This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on zondag 1 september 2013 at 2:58:41

Artist: Wizet, Nexon
Title: Temple of Time
Source: MapleStory
Tags: rpg online game pink bean been nexon
BPM: 100
Filesize: 3242kb
Play Time: 02:14
Difficulties Available:

1. Mini Bean (1,52 stars, 139 notes)
2. Pink Bean (4,64 stars, 287 notes)

Download: Wizet, Nexon - Temple of Time
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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hi :3

hi

nice song :3!

I think this title is "Temple Of Time" , right ? pls check https://osu.ppy.sh/s/34169

good luck

alacat wrote:

hi

nice song :3!

I think this title is "Temple Of Time" , right ? pls check https://osu.ppy.sh/s/34169

good luck

hello ! ^^ thankyou :3
''Temple of Time'' and ''Time Temple'' are both used as the song title. The beatmap you linked contains an other version of the song, which is why I decided to use the other name instead. ^^

Remove Wizet, Nexon, MapleStory, and Temple of Time from the tags
Change the offset to 12100 (it was slightly ahead)
As a suggestion, fill in the final break of Pink Bean, it doesn't need 4 breaks as a 2 minute song
for the triple hits at 00:40:927 (1) - I suggest using claps or soft hits instead, since the song is so nice, I wouldn't want that obnoxious sound >.>

Great song and map otherwise, good luck!

Podzy wrote:

Remove Wizet, Nexon, MapleStory, and Temple of Time from the tags
Change the offset to 12100 (it was slightly ahead)
As a suggestion, fill in the final break of Pink Bean, it doesn't need 4 breaks as a 2 minute song
for the triple hits at 00:40:927 (1) - I suggest using claps or soft hits instead, since the song is so nice, I wouldn't want that obnoxious sound >.>

Great song and map otherwise, good luck!

i'm not done with this beatmap yet, which is why it's in ''works in progress/help'' ^^
thankyou for the help with tags, offset and the audio suggestion tho :3 ♥

Hi~

General

Nice and relaxing song~

Pink Bean

00:11:650 - add note
00:28:900 (13) - NC
00:40:900 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
00:45:700 (1,2,3) - better to have both 2.00x
00:48:100 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
00:54:100 (1,1,2,1,2,1) - incosistent spacing (you can copy 00:54:700 (1,2) and ctrl+shift+R)
00:54:700 (1,2) - add finish at start
01:02:500 - add note
00:54:700 (1,2) to 00:54:700 (1,2) - add something... so hollow
01:43:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - inconsistent spacing
02:02:500 (1,2,3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing

Mini Bean

00:41:500 (3,1) - better with the same distance
00:46:300 (3,1) - Same ^
01:06:100 (2,1) - better to have 0.90x as 01:04:900 (1,2)
01:52:900 (1) - start at the repeat of 01:50:500 (1) is more pretty imo

Good Luck~^^

ignobeatmapskin wrote:

Pink Bean

00:54:700 (1,2) to 00:54:700 (1,2) - add something... so hollow

I think you wrote down the wrong time ? ^^

ignobeatmapskin wrote:

Mini Bean

00:41:500 (3,1) - better with the same distance
00:46:300 (3,1) - Same ^

Same distance as what ? > <

Thank you! I fixed almost everything ^^

Hi~random mod.
Above all,your beatmap have a nice personal hit sound,I like it.

attention:Blue=Highly recommended
black=suggestions

[General]
Do not put anything before the red line unless you wanna see some issues occurs,your offset should be 100.

[Mini Bean]
00:12:700 (2) -In principle,we shouldn't overlap notes,let's move it to x:208,y:272.
00:14:500 (5) -Move to x:304,y:272.
00:15:100 (1) -Move to x:208,y:272.
01:04:900 -Generally we don't change the bpm times in easy diff,and it's unnecessary.Why don't you just cancel it?
01:04:900 (1,2) -Just do what you did at 01:00:100 (1,2).

[Pink Bean]
00:02:200 (1,2,3) -Make those three with both 00:04:600 (1,2,3) and 00:07:00 (1,2,3) looks like a Isosceles triangle.
00:04:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -What's that? 1/6 Beat Snap Divisor?It's weird.Why don't you just use 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor while you editing?
01:07:300 (1,2,3,4,5) -^
01:07:900 (1,2,3,4,5) -^
01:08:500 (1,2,3,4,5) -^
01:42:550 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -^
02:14:500 -End with whistle may be better.

That's all.
Good luck!

kocaca2009 wrote:

SPOILER

Hi~random mod.
Above all,your beatmap have a nice personal hit sound,I like it.

attention:Blue=Highly recommended
black=suggestions

[General]
Do not put anything before the red line unless you wanna see some issues occurs,your offset should be 100.

[Mini Bean]
00:12:700 (2) -In principle,we shouldn't overlap notes,let's move it to x:208,y:272.
00:14:500 (5) -Move to x:304,y:272.
00:15:100 (1) -Move to x:208,y:272.
01:04:900 -Generally we don't change the bpm times in easy diff,and it's unnecessary.Why don't you just cancel it?
01:04:900 (1,2) -Just do what you did at 01:00:100 (1,2).

[Pink Bean]
00:02:200 (1,2,3) -Make those three with both 00:04:600 (1,2,3) and 00:07:00 (1,2,3) looks like a Isosceles triangle.
00:04:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -What's that? 1/6 Beat Snap Divisor?It's weird.Why don't you just use 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor while you editing?
01:07:300 (1,2,3,4,5) -^
01:07:900 (1,2,3,4,5) -^
01:08:500 (1,2,3,4,5) -^
01:42:550 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -^
02:14:500 -End with whistle may be better.

That's all.
Good luck!

Thankyou! ^^ I fixed most of that now ~

Oh, I love this song!
Btw, try to make the difficulties like this:
Monk
Guardian
Dodo
Lilynouch
Lyka
Pink Bean

Btw, is it okay that I will try to work on a diff of my own? I already started it a bit

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

[General]
delete Wizet, Nexon - Temple of Time (Mirchi).osb
TimingPoints: 2500,600,4,1,1,100,1,0
Use the same color in all beatmaps.
I find the hitsound too loud, you can use inherit previous timming setting at somewhere to reduce the sound.

[Mini Bean]
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
00:19:300 (1,2) - always mind the distance snap, these object might be misunderstanding as other rhythm.
00:43:300 (1) -
00:48:100 (1) - although these slider fit the music, but it is a little hard for a beginner player to play with (especially 3-returns slider), spilt it and use more slider instead

[Pink Bean]
StackLeniency: 0.7
00:22:300 (4,3) - distance snap > 5.4, consider to reduce it.
00:33:550 (5,1,2,3,4) - hard to read (especially the circle), try not to snap them.
00:40:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - avoid using 1/6 notes, it's hard to read (or use a slider instead).
00:49:000 (4,1) - too close?
01:36:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ..
01:42:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - ^
01:07:300 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - use slider instead?
01:59:500 (1,2) - snap it?

Good luck.

Such a pretty and fluffy song~
From my queue
[General]
Hitsounds are kinda loud try something around 10-40% maybe
I'd also consider using the normal hit of the soft sample set provided
You have no kiai times - add them on where you think strong points of the song are
[Mini Bean]
Nazi modding on blankets cuz I start counting squares when i see them (an annoying habbit)
00:19:300 (1) - Move the second point of this slider 1 grid to the left
00:55:900 (1) - ^ right
01:36:100 - Insert break
02:07:300 (1,2) - 3rd point away from each other
02:09:700 (1) - Silence this slider by using an inherited timing point with 5% volume. And I highly recommend using the soft hit at the end of it
[Pink Bean]
The red timing point doesn't match Mini Bean's and is far in the song
00:02:200 (1,2,3) - I don't really think there's a need to put the first 2 notes. I kinda consider it to be overmapping
00:26:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Combos pretty long, put a NC or two, maybe 1 for each triplet?
00:38:500 - Maybe end here instead. It felt kinda cut too short. Maybe replace 00:36:100 (1,2,3) with a spinner
01:00:100 (1) - Put the whistle only at the head of the slider
01:12:100 (1) - Silence this slider
01:45:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Some of these don't land on the music, only on every 1/2 beat
01:57:700 (1) - Whistle only at the head of the slider
02:07:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Overmapped; only put a note every 1/2 beat

Pretty good!
Good luck!~

i asure you, you need a time check from a BAT either on a modding queue

wow,maplestory support~

[General]
Offset: 111(You should change it)
Pink bean difficulty:The offset should't start in 12100 .. Try it like mini bean,And the offset 100 change to 111 .

And the stack leniency shouldn't use 0.2,It may cause the map unrankable,Do it like mini bean difficulty (Important, you should fix)

TAGS:you can add some like https://osu.ppy.sh/b/111203

Mini bean difficulty:Hp and Od-2 ,try to add a break time lol
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That's all,nice song
Goodluck!

ax_pokl wrote:

SPOILER

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

[General]
delete Wizet, Nexon - Temple of Time (Mirchi).osb
TimingPoints: 2500,600,4,1,1,100,1,0
Use the same color in all beatmaps.
I find the hitsound too loud, you can use inherit previous timming setting at somewhere to reduce the sound.

[Mini Bean]
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
00:19:300 (1,2) - always mind the distance snap, these object might be misunderstanding as other rhythm.
00:43:300 (1) -
00:48:100 (1) - although these slider fit the music, but it is a little hard for a beginner player to play with (especially 3-returns slider), spilt it and use more slider instead

[Pink Bean]
StackLeniency: 0.7
00:22:300 (4,3) - distance snap > 5.4, consider to reduce it.
00:33:550 (5,1,2,3,4) - hard to read (especially the circle), try not to snap them.
00:40:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - avoid using 1/6 notes, it's hard to read (or use a slider instead).
00:49:000 (4,1) - too close?
01:36:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ..
01:42:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - ^
01:07:300 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - use slider instead?
01:59:500 (1,2) - snap it?

Good luck.

thankyou!
honestly i don't think the 1/6 notes are a problem at all. they add something to the beatmap so it won't be boring.
it's supposed to be a hard/insane map, people who play at this level should be able to read them, right ? > <

MeatloafCereal wrote:

SPOILER

Such a pretty and fluffy song~
From my queue
[General]
Hitsounds are kinda loud try something around 10-40% maybe
I'd also consider using the normal hit of the soft sample set provided
You have no kiai times - add them on where you think strong points of the song are
[Mini Bean]
Nazi modding on blankets cuz I start counting squares when i see them (an annoying habbit)
00:19:300 (1) - Move the second point of this slider 1 grid to the left
00:55:900 (1) - ^ right
01:36:100 - Insert break
02:07:300 (1,2) - 3rd point away from each other
02:09:700 (1) - Silence this slider by using an inherited timing point with 5% volume. And I highly recommend using the soft hit at the end of it
[Pink Bean]
The red timing point doesn't match Mini Bean's and is far in the song
00:02:200 (1,2,3) - I don't really think there's a need to put the first 2 notes. I kinda consider it to be overmapping
00:26:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Combos pretty long, put a NC or two, maybe 1 for each triplet?
00:38:500 - Maybe end here instead. It felt kinda cut too short. Maybe replace 00:36:100 (1,2,3) with a spinner
01:00:100 (1) - Put the whistle only at the head of the slider
01:12:100 (1) - Silence this slider
01:45:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Some of these don't land on the music, only on every 1/2 beat
01:57:700 (1) - Whistle only at the head of the slider
02:07:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Overmapped; only put a note every 1/2 beat

Pretty good!
Good luck!~

thanks a lot! ^^
i dislike mint ice cream too :3

_Kaiser wrote:

SPOILER

wow,maplestory support~

[General]
Offset: 111(You should change it)
Pink bean difficulty:The offset should't start in 12100 .. Try it like mini bean,And the offset 100 change to 111 .

And the stack leniency shouldn't use 0.2,It may cause the map unrankable,Do it like mini bean difficulty (Important, you should fix)

TAGS:you can add some like https://osu.ppy.sh/b/111203

Mini bean difficulty:Hp and Od-2 ,try to add a break time lol
------------------------------------------------------------------
That's all,nice song
Goodluck!

thankyou! fixed everything ~

Pink Bean

00:40:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - overmapped and not in the right rhythm. There should be only 5 notes and at 00:40:311 - 00:40:461 - 00:40:611 - 00:40:761 and 00:40:911
00:54:711 (1) - too many repeats, 1 repeat at 00:54:861 and end at 00:55:011
00:55:911 (1,1) - ^
01:00:111 (1) - change this rhythm, this does not flow as well as it can be:
01:07:311 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped, there is really no need for the 1/8 beats, you should not just place notes for the sake of making it harder
01:07:911 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:08:511 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:33:111 (1) - 1/4 repeat is good enough, 1/8 you can't hear the music. Have just one repeat at 01:33:261
01:34:311 (1) - ^
01:35:511 (1) - ^
01:42:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - does not follow rhythm again. Notes should be at 01:42:411 - 01:42:561 - 01:42:711 - 01:42:861 - 01:43:011 and 01:43:161 - basically 1/4 beats
01:52:311 - 01:56:211 - why is this part not mapped? it just like any other part you have mapped so far. You should not leave this part empty, it's unusual

It is not advised to place notes where there is no music, which occurs here. There are also parts which have a melody which should be mapped, but is left blank.

neonat wrote:

Pink Bean

00:40:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - overmapped and not in the right rhythm. There should be only 5 notes and at 00:40:311 - 00:40:461 - 00:40:611 - 00:40:761 and 00:40:911 fixed
00:54:711 (1) - too many repeats, 1 repeat at 00:54:861 and end at 00:55:011 don't know what you mean > <
00:55:911 (1,1) - ^
01:00:111 (1) - change this rhythm, this does not flow as well as it can be: will think about it

SPOILER

01:07:311 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped, there is really no need for the 1/8 beats, you should not just place notes for the sake of making it harder fixed
01:07:911 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ fixed
01:08:511 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ fixed
01:33:111 (1) - 1/4 repeat is good enough, 1/8 you can't hear the music. Have just one repeat at 01:33:261 fixed
01:34:311 (1) - ^ fixed
01:35:511 (1) - ^ fixed
01:42:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - does not follow rhythm again. Notes should be at 01:42:411 - 01:42:561 - 01:42:711 - 01:42:861 - 01:43:011 and 01:43:161 - basically 1/4 beats fixed
01:52:311 - 01:56:211 - why is this part not mapped? it just like any other part you have mapped so far. You should not leave this part empty, it's unusual will think about it

It is not advised to place notes where there is no music, which occurs here. There are also parts which have a melody which should be mapped, but is left blank.

thanks a lot!

[Pink Bean]
The low slider speed is a normal thing in a song like this, but it seems to make you have a lot of jumps. Jumps are fine, but they're a big contrast to other parts with very small spacing instead.

00:10:911 (1) - remove NC
00:30:711 (1) - remove NC
00:33:561 (1) - remove this in general
00:34:911 (1) - remove NC
00:44:511 (1) - ^
...etc. just because it's different doesn't mean NC :<

00:54:711 (1,1,1) - ?
00:58:911 (1,2,3,4) - this would almost be ok if the hitsounds weren't these
01:07:311 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - just silly

01:39:711 (1) - this completely covers the last slider

There are two ways to use new combos, for silly pattern emphasis, and for neatly separating stanzas. These both can be balanced or one can be used over another. In this song, you seem to make every pattern have its own combo. Not every jump or rhythm change needs to have its own combo.

This is a peaceful song, this is obvious, so the map should be peaceful, correct? Yes. In older maps, people liked to make maps like these, and they'd get ranked. Nowadays, unless it's done very well, it isn't done at all. These songs should have big jumps or those silly sliders that don't fit the song. I recommend upping the slider speed, and making simple patterns that go with the song.

I can't say much about this map other than that it needs a lot of work to be rank-worthy, but you'll get there.
[Mini Bean]
00:15:111 (1) - no NC
A good rule of thumb about new combos is that if they're in the same 'phrase' of the song, they should be the same. Usually every 5th big tick.

00:25:611 (2,3) - delete these
00:39:111 (2,3) - ^
01:34:311 (1) - anyone new will hit this as soon as they hit the note before and miss
02:04:911 - feels empty here

Pretty ok diff, but could use a bit more.

Good luck with this map!

hi from my queue!


Looks ok, but I've caught a few bad DS here and there :S

...I didn't pass hard after 4 tries, lol. The map's BPM is at 100, so I'm not sure of Hard mode is appropriate for such a map.
This diff's a bit over mapped if you ask me.
00:33:561 (1,1,2,3,4) - This sounds and looks so confusing.

Cheers!