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qoot8123
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2024年12月28日 at 下午 06:04:14

Artist: yuikonnu
Title: Yakimochi no Kotae -another story-
Tags: j japanese rock jrock j-rock pop jpop j-pop female vocal a solution for jealousy rokugen astrology 六弦アストロジー vocaloid ボーカロイド hatsune miku 初音ミク sm20605397 niconico douga ニコニコ動画
BPM: 190
Filesize: 5479kb
Play Time: 03:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.4 stars, 530 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.51 stars, 261 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (3.68 stars, 892 notes)
  4. Oni (4.93 stars, 1251 notes)
Download: yuikonnu - Yakimochi no Kotae -another story-
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Ready for mod~
Last edited by qoot8123 , edited 22 times in total.
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[Oni]
00:00:773 (1,2) - don please
00:00:931 (3) - kat
00:02:036 (7,8) - don
00:02:194 (9) - kat | tbh i don't like them kkd with the music
00:15:931 (91) - kat here
00:53:509 (40) - mini kat here, Kk will be good pattern
01:34:404 (288) - K here
02:34:562 (637) - d
02:34:720 (638) - d
02:34:878 (639) - d

[Muzukashii]
00:14:825 (59) - kat
00:55:878 (227,228) - ctrl + g
01:08:509 (289) - kat
01:13:562 (308) - kat
01:29:352 (369,370) - ctrl + g
01:38:194 (399) - don

[Futsuu]
00:12:615 (20,21) - ctrl + g | i like this part, dkdkd

[Kantan]
00:02:194 (2) - don here
00:07:246 (7) - don
02:49:562 (22) - move this to 02:49:720 (22) -

nice diff!<3
qoot8123
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qoot8123
fixed some~
thanks for mod~ :)
ReySHeL
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ReySHeL
hi qoot! :D
try offset 943
qoot8123
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qoot8123

ReySHeL wrote:

hi qoot! :D
try offset 943
hi reyshel~ :)
thanks for check timing^^
but i want to keep current offset because when i use 943, i found 03:07:246 (823,824) - is a bit off beat ><
neonat
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Kantan

00:35:036 (34) - change to d, with that undertone of the vocals
01:19:246 (87,88) - change to k, because this is the part where the violin's pitch remains at it's highest
01:41:983 (111) - K? I think it would be fine to highlight that cymbal while it's not too dense
02:00:931 (133) - k instead of K, I don't think a finish is needed, furthermore, the sound here is softer because the music stops
02:08:509 (141,142) - dk instead of kd
02:45:141 (16) - doesn't fit, I rather you have it at 02:44:983
03:05:352 (38) - change to d, the pitch already goes down here
03:27:457 (64,65,66) - dkk looks better here than kkd though

Futsuu

00:52:404 (112) - change it to d, I think that is better
02:29:983 (339) - remove it, the feel seems better that way

Muzukashii

00:07:878 (31,32) - do you really want finishes on these. By doing so, the impact of 00:08:509 (33) will be less
01:34:088 (385,386,387,388,389,390) - try kDdkkd
01:38:194 (399) - d would be nicer
02:23:036 (599) - I don't think D would be too nice here, a d would do

Oni

01:08:667 (157,158,159,160) - kkdK would fit the song better



Good Luck
qoot8123
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almost fixed~
thanks for mod~ :)
Senritsu
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Senritsu
so dead
i'm sorry for late orz
nice song btw <3

[General]
SPOILER
prefering 02:01:562 as the preview point. because she sang "yakimochi wo shite ..." which yakimochi refers to the title. idk tho :P

[Kantan]
SPOILER
00:16:088 (14) - suggest changing this to kat, for high piano and for consistency on the previous pattern 00:08:509 (7,8,9,10,11) - which is all dons
01:13:562 (79,80,81,82) - try pattern like this for consistency with the previous pattern,01:02:194 (66,67,68) - , which uses triplets for following the vocal, not the music
01:23:667 (92,93) - kat for mirroring with 01:25:562 (94,95,96) - ?
01:34:404 (103) - add a finish here, since you also add one at 01:41:983 (111) - , which both has same strong cymbal
01:54:615 (125) - change to d, suits well with vocal. also for consistency with 03:00:299 (34) -
02:14:825 (150) - change to kat for consistency with 01:06:615 (72) -
02:21:773 (157,158,159,160) - also same like above~
03:28:088 (65,66,67) - ^

[Futsuu]
SPOILER
01:13:878 (163) - remove the finish. you didn't add one at kantan, yea i know the reason, because it's too hard there. but then, if you add finish here for the strong drum, in reflection of that, you also must add one here 01:15:141 (167) - , because the cymbal there can be heard, and strong enough. and it's not at 02:21:773 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331) - lols
00:47:036 (98) - change to kat for consistency with 01:55:246 (261) -
01:29:983 (199,200) - swap, for consistency with 00:21:773 (40,41,42) -
01:41:983 (230) - finish here, for the same reason as kantan :3
01:49:878 (249) - sounds weird to have a note here, it doesn't naturally follows the vocal imo. try moving it to 01:50:194 to make it follows the vocal 'dekaeri' or whatever is that. sounds better
01:53:352 (257) - change to don here for consistency with 00:45:141 (94) - , and the vocal has the same pitch, so i don't think you don't need to make it kat, because 00:45:773 (95) - is much more higher with higher accent :P
02:45:141 (371) - not moving this to 02:44:983? check your kantan, becauase it's there. and it's much more better like this because following the music :3
03:20:758 - change to kat, ofc for vocal and for consistency, tho it doesn't contain duplet here~
03:21:773 (453) - idk, the patterns before use duplet here, but this doesn't. i'm not pushing you to do so though, but you may want to think about making it duplet here.

[Muzukashii]
SPOILER
00:08:983 (34) - any reason to put this note here? it's not misplaced at 00:08:825? because the guitar make a sound there, and a high one. and 4plet there seems out of place too xD
00:15:931 (64) - try moving this to 00:16:878. this pattern 00:15:457 (61,62,63,64,65) - doesn't exist on the second part of the song which has the similar music. you only use triplet here 01:23:667 (348,349,350) - which makes this pattern out of place :P
00:17:983 (73,74,75,76) - prefering ddkk here. first reason, mirroring 00:17:036 (68,69,70,71) - . second reason 00:18:299 (75) - has the 'same' music with 00:18:457 (76) - which the piano from high to low, and you make it d to k. last, let the vocal (and the stopping drum) which starts 00:18:615 (77) - have the different note from the ones before to differ it.
01:08:194 (287,288) - swap for kat pattern consistency. it follows the vocal pretty well too
01:14:825 (313) - misplaced finish? i can't hear anything that maybe supported with finish. probably move the finish to 01:15:141 (314) - for following the loud cymbal and the loud accent?
01:18:615 (327) - kat, for consistency with 00:10:404 (40,41,42) -
01:32:983 add don here? for consistency of following the vocal from 01:31:246 (375,376,377,378,379,380,381) - ?
01:41:983 (417) - missing finish?
02:06:141 (525,526,527,528) - change to dkdk for consistency with the previous kiai
02:14:036 add a kat, because you add one too at the previous kiai. and it's weird to cut the pattern on the middle, because the cymbal is playing there @@
02:48:773 (696) - finish here? because the loud drum or cymbal or whatever is that
02:54:773 add a don here for following the vocal? if i remember correctly (i mod futsuu and kantan yesterday) they also follows the vocal here. idk if i'm wrong..
03:29:036 (861) - add a finish too here? the cymbal can be heard and actually pretty strong owo just my suggestion tho..

[Oni]
SPOILER
00:08:983 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - i prefer keeping it simple here, because 01:17:036 (208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217) - is simple too. and it's the beginning, already attacking the players? ww or swap the pattern, will help a lot imo
00:13:404 (79,80,81) - suggesting changing this to kkd. both guitar and drum sound different here 00:13:562 (81) - . but 00:13:404 (79,80) - here, the guitar's pitchis still high.
00:36:931 (196,197,198) - i myself find this weird. because 00:37:009 (197) - doesn't have any sound at the music D: the vocal also sings 1/2
01:21:615 (228,229,230) - same as above~
02:40:404 (673) - add a finish here? also has a strong instrument, and my opinion is here is even stronger than 02:40:088 (672) -
02:48:773 (733) - add a finish too? similar reason as above
02:54:773 (763) - kat, for the same reason as muzukashii (?
03:06:615 (821,822) - another inconsistency with muzukashii. you use K K there, however it's k k here. idk, up to you of which one to change. but i suggest making them same.
03:10:404 (844) - misplaced finish? it's not applied at the first and second kiai, due to stream tho. but the vocal here isn't strong enough to be a reason as why this should have finish.
03:23:036 (942) - aaand missing a finish here lols because you added at the previous parts :P

Good luck~ /:D/
qoot8123
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almost fixed~
thanks for mod~ :)
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___________________________________________________________

General

Kantan to Futsuu ... 231 notes vs 473 notes= 242? .... add more notes in kantan D:
Futsuu to muzukashi ... 473 notes vs 865 notes = 392 ? -balance notes between 290-330


don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

___________________________________________________________

Kantan:

00:27:457 - Change to d
00:28:088 - ^
00:38:825 - Change to K (?)

___________________________________________________________

Futsuu:

02:12:299 - Change to D (?)
___________________________________________________________

Muzukashii:

01:58:088 - these D is a bit hard not?

02:26:194 - change to k.-.
02:28:720 - ^
02:31:246 - ^

1.- (suggest only)
02:34:404 - d
02:34:562 - d
02:34:641 - d
02:34:720 - d
02:34:878 - d

or

2.- (suggest only)
02:34:404 - d
02:34:562 - k
02:34:720 - d
02:34:799 - d
02:34:878 - d
___________________________________________________________

Oni:

01:14:667 - change to K
01:14:825 - change to k

02:22:878 - change to K
02:23:036 - change to k

03:10:404 - change to D
03:12:931 - change to K

03:28:562 - change to K
03:28:720 - change to k
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and that's all .-.
qoot8123
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qoot8123
fixed some~
thanks for mod~ :)
JUDYDANNY
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Hello~ :3 , and sorry I'm late. :?
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Taiko Moding Queue
[Kantan]
  1. 00:03:457 (2,3) - uumm,,, (2) add finisher ? or (3) change the normal? not too louder 00:04:720 (3) – than (2) imo.
  2. 00:45:773 (42) -　, delete? unnecessary imo.
  3. 01:53:983 (119) -^
  4. 01:29:983 (95) – delete? music becomes lonely.
  5. 02:00:299 (127,128) – how about this (d, k) change to (k, finisher K) ?
  6. 03:00:299 (34) – delete? same as other diffs.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:44:825 (90) – same as Kantan, delete?
  2. 01:53:036 (252) - ^
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:08:983 (34) – move to 00:08:825 (34) -?? I think its unnecessary pattern.
[Oni]
  1. 01:14:825 (195) – I sugest you to change the normal. and suggest too, 01:14:667 (194) - , 01:15:141 (197) – finishers? Sounds louder & fit as finisher place of Muzukashii (01:15:141 -).
  2. 02:22:878 (590,591,592,593) – same as 1st part.
  3. 03:28:562 (977,978,979,980) -^
  4. 02:14:667 (537) – k ?
  5. 01:26:588 (256) – delete? felt the over power a bit.
Nice overall , Go Go Rank !! Good Luck>w</
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M4M~ :3

This mod was done before the map was updated with JUDY's mod, so some mod conflicts might occur @@
Feel free to pm me if any mod conflicts are present and it causes my suggestions to be confusing :3


  • [Kantan]
  1. 01:24:299 - kat, consistent with 01:19:246 -? :3

  2. 02:39:457 - Don? it fits this note better imo



  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:15:773 (28,29) - Swap these two notes to maintain consistency with 00:10:404 (16,17,18) - ?

  2. 01:23:667 - Almost same as ^, change this to kat? Consistent with kkd at 01:18:615 -

  3. 01:49:878 - Move this to 01:50:194 -? It flows better imo

  4. 02:32:509 - Move to 02:33:773 -? I think the "k d k" rhythm that you set at 02:26:825 - sounds more natural if you repeat it here :3

  5. 02:46:720 - Move to 02:47:036 -? It doesn't sound natural ;w;



  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:41:983 - move this note to 00:41:825 - to maintain the consistenct pattern of the "k (1½ gap) k d" that you did for 00:39:299 -

  2. 02:33:773 - Change to don? It has the same sound with 02:31:246 -

  3. 02:34:404 - Add a don here? The current pattern sounds like it's left hanging at 02:33:773 - and it feels very empty imo @@


  • [Oni]
  1. 00:24:299 (126,127) - swap these two notes to d k to follow the vocal's pitch change?

  2. 00:46:562 - I think moving this to 00:46:720 - would improve the flow better

  3. 01:08:667 - Change to don? There is no rise in pitch of the music here

  4. 01:27:457 - Try a don for this note? It flows better imo

  5. 01:29:036 (267,268) - Swap these two to k d to follow vocal pitch?

  6. 02:20:194 - change to kat? So that you have consistency with the kat rhythm at 02:18:931 (562,563) -

  7. 02:47:983 - change to kat so that you can have a nice d d k k d d k k rhythm that flows well here?

  8. 02:55:562 (766,767,768) - This part feels very inconsistent with the previous part because 02:54:615 (762,763,764,765) - uses double notes and this part's change of rhyhtm to the triple notes is too sudden imo, try moving 02:55:878 (768) - to 02:56:036 - for better flow?

  9. 03:29:194 - change this note to don and change 03:29:509 - to kat? You can get a very solid flow of rhythm here :3

A very solid mapset, good luck with rank!
qoot8123
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qoot8123
Almost fixed~
thanks for mod~ :)
Shiki_nyan
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Shiki_nyan
Hi~!I'm sorry for late and lazy XD.
Here comes my mod~!
kantan
01:11:667 (72) - k(?)
03:00:299 - I think add a note here is ok.
Can't give more suggestions.

futsuu
00:01:562 (2) - delete it maybe can let them sound good and have a sense of hierarchy.
00:06:615 (8) - I want to delete it!
00:38:194 (77) - I'd like to change it to d
00:38:509 (78) - and change it to k
01:16:404 - add a d here(?)
01:36:615 (211) - I'd like to delete it.
02:24:615 - add a d
03:30:299 - add a d

muzukashii
01:43:404 (423) - change it to k
01:43:562 (424) - move it to 01:43:720
01:45:931 (435) - change it to k
01:46:088 (436) - move it to 01:46:246 and change it to d
01:46:562 (438) - delete it.
02:33:773 (626) - change it to k :)

oni
00:32:509 (171) - change it to k
00:32:667 (172) - delete it.
03:29:509 (982) - change it to k
03:29:667 (983) - change it to d
Lovely oni diff www
Sorry for late again.And good luck. :)
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Shiki_nyan
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好吧随手点了个quote..
qoot8123
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Fixed some~
thanks a lot~ :)
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