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Rena Uehara - closing

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Shad0w1and
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Joined April 2011
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Shad0w1and
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, August 6, 2017 at 8:18:38 PM

Artist: Rena Uehara
Title: closing
Source: WHITE ALBUM2 -closing chapter-
Tags: Shimokawa Naoya Leaf introductory galgame
BPM: 100
Filesize: 11580kb
Play Time: 04:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Heartbroken (5.27 stars, 993 notes)
  2. Weeping (3.42 stars, 134 notes)
Download: Rena Uehara - closing
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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WIP
Just a quick preview to show what will it look like.
Warning!! Heartbroken is not for DT.
Extra -Heartbroken- | Insane -Weeping- | Hard -Reachless-
Last edited by Shad0w1and , edited 20 times in total.
alkalde
86 posts
Joined October 2015
alkalde


fun map so far, really excited for how it'll turn out! :D
Logic Agent
483 posts
Joined April 2015
Logic Agent
hi, from your queue

[General]
  1. mp3 is 130kbps, I think you can get a better one from somewhere if you look probably
[Heartbreaking]
  1. 00:01:631 (3,4) - make visual distance between these two consistent with the others
  2. 00:25:931 (1,2) - this rhythm is the same as the ones before it but the slider that comes after it is farther away (and it has follow points) so maybe move it closer
  3. 00:28:781 - don't you think there should be a slider like 00:28:331 (1) this one here?
  4. 00:41:231 (4,1) - covering up repeat like this is unrankable
  5. 00:52:031 (1,1) - again
  6. 01:01:931 (1,1,1) - this is super subjective but i think this pattern is pretty offputing in a very pretty map so far. the aesthetic is very flowy and free and this pattern is very rigid and uses a lot of red anchors. i dunno i just think it's unfitting and could be nicer
  7. 01:10:031 (4,1) - unrankable
  8. 01:18:581 (2,1) - not sure if this is okay or not, but if it is this might be a good fix for the other ones
alright gonna stop there since you said to a short mod, gl with map!

my request: p/5613440
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