1. Unseen Darkness (8.25 stars, 1880 notes)

luxoDeh wrote:

Random Timing check.

I don't think you need all these timing points.
I just setted the BPM to 170,00
and offest to 338
it seems good this way

baraatje123 wrote:

Ok, thank you, but can I keep the 680 BPM, or set those to 170 as well.

SPOILER

1. That new background is way better than what you had before, haha.
2. Why is the skin so nice and HD but the pause/fail screen so non-HD? Please find better images. ;_;
3. Disable widescreen support because there is no storyboard.
4. The song in osu starts too early so you must add AudioLeadIn time for it to be considered rankable. The recommended time is 1500, but may be changed to suit your preference. This may also fix the Countdown Time not showing in certain instances.

1. 00:13:035 (1,1) - You should totally stack circle 1 behind the previous slider start.
2. 00:35:624 (1,3,5,6) - Make these sliders stack properly. Right now you're a few units off.
3. 00:41:271 (1,2) - I would personally avoid such pattern as it looks a bit weird when played IMO. Here's an idea using your next slider as a base.
   
   
   ~
4. 00:42:329 (4,5) - Try curving these sliders since you already did a similar pattern before.
5. 00:46:918 (1,3,5,6) - The copy-paste is real. Same as 00:35:624 (1,3,5,6) -. Also consider using different slider art to help spice things up.
6. 01:09:329 (8,3) - Align these objects properly.
7. 01:17:623 (5) - Move this to x:26 y:32.
8. 01:23:093 (1,2,3) - x:486 y:32.
9. 02:03:682 (4,5,6,7) - The jump here and similar patterns are a bit too much IMO. Consider reducing the DS or trying a new pattern completely.
10. 02:14:446 (1,1,1,1) - Just personal preference but I believe straight sliders like this look a bit ugly. Consider some sexy slider art instead. Example below.
    
    
    ~
11. 03:24:858 (1) - What part of the music is this slider following?
12. 03:25:034 (1,2,3,4,1,1) - Diversify the sliders here, please.
13. 04:01:739 (1,3) - Try curving these sliders to blanket the Circle 2 and to increase visual appeal.
14. 04:06:857 (6,7,8) - x:295 y:256
15. 04:15:857 (1,1,1,1) - Do not overlap these objects like this. It's incredibly hard to play (surprisingly) and shouldn't be the case for the calm part of the song. Consider following the cues from your previous patterns instead.
16. 04:33:327 (4,5,6,7) - Same as 02:03:682 (4,5,6,7) - and all similar patterns.
17. 05:20:798 - Combo breaker! O:

Project Railgun wrote:

Hi from your queue, testing http://waa.ai/4RXK

[General]

1. That new background is way better than what you had before, haha.
2. Why is the skin so nice and HD but the pause/fail screen so non-HD? Please find better images. ;_; (It's not my skin, so I can't really change it)
3. Disable widescreen support because there is no storyboard. Ok, Fixed
4. The song in osu starts too early so you must add AudioLeadIn time for it to be considered rankable. The recommended time is 1500, but may be changed to suit your preference. This may also fix the Countdown Time not showing in certain instances.

[Yandere 2 Yandere]

1. 00:13:035 (1,1) - You should totally stack circle 1 behind the previous slider start. Ok, Fixed
2. 00:35:624 (1,3,5,6) - Make these sliders stack properly. Right now you're a few units off. Ok, Fixed
3. 00:41:271 (1,2) - I would personally avoid such pattern as it looks a bit weird when played IMO. Here's an idea using your next slider as a base.
   00:41:976 (2) -
   
   ~
4. 00:42:329 (4,5) - Try curving these sliders since you already did a similar pattern before. Ok, Fixed
   
5. 00:46:918 (1,3,5,6) - The copy-paste is real. Same as 00:35:624 (1,3,5,6) -. Also consider using different slider art to help spice things up. Ok, Fixed
6. 01:09:329 (8,3) - Align these objects properly. Ok, Fixed
7. 01:17:623 (5) - Move this to x:26 y:32. Ok, Fixed
8. 01:23:093 (1,2,3) - x:486 y:32. Ok, Fixed
9. 02:03:682 (4,5,6,7) - The jump here and similar patterns are a bit too much IMO. Consider reducing the DS or trying a new pattern completely. I prefer it this way, no change
10. 02:14:446 (1,1,1,1) - Just personal preference but I believe straight sliders like this look a bit ugly. Consider some sexy slider art instead. Example below.
    
    
    ~
    I prefer it this way, no change
11. 03:24:858 (1) - What part of the music is this slider following? Ok, Fixed, made it start at blue tick, as that is where is starts
12. 03:25:034 (1,2,3,4,1,1) - Diversify the sliders here, please. Sorry, music is complete same, I don't feel a need for this, no change
13. 04:01:739 (1,3) - Try curving these sliders to blanket the Circle 2 and to increase visual appeal. I want to keep DS steady at this part, so no change
14. 04:06:857 (6,7,8) - x:295 y:256 Ok, Fixed
15. 04:15:857 (1,1,1,1) - Do not overlap these objects like this. It's incredibly hard to play (surprisingly) and shouldn't be the case for the calm part of the song. Consider following the cues from your previous patterns instead. I actually like this, so no change
16. 04:33:327 (4,5,6,7) - Same as 02:03:682 (4,5,6,7) - and all similar patterns. No change
17. 05:20:798 - Combo breaker! O: Lolwut?

Good luck.

-Tochi wrote:

Hi o/

[General]

Nice map, good work.

Thanks!
[Yandere 2 Yandere]

This slider doesn't look good 01:00:329 (6) - try to fix it so it looks better like 01:15:152 (1) - Can't really change due to SV, so no change
New Combo 03:31:386 (9) - Fixed
The Kiai time is too early IMO, i think it should start here: 04:29:974 - I prefer this way
04:42:503 (4) - Can be at the end of 04:42:680 (5) - so it's a bit easier to read. It's not for me xD

LordRaika wrote:

Hitsound Mod request from my Modding Queue

Hi there ^^/
Here is my mod as request :

Hitsound Mod

[General]

1. First thing first...., ^^'
   i must say... you dont need this following file in your song folder anyway....
   -drum-hitnormal.wav Okay
   -normal-hitfinish.wav Okay
   and all soft set.... Whole soft set is custom, but not 100% sure. I remember getting these hitsounds from my own skin, and from default skin, so I don't think it needs to. Deleted the Whistle, but not the finish as it sounds really different for me
   hmm... why? because even without drum-hitnormal, a default normal hit of drum set is already sounds like that, same goes to normal-hitfinish and soft one you are using, try to delete them, and listen to your hitsound, i bet it still sounds the same ^^b
2. But... the other reason mapper keep the above hitsound could be... the mapper force the player to use this default hitsound.
   because some player might use skin and custom hitsound along the skin that change the osu's default hitsound, still.... this can be completely useless as well if the player enable "ignore beatmap custom hitsound" XD ahaha....
   anyway, if this is your reason, then you dont have to remove it thou.... the above mentioned hitsound.
3. i bet you ever change the offset.... snapped the note and slider properly but forgot 1 thiing ^^
   the kiai.... is not snapped ... haha, u might want to fix this....
4. the skin is awesome ^^b , hope...... it will pass BAT's strict censorship rule... u knw what i mean XD
   especially those comboburst, yessss its OWOb , but yea XD lets jst hope it will pass the BAT's judgement....

kawaiii "fruit-ryuuta.png" >w<

[Hitsound]

• backup your hitsound... , then directly applied my mod... by replacing your hitsound and see if u like it or not....
  also, if u delete the hitsound i mention above... then u dont need to replace... just rename it and put in song folder ^^

1. Rename and replace your soft-hitclap.wav
   refresh and check this section 00:55:388 - ^^ This one is good, I like it
   i have another option if you are not satisfy with it since it blends or fits the song too much ? XD then try this one
   Basically almost the same, but louder and more effect especially longer echo. , still does the job and effect...
2. For normal set, try to check F6 and change every N:C1 100% into N:C1 60-75% , yeah XD i guess the hitnormal is way too loud. X_X Fixed (as drum uses the same additions, I also changed that one (also did soft though))
3. Next, i suggest This to replace your previously drum-hitnormal.wav, refresh and check here for the result >>> 00:28:565 - and similar part that use D:C1 timing
   anyway, i tihnk you are missing 00:29:447 (3,3) - to add CLap here.... the beat of the drum-hitclap LOVE THIS ONE
4. Another awesome effect by simply changing things..... >>> Rename into soft-hitnormal.wav and Rename this into soft-hitwhistle.wav(this one is optional if u prefer the default whistle sounds like ^^ , but do please try them... and u can clearly hear the differences here : 00:55:388 - on this sectionAdded both

Yep, i think that's pretty much cover everything else ^^
but please do ask me if u want some hitsound and what kind of sound you that want to use....
i dont go for the modding of checking missing hitsound in detail but i do know this is well made ( the hitsound for each section and timing ) ^^b

Nice vocaloid song, nice slider, btw that 1/4 part is so brutal XD still its ^^b
also maybe reduce HD to 5? or 4? missed timed some 1/4 will result instant death before catching the next note XD

Xgor wrote:

Quick skin mod.
[Skin]

Have you asked for permission to use the skin? It's a good idea to do that for skins you haven't made I did :3

The map is waaay over 10MB due to the skin. As there is quite a lot of things that can be removed from the skin that isn't used so that should atleast get it down to around 12MB.

You forgot to set a slider border. Might be a good idea to do that. How?
...

MkGuh wrote:

-Yandere 2 Yandere'

00:36:153 (2,3) - hmmm. Maybe improve the blanket??

00:46:741 (8,1) - ^

01:10:211 (3,4) - ^

01:11:623 (7,8) - ^

01:50:799 (8,9) - ^

01:51:858 (1,1,1,1) - i'm not a big fan of overlaps, so how about you make something like that Overlaps this way are intended and they are fine

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3250166 ; https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3250169

02:27:858 (9) - you don't need to make a nc here, remove the nc.Made all 2/1 NC (instead of 4/1, feels better to me

02:33:152 (8) - ctrl g this?? Nope, this looks better

02:35:975 (8) - ^ ^^

02:37:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i really think that you don't need to do a lot of NC, try something like that

http://puu.sh/inpeE/b4053cf951.jpg

http://puu.sh/inphE/df81df1363.jpg

03:58:916 (1) - add nc


I hope my mod has been helpful for you, i'm a shit mapping You're not, you're actually quite good at mapping

moph wrote:

hiya o/ m4m from your queue

[Yandere 2 Yandere]

1. I'm not so sure about that beginning deathstream, its very long and basically has the same spacing kinda like a stream practice map. Try adding some variety such as increasing the spacing at places such as 00:01:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:05:623 (13,14,15,16) - and decrease the spacing at places such as 00:01:035 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -. Maybe also try some sharp turns in places like 00:01:741 (1) -. You could even replace some parts with some 1/4 sliders. Try going along with the intensity of the music or something. I feel like you could make this intro a lot more interesting to play by changing the game-play a bit here and there
2. 00:16:565 (2) - slider is too fast compared to last slider don't you think? The music isn't really that intense here either. It's a little bit intended
3. 00:37:565 - note here maybe since you did it everywhere else?
4. 01:11:623 (7) - ctrl+g? to match the sliders before? It's the same as this in the other places as well
5. 01:15:770 - 01:16:476 - 01:17:799 - you could map these notes.
6. 01:17:976 (1) - cool slider!
7. 01:31:034 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should keep the spacing the same as 01:30:681 (1,2,3,4) - as the music doesn't get that any more intense, instead add maybe a jump between the two streams? I think this is better
8. 01:32:359 (2,3) - jerky flow from (2) to (3) why not stack? Made something different to increase flow
9. 01:56:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Like what i said before maybe you could increase the spacing here as the music gets more intense? Just to make it more interesting. It is 7 stars after all :3
10. 01:56:798 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you could change the spacing between (4) and (1) to put emphasis on the vocals
11. 02:12:859 (7) - maybe place this further away, to make the spacing consistent with 02:12:153 (5,6) -
12. 02:20:093 (1) - same story here with these streams, try more turns like this 02:24:328 (1) - and stuff. You can make it way more harder considering the rest of your map. You don't have to use crazy spacing like you do later but maybe just a bit more ~
13. 02:37:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - stuff like this is what you should do more in the beginning bits instead of having one long stream!
14. 02:43:387 (3) - ctrl+g? backwards flow from (2) may be a little awkward
15. 02:59:270 (6) - ctrl+g? maybe try a bit of circular flow with these symmetrical sliders
16. 03:06:681 (1,2,3) - any reason why for the inconsistent spacing? better to keep the same imo as could be read wrong
17. 03:17:181 - 03:17:887 - why not map these notes, you mapped it here 03:18:769 (6) -
18. 03:33:857 (5,6,7,8) - same story here like earlier, maybe a jump stream instead of increasing the spacing?
19. 03:35:975 (5,6,7,8) - woah are you meant to tap this :L dat spacing
20. 05:17:974 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - good example of what you should use earlier on

Cool map, hope this was helpful! I know you probably don't want to redo all those streams
Good luck!

Kibbleru wrote:

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diff
00:16:565 (1) - this comes kinda sudden, there isn't enough buildup to this kind of sv especially after 00:13:035 (1) -
00:24:329 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - imo this part could be spaced out more, it looks kind of crowded and i don't see why you shouldn't
01:00:858 (7,1) - you could make a bit of a jump here imo to emphasize the downbeat
01:12:152 (8,9) - again, this comes way too sudden. im pretty sure your 1/2s were spaced like this lol
01:29:270 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest you building up the sv/spacing gradually here instead of just having this huge spike
01:56:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too fast too quickly lol again, try building it up
03:17:093 (2,3) - lol..

not exactly sure what to even say about this lol. i think you're intentionally doing those diff spikes but they're really troll.
Maybe a little