1. Kaleidoscope (5.73 stars, 1161 notes)

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

说好的骗KD摸
[General]
我觉得combo color新增一个黄色会比较好
[Nanairo]
开头到00:03:158 纯钢琴建议用默认SC音效
00:56:068 (1,2,3,4) - 组成平行四边形 現在挺好 不改
01:21:568 (4) - 这个短滑条似乎没什么必要 换成circle并且距离拉大
中间其实完全可以不要break嘛
02:08:613 到 02:18:431 感觉可以在空的地方插入一些2/3折返 再慢一点X0.7可能更合适
02:31:522 (1) - 左边的红锚点还是退回白的吧？然后02:31:931 (2) 的尾跟它blanket一下 原本的我覺得挺美的
03:14:477 (4) - 避开03:14:204 (2) like this 有點overlap的感覺挺好的
http://puu.sh/dCfPg/cc94805d18.jpg
04:03:022 (1,2) - 平行？

Syameimaru-Aya wrote:

应约来mod

[Nanairo]

总觉得音效只有咚咚咚有点让人郁闷啊，虽然歌也基本上很平静，不过打起来就是手拼命戳但耳朵只有咚---咚---咚的声音。
我认为可以全程改成N啊


00:13:386 (2,3) –这里改成单点+滑条不会更带感吗，把滑条尾放在鼓声上有点闷. 我就是因為這個覺得帶感才做的

SPOILER

00:57:295 –这里空着有点不爽，加个note上去怎么样0 0？ 不了 有點怪

SPOILER

01:03:431 (3) –放到01:02:886 (3) –左边，x:12 y:216这种感觉怎么样 我想做個半梯形的感覺
01:27:977 (1) –改成这样怎么样 現在還好

SPOILER

02:18:431 (2) –我觉得这里可以选择只要一个note在大白线上啊，后面的02:20:613 (1) –和这个也是一个造型的.
02:35:886 (1) –包好点比较帅吗?www
02:43:931 (3) –放在和02:42:840 (3,6) –组成三角形的地方可能会好看点吗 playing 不改
03:40:795 (3) –把上面那个03:39:704 (6) –复制下来换成直的怎么样 我想03:40:249 (1,3) - 成為獨立一組梗
03:48:022 (4) –补个note如何

SPOILER

04:27:568 (2) –这个滑条摆放总感觉和一直以来的帅帅的风格有点违和啊 還好吧
04:30:431 (1) –可以试着摆到那个5的上面，不过这好像不太有所谓.. 太遠了
04:31:522 (1) –包一下3吗
04:33:704 (1,2,3) –不会坑人吗…… 沒辦法了 背景是1/3
04:34:795 (1) –中间的描点再往右一格吧，这太直了
04:55:795 (2) –这不弯一下吗
00:39:431 (2) –这个滑条也可以不这么斜吧，这么帅帅的图有种毁于一丝的感觉0 0 還好

到后面已经不知道自己在摸什么了…
感觉是一鼓作气做完的,所以细节以外摸不出啥东西 没仔细看节奏,或许有点拼命下单点没太在想节奏怎么下,所以节奏有点乱来的感觉.
实在是不会mod。抱歉

不过,
好棒的图啊,给了kd后我立马射星回给你

Crystal wrote:

Hi! mod via forum pm~

[Info]

1. Red: Unrankable Issues
2. Bold: Highly recommended
3. Black: Personal Suggestions

[General]

1. I'm not sure if "Vocaloid 3" can be written in "Source", maybe you should make sure if it is okay.
2. Nice song~ *.*

[Nanairo]

1. 00:09:568 (4) - ctrl+G this slider, the flow might be smoother.
2. 01:08:204 (4,1) - nazi but, not blanket well
3. 01:15:704 (1,2,3,4) - Why not use 2 sliders instead? Players usually get tired because of the circles before, sliders can give a break and can emphasize the downbeat at 01:16:249 (1) as well. To be honest, keeping circle doesn't do the good as i mentioned though you use the anti-jump.
4. 02:16:522 (2) - If I were you, I prefer to make this slider slower, because the sliders behind are slow but the rhythm behind seems opposite.
5. 02:56:613 (1) - How about this?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 03:02:068 (1,2) - ctrl+G each?
7. 03:35:886 (1) - 200|100 might be better to make a movement between the 2 drum sounds. 原地比較爽
8. 04:26:477 (4) - nazi again, not stack well

omg太神了
take a star

EDIT: 500th post!

1. countdown和letterbox during break感觉可以去掉
2. hp6会不会低了啊 可以适当加到6.5?

1. 00:03:295 (2) - 没啥特别的音感觉用三点滑条就ok啊 还美观点
2. 00:13:386 (2) - 考虑拆成两个圈?重音在滑条尾上感觉有点不舒服=.=
3. 00:25:386 - 这里好像有个音 不加个圈吗
4. 00:38:340 (3) - ctrl+g试试感觉flow会好点?
5. 00:47:545 - 这里换成soft additions或者用绿线减音试试?感觉这里一声有点奇怪
6. 01:22:522 (4) - 这里也感觉用滑条不太好 拆开让中间空一拍会更有感觉?
7. 02:03:704 (3) - 试试ctrl+g?
8. 02:06:431 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个滑条虽然看着好看但是把二分拍的音都漏完了...我觉得这里拆开可能会好点?
9. 02:08:613 - 话说这里不跟下琴音嘛o.o
10. 02:17:204 - 这里也有声鼓 考虑加个圈?
11. 02:26:477 (2) - 考虑把这个折返拆开去map?02:26:613 - 这声在折返箭头上感觉不太好
12. 02:35:886 (1) - 弄一下blanket?
13. 03:17:340 - 这里也是感觉重音在滑条尾上不太好 考虑拆开?
14. 03:27:704 (3) - 这里中间有声吉他音不加个红描点嘛
15. 03:32:613 (1) - 尾点在外面好像算出界
16. 04:17:340 - 升调了不加点sv几把一下吗.-.
17. 04:35:886 (1,2,3) - 试试这样? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2784069

ZZHBOY wrote:

qwq
[General]

1. countdown和letterbox during break感觉可以去掉 去了前者
2. hp6会不会低了啊 可以适当加到6.5? 加到7

[Nanairo]

1. 00:03:295 (2) - 没啥特别的音感觉用三点滑条就ok啊 还美观点 這個挺好 想搞搞花樣
2. 00:13:386 (2) - 考虑拆成两个圈?重音在滑条尾上感觉有点不舒服=.= keep
3. 00:25:386 - 这里好像有个音 不加个圈吗 不加了 這裡全程都不打算跟的
4. 00:38:340 (3) - ctrl+g试试感觉flow会好点? 好
5. 00:47:545 - 这里换成soft additions或者用绿线减音试试?感觉这里一声有点奇怪 20%
6. 01:22:522 (4) - 这里也感觉用滑条不太好 拆开让中间空一拍会更有感觉? 不了
7. 02:03:704 (3) - 试试ctrl+g? 好
8. 02:06:431 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个滑条虽然看着好看但是把二分拍的音都漏完了...我觉得这里拆开可能会好点? 想放鬆一下
9. 02:08:613 - 话说这里不跟下琴音嘛o.o 不跟
10. 02:17:204 - 这里也有声鼓 考虑加个圈? 也不跟
11. 02:26:477 (2) - 考虑把这个折返拆开去map?02:26:613 - 这声在折返箭头上感觉不太好 好
12. 02:35:886 (1) - 弄一下blanket? 好
13. 03:17:340 - 这里也是感觉重音在滑条尾上不太好 考虑拆开? 基本都不改
14. 03:27:704 (3) - 这里中间有声吉他音不加个红描点嘛 直滑條感覺比較好
15. 03:32:613 (1) - 尾点在外面好像算出界 臣了
16. 04:17:340 - 升调了不加点sv几把一下吗.-. 不加了
17. 04:35:886 (1,2,3) - 试试这样? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2784069 用了自己方法改

美丽 好像歌还挺好听

alacat wrote:

As request about metadata.

I couldn't find the source of this song from official website. OhkaP didn't write ;_;　

Discography : http://ohka666.com/04cd.html

Then, i checked the CD information. So i could get the source about artist of this song "OhkaP feat. V3 GUMI (Power)".

The matadata is fine in my eyes anyway :3/ Also don't forget to add an album name in tags "Artemis Heart"

Good luck ~

ts8zs wrote:

00:03:295 (2) - change to a 1/2 slider+circle fits more imo this rhythm is ok now
00:09:158 (3) - blanket
00:51:568 (3) - how about move to 80,364 np
00:56:068 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2864000 ^
01:27:431 (3) - 172 276 changed on my way
01:41:749 (3) - 0 136 np
01:45:022 (4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2864017 ^
02:44:613 (1,2) - auto stack makes this a little messy fixed
03:02:613 (1,2,3,4) - a little hard compare to before parttens don't want to change this
04:33:977 (2,3) - ^ fixed
03:08:613 (1) - out off screen fixed

smallboat wrote:

[Nanairo] 220的BPM用高一點OD加到8.5 or 9試試? (APP時間這麼長用OD8好像pp太少) od9
00:05:204 (5) - HP bar touched. 已經定了很難改ORZ
00:37:931 (5,1,2) - Also can consider to keep the same DS? i try
01:08:613 (1,2,3,4) - (1) rhythm looks weird to me,cuz 01:09:158 this the first vocal,place the slider end seems not play so cool,suggest change this : keep this

SPOILER

(Just like 02:38:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6))

01:39:158 (1) - Follow vocal?

SPOILER

^
02:19:795 (4) - Also can add note (But seems you follow music here) ^
02:29:749 (3) - Same as 01:08:613 reason : ^

SPOILER

02:38:613 (3) - NC? i think didn't need nc
03:08:613 (1) - 出界 fixed
04:33:977 (2,3) - Also it can move up a bit,cuz it is 1/4 distance. changed pattern
04:39:977 (5) - Move up a bit avoid off-screen better fixed

Kagamine Ren wrote:

123
不会摸高难度的图，而且看你mod够了，我就水一点吧
00:20:340 (4) - 往右一点，让00:20:340 (4,5,1) - 距离一样，看起来好看
00:20:749 (2) - 这个也可以往右下一点，因为00:20:477 (5,1,2) -所以 00:20:613 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个可以菱形。

SPOILER

00:56:340 (3,4) - ctrl G ，这里人声适合放跳，所以00:56:204 (2,3) - 感觉违和 改了改這裡的跳
01:09:431 (3,4) - 同理，ctrl+G 然后后面的5可以放左边，这样就很爽

SPOILER

01:39:158 (1,2) - 分别ctrl+G，这样01:38:886 (3,1) - 和01:39:568 (2,3) - 都会更舒服
04:25:795 (4,4) - 这个要overlap就多一点吧，看起来跟没stack好一样
05:03:158 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 全加whistle试试(
唔，好水的摸

-Tochi wrote:

M4M from your queue

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  General

1. Fine i quess.

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  Nanairo

1. 00:09:568 (4) - Ctrl + G for better flow? Style, keep
2. 00:12:295 (2,2) - A bit hard t o read. Maybe stack 00:12:704 (2) - on 00:12:158 (1) - and move 00:12:840 (3) - to x:212 y:168 like: fixed
   
   Image

   
3. 00:38:749 (2) - Move to x:328 y:272? keep
4. 01:03:431 (3) - Hmm, i would move this to x:168 y:248 for better flow. keep
5. 01:39:158 (1) - Ctrl + G, same with 01:39:568 (2) - i think it's very good now
6. 02:19:795 - Add note here? It feels empty with nothing here imo. i don't want add any note here
7. 04:25:795 (4,4) - Stack properly. done

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  Feedback

  
  Wow, nice map! O.O
  Good luck~

Owntrolf wrote:

00:09:022 (2,3) - Better blanket the end its a little bit off ok
00:13:386 (2) - Maybe move to white tick and add a circle where it used to start nope, i like this rhythm
00:17:886 (1,2) - Not sure if this overlap is fine it's fine
00:33:704 (3) - Maybe rotate a little bit counterclockwise to make it look better kjeep
00:56:613 (1,2) - Maybe remove repeat and put a 1/2 slider then 2 circles like this nope, style

SPOILER

00:58:795 (1,2,3) - I dont think a triplet fits here changed
01:00:158 (2,3) - slider first then circle? follow vocal
01:10:795 (1) - Maybe replace with 1/2 or 1/1 slider to so theres no weird pause? np
==01:32:545 - 01:33:090 - Its probably possible to put circles here and make the whole thing a stream instead of 2 triplets in a row with a stream changed
02:17:340 (1,2) - Better blanket? k
02:33:568 (1,3) - ^ k
03:10:249 (3,1) - Maybe shorten 3 to 1/2 and put 2 circle then another 1/2 slider np
04:24:840 (1,2) - Better blanket? k

ZZHBOY wrote:

zzh呢
[Nanairo]
00:02:068 - 别20% 调大点 音乐本来就有琴音
00:05:204 (5) - 稍微往下移点我这里看碰血条了
01:29:613 (3,4) - 这里flow好差啊要不要移一下啊
02:16:658 - 这里有个音建议不要漏把它map上建议这里换成一个1/2滑条加一个1/1滑条
03:38:477 (2,3) - 这两个感觉有点近 要不要移远点啊
03:47:613 (3,1) - ^ 看着像空1/2拍....
改完喊我...

Mei wrote:

哭哭，笔电才修好就发现有人抢人头

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

不怕 來點心就好

neonat wrote:

General

According to the album cover shown in the crossfade and here the Artist for the album is just 桜華 (Ohka) without the 'P' Looking around the website, he doesn't seem to use the 'P' either anyway

SPOILER

You can add OhkaP to the tags though

Add Megpoid to tags as well

I will discuss with QAT

Nanairo

01:03:158 (1,2) - having a jump here feels weird, because it doesn't feel like a place for a jump 01:03:158 (1,2) - 01:03:431 (3,4) - is two individual here
01:51:158 (5) - NC, like how you do it for parts like 00:21:158 (1) no fix, i do nc in 00:21:158 (1) - because 00:20:613 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern, and 00:21:158 (1) - isn't one of pattern
03:48:158 (2,3) - swap positions, circle before slider. Having the slider start at 03:48:295 - you allow the slider to emphasize on the held vocal, which feels better i feel now is better
03:55:522 (5) - NC like 01:51:158 (5) same

Loctav wrote:

Hello!

unfortunately, we have to disqualify this set, as its quality is not meeting our expectations for letting this into the Ranked section, yet. Please consider the points below as reason for the disqualification:

[Naniro]

Generally spoken, the difficulty you created here is appropriate for the song you chose. So it's not too difficult or anything. Anyways, the concept you pulled for the creation of this beatmap has been considered as good, but not properly realized. We liked your ideas, but wished them to be more properly executed. Especially some of your patterns were a bit unthoughtfully designed, as they appeared to have run of of space in the playfield. Try to create a more logical and predictable patterning, that allows certain parts to be recognizeable and returning at similiar music samples. If you create a pattern, make sure that the spacing concept (increase, decrease, increase) is even and not fluctuating as massive as it does in certain patterns. You were able to create consistency within your creative patterns, but were unable to realize that at every point in a reliable and proper fashion. Therefore, we consider this difficulty to be not polished enough and in need of further improvement and revision. Moreover, make sure to recheck, if the movements casted by your patterns cause the correct cursor movement and flow. This was not always completely given. As this difficulty maintains a higher challenge, the design of it must be proper and tidy.
Examples for the above criticism:
00:38:749 (2,3,4) -
00:59:613 (7,1) -
01:03:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - not fix
01:13:522 (1,2,3,4) -
01:29:477 (2,3,4) -
04:01:386 (2,3,4,5,6) - not fix
04:03:704 (3,4,5,6) - not fix

00:58:795 (1,2,3) - we saw no evidence for this triplet.

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Please make sure to adjust your mapset accordingly to the above provided reason. Keep in mind that we are filing general criticism and improvement advises, so the above reason applies to more than just the provided examples. Whenever your mapset received further revision and improvement, the Beatmap Nominators will furtherly take care of that mapset.

We are sorry for the very late disqualification here and apologize for the inconveniences this causes to you.

Okoratu wrote:

i think i owe you a mod on this from like 8 or even more months ago im posting this here as a reminder

Rizia wrote:

Okoratu wrote:

i think i owe you a mod on this from like 8 or even more months ago im posting this here as a reminder

maybe i forgot too xd

- Ping - wrote:

are there any hopes ?

neonat wrote:

00:06:431 (1) - add some swanky curves in the slider, cuz you know, sexy.

SPOILER

jk I just think being too straight is just not really nice
00:07:522 (1,2,3) - more balance in spacing? Somewhat like 00:08:068 (4,5,6) in terms of spacing ratio
00:13:386 (2) - ending the slider on the strong beat, I would usually encourage not to
00:27:158 (5,6) - why not follow what you did at 00:26:068 (1,2,3) - you did it for 00:34:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) after all
01:00:568 (4,5,6,1) - shouldn't 01:00:840 (6,1) be the one with the biggest spacing of them all?
01:15:158 (1,2,1,2,3) - continuously reducing the spacing for this part would be a nice effect i think now is already good enough
01:22:522 (4) and 01:27:977 (1) - just some I felt odd since the strong beat is the end of the slider
02:17:340 (1,2) - if you were trying to blanket them even though they don't appear together at any point, it's still not working
02:31:522 (1) - remove finish
02:35:477 (3,1) - is this a blanket
02:46:386 (4,5,1) - 02:46:522 (5,1) should have been bigger than what 02:46:386 (4,5) should be
03:17:068 (3) - like 01:27:977 (1)
03:47:613 (3) - ^
04:22:386 (3,4,1) - same as 02:46:386 (4,5,1)

Look out for the spacing because I feel one of the reasons QAT felt it was unpolished was because the spacing sometimes did not really stress the right beats in the song, and part of that is because some of the rhythm were worked around make nice patterns, and not the other way around. For me, one example would be those sliders that end on the big white line which start new phrases in the song, I felt that you had them to make nice patterns but then it made the emphasis odd.

neonat wrote:

04:16:249 (1,2,3,4,5) - add some claps here

have you asked other people to take a look too?

1. I found an unused file :
   
   1. konachan.com - 149829 butterfly flowers gumi headphones seifuku vient vocaloid.png

1. 00:06:431 (1) - Are you sure that you don't need large movement through this slider? It would make nice emphasis to have it with a jump . Another reason : Compared to the others, this one should have it too in my opinion
2. 00:12:295 (2) - SV changes applied here, so you need to make it has new combo
3. 00:12:568 (1) - Don't you think this circle is too short from previous slider? I feel weird to move just a little movement to this circle . Move it around 204|296 feels more intuitive to follow
4. 00:15:704 (3) - Oopps, forgot to new combo
5. 00:18:295 (2) - Hmm, for me, I don't think such SV fits in this slider currently . Please turn it to 1.00x
6. 00:18:295 (2,3) - Switching rhythm on them would make it plays more better than before, because you get the strong point of downbeat within this suggested rhythm
7. 00:56:613 (1) - The movement to this slider is rather short to have a nice emphasis for me . Move it to 132|200 will make it perfect, since it will be more intuitive to follow then before, and the spacing issue get fixed
8. 00:57:431 (2) - I thought this slider is a 1/2 jump
9. 01:33:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - They sounded overmapped in my opinion . Have it with regular 1/2 rhythm will fits nice more than those 1/4 I think . Or, if you want to keep those 1/4, consider to make it same with 03:02:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - , kick slider jumps
10. 02:26:068 (1) - 368|148 please >< I feel weird to move my cursor to the current position, compared to previous spacing which higher than this slider, which this slider should have it too
11. 03:21:977 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Give me reason why you using this intentional reduced spacing . I can't really tolerate it if there's no proper reason behind their existence

Ipas wrote:

Oh man this song is nice

[General]

1. I found an unused file :
   
   1. konachan.com - 149829 butterfly flowers gumi headphones seifuku vient vocaloid.png

[Kaleidoscope]

1. 00:06:431 (1) - Are you sure that you don't need large movement through this slider? It would make nice emphasis to have it with a jump . Another reason : Compared to the others, this one should have it too in my opinion yes
2. 00:12:295 (2) - SV changes applied here, so you need to make it has new combo
3. 00:12:568 (1) - Don't you think this circle is too short from previous slider? I feel weird to move just a little movement to this circle . Move it around 204|296 feels more intuitive to follow i don't think so, also i think it's fit here too
4. 00:15:704 (3) - Oopps, forgot to new combo
5. 00:18:295 (2) - Hmm, for me, I don't think such SV fits in this slider currently . Please turn it to 1.00x
6. 00:18:295 (2,3) - Switching rhythm on them would make it plays more better than before, because you get the strong point of downbeat within this suggested rhythm 00:18:704 - 00:18:977 - 00:19:249 - i want follow this three white line
7. 00:56:613 (1) - The movement to this slider is rather short to have a nice emphasis for me . Move it to 132|200 will make it perfect, since it will be more intuitive to follow then before, and the spacing issue get fixed
8. 00:57:431 (2) - I thought this slider is a 1/2 jump
9. 01:33:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - They sounded overmapped in my opinion . Have it with regular 1/2 rhythm will fits nice more than those 1/4 I think . Or, if you want to keep those 1/4, consider to make it same with 03:02:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - , kick slider jumps
10. 02:26:068 (1) - 368|148 please >< I feel weird to move my cursor to the current position, compared to previous spacing which higher than this slider, which this slider should have it too
11. 03:21:977 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Give me reason why you using this intentional reduced spacing . I can't really tolerate it if there's no proper reason behind their existence because it's first feel when i hear this part, i mapped it and i think decreasing ds is good for there, so i did it

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This is awesome ><
Call me again for a recheck!