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Rchetype Feat. Wolfgun - Ghosts
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First off, sup Nero 
Your map looks good, but it needs some refining in terms of blankets, usage of streams and so on.
I'll keep updating your Beatmap and I hope you have a lot of success with it. Also, I might help some more later on because I didn't really get a lot done and I'm leaving for now... So I'll be back later.
Here are some suggestions that we discussed in IRC and I hope they're helpful.
Good luck with getting your map attention and eventually getting it ranked!
Your map looks good, but it needs some refining in terms of blankets, usage of streams and so on.
I'll keep updating your Beatmap and I hope you have a lot of success with it. Also, I might help some more later on because I didn't really get a lot done and I'm leaving for now... So I'll be back later.
Here are some suggestions that we discussed in IRC and I hope they're helpful.
Chat Log
06:47 Spicy Salsa: 01:06:179 (2) - This one feels a bit forced, I'd try to rotate it a bit or changing it to a round slider
06:50 Spicy Salsa: 01:07:022 (2,3) - This combination of slider looks a bit weird because of the different shapes and angles. My suggestion would be to change the angle of 01:07:359 (3) - or to change the shape of 01:07:359 (3) - to the shape of the previous one.
06:54 Spicy Salsa: 01:10:224 (2,5) - This doesn't really go, overlaps aren't nice to look at
06:54 Spicy Salsa: Either consider changing it to this http://puu.sh/dkGDK/3436c5e77d.jpg
06:55 Spicy Salsa: I'll be back in 30 mins
06:55 Nerodae: mkay
07:22 Spicy Salsa: Alrighty
07:22 Spicy Salsa: Consider ctrl+G with 01:15:281 (3) -
07:24 Spicy Salsa: There is not really a part in the music that suggests those 01:18:061 (6,7) - so I would consider removing the first one and let the second one stay, but just farther away from the slider's end
07:29 Spicy Salsa: Considering that you always put those 5 hitcircles to form a small stream at the end of 4 measures, I don't feel too good about those 01:59:943 (1,2,3,4,5) -
07:34 Spicy Salsa: Again, a small overlap is there and overlaps really aren't something that should be included, so I've come up with a different shape of slider. You don't have to pick this one, if you don't feel it is good, but I would still consider changing its shape so that the overlap is gone.
07:34 Spicy Salsa: http://puu.sh/dkIQW/6f18b3d05e.jpg
07:35 Nerodae: at what time is that pattern at?
07:35 Spicy Salsa: Right, need to link
07:35 Spicy Salsa: 02:01:460 (9) -
07:36 Spicy Salsa: I have a question - Did you have the intention of matching those slider ends with the next slider's beginning? 02:02:472 (1,2,3,4) -
07:37 Spicy Salsa: If yes, try to get the slider's ends to fit a little better with the beginnings
07:37 Nerodae: ok, and yes, I did
07:38 Spicy Salsa: If you have trouble getting the slider ends to fit, try disabling the grid snap and enable it again after you're done fixing the slider ends
07:38 Nerodae: understood
07:39 Spicy Salsa: Make sure you don't move the sliders again after doing that though
07:39 Spicy Salsa: This slider pattern looks a bit unbalanced 02:04:494 (11) -
07:40 Spicy Salsa: Try this anchor point pattern http://puu.sh/dkJcB/d529cc2b66.jpg
07:41 Spicy Salsa: It leads to create better sliders of this shape
Good luck with getting your map attention and eventually getting it ranked!
Requested
General
Remember to set a preview point
Extra
Kiai times aren't snapped
01:04:157 (2) - NC starts here, it makes more sense at the start of the stream, as well as after a short 2-beat phrase
01:04:747 (9,10) - having them so close to each other and having differing spacing as compared to the stream beforehand doesn't make it look pleasing. At least have around this much spacing, placing it however you want nicely:
01:04:831 (10) - this should be the NC
01:06:179 (2) - ^
01:06:854 (1) - I don't see a need for this NC
01:08:876 (2) - you should have the NCs on beats such as these, and not on the red lines like 01:08:708 (1) - this applies for the whole difficulty
01:09:550 (1) - you don't need another new combo so quickly after the previous one, I see no special reason for you to be doing so. This also applies for the whole difficulty
Will stop commenting on the NC from this point on, everything is relates to the 2 things I pointed up there ^; place the NCs properly on bats that make more sense, on the white lines, starting of the phrases, and using far less NCs and more sensibly.
01:15:618 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - this doesn't flow, and with the music here, it should be more fluid. 01:16:461 (3) should not be facing the same direction of movement as the streams and 01:16:123 (1,2) - flip the slider or something
01:20:337 (2,3) - don't overlap ever so slightly like this, it's quite unsightly
01:21:348 (6) - change the position accordingly with 01:21:348 (6) so it doesn't touch in the above-mentioned, either way, it's not stacked properly now as well
01:29:101 (1,2) - stack nicely, it would look better
01:29:775 (2,3) - not touching would be better
01:32:135 (4,5) - the overlap looks weird
01:36:179 (4,5,6,7,8) - curve it more nicely
01:38:876 (6,9) - at least allow them to look like they sync more well with each other, rather than looking like they were misplaced and suddenly overlapped each other
01:45:618 (7,8,9) - this pattern is rather messy, 01:46:629 (10) is too close as well, make a nicer pattern
01:48:988 (4,5) - don't overlap with each other
01:50:337 (4,6) - spacing be the exact same as 01:50:168 (3,5)
01:56:067 (6,1) - blanket better
01:58:764 (3,5) - don't touch each other
01:59:438 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - this is quite cramped, and it affects ease of movement
01:59:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - generally this kind of movement isn't good for flow, and is quite forced
02:08:708 (7,9) - don't touch each other
02:09:550 (1) - flow from 02:09:213 (10) is bad because it is behind the flow of the previous slider, and is moving in the same direction, the shape isn't really looking good either
02:23:202 (3,4) - don't overlap them
02:25:393 (4,5,6) - not a good pattern, reposition them, 02:25:730 (6) - you can't hide the end of this slider, you can't see the repeat arrow
02:29:438 (2) - unrankable slider, slider ball is held, you can't see where the slider direction is
02:35:842 (2,6) - nt stacked directly on each other
02:42:584 (2,3) - 3/4 sliders sound weird here, just use normal 1/2 sliders
03:00:449 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - the decrease in spacing doesn't match up to the song, I see no big change in the music to allow such a change in spacing. Either way the super sudden decrease in spacing for 03:01:292 (11,12) is ugly as well, it's too drastic
03:19:494 (1,3) - not stacked well anyway
03:24:213 (8) - repeat arrow is hidden, you can't have it like this
03:54:719 (5) - slider is too scrunched up, the wiggle is pretty harsh, you shouldn't have it like this, it affects the speed too much, and it can't be ranked
Honestly, this still looks very unpolished and random. The spacings change, and they not just change, they change randomly. they aren't used for certain effects for certain parts, or for new phrases or specific beats, they just change for the sake of changing, whenever you want it to, just for the sake of change. This really shows especially at the places you start increasing or decreasing the spacing gradually, like 03:46:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) and 02:16:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - or places like 04:01:797 (4,5,6,7,8,9) and 01:42:752 (5,6)
The positioning of the objects is bad, I sense no sense of flow, especially in slider patterns. They look, feel and move randomly, and usually feels forced when moving. Like this 03:18:483 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - the movement between objects just isn't fluid, nor does it cut flow well either. Places like 03:58:090 (2,3,4,5,6,7) as well.
These as well as the New Combo and combo patterns need work
There is a lack of hitsounds as well
The design of the map isn't really good, it honestly needs a full rework and makeover to be better
Good Luck on this song
General
Remember to set a preview point
Extra
Kiai times aren't snapped
01:04:157 (2) - NC starts here, it makes more sense at the start of the stream, as well as after a short 2-beat phrase
01:04:747 (9,10) - having them so close to each other and having differing spacing as compared to the stream beforehand doesn't make it look pleasing. At least have around this much spacing, placing it however you want nicely:
01:04:831 (10) - this should be the NC
01:06:179 (2) - ^
01:06:854 (1) - I don't see a need for this NC
01:08:876 (2) - you should have the NCs on beats such as these, and not on the red lines like 01:08:708 (1) - this applies for the whole difficulty
01:09:550 (1) - you don't need another new combo so quickly after the previous one, I see no special reason for you to be doing so. This also applies for the whole difficulty
Will stop commenting on the NC from this point on, everything is relates to the 2 things I pointed up there ^; place the NCs properly on bats that make more sense, on the white lines, starting of the phrases, and using far less NCs and more sensibly.
01:15:618 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - this doesn't flow, and with the music here, it should be more fluid. 01:16:461 (3) should not be facing the same direction of movement as the streams and 01:16:123 (1,2) - flip the slider or something
01:20:337 (2,3) - don't overlap ever so slightly like this, it's quite unsightly
01:21:348 (6) - change the position accordingly with 01:21:348 (6) so it doesn't touch in the above-mentioned, either way, it's not stacked properly now as well
01:29:101 (1,2) - stack nicely, it would look better
01:29:775 (2,3) - not touching would be better
01:32:135 (4,5) - the overlap looks weird
01:36:179 (4,5,6,7,8) - curve it more nicely
01:38:876 (6,9) - at least allow them to look like they sync more well with each other, rather than looking like they were misplaced and suddenly overlapped each other
01:45:618 (7,8,9) - this pattern is rather messy, 01:46:629 (10) is too close as well, make a nicer pattern
01:48:988 (4,5) - don't overlap with each other
01:50:337 (4,6) - spacing be the exact same as 01:50:168 (3,5)
01:56:067 (6,1) - blanket better
01:58:764 (3,5) - don't touch each other
01:59:438 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - this is quite cramped, and it affects ease of movement
01:59:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - generally this kind of movement isn't good for flow, and is quite forced
02:08:708 (7,9) - don't touch each other
02:09:550 (1) - flow from 02:09:213 (10) is bad because it is behind the flow of the previous slider, and is moving in the same direction, the shape isn't really looking good either
02:23:202 (3,4) - don't overlap them
02:25:393 (4,5,6) - not a good pattern, reposition them, 02:25:730 (6) - you can't hide the end of this slider, you can't see the repeat arrow
02:29:438 (2) - unrankable slider, slider ball is held, you can't see where the slider direction is
02:35:842 (2,6) - nt stacked directly on each other
02:42:584 (2,3) - 3/4 sliders sound weird here, just use normal 1/2 sliders
03:00:449 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - the decrease in spacing doesn't match up to the song, I see no big change in the music to allow such a change in spacing. Either way the super sudden decrease in spacing for 03:01:292 (11,12) is ugly as well, it's too drastic
03:19:494 (1,3) - not stacked well anyway
03:24:213 (8) - repeat arrow is hidden, you can't have it like this
03:54:719 (5) - slider is too scrunched up, the wiggle is pretty harsh, you shouldn't have it like this, it affects the speed too much, and it can't be ranked
Honestly, this still looks very unpolished and random. The spacings change, and they not just change, they change randomly. they aren't used for certain effects for certain parts, or for new phrases or specific beats, they just change for the sake of changing, whenever you want it to, just for the sake of change. This really shows especially at the places you start increasing or decreasing the spacing gradually, like 03:46:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) and 02:16:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - or places like 04:01:797 (4,5,6,7,8,9) and 01:42:752 (5,6)
The positioning of the objects is bad, I sense no sense of flow, especially in slider patterns. They look, feel and move randomly, and usually feels forced when moving. Like this 03:18:483 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - the movement between objects just isn't fluid, nor does it cut flow well either. Places like 03:58:090 (2,3,4,5,6,7) as well.
These as well as the New Combo and combo patterns need work
There is a lack of hitsounds as well
The design of the map isn't really good, it honestly needs a full rework and makeover to be better
Good Luck on this song