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General-
No serious problem found
Mod-
Column = 1-2-3-4
[Easy]
about the HP and OD, after i look at it.. the pattern in this diff isn't dense enough to get HP 6. change it to 7 instead
00:18:553 (18553|2,18553|1) - i don't see any reason to put dual here, since at the earlier part you use dual for Crash sound. how about reduce 1 note? or you want to map the hard beat? then you should add more here too 00:11:442 - 00:25:664 - 00:29:220 - 00:39:887 - and the other that similar to this. you can check it yourself
00:22:109 (22109|1,22553|2,22553|0) - this too. i dont see any reason you put dual here 00:22:553 - when the actual Hardbeat are over here 00:22:109 - , plus i dont hear any crash sound or cymbal sound around this part, please re-consider it once more
00:41:220 (41220|3,41442|1,41664|0,41887|2,42109|3,42331|0,42553|1,42775|2,42998|3) - tbh.. this is too confusing for beginner to play. how about following the Kick and snare only? here's the one that i mean 00:41:220 (41220|3,41442|1,41887|2,42109|3,42553|1,42775|2,42998|3) - , reason.. easy to follow it by hearing the most audible sound in this part
[normal]
00:03:220 (3220|0) - please hear it again and reconsider the LN Lenght. i hear it end here 00:03:664 -
00:06:775 (6775|0) - this one too
00:18:998 (18998|3) - i see that you following the snare plus kick for dual. but why you leave this one with single note and use dual here? 00:19:442 (19442|3,19442|0) - please re consider it and hear it again.. because the same mistake are repeated until 00:27:442 (27442|3,27442|2) -
00:42:775 (42775|2,42775|0,42998|1) - the snare are here 00:42:998 - please re consider and use dual here 00:42:998 - instead using it here 00:42:775 - if you are still using dual for snare and kick
00:53:664 - no dual? it doesn't really affect the map since if you put 1 more note here 00:53:664 - on column 4, the flow and the transition are synced with 00:54:109 - , i cant describe it properly and i hope you get the point, i leave it to your decision
01:26:109 (86109|0) - why not dual like you do here 01:26:109 (86109|0) - ?
[Alexey's Hard]
00:02:775 (2775|3) - how about move it to 2 or re arrange this part to make 1 hand focus only for LN and the other hand Focus on the Note, well... more or less like this one 00:06:109 (6109|0,6331|2,6553|3) -
00:17:553 (17553|1,17664|2) - i gues it's a bit hard for HARD diff to execute this kind of pattern... how about move this 00:17:442 (17442|3) - to 2, 00:17:553 (17553|1) - this to 3, 00:17:664 (17664|2) - and this to 4, to make it easier to read and avoiding jack with this 00:17:887 (17887|1) -
00:18:331 (18331|3,18442|2) - doesn't look very nice and a bit hard to execute this kind of pattern. how about
Swap column this 00:18:331 (18331|3,18442|2) - (easy way)
00:18:331 (18331|3) - Move this to 3, 00:18:442 (18442|2) - move this to 2, 00:18:553 (18553|1) - this to 4 (harder way but better and still avoiding un-necessary jack)
00:18:331 (18331|3,18442|2) - move it 2 colum to left, 00:18:220 (18220|1) - move this to 4, 00:18:553 (18553|0) - move this to 4 (a bit hard to read but easy to execute)
your desicion~
00:27:998 (27998|2) - ghost note here
00:28:442 (28442|0) - this too
00:32:220 (32220|1,32331|2) - this one should be 1/8 thou but up to you~
00:35:553 (35553|1) - Ghost note
00:37:331 - Missing note here
00:39:220 (39220|2,39331|1,39442|2,39442|0) - this should be 1/8 thou
i guess that's it
Done~