GeneralCustom combo colours would be nice here!
NormalShould tone down the AR a bit, change it to AR 5
00:10:380 (5,6,7,1) - spacing varies from 0.95 all the way to 1.06x, that's literally more than 0.1x spacing difference, keep it more balanced
00:27:893 - add a note, don't leave this beat empty
00:43:461 (1) - keep the flow going, don't change the direction, don't place it in a position it would move fluidly from the previous slider:
00:58:380 (1) - there is no need for a NC here honestly
01:07:461 (4) - use more than just 1 slider here, use sliders, circles, etc. Just don't use a slider with more than 1 repeat, it's not very intuitive, and not recommended in Normal
01:12:002 (3,4,5) - this shape/pattern doesn't look good :\ it looks like 3 different things placed together, not really matching up
01:17:839 (4) - same as 01:07:461 (4)
01:23:029 (6) - ^
01:35:353 - 01:58:056 - lacks hitsounds, add the claps, the finishes, the whistles, the song deserves it.
Still looks very messy/objects looks randomly placed. Hitsounds don't really fill the song enough, it gives not much impact in some places, I think it still has a long way to go to reach it's fullest potential. Work on the rhythm too, especially the parts with the multiple repeat sliders
HardPlease do something about hitsounds
00:21:731 (4,5,6) - the reduce in spacing, then increase in spacing for jump, doesn't make sense, especially when the music tone is gradually decreasing, which is usually associated with
reduction in spacing
00:27:893 (1) - sliders like these are honestly just ugly
00:33:083 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - why is the spacing so random? The spacing changes don't make sense, and 00:35:353 (2,3) is just ridiculous
00:47:677 (6,7,1) - when you have the slider placed like that and facing that direction in relation to the previous one and the one after, it does not flow well at all. Such curved slider aren't really nice as well, with them being so cramped up and squashed up body
01:04:218 (1,1,1,1,1) - unnecessary NC spam
The spacing in Hard makes no sense at all, some of the jumps are ridiculous and uncalled for. Spacing changes too much and often to be nice or useful, placement needs work in order to improvement movement and flow
Overall the slider shapes need change as well, they aren't really nicely shaped, they are irregular and aren't pretty
Good Luck, this map can be much much better than it is right now
