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Yui Horie - silky heart (TV Size) [OsuMania]

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AnatOWJIya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 26 сентября 2016 г. at 6:41:02

Artist: Yui Horie
Title: silky heart (TV Size)
Source: Toradora!
Tags: とらドラ! op2 op opening AJIekceu
BPM: 135
Filesize: 2486kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alexey's Hard - 4Key (2,52 stars, 690 notes)
  2. Easy - 4Key (1,05 stars, 216 notes)
  3. Normal - 4Key (2 stars, 523 notes)
Download: Yui Horie - silky heart (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Another one map.
Working on it.
Hard by AJIekceu
Video and Audio have been stolen from Weez's mapset
Mods
Easy:3
Normal:4
Hard:2
Deep Sea
Фор май деар фрэнд :oops:

nonsense
2016-01-05 11:53 [Shana Lesus]: 00:00:776 (776|0) - конец здесь 00:01:220 - 
2016-01-05 11:54 AnatOWJIya: done
2016-01-05 11:54 AnatOWJIya: У тебя последняя версия карты?
2016-01-05 11:54 [Shana Lesus]: 00:02:553 (2553|2) - 00:02:998 -
2016-01-05 11:55 [Shana Lesus]: да
2016-01-05 11:55 AnatOWJIya: Тогда ок
2016-01-05 11:56 [Shana Lesus]: 00:02:553 - тут ноту в первую колонку добавь
2016-01-05 11:56 [Shana Lesus]: 00:04:331 (4331|2) - конец 00:04:775 -
2016-01-05 11:59 [Shana Lesus]: 00:15:220 (15220|1,15442|2) - ctrl + h
2016-01-05 11:59 [Shana Lesus]: 00:18:553 (18553|1) - в 4
2016-01-05 11:59 [Shana Lesus]: 00:18:775 (18775|2) - в 3
2016-01-05 12:00 AnatOWJIya: Она итак в 3
2016-01-05 12:00 AnatOWJIya: 0ц0
2016-01-05 12:00 [Shana Lesus]: ой
2016-01-05 12:00 [Shana Lesus]: во 2
2016-01-05 12:02 [Shana Lesus]: 00:23:442 (23442|1) - в 4
2016-01-05 12:03 [Shana Lesus]: 00:24:553 (24553|1,24664|2) - ctrl + h
2016-01-05 12:04 [Shana Lesus]: 00:28:887 (28887|1,29109|2) - удаляй
2016-01-05 12:06 [Shana Lesus]: 00:43:442 - добавь ноту в 3 колонку
2016-01-05 12:06 [Shana Lesus]: 00:44:998 (44998|2,45220|1) - ctrl + h
2016-01-05 12:07 [Shana Lesus]: 00:46:331 (46331|2,46775|1,46998|2) - ctrl + h
2016-01-05 12:07 [Shana Lesus]: 00:54:109 - добавь ноту в 3 колонку
2016-01-05 12:07 [Shana Lesus]: 00:54:331 (54331|2) - во 2
2016-01-05 12:07 [Shana Lesus]: 00:55:664 (55664|1) - в 1 колонку
2016-01-05 12:11 [Shana Lesus]: 01:09:664 (69664|0) - в 3 колонку
2016-01-05 12:17 [Shana Lesus]: 00:07:442 - добавь ноту во 2
2016-01-05 12:18 [Shana Lesus]: 00:14:887 (14887|1) - в 3
2016-01-05 12:18 [Shana Lesus]: 00:14:998 - и добавь во 2

ну с вк я думаю не надо кидать логи, хотя большие изменения там :D
Topic Starter
AnatOWJIya

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Фор май деар фрэнд :oops:

nonsense
2016-01-05 11:53 [Shana Lesus]: 00:00:776 (776|0) - конец здесь 00:01:220 - 
2016-01-05 11:54 AnatOWJIya: done
2016-01-05 11:54 AnatOWJIya: У тебя последняя версия карты?
2016-01-05 11:54 [Shana Lesus]: 00:02:553 (2553|2) - 00:02:998 -
2016-01-05 11:55 [Shana Lesus]: да
2016-01-05 11:55 AnatOWJIya: Тогда ок
2016-01-05 11:56 [Shana Lesus]: 00:02:553 - тут ноту в первую колонку добавь
2016-01-05 11:56 [Shana Lesus]: 00:04:331 (4331|2) - конец 00:04:775 -
2016-01-05 11:59 [Shana Lesus]: 00:15:220 (15220|1,15442|2) - ctrl + h
2016-01-05 11:59 [Shana Lesus]: 00:18:553 (18553|1) - в 4
2016-01-05 11:59 [Shana Lesus]: 00:18:775 (18775|2) - в 3
2016-01-05 12:00 AnatOWJIya: Она итак в 3
2016-01-05 12:00 AnatOWJIya: 0ц0
2016-01-05 12:00 [Shana Lesus]: ой
2016-01-05 12:00 [Shana Lesus]: во 2
2016-01-05 12:02 [Shana Lesus]: 00:23:442 (23442|1) - в 4
2016-01-05 12:03 [Shana Lesus]: 00:24:553 (24553|1,24664|2) - ctrl + h
2016-01-05 12:04 [Shana Lesus]: 00:28:887 (28887|1,29109|2) - удаляй
2016-01-05 12:06 [Shana Lesus]: 00:43:442 - добавь ноту в 3 колонку
2016-01-05 12:06 [Shana Lesus]: 00:44:998 (44998|2,45220|1) - ctrl + h
2016-01-05 12:07 [Shana Lesus]: 00:46:331 (46331|2,46775|1,46998|2) - ctrl + h
2016-01-05 12:07 [Shana Lesus]: 00:54:109 - добавь ноту в 3 колонку
2016-01-05 12:07 [Shana Lesus]: 00:54:331 (54331|2) - во 2
2016-01-05 12:07 [Shana Lesus]: 00:55:664 (55664|1) - в 1 колонку
2016-01-05 12:11 [Shana Lesus]: 01:09:664 (69664|0) - в 3 колонку
2016-01-05 12:17 [Shana Lesus]: 00:07:442 - добавь ноту во 2
2016-01-05 12:18 [Shana Lesus]: 00:14:887 (14887|1) - в 3
2016-01-05 12:18 [Shana Lesus]: 00:14:998 - и добавь во 2

ну с вк я думаю не надо кидать логи, хотя большие изменения там :D
Спасибо за мод,Шана :D
Dereku
No Kudo

Gesk's Hard: Sample Volume 100% > 40%
Topic Starter
AnatOWJIya
Added video to mapset,re-download it
Meiju
Дарова братан дотан бутан гексан

Нужно бы киаи добавить, например тута 00:57:664 и до конца

Easy
00:27:887 - ЛН тута начинается
01:09:887 - Какие-то странные ЛНы, лучше сделать что-нибудь типо этого http://puu.sh/mkuU6/cb285e9e3b.jpg
Нормалек
00:02:553 - ЛН тута начинается
00:06:109 - ^
Topic Starter
AnatOWJIya

SpinForWin wrote:

Дарова братан дотан бутан гексан

Нужно бы киаи добавить, например тута 00:57:664 и до конца

Easy
00:27:887 - ЛН тута начинается
01:09:887 - Какие-то странные ЛНы, лучше сделать что-нибудь типо этого http://puu.sh/mkuU6/cb285e9e3b.jpg
Нормалек
00:02:553 - ЛН тута начинается
00:06:109 - ^
Спасибо,принял всё
Verniy_Chan

Hi AnatOWJIya

Mod Via Exclusive PM Request

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. Suggest Kiai end here 01:26:109 -
  2. Check Hitsounds : Normal & Hard diff
Easy

OD : 7
HP : 6
  1. 00:11:887 (11887|1) - remove for consistency snare sounds
  2. 00:13:220 - add note? as cimbal sounds, check consistency 00:14:998 -
  3. 00:17:664 (17664|1) - move to |4| for pattern balance
  4. 00:21:887 (21887|2) - inconsistent rhytim, i think you only focus beat here, same reason like :
    00:35:664 (35664|1,36109|3) -
  5. 00:27:664 (27664|0) - ?? if you followed long synth, should start here 00:27:887 -
  6. 00:53:664 - you missed note here
  7. 00:57:220 (57220|1) - remove here, then add note here 00:57:664 - as Kiai part.. it more interesting you know
  8. 01:01:220 - why?? are you followed small long bass? if yess.. you must add note on main white tick, if not : remove.. it really low pitch. also :
    01:04:775 -
    01:15:442 -
    01:18:998 -
  9. 01:11:887 (71887|0) - move to |3| for hand balance
  10. 01:26:109 - add note for cimbal sounds
  11. 01:28:553 (88553|3) - it more suitable for long synth if you change this pattern into LN, then remove note here 01:28:775 (88775|1) -
Normal

OD : 7
HP : 7
  1. 00:06:775 (6775|0) - shorten LN to 00:07:220 - if you not followed vocal
  2. 00:14:775 (14775|3) - move to 00:14:664 - if you want following snare
  3. 01:09:664 (69664|0,69887|0) - it will be nice if you avoid jack here
  4. 01:18:775 (78775|3) - move to |3| for variety pattern
  5. 01:26:109 - add note for loud cimbal sounds, then add move 01:26:553 (86553|3) - to |2| for balance
Alexey's Hard

OD : 8
HP : 7
  1. 00:13:887 - add note for low small bass like 00:14:331 (14331|2) -
  2. 00:14:998 (14998|0,15220|0) - it will be nice if you avoid jack here, also here :
    00:26:553 (26553|0,26775|0) -
    00:29:220 (29220|0,29442|0) -
    00:30:331 (30331|2,30553|2) - add etc xD
  3. 00:39:220 (39220|2,39442|2,39664|2,39887|2) - dat anchor, rearrange please
  4. 00:48:109 (48109|3) - why chord was here, remove
  5. 00:56:998 (56998|2,56998|3,57664|2) - pattern look awkward, imo swap collum or 00:56:664 (56664|3,56775|2) - Ctrl + G, and shorten any LN here 00:56:998 - to 00:57:220 -
  6. 00:57:887 (57887|1) - make it shield pattern if you already applied suggest above
  7. 01:12:109 (72109|2,72331|1) - Ctrl + G for hand balance
  8. 01:21:220 (81220|0) - move to |3| for pattern balance

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating
80

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Topic Starter
AnatOWJIya

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi AnatOWJIya

Mod Via Exclusive PM Request

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. Suggest Kiai end here 01:26:109 -
  2. Check Hitsounds : Normal & Hard diff
Easy

OD : 7
HP : 6
  1. 00:11:887 (11887|1) - remove for consistency snare sounds
  2. 00:13:220 - add note? as cimbal sounds, check consistency 00:14:998 -
  3. 00:17:664 (17664|1) - move to |4| for pattern balance
  4. 00:21:887 (21887|2) - inconsistent rhytim, i think you only focus beat here, same reason like :
    00:35:664 (35664|1,36109|3) -
  5. 00:27:664 (27664|0) - ?? if you followed long synth, should start here 00:27:887 -
  6. 00:53:664 - you missed note here
  7. 00:57:220 (57220|1) - remove here, then add note here 00:57:664 - as Kiai part.. it more interesting you know
  8. 01:01:220 - why?? are you followed small long bass? if yess.. you must add note on main white tick, if not : remove.. it really low pitch. also :
    01:04:775 -
    01:15:442 -
    01:18:998 -
  9. 01:11:887 (71887|0) - move to |3| for hand balance
  10. 01:26:109 - add note for cimbal sounds
  11. 01:28:553 (88553|3) - it more suitable for long synth if you change this pattern into LN, then remove note here 01:28:775 (88775|1) -
Normal

OD : 7
HP : 7
  1. 00:06:775 (6775|0) - shorten LN to 00:07:220 - if you not followed vocal
  2. 00:14:775 (14775|3) - move to 00:14:664 - if you want following snare
  3. 01:09:664 (69664|0,69887|0) - it will be nice if you avoid jack here
  4. 01:18:775 (78775|3) - move to |3| for variety pattern
  5. 01:26:109 - add note for loud cimbal sounds, then add move 01:26:553 (86553|3) - to |2| for balance

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating
80

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Спасибо за мод,Верный 0w0
I accepted everything except 1st suggestion in Normal
Waiting till AJIekceu mod him part
AJIekceu
Thank you, Верный, all accepted except suggestions with avoiding jacks, because it's my style :D
If other modders will suggest this too then I will probably remove them.

Принимай, Толя - http://puu.sh/mJUba/64b05ce623.osu
Aste-
MOD here

General-

No serious problem found

Mod-

Column = 1-2-3-4

[Easy]

about the HP and OD, after i look at it.. the pattern in this diff isn't dense enough to get HP 6. change it to 7 instead

00:18:553 (18553|2,18553|1) - i don't see any reason to put dual here, since at the earlier part you use dual for Crash sound. how about reduce 1 note? or you want to map the hard beat? then you should add more here too 00:11:442 - 00:25:664 - 00:29:220 - 00:39:887 - and the other that similar to this. you can check it yourself

00:22:109 (22109|1,22553|2,22553|0) - this too. i dont see any reason you put dual here 00:22:553 - when the actual Hardbeat are over here 00:22:109 - , plus i dont hear any crash sound or cymbal sound around this part, please re-consider it once more

00:41:220 (41220|3,41442|1,41664|0,41887|2,42109|3,42331|0,42553|1,42775|2,42998|3) - tbh.. this is too confusing for beginner to play. how about following the Kick and snare only? here's the one that i mean 00:41:220 (41220|3,41442|1,41887|2,42109|3,42553|1,42775|2,42998|3) - , reason.. easy to follow it by hearing the most audible sound in this part

[normal]

00:03:220 (3220|0) - please hear it again and reconsider the LN Lenght. i hear it end here 00:03:664 -

00:06:775 (6775|0) - this one too

00:18:998 (18998|3) - i see that you following the snare plus kick for dual. but why you leave this one with single note and use dual here? 00:19:442 (19442|3,19442|0) - please re consider it and hear it again.. because the same mistake are repeated until 00:27:442 (27442|3,27442|2) -

00:42:775 (42775|2,42775|0,42998|1) - the snare are here 00:42:998 - please re consider and use dual here 00:42:998 - instead using it here 00:42:775 - if you are still using dual for snare and kick

00:53:664 - no dual? it doesn't really affect the map since if you put 1 more note here 00:53:664 - on column 4, the flow and the transition are synced with 00:54:109 - , i cant describe it properly and i hope you get the point, i leave it to your decision

01:26:109 (86109|0) - why not dual like you do here 01:26:109 (86109|0) - ?

[Alexey's Hard]

00:02:775 (2775|3) - how about move it to 2 or re arrange this part to make 1 hand focus only for LN and the other hand Focus on the Note, well... more or less like this one 00:06:109 (6109|0,6331|2,6553|3) -

00:17:553 (17553|1,17664|2) - i gues it's a bit hard for HARD diff to execute this kind of pattern... how about move this 00:17:442 (17442|3) - to 2, 00:17:553 (17553|1) - this to 3, 00:17:664 (17664|2) - and this to 4, to make it easier to read and avoiding jack with this 00:17:887 (17887|1) -

00:18:331 (18331|3,18442|2) - doesn't look very nice and a bit hard to execute this kind of pattern. how about

Swap column this 00:18:331 (18331|3,18442|2) - (easy way)

00:18:331 (18331|3) - Move this to 3, 00:18:442 (18442|2) - move this to 2, 00:18:553 (18553|1) - this to 4 (harder way but better and still avoiding un-necessary jack)

00:18:331 (18331|3,18442|2) - move it 2 colum to left, 00:18:220 (18220|1) - move this to 4, 00:18:553 (18553|0) - move this to 4 (a bit hard to read but easy to execute)

your desicion~

00:27:998 (27998|2) - ghost note here

00:28:442 (28442|0) - this too

00:32:220 (32220|1,32331|2) - this one should be 1/8 thou but up to you~

00:35:553 (35553|1) - Ghost note

00:37:331 - Missing note here

00:39:220 (39220|2,39331|1,39442|2,39442|0) - this should be 1/8 thou

i guess that's it




Done~
Topic Starter
AnatOWJIya

Aste- wrote:

MOD here

General-

No serious problem found

Mod-

Column = 1-2-3-4

[Easy]

about the HP and OD, after i look at it.. the pattern in this diff isn't dense enough to get HP 6. change it to 7 instead

00:18:553 (18553|2,18553|1) - i don't see any reason to put dual here, since at the earlier part you use dual for Crash sound. how about reduce 1 note? or you want to map the hard beat? then you should add more here too 00:11:442 - 00:25:664 - 00:29:220 - 00:39:887 - and the other that similar to this. you can check it yourself

00:22:109 (22109|1,22553|2,22553|0) - this too. i dont see any reason you put dual here 00:22:553 - when the actual Hardbeat are over here 00:22:109 - , plus i dont hear any crash sound or cymbal sound around this part, please re-consider it once more

00:41:220 (41220|3,41442|1,41664|0,41887|2,42109|3,42331|0,42553|1,42775|2,42998|3) - tbh.. this is too confusing for beginner to play. how about following the Kick and snare only? here's the one that i mean 00:41:220 (41220|3,41442|1,41887|2,42109|3,42553|1,42775|2,42998|3) - , reason.. easy to follow it by hearing the most audible sound in this part

[normal]

00:03:220 (3220|0) - please hear it again and reconsider the LN Lenght. i hear it end here 00:03:664 -

00:06:775 (6775|0) - this one too

00:18:998 (18998|3) - i see that you following the snare plus kick for dual. but why you leave this one with single note and use dual here? 00:19:442 (19442|3,19442|0) - please re consider it and hear it again.. because the same mistake are repeated until 00:27:442 (27442|3,27442|2) -

00:42:775 (42775|2,42775|0,42998|1) - the snare are here 00:42:998 - please re consider and use dual here 00:42:998 - instead using it here 00:42:775 - if you are still using dual for snare and kick

00:53:664 - no dual? it doesn't really affect the map since if you put 1 more note here 00:53:664 - on column 4, the flow and the transition are synced with 00:54:109 - , i cant describe it properly and i hope you get the point, i leave it to your decision

01:26:109 (86109|0) - why not dual like you do here 01:26:109 (86109|0) - ?

i guess that's it

Done~
Thanks for mod,all accepted
AJIekceu

Aste- wrote:

MOD here

General-

No serious problem found

Mod-

Column = 1-2-3-4

[Alexey's Hard]

00:02:775 (2775|3) - how about move it to 2 or re arrange this part to make 1 hand focus only for LN and the other hand Focus on the Note, well... more or less like this one 00:06:109 (6109|0,6331|2,6553|3) -

00:17:553 (17553|1,17664|2) - i gues it's a bit hard for HARD diff to execute this kind of pattern... how about move this 00:17:442 (17442|3) - to 2, 00:17:553 (17553|1) - this to 3, 00:17:664 (17664|2) - and this to 4, to make it easier to read and avoiding jack with this 00:17:887 (17887|1) -

00:18:331 (18331|3,18442|2) - doesn't look very nice and a bit hard to execute this kind of pattern. how about

Swap column this 00:18:331 (18331|3,18442|2) - (easy way)

00:18:331 (18331|3) - Move this to 3, 00:18:442 (18442|2) - move this to 2, 00:18:553 (18553|1) - this to 4 (harder way but better and still avoiding un-necessary jack)

00:18:331 (18331|3,18442|2) - move it 2 colum to left, 00:18:220 (18220|1) - move this to 4, 00:18:553 (18553|0) - move this to 4 (a bit hard to read but easy to execute)

your desicion~

00:27:998 (27998|2) - ghost note here

00:28:442 (28442|0) - this too

00:32:220 (32220|1,32331|2) - this one should be 1/8 thou but up to you~

00:35:553 (35553|1) - Ghost note

00:37:331 - Missing note here

00:39:220 (39220|2,39331|1,39442|2,39442|0) - this should be 1/8 thou

i guess that's it




Done~
All accepted. But.. ghost notes are not ghost.
Thank you~

Тык сюда
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