PinocchioP - Mushroom Mother [Osu|Taiko] · forum

YunoFanatic

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YunoFanatic 2013-07-02T10:39:29+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, March 20, 2014 at 8:48:46 AM

Artist: PinocchioP
Title: Mushroom Mother
Tags: hatsune miku vocaloid onosakihito lilywhite tsusuko mingmichael
BPM: 168
Filesize: 3915kb
Play Time: 01:58
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.65 stars, 105 notes)
LilyWhite's Insane (4.9 stars, 293 notes)
m1ng's Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 656 notes)
Normal (4.05 stars, 125 notes)
Ono's Taiko Muzukashii (4.81 stars, 445 notes)
Ono's Taiko Oni (4.94 stars, 599 notes)
Tsusuko's Hard (4.94 stars, 259 notes)

Download: PinocchioP - Mushroom Mother
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
SECOND ATTEMPT FOR RANK
My First Standard For Ranking
Easy: Done
Normal: Done
Tsusuko's Hard: Done
LilyWhite's Insane: Done
Ono's Muzakashii: (Taiko hard) Done
m1ng's Oni: (Taiko insane) Done
Ono's Oni: (Taiko insane) Done
Hitsound: Done
BPM and OFFSET: OK NOW!

Very special thank you to those who helped me and to the modders! and testplayed!

Asphyxia
LilyWhite
Tsusuko
OnosakiHito
mingmichael
Dolphin
Coli Hou
KanaRin
YGOkid8
-Bakari-
Garven
Irreversible
PROGUY
Sonnyc
Zero__wind
Cxu
LexaaLovesU

BIGGEST MUSHROOM FAMILY!

BATS WHERE ARE YOU?
REDOWNLOAD ON 8/22/13 ADDED HITSOUND D:
REDOWNLOAD ON 9.12/13 ADDED NEW BG!

Last edited by YunoFanatic 2014-03-20T00:49:09+00:00, edited 191 times in total.

GIDZ

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GIDZ 2013-07-03T12:16:42+00:00

From your mod request

General:
~Wrong timing

My check
~Offset is 24597 ms
~BPM: 167.85
Update with this timing setup first.If u r not sure,post in t/13795 and they will help you.
Fix this first and open Aimod (CTRL+SHIFT+A), you will find a bunch of work to do,I'll mod it when u fix this and update it ^^ Good luck

YunoFanatic

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YunoFanatic 2013-07-04T07:24:34+00:00

gideon5504 wrote:
From your mod request

General:
~Wrong timing

My check
~Offset is 24597 ms
~BPM: 167.85
Update with this timing setup first.If u r not sure,post in t/13795 and they will help you.
Fix this first and open Aimod (CTRL+SHIFT+A), you will find a bunch of work to do,I'll mod it when u fix this and update it ^^ Good luck

FIXED~!

GIDZ

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Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2013-07-04T08:43:32+00:00

General:
~Offset is still wrong X.X
~I don't think u need that many timing points,1 should be enough or 2 max.
~Too many notes too hard to read.
~Notes are not placed in a flow of rhythm.
~Too many jump beats.This creates a drag to the whole song.
~Keep slider velocity to 1 in timing. (NOT TIMING SETUP)
~~I STRONGLY RECOMMEND YOU ASK AN EXPERIENCED WIP MODDER TO DEAL WITH THIS UNFINISHED MAP

Normal:
~Your notes are too hard to read for beginners,try to put less circles.
~00:30:174 - Don't change the rhythm suddenly,beginners can't read that.
~00:35:889 - Too many circles,replace some of them with sliders for beginners to play easily.
~00:40:174 (1) - Remove spinner,it doesn't make game play flow.
~00:41:960 - Pls make an obvious pattern for beginners to read.
~00:59:461 (2,3) - Don't block the circles with the slider.

Hard:
~00:37:139 - What is this? 0.o
~01:02:674 - PLS snap these sliders to the correct beat and arrange them properly for game play.
~01:08:032 (4) - Doesn't make game play flow with the cursore ending the other way and having to jump back to the 1/2 beat notes.

Insane:
~00:24:460 (1) - This slider's end does not make cursor movement flow.
~00:24:460 (1) - What's this?? 0.o
~01:22:317 - Unnecessary break,add notes here instead.
~01:28:031 (6) - Same problem with cursor movement not being in flow.
~01:33:924 - PLS distance snap the notes.
~01:35:710 ~ 01:36:603 - Replace with spinner intead,it makes game play flow better.
~01:44:638 - What is this? 0.o
~01:51:602 - Distance snap.

Very messy beat map >< Try to fix the flow of notes in rhythm.Good luck

Overwrite

218 posts

Joined December 2012

Overwrite 2013-07-04T12:04:36+00:00

Hello, from modding queue.
First thing I can say is that the timing is incorrect, all those timing points aren't needed. Tempo is correct but offset isn't (1075)
The beatmap is INCREDIBLY messy, and with a lot of mistimed hitcircles/sliders. Also, Normal is way too hard. Think about making it easier.
Also, (personal opinion) Insanely Mushroom's circles are way too small. I'd have seen here a circle size of 4 and an approach rate of 9.
I'm incredibly sorry, but for now, I can't mod the map with precision.

I suggest re-doing the difficulties so I can mod it after, okay?

(Yeah and, PM me when it's done, my tiny brain might forget :s

YunoFanatic

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YunoFanatic 2013-07-05T06:51:51+00:00

Currently my offset is done

Last edited by YunoFanatic 2013-07-22T20:55:10+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Overwrite

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Overwrite 2013-07-05T08:37:40+00:00

Okay, I checked your beatmap again and...
I'm sorry but it's still mistimed

Also, with a lot of mistimed beats on every difficulty, I can't point them out all ><

Also, you're wondering about how to place hitsounds, right? Well:
To add a clap-style hitsound, click the clap icon (or press R) before adding your beat.
For a whistle-hitsound, click the whistle icon (or press W) before adding your beat.
For a finish-hitsound, click the finish icon (or press E) before adding your beat.
Sliders work differently:
If you generate the slider with selected hitsounds... They will play on ALL the slider's beats.
To get a slider with only certain parts with hitsounds...
1. Generate one without any hitsounds.
2. See that strange bar with all the beats you placed on the top? Go to the slider you generated on it, and double-click on the beat you want to apply a hitsound at.
3. Then, simply add your hitsounds by pressing the needed buttons (Such as R for clap, W for whistle, etc...)
I hope you understood!

Also...
-Delete all timing points on all difficulties except the first one.
-This song got stuck in my head.
~~-No LilyWhite don't make a guest diff this is not your job as a modder.~~

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2013-07-05T12:46:23+00:00

Okay before anything, your second timing point is off-tune, which is the reason why its screwing up more then half your entire map! Why you have too much timing points in your map! Do keep it simple, don't over-complicate it.
If anything, keep your first Timing point. Erase all your timing points (red lines). If anything, the second timing point you should have is at 01:37:497, with the same BPM (then again, it's not really necessary, since the chorus already begins at the white tick...

...And that's it. Again, I see your placing so many offests here and there, that's not really needed to be there. Don't make it 10 times difficult then it is, alright?

Take it easy.

What I see:

What it should look like:

Nice and simple, see? Try replacing your entire timing and all modes with this layout.

However, once you do this, you'll need to resnap your entire objects (hit circles/sliders) due to the fact that they will appear... bizarre now that they're no longer in sync with your previous ones.
You can simply resnap them all by pulling down the Timing tab. Select Resnap Current Selection.

And this will pop up.

Click yes.

And voila! All your notes will be snapped, based on your timing point! (Though I can't guarantee they will be on the right timing with the song. You may need to revise your hit circles/sliders)

Also some of the inherited I see you using should actually be bookmarks, not timing points.
Bookmarks help highlight certain parts of the music you'll want to keep note of (like when break time will end, where Kai starts etc).

Here you can simply click + to add a bookmark, or - to erase one.

eg. Place a bookmark at 01:13:926, instead of an inherited timing point, cause I can see that that's where the break ends. A bookmark will appear as a blue tickmark on your timeline.
Well, I hope I've covered the basics for you.

Sorry for the long explanation...
once you've completed this, let me know and I promise to do a real mod later

Hope this helps!

If your still confused or need further explanation, don't hesitate to ask!

YunoFanatic

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YunoFanatic 2013-07-05T13:11:36+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Okay before anything, your second timing point is off-tune, which is the reason why its screwing up more then half your entire map! Why you have too much timing points in your map! Do keep it simple, don't over-complicate it.
If anything, keep your first Timing point. Erase all your timing points (red lines). If anything, the second timing point you should have is at 01:37:497, with the same BPM (then again, it's not really necessary, since the chorus already begins at the white tick...

...And that's it. Again, I see your placing so many offests here and there, that's not really needed to be there. Don't make it 10 times difficult then it is, alright? Take it easy.

What I see:

What it should look like:
Nice and simple, see? Try replacing your entire timing and all modes with this layout.

However, once you do this, you'll need to resnap your entire objects (hit circles/sliders) due to the fact that they will appear... bizarre now that they're no longer in sync with your previous ones.
You can simply resnap them all by pulling down the Timing tab. Select Resnap Current Selection.

And this will pop up.
Click yes.

And voila! All your notes will be snapped, based on your timing point! (Though I can't guarantee they will be on the right timing with the song. You may need to revise your hit circles/sliders)

Also some of the inherited I see you using should actually be bookmarks, not timing points.
Bookmarks help highlight certain parts of the music you'll want to keep note of (like when break time will end, where Kai starts etc).

Here you can simply click + to add a bookmark, or - to erase one.

eg. Place a bookmark at 01:13:926, instead of an inherited timing point, cause I can see that that's where the break ends. A bookmark will appear as a blue tickmark on your timeline.
Well, I hope I've covered the basics for you.

Sorry for the long explanation...
once you've completed this, let me know and I promise to do a real mod later

Hope this helps!

If your still confused or need further explanation, don't hesitate to ask!

uguuuu .3. done

Last edited by YunoFanatic 2013-07-22T20:54:42+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Overwrite

218 posts

Joined December 2012

Overwrite 2013-07-05T15:03:59+00:00

Finally, here's my mod .u.

General
You reversed Source and tags xD
Huge distance problems. That makes your beatmap very messy.

Normal

00:30:175 NC.
00:33:389 NC.
00:38:478 Slider end not correctly timed.
00:39:907 ^
00:44:639 NC.
00:48:210 Kiai time and slider 1 beginning start here.
00:50:264 Slider end not correctly timed.
00:51:246 NC.
00:53:389 NC.
01:02:496 NC.
01:15:264 Slider end not correctly timed.
01:17:496 Break time or notes. But not complete emptiness.
01:20:085 Slider end not correctly timed.
01:28:032 NC?
01:42:675 NC.
01:47:317 Weird slider pattern.
01:51:246 NC?

Hard

00:35:889 Circle (1) at Circle (2)'s position, and vice-versa.
00:44:460 NC.
00:44:996 Remove NC.
00:48:210 Kiai time starts here.
00:53:032 Slider (1) must be here.
01:16:692 Slider beginning not correctly timed.
01:21:246 Remove NC.
01:30:532 Weird slider pattern.
01:33:567 Remove NC.
01:33:925 Add NC.
01:55:264 Weird slider pattern, and slider end not correctly timed.

Insanely Mushroom

00:14:461 Mistimed slider
00:20:176 Same.
00:26:158 Same.
00:28:301 Same.
00:33:658 Mistimed slider end.
00:33:836 Mistimed slider.
00:35:443 Mistimed slider end.
00:38:479 Same.
00:41:336 Same.
00:51:158 WHAT EVEN
00:55:622 Mistimed slider end.
00:56:336 Mistimed slider end.
01:17:676 Weird slider pattern.
01:20:622 Same as above, plus mistimed slider end.
01:23:836 Mistimed slider end.
01:27:140 Weird slider pattern.
01:33:836 The whole pattern until the next spinner is mistimed.
01:38:301 Weird timing with (2), (3), (4).
01:40:176 Jump + stream =/= Good.
01:40:801 Mistimed slider end.
01:40:979 Mistimed slider beginning.
01:45:265 Mistimed beat, or that's one huge jump.
01:45:443 Mistimed slider beginning.
01:47:140 Weird timing with (1), (2), (3), (4), (1).
01:48:122 Mistimed slider beginning.
01:53:926 Jump + stream =/= Good.
01:55:890 NC.
01:58:122 Whole pattern mistimed.

Good luck!

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-07-05T15:16:58+00:00

here comes ur m4m~
eyy its mushroom mother \o/

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
-first of all, the source should be "Vocaloid" and everything you have in source right now should be moved to tags

-Unify your combo colours in each diff, the fastest way to do this is to copy the code in your difficulty and unify them in every .osu file:

SPOILER

-Unify Kiai time setup (at least in your own difficulty)

-Disable countdown in Hard and Insanely Mushroom

-add "LilyWhite" to tags since he/she made you a guest diff

00:14:639 - you need a red line here (Timing - Add timing section) to mark the new 4/4 measure on the song

In the case of other needed red timing sections, use the timing setup in LilyWhite's diff; the timing there is proper and marks the correct measure changes in the song

[Normal]
If this is going for rankings, you probably need to reduce the star ratings to <3.25 in order to have a proper difficulty spread on the mapset

...
i would like to mod this thoroughly, but maybe because you have adjusted timing recently, all the notes seem to have weird snapping; do scan through the diffs to reorganize the rhythm placements. Feel free to call me back for a proper mod after you have everything in-tact

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2013-07-05T15:19:58+00:00

Okay, here the first half of my full mod:
*Had to put the in boxes, since they're very long...

Normal mode:

Slidier's end at 00:24:639 in unsnapped. Stretch it's end to point 00:25:353 instead.
Move slider at:
00:25:889 to 00:26:067.
00:26:960 to 00:27:139

00:27:853 Re position the objects like this:

- Removing slider turns on slider 4, and moving the next 3 hit circles back.

Add another hit circle at 00:29:639.

At 00:30:175 change this pattern:

into this:

00:33:390 - 00:38:211 Your objects should be looking like this:

...Okay this may take forever.
For short, I'd like you to select all your objects (spinners, hit circles/ sliders) from 00:37:317 all the way to the end.
You can easily do this by left clicking on the timeline above, then drag in right....like this:

Once your done, your screen should pretty much look like this:

bizarre lol.
Now select your last note at 01:58:746. Do not single click, click and hold the last note, and pull it forward to 01:58:925.

And there! At least 90% of your notes now should be on the white tick.

Also make sure you Beat snap divisor is at 1/2

*Note* You may need to re-play the entire song just to make sure. I can't be re-snapping the entire notes in your map, just some for reference

Hard mode:

Before you do anything, resnap all your notes by 1/2.

Shrink the sliders by a half at:
00:25:175
eg;

-->

00:27:317 and move it to 00:27:496.
00:28:032
00:41:603 and move it to 00:41:782.
00:42:317
00:48:032
00:48:746
00:52:317 and move it to 00:52:496.
01:07:674
01:14:460
01:16:603
01:31:603 and create a copy, place it at 01:32:139

Move sliders at:
00:30:710 to 00:30:889
00:31:425 to 00:31:603
00:32:139 to 00:32:317 also remove the slider at 00:32:675, and make this have a turn like this:

00:53:121 to 00:53:032
01:06:960 to 01:06:782 and add a turn.

I'm sorry, but that's all I can do for this mode as well.
Same as normal mode, make sure at least 90% of your notes should be timed on the white tick.

I'll mod the other 2 mods tomorrow.

For now, I hope this helps~! :D

YunoFanatic

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Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-05T15:47:15+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Okay, here the first half of my full mod:
*Had to put the in boxes, since they're very long...

Normal mode:
Slidier's end at 00:24:639 in unsnapped. Stretch it's end to point 00:25:353 instead.
Move slider at:
00:25:889 to 00:26:067.
00:26:960 to 00:27:139

00:27:853 Re position the objects like this:
- Removing slider turns on slider 4, and moving the next 3 hit circles back.

Add another hit circle at 00:29:639.

At 00:30:175 change this pattern:

into this:

00:33:390 - 00:38:211 Your objects should be looking like this:

...Okay this may take forever.
For short, I'd like you to select all your objects (spinners, hit circles/ sliders) from 00:37:317 all the way to the end.
You can easily do this by left clicking on the timeline above, then drag in right....like this:

Once your done, your screen should pretty much look like this:
bizarre lol.
Now select your last note at 01:58:746. Do not single click, click and hold the last note, and pull it forward to 01:58:925.

And there! At least 90% of your notes now should be on the white tick.

Also make sure you Beat snap divisor is at 1/2

*Note* You may need to re-play the entire song just to make sure. I can't be re-snapping the entire notes in your map, just some for reference

Hard mode:
Before you do anything, resnap all your notes by 1/2.

Shrink the sliders by a half at:
00:25:175
eg;
-->
00:27:317 and move it to 00:27:496.
00:28:032
00:41:603 and move it to 00:41:782.
00:42:317
00:48:032
00:48:746
00:52:317 and move it to 00:52:496.
01:07:674
01:14:460
01:16:603
01:31:603 and create a copy, place it at 01:32:139

Move sliders at:
00:30:710 to 00:30:889
00:31:425 to 00:31:603
00:32:139 to 00:32:317 also remove the slider at 00:32:675, and make this have a turn like this:

00:53:121 to 00:53:032
01:06:960 to 01:06:782 and add a turn.

I'm sorry, but that's all I can do for this mode as well.
Same as normal mode, make sure at least 90% of your notes should be timed on the white tick.

I'll mod the other 2 mods tomorrow.

For now, I hope this helps~! :D

Lol sure!

YunoFanatic

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Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-05T15:48:52+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
here comes ur m4m~
eyy its mushroom mother \o/

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
-first of all, the source should be "Vocaloid" and everything you have in source right now should be moved to tags

-Unify your combo colours in each diff, the fastest way to do this is to copy the code in your difficulty and unify them in every .osu file:
SPOILER

-Unify Kiai time setup (at least in your own difficulty)

-Disable countdown in Hard and Insanely Mushroom

-add "LilyWhite" to tags since he/she made you a guest diff

00:14:639 - you need a red line here (Timing - Add timing section) to mark the new 4/4 measure on the song

In the case of other needed red timing sections, use the timing setup in LilyWhite's diff; the timing there is proper and marks the correct measure changes in the song

[Normal]
If this is going for rankings, you probably need to reduce the star ratings to <3.25 in order to have a proper difficulty spread on the mapset

...
i would like to mod this thoroughly, but maybe because you have adjusted timing recently, all the notes seem to have weird snapping; do scan through the diffs to reorganize the rhythm placements. Feel free to call me back for a proper mod after you have everything in-tact

Proper done

Last edited by YunoFanatic 2013-07-22T20:53:45+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-07-05T16:11:32+00:00

i guess i will use some pictures too
Do not kudose this post

1. i just learned that Vocaloid cannot be used as source. Also, use the composer instead of Hatsune Miku so for Artist put Pinocchio-P. Keep "hatsune miku" and "vocaloid" in tags. Don't forget the Artist Unicode: ピノキオP

2. about the combo colours, the highlighted area is what you will copy and paste into all diffs that doesnt have the same values

3. In the case of your kiai time, all the timing sections marked with the star icon in ur timing setup panel needs to me consistent across all diffs (LilyWhite's diff can be an exception)

4. Use this red timing section setup for ALL the diffs (i took out all the green sections so this looks cleaner):

5. now that i just saw ur pm, regarding the issue with the normal difficulty, the settings and stuff are fine for a normal diff, but if this mapset is going for ranking, you will need an Easy diff that has a star rating below 3.25 (so it displays as 3 stars on osu). preferrably a 2-star easy would fill up the difficulty gap.

Since you said you have done some changes to your diffs i will edit this with a proper mod later

EDIT: mod here

SPOILER

[Normal]
if you are planning on doing an easy, all the difficulty settings (except circle size) need to be raised by at least 2 notches
00:24:639 (1) - extend this to 00:25:353
00:31:603 (2) - spacing is broken here
00:34:818 (3) - snap to 00:35:175 (4)
00:38:746 (4) - replace this with a note at 00:38:925 plays alot better
00:48:210 (3) - NC
00:53:389 (1) - extend this to 00:53:925
00:55:175 (3,4,5) - make spacing consistent here
00:58:032 (1,2,3) - too soon after spinner, move these to start at 00:58:210
01:05:175 (1,2) - same thing here, and 01:05:889 (2) should have its end snapped to 01:06:425
01:14:817 (2) - move this to 01:14:639
01:16:246 (4) - snap end to 01:16:603
01:20:264 (1) - snap to 01:20:353
01:42:675 (1) - reduce a repeat on this
01:49:818 (2,3,1,2,3) - why spamming finishes here?
01:58:746 (1) - make a slider that ends at 01:58:925 plays alot better

[Hard]
All difficulty settings besides circle size needs to be raised by at least 2 notches
00:30:175 (1,2,3) - spacing here is confusing to read
00:38:389 (1) - shorten this to 00:38:925
00:44:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - start this at 00:44:639 fits the music better
00:50:710 (1,2) - move to 00:50:889
00:59:460 (2) - move to 00:59:639
01:06:246 (1,2,3,4) - another confusing spacing here
01:17:317 (1,2,3) - the jump is wayy too hard compared to the rest of the map, please reduce it
01:31:246 (1,2,3,4,1) - don't do this, there is no musical indication for 1/4s and this shouldn't be present in a hard diff like this
01:33:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - again, spacing is confusing to read (especially since 01:33:210 (3,4,5,6) uses the same rhythm, players wont be able to tell there is a rhythmical difference)
01:40:175 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
01:43:746 (3,4,1,2) - ^
01:50:532 (1,2,3,4,1) - start this at 01:50:353
01:56:425 (3,4) - spacing
01:58:925 (3) - add a note

[Insanely Mushroom]
00:19:997 (1) - snap end to 00:20:711
00:23:479 (1) - delete this note and add a note at 00:23:658
00:33:836 (3) - start this slider at 00:33:926
00:44:461 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - move to 00:44:640
00:49:640 (4) - this slider, and the ones alike are unrankable by today's standards, please use normal sliders instead
00:51:188 (4) - move to 00:51:247
01:04:819 (1,2) - watch for spacing here
01:21:426 (4) - shorten the end to 01:21:604, and start 01:21:872 (1) at 01:21:783
01:23:390 (4) - shorten to 01:23:747, move 01:24:015 (1) to 01:23:926
01:37:319 (1) - move this to start at 01:37:497 and add notes at 01:37:318 and 01:37:408
01:40:176 (3,4,5,1,2) - don't do this, it is barely playable and very confusing to read
01:47:944 (1) - move to 01:48:033
01:53:926 (1,2,3,4) - same problem here with playability, make the spacing closer
01:58:926 - add note

do consider everything above Blue suggestions as they are all important issues that disturbs the playability of the maps

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]
00:33:931 (3,4) - plays alot better if you make 00:33:931 (3) a slider and move 00:34:110 (4) back + reduce a repeat
00:46:610 (1) - a whistle sounds better on this imo
01:21:431 (4,5,6,7,1) - this star pattern can look alot cleaner (no overlap on 01:21:966 (6,1))
01:36:074 (1) - whistle similar to 00:46:610 (1)
01:39:644 (4) - adjust this a bit so its not touching 01:39:287 (2)
01:43:216 (1) - 1 grid up
some overmapped streams here and there, but most of them play very nicely so not a problem

to be honest the diffs besides LilyWhite's needs alot more polishing, especially use of rhythm and spacing consistency. You will get more mods in the future, some perhaps even longer than this. Just hope you wont give up and continue to improve your mapping skills so one day this can be on the rankings list. Good luck~

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2013-07-06T00:59:52+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:

Out of curiosity is this true? That a beatmap can be made up of entirely timing points and no inherited timing points and it's still considered ok (as in still rankable)?
If so, then you've just indirectly helped me figure out a better way to solve one of my current beat map issues, lol. Thankyou!

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-06T02:47:15+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
i guess i will use some pictures too
Do not kudose this post

1. i just learned that Vocaloid cannot be used as source. Also, use the composer instead of Hatsune Miku so for Artist put Pinocchio-P. Keep "hatsune miku" and "vocaloid" in tags. Don't forget the Artist Unicode: ピノキオP

2. about the combo colours, the highlighted area is what you will copy and paste into all diffs that doesnt have the same values

3. In the case of your kiai time, all the timing sections marked with the star icon in ur timing setup panel needs to me consistent across all diffs (LilyWhite's diff can be an exception)

4. Use this red timing section setup for ALL the diffs (i took out all the green sections so this looks cleaner):

5. now that i just saw ur pm, regarding the issue with the normal difficulty, the settings and stuff are fine for a normal diff, but if this mapset is going for ranking, you will need an Easy diff that has a star rating below 3.25 (so it displays as 3 stars on osu). preferrably a 2-star easy would fill up the difficulty gap.

Since you said you have done some changes to your diffs i will edit this with a proper mod later

EDIT: mod here
SPOILER
[Normal]
if you are planning on doing an easy, all the difficulty settings (except circle size) need to be raised by at least 2 notches
00:24:639 (1) - extend this to 00:25:353
00:31:603 (2) - spacing is broken here
00:34:818 (3) - snap to 00:35:175 (4)
00:38:746 (4) - replace this with a note at 00:38:925 plays alot better
00:48:210 (3) - NC
00:53:389 (1) - extend this to 00:53:925
00:55:175 (3,4,5) - make spacing consistent here
00:58:032 (1,2,3) - too soon after spinner, move these to start at 00:58:210
01:05:175 (1,2) - same thing here, and 01:05:889 (2) should have its end snapped to 01:06:425
01:14:817 (2) - move this to 01:14:639
01:16:246 (4) - snap end to 01:16:603
01:20:264 (1) - snap to 01:20:353
01:42:675 (1) - reduce a repeat on this
01:49:818 (2,3,1,2,3) - why spamming finishes here?
01:58:746 (1) - make a slider that ends at 01:58:925 plays alot better

[Hard]
All difficulty settings besides circle size needs to be raised by at least 2 notches
00:30:175 (1,2,3) - spacing here is confusing to read
00:38:389 (1) - shorten this to 00:38:925
00:44:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - start this at 00:44:639 fits the music better
00:50:710 (1,2) - move to 00:50:889
00:59:460 (2) - move to 00:59:639
01:06:246 (1,2,3,4) - another confusing spacing here
01:17:317 (1,2,3) - the jump is wayy too hard compared to the rest of the map, please reduce it
01:31:246 (1,2,3,4,1) - don't do this, there is no musical indication for 1/4s and this shouldn't be present in a hard diff like this
01:33:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - again, spacing is confusing to read (especially since 01:33:210 (3,4,5,6) uses the same rhythm, players wont be able to tell there is a rhythmical difference)
01:40:175 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
01:43:746 (3,4,1,2) - ^
01:50:532 (1,2,3,4,1) - start this at 01:50:353
01:56:425 (3,4) - spacing
01:58:925 (3) - add a note

[Insanely Mushroom]
00:19:997 (1) - snap end to 00:20:711
00:23:479 (1) - delete this note and add a note at 00:23:658
00:33:836 (3) - start this slider at 00:33:926
00:44:461 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - move to 00:44:640
00:49:640 (4) - this slider, and the ones alike are unrankable by today's standards, please use normal sliders instead
00:51:188 (4) - move to 00:51:247
01:04:819 (1,2) - watch for spacing here
01:21:426 (4) - shorten the end to 01:21:604, and start 01:21:872 (1) at 01:21:783
01:23:390 (4) - shorten to 01:23:747, move 01:24:015 (1) to 01:23:926
01:37:319 (1) - move this to start at 01:37:497 and add notes at 01:37:318 and 01:37:408
01:40:176 (3,4,5,1,2) - don't do this, it is barely playable and very confusing to read
01:47:944 (1) - move to 01:48:033
01:53:926 (1,2,3,4) - same problem here with playability, make the spacing closer
01:58:926 - add note

do consider everything above Blue suggestions as they are all important issues that disturbs the playability of the maps

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]
00:33:931 (3,4) - plays alot better if you make 00:33:931 (3) a slider and move 00:34:110 (4) back + reduce a repeat
00:46:610 (1) - a whistle sounds better on this imo
01:21:431 (4,5,6,7,1) - this star pattern can look alot cleaner (no overlap on 01:21:966 (6,1))
01:36:074 (1) - whistle similar to 00:46:610 (1)
01:39:644 (4) - adjust this a bit so its not touching 01:39:287 (2)
01:43:216 (1) - 1 grid up
some overmapped streams here and there, but most of them play very nicely so not a problem

to be honest the diffs besides LilyWhite's needs alot more polishing, especially use of rhythm and spacing consistency. You will get more mods in the future, some perhaps even longer than this. Just hope you wont give up and continue to improve your mapping skills so one day this can be on the rankings list.
Good luck~

Thank you for modding ~! all done!

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2013-07-06T13:02:19+00:00

General:
~Your notes are placed on the vocals on too tight.Try to follow the flow of music as well.
~PLS USE DISTANCE SNAP.
~OPEN AIMOD AND FIX THE WARNINGS/ERRORS.
~Kiai mode not consistent,refer to LilyWhite's diff's Kiai modes and put them on the exact spot on every other diff.

Normal:
~00:30:181 (8) -Reduce this slider by 1/2 a beat.
~00:41:788 - Replace with 1/2 beat sliders instead.
~00:48:217 (3) - Reduce by 1/2 a beat.
~00:48:931 (4) - Snap this on the 1/1 beat after the previous slider.
~00:49:645 (5) - Snap this 1/2 a beat earlier and reduce the slider by 1/2 beat.
~00:53:395 (5) - NC.
~00:51:252 (1) - Doesn't follow any rhythm.
~00:59:466 (1,2,3,4) - They dun follow any beat in particular.
~01:03:931 - Nothing?
~01:05:181 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Very challenging to read the notes.
~01:20:181 (1) - Remove NC.
~01:21:074 (3) - Snap this 1/2 a beat back.
~01:37:324 (1) - Snap this 1/2 a beat forward.
~01:38:038 (2) - ^
~01:39:466 (4,5,1) - Dun feel the rhythm here.
~01:40:538 (2,3,1,2) - They dun follow the beat.Dun isolate them as well.
~01:45:002 (1,2,3,4) - Snap them on 1/1 beats.
~01:51:252 - Far too many notes on 1/2 beat,this will confuse beginners for sure.

Hard:
~PLS open AImod to fix problems.I can't mod anything at the moment without it fixed.

Insanely mushroom:
~SAME GOES TO THIS DIFF ABOUT AIMOD PROBS.

LilyWhite's Mushroom:
~I think the volume is still too loud,try reducing the volume to 65% for non Kiai and 75% for Kiai.
~00:45:181 (1,1) - Remove NC,players need to see the trail to where the note goes.
~01:10:181 (1,1) -^
~01:41:162 (4) - Stack this on circle 3 for flow of game play.
~01:41:787 - It's a bit hard to read these.
~01:42:680 - A bit too far away from the previous note considering the speed.

Here is ur second mod request. I noe I PMed u this but here u can click on the timing I've copied and edit more efficiently.Good luck again!

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2013-07-06T13:23:33+00:00

[General]

To your diffs except the GD : your timing is still wrong.

Hard

Red timing sections at:

00:01:068 - BPM of 168.000
00:14:646 - BPM of 168.000
00:48:217 - BPM of 120.000
02:17:502 - BPM of 120.000

Insanely Mushroom

Red timing sections at:

00:01:069 - BPM of 168.000
00:14:646 - BPM of 168.000
00:48:217 - BPM of 120.000
02:17:502 - BPM of 120.000

LilyWhite's Mushroom

Red timing sections at:

00:01:075 - BPM of 168.000
00:24:646 - BPM of 168.000
00:48:217 - BPM of 168.000
01:37:502 - BPM of 168.000

Normal

Red timing sections at:

00:01:068 - BPM of 168.000
00:14:646 - BPM of 168.000
00:48:217 - BPM of 168.000
02:17:502 - BPM of 168.000

Timing in LilyWhite's Mushroom is correct, keep consistent with it for all diffs. Don't forget to resnap all notes after you do it ~

Add "LilyWhite" to tags for all diffs since he/she made a guest diff for the beatmap.

sorry I don't know how to mod your diffs because of the timing issue .. orz

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]

AR-1, the diff doen't really need high AR cuz it doesn't fit the map and song.

00:40:360 (5,6,7,8) - you can make it prettier ! move (5) to (140,140) ; move (6) to (172,8) ; move (7) to (220,132) ; move (8) to (112,64). It would be like that after you did this.

00:43:931 (7,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Hey, I should teach you something here. Don't you feel a bit bored for this part (overlappings) ? you can try this :
reduce an arrow on 00:43:931 (7), then you can do something like this. Since the music and vocals are powerful, you can use NC and jumps to emphasize them to have the map more interesting, and match the song well.
by the way, 00:44:645 (1,1,1,1) - you just need finishes for them four and it's enough, there are so many finishes that I feel noisy ...

01:08:395 (5,6,7) - they are not a straight line so it looks not very good. just move 01:08:574 (7)'s second dot to (208,104) and it's \:D/.

01:00:359 (3) - I don't know how you felt but, were you sure the slider fitted the vocals here ? I would say "not at all." use this slider instead, and it feels much better for me. by the way, move 01:00:716 (4)'s scond point to (272,192) to make a blanket with 01:00:181 (2). it looks better.

01:09:824 (2,2,2) - the finishes ... no, seriously no. remove them three and the part sounds \TAT/. Please give it a try.

01:12:145 (5) - looks not good, move scond point of the slider to (192,136)

01:24:645 (1,2) - delete these notes since there is no beat/reason you can do this, it's overmapped.

01:31:431 (2,3,4) - move 01:31:431 (2,3,4) to (392,144) ; move 01:31:788 (3) to (376,216) ; move 01:32:145 (4) to (332,276) to have the part prettier, it would be like this.

01:41:073 (3,4,5) - it doesn't really make sense, it plays awkward and feels like random/sudden jumps. ruduce the spacing for them, please.

01:43:216 (1) - move it to (428,100) because I saw you want to do a staight line for 01:42:680 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) but you propably failed.

01:50:002 (7) - move second point of the slider to (380,212) for a perfectly straight.

01:53:216 (1) - remove finishes at 3rd and 5th arrows on the slider, they feel too noisy and don't make sense, those two points are no reason to emphasize though.

01:57:323 (6) - simply move it to (300,248) to make 01:56:787 (3,4,5,6) a prettier shape.

Overwrite

218 posts

Joined December 2012

Overwrite 2013-07-06T16:27:31+00:00

Guess who still sucks at beatmapping? ME!!! \o/
Anyways, here's the new codes with most of the two moddings applied:

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: mushroom mother.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
SkinPreference:Default

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Mushroom Mother
TitleUnicode:Mushroom Mother
Artist:Pinocchio-P
ArtistUnicode:Pinocchio-P ピノキオP
Creator:YunoFanatic
Version:LilyWhite's Mushroom
Source:Pinocchio-P,MikuHatsune
Tags:Vocaloid,Mushroom Mother,Miku Hatsune,YunoFanatic
BeatmapID:271668
BeatmapSetID:102307

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"MushroomMother.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,14846,23896
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,55,251,187

[TimingPoints]
1075,357.142857142857,4,1,0,70,1,0
24646,357.142857142857,4,2,0,70,1,0
24646,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,65,0,0
36074,-114.942528735632,4,2,0,65,0,0
48217,357.142857142857,4,1,0,75,1,1
48217,-100,4,1,0,75,0,1
59645,-100,4,1,0,65,0,0
60002,-100,4,1,0,75,0,1
69645,-100,4,1,0,65,0,0
73931,-114.285714285714,4,2,0,65,0,0
79645,-114.285714285714,4,1,0,65,0,0
84645,-114.285714285714,4,2,0,65,0,0
97502,357.142857142857,4,2,0,65,1,0
97502,-100,4,1,0,75,0,1
108930,-100,4,1,0,65,0,0
109287,-100,4,1,0,75,0,1
118930,-100,4,1,0,65,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 84,163,171
Combo2 : 2,200,190
Combo3 : 18,124,255
Combo4 : 11,255,243

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Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-07-06T18:40:10+00:00

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue

Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

[General Issues]

BPM is OK, but Offset no. Offset must be 1064. After changing it, Resnap all notes and run AiMod to make sure there are NO unsnapped notes and Kiai begins/ends.

And... after taking a look... your diffs still need work as described below:

[Normal]
00:30:181 (8,9) - The repeating slider does not fit the song. Consider removing these both notes and place a repeating 1/1 slider at 00:30:360.

00:31:431 (9,10) - Did you felt a jump here? At Normal diffs, they can't exist.
00:33:395 (1,2,3) - Move these notes together to 00:33:217 because they are currently confusing!
00:35:895 (4) - Shorten it to a 1/1 repeating slider and move to 00:36:074.
and then... looking ahead the diff, I felt some notes -- several? -- misplaced at red ticks when (in truth) they should rest (mostly 1/2 later) in the White ticks.

In truth, notes placed at red Ticks are usually confusing.
Some patterns aren't fitting the song too...
This diff also feels claiming a bit for a remap

[Hard]

Please recalculate all slider lengths! Or adjust SV as needed. Looking at Auto Mod I saw cursor "teleportates" several times!

[Insanely Mushroom]

Basicly, the same thing I told at [Hard].

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]
♥ Congratz LilyWhite, your diff is pretty nice (: No need improvements from me (may be from a BAT, but I find it's hard suggest anything here, even though for a BAT.)

Aaaand that's it ^^

I hope this get Ranked, no matter how work it may need.

Att.

⌈Neoi dalet Lórnak alabyenzna⌋

Last edited by Alarido 2014-06-15T19:30:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Deni

Deni 2013-07-07T17:53:03+00:00

Mapper Help Team

Timing Check

BPM: 168.000
OFFSET: 1075

You only need the first red timing point from "Lily White's Mushroom". The others were useless.
Make sure you apply this timing in EVERY difficulty!
Don't forget Timing -> Resnap All Notes (and don't forget to adjust the green inherited points)

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,723 posts

Joined July 2010

fanzhen0019 2013-07-08T06:20:49+00:00

Hi :3 From my queue.

General

Diff names are fit :3
PLZ OPEN DISTANCE SNAP.
DS

Small Mushroom

Arrangement & Design

00:29:646 (4,1) - Distance confusing.
01:18:932 (5,1) - ^
Rhythm is well,but the distance is still messing.

Medium Mushroom

Arrangement & Design

Also I suggest,in easy and normal diffs, use ds is better than random distance.
Others..As what I have said in 'Small Mushroom'

Mushroom Mother

Hitsounds

Nothing to point out.I suggest u play more map to get some sense on hitsounds.

Arrangement & Design

00:20:539 - Insert a break plz.
00:28:038 (10) - Extend it to 00:28:217 -
00:34:646 (15,16) - STACK TIME POINT.Consider to move 00:34:646 (15) - to 00:34:467 (15) -
...Well,I suggest u open distance snap and check it again. Your notes' distance is really messing.
For example:00:37:949 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here,1234 are under 1/4 snap.But between 4 and 5 there's a 1/2 gap.I dont think someone can recognize it.

LilyWhite

Hitsounds

00:40:003 - Add clap?
01:07:681 (2) - Add clap and remove here:01:08:038 - . To consist with previous part.
01:54:109 (4) - Sound a bit noisy. Consider remove this two:01:54:153 - and 01:54:243 -

Arrangement & Design

01:08:395 (5,6,7) - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854725 Make 1,2,3,4,5 like a polygon.
01:11:788 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move to x:44 y:120. Be symmetrical with 01:10:716 (5,6) -
01:41:430 (5,1,2) - Confusing distance. Maybe move 1 closer to 5?
(nazi)01:47:144 (5) - Move 1or2 grid left in grid lv4
(nazi)01:51:073 (3) - Move 1 grid down in grid lv4

Good luck :3

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-08T08:09:48+00:00

fanzhen0019 wrote:
Hi :3 From my queue.

General
Diff names are fit :3
PLZ OPEN DISTANCE SNAP.
DS

Small Mushroom

Arrangement & Design
00:29:646 (4,1) - Distance confusing.
01:18:932 (5,1) - ^
Rhythm is well,but the distance is still messing.

Medium Mushroom

Arrangement & Design
Also I suggest,in easy and normal diffs, use ds is better than random distance.
Others..As what I have said in 'Small Mushroom'

Mushroom Mother

Hitsounds
Nothing to point out.I suggest u play more map to get some sense on hitsounds.
Arrangement & Design
00:20:539 - Insert a break plz.
00:28:038 (10) - Extend it to 00:28:217 -
00:34:646 (15,16) - STACK TIME POINT.Consider to move 00:34:646 (15) - to 00:34:467 (15) -
...Well,I suggest u open distance snap and check it again. Your notes' distance is really messing.
For example:00:37:949 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here,1234 are under 1/4 snap.But between 4 and 5 there's a 1/2 gap.I dont think someone can recognize it.

LilyWhite

Hitsounds
00:40:003 - Add clap?
01:07:681 (2) - Add clap and remove here:01:08:038 - . To consist with previous part.
01:54:109 (4) - Sound a bit noisy. Consider remove this two:01:54:153 - and 01:54:243 -
Arrangement & Design
01:08:395 (5,6,7) - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854725 Make 1,2,3,4,5 like a polygon.
01:11:788 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move to x:44 y:120. Be symmetrical with 01:10:716 (5,6) -
01:41:430 (5,1,2) - Confusing distance. Maybe move 1 closer to 5?
(nazi)01:47:144 (5) - Move 1or2 grid left in grid lv4
(nazi)01:51:073 (3) - Move 1 grid down in grid lv4

Good luck :3

Gonna update fannychi chan! >w< arigatou desu !

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2013-07-08T22:13:52+00:00

HI~ YunoFanatic

Welcome to my M4M queue ~ t/128381 My Map!

Overall Difficulty

00:43:932 (1) - Spinner's End

00:44:646 (1) - The start of the spinner

00:47:503 (2) - Spinner's End

01:33:932 (1) - The start of the spinner

01:36:789 (1) - Spinner's End

01:58:932 (1) - Spinner's End

Small Mushroom

00:29:289 (3,4) - Interval seems so far away. I know that narrowing

Easy difficulty is good at regular intervals

Medium Mushroom

00:30:360 (1) - Completely overlapped notes at regular intervals or something so that I think it float

00:32:146 (3) - So far interval. I narrowed down to give me!

00:33:575 (4) - Completely overlapped notes at regular intervals or something so that I think it float

00:38:217 (4) - So far interval. I narrowed down to give me!

Big Mushroom

00:35:360 (5) - > 00:35:182 (5) - Go to this

00:38:396 (1) - Add Circle + New Combo

00:38:753 (1) - New Combo Delete

00:41:789 (1) - Add New Combo

00:42:057 (3) - > 00:41:967 (3) - Go to this

00:42:235 (4) - > 00:42:324 (4) - ^ ( Same as above )

00:44:110 (10) - Add Circle

00:44:289 (11) - ^

00:44:467 (12) - ^

01:58:932 (1) - The end of the spinner here

LilyWhite's Mushroom

01:57:323 (6) - Delete

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-09T04:30:04+00:00

[ Zzz ] wrote:
HI~ YunoFanatic

Welcome to my M4M queue ~ t/128381 My Map!

Overall Difficulty

00:43:932 (1) - Spinner's End

00:44:646 (1) - The start of the spinner

00:47:503 (2) - Spinner's End

01:33:932 (1) - The start of the spinner

01:36:789 (1) - Spinner's End

01:58:932 (1) - Spinner's End

Small Mushroom

00:29:289 (3,4) - Interval seems so far away. I know that narrowing

Easy difficulty is good at regular intervals

Medium Mushroom

00:30:360 (1) - Completely overlapped notes at regular intervals or something so that I think it float

00:32:146 (3) - So far interval. I narrowed down to give me!

00:33:575 (4) - Completely overlapped notes at regular intervals or something so that I think it float

00:38:217 (4) - So far interval. I narrowed down to give me!

Big Mushroom

00:35:360 (5) - > 00:35:182 (5) - Go to this

00:38:396 (1) - Add Circle + New Combo

00:38:753 (1) - New Combo Delete

00:41:789 (1) - Add New Combo

00:42:057 (3) - > 00:41:967 (3) - Go to this

00:42:235 (4) - > 00:42:324 (4) - ^ ( Same as above )

00:44:110 (10) - Add Circle

00:44:289 (11) - ^

00:44:467 (12) - ^

01:58:932 (1) - The end of the spinner here

LilyWhite's Mushroom

01:57:323 (6) - Delete

Thanks for the mod!

Takei Hisa

69 posts

Joined January 2011

Takei Hisa 2013-07-09T05:20:29+00:00

Don't give me kd
It's seems bad on your diff

learn to control song better
best to remake Small Mushroom and Medium Mushroom with DS,,there are too many noisy hitsounds and strange spacing

the diff Big Mushroom...LilyWhite's Mushroom is a good templet,,you can try to learn how to control the beat,spacing and hitsounds
recheck your map and revision it,,then PM me again plz ,,i love this cute song;)

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-09T05:32:47+00:00

KonataSuzumiya wrote:
Don't give me kd
It's seems bad on your diff
learn to control song better
best to remake Small Mushroom and Medium Mushroom with DS,,there are too many noisy hitsounds and strange spacing
the diff Big Mushroom...LilyWhite's Mushroom is a good templet,,you can try to learn how to control the beat,spacing and hitsounds
recheck your map and revision it,,then PM me again plz ,,i love this cute song;)

you mean big mushroom is ok? phew i taught a second ago it is bad >w< anyways ill do that with DS as much as possible!

Takei Hisa

69 posts

Joined January 2011

Takei Hisa 2013-07-09T05:41:21+00:00

YunoFanatic wrote:
KonataSuzumiya wrote:
Don't give me kd
It's seems bad on your diff
learn to control song better
best to remake Small Mushroom and Medium Mushroom with DS,,there are too many noisy hitsounds and strange spacing
the diff Big Mushroom...LilyWhite's Mushroom is a good templet,,you can try to learn how to control the beat,spacing and hitsounds
recheck your map and revision it,,then PM me again plz ,,i love this cute song;)

you mean big mushroom is ok? phew i taught a second ago it is bad >w< anyways ill do that with DS as much as possible!

oh,,i means maybe you can remake it and LilyWhite's Mushroom is a good templet. .
try to copy and learn will better when you mapping XD

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-10T06:05:15+00:00

UPDATED~!

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2013-07-10T07:01:41+00:00

From your request~

how did you remap your diff so fast

[General]

i'm not really sure about the bg, is it supposed to be 1024x768 ?

and open AiMod, there are lots of inconsistencies :
1.Uninherited Timing Sections should be consistent in all diff
2. Tags should be consistent in all diff
3. Set a Preview Point
4.Remove Pinocchio-P[ and MikuHatsune from Source
5.Remove Mushroom Mother from Tags, it's already in Title
6.maybe you should cut your mp3, since you only mapped less than the current mp3

and this is only opinion, but combo 1 and combo 3 seems a bit similiar

i only mod two diffs btw

[Small Mushroom]

00:30:360 (5,1) - switch new combo
00:36:074 (4) - nc
00:41:789 (1,1) - i think it's a pity not to map this gap
01:05:717 (2) - this circle is hidden by 01:04:289 (4) - , change the position so it won't be hidden
01:19:646 (4) - nc
01:41:432 (3) - ^
01:48:932 (3,4) - bad overlap

and then i noticed that you used so many repeated sliders like 00:36:074 (4,5,6) - 00:48:217 (1,2) - 00:55:360 (3) - 01:06:789 (5) - 01:16:432 (2) - 01:42:860 (4) - 01:48:932 (3) - this can be boring for players. you should create a new pattern

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]

OD-1? Lots of short spinners :<

00:44:645 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - only suggestion but this part wants jump. i suggest to ctrl+g 00:45:181 (1,2) - 00:45:717 (1,2) - 00:46:253 (1,2) - , it'll be more fun to play imo
01:20:359 (4) - add finish? you add it at 01:19:645 (1) -

Really nice to play :3

Good luck~

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-10T07:22:08+00:00

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
From your request~

how did you remap your diff so fast

Magician Never Reveals A Secret

Thanks For The Mod!

Winshley

osu! Alumni

2,384 posts

Joined May 2011

Winshley 2013-07-10T09:30:39+00:00

[General]
- Unicode Artist: ピノキオP (that alone is enough)
- Source is not necessary here. Remove it.
- Tag: hatsune miku vocaloid lilywhite (the rest of the tags aren't necessary)
- Set Timing Points (red ticks) at: 1075, 14676, 48217, and 97502.
- Set Preview Point (suggested point: 00:47:503 .) You haven't set this on all difficulties yet.
- Remember to make sure all the suggested above are consistent across all difficulties. Currently, they're all inconsistent.

[Small Mushroom]
- CS3, HP2, AR3, OD2

[Medium Mushroom]
- This is supposed to be a Normal diff, right? If so, either CS3 HP3 AR5 OD4 or CS3 HP3 AR4 OD3 are suggested.

[Big Mushroom and LilyWhite's Mushroom]
- I'm not sure which one is supposed to be Hard and Insane for these difficulties...

I'll mod more once you have completed the map.

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-11T05:49:33+00:00

[Big Mushroom and LilyWhite's Mushroom]
- I'm not sure which one is supposed to be Hard and Insane for these difficulties...

I'll mod more once you have completed the map.

Both is insane i dont exactly know how to create an hard diff always turn in insane

creampuff

438 posts

Joined August 2012

creampuff 2013-07-12T00:27:26+00:00

*pops in out of nowhere*

I'd like to make a Hard diff if you're looking for one. I really like this song.

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-12T05:10:49+00:00

Tsusuko wrote:
*pops in out of nowhere*

I'd like to make a Hard diff if you're looking for one. I really like this song.

*Sends an PM*

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-12T05:12:07+00:00

Ok! I have updated will be adding Tsusuko's Hard when ready!

Last edited by YunoFanatic 2013-07-12T07:35:36+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-07-12T07:01:16+00:00

Lily's mushroom
00:44:645 (1,2) - Ctrl+G? only a suggestion
01:39:644 (4) - moveto 268,188
mushroom mom
Didn't finished?
3.You must have more than 1 ranked map
>>>or more than 3 Pending&Graveyarded maps
Make more maps then you will realize how about this map:3

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-12T07:15:05+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
Lily's mushroom
00:44:645 (1,2) - Ctrl+G? only a suggestion
01:39:644 (4) - moveto 268,188
mushroom mom
Didn't finished?
3.You must have more than 1 ranked map
>>>or more than 3 Pending&Graveyarded maps
Make more maps then you will realize how about this map:3

.3. uguu

Last edited by YunoFanatic 2013-07-22T21:09:15+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Overwrite

218 posts

Joined December 2012

Overwrite 2013-07-12T07:15:25+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
Lily's mushroom
00:44:645 (1,2) - Ctrl+G? only a suggestion
01:39:644 (4) - moveto 268,188

Both fixed.

poop

osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: mushroom mother.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47503
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
SkinPreference:Default

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Mushroom Mother
TitleUnicode:Mushroom Mother
Artist:Pinocchio-P
ArtistUnicode:Pinocchio-P
Creator:YunoFanatic
Version:LilyWhite's Mushroom
Source:
Tags:vocaloid mushroom mother lilywhite yunofanatic
BeatmapID:271668
BeatmapSetID:102307

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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24646,357.142857142857,4,2,0,70,1,0
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108930,-100,4,1,0,65,0,0
109287,-100,4,1,0,75,0,1
118930,-100,4,1,0,65,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 84,163,171
Combo2 : 2,200,190
Combo3 : 18,124,255
Combo4 : 11,255,243

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344,36,114823,5,0,0:0:0:0:
436,116,115002,2,0,P|440:188|456:200,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,252,115359,2,0,P|448:264|408:252,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,284,115716,2,0,P|332:240|348:204,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,292,116073,6,0,P|296:344|356:352,1,120
400,324,116430,2,0,P|420:288|460:268,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,152,116787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,76,116966,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,128,117144,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,248,117323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,117502,12,4,118930,0:0:0:0:

cubelrti

61 posts

Joined February 2012

cubelrti 2013-07-12T08:37:21+00:00

Hi~
From Forum M4M PM

Red: Unrankedable Issues
Blue:You should Fix it
Green:Just suggestion

[General]
mushroommother.jpg is 1228x767, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768. Crop the original jpg into 1024x768 using photoshop or something else .
Mushroom Mother diff kiai conflict with other diff. Consider end the kiai #3 on 01:59:110 -
Sounds the downbeat of the song changed in the late part. Make all your diffs red timing sections same as LilyWhite's Mushroom diff .
(I think you need a little more timing help , but i cant

sorry for that)

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]
i like CS4 more than CS5 (as the map ranked recently)
00:13:932 (1) - a spinner than break ? i dont really like this but you can keep it.
00:32:503 (4,5,6) - 1/4 slider sounds not very well . change it to 1/2 slider and remove (6) plz.
01:42:055 (2,3) - nc every note , it will mention the player here has a short break.
01:22:859 - maybe insert a short break here?
nice map !

[Mushroom Mother]
00:23:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - wow so sexy here but how about reducing the spacing ? maybe a little too hard
00:29:467 (24) - it should be longer like below

SPOILER

00:30:985 (3,4,5) - these 3/4 notes should begin at the red line , not the blue
00:34:824 (15) - 3/4 slider should never have such a big spacing , overclap it with the end of (14).
00:36:074 (20) - make this slider up 5 grid (maybe) , just like below

SPOILER

00:41:699 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - start the stream here 00:41:788 - and end the stream here 00:43:574 - actually i don't like the stream like this , ask more modder to mod here.
00:46:610 - start a spinner here
00:47:860 - end the spinner here
00:50:717 (10) - end this slider at the long white line
00:57:324 (1) - no , nothing going to repeat on the blue line

start repeating at the white line (just reduce the length of the slider) end it here 00:58:932 -
01:17:146 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - here is so confusing . Try to remap this part follow the vocal .
01:59:021 - this green timing section should be earlier to 01:58:932 - .

[Medium Mushroom]
00:43:396 (1) - no , such a short spinner is too hard for beginners . Remember this is normal diff , replace it with a note or a slider .
01:30:003 (1) - ^
00:46:789 (1) - idk what about this one ... maybe change it to a long slider?
01:36:074 (1) - ^
00:55:182 (10,11) - it should like below

SPOILER

01:43:753 (1) - ^

SPOILER

i think this diff need more mod , it don't follow the rhythm correctly in many parts .

try to map more and get more experience.

[Small Mushroom]
Why 1.8x spacing in EASY DIFF

Change it to 1.0x
And i so sorry to tell you , this diff maybe need a remap

it dont follow the ranking criteria correctly.
Try to remap this diff and call me back when you finished.
00:36:074 (1,2,3) - these repeat sliders sounds confusing , change them .
00:53:932 (3,4,5,6) - such a big spacing is not allowed in easy diff. Change them.
01:05:360 (5,6,7,8) - ^

Thats all~
Good luck on the way.

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-12T09:56:18+00:00

Thanks for the mod~! ill be sincerly gonna work on it ! Updated and Remapped the easy diff! no i will not disturb you anymore for you have many things to do such as for your beatmap!

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-07-12T09:59:13+00:00

shoot your star back:3

Ayesha Altugle

3,052 posts

Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2013-07-12T12:26:03+00:00

Hi

Can I make Guest diff?

and

[general]
remove mushroom mother on tags because it is used in title

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-12T12:55:38+00:00

Yes you can do a GD on my map just lemme know which one im kinda needing an Easy diff or Insane diff

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putigame

25 posts

Joined March 2012

putigame 2013-07-12T13:00:10+00:00

Mushroom Mother

まずCircle Sizeは5よりは4のほうがいいと思います。あとARについても9は少し高すぎると思うので、7か8にすればいいと思います。
またeditを行うときにはDistance Snapをつけることをお勧めします。

ここからは譜面の配置についてです。
00:14:289~00:15:003　ここのスピナー。プレイしたときここにスピナーがあるのは少し不自然に感じたのでここのスピナーをなくすか、あるいはサークルやスライダーを配置してみてはどうでしょうか？
00:20:003~00:20:717　ここのスピナー。このスピナーも少し不自然に感じました。なので何か置くのであればサークルやスライダーを配置してみてはどうでしょうか？
00:20:896~00:22:949　ここのブレイクタイムは何か配置できる気がします。サークルやスライダーを配置してみてはどうでしょうか？
00:23:574~00:24:824　ここの①②③④のスライダー。①と②のスライダーの距離をもう少し離したほうがいいと思います。②と③のスライダー　③と④のスライダーも同様です。あと④のスライダーは④のサークルにしたほうがいいと思います。
00:25:896~00:26:432　ここの②の往復スライダー。最近のranked譜面を見ていると往復スライダーで１往復より多いスライダーはあまり見ない気がします。２つのスライダーにわけるか、スライダーの長さを長くして１往復のスライダーにするかどちらかにするほうがいいと思います。
00:27:324~00:27:503　ここの④のスライダー。ここからnew comboにするといいと思います。
00:29:378~00:29:646　ここの⑪のスライダー。このスライダーを叩いたときのヒットサウンドがまるで２連打を叩いたときのような音がします。なので修正したほうがいいと思います。
00:31:610~00:31:789　ここの④のスライダー。ここからnew comboにするといいと思います。
00:33:217　ここの⑧のサークル。ここからnew comboにするといいと思います。
00:41:789~00:41:967　ここの④のスライダー。ここからnew comboにするといいと思います。
00:41:789~00:42:682　ここの④⑤⑥のスライダー。④のスライダーだけ⑤⑥のスライダーと比べて少し下にずれています。なので④のスライダーを少し上にずらせば④⑤⑥のスライダーが横にきれいに並ぶと思います。
00:43:039~00:43:932　ここの⑦⑧⑨のスライダー。⑨のスライダーだけ⑦⑧のスライダーと比べて少し下にずれています。なので⑨のスライダーを少し上にずらせば⑦⑧⑨のスライダーが横にきれいに並ぶと思います。

Last edited by putigame 2013-07-12T13:20:03+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Asphyxia

Beatmap Nominator

2,001 posts

Joined June 2012

Asphyxia 2013-07-12T13:16:02+00:00

irc mod~

my osu crashed so you can't see me mod the beginning~

big mushroom

SPOILER

15:40 Asphyxia: hmhmhhmh, osu crashed
15:41 Asphyxia: 00:54:646 (3) - but then comes this slider and it's totally different
15:43 Asphyxia: 00:57:324 (1) - make the reverse arrows hit white tick, now that they hit blue tick
15:43 Asphyxia: it sounds ugly
15:43 Asphyxia: I mean like this http://puu.sh/3B527.jpg
15:44 Asphyxia: 00:59:646 (2) - NC
15:44 Asphyxia: 01:00:360 (4) - make this slider straight like the others?
15:47 YunoFanatic: lol sorry for the iddle for a while i just took a bath xD
15:48 Asphyxia: did you get to read the mods I made after my osu crash
15:48 YunoFanatic: yes and im working on it pls seat for a while ill tell you
15:49 Asphyxia: tell me :-3
15:49 YunoFanatic: xD lol my brain
15:49 YunoFanatic: xD ill tell you when its done probably only 3 min
15:49 Asphyxia: I can mod the whole map
15:50 YunoFanatic: :OOO your not a lazy kid
15:50 Asphyxia: no
15:50 Asphyxia: and if I started to mod a map, I will mod it
15:50 Asphyxia: 01:00:360 (4) - make this slider like the others
15:51 Asphyxia: 00:59:646 (2,3) - like these
15:51 YunoFanatic: oh yes yes
15:51 Asphyxia: 01:02:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - randomly placed
15:52 YunoFanatic: lol random people say to me can i make a guest diff on this ? should i accept?
15:52 Asphyxia: 01:06:074 (2) - copy the first slider aka this 01:05:360 (1) -
15:52 Asphyxia: Erm, if you want to, I personally would not accept from random people
15:52 Asphyxia: since they can make horrible gd's
15:53 YunoFanatic: hmmpe simply i reviewed all gd's before the lilywhite's mushroom 3 people's including lly has requested a gd
15:53 YunoFanatic: gladly only lilywhite i accept
15:54 Asphyxia: ^^
15:54 Asphyxia: 01:05:360 (1) - copy this
15:54 Asphyxia: 01:06:074 (2) - paste here
15:54 YunoFanatic: ok
15:55 Asphyxia: would look like this
15:55 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/3B5o2.jpg
15:57 Asphyxia: 01:15:182 (5) -
15:57 Asphyxia: copy this
15:57 Asphyxia: 01:16:074 (6) - paste
15:57 Asphyxia: 01:17:146 (7) - NC
15:57 YunoFanatic: *faints* slow down xD im on it xD im a bit slow
15:58 Asphyxia: if you can't keep up with me, it doesn't matter that much because I will post this to the forum
15:58 Asphyxia: this log
15:58 Asphyxia: 01:19:646 (14) - NC
15:59 YunoFanatic: o yeah for your kd xD
15:59 Asphyxia: y
15:59 Asphyxia: 01:20:182 (15) - again, this looks fine
15:59 Asphyxia: 01:20:539 (16) - ugly since it has a different shape
16:01 Asphyxia: 01:27:860 (10) - NC?
16:02 Asphyxia: It's a bit hard to mod this if you keep going offline =(
16:02 YunoFanatic: no
16:02 YunoFanatic: my internet just crash btw i follew all of the mod
16:03 YunoFanatic: and it seems getting better =)
16:03 YunoFanatic: ok continuition
16:03 Asphyxia: 01:27:860 (10) - NC?
16:03 Asphyxia: you can decide
16:03 Asphyxia: 01:28:753 - missing a note?
16:03 YunoFanatic: done
16:04 Asphyxia: 01:33:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and these, like the music sounds jumpy, you can make them jump
16:04 Asphyxia: but yeah that was okay~
16:05 YunoFanatic: :OOO i made aslider that jumps the beat should i delete it\
16:05 YunoFanatic: ? since you say its okay?
16:05 Asphyxia: yes
16:05 Asphyxia: the part is okay
16:05 Asphyxia: no need to change anything
16:05 YunoFanatic: ok~! redone
16:06 Asphyxia: 01:38:753 (7) - NC & How about doing it like this? 01:38:753 (7) -
16:06 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/3B5In.jpg*
16:06 Asphyxia: there's the puush
16:07 Asphyxia: 01:40:896 (11) - NC
16:07 Asphyxia: 01:42:057 (2) - move this to the blue tick
16:08 Asphyxia: and remove the (3) circle?
16:08 Asphyxia: sounds better to me
16:09 Asphyxia: 01:47:860 (7) - do it like this http://puu.sh/3B5MX.jpg
16:09 Asphyxia: you don't need the two extra circles
16:09 YunoFanatic: done
16:09 YunoFanatic: yay were almost there!
16:10 Asphyxia: 01:45:896 (2) - make it curve?
16:10 Asphyxia: 01:49:646 (3) - make a bit smoother?
16:10 YunoFanatic: done
16:11 Asphyxia: 01:52:503 (3,4,5,6,7) - looks ugly for me
16:11 Asphyxia: 01:43:217 (8) - NC btw
16:11 Asphyxia: 01:54:646 (1) - honesly you could add a slider
16:12 Asphyxia: but I think it's okay
16:12 YunoFanatic: ohhh thanks!
16:12 Asphyxia: nothing more
16:12 YunoFanatic: :O ITS FINISH MOTHER OF GOD!
16:12 Asphyxia: overall: remember to use distance snap
16:12 Asphyxia: it's important
16:13 Asphyxia: going to post this to the forum
16:13 YunoFanatic: THANK YOU THANK YOU Very much for the help!
16:13 YunoFanatic: oh yeah
16:13 Asphyxia: I hope it helped ^^

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

YunoFanatic 2013-07-12T13:25:25+00:00

Thanks for all your mod ive updated it

@putigame : yes i use distance snap but in various timing for insane only

@Asphyxia : thanks a million

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2013-07-13T06:17:07+00:00

I hate mushrooms

[General]

Try using different combo colors instead of varying shades of teal and blue, maybe a warmer toned color like red to match the background?
Also, the mp3 you used is a lot longer than the one you mapped, consider cutting it or fading it out or something

[LilyWhite's Mushroom]

00:31:074 (3,4,5) - consider using this rhythm instead to fit vocals:

SPOILER

00:32:503 (4,5) - imo, better to extend these sliders by 1/4, and move (5) to the next red tick, get rid of the next circle :/
00:34:110 (4) - consider using something else, sliders with more than one repeats are likely to trip people up D:
00:38:217 (6,7) - imo, better to extend these sliders by 1/4, and move (7) to the next white tick, get rid of the next circle
00:40:717 (6) - stack on tail of 00:39:824 (3)?
00:48:931 (3,4) - these 1/4 sliders man DDD: try this instead?

SPOILER

00:49:645 (1,2,3) - how about this rhythm to match vocals?

SPOILER

01:02:859 (3,6) - what about stacking 6 on 3's tail
01:05:717 (1) - clap on end instead of finish?
01:46:073 (1,3) - would look better if you dont overlap these imo

[Mushroom Mother]

Go add some hitsounds!
I think it'd be better to have only 1 spinner in the beginning

ALso a spinner and break, then another spinner then a small break play kinda weirdly D: just my opinion
Did you forget to new combo in the first kiai? D: the combos are really longggg
00:25:003 - try this setup? plays better for me imo and matches vocals better

SPOILER

00:27:324 (7,8,9) - such strong beats in the background should occur in the head of the sliders, not at the end

consider adding a circle, then moving all the sliders down 1/2 tick, like:

SPOILER

00:40:360 (2,3,4) - you may want to move these farther apart a bit so they're not overlapping D;
00:41:789 (5) - NC here?
00:44:646 (7) - NC here too?
00:45:717 (9,10) - move these farther apart so they don't overlap D:
00:48:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - saaaame, they look like a stream ):
00:51:610 (10) - NC
00:53:932 (16) - and here
01:15:182 (5,6) - sliders with moer than 1 repeat are likely to trip players up, consider adding circles instead? D:

Many of your sliders here play awkwardly here because they end on strong beats (many can be fixed by simply shifting them by 1/2 or so), and they look messily placed with overlaps. Please consider rearranging them so they look nicer! You could try making pretty shapes with the circles too, like triangles, or squares or something.

[Medium Mushroom]

Is this diff supposed to be Normal? D: If so, please make sure the distance between every object is constant, and open up AiMod (ctrl shift A) to learn where the distance is too close or far.
Go add some hitsounds!

00:33:574 (4) - again with the multiple repeating sliders )): they'll especially trip up beginners, who i assume this diff is catering to, also i won't mention them anymore

00:35:003 (5) - move to 00:35:360 and put a circle where it used to be? D:
00:51:074 (5) - NC here?
00:59:646 (1) - i think this is too soon after the spinner, maybe move it to 01:00:003 ? and reduce # of repeats
01:19:646 (6) - NC
01:49:289 (6) - NC
01:54:646 (13) - NC

Same comments as Mushroom Mother, weird overlaps and messily placed sliders and multiple repeating sliders ): Please consider changing these

[Small Mushroom]

Same comments as the previous two diffs!

[Tiny Mushroom]

Eh, it's not even done yet
looks fine so far

Goodluck on your map!

It needs quite a bit of work ):

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2013-07-13T06:26:16+00:00

Ohai.

General

Use distance snap. Some diffs are too messy.
USE 1/4 on OTHER DIFFS.

LilyWhite's Mushroom

I don't think this needs modding. lol :3

Mushroom Mother

Use distance snap on this diff. The diff has a lot of problems, mostly distance and timing.

00:29:378 - Match this with the vocals. Snap the starting point to the red tick.
00:34:735 - Do the same as this one ^
00:44:646 - New combo here.
00:51:610 - New combo here.
00:57:414 - Resnap this. This sounds wrong.
01:00:169 - New combo here.

vahn10's Tiny Mushroom

Fix the diff's name. It should be vahn10's Tiny Mushroom. (currently vahn10'sTiny Mushroom). Put a space.

Use distance snap on this one too, but if it already uses DS, then fix the position of some elements.

Use 1/4 beat snap divisor!

00:16:074 - Flip this slider vertically.
00:20:360 - Move this hitcircle.

Small Mushroom

Good enough. But use 1/4 beat snap divisor!

Medium Mushroom

Use 1/4 beat snap divisor!

00:42:146 - New combo here.
00:53:574 - New combo here.
01:51:789 - New combo here.

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Legenda wrote:

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[ Zzz ] wrote:

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ts8zs wrote:

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