2017-05-30 19:18 MaridiuS: street or insane?
2017-05-30 19:18 Ambrew: street
2017-05-30 19:18 Ambrew: :3
2017-05-30 19:19 MaridiuS: 00:09:380 (1,2) -
2017-05-30 19:19 MaridiuS: notice how they overlap
2017-05-30 19:19 MaridiuS: it is not the same as
2017-05-30 19:19 MaridiuS: 00:09:770 (2,3) - overlap
2017-05-30 19:20 MaridiuS: but for some reason it looks good in there
2017-05-30 19:20 MaridiuS: so nothing to worry i guess
2017-05-30 19:20 Ambrew: they have different sv's so I think the amount of overlap isn't too
2017-05-30 19:21 Ambrew: yea i can try to make spacing mroe equal
2017-05-30 19:21 MaridiuS: dont you think that 00:09:185 (5) - should be a kickslider following same theme like 00:08:017 (1,2) -
2017-05-30 19:21 MaridiuS: 00:08:017 (1) - actually this is a bit of a problem
2017-05-30 19:21 MaridiuS: you don't make this as a kickslider later
2017-05-30 19:21 MaridiuS: but you do sometimes
2017-05-30 19:22 MaridiuS: so decide on your patterning a bit
2017-05-30 19:23 MaridiuS: 00:14:835 (8,9,10,11) - this could be made to look better with doing something like this
2017-05-30 19:23 MaridiuS:
http://i.imgur.com/QN8ri27.jpg2017-05-30 19:23 Ambrew: ok
2017-05-30 19:23 MaridiuS: 00:12:497 (1,2) - this is the only partial overlap in the section
2017-05-30 19:23 MaridiuS: i suggset doing one types of overlaps
2017-05-30 19:23 MaridiuS: 00:15:614 (1,2) - especially since you did a full one here
2017-05-30 19:23 MaridiuS: 00:15:614 (1,2) -
2017-05-30 19:24 Ambrew: ugh crap
2017-05-30 19:24 Ambrew: everytime i submit i forget stack error xD
2017-05-30 19:24 MaridiuS: 00:19:315 (3,6) - these two are too close to look good
2017-05-30 19:25 MaridiuS: this
http://i.imgur.com/d6wfYtN.jpg makes the jumps more tidy
2017-05-30 19:25 MaridiuS: keepign the same visual distance between all circles
2017-05-30 19:25 Ambrew: I like the aesthetic choice
2017-05-30 19:25 MaridiuS: yours or my suggestion?
2017-05-30 19:25 Ambrew: urs
2017-05-30 19:26 MaridiuS: glad to hear that
2017-05-30 19:26 MaridiuS: similar can be applied here
2017-05-30 19:26 MaridiuS: visual distance is important on circles that are really close
2017-05-30 19:26 MaridiuS: 00:20:484 (1,2,3) -
2017-05-30 19:26 MaridiuS: visual spacing of 1 and 2 should be the same as 2 and 3
2017-05-30 19:26 Ambrew: yeah
2017-05-30 19:26 Ambrew: some reason on this i wasn't too focused on shape form
2017-05-30 19:27 MaridiuS: 00:21:848 (1) - sliders like this don't really look good
2017-05-30 19:27 MaridiuS: making a simple S does better work
2017-05-30 19:28 Ambrew: wait what on this one
2017-05-30 19:28 Ambrew: 00:20:614 -
2017-05-30 19:28 Ambrew: 00:20:484 (1,2,3) -
2017-05-30 19:28 MaridiuS:
http://i.imgur.com/ihNOGEi.jpg2017-05-30 19:29 Ambrew: thx
2017-05-30 19:29 MaridiuS:
http://i.imgur.com/EwpyQct.jpg you sohld focus on getting things this close in a line
2017-05-30 19:29 MaridiuS: 00:23:211 (1,2,3) -
2017-05-30 19:29 MaridiuS: and to overlap the with same amount
2017-05-30 19:30 MaridiuS: 00:24:185 (4,5,6,7) - suggestion for this one damn
http://i.imgur.com/M84QLYn.jpg2017-05-30 19:32 Ambrew: oops ugly
2017-05-30 19:32 Ambrew: haha
2017-05-30 19:32 MaridiuS: 00:28:276 (2,3) - these two have a strong kick to follow them up and are done well, however 00:28:666 (4) - this one doesn't therefore make (4) somethnig different
2017-05-30 19:32 MaridiuS: maybe even reduce spacing
2017-05-30 19:32 MaridiuS: SV*
2017-05-30 19:33 MaridiuS: 00:31:783 (4) - same here
2017-05-30 19:34 Ambrew: `i followed instrument sound
2017-05-30 19:34 Ambrew: soi put finish on 2,3
2017-05-30 19:34 MaridiuS: exactly even more reason to emphasize them differently form other stuf
2017-05-30 19:34 Ambrew: nvm
2017-05-30 19:35 Ambrew: yeah but the sound is the same, it'd look weird for me when i do the same pattern like this throughout
2017-05-30 19:35 MaridiuS: 00:34:510 (2,3,4) - to make this look better, simply copy 2 and 3, paste and do ctrl + H and you will realize what to do ;d
2017-05-30 19:36 MaridiuS: kk i won't mention that anymore. But i always tend to give some emphasis to kicks.
2017-05-30 19:37 MaridiuS: 00:36:458 (3,4) - close
2017-05-30 19:37 Ambrew: ohh
2017-05-30 19:37 Ambrew: kj
2017-05-30 19:37 MaridiuS: 00:40:159 - i wish instead of this nigga yea there would be some loli ;v
2017-05-30 19:38 Ambrew: xD
2017-05-30 19:38 MaridiuS: 00:42:107 (1) - put this on 00:41:328 (4) -
2017-05-30 19:38 MaridiuS: 00:42:107 (1,4) - this overlap is not tasty
2017-05-30 19:39 MaridiuS: 00:42:107 (1,2) - this one is
2017-05-30 19:40 Ambrew: yeah i just moved it away a bit
2017-05-30 19:40 MaridiuS: 00:55:939 (2) - persoanlly i make them look like this
http://i.imgur.com/eaiSj8P.jpg or this look better imo
http://i.imgur.com/xj9DBPT.jpg2017-05-30 19:41 MaridiuS: 00:59:055 (7,1) - damaged overlap
2017-05-30 19:42 Ambrew: damm hard tochoose
2017-05-30 19:42 Ambrew: xd
2017-05-30 19:42 MaridiuS: 01:01:588 (4) - i'd make this into 2 circles since it has a clickable sound on both head and tial
2017-05-30 19:42 MaridiuS: compared to other sliders
2017-05-30 19:43 MaridiuS: 01:05:484 (1) - this doesnt fit with 01:05:679 (2,3) - since it doesnt follow same sounds
2017-05-30 19:43 MaridiuS: i suggest making it only into a circle
2017-05-30 19:44 MaridiuS: 01:05:289 (6) - or this 1/2 long
2017-05-30 19:44 MaridiuS: 01:07:042 (1) - tilting it like this looks better imo
http://i.imgur.com/0gQUymb.jpg2017-05-30 19:45 MaridiuS: 01:09:185 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why are these not 1/4 sliders if these are 01:08:601 (1,1,1) -
2017-05-30 19:46 MaridiuS: 01:10:159 (1) - make this more symmetrical:
http://i.imgur.com/Z3oolPN.jpg