supercell - The Bravery (TV Edit) [Taiko|Osu]‬ · forum‬

RzHr

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2013-12-12T10:46:09+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 02 Mei 2015 at 17:19:47

Artist: supercell
Title: The Bravery (TV Edit)
Source: マギ The labyrinth of magic
Tags: 2nd Ending ED Closing ryo Koeda こゑだこえだ Magi Aladdin Alibaba Morgiana AxelHino Kuro Fuyusaki Fort IMMoRTalS Nardoxyribonucleic Short Version Size
BPM: 189
Filesize: 21213kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

AxelHino's Oni (3,87 stars, 440 notes)
Easy (1,54 stars, 100 notes)
Fort's insane (4,36 stars, 356 notes)
Hard (3,11 stars, 263 notes)
IMT's Muzukashii (2,78 stars, 353 notes)
Kuro's Insane (4,81 stars, 338 notes)
Nardo's Inner Oni (4,2 stars, 513 notes)
Normal (2,06 stars, 156 notes)

Download: supercell - The Bravery (TV Edit)
Download: supercell - The Bravery (TV Edit) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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IMT's Muzukashii - By [I]MMoRTal[S]
AxelHino's Oni - By AxelHino
Nardo's Inner Oni - By Nardoxyribonucleic
Fort's Insane - By Fort
Kuro's Insane - By Kuro Fuyusaki

Thanks to all modder

Last edited by RzHr 2015-05-02T10:20:46+00:00, edited 73 times in total.

GoombaJMR

63 posts

Joined June 2013

GoombaJMR 2014-07-22T17:17:55+00:00

First, I'll take care of a difficulty or 2~

General

Nice.
Why no custom colors? add custom colors >< They make the map more special
Hard diff +1 HP, +1 OD ~?
R4 +1 HP, +1 OD ~? (Since it seems like the extra diff for the mapset)
Will probably do R4 and maybe Hard later .-.

Kuro's Insane [ahh NAEGI >//<]

00:04:364 (4) - Why is this straight when all the other sliders are curved? :3
00:18:970 (1) - This time it's different - it makes sense. First one doesn't though imo
00:25:954 (1) - If you want to keep it straight, then rotate it more to the circle after it. If not, then just make it curved
00:36:112 (7)(8) - Hard to describe, but why not make the 8 note and move it up a tiny bit and left if necessary (distance snap). Why? Because the slider after it would be parallel with the 2 circles (7 and 8) that come before it and it looks better

00:45:954 (1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6) - I thought about this for a while....maybe move it and not put it on top of the slider, or just change the design since I don't think it's so good (not the timing of the beats, but their locations)
00:54:525 (1) - Hmm maybe rotate it a bit more like below, since imo it makes the flow better for the triplet that comes afterwards (Check image here~)
01:11:509 (3)(4) - New Combo? Don't remove the combo at 01:12:303
01:15:954 (1) - Idk yo.....same as the 00:54:525 one
01:17:700 (2) - First time (I believe, but not sure) that you used a single below a slider that isn't 3/4-1/4 time, (you used 1/2-1/2 this place), so maybe change the placing or else the timing/location of the circles would be somewhat inconsistent
01:19:128 (3)(4)(5) - I think this triplet is too close to the single before it
01:27:541 (1) - Is a new color ok? Is this location really the best place it could be before a spinner and after a triangle pattern? .-.

Hopefully you enjoy ><

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-08-14T18:08:13+00:00

GoombaJMR wrote:
First, I'll take care of a difficulty or 2~

General

Nice.
Why no custom colors? add custom colors >< They make the map more special
Hard diff +1 HP, +1 OD ~?
R4 +1 HP, +1 OD ~? (Since it seems like the extra diff for the mapset)
Will probably do R4 and maybe Hard later .-.

Kuro's Insane [ahh NAEGI >//<]

00:04:364 (4) - Why is this straight when all the other sliders are curved? :3 | I change it into curved
00:18:970 (1) - This time it's different - it makes sense. First one doesn't though imo - i don't understand ._.
00:25:954 (1) - If you want to keep it straight, then rotate it more to the circle after it. If not, then just make it curved | I change it into curved
00:36:112 (7)(8) - Hard to describe, but why not make the 8 note and move it up a tiny bit and left if necessary (distance snap). Why? Because the slider after it would be parallel with the 2 circles (7 and 8) that come before it and it looks better | I made it like a circular
00:45:954 (1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6) - I thought about this for a while....maybe move it and not put it on top of the slider, or just change the design since I don't think it's so good (not the timing of the beats, but their locations) | I think, I wouldn't change it
00:54:525 (1) - Hmm maybe rotate it a bit more like below, since imo it makes the flow better for the triplet that comes afterwards (Check image here~ | done
01:11:509 (3)(4) - New Combo? Don't remove the combo at 01:12:303 | i don't remove it, just change it after 5 ._.
01:17:700 (2) - First time (I believe, but not sure) that you used a single below a slider that isn't 3/4-1/4 time, (you used 1/2-1/2 this place), so maybe change the placing or else the timing/location of the circles would be somewhat inconsistent | Done
01:15:954 (1) - Idk yo.....same as the 00:54:525 one | i don't get it ._.
01:19:128 (3)(4)(5) - I think this triplet is too close to the single before it | I gave it a little distance
01:27:541 (1) - Is a new color ok? Is this location really the best place it could be before a spinner and after a triangle pattern? .-. | I change its position to the middle

Hopefully you enjoy ><

Thanks for your mod

Zhu Yuan

2,441 posts

Joined July 2012

Zhu Yuan 2014-08-29T10:19:36+00:00

Hi there, from my queue (I guess) o3o

General:

Add some different colours, maybe?
Disable Widescreen Support, you don't have SB.
Disable Letterbox In Breaks, there is no break xD
Offset is wrong, I guess this is correct: http://puu.sh/bcyup/62f34772ae.png

I guess if you change offsets, you'll have to resnap some notes. Call me back when you fix that stuff and I'll mod the mapset.

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-08-30T12:43:46+00:00

All fixed :>

Last edited by RzHr 2014-09-12T05:49:01+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Zhu Yuan

2,441 posts

Joined July 2012

Zhu Yuan 2014-09-01T10:56:33+00:00

Okay, I'm back.

General recheck:

Fix Source: you wrote Magi : The Labyrinth Of Magic and correct source is Magi: The Labyrinth Of Magic.
Remove Magi The Labyrinth Of Magic from tags because it's already on Source. Add something like ED, or ending, since this is 2nd ending of Magi, I guess.
Okay, after rechecking a bit, I'm 99% sure that correct offset is -67, just that one. Sorry for the inconvenience, but it was difficult to check that the first time x__x Anyway, I would ask a BAT to check if timing it's finally correct.

Again, sorry for the inconvenience, but this map is hard to mod xDu

Easy:

Hm, I think this diff needs a lot of work, I didn't like some rhythm patterns.
For example, 00:03:558 - there is a strong beat, why are you ignoring it? ;_;
00:30:384 (1) - Remove this NC, you should add it on 00:32:287 (3).
01:26:891 (6) - Change that slider by a simple note and start spinner on 01:27:526.

Normal:

00:38:954 (1) - Try to avoid this type of slider, the beginning and the tail are touching and it's kinda confusing, you can improve them.
00:43:081 (3) - Please, fix this. http://puu.sh/bgIQw/0582a9df6d.jpg
00:45:621 (3) - Same. http://puu.sh/bgIPT/75bfc1d617.jpg
Take care about something: when you map, you should testplay once in a while, because if you find some stuff like that, you will know that you have to change that. Don't rush with mapping, you have to recheck your works sometimes before submitting or asking to someone for mod. People can help you, but we can't map everything you can improve for you.
00:55:462 (1) - Try something like this. http://puu.sh/bgJ4e/b83f6d3a9c.jpg
00:59:906 (4, 1) - This looks ugly for me. I'd try something different, but idk how.
01:15:462 (6, 1) - I suggest you to avoid this overlaps, you can curve that slider in a different way, for example.
01:27:526 (1) - Spinner should start here, do it in all diffs.

Hard:

00:03:241 (2) - Try to avoid sliders which finish on a strong beat, it's not a good rhythm after all.
Also, NCs are usually added on those strong beats, consider fixing that stuff.
For example, this NC 00:06:733 (1) - is kinda random, it could be added on 00:06:098 (5) ~
00:11:653 (1) - I see this note like a bit random, remove it.
01:27:526 (9) - NC

Kuro's Insane:

Okay, this diff is so much better done, gj ~ Just some stuff to point out, I think.
00:04:352 (4, 5, 1) - Try something like this, maybe? http://puu.sh/bgJTJ/9936c2fb61.jpg I liked that stack c:
00:36:256 (1, 2) - Don't try to do reduce the volume if rhythm is not correct. It's kinda overmapped imo, change that rhythm by this one: http://puu.sh/bgJYr/f24884fce9.jpg
00:41:335 (1, 2) - Same, do it in all cases.
00:45:621 (9, 1) - Add NC on (9).
With some mods this diff can improve a lot, I'm sure. I liked it :3

Last diff is which needs more work, I don't really know how to mod it. I've suggested you some stuff to improve in general at mapping, so, just take care about my advice and ask for moooore mods, and I hope all of that can help you in a future

Good luck.

BTW, no kd, you already gave me xD

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-09-01T17:29:33+00:00

Inyuschan wrote:
Okay, I'm back.

General recheck:

Fix Source: you wrote Magi : The Labyrinth Of Magic and correct source is Magi: The Labyrinth Of Magic.
Remove Magi The Labyrinth Of Magic from tags because it's already on Source. Add something like ED, or ending, since this is 2nd ending of Magi, I guess.
Okay, after rechecking a bit, I'm 99% sure that correct offset is -67, just that one. Sorry for the inconvenience, but it was difficult to check that the first time x__x Anyway, I would ask a BAT to check if timing it's finally correct.
Again, sorry for the inconvenience, but this map is hard to mod xDu

Easy:

Hm, I think this diff needs a lot of work, I didn't like some rhythm patterns.
For example, 00:03:558 - there is a strong beat, why are you ignoring it? ;_; - ok XD i fix it
00:30:384 (1) - Remove this NC, you should add it on 00:32:287 (3). - ok
01:26:891 (6) - Change that slider by a simple note and start spinner on 01:27:526.- ok
Normal:

00:38:954 (1) - Try to avoid this type of slider, the beginning and the tail are touching and it's kinda confusing, you can improve them. - no problem
00:43:081 (3) - Please, fix this. http://puu.sh/bgIQw/0582a9df6d.jpg - ok
00:45:621 (3) - Same. http://puu.sh/bgIPT/75bfc1d617.jpg - ok
Take care about something: when you map, you should testplay once in a while, because if you find some stuff like that, you will know that you have to change that. Don't rush with mapping, you have to recheck your works sometimes before submitting or asking to someone for mod. People can help you, but we can't map everything you can improve for you.
00:55:462 (1) - Try something like this. http://puu.sh/bgJ4e/b83f6d3a9c.jpg - ok
00:59:906 (4, 1) - This looks ugly for me. I'd try something different, but idk how.
01:15:462 (6, 1) - I suggest you to avoid this overlaps, you can curve that slider in a different way, for example.
01:27:526 (1) - Spinner should start here, do it in all diffs. - already
Hard:

00:03:241 (2) - Try to avoid sliders which finish on a strong beat, it's not a good rhythm after all. -ok, i change it
Also, NCs are usually added on those strong beats, consider fixing that stuff. - no
For example, this NC 00:06:733 (1) - is kinda random, it could be added on 00:06:098 (5) ~ ok
00:11:653 (1) - I see this note like a bit random, remove it. - ok
01:27:526 (9) - NC -
Kuro's Insane:

Okay, this diff is so much better done, gj ~ Just some stuff to point out, I think.
00:04:352 (4, 5, 1) - Try something like this, maybe? http://puu.sh/bgJTJ/9936c2fb61.jpg I liked that stack c: - ok
00:36:256 (1, 2) - Don't try to do reduce the volume if rhythm is not correct. It's kinda overmapped imo, change that rhythm by this one: http://puu.sh/bgJYr/f24884fce9.jpg - ok
00:41:335 (1, 2) - Same, do it in all cases. - ok
00:45:621 (9, 1) - Add NC on (9). - ok
With some mods this diff can improve a lot, I'm sure. I liked it :3
Last diff is which needs more work, I don't really know how to mod it. I've suggested you some stuff to improve in general at mapping, so, just take care about my advice and ask for moooore mods, and I hope all of that can help you in a future

Good luck.

BTW, no kd, you already gave me xD

Last diff, I also have confused what to do with it XD actually want to remap it, or better delete it ? .-.

mmmm... about this

Inyuschan wrote:
Hm, I think this diff needs a lot of work, I didn't like some rhythm patterns.
00:59:906 (4, 1) - This looks ugly for me. I'd try something different, but idk how.
01:15:462 (6, 1) - I suggest you to avoid this overlaps, you can curve that slider in a different way, for example.

for no reason, i like that pattern XD
but IDK...
maybe one day, I will change it

Thanks for your mod

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-09-03T09:44:06+00:00

my GD

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: The Bravery (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51652
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:The Bravery (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:The Bravery (TV Size)
Artist:supercell
ArtistUnicode:supercell
Creator:RzHr
Version:Fort's insane
Source:Magi : The Labyrinth Of Magic
Tags:2nd Ending / Closing
BeatmapID:0
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160,240,80541,6,0,L|144:284,1,42.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,248,80700,2,4,L|40:304,1,42.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,160,80859,2,0,L|144:104,1,127.5,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,64,81176,2,0,L|296:120,1,127.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,107,81494,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,68,81652,2,0,P|360:124|396:148,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,160,81970,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,160,82049,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,160,82129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,80,82287,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,252,82446,6,0,P|496:256|520:236,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,332,82764,2,0,P|268:328|244:348,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,276,83081,2,0,P|68:288|0:204,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,60,83557,2,0,P|100:56|212:108,1,170,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,52,84033,2,0,P|324:92|436:56,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,136,84510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
476,220,84668,2,0,P|424:208|376:216,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,248,84986,6,0,P|288:272|336:268,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,176,85303,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,332,85461,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,300,85541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,256,85620,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,112,85779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,164,85938,2,0,P|428:176|476:168,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,112,86256,2,0,L|272:308,1,170,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,324,86732,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,328,86891,2,0,P|84:288|72:248,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,176,87208,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87526,12,4,90700,0:0:0:0:

RzHr

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RzHr 2014-09-03T17:32:53+00:00

Thanks for your GD

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Chaoslitz

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Chaoslitz 2014-09-04T13:52:26+00:00

Hi :3/

Hard

00:39:112 (2) - The slider is too long and it seems quite not following the rhythm
Suggest this rhythm: http://puu.sh/bl9ID/e0e416f48c.jpg
00:43:081 (3) - This one may be better: http://puu.sh/bla0W/818ba3d5b5.jpg
01:14:668 (1,2) - Not quite follow the rhythm also
I think you can change to this one: http://puu.sh/blaed/c27c20c0cc.jpg A single note with a longer slider

I hope it helps! ;D

AxelHino

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AxelHino 2014-09-04T15:16:09+00:00

http://puu.sh/blgKV/1789ca11cd.osu

Taiko gd that you requested~ (oni)
I strongly recommend that you change the timing point to the one on my map. tho, it still feels too early. maybe you can fix it?

RzHr

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RzHr 2014-09-05T10:34:41+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
Hi :3/

Hard

00:39:112 (2) - The slider is too long and it seems quite not following the rhythm
Suggest this rhythm: http://puu.sh/bl9ID/e0e416f48c.jpg - i change it, like this http://puu.sh/bmpet/0fb34ea741.jpg
00:43:081 (3) - This one may be better: http://puu.sh/bla0W/818ba3d5b5.jpg - ok
01:14:668 (1,2) - Not quite follow the rhythm also
I think you can change to this one: http://puu.sh/blaed/c27c20c0cc.jpg A single note with a longer slider - ok

I hope it helps! ;D

Thanks

RzHr

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RzHr 2014-09-05T10:35:23+00:00

AxelHino wrote:
http://puu.sh/blgKV/1789ca11cd.osu

Taiko gd that you requested~ (oni)
I strongly recommend that you change the timing point to the one on my map. tho, it still feels too early. maybe you can fix it?

Thanks for your GD

Gaia

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Gaia 2014-09-06T16:58:49+00:00

oh wow what a coincedence Im making a full ver of this song right now haha

best of luck with ur set~

RzHr

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RzHr 2014-09-06T19:43:19+00:00

u too

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Gaia

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Gaia 2014-09-09T09:19:11+00:00

hey again
I did some research regarding metadata on this map so I might as well share with u too ^^

Title: The Bravery (TV Edit)

also add "ryo" "Koeda" and "こえだ" to tags
and since it's an anime (magi ftw) u can add names of main characters? -> Aladdin Alibaba Morgiana
^dont think u can add any supporting characters tho. myanimelist only considers those 3 as main characters. (u may wanna double check)

remove the "/" in tags

source: http://vgmdb.net/album/37087

on a totally unrelated note you're gunna need a taiko muzu if u want to rank this mapset along with the oni

no kds

edit: lol oops i forgot to capitalize the B in Bravery ;w;

RzHr

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RzHr 2014-09-09T16:49:55+00:00

Ok, thanks

Mmm... i already request for inner oni few days ago, should I request for muzu too? ._.

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Gaia

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Gaia 2014-09-09T23:36:24+00:00

umm, i'm not so sure about taiko, so u may have to do some more research about that part O:

however, I do know this from the Ranking Criteria:
A mapset cannot have just one Taiko or osu!mania difficulty. If you decide, for example, to include Taiko in your map, make sure you have at least 2 Taiko mode difficulties and that one of them is of an easier difficulty level if it doesn't have an osu! standard Easy level difficulty. However having only one CtB difficulty is fine.

I dont really know what diffculty inner oni is (easier than oni I'm guessing) so as long as it's easy enough it should be okay?

bleh idk anything about taiko so go check with a BAT to be sure lol
sorry orz

RzHr

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RzHr 2014-09-10T08:42:04+00:00

XD no problem, thanks for your advice

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wasonz

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wasonz 2014-09-11T15:21:38+00:00

; ; AxelHino must increase Note to make good spread with my diff
IMT's Muzukashii

RzHr

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RzHr 2014-09-11T16:10:09+00:00

XD, thanks for your GD

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Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2014-09-11T17:41:40+00:00

I'm mapping an Inner Oni of 500+ notes, so AxelHino could add some notes in order to have a better difficulty spread.

RzHr

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RzHr 2014-09-11T17:54:35+00:00

I don't know what to do, maybe I will ask for help from him, later. Or find someone else to help? ._.

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AxelHino

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AxelHino 2014-09-11T22:53:16+00:00

I'll fix it later this day then~

AxelHino

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AxelHino 2014-09-12T07:42:27+00:00

Here you go~ http://puu.sh/bvHxl/5bdf2f98eb.osu
That should be nice

Also I noticed that the timing points i gave you was a bit off... sorry about that :<

fixed uninherited timing points (for taiko)

-67,317.460317460317,4,1,0,100,1,0
51996,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
87552,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0

(in short, remove the second uninherited timing point (red bar) and snap the notes and inherited points)

sorry orzzz

RzHr

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RzHr 2014-09-12T08:53:16+00:00

updated

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2014-09-13T06:52:38+00:00

Here is the Inner Oni as requested: http://puu.sh/bwWzs.rar

@AxelHino: I think you have added too many notes in Oni diff that the spread between Muzukashii and Oni is too great. If possible, please consider reducing some of them for a better difficulty spread. :>

Here are some examples:

From 00:11:202 to 00:41:837 - As the music is relatively quiet, you may use fewer triplets and fewer notes to suit the music imo.
00:15:567 (76) - consider deleting this note to emphasize the vocal more ?
00:33:821 (76) - ^
00:38:901 (103) - ^

Current no. of notes in three taiko diffs: 354 -> 494 -> 514

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RzHr

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RzHr 2014-09-13T07:09:41+00:00

thanks for your GD

wasonz

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wasonz 2014-09-13T14:56:12+00:00

NO KDS PLEASE cuz i'm had got it ABOVE ^

Diff spread of taiko diff .....
354 --- 140 ---> 494 --- 20 ---> 514 rip

try to remove note

00:02:552 - 1
00:06:996 - 2
00:09:536 - 3
00:15:567 - 4
00:20:964 - 5
00:27:234 - 6
00:32:075 (64,65) - double kill !
00:33:821 - 9
00:35:091 - 10
00:35:726 - 11
00:36:080 - 12
00:37:155 (85,86) - double kill
xx:xx:xxx - unknow

. . . . .~~exhaust~~. . .. AxelHino please . .. our map need good diff spread .....

You will be the HERO after you done
Quest : reduce 45 ~ 80 note

little mod

00:33:345 (68,69) - move 1/4 >

AxelHino

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AxelHino 2014-09-13T15:21:08+00:00

Fine, fine I'll fix it tomorrow. Being the middle one is hard orzzzz

fm4a93au04

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fm4a93au04 2014-09-14T10:12:41+00:00

Hello , from my queue ~

fm4a93au04's standard modding and GD ( ? ) queue

Let's start ~

My mod

[General]

Consider to make your SE vol. louder . Almost no sound @W@” ~

Maybe 45 ~ 50% vol. ?

[Easy]

00:11:678 (1) – Change it to 1 note at 00:11:996 .

00:17:076 (3,4,1,2) – This strange for me . My suggestion :

I prefer to follow the main rhythm here in E diff =..= .

00:56:441 (2) – Move C ( clap ) from end to head .

00:58:346 (4) – Miss a C on end ?

01:02:790 (2) – Miss a C on head ?

01:05:012 (4) – Remove C on end ?

01:06:600 (1,2) – Change their end to F ( finish ) ?

01:09:139 (3) – Add F on end ?

01:12:314 (1) – F on head ? Here also suggest a graduatly increasing vol. like :

Or something . If you like it then try to compose in your style .

01:25:647 (4,5,6) – Add some sound at ending ? Like F or C or something .

[Normal]

00:28:822 (4,1) – Consider blanket ? Or something to make it more prettier .

00:32:949 (2) – Reverse ? I think it better =ㄦ= .

01:19:298 (3,1) – Blanket ?

01:24:695 (1,2,3,4) – Consider :

Reference for sure .

[Hard]

00:11:837 ~ 00:29:774 – Why not follow BG sound ? Your rhythm is strange for me … wired for me .

If you have no idea about this , PM me . If you think your rhythm is right , then just ignore this .

A example .

00:26:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Here you did it ! But other place … a mass for me =..= .

Maybe is my problem , for sure .

00:39:932 (4) - :

Reference .

00:48:028 (4,5,6,1,2) – ^ .

I forgot to NC in this pic … sorry .

00:49:298 (9) – Make a red point curve on 00:49:456 to match vocal . Or :

00:56:123 (2,3,4,5,6) – Make them 1/2 beat later , and add a note at 00:55:964 .

01:00:567 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - :

Most important thing is :

1. MAKE SE vol. LOUDER ~~~~ @W@” !!!!!!!

2. If you like the rhythm I suggest , then copy it to other correspond places .

3. Sound also . Copy E to N and H . <- Plz make it louder =..= .

That's all .

Good luck to your map ~

RzHr

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RzHr 2014-09-14T13:53:50+00:00

fm4a93au04 wrote:
Hello , from my queue ~

fm4a93au04's standard modding and GD ( ? ) queue

Let's start ~

My mod
[General]

Consider to make your SE vol. louder . Almost no sound @W@” ~

Maybe 45 ~ 50% vol. ? - ok XD

[Easy]

00:11:678 (1) – Change it to 1 note at 00:11:996 . - ok

00:17:076 (3,4,1,2) – This strange for me . My suggestion :

I prefer to follow the main rhythm here in E diff =..= . - ok

00:56:441 (2) – Move C ( clap ) from end to head . - ok

00:58:346 (4) – Miss a C on end ? - ok

01:02:790 (2) – Miss a C on head ? - ok

01:05:012 (4) – Remove C on end ? - ok

01:06:600 (1,2) – Change their end to F ( finish ) ? - ok

01:09:139 (3) – Add F on end ? - ok

01:12:314 (1) – F on head ? Here also suggest a graduatly increasing vol. like :

Or something . If you like it then try to compose in your style . - ok

01:25:647 (4,5,6) – Add some sound at ending ? Like F or C or something . - ok

[Normal]

00:28:822 (4,1) – Consider blanket ? Or something to make it more prettier . - :> no, i like that

00:32:949 (2) – Reverse ? I think it better =ㄦ= . - no

01:19:298 (3,1) – Blanket ? - no

01:24:695 (1,2,3,4) – Consider :

Reference for sure . - ok

[Hard]

00:11:837 ~ 00:29:774 – Why not follow BG sound ? Your rhythm is strange for me … wired for me .

If you have no idea about this , PM me . If you think your rhythm is right , then just ignore this .

A example . - I also want it. but I think, the object will be slightly ._.

00:26:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Here you did it ! But other place … a mass for me =..= .

Maybe is my problem , for sure . -i like that :>

00:39:932 (4) - :

Reference . - no

00:48:028 (4,5,6,1,2) – ^ .

I forgot to NC in this pic … sorry . - ok

00:49:298 (9) – Make a red point curve on 00:49:456 to match vocal . Or : - ok

00:56:123 (2,3,4,5,6) – Make them 1/2 beat later , and add a note at 00:55:964 . - no

01:00:567 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - : - ok

Most important thing is :

1. MAKE SE vol. LOUDER ~~~~ @W@” !!!!!!!

2. If you like the rhythm I suggest , then copy it to other correspond places .

3. Sound also . Copy E to N and H . <- Plz make it louder =..= .

That's all .
Good luck to your map ~

thanks for your mod

AxelHino

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AxelHino 2014-09-15T07:05:34+00:00

http://puu.sh/bzLlm/f6683fae88.osu

there, 445 notes

RzHr

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RzHr 2014-09-15T08:14:09+00:00

updated :>

Xinely

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Xinely 2014-09-20T04:21:37+00:00

denied 1 kudo (Fort) on first page as mapper's request

i keep AxelHino's kudosu on first page because he/she already helped the mapper a lot from irc mod (but they lost the log)

Be careful to give kudos next time C:

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AxelHino

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AxelHino 2014-09-20T16:13:47+00:00

(i'm a he lol)

Support

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Support 2014-09-26T05:13:45+00:00

sry sry i got a little confused with my mods so I accidentally posted the wrong mod on this map sry sry
Since you didnt indicate which diff you want me to mod I'll just mod the [Insane]

00:09:774 (1) - remove nc

00:10:567 (3) - nc

00:46:123 (1,2,3,4) - the 1/4 jump made a really quick speed up from the flow, i would suggest putting note 2 and 4 closer to slider 1 and 3. The sudden speedup seems a bit out of place especially when the map is still building up to kiai time.

01:01:203 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the triples seems a bit excessive here, since the music does not indicate a triple, I would suggest making those triples in to single taps.

In my opinion I feel like there might be a little bit too much triples or 1/4 repeater during kiai time when the music does not indicate it, and it made it kinda awkward to play having triples every few notes or so.

Nice map and song!

I wish you goodluck!

RzHr

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RzHr 2014-09-26T11:48:59+00:00

Support wrote:
sry sry i got a little confused with my mods so I accidentally posted the wrong mod on this map sry sry
Since you didnt indicate which diff you want me to mod I'll just mod the [Insane]

00:09:774 (1) - remove nc - ok

00:10:567 (3) - nc - ok

00:46:123 (1,2,3,4) - the 1/4 jump made a really quick speed up from the flow, i would suggest putting note 2 and 4 closer to slider 1 and 3. The sudden speedup seems a bit out of place especially when the map is still building up to kiai time. - ok, and i change the position of 34 to 12 & 12 to 34

01:01:203 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the triples seems a bit excessive here, since the music does not indicate a triple, I would suggest making those triples in to single taps. - how about this ? http://puu.sh/bOPAw/db53df02fb.jpg

In my opinion I feel like there might be a little bit too much triples or 1/4 repeater during kiai time when the music does not indicate it, and it made it kinda awkward to play having triples every few notes or so. - I will change it a little in some places :>

Nice map and song! I wish you goodluck!

Thanks for your help

Mood Breaker

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Mood Breaker 2014-09-26T19:26:44+00:00

Hallo mau ngemod ya :>

[General]
Kenapa HS nya agak telat bunyi nya di kiai. terutama di diff easy dan normal :/

[Easy]
00:14:536 (1) - remove NC kalo bisa ditumpuk sama 00:17:075 (3) -
00:17:075 (3) - NC
00:18:345 (1) - remove NC
00:57:711 (3) - tumpuk sama 00:59:615 (5) -

[Normal]
00:02:790 (3) - tumpuk sama 00:04:060 (5) -
00:23:742 (4) - slider ini daripada punya 4 titik lebih baik titik nya jadi 3 aja biar agak rapian
00:28:822 (4) - rapiin blanket nya.
00:32:949 (2) - reverse slider

[Hard]
00:28:980 (7) - dibikin biar blanket aja
00:39:615 (3) - saran tumpuk sama 00:38:027 (4) -
01:18:027 (8) - tumpuk sama 01:16:599 (3) -
01:18:980 (3,4,5) - gimana kalo polanya dibikin seperti ini
01:21:996 (4) - reverse slider nya dibuat ke 01:22:313 aja terus di 01:22:790 kasih circle
01:23:900 (1) - remove NC

[Fort's Insane]
00:02:948 (4,5,6) - gimana kalo dibikin agak jauhan dari 00:03:266 (7) - biar enak ngejump nya
00:04:536 (2) - slider tail nya ditumpuk ke 00:04:853 (3) -
00:27:075 (1,2,3) - gimana kalo ditumpuk semua aja, soalnya single tapping sblm nya renggang2.
00:49:139 (1) - ditumpuk sama 00:49:456 (2) -
00:51:678 (3) - Clap Finish

[Insane]
00:08:504 (1) - slider tail tumpukin sama slider tailnya 00:08:821 (2) -

[Kuro's Insane]
00:01:678 (3) - tumpuk sama 00:02:313 (1) -
00:02:313 (1) - blanket
00:03:107 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:10:567 (1) - Slider tail tumpuk sama 00:09:932 (1) -

Segini dulu aja ya mod kecil2an

Semoga sukses selalu

RzHr

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RzHr 2014-09-27T06:02:31+00:00

Mood Breaker wrote:
Hallo mau ngemod ya :>

[General]
Kenapa HS nya agak telat bunyi nya di kiai. terutama di diff easy dan normal :/ - ah :> mungkin cuma perasaan

[Easy]
00:14:536 (1) - remove NC kalo bisa ditumpuk sama 00:17:075 (3) - ok
00:17:075 (3) - NC - ok
00:18:345 (1) - remove NC - ok
00:57:711 (3) - tumpuk sama 00:59:615 (5) - ok

[Normal]
00:02:790 (3) - tumpuk sama 00:04:060 (5) - ok
00:23:742 (4) - slider ini daripada punya 4 titik lebih baik titik nya jadi 3 aja biar agak rapian - imo, kayaknya ga masalah kek gitu :>
00:28:822 (4) - rapiin blanket nya. - suka yang kayak gitu :> ah ia, ini juga solanya ngikutin distance snapnya
00:32:949 (2) - reverse slider - ok

[Hard]
00:28:980 (7) - dibikin biar blanket aja - suka yang kayak gitu :>
00:39:615 (3) - saran tumpuk sama 00:38:027 (4) - ok
01:18:027 (8) - tumpuk sama 01:16:599 (3) - ok
01:18:980 (3,4,5) - gimana kalo polanya dibikin seperti ini - ga
01:21:996 (4) - reverse slider nya dibuat ke 01:22:313 aja terus di 01:22:790 kasih circle - mmm, gimana kalo circle dulu baru reverse slider ? :>
01:23:900 (1) - remove NC - ok

[Insane]
00:08:504 (1) - slider tail tumpukin sama slider tailnya 00:08:821 (2) - ok

[Kuro's Insane]
00:01:678 (3) - tumpuk sama 00:02:313 (1) - ok
00:02:313 (1) - blanket - bingung :>
00:03:107 (4) - Ctrl+G - ok
00:10:567 (1) - Slider tail tumpuk sama 00:09:932 (1) - udah numpuk kok .-.
Segini dulu aja ya mod kecil2an
Semoga sukses selalu

thanks udah bantu :>

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2014-09-28T08:04:59+00:00

Yo~

Just a quick mod:
Your mp3 is so small sound volume, trying use a big sound volume~
Here your MP3, i converted to 192 and change to Big Sound Volume:
http://puu.sh/bQX8z/87938729c8.mp3

NO KDS~ and Good Luck~

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-09-29T09:05:46+00:00

updated :> thanks

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2014-10-05T12:08:27+00:00

Hi from my request

[

IMT's Muzukashii]

00:04:218 (16) - k
00:07:710 (31,32) - ctrl+g
00:08:663 (35) - k
00:31:996 (121) - k
00:46:599 (184) - k
00:58:345 (28) - d

[

AxelHino's Oni]

00:30:409 (47) - d

Good luck

AxelHino

1,734 posts

Joined July 2011

AxelHino 2014-10-08T11:21:46+00:00

applied the mod! thanks~

updated: http://puu.sh/c469Q/6e40b9f0e3.osu

wasonz

713 posts

Joined July 2013

wasonz 2014-10-09T07:45:57+00:00

applied some mods thank !

update

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2014-10-12T04:01:45+00:00

Sorry for delay. From my queue.

[General]

offset -10

[Kuro]

00:21:520 (1) - since you didn't follow the guitar in former, I suggest to follow the vocal from here
00:04:059 (2) - stack to 4
00:04:853 (1) - ^
00:36:282 (1,2) - x208 y272
00:49:456 - add a note here is better
01:07:235 (1) - ctrl+g

[Insane]

00:08:504 (1,2) - try this rhythm?

00:11:837 (3,4,5,6,1) - keep the ds same
00:28:821 - add a note at x400 y336
00:31:679 (5) - nc should be here 8
00:38:187 (5) - stack to 4

Did you consider flow when you making this map? 0.0 I can't understand your placement now.

[Fort]

00:02:631 (2) - x208 y332
00:21:044 (1,2) - try this?

00:59:774 (2) - remove finish

overall good 0 0

[Hard]

00:56:599 (4) - sounds strange here
00:56:599 (4) - put slider's end on stress isn't a good idea here

Not much to say to Normal and easy ._. Good luck.

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2014-10-12T06:32:34+00:00

General

First object starts at 00:01:044 which is below the 2000ms needed before the first object from the start of th song. Add 1000 to AudioLeadIn on the .osu in Notepad for all difficulties

Easy

00:56:441 (2) - remove the clap at the end of the slider, a finish suits that better
01:00:885 (1) - finish on end of slider
01:09:139 (3) - more than 1 repeat isn't recommended in an Easy, unless it really fits
01:09:139 (3,1) - don't overlap, doesn't really look nice
01:18:028 (5,1) - bad flow, don't have the slider face downwards left after you had been moving right. The overlap isn't good either

The curved sliders don't look good, like 00:25:329 (4)
The placement used can be much better honestly, it isn't neat right now and doesn't look very structured

Normal

00:04:377 (6) - finish on end of slider
00:08:504 (1,3) - stack properly
00:15:171 (3,5) - ^
00:20:885 (3,1) - blanket them nicely
00:26:600 (7) - NC here, not at 00:27:076 (1)
00:31:679 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:36:759 (1) - ^
00:59:933 (4,1) - doesn't look good with slight overlap
01:05:012 (3,1) - blanket them
01:06:600 (1,2) - too close to each other
01:12:314 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:15:489 (6,1) - use a different position and shape for the slider, overlapping them doesn't look good
01:23:108 (5,1) - ^

Moves better than Easy. but the structure still has much improvement to make it look neater, Some of the rhythm seem questionable as they don't really follow the music, like 00:21:838 (1,4)

Hard

00:01:521 (2,1) - don't let them touch
00:03:584 (3) - finish
00:04:695 (2) - finish on end of slider
00:06:123 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:07:392 (6) - ^
00:08:662 (1) - ^
00:09:932 (1) - ^
The rhythm just doesn't click with the music, I don't know what you are trying to follow sometimes, because it's not following the main vocals and just doesn't seem to fit to any instrumental part. That's including parts like 00:15:012 (4) - which should blanket 00:14:854 (3) nicely either way
00:16:758 (1,2) - blanket them
00:19:139 (2,3) - ^
00:24:219 (1,2,3,4) - you're not following the rhythm of the song, this doesn't fit at all, it just seems like your own random rhythm. This rhythm fits much better:

SPOILER

00:27:869 (4,5) - blanket them
00:31:678 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:34:059 (2) - doesn't fit the song either. The important beat in the song here is the vocals which starts at 00:34:218 but the slider goes over it, which is bad for the rhythm. Split this slider up
00:36:758 (2) - finish on start of slider
00:41:202 (7) - finish on end of slider
00:41:837 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:46:916 (1) - ^
00:47:392 (2) - finish
00:48:186 (5) - finish on start of slider
00:48:504 (6) - finish on end of slider
00:49:139 (1) - finish
00:49:139 (1,3,4) - blanket them
00:50:091 (4,5) - ^
00:51:996 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:53:424 (1,2) - blanket
00:53:583 (2,4) - ^
00:56:599 (4) - finish on end of slider
01:00:726 (2) - finish on start of slider
01:01:202 (4) - finish on end of slider
01:02:154 (3) - finish, NC here instead of 01:01:679 (1) as well
01:06:916 (2) - finish on end of slider
01:12:313 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:17:234 (5) - finish on end of slider
01:19:456 (4,5) - place the head of the slider lower than the previous circle for better flow and to look better too
01:22:155 (5) - finish on repeat end of slider
01:23:265 (3) - finish on end of slider
01:24:694 (1) - ^

I really don't like how you have so many sliders ending on white ticks where vocals or music phrases start, like 01:24:694 (1) - 00:55:488 (1) - 01:05:805 (1) and 01:13:107 (4,5) you throw the feel off by having the play be on the weaker beats instead of the stronger ones. It also lowers the quality of the rhythm used, which I honestly don't see much quality so far in these 3 difficulties. The patterns need more polishing, there is no blankets, not all stacks are proper, patterns overlap unnecessarily, flow changes suddenly sometimes. Use the hitsounds more for highlighting parts of the song. Your Guest Difficulties have better use of hitsounds by far, look at them and take reference.

Fort's Insane

00:20:726 (4,1,2) - I don't feel like this rhythm helps highlight the more important part of the song put NC on 00:20:726 (4) and remove 00:20:885 (1) and shift 00:21:202 (2) to start at 00:21:044 and end at 00:21:361
00:25:329 (2) - the stacking doesn't fit the song
00:27:075 (1,2,3) - sudden anti-jump, too unexpected and I don't feel it in the song
00:47:393 (3) - don't squeeze the slider too much

SPOILER

00:46:917 (1,5) - stack?
00:49:139 (1) - finish on this note
01:25:012 (1,7) - finish on the start of these sliders

Too much 1/4 is used in the kiai when there really isn't much to go with in the song, using too many finishes repeatly also makes it very noisy, especially the start of it. The 1/4 just doesn't blend with the song and just makes everything look like it's overmapped for no reason

Insane

I can't see the form or proper rhythm a lot in Insane.

Kuro's Insane

00:46:441 (4,5) - align them to make it look better
01:14:219 (3,2) - stack them exactly

Would probably just need some fine tuning of the placement to make it look more neater and matching in movement. Other than that, it looks the best in the Standard set, the Kiai fits nicely, and it doesn't look overmapped with unnecessary 1/4s

Overall, I don't think the non-GDs are ready, and needs a lot of overhaul to be better.
Good Luck

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-10-12T06:53:10+00:00

because fort has not been active for a long time, maybe I'll take care of fort's insane too ._.

imoutosan wrote:
Sorry for delay. From my queue.

[General]

offset -10 - maybe at this time, i don't change it ._.

[Kuro]

00:21:520 (1) - since you didn't follow the guitar in former, I suggest to follow the vocal from here - i don't have idea :>
00:04:059 (2) - stack to 4 - ok
00:04:853 (1) - ^ - ok
00:36:282 (1,2) - x208 y272 - ok
00:49:456 - add a note here is better - i don't have idea & I can't make like his style :<
01:07:235 (1) - ctrl+g - ok

[Insane]

00:08:504 (1,2) - try this rhythm? - ok
00:11:837 (3,4,5,6,1) - keep the ds same - ok
00:28:821 - add a note at x400 y336 - ok
00:31:679 (5) - nc should be here 8 - ok
00:38:187 (5) - stack to 4 - ok

Did you consider flow when you making this map? 0.0 I can't understand your placement now. - i'll fix later XD

[Fort]

00:02:631 (2) - x208 y332 - ok
00:21:044 (1,2) - try this? - ok
00:59:774 (2) - remove finish - ok

overall good 0 0

[Hard]

00:56:599 (4) - sounds strange here - I don't think ._.
00:56:599 (4) - put slider's end on stress isn't a good idea here - slider's end ? .-. how about this ? http://puu.sh/c98fu/aa9399e540.jpg

Not much to say to Normal and easy ._. Good luck.

updated :> and i accept mod [normal > 00:30:092 (1) - blanket ]

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-10-12T08:54:39+00:00

dat hard XD

neonat wrote:
General

First object starts at 00:01:044 which is below the 2000ms needed before the first object from the start of th song. Add 1000 to AudioLeadIn on the .osu in Notepad for all difficulties - ok

Easy

00:56:441 (2) - remove the clap at the end of the slider, a finish suits that better - ok
01:00:885 (1) - finish on end of slider - ok
01:09:139 (3) - more than 1 repeat isn't recommended in an Easy, unless it really fits - imo, this is fit
01:09:139 (3,1) - don't overlap, doesn't really look nice - I like this but... because some mod before say like this too ... ok .-.
01:18:028 (5,1) - bad flow, don't have the slider face downwards left after you had been moving right. The overlap isn't good either - ^ same XD

The curved sliders don't look good, like 00:25:329 (4)
The placement used can be much better honestly, it isn't neat right now and doesn't look very structured - Idk, maybe because my style is like that ? .-.

Normal

00:04:377 (6) - finish on end of slider - ok
00:08:504 (1,3) - stack properly - ok
00:15:171 (3,5) - ^ - i think...already .-.
00:20:885 (3,1) - blanket them nicely - i dont have idea :<
00:26:600 (7) - NC here, not at 00:27:076 (1) - ok
00:31:679 (1) - finish on start of slider - ok
00:36:759 (1) - ^ - ok
00:59:933 (4,1) - doesn't look good with slight overlap -idk why ;_; but i like this XD and i don't know how to change it .-. maybe at this time, i don't change this one
01:05:012 (3,1) - blanket them - ok
01:06:600 (1,2) - too close to each other - ah... right
01:12:314 (1) - finish on start of slider - ok
01:15:489 (6,1) - use a different position and shape for the slider, overlapping them doesn't look good - same reason... 00:59:933 (4,1)
01:23:108 (5,1) - ^ - ^

Moves better than Easy. but the structure still has much improvement to make it look neater, Some of the rhythm seem questionable as they don't really follow the music, like 00:21:838 (1,4)

Hard

00:01:521 (2,1) - don't let them touch - ummmm ? .-.
00:03:584 (3) - finish - ok
00:04:695 (2) - finish on end of slider - ok
00:06:123 (1) - finish on start of slider - ok
00:07:392 (6) - ^ - ok
00:08:662 (1) - ^ - ok
00:09:932 (1) - ^ - ok
The rhythm just doesn't click with the music, I don't know what you are trying to follow sometimes, because it's not following the main vocals and just doesn't seem to fit to any instrumental part. That's including parts like 00:15:012 (4) - which should blanket 00:14:854 (3) nicely either way - I think I followed the vocal .-. but everyone's opinion is different
00:16:758 (1,2) - blanket them - ok
00:19:139 (2,3) - ^ - already .-.
00:24:219 (1,2,3,4) - you're not following the rhythm of the song, this doesn't fit at all, it just seems like your own random rhythm. This rhythm fits much better: - ok
SPOILER
00:27:869 (4,5) - blanket them - already
00:31:678 (1) - finish on start of slider - ok
00:34:059 (2) - doesn't fit the song either. The important beat in the song here is the vocals which starts at 00:34:218 but the slider goes over it, which is bad for the rhythm. Split this slider up - ok fixed
00:36:758 (2) - finish on start of slider - ok
00:41:202 (7) - finish on end of slider - ok
00:41:837 (1) - finish on start of slider - ok
00:46:916 (1) - ^ - ok
00:47:392 (2) - finish - ok
00:48:186 (5) - finish on start of slider - ok
00:48:504 (6) - finish on end of slider - ok
00:49:139 (1) - finish - ok
00:49:139 (1,3,4) - blanket them - no
00:50:091 (4,5) - ^ - no
00:51:996 (1) - finish on start of slider - ok
00:53:424 (1,2) - blanket - i think, already .-. ?
00:53:583 (2,4) - ^ - ^
00:56:599 (4) - finish on end of slider
01:00:726 (2) - finish on start of slider
01:01:202 (4) - finish on end of slider
01:02:154 (3) - finish, NC here instead of 01:01:679 (1) as well
01:06:916 (2) - finish on end of slider
01:12:313 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:17:234 (5) - finish on end of slider
01:19:456 (4,5) - place the head of the slider lower than the previous circle for better flow and to look better too
01:22:155 (5) - finish on repeat end of slider
01:23:265 (3) - finish on end of slider
01:24:694 (1) - ^

I really don't like how you have so many sliders ending on white ticks where vocals or music phrases start, like 01:24:694 (1) - 00:55:488 (1) - 01:05:805 (1) and 01:13:107 (4,5) you throw the feel off by having the play be on the weaker beats instead of the stronger ones. It also lowers the quality of the rhythm used, which I honestly don't see much quality so far in these 3 difficulties. The patterns need more polishing, there is no blankets, not all stacks are proper, patterns overlap unnecessarily, flow changes suddenly sometimes. Use the hitsounds more for highlighting parts of the song. Your Guest Difficulties have better use of hitsounds by far, look at them and take reference. - T_T I'm still very bad at hitsound

Fort's Insane

00:20:726 (4,1,2) - I don't feel like this rhythm helps highlight the more important part of the song put NC on 00:20:726 (4) and remove 00:20:885 (1) and shift 00:21:202 (2) to start at 00:21:044 and end at 00:21:361 - ok
00:25:329 (2) - the stacking doesn't fit the song - idk what to do, maybe at this time, nothing change :>
00:27:075 (1,2,3) - sudden anti-jump, too unexpected and I don't feel it in the song - ^
00:47:393 (3) - don't squeeze the slider too much - ok
SPOILER
00:46:917 (1,5) - stack? - ok
00:49:139 (1) - finish on this note - ok
01:25:012 (1,7) - finish on the start of these sliders - ok

Too much 1/4 is used in the kiai when there really isn't much to go with in the song, using too many finishes repeatly also makes it very noisy, especially the start of it. The 1/4 just doesn't blend with the song and just makes everything look like it's overmapped for no reason - no comment because it was not me who made it still waiting for him to be active again ;_;

Insane

I can't see the form or proper rhythm a lot in Insane. - T_T

Kuro's Insane

00:46:441 (4,5) - align them to make it look better - ok
01:14:219 (3,2) - stack them exactly - ok

Would probably just need some fine tuning of the placement to make it look more neater and matching in movement. Other than that, it looks the best in the Standard set, the Kiai fits nicely, and it doesn't look overmapped with unnecessary 1/4s

Overall, I don't think the non-GDs are ready, and needs a lot of overhaul to be better.
Good Luck

thanks for your mod

i will improve my mapping skill ;_;
for easy, normal, hard, I'll fix it later

for insane, idk what must i do ;_; but, i'll try to fix that

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-10-21T09:25:32+00:00

ah just finishing mod, but okay fix something

Stalkfort

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: The Bravery (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 51679
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 49139,53901,61202,83821
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:The Bravery (TV Edit)
TitleUnicode:The Bravery (TV Edit)
Artist:supercell
ArtistUnicode:supercell
Creator:RzHr
Version:Fort's insane
Source:Magi : The Labyrinth Of Magic
Tags:2nd Ending Closing ryo Koeda こえだ Aladdin Alibaba Morgiana AxelHino Kuro Fuyusaki Fort IMMoRTalS Nardoxyribonucleic
BeatmapID:492958
BeatmapSetID:134165

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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88,216,73186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,176,73266,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,120,73425,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,156,73583,2,0,P|252:216|252:272,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,256,73901,2,0,P|72:260|4:224,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,144,74377,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,92,74536,2,0,P|136:80|192:100,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,44,74853,6,0,L|264:116,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,72,75012,2,0,L|328:136,1,42.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,144,75171,2,0,L|384:236,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,225,75409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
387,225,75488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,296,75647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,336,75805,2,0,P|304:324|248:336,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,276,76123,6,0,P|160:292|72:268,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,248,76440,2,0,L|44:140,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,176,76758,2,0,L|120:68,1,85,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,52,77075,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,112,77234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,52,77393,6,0,P|340:96|320:164,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,152,77710,2,0,B|396:208|396:208|428:336,1,170,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,360,78186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,320,78345,2,0,P|232:356|152:344,1,127.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,328,78663,6,0,L|152:224,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,252,78980,2,0,L|88:148,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,88,79298,2,0,P|156:56|248:60,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,80,79774,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,124,79932,2,0,P|376:196|356:236,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,80250,2,0,L|224:236,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,236,80488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,80567,6,0,L|144:284,1,42.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,248,80726,2,4,L|40:304,1,42.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,160,80885,2,0,L|144:104,1,127.5,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,64,81202,2,0,L|296:120,1,127.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,107,81520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,68,81678,2,0,P|360:124|396:148,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,160,81996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,160,82075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,160,82155,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,80,82313,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,252,82472,6,0,P|496:256|520:236,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,332,82790,2,0,P|268:328|244:348,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,276,83107,2,0,P|68:288|0:204,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,60,83583,2,0,P|100:56|212:108,1,170,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,52,84059,2,0,P|324:92|436:56,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,136,84536,1,2,0:0:0:0:
476,220,84694,2,0,P|424:208|376:216,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,248,85012,6,0,P|288:272|336:268,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,176,85329,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,332,85487,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,300,85567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,256,85646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,112,85805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,164,85964,2,0,P|428:176|476:168,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,112,86282,2,0,L|272:308,1,170,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,324,86758,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,328,86917,2,0,P|84:288|72:248,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,176,87234,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87552,12,4,90726,0:0:0:0:

Nwolf

2,627 posts

Joined September 2012

Nwolf 2014-10-21T12:26:08+00:00

woof c:

[General]

Timing is a little bit off, and I would try to fix stuff but naaah I don't think it will end good. Better ask somebody like Shiro or Charles445 since they are better at this than I am.

Below is a box and the chance that it is not 100% correct is there

just kiai

51996,314.13612565445,4,1,0,100,1,1
53252,315.789473684211,4,1,0,100,1,1
55778,317.460317460317,4,1,0,100,1,1
57048,319.148936170213,4,1,0,100,1,1
62154,317.460317460317,4,1,0,100,1,1
65963,315.789473684211,4,1,0,100,1,1
67226,317.460317460317,4,1,0,100,1,1
71035,319.148936170213,4,1,0,100,1,1
73587,309.278350515464,4,1,0,100,1,1
74824,320.855614973262,4,1,0,100,1,1
77390,317.460317460317,4,1,0,100,1,1
79929,315.789473684211,4,1,0,100,1,1
81192,319.148936170213,4,1,0,100,1,1
82468,317.460317460317,4,1,0,100,1,1
85007,322.58064516129,4,1,0,100,1,1
86297,309.278350515464,4,1,0,100,1,1
86915,312.5,4,1,0,100,1,1
87227,315.789473684211,4,1,0,100,1,1
87542,317.460317460317,4,1,0,100,1,1

[IMT's Muzukashii]

00:26:440 (99) - This note is too much, delete
*Use the triplets in kiai more consistent, they are very random right now
01:17:552 (112) - Delete, doesn't fit the way kiai is mapped

[AxelHino's Oni]

00:44:218 (110) - Delete to emphasis vocal start
00:48:821 (137) - y u no big kat
00:48:028 (131) - Delete since muzu is baka and has few notes here. Also ignore that I ordered this wrong
01:06:044 (88,89) - Delete 88, change 89 to don - neither of them fit the song atm
01:16:837 (161,162) - ^

[Nardo's Inner Oni]

01:24:218 (487,488,489,490,491,492,493) - Questioning the fittingness of this 7-plet a lot. Maybe delete 01:24:615 (492) -
01:27:155 (512) - Delete, sounds better

Quite nice diffs, good luck!

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-10-21T16:00:42+00:00

Nwolf wrote:
woof c:
Timing is a little bit off, and I would try to fix stuff but naaah I don't think it will end good. Better ask somebody like Shiro or Charles445 since they are better at this than I am. - I'm not sure, if you are not sure ... XD
maybe I'll ask later ....
but IMO, that's correct .-.

Btw, updated :> and remove insane from ummm...mapset?
I remove it because a reason

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2014-10-22T02:52:30+00:00

You got a few Insanes on the mapet already, so it should be fine

Tician

215 posts

Joined March 2013

Tician 2014-10-22T23:16:53+00:00

I was just talking to pishifat, cause of the timing, but nevermind here's just a thing he saw after around 10 seconds

Kuro's insane

00:32:949 (1,3) - unrankable stuff

OUt of the wikipedia:

All repeat arrows on sliders must be visible. Make sure that hitbursts (100s/300s/etc) from previous notes are not covering the repeat arrows or even the paths/ends of sliders (use the default skin to check if using hitbursts from another skin)

no Kudosu for that

AxelHino

1,734 posts

Joined July 2011

AxelHino 2014-10-23T09:42:38+00:00

Nwolf wrote:
[AxelHino's Oni]

00:44:218 (110) - Delete to emphasis vocal start done
00:48:821 (137) - y u no big kat done
00:48:028 (131) - Delete since muzu is baka and has few notes here. Also ignore that I ordered this wrong okeh
tweaked this part a little to fit cymbals in song
01:06:044 (88,89) - Delete 88, change 89 to don - neither of them fit the song atm done
01:16:837 (161,162) - ^ done~

Quite nice diffs, good luck!

Thankssss >w<
updated: http://puu.sh/cnbNQ/0c5c3933ad.osu

Nardoxyribonucleic

osu! Alumni

3,009 posts

Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2014-10-24T12:26:58+00:00

Nwolf wrote:
woof c:

[Nardo's Inner Oni]

01:24:218 (487,488,489,490,491,492,493) - Questioning the fittingness of this 7-plet a lot. Maybe delete 01:24:615 (492) - fixed
01:27:155 (512) - Delete, sounds better The 5-plet could give a better impact before the end of the song, so I would like to keep it.

Quite nice diffs, good luck!

Thanks for your mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/coAS7.rar

wasonz

713 posts

Joined July 2013

wasonz 2014-10-26T09:54:03+00:00

http://puu.sh/cr5RO/e6fbed9124.osu
fixed nwolf

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-10-29T12:09:56+00:00

updated, thanks :>

Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2014-10-31T07:31:19+00:00

quick bg mod

aspect ratio was 4:3 so I found a higher res version and cropped it to 16:9 then downscaled it to 768p.

image

no kudosu

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-10-31T19:06:58+00:00

Thanks Ringating

INTHEFLICKERING

79 posts

Joined March 2012

INTHEFLICKERING 2014-11-03T09:54:49+00:00

I love this song so much, please get it ranked!
I can't mod, so just some general stuff w

[General]

- I think you should change the source to ' マギ The labyrinth of magic ', the official Japanese name of the anime.

- Koeda's name in Japanese is こゑだ, not こえだ

wobble_owo

24 posts

Joined December 2013

wobble_owo 2014-11-03T17:45:32+00:00

My mod owo
Easy,Normal,Hard
- End the spinner from 01:09:193 to 01:11:044 here: 01:11:361 or do it like you did in the hard diff

Good work, you really should try to rank the map owo

Ipas

806 posts

Joined September 2013

Ipas 2014-11-04T13:24:22+00:00

General:
-Because of new rules, "(TV Edit)" must be deleted from the title :3
-Fort's insane -> "i" nya besarin :3

Easy:
00:11:837 (1,3) - Nadanya kurang pas deh :/
00:51:996 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Ini kepanjangan deh :3
01:12:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - :^)

Normal:
00:11:837 (1,1) - Nadanya kurang pas :/

Hard:
00:07:710 - Add note
00:46:917 (4) - NC :3

Fort's insane:
00:03:425 - Add note
00:41:044 (5) - Blanket please
00:49:298 - Add note
01:09:774 (1,2,3,4) - Gak pas nadanya :/ Change it pleaseeee ._.

Banyak nada kurang pas di kiai timenya. Khususnya di bagian slider 1/4 nya

Kuro's Insane:
00:07:234 Add note
00:08:504 - :^)
00:56:282 (3) - Ganti jadi circle aja

:3
"I'm a noob modder . . . . "

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-11-04T15:59:32+00:00

HotaruMiraiRin

HotaruMiraiRin wrote:
I love this song so much, please get it ranked!
I can't mod, so just some general stuff w

[General]

- I think you should change the source to ' マギ The labyrinth of magic ', the official Japanese name of the anime. - ok

- Koeda's name in Japanese is こゑだ, not こえだ - add こゑだ, and not remove こえだ because that's こゑだ (こえだ)

Thanks

wobble_owo

wobble_owo wrote:
My mod owo
Easy,Normal,Hard
- End the spinner from 01:09:193 to 01:11:044 here: 01:11:361 or do it like you did in the hard diff - nothing change, because that's easy & normal

Good work, you really should try to rank the map owo

Thanks but, sorry no kd

NewIpas

NewIpas wrote:
General:
-Because of new rules, "(TV Edit)" must be deleted from the title :3 - new rule ? .-.
-Fort's insane -> "i" nya besarin :3

Easy:
00:11:837 (1,3) - Nadanya kurang pas deh :/ - imo, pas
00:51:996 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Ini kepanjangan deh :3 - apanya ? :> combonya ? ga kok kayaknya
01:12:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - :^) - NC di 4

Normal:
00:11:837 (1,1) - Nadanya kurang pas :/ - imo lagi :>, pas kok

Hard:
00:07:710 - Add note - ok
00:46:917 (4) - NC :3 - ok

Thanks

Icing_wind

164 posts

Joined February 2014

Icing_wind 2014-11-05T04:51:14+00:00

Taiko Mod

[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[IMT's Muzukashii]
00:07:234 (29) - d
00:16:758 (64) - delete
00:17:393 - add k
00:49:298 (194) - d
[AxelHino's Oni]
00:02:948 (10) - d
00:05:488 (24) - k
00:10:250 (50,51,52,53) - dddk
00:14:377 - add k
00:14:536 (63) - d
01:03:901 (73,74,75) - ddk

good luck

NcrzX

22 posts

Joined November 2014

NcrzX 2014-11-05T09:22:19+00:00

From My queue sorry not much help
Easy :
00:50:091 I think should be here using spinner
00:33:266 you can add slider there

Normal :
00:38:345 you can add circle there
00:38:737 and there

Hard :
00:50:726 I think should be here using spinner

Mint

1,611 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2014-11-05T21:20:36+00:00

Hello RzHr! from my queue

General

* '(TV Edit)' title is fine. It's listed on the single.
* Could just be me, but I find that the sections at 00:11:202 till 00:31:679 are a little soft. Maybe you could increase the volume a bit? Could just be me, so you should look for more opinions about this >_>

Easy

* 00:05:964 (2) - The finish sound (which is much stronger than the guitar) starts 1/2 tick later. Maybe you could add a circle here and move the slider 1/2 tick later, or do something like you did at 00:08:663 (6) -
* 00:15:012 (4) - Shortening the slider by 1/2 tick and putting it on 00:15:171 sounds much bettger and this way you can focus on the high peaks of the vocals.
* 01:09:139 (1) - Same comment as the Hard diff.

A bit the same comment as the Normal diff. Some parts before the KIAI were quite awkward to play, since you didn't really focus on the high peaks of the vocals, but the KIAIs rhythm is really fun to play

Normal

* 00:01:837 (2,4) - These sliders aren't following anything. Make them 1/2 tick longer and delete (3)? Might be a little easy for a Normal diff, but thats sounds much better than it is right now.
* 00:11:679 (4) - I recommend having an extra note here. It's quite hard to suddenly click on a slider that starts on a red tick, and this gap is kinda awkward.
* 00:49:139 (5) - Why did you start this slider so early? It should start on the next large white tick. You can then place 1/1 note on here to follow the vocals.

* 01:07:869 (3,4) - Blanket is off.
* 01:09:139 (1) - Same comment as the Hard diff.

Could use some more work on the rhythm at the beginning of the song, like the rhythm you had in KIAI. The KIAI section was fun to play, so maybe you should copy some rhythms from the KIAI to the beginning

Hard

* 00:30:091 (1) - You were mainly following the vocals after this, so suddenly puitting a long slider here might not be a very good idea and could confuse some players as well.
Maybe you can try this rhythm to follow the vocals?

* 00:36:440 - Add a note? You're following the vocals here, and this one's missing.
* 00:41:520 - ^
* 01:06:599 (1,2) - Blanket?
* 01:07:869 (1,2) - ^
* 01:09:139 (1) - Why did you start the spinner here? The continuing 'ro' sound starts at 01:09:456 - Maybe you can start it a little later and map the vocals here.

Fort's insane

* Maybe you want to change your diff name to 'Fort's Insane'
* 00:04:059 (3,4,1) - I'd add a little spacing in between this. This 1/4 rhythm is really hard to read with these stacked on each other.

* 00:04:853 (3,4,1) - Same as above. But if you want to keep them, you should keep in mind that these or not (perfectly) stacked.
* 00:13:425 (4,5,6,7) - The flow with (6) could be improved. Try this?

* 00:14:536 (1,2,3) - Same as above. Shifting two a little bit could improve the flow of this combo.

* 00:40:567 (4,5) - Make this a blanket?
* 00:41:837 (1,2,3) - ^
* 01:23:583 (4) - Make a symmetry pattern by copying (3)?

Personally I don't have a big problems with overmapping, but I'm a little bit worried about what BAT/QATs think about the slight overmapping (use of 1/4) in the KIAI section, but overall it should be ok. Even though some parts were a little overmapped, you have a good rhythm going on!

Kuro's Insane

* 00:11:202 (1) - Listen closely with 25% speed. The finish on (2) should be here, and the whistle should be on (2), because the vocals are stronger there.
* 00:17:711 (1,2) - You could try to blanket these >_>
* 00:19:457 (2,1) - Personal preference, but the DS here is too small imo.
* 00:42:313 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These sliders are offbeat. They end on the strong part, while they should start on that part. Either move these sliders 1/2 tick earlier or 1/2 tick later.
* 01:03:584 (2,1) - Maybe you could blanket these as well.
* 01:15:965 (1) - The vocals starts 1/2 tick later on the large white tick. I highly recommend moving this slider.
* 00:22:075 (3,4,8) - (8) is not perfectly stacked with (3,4)

Couldn't find too much in this diff. Overall, it plays quite nice and is quite fun ^^

Mainly in the easier diffs there could be some work in the rhythm, but maybe that's just your style. Sorry if this mod was short, but I think with the suggestions I gave you should have an idea what you can improve in your map. Overall, fun map and good luck

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-11-07T12:34:27+00:00

NcrzX

NcrzX wrote:
From My queue sorry not much help
Easy :
00:50:091 I think should be here using spinner - because I more dominant follow the vocals, maybe not. And because if i use it there, the end of the spinner must be 00:51:361 or 00:51:679 there's no time for recovery
00:33:266 you can add slider there - no

Normal :
00:38:345 you can add circle there - no
00:38:737 and there - no

Hard :
00:50:726 I think should be here using spinner - same with easy

appleeaterx

appleeaterx wrote:
Hello RzHr! from my queue

:idea: General

* '(TV Edit)' title is fine. It's listed on the single.
* Could just be me, but I find that the sections at 00:11:202 till 00:31:679 are a little soft. Maybe you could increase the volume a bit? Could just be me, so you should look for more opinions about this >_> - nothing change :>

Easy

* 00:05:964 (2) - The finish sound (which is much stronger than the guitar) starts 1/2 tick later. Maybe you could add a circle here and move the slider 1/2 tick later, or do something like you did at 00:08:663 (6) - ok
* 00:15:012 (4) - Shortening the slider by 1/2 tick and putting it on 00:15:171 sounds much bettger and this way you can focus on the high peaks of the vocals. - I think it's no problem
* 01:09:139 (1) - Same comment as the Hard diff. - why not write it on easy XD and on the next diff write "same with easy"... btw, at first time I did it, but I think now is better :>

A bit the same comment as the Normal diff. Some parts before the KIAI were quite awkward to play, since you didn't really focus on the high peaks of the vocals, but the KIAIs rhythm is really fun to play - imo, there is nothing wrong before the KIAI.... maybe :>

Normal

* 00:01:837 (2,4) - These sliders aren't following anything. Make them 1/2 tick longer and delete (3)? Might be a little easy for a Normal diff, but thats sounds much better than it is right now. - no
* 00:11:679 (4) - I recommend having an extra note here. It's quite hard to suddenly click on a slider that starts on a red tick, and this gap is kinda awkward. - i think that's fine .-.
* 00:49:139 (5) - Why did you start this slider so early? It should start on the next large white tick. You can then place 1/1 note on here to follow the vocals. - I don't know why I do that, but I think it still fits.... nothing change

* 01:07:869 (3,4) - Blanket is off. - fixed :> (maybe)
* 01:09:139 (1) - Same comment as the Hard diff. - Same reason with easy

Could use some more work on the rhythm at the beginning of the song, like the rhythm you had in KIAI. The KIAI section was fun to play, so maybe you should copy some rhythms from the KIAI to the beginning - same with easy

Hard

* 00:30:091 (1) - You were mainly following the vocals after this, so suddenly puitting a long slider here might not be a very good idea and could confuse some players as well. - no
Maybe you can try this rhythm to follow the vocals?

* 00:36:440 - Add a note? You're following the vocals here, and this one's missing. - ok :>
* 00:41:520 - ^ - no vocals here .-.
* 01:06:599 (1,2) - Blanket? - I feel a bit weird if i see this is blanket
* 01:07:869 (1,2) - ^ - ^
* 01:09:139 (1) - Why did you start the spinner here? The continuing 'ro' sound starts at 01:09:456 - Maybe you can start it a little later and map the vocals here. - same with easy

Mainly in the easier diffs there could be some work in the rhythm, but maybe that's just your style. Sorry if this mod was short, but I think with the suggestions I gave you should have an idea what you can improve in your map. Overall, fun map and good luck - maybe :>

thanks for your help

Nyxa

848 posts

Joined October 2013

Nyxa 2014-11-07T19:46:35+00:00

Hi, from my M4M queue

General

Correct offset is 250. You won't have to resnap any objects.
It feels like you pay very little attention to the rhythm and just make a rhythm of your own that sort of follows the song but not really. Try to listen in the future to what the music is telling you, and base your beatmap off of that.

Easy

00:19:298 (7) - Make this symmetrical
00:22:631 (2) - ^
00:27:075 (1) - Fix blanket
00:28:980 (3) - Fix blanket
00:30:091 (4) - Make this a little rounder, it doesn't look very good
00:41:837 (4) - Fix blanket
00:46:917 (3) - Fix blanket
01:07:869 (4) - This should end 1/1 later. Adjust the slider afterwards (you already muted it so it doesn't matter too much if you have to end it slightly early, I think. No more than 1/2 though.)
01:19:298 (5) - Add a clap on the end
01:20:885 (1) - Make this symmetrical

Normal

00:11:837 (1) - This should be either a 1/2 slider or a single hitcircle
00:12:472 (2,3,4) - Why don't you delete (4) and change (3) into a return slider and (2) into a 3/2 slider? like this
00:19:298 (2) - This should be 1/2
00:14:377 (1,2) - ^
00:15:964 (4) - This should be 1/1
00:16:758 (5) - This should be a circle on the white tick, and then a 1/1 return slider on the red
00:21:044 (5) - This should be a 2/1 slider
00:21:996 (1) - 1/1
00:25:012 (5) - 3/2
00:28:028 (3) - Fix blanket
00:28:980 (5) - Fix blanket
00:35:964 (7) - Fix blanket
00:36:758 (1) - Make symmetrical
00:39:615 (4) - You used a 1/2 before, why not here?
00:43:107 (3) - Fix blanket
00:45:647 (6) - ^
00:49:139 (5) - Make this into a symmetrical 3/1 slider, then delete (6) and place another 3/1 slider on 00:50:726 -
00:52:948 (3) - Fix blanket
00:56:122 (2) - Why didn't you hitsound this sliderend?
00:58:662 (2) - Blanket
01:02:154 (3) - A clap doesn't fit here at all, place it on the end of 01:02:472 (4) - instead
01:04:694 (2) - Clap doesn't fit
01:06:599 (1) - Blanket
01:08:186 (4) - Blanket
01:14:536 (5) - Remove clap from the sliderend
01:16:440 (2) - Place clap on the sliderend
01:17:710 (4) - ^
01:17:392 (3) - Remove clap
01:19:298 (3) - Only leave a clap on the return
01:21:202 (2) - Blanket
01:24:059 (6) - Move this to the left slightly or it's hard to read

Hard

00:06:123 (4) - Fix this slider shape, make it curvier
00:09:932 (1) - ^, except here you should just make it form a more symmetrical half circle
00:07:869 (2) - Add clap
00:09:298 (2) - Add clap on the end
00:10:409 (2,3,4) - Overmapping in a Hard? Really?
00:13:107 (4,5,6) - I don't see how you're hearing any 1/2's here if you're mapping after the vocals
00:15:171 (3,4) - This doesn't fit the music just like in the Normal
00:22:155 (2,3) - ^
00:27:076 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:35:012 (3,4,5) - ^
00:40:091 (3,4,5) - ^
00:15:964 (5,6) - I really don't see why you're placing 1/2 sliders everywhere
00:19:456 (4) - ^
00:20:409 (6,7) - ^
00:46:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:52:948 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:55:488 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:58:028 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:02:472 (5) - ^
01:04:059 (1,3) - ^
01:06:599 (1) - ^
01:07:869 (1) - ^
01:13:266 (2,3) - ^
01:15:806 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:18:345 (1,2) - ^
01:20:885 (1,2) - ^
01:24:694 (1) - ^
01:14:694 (1,2) - ^ - This is exceptionally wrong because they start on red ticks where they don't fit at all
01:17:552 (6) - ^
01:25:806 (4,5) - ^
00:31:679 (1) - Fix this slidershape, it's not curving properly at all
00:41:837 (1) - ^
00:45:647 (3) - ^
00:51:996 (1) - ^
00:55:012 (8) - Why would you place a hitcircle on a white tick just to place a slider on a red tick afterwards, where it doesn't fit at all?
00:57:393 (6,7) - ^ - I do have to say that it's good that you're consistent, that's something that you shouldn't change. You just need to improve the things you're consistent with.
00:59:932 (6,7) - ^
00:59:298 (5) - Make this symmetrical
01:00:567 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't really fit because you're ending the sliders with claps, making them into downbeats that end on red ticks, which doesn't really make sense, and second because there's absolutely nothing there in the music to support those sliders, and they don't play very nicely either. I understand that you want to follow the elongated notes in the vocals but this is not the way to do it. Use hit circles instead, or two return sliders.
01:26:917 (7) - This could've been a triple, you know

So there's a recurring issue with the 1/2 sliders - I'm not really sure why you placed them there, but all those things prevent me from even getting into the flow aspect of your map because they're there throughout the whole thing and they don't fit the song at all, so I suggest you remap and use more hitcircles instead. You shouldn't map to sounds that aren't in the song, especially not on a Hard. I noticed that you like to use sliders a lot - there are barely any hit circles in any of your diffs. That's not good. You need to have a healthy balance between sliders, spinners and hit circles or else your map will feel off or repetitive. Also, another issue I kept seeing was that you don't listen to the song's rhythm much, if it all. Your map only mildly follows the song, and that isn't how you're supposed to map. It has to follow the song 1:1, preferably, accentuating beats that need to be accentuated. Lastly, I'll advise you to not start sliders on red ticks at all, for now, unless you're absolutely sure that it fits there. Consult another (experienced) mapper if you're not sure about it. You're always free to PM me in-game but I might be busy, so don't yell at me when I am.

I have to go but if you apply these changes I'll also take a look at the GDs later. Good luck!

Last edited by Nyxa 2014-11-08T07:16:41+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

mintong89

3,699 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2014-11-08T01:20:06+00:00

Hi, Mod request from my queue.

[General]

00:11:351 - Please add a red line at here for beat stanza change.

[Nardo's Inner Oni]

00:36:430 (166) - I'd prefer you to delete this note for more empathize the cymbal before and after this note, or just k it for better rhythm.
00:41:509 (197) - ^
00:47:382 (233) - & 00:47:858 (237) - & 00:48:652 (243) - & 00:49:128 (247) - How about K these all too? because the music snare at these note are same with 00:46:907 (229) - & 00:48:175 (239) - these.
00:51:985 - First part of note rhythm sound weird, how about this?:

SPOILER

01:00:795 - => 01:01:350 - These sound quite overmap and not fit to music imo, because the rhythm of the music just two cymbal and one snare. So how about try this?: delete all and add D at 01:00:716 (316) - here and 01:01:350 (322) - here, then 01:01:191 (321) - add a k at here.
01:05:795 (354) - k here, the vocal still didn't fade down at here yet.

[AxelHino's Oni]

00:02:462 (7) - Move this to 00:02:303 - here for more fit to the song?
00:51:986 (1) - D here for empathize the beginning of chorus?
00:57:065 (34) - Should be D here too for cymbal.
01:22:462 - D here for cymbal.

[IMT's Muzukashii]

00:31:669 (118) - D for cymbal.
00:51:986 (1) - K here for empathize the beginning of chorus?
01:08:811 (73,74,75,76) - It shouldn't have ddk at Muzukashii because Muzukashii player might not able to play it, and this is high BPM too. so change to ddd or kkk?
01:17:065 (110) - I don't see reason to K this.

A lot of cymbal you didn't big note it, so I recommend you to take a look of Nardo's Oni to big note in a correct way.

Good Luck!

Natsu

8,100 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-11-08T08:09:49+00:00

Did some IRC, mainly helping with rhythm in hard diff

SPOILER

2014-11-08 01:08 RzHr: natsu
2014-11-08 01:08 Natsu: RzHr
2014-11-08 01:10 RzHr: can you help me ? :<
2014-11-08 01:10 Natsu: probably, what do you need?
2014-11-08 01:10 RzHr: can you check my map? because some mod say the rhythm still not fit... idk, imo it fits, maybe you can help ? :D
2014-11-08 01:12 Natsu: link me your map 
2014-11-08 01:12 RzHr: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/427228 supercell - The Bravery (TV Edit)]
2014-11-08 01:15 Natsu: so what's the problem here
2014-11-08 01:16 RzHr: the rythm
2014-11-08 01:18 Natsu: lets see
2014-11-08 01:18 Natsu: 00:11:827 (1,2) -  for example here the rhythm sound really bad, since seems like you are trying to follow the vocals, but in a wrong way (hard diff)
2014-11-08 01:20 Natsu: http://puu.sh/cHSsE/1cdc64b08f.jpg  this will be a better way
2014-11-08 01:20 Natsu: 00:14:367 (1) -  same happen here, the problem is that you don't follow the main beats
2014-11-08 01:21 Natsu: this kind of popular problem when mapping, people don't follow he prominent beats in the song
2014-11-08 01:21 Natsu: since if you hear a strong sound, you should map it as slider head or circle, but never ignored or as slider tail
2014-11-08 01:23 Natsu: another example where a bad rhythm is used is here 00:19:287 (3,4,5,6,7) -  youa re following every vocal as a clickable object, but you fail following it with 00:19:764 (5) -  since is the only slider that broke your rhythm
2014-11-08 01:24 Natsu: try this: http://puu.sh/cHSD7/abf6bf548c.jpg
2014-11-08 01:27 Natsu: you there xD¿?
2014-11-08 01:27 RzHr: yeah XD
2014-11-08 01:28 Natsu: 00:24:526 (2,3,4) -  here you are following that whistles? or w/e that is, but you break it with 00:25:954 (5) - 
2014-11-08 01:28 Natsu: instead of a 1/1 slider a 1/2 will follow the melody a lot better
2014-11-08 01:29 Natsu: 00:30:081 (1) -  http://puu.sh/cHSQl/9cb8fa619c.jpg
2014-11-08 01:30 Natsu: 01:09:128 (1) -  also this spinner seems random in the midle of the chorus
2014-11-08 01:32 Natsu: 00:27:224 (2,3,4,5) - in a lot of parts, your spacing is really short and cause this kind of overlaps orz, try to use more spacing to avoid them in general
2014-11-08 01:32 RzHr: at first time, the spinner start from 01:09:446
2014-11-08 01:34 Natsu: mmm maybe use 1.20 spacing? abut the spinner is just my opinion, but I feel that part will be more fun mapped with slider and circles 
2014-11-08 01:34 RzHr: ok :D
2014-11-08 01:34 Natsu: 01:00:557 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -  oh your spacing in the kiai look a lot better
2014-11-08 01:35 RzHr: hmm... about the spinner because I think I follow the vocals, so i put the spinner there .-.
2014-11-08 01:37 Natsu: if you are really following the vocals, this will fit better than your long spinner https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2215440
2014-11-08 01:37 Natsu: don't mind theplacement
2014-11-08 01:38 RzHr: 00:10:399 (2,3,4) - ah right, did you think, this is overmapped ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:39 Natsu: lol that's not overmaped, overmapping = adding objects with nothing in the music
2014-11-08 01:39 Natsu: 00:10:399 (2,3,4) -  but this ahve a wrong rhythm 
2014-11-08 01:40 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2215445
2014-11-08 01:40 RzHr: because that's a mod say that XD
2014-11-08 01:42 RzHr: ok :> fixed
2014-11-08 01:42 Natsu: btw no boy complaining for your combo usage?
2014-11-08 01:44 RzHr: combo usage ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:45 RzHr: something like NC ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:46 Natsu: yeah
2014-11-08 01:46 Natsu: btw this timing is wrong o.o
2014-11-08 01:46 Natsu: 00:01:034 - first red line should be here
2014-11-08 01:46 RzHr: at first ... ummm yeterday... i change it from -67 to 240
2014-11-08 01:47 RzHr: ok :> i'ill fix
2014-11-08 01:49 Natsu: 00:31:669 - and probably you will need another red line with the same bpm there
2014-11-08 01:50 Natsu: to reset the offset
2014-11-08 01:51 RzHr: "00:11:351 - Please add a red line at here for beat stanza change"  there also ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:52 Natsu: who said that¿?
2014-11-08 01:53 RzHr: mintong89
2014-11-08 01:53 Natsu: nah I think you need it in 00:31:669 -
2014-11-08 01:53 Natsu: there is where the shift happen I think
2014-11-08 01:54 Natsu: anyways, ask to captin1 he is good at timing just to be sure
2014-11-08 01:54 RzHr: ok :D i'll ask later

Kuro Fuyusaki

609 posts

Joined May 2013

Kuro Fuyusaki 2014-11-08T10:03:23+00:00

taking too much break, i'll start editing right away ~_~

wasonz

713 posts

Joined July 2013

wasonz 2014-11-08T10:39:01+00:00

Icing_wind wrote:
[box=Taiko Mod][General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[IMT's Muzukashii]
00:07:234 (29) - d no
00:16:758 (64) - delete lol no !
00:17:393 - add k nope
00:49:298 (194) - d

good luck

mintong89 wrote:
[General]

00:11:351 - Please add a red line at here for beat stanza change.

[IMT's Muzukashii]

00:31:669 (118) - D for cymbal.
00:51:986 (1) - K here for empathize the beginning of chorus?
01:08:811 (73,74,75,76) - It shouldn't have ddk at Muzukashii because Muzukashii player might not able to play it, and this is high BPM too. so change to ddd or kkk?
01:17:065 (110) - I don't see reason to K this.

A lot of cymbal you didn't big note it, so I recommend you to take a look of Nardo's Oni to big note in a correct way.

ok ok ok ok .......

Good Luck!

update !

Kuro Fuyusaki

609 posts

Joined May 2013

Kuro Fuyusaki 2014-11-08T11:25:08+00:00

just some repost =.=

Last edited by Kuro Fuyusaki 2014-11-09T01:29:19+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kuro Fuyusaki

609 posts

Joined May 2013

Kuro Fuyusaki 2014-11-08T11:25:44+00:00

Huee, here's the new version of the GD,,,,looking forward to the rank :3

Kuro's Insane

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120,288,85319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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428,120,87224,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87541,12,0,90716,0:0:0:0:

can't feedback all of the mod, sry

Last edited by Kuro Fuyusaki 2014-11-09T01:33:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

AxelHino

1,734 posts

Joined July 2011

AxelHino 2014-11-08T14:50:36+00:00

Icing_wind wrote:
Taiko Mod
[AxelHino's Oni]
00:02:948 (10) - d ok
00:05:488 (24) - k no, since kdk sounds awkward
00:10:250 (50,51,52,53) - dddk No, since the ddd doesn't sound right, like it's to subdues by the music itself so it doesn't stand out quite as much as kkk
00:14:377 - add k no, to maintain consistency with the earlier part
00:14:536 (63) - d ^
01:03:901 (73,74,75) - ddk nope, for consistency
good luck

mintong89 wrote:
Hi, Mod request from my queue.

[AxelHino's Oni]

00:02:462 (7) - Move this to 00:02:303 - here for more fit to the song? that sounds nice~ ok
00:51:986 (1) - D here for empathize the beginning of chorus? sounds ok
00:57:065 (34) - Should be D here too for cymbal. ^
01:22:462 - D here for cymbal. added and removed following note

Good Luck!

Thanks, both of you! :3

updated: http://puu.sh/cIbKy/ea38cb9b63.osu

Nardoxyribonucleic

osu! Alumni

3,009 posts

Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2014-11-08T16:28:49+00:00

mintong89 wrote:
Hi, Mod request from my queue.

[General]

00:11:351 - Please add a red line at here for beat stanza change. fixed

[Nardo's Inner Oni]

00:36:430 (166) - I'd prefer you to delete this note for more empathize the cymbal before and after this note, or just k it for better rhythm. I would like to map the vocal there because I followed it all the way.
00:41:509 (197) - ^ Retained for pattern consistency as ^
00:47:382 (233) - & 00:47:858 (237) - & 00:48:652 (243) - & 00:49:128 (247) - How about K these all too? because the music snare at these note are same with 00:46:907 (229) - & 00:48:175 (239) - these. I think the music in this part has two layers, so at the start of each layer I used one big kat to represent it.
00:51:985 - First part of note rhythm sound weird, how about this?:
SPOILER
fixed with some variations.
01:00:795 - => 01:01:350 - These sound quite overmap and not fit to music imo, because the rhythm of the music just two cymbal and one snare. So how about try this?: delete all and add D at 01:00:716 (316) - here and 01:01:350 (322) - here, then 01:01:191 (321) - add a k at here. I don't really think so... The triplets could accompany the vocal and bring a bigger impact before 01:01:668 (324,325,326,327) - .
01:05:795 (354) - k here, the vocal still didn't fade down at here yet. d could result in a smoother flow of notes imo.

Good Luck!

Thanks for your mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/cIhpX.rar

Nyxa

848 posts

Joined October 2013

Nyxa 2014-11-10T17:40:27+00:00

Is RzHr still going to reply to my mod or what?

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-11-11T13:23:01+00:00

Tess wrote:
Is RzHr still going to reply to my mod or what?

I'm here XD trying to increase the number of circles, I'll update after i finish that

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-11-11T15:09:41+00:00

Tess

Tess wrote:
Hi, from my M4M queue

General
Correct offset is 250. You won't have to resnap any objects. - 1033
It feels like you pay very little attention to the rhythm and just make a rhythm of your own that sort of follows the song but not really. Try to listen in the future to what the music is telling you, and base your beatmap off of that.

Easy
00:19:298 (7) - Make this symmetrical - because I will increase the number of circles, it will be many changes. Later, if I find a slider form like this, i will make it symmetrical
00:22:631 (2) - ^ - ^
00:27:075 (1) - Fix blanket - ^same reason with blanket.... but, IMO, there is already blanket .-.
00:28:980 (3) - Fix blanket - ^
00:30:091 (4) - Make this a little rounder, it doesn't look very good - ok, if i make slider like this again
00:41:837 (4) - Fix blanket - same reason with before
00:46:917 (3) - Fix blanket - ^
01:07:869 (4) - This should end 1/1 later. Adjust the slider afterwards (you already muted it so it doesn't matter too much if you have to end it slightly early, I think. No more than 1/2 though.) - maybe no .-.
01:19:298 (5) - Add a clap on the end - ok
01:20:885 (1) - Make this symmetrical - like before

Normal
00:11:837 (1) - This should be either a 1/2 slider or a single hitcircle - may later be changed, but I get the point
00:12:472 (2,3,4) - Why don't you delete (4) and change (3) into a return slider and (2) into a 3/2 slider? like this - ok
00:19:298 (2) - This should be 1/2 -same like first reason on this diff
00:14:377 (1,2) - ^ - ^
00:15:964 (4) - This should be 1/1 - ^
00:16:758 (5) - This should be a circle on the white tick, and then a 1/1 return slider on the red - I don't think it will fit
00:21:044 (5) - This should be a 2/1 slider - same like first reason on thisl diff
00:21:996 (1) - 1/1 - ^
00:25:012 (5) - 3/2 - ^
00:28:028 (3) - Fix blanket - same reason like before
00:28:980 (5) - Fix blanket - ^
00:35:964 (7) - Fix blanket - ^
00:36:758 (1) - Make symmetrical - ^
00:39:615 (4) - You used a 1/2 before, why not here? - Ups, i didn't notice this XD
00:43:107 (3) - Fix blanket - same before
00:45:647 (6) - ^ - ^
00:49:139 (5) - Make this into a symmetrical 3/1 slider, then delete (6) and place another 3/1 slider on 00:50:726 - maybe, I had to change this part from easy to normal
00:52:948 (3) - Fix blanket - same before
00:56:122 (2) - Why didn't you hitsound this sliderend? - maybe at the kiai, i'll make it like hard diff.
00:58:662 (2) - Blanket - same before
01:02:154 (3) - A clap doesn't fit here at all, place it on the end of 01:02:472 (4) - instead - same reason... kiai time
01:04:694 (2) - Clap doesn't fit - ^
01:06:599 (1) - Blanket - same before
01:08:186 (4) - Blanket - ^
01:14:536 (5) - Remove clap from the sliderend - same before
01:16:440 (2) - Place clap on the sliderend - ^
01:17:710 (4) - ^ - ^
01:17:392 (3) - Remove clap - ^
01:19:298 (3) - Only leave a clap on the return - ^
01:21:202 (2) - Blanket - same
01:24:059 (6) - Move this to the left slightly or it's hard to read - if I don't re- this BM. maybe after that, will coming mod that say to stack this :>

Hard
00:06:123 (4) - Fix this slider shape, make it curvier - ok
00:09:932 (1) - ^, except here you should just make it form a more symmetrical half circle - ok
00:07:869 (2) - Add clap - ok
00:09:298 (2) - Add clap on the end - little strange .-. maybe no
00:10:409 (2,3,4) - Overmapping in a Hard? Really? - not overmapping, btw... but, fixed :>
00:13:107 (4,5,6) - I don't see how you're hearing any 1/2's here if you're mapping after the vocals - fix
00:15:171 (3,4) - This doesn't fit the music just like in the Normal - ^
00:22:155 (2,3) - ^ - ^
00:27:076 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ - ^
00:35:012 (3,4,5) - ^ - i think, this is fine
00:40:091 (3,4,5) - ^ - ^
00:15:964 (5,6) - I really don't see why you're placing 1/2 sliders everywhere - lol, i'll fix it too
00:19:456 (4) - ^ - ^
00:20:409 (6,7) - ^ - ^
00:46:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ - ^
00:52:948 (2,3,4,5) - ^ - ^
00:55:488 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - ^
00:58:028 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - ^
01:02:472 (5) - ^ - ^
01:04:059 (1,3) - ^ - ^
01:06:599 (1) - ^ - ^
01:07:869 (1) - ^ - ^
01:13:266 (2,3) - ^ - ^
01:15:806 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - ^
01:18:345 (1,2) - ^ - ^
01:20:885 (1,2) - ^ - ^
01:24:694 (1) - ^ - ^
01:14:694 (1,2) - ^ - This is exceptionally wrong because they start on red ticks where they don't fit at all - imo this is fit .-. but idk maybe this will be change later
01:17:552 (6) - ^ - maybe i'll change this into a circle
01:25:806 (4,5) - ^ - fix later
00:31:679 (1) - Fix this slidershape, it's not curving properly at all - b-b-but this one is cute but, ok
00:41:837 (1) - ^ - ^
00:45:647 (3) - ^ - ^
00:51:996 (1) - ^ - ^
00:55:012 (8) - Why would you place a hitcircle on a white tick just to place a slider on a red tick afterwards, where it doesn't fit at all? - fix
00:57:393 (6,7) - ^ - I do have to say that it's good that you're consistent, that's something that you shouldn't change. You just need to improve the things you're consistent with. - ok :>
00:59:932 (6,7) - ^ - ^
00:59:298 (5) - Make this symmetrical - same like before
01:00:567 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't really fit because you're ending the sliders with claps, making them into downbeats that end on red ticks, which doesn't really make sense, and second because there's absolutely nothing there in the music to support those sliders, and they don't play very nicely either. I understand that you want to follow the elongated notes in the vocals but this is not the way to do it. Use hit circles instead, or two return sliders. - claps ? there is nothing there .-. but, ok i'll fix later
01:26:917 (7) - This could've been a triple, you know - ok

So there's a recurring issue with the 1/2 sliders - I'm not really sure why you placed them there, but all those things prevent me from even getting into the flow aspect of your map because they're there throughout the whole thing and they don't fit the song at all, so I suggest you remap and use more hitcircles instead. You shouldn't map to sounds that aren't in the song, especially not on a Hard. I noticed that you like to use sliders a lot - there are barely any hit circles in any of your diffs. That's not good. You need to have a healthy balance between sliders, spinners and hit circles or else your map will feel off or repetitive. Also, another issue I kept seeing was that you don't listen to the song's rhythm much, if it all. Your map only mildly follows the song, and that isn't how you're supposed to map. It has to follow the song 1:1, preferably, accentuating beats that need to be accentuated. Lastly, I'll advise you to not start sliders on red ticks at all, for now, unless you're absolutely sure that it fits there. Consult another (experienced) mapper if you're not sure about it. You're always free to PM me in-game but I might be busy, so don't yell at me when I am. - at first I didn't pay attention... but, after seeing another people BM, it may be true also .-.

I have to go but if you apply these changes I'll also take a look at the GDs later. Good luck!

Natsu

Natsu wrote:

Did some IRC, mainly helping with rhythm in hard diff

2014-11-08 01:08 RzHr: natsu
2014-11-08 01:08 Natsu: RzHr
2014-11-08 01:10 RzHr: can you help me ? :<
2014-11-08 01:10 Natsu: probably, what do you need?
2014-11-08 01:10 RzHr: can you check my map? because some mod say the rhythm still not fit... idk, imo it fits, maybe you can help ? :D
2014-11-08 01:12 Natsu: link me your map 
2014-11-08 01:12 RzHr: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/427228 supercell - The Bravery (TV Edit)]
2014-11-08 01:15 Natsu: so what's the problem here
2014-11-08 01:16 RzHr: the rythm
2014-11-08 01:18 Natsu: lets see
2014-11-08 01:18 Natsu: 00:11:827 (1,2) -  for example here the rhythm sound really bad, since seems like you are trying to follow the vocals, but in a wrong way (hard diff)
2014-11-08 01:20 Natsu: http://puu.sh/cHSsE/1cdc64b08f.jpg  this will be a better way
2014-11-08 01:20 Natsu: 00:14:367 (1) -  same happen here, the problem is that you don't follow the main beats
2014-11-08 01:21 Natsu: this kind of popular problem when mapping, people don't follow he prominent beats in the song
2014-11-08 01:21 Natsu: since if you hear a strong sound, you should map it as slider head or circle, but never ignored or as slider tail
2014-11-08 01:23 Natsu: another example where a bad rhythm is used is here 00:19:287 (3,4,5,6,7) -  youa re following every vocal as a clickable object, but you fail following it with 00:19:764 (5) -  since is the only slider that broke your rhythm
2014-11-08 01:24 Natsu: try this: http://puu.sh/cHSD7/abf6bf548c.jpg
2014-11-08 01:27 Natsu: you there xD¿?
2014-11-08 01:27 RzHr: yeah XD
2014-11-08 01:28 Natsu: 00:24:526 (2,3,4) -  here you are following that whistles? or w/e that is, but you break it with 00:25:954 (5) - 
2014-11-08 01:28 Natsu: instead of a 1/1 slider a 1/2 will follow the melody a lot better
2014-11-08 01:29 Natsu: 00:30:081 (1) -  http://puu.sh/cHSQl/9cb8fa619c.jpg
2014-11-08 01:30 Natsu: 01:09:128 (1) -  also this spinner seems random in the midle of the chorus
2014-11-08 01:32 Natsu: 00:27:224 (2,3,4,5) - in a lot of parts, your spacing is really short and cause this kind of overlaps orz, try to use more spacing to avoid them in general
2014-11-08 01:32 RzHr: at first time, the spinner start from 01:09:446
2014-11-08 01:34 Natsu: mmm maybe use 1.20 spacing? abut the spinner is just my opinion, but I feel that part will be more fun mapped with slider and circles 
2014-11-08 01:34 RzHr: ok :D
2014-11-08 01:34 Natsu: 01:00:557 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -  oh your spacing in the kiai look a lot better
2014-11-08 01:35 RzHr: hmm... about the spinner because I think I follow the vocals, so i put the spinner there .-.
2014-11-08 01:37 Natsu: if you are really following the vocals, this will fit better than your long spinner https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2215440
2014-11-08 01:37 Natsu: don't mind theplacement
2014-11-08 01:38 RzHr: 00:10:399 (2,3,4) - ah right, did you think, this is overmapped ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:39 Natsu: lol that's not overmaped, overmapping = adding objects with nothing in the music
2014-11-08 01:39 Natsu: 00:10:399 (2,3,4) -  but this ahve a wrong rhythm 
2014-11-08 01:40 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2215445
2014-11-08 01:40 RzHr: because that's a mod say that XD
2014-11-08 01:42 RzHr: ok :> fixed
2014-11-08 01:42 Natsu: btw no boy complaining for your combo usage?
2014-11-08 01:44 RzHr: combo usage ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:45 RzHr: something like NC ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:46 Natsu: yeah
2014-11-08 01:46 Natsu: btw this timing is wrong o.o
2014-11-08 01:46 Natsu: 00:01:034 - first red line should be here
2014-11-08 01:46 RzHr: at first ... ummm yeterday... i change it from -67 to 240
2014-11-08 01:47 RzHr: ok :> i'ill fix
2014-11-08 01:49 Natsu: 00:31:669 - and probably you will need another red line with the same bpm there
2014-11-08 01:50 Natsu: to reset the offset
2014-11-08 01:51 RzHr: "00:11:351 - Please add a red line at here for beat stanza change"  there also ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:52 Natsu: who said that¿?
2014-11-08 01:53 RzHr: mintong89
2014-11-08 01:53 Natsu: nah I think you need it in 00:31:669 -
2014-11-08 01:53 Natsu: there is where the shift happen I think
2014-11-08 01:54 Natsu: anyways, ask to captin1 he is good at timing just to be sure
2014-11-08 01:54 RzHr: ok :D i'll ask later

Thanks for your help

Umm... will update after i fix them

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-11-16T09:08:59+00:00

dafuq where my previous update. oh i cri

Fix hitsounding

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: The Bravery (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 51668
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 49128,53890,61192,83811
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:The Bravery (TV Edit)
TitleUnicode:The Bravery (TV Edit)
Artist:supercell
ArtistUnicode:supercell
Creator:RzHr
Version:Fort's insane
Source:マギ The labyrinth of magic
Tags:2nd Ending ED Closing ryo Koeda こゑだ こえだ Magi Aladdin Alibaba Morgiana AxelHino Kuro Fuyusaki Fort IMMoRTalS Nardoxyribonucleic Anime Short Version Size
BeatmapID:492958
BeatmapSetID:134165

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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188,196,71351,1,4,0:0:0:0:
344,132,71510,2,0,L|320:20,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,72,71827,1,4,0:0:0:0:
444,148,71986,2,0,P|484:188|456:272,1,127.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,288,72303,6,0,L|324:264,1,85,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,324,72621,2,0,L|172:300,1,85,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,332,72938,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,256,73097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,216,73176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,176,73256,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,120,73415,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,156,73573,2,0,P|252:216|252:272,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,256,73891,2,0,P|72:260|4:224,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,144,74367,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,92,74526,2,0,P|136:80|192:100,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,44,74843,6,0,L|264:116,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,72,75002,2,0,L|328:136,1,42.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,144,75161,2,0,L|384:236,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,225,75399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
387,225,75478,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,296,75637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,336,75795,2,0,P|304:324|248:336,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,276,76113,6,0,P|160:292|72:268,1,127.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,248,76430,2,0,L|44:140,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,176,76748,2,0,L|120:68,1,85,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,52,77065,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,112,77224,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,52,77383,6,0,P|340:96|320:164,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,152,77700,2,8,B|396:208|396:208|428:336,1,170,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,360,78176,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,320,78335,2,0,P|232:356|152:344,1,127.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,328,78653,6,0,L|152:224,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,252,78970,2,0,L|88:148,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,88,79288,2,0,P|156:56|248:60,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,80,79764,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,124,79922,2,0,P|376:196|356:236,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,80240,2,0,L|224:236,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,236,80478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,80557,6,0,L|144:284,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,248,80716,2,4,L|40:304,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,160,80875,2,0,L|144:104,1,127.5,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,64,81192,2,0,L|296:120,1,127.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,107,81510,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,68,81668,2,0,P|360:124|396:148,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,160,81986,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,160,82065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,160,82145,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,80,82303,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,252,82462,6,0,P|496:256|520:236,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,332,82780,2,0,P|268:328|244:348,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,276,83097,2,0,P|68:288|0:204,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,144,83573,2,0,P|129:104|241:140,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,52,84049,2,0,P|324:92|436:56,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,136,84526,1,2,0:0:0:0:
476,220,84684,2,0,P|424:208|376:216,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,248,85002,6,0,P|288:272|336:268,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,176,85319,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,332,85477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,300,85557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,256,85636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,112,85795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,164,85954,2,0,P|428:176|476:168,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,112,86272,2,0,L|272:308,1,170,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,324,86748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,328,86907,2,0,P|84:288|72:248,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,176,87224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87541,12,4,90716,0:0:0:0:

and fix some modding

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-12-02T16:01:44+00:00

after a long time, finally XD
updated

KDS

502 posts

Joined February 2010

KDS 2014-12-03T11:00:50+00:00

Taiko modding requested in my queue :3

[General]
- Change all Timing Point's Audio sampleset to Normal-Default. It may help other modder's Taiko modding.

[IMT's Muzukashii]
00:04:207 (16) - for consistency, move to 00:04:525
00:09:921 (42) - add finish. there is a finish sound exactly.
00:36:270 (139,140,141) - considering cymbals and base drum sound, KD K will more fit well.
00:41:350 (162,163,164) - ^
00:46:905 (181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192)
*considering the drum sound, "k dkd k kddkd kdk" will fit well
*while, If you are considering the vocal sound, change 00:47:857 (185) to don. that's better IMO. feel free to choose.
00:50:714 (197,1) - To delete Spin or k is recommended. Placing both notes is quite awkward.
01:27:540 (155,1) - same as above.
00:51:984 (1) - change to D. that finish sound is same with following ones.
01:12:301 (90) - add finish. there is a finish sound exactly.
01:17:381 (111) - ^
01:22:460 (131) - ^
01:20:873 (125,126,127,128,129) - for emphasis of vocal sound, adding finish to all notes will a good choice :3
- probably many Finish notes will give some messy feelings. I recommend deleting finish by adding adequate 1/4 notes

[AxelHino's Oni]
00:16:746 - add d. that emptiness of note is quite awkward because of silence and following vocal emphasis.
01:12:301 (127) - add finish. there is a finish sound.
01:17:381 (164) - ^
- ok well structured

[Nardo's Inner Oni]
- there is a little insufficiency of pattern consistency in Kiai time, but well fit with sound. no pattern suggestion

good luck

phate45

6 posts

Joined July 2014

phate45 2014-12-04T15:16:09+00:00

[General]

Standard mod only, no taiko from me.
Nice song!

[

Easy]

00:10:874 (3) - Part of it is outside grid, should be repositioned.
00:14:365 (1) - Needs to be shortened and repositioned if it's meant to follow the vocal.
Like this, for example
00:19:286 (2,3) - These two bend out of grid.
00:22:143 (2) - ^
00:26:905 (1,2,3) - These sliders don't feel like they are following the vocal at all, you should try something like the image below, or couple short sliders maybe?
Example

Don't mind the curves, they are for example only.
00:40:714 (3) - Is partly out of grid.
01:02:143 - Should have a note, feels natural with the drums, can also be conveniently placed between 01:01:190 (2) and 01:02:460 (3).
01:04:682 - ^ same thing.
01:09:444 (4) - Is a tiny bit off the grid.
01:12:301 (1) - Move the start point to x:396 y:264 for better blanket.
01:17:063 (3) - Is a tiny bit off the grid.

[

Normal]

00:05:159 (1,2,3) - Changing to fit the image below would follow both the guitar and the drums better than your current sliders.
Example
00:09:921 (3,4) - Shortening 3 to end at 00:10:239 and inserting a note at 00:10:556 would feel better with the music.
Example
00:14:524 (1) - Off grid.
00:18:651 (1,2) - Lenghtening (1) and shortening (2) would fit better with the vocal.
Example
00:24:048 (5,6) - I'm going to assume these two follow the guitar, because it does not fit with the vocals at all.
00:26:905 (1,2,3) - I got no idea what do these 3 sliders follow, neither guitar nor vocals fit their timing.
00:31:667 (1,2) - Bend slightly off grid.
00:49:127 (1) - ^ same.
01:06:905 (2,3,4) - Nice blanket!
01:16:428 (2) - Off grid again.

[

Hard]

00:22:461 (3,4) - Removing (4), moving (3) to 00:22:619 and adding a repeat to it fits better with the vocal.
Like this, for example
Overall, very nice diff (99.7% first try sightread ).

[

Fort's insane]
This insane needs some capitalization.

00:04:287 (4,1,2) - This pattern is slightly confusing (at least for me).
00:22:063 (2,3,4) - I suggest replacing (3,4) with repeat on (2), and maybe reposition (2) a little to make it flow better.
Like this, for example
00:59:603 (1,2,3,4) - The jump from (3) to (4) in here is quite hard.
01:00:555 (7,1) - This is slightly hard to hit as well, especially since 01:01:190 (2,3)-, that follow the same rhythm, are stacked right afterwards.
01:15:159 (3,4,5) - Why does this pattern not repeat? There are the same beats just couple seconds later, yet they are not mapped like this, in fact, 01:16:428 (2,3) completely skip over those.

[

Kuro's Insane]
This is a bit too hard for me to playtest, but I had a friend help me out. Alexsire says that the map is quite fun!

00:36:269 (1,2,1) - Feels unnatural, hard to read by Alex
00:52:460 (3,4,5) - This is the pattern i comment on the previous diff at 01:15:159, nicely mapped.
Overall, feels pretty solid, nicely done. Or maybe my modding skills are not enough to spot any more mistakes

Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2014-12-06T04:10:36+00:00

Hey, absolutely love this song, so have a mod! If I sound mean when I ask questions, I apologize. I didn't mean to, and they're there because I want to genuinely learn from it.

Also I mention pacing a lot. If you don't get what I mean by that watchthis video. Sorry if I sound smug about it, I just like playing with my new toy in map theory.

[General:]

It'd be nice if the audio file had the title and artist in it's properties field.

[Easy/Normal]

I've been modding for 3.5 hours and I'm too tired to do these. If this map gets close to ranking, pm me and I might come back and do these.

[Hard:]

00:01:033 (1,2) – (2) is a little bit too out of flow(see other note relating to this), try moving (1) to (10, 183), or doing your little trick of changing the end of (1). (Personally, I think you use this a little too much or in a visually unappealing way, but hey, you can't please everyone)
00:11:826 (2) – Delete this and make (1) end here. Mostly pacing reasons. Having this part of the song start off this way made it seem like this had more energy than the opening, which should not happen. The rest of the section is okay pacing-wise
00:22:461 (3,1) – Try not to overlap these for visual reasons.
00:24:048 (1,2,3,4) – these don't flow with the bass all that well. You do a lot better job with it at 00:23:414 (1,2,3,4) - . I had something like the picture below. I do this because the bass has this wavy feel to it, so I changed the orientation from clockwise to CC or vice versa to match it with the wave slider. (3) and (4) in my pattern also matches 00:25:000 (3,4) – , so it's good to have a cohesive subtheme like this.

00:23:414 (1) - to follow the bass, use either a triple or a reverse slider using ¼ notes and delete 00:23:889 (4) - .
00:30:080 (1,2,3) – Delete 2 and 3, make 1 end where 3 starts, and add a circle where 3 ends. This is a slow part of the song, and you're going too fast.
00:36:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) – I can follow your rhythm but it's kind of odd, I would look to improve it.
00:42:301 (2,3,4,5,6,7) – This rhythm is off. You can tell because the singer sings where (3) ends; she should start again on a slider head. Delete 8, shift 2-7 by a half beat later, and make the 1 slider end at 00:42:301 (2) - .
00:45:635 (1) – This should be the start of the jump pattern, and it is a little too jumpy
00:46:111 (4) - This should also be part of the jump pattern.
00:49:444 (5,6,7) – If you want to be fancy, you could change each of these sv's so (6) is slightly faster than (5) and (7) is even slower than (5), though that's probably me being too hyper and making your map worse XD
00:50:714 (7) – I think it sounds better if it ends here 00:51:666 (8) -
01:00:873 (3,4,5) – something about these stacks make this part hard or something idk.
01:04:841 (3) – This is more an example to a general statement for mapping, but this flow off by too much. Generally speaking, you want the note to come off of the path of the slider/flow before it unless you have a good reason to break flow, which to me is not evident here (I might be being a little too picky about this one, but keep this in mind, this doesn't just apply here).
01:11:031 (1,3,5) – I'll preface this with I'm not the best at hitsounds, but consider making these heads also have a finish like in the section at 01:00:714 (2) - ? If you do, maybe add hitfinish to 01:14:841 (1) - , and 01:19:920 (1) – (I said the same thing in Kuro's insane, so maybe ask him too for second opinion)
01:17:063 (9) – This is being a little too dreamy on my part, but keep in mind your pacing. Is this part strong enough for this part of the song relative to the rest of the map? (The sliders get a little repetitive towards the end)
01:27:540 (1) – add circle?

[Fort's Insane:]

00:01:826 (4,5,6) – add whistles. It's nice to have hitsounds
00:03:255 (7) – change to whistle
00:06:906 (1,2,3) - For these and all the other ones in the map, I do not think 2014 sliders work with this song and liked them better as circles. If you say it's your style, I would like to know how this style applies to this song.
00:11:667 (2) – Turn the volume up, it's nice to have a baseline of hitsounds and feels weird without it. Same for 00:31:984 (2) - .
00:11:667 (2,3,4,5,6,7) – I don't like following the guitar here for two reasons. One is because of pacing. The singer starts to make a stronger statement in the next combo, so this one should be weaker, not stronger (at least I think you're following the singer there, it's a little confusing). The other is because I think the bass has a more interesting rhythm, but that might be my taste. Same kind of reasons apply to 00:17:381 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - . I suggest picking the bass or the singer and following their rhythm.
00:14:206 (7) – I liked making these two circles
00:40:555 (4,5) – Consider making (4) tighter so you can blanket (5) in it?
00:46:587 (6) – this jump is a little too far. It almost feels like you're climaxing in the middle of the song. How about (264, 80) to go from 3x dist snap to 2.8?
00:46:905 (1) – I feel like the song dictates longer notes for this pattern; I didn't like hearing such a fast base beat. I liked this rhythm in the song (hitsound appropriately):

[img]
http://puu.sh/diNmI/0e0c8ebcd9.png[/img]

01:11:032 (4,5,6,7,8) – really nice flow!
01:17:063 (4,5,1,2,3) – I think for pacing reasons you should make this a little more energetic. I think it would feed into this section better 01:20:873 (3) - , which you do a good job in.
01:26:905 (10) – might be better as two circles

[Kuro's Insane:]

00:06:112 (1) – Anti-flow here is inappropriate here, though that's probably personal. However, if you do use anti-flow, I suggest you put it at (144, 169) for a dist snap of 3.2 since it is a little too high as is.

00:30:238 (1) – This felt a little too long and I like having circles at 00:31:191 (2) – and 00:31:508 (3) - . I think you made your point already with 00:29:127 (1) - , so try having this end at 00:30:873 (2) - .

00:48:651 (2) – Your pacing is really good in this map, but I'm not sure about here. I feel like the energy here should be more than it was at 00:47:381 (2) - , yet the jump is smaller and the slider slows it down a lot. I didn't really have a good solution for this. I tried making 00:48:651 (2) – a circle and making a slider at 00:48:809 (3) - that ends at (3), but I still didn't like it. (Pic for reference below) However, I would be satisfied with an explanation of why this shouldn't have more energy then the mentioned section.

01:04:999 (3) – What made you choose a 5 note stream here? I liked deleting (4), but I would like to hear your reason for it.

01:11:031 (1,3,5) – I'll preface this with I'm not the best at hitsounds, but consider making these heads also have a finish like in the section at 01:00:714 (2) - ? If you do, maybe add hitfinish to 01:14:841 (1) - , 01:19:920 (1) - , and claps to 01:24:047 (2) – 's head and tail?

01:12:936 (4,5,1) – the spacing into and out of 5 seems too small. This section should be slow, but having it at 1.4x spacing feels a little more fluid

01:27:540 (1) – Circle here? It'd be nice to have the hitfinish too.

Welp, that's it. Hope it helps. If it does and you want to help me out, take a look at one of the maps in my sig, but obviously I'm not expecting anything. Good luck!

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-12-06T13:24:21+00:00

phate45

phate45 wrote:

[General]
Standard mod only, no taiko from me.
Nice song!
[ Easy]
00:10:874 (3) - Part of it is outside grid, should be repositioned. - imo, not a big problem, nothing change
00:14:365 (1) - Needs to be shortened and repositioned if it's meant to follow the vocal. - ummm... no
00:19:286 (2,3) - These two bend out of grid. - fix (2) shape, and make (3) into a straight slider
00:22:143 (2) - ^ - move it up a little
00:26:905 (1,2,3) - These sliders don't feel like they are following the vocal at all, you should try something like the image below, or couple short sliders maybe? - no, I follow... what is it ? .-. sound like tsch tsch

Don't mind the curves, they are for example only.
00:40:714 (3) - Is partly out of grid. - nothing change
01:02:143 - Should have a note, feels natural with the drums, can also be conveniently placed between 01:01:190 (2) and 01:02:460 (3). - no
01:04:682 - ^ same thing. - no
01:09:444 (4) - Is a tiny bit off the grid. - nothing change
01:12:301 (1) - Move the start point to x:396 y:264 for better blanket. - no,
01:17:063 (3) - Is a tiny bit off the grid. - nothing change
[ Normal]
00:05:159 (1,2,3) - Changing to fit the image below would follow both the guitar and the drums better than your current sliders. - sound little strange for me .-.
00:09:921 (3,4) - Shortening 3 to end at 00:10:239 and inserting a note at 00:10:556 would feel better with the music. - nothing change
00:14:524 (1) - Off grid. - change into a straight slider
00:18:651 (1,2) - Lenghtening (1) and shortening (2) would fit better with the vocal. - sound little strange for me
00:24:048 (5,6) - I'm going to assume these two follow the guitar, because it does not fit with the vocals at all. - same like easy, that sound like tsch tsch XD
00:26:905 (1,2,3) - I got no idea what do these 3 sliders follow, neither guitar nor vocals fit their timing. - vocal imo .-.
00:31:667 (1,2) - Bend slightly off grid. - nothing change
00:49:127 (1) - ^ same. - ^
01:06:905 (2,3,4) - Nice blanket! - thanks
01:16:428 (2) - Off grid again. - nothing change
[ Hard]
00:22:461 (3,4) - Removing (4), moving (3) to 00:22:619 and adding a repeat to it fits better with the vocal. - no
Overall, very nice diff (99.7% first try sightread ).

pinataman

pinataman wrote:
Hey, absolutely love this song, so have a mod! If I sound mean when I ask questions, I apologize. I didn't mean to, and they're there because I want to genuinely learn from it.

Also I mention pacing a lot. If you don't get what I mean by that watchthis video. Sorry if I sound smug about it, I just like playing with my new toy in map theory.

[General:]

It'd be nice if the audio file had the title and artist in it's properties field.
[Easy/Normal]

I've been modding for 3.5 hours and I'm too tired to do these. If this map gets close to ranking, pm me and I might come back and do these. - :D

[Hard:]

00:01:033 (1,2) – (2) is a little bit too out of flow(see other note relating to this), try moving (1) to (10, 183), or doing your little trick of changing the end of (1). (Personally, I think you use this a little too much or in a visually unappealing way, but hey, you can't please everyone) - idk why, but I like to make them like that :>
00:11:826 (2) – Delete this and make (1) end here. Mostly pacing reasons. Having this part of the song start off this way made it seem like this had more energy than the opening, which should not happen. The rest of the section is okay pacing-wise - no
00:22:461 (3,1) – Try not to overlap these for visual reasons. - i have no idea what must i do .-.
00:24:048 (1,2,3,4) – these don't flow with the bass all that well. You do a lot better job with it at 00:23:414 (1,2,3,4) - . I had something like the picture below. I do this because the bass has this wavy feel to it, so I changed the orientation from clockwise to CC or vice versa to match it with the wave slider. (3) and (4) in my pattern also matches 00:25:000 (3,4) – , so it's good to have a cohesive subtheme like this.- but i'm fine with it :>

00:23:414 (1) - to follow the bass, use either a triple or a reverse slider using ¼ notes and delete 00:23:889 (4) - . - no
00:30:080 (1,2,3) – Delete 2 and 3, make 1 end where 3 starts, and add a circle where 3 ends. This is a slow part of the song, and you're going too fast. - no
00:36:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) – I can follow your rhythm but it's kind of odd, I would look to improve it. - idk...but, i don't have a problem with this
00:42:301 (2,3,4,5,6,7) – This rhythm is off. You can tell because the singer sings where (3) ends; she should start again on a slider head. Delete 8, shift 2-7 by a half beat later, and make the 1 slider end at 00:42:301 (2) - .- ok... ummm, i don't make the 1 slider end at 00:42:301 - but i add a circle
00:45:635 (1) – This should be the start of the jump pattern, and it is a little too jumpy - ok
00:46:111 (4) - This should also be part of the jump pattern. - ok
00:49:444 (5,6,7) – If you want to be fancy, you could change each of these sv's so (6) is slightly faster than (5) and (7) is even slower than (5), though that's probably me being too hyper and making your map worse XD - I think it would be little confusing :>
00:50:714 (7) – I think it sounds better if it ends here 00:51:666 (8) - no .-.
01:00:873 (3,4,5) – something about these stacks make this part hard or something idk. - maybe just your feeling
01:04:841 (3) – This is more an example to a general statement for mapping, but this flow off by too much. Generally speaking, you want the note to come off of the path of the slider/flow before it unless you have a good reason to break flow, which to me is not evident here (I might be being a little too picky about this one, but keep this in mind, this doesn't just apply here). - not a problem... maybe .-.
01:11:031 (1,3,5) – I'll preface this with I'm not the best at hitsounds, but consider making these heads also have a finish like in the section at 01:00:714 (2) - ? If you do, maybe add hitfinish to 01:14:841 (1) - , and 01:19:920 (1) – (I said the same thing in Kuro's insane, so maybe ask him too for second opinion) - imo, not too fit
01:17:063 (9) – This is being a little too dreamy on my part, but keep in mind your pacing. Is this part strong enough for this part of the song relative to the rest of the map? (The sliders get a little repetitive towards the end) - not a problem... maybe[2] :>
01:27:540 (1) – add circle? - no

thanks for your help, will update later

wasonz

713 posts

Joined July 2013

wasonz 2014-12-07T04:24:53+00:00

accepted all mods from KDS

http://puu.sh/dkfjG/6d513e8b1c.osu

Charlotte

1,908 posts

Joined December 2013

Charlotte 2014-12-09T11:42:26+00:00

hi~.from my modding queues (Nardo's req)

[

about]

d is don note
k is kat note
D is big don note
K is big kat note

[

General]

Widescreen Support→uncheck (IMT's Muzukashii)

[

IMT's Muzukashii]

00:42:778 - change d

00:48:975 - add k

Good~

[

AxelHino's Oni]

OD6→5. Inner Oni=6 so Oni=OD5?

00:18:651 (5,6) - change d

00:20:873 (14,15,16,17,18) - I felt don't fit. so 00:20:873 (14,15) - delete. & 00:21:123 - delete. & 00:21:027 - change d

01:20:635 (186,187) - move to 1/4 right.I feel good better.

[

Nardo's Inner Oni]

Very Good~

I can't find mod.but Nardo's Inner Oni=easily Inner Oni =V=!

Good luck

Kuro Fuyusaki

609 posts

Joined May 2013

Kuro Fuyusaki 2014-12-12T06:57:30+00:00

Sry for the always late respond ;_;

phate45

phate45 wrote:

[General]
Standard mod only, no taiko from me.
Nice song!
[ Kuro's Insane]
This is a bit too hard for me to playtest, but I had a friend help me out. Alexsire says that the map is quite fun!
00:36:269 (1,2,1) - Feels unnatural, hard to read by Alex -> as expected ~_~ , i'll change the pattern, and 4 circle before it
00:52:460 (3,4,5) - This is the pattern i comment on the previous diff at 01:15:159, nicely mapped. -> Thank You
Overall, feels pretty solid, nicely done. Or maybe my modding skills are not enough to spot any more mistakes
-> You're doing good >.<

pinataman

pinataman wrote:
Hey, absolutely love this song, so have a mod! If I sound mean when I ask questions, I apologize. I didn't mean to, and they're there because I want to genuinely learn from it.

Also I mention pacing a lot. If you don't get what I mean by that watchthis video. Sorry if I sound smug about it, I just like playing with my new toy in map theory.

[Kuro's Insane:]

00:06:112 (1) – Anti-flow here is inappropriate here, though that's probably personal. However, if you do use anti-flow, I suggest you put it at (144, 169) for a dist snap of 3.2 since it is a little too high as is. -> it's not inappropriate, well maybe just the location is seems a bit weird, i'll change the pattern for sure

00:30:238 (1) – This felt a little too long and I like having circles at 00:31:191 (2) – and 00:31:508 (3) - . I think you made your point already with 00:29:127 (1) - , so try having this end at 00:30:873 (2) - . -> okay, delete the second slider and place a little drain section

00:48:651 (2) – Your pacing is really good in this map, but I'm not sure about here. I feel like the energy here should be more than it was at 00:47:381 (2) - , yet the jump is smaller and the slider slows it down a lot. I didn't really have a good solution for this. I tried making 00:48:651 (2) – a circle and making a slider at 00:48:809 (3) - that ends at (3), but I still didn't like it. (Pic for reference below) However, I would be satisfied with an explanation of why this shouldn't have more energy then the mentioned section. -> there's no reason in particular, confused at that part too .-. , completely. But looks like i get an idea that would make the pattern little interesting, and more energetic ofc.

01:04:999 (3) – What made you choose a 5 note stream here? I liked deleting (4), but I would like to hear your reason for it. -> simple reason. Variations. and it's still acceptable for the song's flow, at least imo.

01:11:031 (1,3,5) – I'll preface this with I'm not the best at hitsounds, but consider making these heads also have a finish like in the section at 01:00:714 (2) - ? If you do, maybe add hitfinish to 01:14:841 (1) - , 01:19:920 (1) - , and claps to 01:24:047 (2) – 's head and tail? -> okay for 01:11:031 (1,3,5) – except 5, didn't hear any finish :/. And for 01:14:841 (1) - , 01:19:920 (1) - , it's ofc not, because i don't hear any finish there. and for 01:24:047 (2) – , yep same, i won't make the claps at the end of the slider, sounds weird for me

01:12:936 (4,5,1) – the spacing into and out of 5 seems too small. This section should be slow, but having it at 1.4x spacing feels a little more fluid -> make the SV slower, thx for the suggestion

01:27:540 (1) – Circle here? It'd be nice to have the hitfinish too. -> What the..... Whattttt??!! I Think i remember when i did put it into there.... Who's deleting it? D:

Welp, that's it. Hope it helps. If it does and you want to help me out, take a look at one of the maps in my sig, but obviously I'm not expecting anything. Good luck! -> That's a great help.

Okay, Okay, map updated :

~~http://puu.sh/drjoh/6126175dd4.osu~~

well did some fix on HS, here's the new updated code :

http://puu.sh/drrzI/3b010085c7.osu

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-12-12T14:39:45+00:00

From Lazy modding team(¦3[____]
sorry for delay cuz too many mod requset ;w;
[General]

what happened to the volume of Insane diff？make me confused ，try make them looks neat，example:http://puu.sh/drizX/188c441299.png

[Kuro's Insane]

u choose ignore drumbeats at 00:07:223 -00:08:493 -00:09:763 - but flow the drumbeat at 00:10:398 (3) - ,why?
00:10:557 (1) - remove NC
I think the diff need more work,overall.-.
so I just post some of my advices at here.
somewhere such as :00:01:747 -&00:03:017 -00:04:286 - can add a circle to make tripiets.
I‘m not a fond of overmaps like here: 00:21:112 (4) - 01:05:079 (4) -
during00:11:191 to 00:31:587 ， u can use softhitsound _(:з」∠)_

[Fort's insane]

I don't know whats the rhythm flowed for ：00:11:508 ——00:20:715 maybe need remap here ;w;
00:49:127 (1,2) - try this rhythm to fit the vocal：

[Hard]

00:36:270 (1) - remove NC
00:41:349 (1) - ^
01:26:904 (1) - ^

[Normal]

01:25:317 (2) - make the red dot in grid ,like this :
SPOILER

[Others]

Both insane diffs need BATs' proposal.-. try make them be better
and seems that the stars rating of Normal and Easy are very similar

Last edited by OblivioN 2014-12-13T04:11:25+00:00, edited 6 times in total.

Kuro Fuyusaki

609 posts

Joined May 2013

Kuro Fuyusaki 2014-12-13T03:06:22+00:00

OblivioN

OblivioN wrote:
From Lazy modding team(¦3[____]
sorry for delay cuz too many mod requset ;w;
[General]
what happened to the volume of Insane diff？make me confused ，try make them looks neat，example:http://puu.sh/drizX/188c441299.png
[Kuro's Insane]
00:07:223 - missing a down beat hear. -> i'm following the guitar here
00:08:493 -^ -> ^
00:09:128 -^ -> ^
00:09:763 -^ -> ^
00:10:557 (1) - remove NC -> nope, it's a transition
I think the diff need more work,overall.-.
so I just post some of my advices at here.
somewhere such as :00:01:747 -&00:03:017 -00:04:286 - can add a circle to make tripiets. -> there's no need
I‘m not a fond of overmaps like here: 00:21:112 (4) - 01:05:079 (4) - -> there's still no problem with that .-.

——————————————haven't finished yet ——————————————

Thank you for your suggestions, but there's no change yet

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-12-13T05:48:52+00:00

I think the first offset is 556

apply and remap some part of my map. its late post but im sure for this update now

insane

osu file format v13

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RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-12-13T16:52:34+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
[Hard]
00:36:270 (1) - remove NC - ok
00:41:349 (1) - ^ - ok
01:26:904 (1) - ^ - no

[Normal]
01:25:317 (2) - make the red dot in grid ,like this : - no, i make this one symmetry
SPOILER

[Others]

seems that the stars rating of Normal and Easy are very similar - not a problem, imo .-.

thanks for your help

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-12-14T13:28:26+00:00

http://puu.sh/dufkP/4362358571.png

gg

Kuro Fuyusaki

609 posts

Joined May 2013

Kuro Fuyusaki 2014-12-15T07:08:29+00:00

Continue Feedback~

OblivioN

[Kuro's Insane]

u choose ignore drumbeats at 00:07:223 -00:08:493 -00:09:763 - but flow the drumbeat at 00:10:398 (3) - ,why? -> for that 3 timing point 00:07:223 -00:08:493 -00:09:763 - i'm following the guitar, because it's the dominant beat (for me) and, i'm adding 2 drumbeats before it (new setting) for a new looking (perhaps :/), and for 00:10:398 (3) - there's no special reason anymore, there's a drumbeats then yes, add it :/, is it acceptable? (
I think the diff need more work,overall.-.
during00:11:191 to 00:31:587 ， u can use softhitsound _(:з」∠)_ -> already implemented it, the map's not updated yet

the new code, fix some hitsound, thx -> http://puu.sh/dvo43/42bcffde23.osu

sorciere

147 posts

Joined April 2013

sorciere 2014-12-16T11:57:56+00:00

sorry for being slow really

anyway

[General]
video offset is wrong i think, it's too early. (or late? the more i watch it, the more i get confused lol)
also easy and normal too close in terms of star diff, try to either make easy easier or normal harder. i'd say easy should be easier.

oyea don't mind the examples if you don't like them. (in fact don't mind all the things you don't like implemented, it's ok)

[Easy]
it's way too challenging (ie very little spaces in between notes), i suggest removing certain circles/sliders completely. (hence the minibreak thing)
00:01:826 (2) - rotate 10 degrees, move it to (240,140) for cleaner flow.
00:05:159 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - way too challenging (as said above). also it can be simpler, if you change the whole pattern till there are some points that has some open areas.

example (in terms of beats only)

anything is fine, i only suggest making this whole pattern easier (it's tough, but i feel it will help the map a lot better, you can ask me ingame)
00:10:874 (3) - if you choose to not do above, at least remove the return of this slider.
00:16:429 (3,1) - i don't understand this rhythm. maybe something like this?

example

(i made (4) by flipping 00:18:651 (1) - )
00:21:826 (1) - remove circle for minibreak (check dist. spacing if you do so)
00:26:905 (1,2,3) - confusing rhythm, not sure you want to match the vocals or the instruments. how about starting slider (1) on 00:27:064 for vocals?
00:30:080 (4) - how about ending the slider at 00:30:238 to sync with the silence?
00:33:571 (4,1) - some random idea : remove circle (4) and add circle where slider (1) is followed by another shorter slider (2)

example

00:38:651 (4) - if you did the above, remove this circle for consistency.
00:49:127 (1) - end slider at 00:49:444 to sync with the silence.
00:55:159 (5) - remove circle for minibreak. (remember to check dist. spacing)
00:57:698 (4) - ^
01:12:301 (1) - move up by 1 tick for better blanket.
01:15:476 (4) - remove circle for minibreak. (remember to check dist. spacing)
01:18:016 (4) - ^
01:18:333 (5) - add nc for consistency. also if you did ^, flip this slider for better flow.

[Normal]
00:06:906 (4,5) - the rhythm does not fit, i suggest mapping according to the guitar thing.

example

00:30:080 (1) - curve this instead as the elbow of this l-shaped slider doesn't emphasise anything. (it should emphasise the silence, if you want to retain the shape)
00:45:635 (3) - a little jarring, i suggest the curve should be less curvy.
00:53:890 (4) - move it to (228,156) for slight, slight better flow.
00:58:651 (2,3) - blanket circle (3). (slider (2) should be less curvy)
01:12:301 (1) - move it to (352,204) for better blanket. (check dist. spacing between this and (2))

[Hard]
00:07:859 (2) - move it to where (3) is for smoother flow.
00:30:080 (1,2,3) - i don't understand rhythm (maybe it's just me), try to change?

example

also at least make dist. snap 1.5 for consistence spacing
00:45:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - this jump pattern is absolutely horrifying, almost unrank standard for a hard, i recommend you change the whole pattern.

example

01:26:904 (1,2,3) - ~~2nd instant death jump~~ jump is too hard, at most just dist. snap 1.5. 2.0 is way too hard for scrubs like me

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Sorry for not modding the insanes, i instafailed them within 6-8 seconds.

Good luck!

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