TERRA - Touka Renjou‬ · forum‬

Lust

osu! Alumni

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Lust 2014-02-01T03:22:58+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, February 12, 2014 at 10:28:49 PM

Artist: TERRA
Title: Touka Renjou
Source: Pop'n Music 15 Adventure
Tags: cloudchaser
BPM: 185
Filesize: 8233kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:

Cloudchaser's Hyper (4.91 stars, 207 notes)
Easy (3.01 stars, 134 notes)
Extra (5 stars, 304 notes)
Normal (4.24 stars, 161 notes)

Download: TERRA - Touka Renjou
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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cloudchaser x lust 5ever

Last edited by Lust 2014-02-13T03:29:17+00:00, edited 13 times in total.

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2014-02-01T03:32:44+00:00

#1

Yoeri

433 posts

Joined March 2012

Yoeri 2014-02-01T18:34:09+00:00

#2

IRC mod yay

2014-02-01 19:12 Yoeri: Do you want me to quick IRC mod
2014-02-01 19:12 Lust: yeh sure
2014-02-01 19:12 Yoeri: Or just point some shit out or w/e
2014-02-01 19:13 Lust: isnt that
2014-02-01 19:13 Lust: the same thing x)
2014-02-01 19:13 Yoeri: Maybe
2014-02-01 19:13 Yoeri: OMFG GRID LEVEL 1
2014-02-01 19:13 Lust: yep
2014-02-01 19:13 Lust: i always map grid level 1
2014-02-01 19:13 Yoeri: Pretty cool map btw
2014-02-01 19:13 Yoeri: Too easy for an Extra though
2014-02-01 19:13 Lust: the storyboard is so pretty xx
2014-02-01 19:13 Lust: oh dont worry about that
2014-02-01 19:14 Lust: extra= insane in pop
2014-02-01 19:14 Lust: pop'n music*
2014-02-01 19:14 Yoeri: 00:03:948 (8,1) - Bad flow and confusing read
2014-02-01 19:14 Lust: i was actually thinking of flipping that slider
2014-02-01 19:14 Lust: like the other way
2014-02-01 19:14 Lust: ya know
2014-02-01 19:15 Lust: thatll be better flow at least i think
2014-02-01 19:15 Yoeri: Yeh
2014-02-01 19:15 Yoeri: 00:11:164 (4,5,6) - This is a triplet (1/3)
2014-02-01 19:16 Yoeri: 00:15:461 (3,1) - Is confusing to read but you can leave it I guess
2014-02-01 19:16 Yoeri: 00:17:083 (5,6) - Looks a bit weird to not finish the pentagon
2014-02-01 19:17 Lust: for the confusing to read slider jump thing
2014-02-01 19:17 Lust: im just going to change the slider body
2014-02-01 19:17 Lust: because it looks so out of place
2014-02-01 19:17 Lust: x)
2014-02-01 19:17 Yoeri: Good idea
2014-02-01 19:17 Lust: that was back then when i had a different idea for the map
2014-02-01 19:18 Yoeri: 00:33:461 (7,8) - ctrl+g
2014-02-01 19:19 Yoeri: 00:50:975 (5,6) - Bad blanket
2014-02-01 19:20 Yoeri: 01:23:245 (8,1) - idk about this
2014-02-01 19:21 Lust: for that one yeah someone brought it up before
2014-02-01 19:21 Lust: what im thinking of doing is arching it a different way
2014-02-01 19:21 Lust: for better flow
2014-02-01 19:21 Yoeri: Yeah
2014-02-01 19:22 Yoeri: 01:32:894 (5,6,7,8) - Overmapped???
2014-02-01 19:22 Lust: LOL
2014-02-01 19:22 Lust: i know
2014-02-01 19:22 Lust: like
2014-02-01 19:22 Lust: gives a good end to the kiai
2014-02-01 19:22 Lust: a dramatic finish
2014-02-01 19:22 Lust: you know?
2014-02-01 19:22 Yoeri: Not really
2014-02-01 19:22 Lust: lmao
2014-02-01 19:22 Lust: well
2014-02-01 19:23 Lust: i guess i can also say it goes with the vocals a bit
2014-02-01 19:23 Yoeri: I'm pretty sure the spinner does that already
2014-02-01 19:23 Yoeri: Vocals are 1/2
2014-02-01 19:23 Lust: oh well guess i should change then
2014-02-01 19:23 Yoeri: 01:36:056 (2,1) - Space these out more?
2014-02-01 19:24 Yoeri: I think you should map the rest of the song
2014-02-01 19:25 Yoeri: Leaving the last part blank is okay if the outro is like really soft
2014-02-01 19:25 Yoeri: But that's not really the case here
2014-02-01 19:25 Lust: i htink its fine
2014-02-01 19:25 Lust: there isnt really much going no anyways
2014-02-01 19:25 Lust: think* on*
2014-02-01 19:26 Yoeri: 01:48:056 - End spinner here
2014-02-01 19:26 Lust: nah
2014-02-01 19:26 Lust: 01:49:353
2014-02-01 19:26 Lust: 01:49:353 -
2014-02-01 19:26 Lust: shit
2014-02-01 19:26 Lust: it lands on a sound
2014-02-01 19:26 Lust: that is a bit more loud and powerful
2014-02-01 19:26 Yoeri: Ehh sure
2014-02-01 19:27 Yoeri: btw............
2014-02-01 19:27 Yoeri: OD 8 please
2014-02-01 19:27 Yoeri: ACTION runs
2014-02-01 19:27 Lust: LOL
2014-02-01 19:28 Lust: i guess i could
2014-02-01 19:28 Yoeri: Yeah the rhythm is pretty simple
2014-02-01 19:28 Yoeri: And these kinds of songs are easy to get good accuracy on
2014-02-01 19:29 Yoeri: Alright then that's it I guess
2014-02-01 19:29 Lust: swag

izzydemon

1,382 posts

Joined April 2013

izzydemon 2014-02-10T01:39:03+00:00

Easy

00:03:948 (4,1) - do http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1323518 for amezing patrn and floe
00:36:056 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1323520 then distance snap (4)
01:05:245 (3,5) - fix the blanket
01:17:245 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1323526 i can't help it stuff like this just looks nicer this way

Normal

01:24:056 (1,2) - what are you doing don't map it like this

has a ton of 1/2's and sliders with repeats on blue ticks, they just don't seem nice there but w/e your call

Hyper

00:04:272 (8) - nc
00:09:461 (8) - nc
00:20:650 (8) - move it _one_ tiny grid up
00:49:677 (7) - nc
00:56:488 (6) - nc
01:07:840 (9) - nc
01:17:245 (7) - nc
01:21:786 (7) - nc

Extra

00:09:299 (4,5,6) - no
01:42:056 (2,3,4,5) - no

take my ~~imaginary star~~ ok i got two kudosu so take one

_koinuri

451 posts

Joined June 2012

_koinuri 2014-02-10T23:16:26+00:00

Hi. Bad mod

[General]
I think combo pattern for the most part should be every 2 big white tick for consistency. It also follows the song well, as well as the storyboard when it flashes with the strong part of the music. I added a combo suggestion on Easy as an example.

[Easy]

Combo suggestions

00:12:056 (4) - New combo
00:13:353 (1) - Remove combo
00:14:650 (3) - New combo
It helps be consistent with the other parts of the map before the spinner

00:57:461 (5) - New combo
00:58:759 (1) - Remove combo
01:00:056 (5) - New combo
01:01:353 (1) - Remove combo
01:02:650 (3) - New combo
01:03:948 (1) - Remove combo
01:05:245 (3) - New combo
01:09:786 (1) - Remove combo
01:10:434 (3) - New combo
This combo pattern is more consistent and it also adds a new combo every time the story board does the flash (except for the one at the end of this kiai).

01:18:218 (5) - New combo
01:19:515 (1) - Remove combo
01:20:813 (3) - New combo
Same reason as above

00:19:596 (4) - Fix the blanket, it's slightly off
01:06:542 (5,6,1) - I think it flows better if 6 was brought down a bit more, in middle of 5 and 1, like this

01:12:705 (4) - Blanket 01:11:407 (2) - ? It looks a lot nicer with the blanket since 01:11:732 (3) is also blanketing 01:11:407 (2)
01:17:245 (4) - Rotate 180 degree and ctrl+g? I think it's better to keep the wide curvy flow you made with 01:15:623 (1,2,3)
01:22:110 (5) - ctrl+g flows better from 01:20:813 (3,4) imo. You need to move a lot of things around if you do this though x_x

[Normal]
Nice difficulty, I couldn't find much here.
00:04:272 (1) - ctrl+h would avoid overlap and can blanket 00:03:948 (6) - , it looks nicer
00:41:894 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part looks nice. It looks like the 3 can blanket the 2 better though
01:18:218 (6) - Try blanketing 01:17:894 (5) - with it too, like this

You can see the path of the slider more clearly this way
01:45:542 (1) - Start the spinner at the same time as Easy and Extra difficulty, it fits the song better and keeps consistency with other difficulties.

[CloudChaser's Hyper]
I feel like the combos are too long in this difficulty. Try breaking it up more, preferably the way I mentioned it in General.

00:11:245 (11,1) - This part was really confusing for me. I keep getting 100s on 00:11:407 (1) because the jump is too sudden hard to read.
00:56:813 (8) - ctrl+g? It mirrors 00:54:867 (1) more and looks nicer imo
01:24:542 (13) - Move to (256,184) for better blanket with 01:24:056 (12).
01:24:705 (14) - Assuming you applied ^, move to around (308,124) so the distance with 01:24:542 (13) is roughly the same as 01:24:056 (12).
01:42:056 (3) - Blanket with 01:43:191 (5)?
01:43:515 (6) - ^

[Extra]
Flows really nice, it's fun

00:33:623 (8,9) - Try putting 8 on the end of 00:32:813 (5) for a circle flow, the drop to the 8 right now feels a bit awkward since this whole combo built up a circle. After that, put 9 to where the 8 was, so it can copy 00:32:488 (4,5).
00:44:164 (9,10) - Align the y's with 00:43:677 (6,7)? For symmetrical feel
Couldn't find much here.

Good luck with this map! I hope this mod helped a bit.

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2014-02-11T21:40:38+00:00

Loli

Loli -[Koinuri] wrote:
[CloudChaser's Hyper]
I feel like the combos are too long in this difficulty. Try breaking it up more, preferably the way I mentioned it in General. Yeah, I know.
00:11:245 (11,1) - This part was really confusing for me. I keep getting 100s on 00:11:407 (1) because the jump is too sudden hard to read.changed
00:56:813 (8) - ctrl+g? It mirrors 00:54:867 (1) more and looks nicer imo Yeah, it looks nice BUT it doesn't fit correctly with the vocals, I'm,following the lyrics, then, no changes.
01:24:542 (13) - Move to (256,184) for better blanket with 01:24:056 (12). I fixed the slider shape (01:24:056 (6) - ) for a better blanket
01:24:705 (14) - Assuming you applied ^, move to around (308,124) so the distance with 01:24:542 (13) is roughly the same as 01:24:056 (12).
01:42:056 (3) - Blanket with 01:43:191 (5)? I don't want to make blanket here because I lose the symmetry.
01:43:515 (6) - ^

Good luck with this map! I hope this mod helped a bit.

Thanks for the mod! ~~I need help with hitsounds~~

Moshi moshi Cloud desu

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Touka renjou.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53894
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 28921,76921,109434
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Touka Renjou
TitleUnicode:桃花恋情
Artist:TERRA
ArtistUnicode:TЁЯRA
Creator:Lust
Version:Cloudchaser's Hyper
Source:Pop'n Music 15 Adventure
Tags:cloudchaser
BeatmapID:363754
BeatmapSetID:146841

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,25229,31264
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\White Effect1.png",320,240
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\White Effect1.png",320,240
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\White Effect1.png",320,240
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1678,324.324324324324,4,1,1,70,1,0
2569,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
2732,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
7759,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
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74326,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
75623,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
96380,-117.647058823529,4,1,1,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 254,241,167
Combo4 : 255,128,128

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Lust

osu! Alumni

2,667 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Lust 2014-02-13T03:27:33+00:00

Lolikoin

Loli -[Koinuri] wrote:
[Easy]

changed all combo suggestions

00:19:596 (4) - Fix the blanket, it's slightly off fixed
01:06:542 (5,6,1) - I think it flows better if 6 was brought down a bit more, in middle of 5 and 1, like this ahh i think its fine, easy doesnt really need consistent flow all the time
01:12:705 (4) - Blanket 01:11:407 (2) - ? It looks a lot nicer with the blanket since 01:11:732 (3) is also blanketing 01:11:407 (2) alrighty
01:17:245 (4) - Rotate 180 degree and ctrl+g? I think it's better to keep the wide curvy flow you made with 01:15:623 (1,2,3) nice!
01:22:110 (5) - ctrl+g flows better from 01:20:813 (3,4) imo. You need to move a lot of things around if you do this though x_x ehhh yeah i think its better the way it is

[Normal]
Nice difficulty, I couldn't find much here.
00:04:272 (1) - ctrl+h would avoid overlap and can blanket 00:03:948 (6) - , it looks nicer nah looks good how it is
00:41:894 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part looks nice. It looks like the 3 can blanket the 2 better though fixed
01:18:218 (6) - Try blanketing 01:17:894 (5) - with it too, like this ehh i purposefully wanted the bump there
You can see the path of the slider more clearly this way
01:45:542 (1) - Start the spinner at the same time as Easy and Extra difficulty, it fits the song better and keeps consistency with other difficulties. oops mistake xD

[Extra]
Flows really nice, it's fun
00:33:623 (8,9) - Try putting 8 on the end of 00:32:813 (5) for a circle flow, the drop to the 8 right now feels a bit awkward since this whole combo built up a circle. After that, put 9 to where the 8 was, so it can copy 00:32:488 (4,5). i like the play on this one
00:44:164 (9,10) - Align the y's with 00:43:677 (6,7)? For symmetrical feel ill consider it
Couldn't find much here.

Good luck with this map! I hope this mod helped a bit.

thank you very much for the mod! updated

Erina

114 posts

Joined August 2012

Erina 2014-02-14T22:28:25+00:00

From my mod for voice queue!

I'm still pretty new to modding, so feel free to treat everything as only suggestions. I'd also like it if you'd provide me with feedback on my mods too, and an explanation for why you didn't apply some of my mods.

[Extra]
00:08:164 (1,2) - Consider keeping the sliders at the same position but pointing them at each other.
00:17:245 (6) - Add NC here to keep consistent with 00:12:056 (1)
00:18:542 (1) - If you followed the suggestion above, remove NC
00:19:840 (5) - Assuming you followed ^, add NC
00:27:623 (5) - I think NC here would work
~~00:33:786 (9) - Consider changing this to a slider, although that may ruin the pattern...~~ nvm I don't want you to break the pattern
00:38:650 (8) - Move this up a little bit to align it with notes before it
00:47:083 (1) - Remove NC
00:47:732 (3) - Assuming you followed ^, add NC
01:40:272 (4) - ctrl+h and stacking it with the beginning of the previous slider looks nice, up to you though.

Really nice map

[Hyper]
As people have said before me, consider breaking up some of these long combos (the ones that go over 10 or so).
00:04:272 (8) - Add NC
00:56:813 (8) - Maybe better as two notes or two shorter sliders
00:57:461 (10) - Add NC
00:59:083 (1) - Assuming you followed ^, remove NC
01:00:056 (4) - Add NC
01:04:596 (1,2,3) - Maybe NC these notes to be like 01:14:650 (1,1,1) to stay consistent with the rest of your map
01:36:380 (1,2) - Looks kind of weird imo, the negative space doesn't seem symmetrical.

[Normal]
00:10:759 (3) - Add whistle
00:17:245 (3) - Add NC
00:18:542 (1) - Remove NC
01:06:542 (4) - I would move this slider up to align with the previous note
01:13:029 (1,1) - Time between spinner end and next note seems a bit too small for Normal difficulty
01:27:299 (4) - I would move this slider to align with the previous note

[Easy]
00:02:975 (3,4,1) - I think something like this looks better: http://puu.sh/6Wa1t.jpg
00:11:732 (3) - Move this down a tiny bit to align it with the notes around it in a straight line, I think it looks better.
00:53:569 (2) - Add clap (maybe, I'm not good with hitsounds

)
01:09:786 (4) - Add NC
01:20:813 (1) - I think this is better with a finish

The Easy overall felt like a Normal to me, but I like it

Ugh how do I become a good mapper

Contact me so we can decide what you're going to sing

Lach

1,118 posts

Joined November 2012

Lach 2014-02-21T03:07:04+00:00

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/6VXs7/b68b2dc2e2.wav

MouseEasy

1,391 posts

Joined April 2012

MouseEasy 2014-02-27T00:48:28+00:00

terra

Maeglwn

Maeglwn 2014-02-27T01:11:10+00:00

Extra

00:28:110 (6,7,8,9,10) - extremely awkward and weird jumps that are difficult to read
00:43:191 (5) - weird slider start position, makes for a really awkward "jump" thing that's hard to hit

yay my mod is so good

toybot

1,067 posts

Joined June 2013

toybot 2014-03-02T02:12:31+00:00

wow maeg pr0 mod

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-03-07T04:04:40+00:00

Im gay

Storyboard:
00:01:678 - For this first pulse, a white flash may be good in addition with everything else, mostly because the image just sort of suddenly appears. A white flash will make a nice transition.

Insane:
00:02:650 (4) - This pattern sort of bugs me because natural flow would want this to be above (3), but im forcibly jerked away from that to hit this one.
00:06:867 (6) - Would prefer the NC to be here
00:17:245 (6) - Any reason for the huge spacing gap?
00:18:218 (8) - ^
00:31:515 (1) - Why? It doesn't really follow anything in the music, nor does it have any special hitsounds that adds effect to the piece.
00:37:353 (5) - ^
00:43:191 (5) - Would prefer the NC to be here
01:05:245 (4) - This looks really pretty but it plays terribly.
01:08:813 (9,1,2) - Anti-jumps usually work for either heavily isolated notes without much direction, or staccato notes, none of which apply to these notes.
01:21:137 (2,3,4) - ^

Main issue with this diff is that I'm seeing a lot of jumps and not a lot of reason.

Hard:
00:04:272 (8) - NC
00:09:461 (8) - ^
00:11:732 (1,1) - Remove NC
00:17:407 (2) - I'm not sure how much I agree with the rhythmic choice of this pattern, particularly this slider. It doesn't follow the music much at all
00:32:488 (1) - Remove NC
00:56:002 (5) - WAA!~ Nothing about this really makes sense except that it looks nice. Try reworking the pattern so you can still get the nice shape, but without such a sudden jump.
01:14:975 (1) - Remove NC
01:25:353 (16) - Would prefer the NC to be here.

Main issue is the combos being way too long, and the rhythmic choices not neccesarily fitting the style of the song.

Normal:
00:06:218 (4) - This and every other instance of this no. It's cool and I used to do it a lot but it doesn't really follow anything in the music, nor is it readily visible to see because of tick rate. This applies for all future instances.
00:55:353 (2,3) - It's because of things like this like a normal player would struggle so much deciphering this rhythm.
01:21:786 (4) - NC

Biggest thing is that sometimes the diff jump is really big with confusing rhythms.

Easy:
fine

uguu

Leader

osu! Alumni

1,849 posts

Joined January 2011

Leader 2014-03-09T13:28:32+00:00

heya

[Easy]

Isn't SV a bit too high? I hope it's fair enough for new players

00:04:272 (1) - This feels a bit out of place. I mean, random.
00:09:461 (1) - You should add a whistle in 00:10:759 - as you previously did in 00:04:272 (1) -
00:14:650 (1) - I don't really like the fact that the first part of the slider is different from the second one, I'd make the curves equal
00:36:056 (2,3) - Why didn't you make a blanket on (3)'s tail? That would have been cool. However, I have a different idea: getting rid of (2)'s blanket on (3), up to you to change it or not:
SPOILER
00:39:299 (3,4) - This doesn't flow well because (3)'s path leads to another direction and it's not good to see too ;~;
00:42:542 (2,3,1) - They should be converted to a slider, feels a bit weird to hit notes instead of letting a slider flows
00:52:272 (1) - THIS COULD BE A GREAT QUESTION MARK
00:59:083 (4) - People should stop using such shapes if there's nothing to blanket ;_; I'll point this out until my death
01:02:650 (1) - ;__;
01:28:921 (4) - Sounds repetitive adding previous and following note of a slider at the same placement, why don't you move it to x:299 y:369? You have to fix spacing a bit, though
01:31:191 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern might be too hard for an Easy because of the hidden note
01:39:623 (3,4,1) - ;~; why dis, I find it kinda repetitive and boring
01:44:813 (6,1) - I think they are kinda hidden, they should be emphasized more in order to close the map properly, like this:
SPOILER

[Normal]

00:03:623 (5,6,1) - Ugly overlap
00:06:218 (4) - This slider (and the following pattern as well) needs to be moved rightwards in order to improve the flow
00:10:759 (3) - Whistle on slider's head as I already suggested on [Easy]?
00:17:245 (3,4) - This pattern could be improved. To follow vocal more, you could replace (3) with a 3/2 slider, followed by a note on the white tick in order to keep the rhythm stable, then add another circle on 00:18:218 - . This is how it should be, if you didn't understand
00:19:191 (2,3) - Overlaps is kinda bad because 00:19:840 (3) - isn't long enough, you better re-arrange the pattern
00:38:326 (1,2) - These sliders look like a failed mirror pattern, I suggest changing 00:39:299 (2) -'s shape. Here's what I did, I think it flows nice:
SPOILER
00:50:975 (4) - In my opinion, removing repeat and replacing it with a note would follow vocals much better
00:56:813 (5,6,1) - Have you ran out of ideas? D: I don't think a stack will fit here and looks like a lazy move
01:06:218 (3) - Nazi, but should be moved a bit to the left
01:20:813 (3,4) - You could replace 3 with a 1/1 slider in order to reduce the break which feels a bit too long, especially for a kiai part
01:24:705 (2) - Tiny issue again, more to the right
01:26:975 (3) - x:382 y:358 :--)

[Cloudchaser's Hyper]

00:49:677 (7) - NC on this would avoid a too long combo
01:01:353 (8) - ^
01:17:245 (7) - ^
00:53:894 (1) - Why don't you use the same sampleset Lust did in his diffs? It's much better
01:14:650 (1,1,1) - ^
00:57:948 (11,12) - Two 1/1 sliders follow vocals more accurately
01:11:407 (3) - Feels weird to have such slider when you have only curved sliders on the rest of the map
01:20:002 (2) - Delete this note to keep a pattern you did often before constant?
01:46:840 (1) - You should reduce the volume at the end of the spinner like on the other difficulties

[Extra]

I believe EX would be a more accurate diff name, Extra has always reminded to something difficult and special in osu!, meanwhile EX will fit the pop n'music custom name more precisely.

00:06:867 (6) - Why isn't the new combo here instead on 00:08:164 (1) - ?
00:10:759 (3) - Whistle on slider's head as I already suggested on [Easy] and [Normal]?
00:12:056 (1,2,3,4) - This actually breaks the flow, I don't really enjoy playing this kind of pattern since they play awkwardly and it doesn't fit much with the song in my opinion
00:19:191 (3,4) - Try to CTRL+G the whole pattern! It ends up very well, especially because 00:19:516 (4) - flows perfectly with the following slider
00:37:353 (5) - You probably forgot to add a new combo here since you did that on the previous same pattern before

Lust

osu! Alumni

2,667 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Lust 2014-03-09T15:21:55+00:00

thanks for the mods guys! ill apply them when cloud gets around to fixing the sb

ktgster

Elite Mapper

483 posts

Joined November 2008

ktgster 2014-03-15T01:21:32+00:00

Free Mod

osu file format v12

[General]
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PreviewTime: 53894
Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:桃花恋情
Artist:TERRA
ArtistUnicode:TЁЯRA
Creator:Lust
Version:ktgster's Expert
Source:Pop'n Music 15 Adventure
Tags:cloudchaser
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[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

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