat, or that's one huge jump.
01:45:443 Mistimed slider beginning.
01:47:140 Weird timing with (1), (2), (3), (4), (1).
01:48:122 Mistimed slider beginning.
01:53:926 Jump + stream =/= Good.
01:55:890 NC.
01:58:122 Whole pattern mistimed.

Good luck! :)
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj
here comes ur m4m~
eyy its mushroom mother \o/

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
-first of all, the source should be "Vocaloid" and everything you have in source right now should be moved to tags

-Unify your combo colours in each diff, the fastest way to do this is to copy the code in your difficulty and unify them in every .osu file:
SPOILER


-Unify Kiai time setup (at least in your own difficulty)

-Disable countdown in Hard and Insanely Mushroom

-add "LilyWhite" to tags since he/she made you a guest diff

00:14:639 - you need a red line here (Timing - Add timing section) to mark the new 4/4 measure on the song

In the case of other needed red timing sections, use the timing setup in LilyWhite's diff; the timing there is proper and marks the correct measure changes in the song

[Normal]
If this is going for rankings, you probably need to reduce the star ratings to <3.25 in order to have a proper difficulty spread on the mapset

...
i would like to mod this thoroughly, but maybe because you have adjusted timing recently, all the notes seem to have weird snapping; do scan through the diffs to reorganize the rhythm placements. Feel free to call me back for a proper mod after you have everything in-tact
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Okay, here the first half of my full mod:
*Had to put the in boxes, since they're very long...

Normal mode:
Slidier's end at 00:24:639 in unsnapped. Stretch it's end to point 00:25:353 instead.
Move slider at:
00:25:889 to 00:26:067.
00:26:960 to 00:27:139

00:27:853 Re position the objects like this:
- Removing slider turns on slider 4, and moving the next 3 hit circles back.

Add another hit circle at 00:29:639.

At 00:30:175 change this pattern:

into this:


00:33:390 - 00:38:211 Your objects should be looking like this:

...Okay this may take forever.
For short, I'd like you to select all your objects (spinners, hit circles/ sliders) from 00:37:317 all the way to the end.
You can easily do this by left clicking on the timeline above, then drag in right....like this:

Once your done, your screen should pretty much look like this:
bizarre lol.
Now select your last note at 01:58:746. Do not single click, click and hold the last note, and pull it forward to 01:58:925.

And there! At least 90% of your notes now should be on the white tick.

Also make sure you Beat snap divisor is at 1/2

*Note* You may need to re-play the entire song just to make sure. I can't be re-snapping the entire notes in your map, just some for reference :(

Hard mode:
Before you do anything, resnap all your notes by 1/2.

Shrink the sliders by a half at:
00:25:175
eg;
-->
00:27:317 and move it to 00:27:496.
00:28:032
00:41:603 and move it to 00:41:782.
00:42:317
00:48:032
00:48:746
00:52:317 and move it to 00:52:496.
01:07:674
01:14:460
01:16:603
01:31:603 and create a copy, place it at 01:32:139

Move sliders at:
00:30:710 to 00:30:889
00:31:425 to 00:31:603
00:32:139 to 00:32:317 also remove the slider at 00:32:675, and make this have a turn like this:

00:53:121 to 00:53:032
01:06:960 to 01:06:782 and add a turn.

I'm sorry, but that's all I can do for this mode as well.
Same as normal mode, make sure at least 90% of your notes should be timed on the white tick.

I'll mod the other 2 mods tomorrow.

For now, I hope this helps~! :D

YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Okay, here the first half of my full mod:
*Had to put the in boxes, since they're very long...

Normal mode:
Slidier's end at 00:24:639 in unsnapped. Stretch it's end to point 00:25:353 instead.
Move slider at:
00:25:889 to 00:26:067.
00:26:960 to 00:27:139

00:27:853 Re position the objects like this:
- Removing slider turns on slider 4, and moving the next 3 hit circles back.

Add another hit circle at 00:29:639.

At 00:30:175 change this pattern:

into this:


00:33:390 - 00:38:211 Your objects should be looking like this:

...Okay this may take forever.
For short, I'd like you to select all your objects (spinners, hit circles/ sliders) from 00:37:317 all the way to the end.
You can easily do this by left clicking on the timeline above, then drag in right....like this:

Once your done, your screen should pretty much look like this:
bizarre lol.
Now select your last note at 01:58:746. Do not single click, click and hold the last note, and pull it forward to 01:58:925.

And there! At least 90% of your notes now should be on the white tick.

Also make sure you Beat snap divisor is at 1/2

*Note* You may need to re-play the entire song just to make sure. I can't be re-snapping the entire notes in your map, just some for reference :(

Hard mode:
Before you do anything, resnap all your notes by 1/2.

Shrink the sliders by a half at:
00:25:175
eg;
-->
00:27:317 and move it to 00:27:496.
00:28:032
00:41:603 and move it to 00:41:782.
00:42:317
00:48:032
00:48:746
00:52:317 and move it to 00:52:496.
01:07:674
01:14:460
01:16:603
01:31:603 and create a copy, place it at 01:32:139

Move sliders at:
00:30:710 to 00:30:889
00:31:425 to 00:31:603
00:32:139 to 00:32:317 also remove the slider at 00:32:675, and make this have a turn like this:

00:53:121 to 00:53:032
01:06:960 to 01:06:782 and add a turn.

I'm sorry, but that's all I can do for this mode as well.
Same as normal mode, make sure at least 90% of your notes should be timed on the white tick.

I'll mod the other 2 mods tomorrow.

For now, I hope this helps~! :D

Lol sure!
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

jonathanlfj wrote:

here comes ur m4m~
eyy its mushroom mother \o/

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
-first of all, the source should be "Vocaloid" and everything you have in source right now should be moved to tags

-Unify your combo colours in each diff, the fastest way to do this is to copy the code in your difficulty and unify them in every .osu file:
SPOILER


-Unify Kiai time setup (at least in your own difficulty)

-Disable countdown in Hard and Insanely Mushroom

-add "LilyWhite" to tags since he/she made you a guest diff

00:14:639 - you need a red line here (Timing - Add timing section) to mark the new 4/4 measure on the song

In the case of other needed red timing sections, use the timing setup in LilyWhite's diff; the timing there is proper and marks the correct measure changes in the song

[Normal]
If this is going for rankings, you probably need to reduce the star ratings to <3.25 in order to have a proper difficulty spread on the mapset

...
i would like to mod this thoroughly, but maybe because you have adjusted timing recently, all the notes seem to have weird snapping; do scan through the diffs to reorganize the rhythm placements. Feel free to call me back for a proper mod after you have everything in-tact

Proper done
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jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj
i guess i will use some pictures too
Do not kudose this post

1. i just learned that Vocaloid cannot be used as source. Also, use the composer instead of Hatsune Miku so for Artist put Pinocchio-P. Keep "hatsune miku" and "vocaloid" in tags. Don't forget the Artist Unicode: ピノキオP

2. about the combo colours, the highlighted area is what you will copy and paste into all diffs that doesnt have the same values


3. In the case of your kiai time, all the timing sections marked with the star icon in ur timing setup panel needs to me consistent across all diffs (LilyWhite's diff can be an exception)

4. Use this red timing section setup for ALL the diffs (i took out all the green sections so this looks cleaner):


5. now that i just saw ur pm, regarding the issue with the normal difficulty, the settings and stuff are fine for a normal diff, but if this mapset is going for ranking, you will need an Easy diff that has a star rating below 3.25 (so it displays as 3 stars on osu). preferrably a 2-star easy would fill up the difficulty gap.

Since you said you have done some changes to your diffs i will edit this with a proper mod later

EDIT: mod here
SPOILER
[Normal]
if you are planning on doing an easy, all the difficulty settings (except circle size) need to be raised by at least 2 notches
00:24:639 (1) - extend this to 00:25:353
00:31:603 (2) - spacing is broken here
00:34:818 (3) - snap to 00:35:175 (4)
00:38:746 (4) - replace this with a note at 00:38:925 plays alot better
00:48:210 (3) - NC
00:53:389 (1) - extend this to 00:53:925
00:55:175 (3,4,5) - make spacing consistent here
00:58:032 (1,2,3) - too soon after spinner, move these to start at 00:58:210
01:05:175 (1,2) - same thing here, and 01:05:889 (2) should have its end snapped to 01:06:425
01:14:817 (2) - move this to 01:14:639
01:16:246 (4) - snap end to 01:16:603
01:20:264 (1) - snap to 01:20:353
01:42:675 (1) - reduce a repeat on this
01:49:818 (2,3,1,2,3) - why spamming finishes here?
01:58:746 (1) - make a slider that ends at 01:58:925 plays alot better

[Hard]
All difficulty settings besides circle size needs to be raised by at least 2 notches
00:30:175 (1,2,3) - spacing here is confusing to read
00:38:389 (1) - shorten this to 00:38:925
00:44:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - start this at 00:44:639 fits the music better
00:50:710 (1,2) - move to 00:50:889
00:59:460 (2) - move to 00:59:639
01:06:246 (1,2,3,4) - another confusing spacing here
01:17:317 (1,2,3) - the jump is wayy too hard compared to the rest of the map, please reduce it
01:31:246 (1,2,3,4,1) - don't do this, there is no musical indication for 1/4s and this shouldn't be present in a hard diff like this
01:33:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - again, spacing is confusing to read (especially since 01:33:210 (3,4,5,6) uses the same rhythm, players wont be able to tell there is a rhythmical difference)
01:40:175 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
01:43:746 (3,4,1,2) - ^
01:50:532 (1,2,3,4,1) - start this at 01:50:353
01:56:425 (3,4) - spacing
01:58:925 (3) - add a note

[Insanely Mushroom]
00:19:997 (1) - snap end to 00:20:711
00:23:479 (1) - delete this note and add a note at 00:23:658
00:33:836 (3) - start this slider at 00:33:926
00:44:461 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - move to 00:44:640
00:49:640 (4) - this slider, and the ones alike are unrankable by today's standards, please use normal sliders instead
00:51:188 (4) - move to 00:51:247
01:04:819 (1,2) - watch for spacing here
01:21:426 (4) - shorten the end to 01:21:604, and start 01:21:872 (1) at 01:21:783
01:23:390 (4) - shorten to 01:23:747, move 01:24:015 (1) to 01:23:926
01:37:319 (1) - move this to start at 01:37:497 and add notes at 01:37:318 and 01:37:408
01:40:176 (3,4,5,1,2) - don't do this, it is barely playable and very confusing to read
01:47:944 (1) - move to 01:48:033
01:53:926 (1,2,3,4) - same problem here with playability, make the spacing closer
01:58:926 - add note

do consider everything above Blue suggestions as they are all important issues that disturbs the playability of the maps

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]
00:33:931 (3,4) - plays alot better if you make 00:33:931 (3) a slider and move 00:34:110 (4) back + reduce a repeat
00:46:610 (1) - a whistle sounds better on this imo
01:21:431 (4,5,6,7,1) - this star pattern can look alot cleaner (no overlap on 01:21:966 (6,1))
01:36:074 (1) - whistle similar to 00:46:610 (1)
01:39:644 (4) - adjust this a bit so its not touching 01:39:287 (2)
01:43:216 (1) - 1 grid up
some overmapped streams here and there, but most of them play very nicely so not a problem

to be honest the diffs besides LilyWhite's needs alot more polishing, especially use of rhythm and spacing consistency. You will get more mods in the future, some perhaps even longer than this. Just hope you wont give up and continue to improve your mapping skills so one day this can be on the rankings list. Good luck~
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01

jonathanlfj wrote:

Out of curiosity is this true? That a beatmap can be made up of entirely timing points and no inherited timing points and it's still considered ok (as in still rankable)?
If so, then you've just indirectly helped me figure out a better way to solve one of my current beat map issues, lol. Thankyou! :D
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

jonathanlfj wrote:

i guess i will use some pictures too
Do not kudose this post

1. i just learned that Vocaloid cannot be used as source. Also, use the composer instead of Hatsune Miku so for Artist put Pinocchio-P. Keep "hatsune miku" and "vocaloid" in tags. Don't forget the Artist Unicode: ピノキオP

2. about the combo colours, the highlighted area is what you will copy and paste into all diffs that doesnt have the same values


3. In the case of your kiai time, all the timing sections marked with the star icon in ur timing setup panel needs to me consistent across all diffs (LilyWhite's diff can be an exception)

4. Use this red timing section setup for ALL the diffs (i took out all the green sections so this looks cleaner):


5. now that i just saw ur pm, regarding the issue with the normal difficulty, the settings and stuff are fine for a normal diff, but if this mapset is going for ranking, you will need an Easy diff that has a star rating below 3.25 (so it displays as 3 stars on osu). preferrably a 2-star easy would fill up the difficulty gap.

Since you said you have done some changes to your diffs i will edit this with a proper mod later

EDIT: mod here
SPOILER
[Normal]
if you are planning on doing an easy, all the difficulty settings (except circle size) need to be raised by at least 2 notches
00:24:639 (1) - extend this to 00:25:353
00:31:603 (2) - spacing is broken here
00:34:818 (3) - snap to 00:35:175 (4)
00:38:746 (4) - replace this with a note at 00:38:925 plays alot better
00:48:210 (3) - NC
00:53:389 (1) - extend this to 00:53:925
00:55:175 (3,4,5) - make spacing consistent here
00:58:032 (1,2,3) - too soon after spinner, move these to start at 00:58:210
01:05:175 (1,2) - same thing here, and 01:05:889 (2) should have its end snapped to 01:06:425
01:14:817 (2) - move this to 01:14:639
01:16:246 (4) - snap end to 01:16:603
01:20:264 (1) - snap to 01:20:353
01:42:675 (1) - reduce a repeat on this
01:49:818 (2,3,1,2,3) - why spamming finishes here?
01:58:746 (1) - make a slider that ends at 01:58:925 plays alot better

[Hard]
All difficulty settings besides circle size needs to be raised by at least 2 notches
00:30:175 (1,2,3) - spacing here is confusing to read
00:38:389 (1) - shorten this to 00:38:925
00:44:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - start this at 00:44:639 fits the music better
00:50:710 (1,2) - move to 00:50:889
00:59:460 (2) - move to 00:59:639
01:06:246 (1,2,3,4) - another confusing spacing here
01:17:317 (1,2,3) - the jump is wayy too hard compared to the rest of the map, please reduce it
01:31:246 (1,2,3,4,1) - don't do this, there is no musical indication for 1/4s and this shouldn't be present in a hard diff like this
01:33:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - again, spacing is confusing to read (especially since 01:33:210 (3,4,5,6) uses the same rhythm, players wont be able to tell there is a rhythmical difference)
01:40:175 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
01:43:746 (3,4,1,2) - ^
01:50:532 (1,2,3,4,1) - start this at 01:50:353
01:56:425 (3,4) - spacing
01:58:925 (3) - add a note

[Insanely Mushroom]
00:19:997 (1) - snap end to 00:20:711
00:23:479 (1) - delete this note and add a note at 00:23:658
00:33:836 (3) - start this slider at 00:33:926
00:44:461 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - move to 00:44:640
00:49:640 (4) - this slider, and the ones alike are unrankable by today's standards, please use normal sliders instead
00:51:188 (4) - move to 00:51:247
01:04:819 (1,2) - watch for spacing here
01:21:426 (4) - shorten the end to 01:21:604, and start 01:21:872 (1) at 01:21:783
01:23:390 (4) - shorten to 01:23:747, move 01:24:015 (1) to 01:23:926
01:37:319 (1) - move this to start at 01:37:497 and add notes at 01:37:318 and 01:37:408
01:40:176 (3,4,5,1,2) - don't do this, it is barely playable and very confusing to read
01:47:944 (1) - move to 01:48:033
01:53:926 (1,2,3,4) - same problem here with playability, make the spacing closer
01:58:926 - add note

do consider everything above Blue suggestions as they are all important issues that disturbs the playability of the maps

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]
00:33:931 (3,4) - plays alot better if you make 00:33:931 (3) a slider and move 00:34:110 (4) back + reduce a repeat
00:46:610 (1) - a whistle sounds better on this imo
01:21:431 (4,5,6,7,1) - this star pattern can look alot cleaner (no overlap on 01:21:966 (6,1))
01:36:074 (1) - whistle similar to 00:46:610 (1)
01:39:644 (4) - adjust this a bit so its not touching 01:39:287 (2)
01:43:216 (1) - 1 grid up
some overmapped streams here and there, but most of them play very nicely so not a problem

to be honest the diffs besides LilyWhite's needs alot more polishing, especially use of rhythm and spacing consistency. You will get more mods in the future, some perhaps even longer than this. Just hope you wont give up and continue to improve your mapping skills so one day this can be on the rankings list.
Good luck~

Thank you for modding ~! all done!
GIDZ
1,002 posts
Joined January 2013
GIDZ
General:
~Your notes are placed on the vocals on too tight.Try to follow the flow of music as well.
~PLS USE DISTANCE SNAP.
~OPEN AIMOD AND FIX THE WARNINGS/ERRORS.
~Kiai mode not consistent,refer to LilyWhite's diff's Kiai modes and put them on the exact spot on every other diff.

Normal:
~00:30:181 (8) -Reduce this slider by 1/2 a beat.
~00:41:788 - Replace with 1/2 beat sliders instead.
~00:48:217 (3) - Reduce by 1/2 a beat.
~00:48:931 (4) - Snap this on the 1/1 beat after the previous slider.
~00:49:645 (5) - Snap this 1/2 a beat earlier and reduce the slider by 1/2 beat.
~00:53:395 (5) - NC.
~00:51:252 (1) - Doesn't follow any rhythm.
~00:59:466 (1,2,3,4) - They dun follow any beat in particular.
~01:03:931 - Nothing?
~01:05:181 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Very challenging to read the notes.
~01:20:181 (1) - Remove NC.
~01:21:074 (3) - Snap this 1/2 a beat back.
~01:37:324 (1) - Snap this 1/2 a beat forward.
~01:38:038 (2) - ^
~01:39:466 (4,5,1) - Dun feel the rhythm here.
~01:40:538 (2,3,1,2) - They dun follow the beat.Dun isolate them as well.
~01:45:002 (1,2,3,4) - Snap them on 1/1 beats.
~01:51:252 - Far too many notes on 1/2 beat,this will confuse beginners for sure.

Hard:
~PLS open AImod to fix problems.I can't mod anything at the moment without it fixed.

Insanely mushroom:
~SAME GOES TO THIS DIFF ABOUT AIMOD PROBS.

LilyWhite's Mushroom:
~I think the volume is still too loud,try reducing the volume to 65% for non Kiai and 75% for Kiai.
~00:45:181 (1,1) - Remove NC,players need to see the trail to where the note goes.
~01:10:181 (1,1) -^
~01:41:162 (4) - Stack this on circle 3 for flow of game play.
~01:41:787 - It's a bit hard to read these.
~01:42:680 - A bit too far away from the previous note considering the speed.

Here is ur second mod request. I noe I PMed u this but here u can click on the timing I've copied and edit more efficiently.Good luck again! :P
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
[General]

To your diffs except the GD : your timing is still wrong.


Hard

Red timing sections at:

00:01:068 - BPM of 168.000
00:14:646 - BPM of 168.000
00:48:217 - BPM of 120.000
02:17:502 - BPM of 120.000

Insanely Mushroom

Red timing sections at:

00:01:069 - BPM of 168.000
00:14:646 - BPM of 168.000
00:48:217 - BPM of 120.000
02:17:502 - BPM of 120.000


LilyWhite's Mushroom

Red timing sections at:

00:01:075 - BPM of 168.000
00:24:646 - BPM of 168.000
00:48:217 - BPM of 168.000
01:37:502 - BPM of 168.000


Normal

Red timing sections at:

00:01:068 - BPM of 168.000
00:14:646 - BPM of 168.000
00:48:217 - BPM of 168.000
02:17:502 - BPM of 168.000


Timing in LilyWhite's Mushroom is correct, keep consistent with it for all diffs. Don't forget to resnap all notes after you do it ~

Add "LilyWhite" to tags for all diffs since he/she made a guest diff for the beatmap.

sorry I don't know how to mod your diffs because of the timing issue .. orz


[LilyWhite's Mushroom]

AR-1, the diff doen't really need high AR cuz it doesn't fit the map and song.

00:40:360 (5,6,7,8) - you can make it prettier ! move (5) to (140,140) ; move (6) to (172,8) ; move (7) to (220,132) ; move (8) to (112,64). It would be like that after you did this.

00:43:931 (7,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Hey, I should teach you something here. Don't you feel a bit bored for this part (overlappings) ? you can try this :
reduce an arrow on 00:43:931 (7), then you can do something like this. Since the music and vocals are powerful, you can use NC and jumps to emphasize them to have the map more interesting, and match the song well.
by the way, 00:44:645 (1,1,1,1) - you just need finishes for them four and it's enough, there are so many finishes that I feel noisy ...

01:08:395 (5,6,7) - they are not a straight line so it looks not very good. just move 01:08:574 (7)'s second dot to (208,104) and it's \:D/.

01:00:359 (3) - I don't know how you felt but, were you sure the slider fitted the vocals here ? I would say "not at all." use this slider instead, and it feels much better for me. by the way, move 01:00:716 (4)'s scond point to (272,192) to make a blanket with 01:00:181 (2). it looks better.

01:09:824 (2,2,2) - the finishes ... no, seriously no. remove them three and the part sounds \TAT/. Please give it a try.

01:12:145 (5) - looks not good, move scond point of the slider to (192,136)

01:24:645 (1,2) - delete these notes since there is no beat/reason you can do this, it's overmapped.

01:31:431 (2,3,4) - move 01:31:431 (2,3,4) to (392,144) ; move 01:31:788 (3) to (376,216) ; move 01:32:145 (4) to (332,276) to have the part prettier, it would be like this.

01:41:073 (3,4,5) - it doesn't really make sense, it plays awkward and feels like random/sudden jumps. ruduce the spacing for them, please.

01:43:216 (1) - move it to (428,100) because I saw you want to do a staight line for 01:42:680 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) but you propably failed.

01:50:002 (7) - move second point of the slider to (380,212) for a perfectly straight.

01:53:216 (1) - remove finishes at 3rd and 5th arrows on the slider, they feel too noisy and don't make sense, those two points are no reason to emphasize though.

01:57:323 (6) - simply move it to (300,248) to make 01:56:787 (3,4,5,6) a prettier shape.
Overwrite
218 posts
Joined December 2012
Overwrite
Guess who still sucks at beatmapping? ME!!! \o/
Anyways, here's the new codes with most of the two moddings applied:
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: mushroom mother.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
SkinPreference:Default

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Mushroom Mother
TitleUnicode:Mushroom Mother
Artist:Pinocchio-P
ArtistUnicode:Pinocchio-P ピノキオP
Creator:YunoFanatic
Version:LilyWhite's Mushroom
Source:Pinocchio-P,MikuHatsune
Tags:Vocaloid,Mushroom Mother,Miku Hatsune,YunoFanatic
BeatmapID:271668
BeatmapSetID:102307

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"MushroomMother.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,14846,23896
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,55,251,187

[TimingPoints]
1075,357.142857142857,4,1,0,70,1,0
24646,357.142857142857,4,2,0,70,1,0
24646,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,65,0,0
36074,-114.942528735632,4,2,0,65,0,0
48217,357.142857142857,4,1,0,75,1,1
48217,-100,4,1,0,75,0,1
59645,-100,4,1,0,65,0,0
60002,-100,4,1,0,75,0,1
69645,-100,4,1,0,65,0,0
73931,-114.285714285714,4,2,0,65,0,0
79645,-114.285714285714,4,1,0,65,0,0
84645,-114.285714285714,4,2,0,65,0,0
97502,357.142857142857,4,2,0,65,1,0
97502,-100,4,1,0,75,0,1
108930,-100,4,1,0,65,0,0
109287,-100,4,1,0,75,0,1
118930,-100,4,1,0,65,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 84,163,171
Combo2 : 2,200,190
Combo3 : 18,124,255
Combo4 : 11,255,243

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