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Perfume - MY COLOR( Short Ver. )

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fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年10月1日 at 下午 09:27:31

Artist: Perfume
Title: MY COLOR( Short Ver. )
Tags: JPN Japanese
BPM: 132
Filesize: 3248kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.16 stars, 78 notes)
  2. Hard (2.44 stars, 97 notes)
  3. Normal (1.9 stars, 159 notes)
Download: Perfume - MY COLOR( Short Ver. )
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My full Ver. : t/154997 <- I give up this , haha ~ =ㄦ=

I die =..= . return alive someday maybe ...

Anyway , it not make for rank but for fun . Hope you can enjoy it ~
Last edited by fm4a93au04 , edited 18 times in total.
pandorawindy
312 posts
Joined December 2013
pandorawindy
其實不用對我使用太多敬語的.. >_< 我也是剛學作圖沒多久，只是見得圖稍微多一點罷了。

  • [normal]
  1. 節奏很好，滑條用的也很到位。不誇張的說，節奏方面，normal已經是rank水平了。只是擺位有點需要提高，不少滑條沒有精確地blanket。我舉幾個例子，供你參考。
  2. 00:48:478 (6,2) - 這裡重疊了一點，不太好看，00:48:478 (6,1,2) - 一併做成對稱吧。
  3. 00:38:932 (2,3) - 這裡我並不知道你有沒有意圖做成對稱..请使用copy past 然后ctrl + shift + R 调整角度
    效果圖
  4. 00:41:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 五角星不太準確，請調複製第一個circle，然後每72度粘貼一個，注意控制ds，最後整體平移星星狀pattern，或者留在中心位置。
  5. 如果你能按我說的做的話，既省力又美觀。
    [easy]
  6. 00:40:978 (4,1) - 滑條太彎了，影響美觀。
  7. 00:43:250 (2) - 少用這種滑條，沒必要的情況下就普通的直滑條就行。
  8. 01:27:341 (2,1) - easy diff 避免堆積首尾。
  9. 01:34:159 (2,3) - 這個也要避免。
  10. 節奏也很好，不錯。
    [general]
  11. 我不知道這個短版本的map，你是不是打算rank。但是我提醒一下，mp3的剪切質量有點過低了，一般剪歌都是剪中間，保留頭尾和部分副歌，整體壓縮成1分多鐘。如果你不知道怎樣合理剪切可以寫下你想要的哪一段，我來幫你剪。
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04

pandorawindy wrote:

其實不用對我使用太多敬語的.. >_< 我也是剛學作圖沒多久，只是見得圖稍微多一點罷了。

  • [normal]
  1. 節奏很好，滑條用的也很到位。不誇張的說，節奏方面，normal已經是rank水平了。只是擺位有點需要提高，不少滑條沒有精確地blanket。我舉幾個例子，供你參考。
  2. 00:48:478 (6,2) - 這裡重疊了一點，不太好看，00:48:478 (6,1,2) - 一併做成對稱吧。
  3. 00:38:932 (2,3) - 這裡我並不知道你有沒有意圖做成對稱..请使用copy past 然后ctrl + shift + R 调整角度
    效果圖
  4. 00:41:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 五角星不太準確，請調複製第一個circle，然後每72度粘貼一個，注意控制ds，最後整體平移星星狀pattern，或者留在中心位置。
  5. 如果你能按我說的做的話，既省力又美觀。
    [easy]
  6. 00:40:978 (4,1) - 滑條太彎了，影響美觀。
  7. 00:43:250 (2) - 少用這種滑條，沒必要的情況下就普通的直滑條就行。
  8. 01:27:341 (2,1) - easy diff 避免堆積首尾。
  9. 01:34:159 (2,3) - 這個也要避免。
  10. 節奏也很好，不錯。
    [general]
  11. 我不知道這個短版本的map，你是不是打算rank。但是我提醒一下，mp3的剪切質量有點過低了，一般剪歌都是剪中間，保留頭尾和部分副歌，整體壓縮成1分多鐘。如果你不知道怎樣合理剪切可以寫下你想要的哪一段，我來幫你剪。
多謝指教 , 真的很感謝 ~~ .
micchi_chi
764 posts
Joined July 2013
micchi_chi
Hi~ M4M from your Q~
My map BTW : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/203047

These all are just suggestions
[General]
  1. The "Japanese" tag is missing at the Normal and Hard diff :/
  2. Why don't put a kiai from 00:30:978 to 01:00:069 ?

[Easy]
  1. 00:06:432 (2) - I think this slider could mirror this slider 00:05:523 (1) - And then move 00:07:341 (3) - to x:336, y:224 then blanket it with 00:09:159 (1) - Looks better that way imo. http://puu.sh/aW2PH/09e50149a8.jpg
  2. 00:20:978 (2) - you can make this symmetrical with 00:20:069 (1) - Then move 00:21:887 (3) - so it would blanket with (2)'s end. http://puu.sh/aW38K/49364372fd.jpg
  3. If you follow the mod above, you can move 00:23:705 (1) - to 00:20:978 (2) slider end then blanket it with 00:21:887 (3) - head. http://puu.sh/aW3fy/091b1f0fac.jpg
  4. If you follow the mod above, you can move 00:25:069 (2) - to x:64, y:64 then modify 00:25:523 (3) - a bit so it somehow looks like this http://puu.sh/aW3m8/900d945fe3.jpg
  5. 00:32:796 (3) - move this to x:352, y:261 then move 00:33:705 (4) - to x:512, y:208 and blanket it with (3)'s end. http://puu.sh/aW3x2/826eac9e70.jpg
  6. If you follow the mod above, you can move 00:34:614 (1) - to x:416, y:88 and blanket it with (3). http://puu.sh/aW3zQ/167561f8f5.jpg
  7. 00:46:887 (3,4) - Blanket these better, just need a slight change...
  8. 00:50:978 (3) - Extend this slider to 00:51:887 then just remove the reverse. http://puu.sh/aW3IW/afa57401e8.jpg
  9. 00:52:796 (1,2) - They don't seem identical, why don't just copy (1)?
  10. 00:56:432 (1) - Just remove NC here since it nearly spinner
  11. 01:16:432 (3) - Move to x:416, y:104 then blanket it with 01:15:978 (2) - Then put 01:18:250 (1) - to where (2) was. http://puu.sh/aW45E/fac28e992b.jpg
  12. If you follow the mod above, you can DS 01:19:614 (2) - (I moved it to x:128, y:72) Then you can blanket 01:20:069 (3) - with (2). http://puu.sh/aW49O/b3fa4e4a95.jpg

I will just mod easy for now, If I have more time, maybe I could mod normal ^^
Good luck~
blaterwolf
267 posts
Joined November 2013
blaterwolf
M4M from your Q

[General]

Color:
Green
White

Kiai at 00:30:978 and end at the break

Preview Point at 00:30:978

[Easy]

00:10:523 (2) - this is too far way , make them closer

00:17:796 (2) - ^

00:34:614 (1) - fix it like this : http://puu.sh/aW4d2/0e8afa2b14.png

00:39:614 (2) - NC

01:15:978 (2) - NC

01:16:432 (3,1) - fix these 2 so it will blanketed

[Normal]

00:08:478 (6) - NC

00:12:114 (7) - NC

00:44:614 (7) - ^

00:54:614 (4) - ^

01:13:250 (5) - ^

well its a fine map ! except that i hate korean(or japan singers oh god i am Confus)

That's all~
micchi_chi
764 posts
Joined July 2013
micchi_chi
Hi~ recheck
No kudosu for this post ^^

[General]
  1. I forgot to point this out on my previous post, but, "Perfume" tag is not needed since it's already mentioned in Artist.

[Normal]
Again, just some suggestions
  1. AR ---> 5
  2. 00:08:478 (6) - I would prefer to blanket this slider with 00:09:159 (1) - Something like this http://puu.sh/aXkTe/df51618d2d.jpg
  3. 00:09:841 (3) - Shorten this slider to 00:10:296 and add a note at 00:10:523 http://puu.sh/aXl1A/23661d5769.jpg
  4. 00:13:478 (3) - ^ Basically the same thing as above
  5. 00:21:887 (5,6) - I think you better put them separately...
  6. 00:28:932 (1) - Shorten this spinner to 00:30:069
  7. 01:42:569 (5) - Nazi mod : move this to x:211, y:140
  8. 00:07:341 (5) - I think you should shorten this slider to 00:07:796 because there's a strong clap there, just add a note on 00:08:023 afterwards
  9. 00:53:478 (2) - Add clap at the slider end maybe?
  10. 00:55:296 (5) - ^
  11. 00:58:250 (5,6) - Make them parallel http://puu.sh/aXlRA/1655fcc0c8.jpg look better imo
  12. 01:16:432 (1) - Remove NC here
  13. 01:20:069 (1) - ^
  14. 01:17:114 (2) - Add clap at the slider end
  15. 01:20:751 (2) - I think clap at the slider end would be better than whistle...
  16. 01:24:387 (5) - ^
  17. 01:28:023 (4) - ^
  18. 01:31:659 (5) - ^
  19. And so on, I think you have found the pattern by now...

Well, I think that's all...
Nice map BTW ^^
Don't forget about my map pweasee owo
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04
I have no time to check my map ...... I check M4M for first 0.0" .

Will reply you soon 0.0" .

Fixed almost everything . Except the double clap ( pointed out by hanyuu_nanodesu , thanks alot )

It 's a little too playful for me , but I still try to put it at some place .

Thank you alot ~~~ !!!

Thank you and good luck to your maps ~~~ !!!
SkyBearer245 , hanyuu_nanodesu
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04
Somehow , I submittied the old file that cover the new one , so .......

I will do it again later =..=" .......

Done .
Mint
1,611 posts
Joined February 2013
Mint
Hello~

:idea: General


* I don't think you can just add "Short ver." to the title, since it's not the official title. You should better ask a BAT about this.
* Remove "Perfume" from the tags, it's already in the "Artist" section.

:arrow: Testplay


* Easy (+DT,HR) - Score ~ Replay
* Normal (+DT,HR) - Score ~ Replay
* Hard - Score ~ Replay

Easy


* 00:01:887 (1) - If you are following the vocals this is correct, but if you are following the music, I recommend you to end this slider on the white tick.
* 00:25:523 (3) - I see that you're using that kind of slider a lot, maybe try a new slider?
* 00:27:341 (1) - I don't recommend silencing the spinner end. Maybe add a soft whistle here, about 30%?
* 00:30:978 (1) - I recommend ending this slider (and others) on the white tick, because (2),(3),(4) are following the instruments, but (1) is following the vocals. But it's ok if you don't want to change it.
* 00:40:069 (3,4,5) - Smooth this out for a better flow.
285,34,40069,2,0,P|329:41|368:64,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,120,40978,2,0,P|448:152|456:192,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,280,41887,2,0,P|436:325|408:360,2,80,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Normal


* AR5 - HP3
* 00:35:978 (3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe this pattern?
312,224,35978,2,0,P|358:187|416:191,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,256,36659,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,272,36887,2,0,B|379:334|379:334|331:370,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,296,37569,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,256,37796,2,0,B|187:210|187:210|125:206,1,120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Hard


* OD5 - HP5
* Found nothing! , but it's still wip.
*

Finish the hard diff and fix some small things and it should be good to go! :)
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04

appleeaterx wrote:

Hello~

:idea: General


* I don't think you can just add "Short ver." to the title, since it's not the official title. You should better ask a BAT about this.
* Remove "Perfume" from the tags, it's already in the "Artist" section.Okey . About the title = = I don't know ... just keep it no change for now ... maybe other day call MAT for this ~

:arrow: Testplay


* Easy (+DT,HR) - Score ~ Replay
* Normal (+DT,HR) - Score ~ Replay
* Hard - Score ~ Replay

Thanks for replay ~

Easy


* 00:01:887 (1) - If you are following the vocals this is correct, but if you are following the music, I recommend you to end this slider on the white tick. I follow vocal here ~~ so correct =..=
* 00:25:523 (3) - I see that you're using that kind of slider a lot, maybe try a new slider? No , I like red-point slider ~~ so no change .
* 00:27:341 (1) - I don't recommend silencing the spinner end. Maybe add a soft whistle here, about 30%? Ok , I try it .
* 00:30:978 (1) - I recommend ending this slider (and others) on the white tick, because (2),(3),(4) are following the instruments, but (1) is following the vocals. But it's ok if you don't want to change it. Yes , this is I mean to , so no change ~
* 00:40:069 (3,4,5) - Smooth this out for a better flow. Good flow but a little too ordinary for me( in fect , it is my original idea ) . So no change .
285,34,40069,2,0,P|329:41|368:64,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,120,40978,2,0,P|448:152|456:192,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,280,41887,2,0,P|436:325|408:360,2,80,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Normal


* AR5 - HP3 ~ .
* 00:35:978 (3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe this pattern? Yes , better . thanks ~ I do a similar one .
312,224,35978,2,0,P|358:187|416:191,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,256,36659,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,272,36887,2,0,B|379:334|379:334|331:370,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,296,37569,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,256,37796,2,0,B|187:210|187:210|125:206,1,120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Hard


* OD5 - HP5 Okey .
* Found nothing! , but it's still wip. I'll try my best ~
*

Finish the hard diff and fix some small things and it should be good to go! :) [/color]
Good luck to your map too ~
OscaR CUBE
182 posts
Joined October 2013
OscaR CUBE
Hi..
From ur q for m4m.. :D

I'm newbie at modding,, sorry if my mod (or suggestion) don't help you so much.. :(

EASY
  1. 00:43:250 (6) - how about making it like this?
    image
  2. 00:52:796 (1) - like this, maybe?
    image
  3. 00:56:432 (3) - how about : make this repeated just once, and add a circle at 00:57:796 - ??
  4. 01:12:796 (3) - ^
  5. 01:25:523 (1) - move this to x:440 y:208 ??
  6. 01:38:250 (2,1) - fix the blanket. :D
  7. Add a spinner start from 01:43:819 - to 01:46:887 - ??

NORMAL
  1. 00:06:432 (3,5) - i think u can't overlap like this in normal diff. :?
  2. 00:15:296 (8,9) - how about un-stack this? players might think it's same pattern as 00:14:387 (5,6) - and the others. :D
  3. 00:39:614 (3,5) - same as 00:06:432 (3,5) -
  4. 00:46:887 (3,5) - ^
  5. 01:37:114 (2,4,4,6) - ^
  6. Add spinner from 01:00:182 - to 01:01:887 - ??
  7. 01:12:569 (4) - move to x:456 y:256?
  8. Same as EASY diff. about adding spinner.. :)

That's all i've got... :o
Hope this will help you.. :)
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04

OscaR CUBE wrote:

Hi..
From ur q for m4m.. :D ~

I'm newbie at modding,, sorry if my mod (or suggestion) don't help you so much.. :( I am ~ too ~ It's ok . Make sure you're try your best , then you will be a good modder some day =..=

EASY
  1. 00:43:250 (6) - how about making it like this?
    image
    Too hard for beginner ... I think . Click rate too fast for them .
  2. 00:52:796 (1) - like this, maybe?
    image
    Accepted .
  3. 00:56:432 (3) - how about : make this repeated just once, and add a circle at 00:57:796 - ?? Okey . It avoid beginner's confusion .
  4. 01:12:796 (3) - ^ ~ .
  5. 01:25:523 (1) - move this to x:440 y:208 ?? Fixed .
  6. 01:38:250 (2,1) - fix the blanket. :D Fixed .
  7. Add a spinner start from 01:43:819 - to 01:46:887 - ??I try it .


NORMAL
  1. 00:06:432 (3,5) - i think u can't overlap like this in normal diff. :? So , I change the pattern and other similar places =..= .
  2. 00:15:296 (8,9) - how about un-stack this? players might think it's same pattern as 00:14:387 (5,6) - and the others. :D Okey . You're right .
  3. 00:39:614 (3,5) - same as 00:06:432 (3,5) - ~ .
  4. 00:46:887 (3,5) - ^ ~ .
  5. 01:37:114 (2,4,4,6) - ^ ~ .
  6. Add spinner from 01:00:182 - to 01:01:887 - ?? Okey , and changed Easy diff to match it ~
  7. 01:12:569 (4) - move to x:456 y:256? Still try to find a good way to deal with it and following pattern ... =..=
  8. Same as EASY diff. about adding spinner.. :) Yes , I got it .


That's all i've got... :o
Hope this will help you.. :) Thanks , it's helpful for me ~
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
truonant
Hello M4M~ from your queue

There wasn't much to mod since you're mapping style is very clean.
The song was very cute. I like it. Take my star!


00:36:432 (3) – better blanket
00:41:887 (1) - ^


00:20:978 (3) – blanket
00:21:887 (5) - ^
00:22:569 (6) - mirror 00:21:887 (5) –
00:24:387 (2) – move middle point up a bit for perfect blanket
00:44:614 (7) –add NC and remove NC from 00:45:523 (1) –


00:18:478 (7) – slider doesn’t match. Try this http://puu.sh/bMUTG/bae107c02e.jpg
00:21:432 (4) – perfect stack
00:44:614 (1) - ^
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04
Oh , Sorry for late = = ...

Since I want to university , there is a lot of things I need to adapt ...

New club , new classmate , new way of studing ... So , I quit my queue for a while =..= .

But , I promise that I absolutely mod your map too ~

Give you KDS for first ~ and I will reply your mod in this post .

Thank you in advence and star =ㄦ= .
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