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nano - Mozaik Role (English ver.)

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madabau
50 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
madabau
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 07 Juni 2013 at 1:54:02

Artist: nano
Title: Mozaik Role (English ver.)
Tags: newtoniorock8 gumi megpoid deco*27 kazyuP trio amatou western stylized
BPM: 145
Filesize: 13884kb
Play Time: 02:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,47 stars, 304 notes)
  2. Mozaik (4,91 stars, 396 notes)
  3. Newtoniorock8's Normal (3,08 stars, 231 notes)
  4. Role (5 stars, 483 notes)
Download: nano - Mozaik Role (English ver.)
Download: nano - Mozaik Role (English ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
My first serious beatmap.
One of nano's vocaloid song remake~

All done, mods or MATs are welcome ^^
Newtoniorock8's Normal by Newtoniorock8 - Done
Hard by me - Done
Mozaik (Hard+) by me - Done
Role (Insane) by me - Done
Last edited by madabau , edited 24 times in total.
StickyPicky
509 posts
Joined October 2012
StickyPicky
hi ~ :) #modreqs

:arrow: NORMAL

Use this hitsound ~
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/2jQgY

00:15:460 / 00:16:287 / 00:18:770 / 00:19:597 / 00:22:080 (3) - / 00:28:079 (2,3) - / 00:29:942 (1) - / 00:31:390 (3,4) - / 00:33:252 / 00:36:562 / 00:39:872 / 00:41:527 (2,4) - / 00:44:837 (2) - / 00:45:665 / 00:46:492 (4) - / 00:47:320 / 00:48:147 (3) - / 00:48:975 / 00:49:802 (3) - / 00:51:457 (2,4) - / 00:52:285 add clap here ~

00:13:391 (1) - / 00:17:115 / 00:20:425 / 00:23:735 / 00:27:045 / 00:40:286 / 00:46:906 / add Finish + clap here ~

00:13:805 / 00:50:216 / finish here ~

SPOILER
uhh too many hitsounds >.< Can I do the normal for you?
Last edited by StickyPicky , edited 1 time in total.
madabau
50 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
madabau
thank you newtoniorock8 ^^
and sure, you can do the normal. I'm bad with hitsounds. ><

will be updated soon~ UPDATED, will continue with the hitsounds.
DingGGu
305 posts
Joined January 2011
DingGGu

Hard


01:38:523 (4) - I think 01:38:420 (4,5,6) - better.

Mozaik


01:12:456 (8) - : wrong beat, change 01:12:352 (8) -

01:12:766 (9) - : And If you add 01:12:352 (8) - then, add 01:12:766 (9) - this too

01:50:729 (3) - : wrong beat, change 01:50:833 (3) -

02:35:209 (8) - : wrong beat, change 02:35:105 (8) -

02:35:519 (9) - : add
madabau
50 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
madabau
thanks dingggu ^^
will be updated UPDATED
Kiyura_old
115 posts
Joined November 2012
Kiyura_old
I think you should get a higher quality video for the beatmap :D
for the mistakes :

MOZAIK

01:36:971 (2) - : add
01:47:419 (3) - , 01:47:522 (4) - : a little off timing, should be : 01:47:522 (3) - and 01:47:729 (4) -
01:51:764 (2) - off timing, should be 01:51:660 (2) -
02:40:691 (5) - and 02:41:105 (6) - a little of timing, I think it would be better if 02:40:795 (5) - and 02:41:312 (6) -
madabau
50 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
madabau
Thank you bryan170799 :)
will be updated with the hitsounds soon~ UPDATED.
The hitsounds in Normal, Hard, and Mozaik are also updated.
The video changed into a higher quality. PLEASE REDOWNLOAD IF YOU DOWNLOADED BEFORE 20/03/2013~
StickyPicky
509 posts
Joined October 2012
StickyPicky
here's the Normal Diff >.<
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/2kIJP
madabau
50 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
madabau
thanks ^^
will be updated asap~ UPDATED. Added Newtoniorock's Normal and Role difficulty. Added some beats in the intro.
And finally all is done :)
grimmreapervi
3 posts
Joined November 2012
grimmreapervi
Normal:
00:33:665 (1) - Maybe move the slider one beat to the right to 00:33:769 (1) - or make it one beat longer.
00:53:526 (1) - Again, this could be one beat longer, but it still makes sense as it is.

Hard:
00:39:251 (5) - 1 beat to the right to sync with "path"? --> 00:39:355 (5) -
01:02:112 (4) - You could move this to 01:02:215 (4) - or 01:02:422 (5) - to 01:02:526 (5) -
01:48:143 (3) - and 01:48:454 (4) - could be moved to 01:48:247 (3) - and 01:48:557 (4) - to emphasize the bigger pause on "our" than on "our-llittle"

Tell me what you think! This is my first mod so don't hesitate to tell me that I'm talking complete nonsense :?
StickyPicky
509 posts
Joined October 2012
StickyPicky

grimmreapervi wrote:

Normal:
00:33:665 (1) - Maybe move the slider one beat to the right to 00:33:769 (1) - or make it one beat longer. uhh, no, >.<
00:53:526 (1) - Again, this could be one beat longer, but it still makes sense as it is. ^
thx
madabau
50 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
madabau
Sorry for the late reply :o I'll tell what I fix or not.

grimmreapervi wrote:

Hard:
00:39:251 (5) - 1 beat to the right to sync with "path"? --> 00:39:355 (5) - The "path" is on 00:39:251, so no fix.
01:02:112 (4) - You could move this to 01:02:215 (4) - or 01:02:422 (5) - to 01:02:526 (5) - I prefer to add a beat on 01:02:422, because the 01:02:215 is in sync with "honesty". For the second one I didn't change it (01:02:422 in sync with "honesty"). I just turned it into a slider.
01:48:143 (3) - and 01:48:454 (4) - could be moved to 01:48:247 (3) - and 01:48:557 (4) - to emphasize the bigger pause on "our" than on "our-llittle" I didn't change the beat (the sync), but I added a hitcircle on 01:48:557.

Tell me what you think! This is my first mod so don't hesitate to tell me that I'm talking complete nonsense :? Not really helpful :? But it gave me some inspirations to improve. Good luck in your next mod :)
Foxxer_old
Foxxer_old
Timing & Offset check

BPM: 145
Offset: 580

Looks better ;)

General

You should put the Slider Tick Rate of Mozaik on 2.

Mozaik

00:27:683 (2,3) - This notes are strange. It's better like this:
00:30:993 (2,3) - ^
00:33:062 (3,4,1) - Approach these notes a little bit more
00:34:303 (2,3) - >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ^
00:37:613 (2,3) - ^
01:01:612 (1) - This slider should be end on the white line.

Good Luck~
madabau
50 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
madabau

Foxxer wrote:

Timing & Offset check

BPM: 145
Offset: 580

Looks better ;) - changed and snapped to all difficulties :D

General

You should put the Slider Tick Rate of Mozaik on 2. - changed

Mozaik

00:27:683 (2,3) - This notes are strange. It's better like this: - OK
00:30:993 (2,3) - ^ - OK
00:33:062 (3,4,1) - Approach these notes a little bit more - OK
00:34:303 (2,3) - >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ^ - OK
00:37:613 (2,3) - ^ - OK
01:01:612 (1) - This slider should be end on the white line. - OK

Good Luck~
Thanks a lot for the mod :) and UPDATED.
Honeybadger_old
22 posts
Joined March 2012
Honeybadger_old
Hello! Visiting from my good ol' young queue.

[Newtoniorock8's Normal]

  • 02:33:269 (1) - A new player might have difficulty reorienting themselves after a spinner that quickly. Consider shortening the spinner or adding more time before the first note after the spinner.
    02:46:097 (1,1,1,1) - Quadruple spinners just seems lazy to me.
    It might be slightly too difficult for normal, but don't quote me on that because I'm not sure at all.
[Hard]

  • 00:37:821 (2) - It's too fast to hide the note like that, I suggest rearranging so it is visible beyond the hitcircle.
    02:46:200 (1,1) - Same problem as in the normal difficulty, only here there's only two. If you're gonna do outros like that, keep them consistent.
That's all I got for ya, for now.
StickyPicky
509 posts
Joined October 2012
StickyPicky

Dwargkiller wrote:

Hello! Visiting from my good ol' young queue.

[Newtoniorock8's Normal]

  • 02:33:269 (1) - A new player might have difficulty reorienting themselves after a spinner that quickly. Consider shortening the spinner or adding more time before the first note after the spinner. fixed ~
    02:46:097 (1,1,1,1) - Quadruple spinners just seems lazy to me.
    It might be slightly too difficult for normal, but don't quote me on that because I'm not sure at all. thanks, fixed ~
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1489
PreviewTime: 70077
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Mozaik Role (English ver.)
TitleUnicode:Mozaik Role (English ver.)
Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:nano
Creator:madabau
Version:Newtoniorock8's Normal
Source:
Tags:newtoniorock8 gumi megpoid deco*27 kazyuP trio amatou
BeatmapID:230725
BeatmapSetID:83573

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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448,88,179104,1,0,0:0:0:0:

tnx ~
madabau
50 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
madabau

Dwargkiller wrote:

[Hard]

  • 00:37:821 (2) - It's too fast to hide the note like that, I suggest rearranging so it is visible beyond the hitcircle.- Fixed
    02:46:200 (1,1) - Same problem as in the normal difficulty, only here there's only two. If you're gonna do outros like that, keep them consistent.- Now that you mention it, it is really inconsistent. :o Then I'll make more beats until the end.
Thanks for the mod :D , and regarding the outro's beats, it'll take time to add it to all difficulties.Will be updated as soon as possible. UPDATED.
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,547 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
You need an Easy difficulty, 3 stars and below. 3.5 stars for easiest difficulty is not rankable.


Normal

00:06:373 (3,4) - a bit difficult for a normal, this rhythm I do not advise to be used
00:28:717 (4,5) - ^ and distance spacing is not equal
00:36:580 (6) - move it elsewhere, obscured
00:39:890 (7,1) - ^
01:03:062 (6) - ^
01:06:373 (7) - ^
your kiai time starts at 01:10:077 - should be at 01:10:097 to be snapped to the white line
kiai time of yours ends at 01:23:317 - not snapped to 01:23:338 white line
01:46:097 (6) - ^
01:49:407 (7) - ^
01:59:338 (6) - ^
02:02:648 (7) - ^
02:06:373 - kiai time start here, not 02:06:349
Blue lines as well
You might want to look at your rhythm again to make it sound nicer and smoother


Hard

Kiai times not snapped
Blue lines as well
00:13:821 (1) - add finish on start of slider
00:20:442 (1) - ^
02:19:614 - kiai time ends here, not 02:19:594
kiai time starts at 02:32:835 - not snapped, should be at 02:32:855
02:45:269 (4,5) - slightly too difficult for normal
02:59:131 (7) - finish sound
00:38:028 (3) - change the rhythm:
SPOILER
00:40:924 (2) - not directly below slider
01:38:442 (4) - move slider to start at 01:38:545 and first repeat is at 01:38:855 and slider ends at 01:39:166 like this:
SPOILER
01:40:717 (2) - move slider to start at 01:40:821 and end at 01:41:131
SPOILER
01:47:338 (2) - ^
02:44:235 - add a note
02:59:131 (2) - add finish
You might want to look at your rhythm again to make it sound nicer and smoother. It sounds very halting and doesn't really flow

Mozaik

Kiai times not snapped
Blue lines as well
00:20:442 (1) - add finish at the start of slider
00:28:200 (3) - this rhythm:
SPOILER
00:31:511 (3) - ^
00:34:821 (3) - ^
00:54:476 (3) -
SPOILER
00:55:717 (4) - slider 1/4 beat long and repeat until 00:56:235 (5) -
SPOILER
Some rhythms could be changed for the better of the map overall

Role

Kiai times not snapped
Blue lines as well
00:15:476 (1) - slider should end at 00:15:786
01:04:407 - add a note
01:06:166 - ^
01:20:028 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm should be as such (sounds chaotic right now):
SPOILER
02:02:442 - add a note
02:19:304 - ^
02:42:786 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm would fit better (sounds chaotic right now):
SPOILER
02:45:269 (9) - should be 1/2 beats instead of 1/1 beats
02:55:097 - add a note
02:58:407 - ^
02:59:131 (3) - add finish
In my opinion, I do not like some/quite a number of the rhythms used in the difficulties, I believe/think they could be made better

Good luck
StickyPicky
509 posts
Joined October 2012
StickyPicky

neonat wrote:

You need an Easy difficulty, 3 stars and below. 3.5 stars for easiest difficulty is not rankable.


Normal

00:06:373 (3,4) - a bit difficult for a normal, this rhythm I do not advise to be used fixed ~
00:28:717 (4,5) - ^ and distance spacing is not equal
00:36:580 (6) - move it elsewhere, obscured
00:39:890 (7,1) - ^
01:03:062 (6) - ^
01:06:373 (7) - ^
your kiai time starts at 01:10:077 - should be at 01:10:097 to be snapped to the white line
kiai time of yours ends at 01:23:317 - not snapped to 01:23:338 white line
01:46:097 (6) - ^
01:49:407 (7) - ^
01:59:338 (6) - ^
02:02:648 (7) - ^
02:06:373 - kiai time start here, not 02:06:349
Blue lines as well
You might want to look at your rhythm again to make it sound nicer and smoother
SPOILER
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 70097
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

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TitleUnicode:Mozaik Role (English ver.)
Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:nano
Creator:madabau
Version:Newtoniorock8's Normal
Source:
Tags:newtoniorock8 gumi megpoid deco*27 kazyuP trio amatou
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400,248,65442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,312,65752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,384,66373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,352,66786,6,0,P|296:288|336:192,2,180,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,352,68648,1,4,0:0:0:0:
160,336,68855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,69062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,264,69269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,208,70097,6,0,P|328:192|368:160,2,90,12|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,71338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,200,71752,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,144,72166,2,0,P|248:120|304:104,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,160,72993,6,0,P|416:144|456:144,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,240,73821,2,0,L|512:272,2,90,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,168,75062,2,0,P|320:120|200:80,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,112,76304,2,0,L|104:128,4,22.5,0|0|0|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,176,77131,6,0,L|296:200,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,288,77959,2,0,L|202:316,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,79200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,168,79614,6,0,P|268:144|324:120,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,152,80442,2,0,P|456:184|504:176,2,90,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,66,81683,2,0,P|392:64|344:88,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,82511,2,0,B|320:232|232:232|168:280,1,180,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,96580,6,0,P|424:144|432:88,1,135,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,120,97614,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,104,97821,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,88,98235,2,0,P|160:88|112:96,1,90
48,56,99062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,152,99476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,232,99890,6,0,P|136:272|208:288,1,135,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,100924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,152,101131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,120,101545,2,0,P|304:168|312:216,1,90
256,272,102373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,328,102786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,272,103200,6,0,P|432:240|520:200,1,135,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,120,104235,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,96,104442,2,8,P|376:80|336:88,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,152,105166,2,0,P|296:160|248:176,1,67.5
176,200,106097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,192,106511,6,0,P|98:249|172:293,1,135,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,328,107545,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,312,107752,2,0,P|328:280|352:256,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,208,108476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,108786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,109407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,208,109821,6,0,P|88:144|80:88,1,135,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,120,110855,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,104,111062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,88,111476,2,0,P|352:88|400:96,1,90
464,40,112304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,144,112717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,232,113131,6,0,P|384:272|312:288,1,135,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,114166,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,152,114373,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,120,114786,2,0,P|208:168|200:216,1,90
256,272,115614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,328,116028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,116442,6,0,P|80:240|-8:200,1,135,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,120,117476,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,96,117683,2,8,P|136:80|176:88,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,118407,2,0,P|216:160|264:176,1,67.5
336,200,119338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,119752,6,0,P|413:249|339:293,1,135,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,328,120786,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,312,120993,2,0,P|184:280|160:256,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,208,121717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,122028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,72,122648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,40,123062,6,0,P|328:32|456:88,2,180,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,64,124924,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,112,125131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,152,125338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,192,125545,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,144,126373,6,0,P|344:216|264:288,2,180,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,128442,2,8,P|272:56|216:56,2,90,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,129683,2,0,P|208:200|96:232,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,320,130924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,320,131338,2,0,P|264:256|376:224,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,132580,2,0,L|424:128,4,22.5,0|8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,77,133407,5,8,0:0:0:0:
344,128,133821,2,0,P|304:160|256:176,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,80,135062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,128,135476,2,0,P|224:160|272:176,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,136717,5,8,0:0:0:0:
152,264,137131,2,0,P|184:288|240:304,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,216,138373,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,240,138786,2,0,P|360:248|400:280,2,90,0|8|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,40,141269,6,2,B|136:64|128:136|80:208,1,180
264,176,142924,2,2,B|336:176|360:256|400:296,1,180
216,280,144580,2,2,B|152:288|136:224|96:160,1,180
256,72,146235,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,160,147062,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,304,147890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,216,148717,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,72,149545,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,160,150373,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,151200,12,0,152855,0:0:0:0:
176,152,153683,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,144,154097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,154511,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,240,154924,2,0,P|376:272|336:296,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,248,155752,6,0,P|208:264|168:264,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,184,156580,2,0,L|48:152,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,192,157821,2,0,L|328:160,2,90,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,104,159062,2,0,L|120:80,1,90
144,168,159890,6,0,L|231:189,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,272,160717,2,0,L|120:248,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,328,161959,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,288,162373,6,0,P|424:264|440:224,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,200,163200,2,0,P|304:168|256:176,2,90,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,256,164442,2,0,P|232:280|184:272,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,288,165269,2,0,P|112:240|152:200,1,90
256,192,166097,12,0,167752,0:0:0:0:
96,160,168579,6,0,P|144:120|184:112,2,90
160,224,169821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,240,170235,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,216,170648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,171062,2,0,P|368:120|328:112,2,90
464,232,172304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,172717,6,0,P|368:120|328:112,2,90
352,224,173959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,240,174373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,216,174786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,175200,2,0,P|144:120|184:112,2,90
48,232,176442,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,288,176855,2,0,P|176:296|216:296,1,90
280,240,177683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,178097,2,0,B|304:104|304:104|320:56,1,90
360,72,178717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,80,178924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,88,179131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
thanks ~ fixed :3
madabau
50 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
madabau

neonat wrote:

Hard

Kiai times not snapped - fixed. Is it just me or there is something wrong with AI mod?
Blue lines as well - You mean bookmarks? Not really matter but okay.
00:13:821 (1) - add finish on start of slider - OK
00:20:442 (1) - ^ - OK
02:19:614 - kiai time ends here, not 02:19:594 - fixed
kiai time starts at 02:32:835 - not snapped, should be at 02:32:855 - fixed
02:45:269 (4,5) - slightly too difficult for normal - don't really understand what are you pointing :?
02:59:131 (7) - finish sound - OK
00:38:028 (3) - change the rhythm: - OK
SPOILER
00:40:924 (2) - not directly below slider - OK
01:38:442 (4) - move slider to start at 01:38:545 and first repeat is at 01:38:855 and slider ends at 01:39:166 like this: - OK
SPOILER
01:40:717 (2) - move slider to start at 01:40:821 and end at 01:41:131 - OK
SPOILER
01:47:338 (2) - ^ - OK
02:44:235 - add a note - OK
02:59:131 (2) - add finish - OK
You might want to look at your rhythm again to make it sound nicer and smoother. It sounds very halting and doesn't really flow

Mozaik

Kiai times not snapped - fixed
Blue lines as well - as well
00:20:442 (1) - add finish at the start of slider - OK
00:28:200 (3) - this rhythm: - OK
SPOILER
00:31:511 (3) - ^ - OK
00:34:821 (3) - ^ - OK
00:54:476 (3) - - OK
SPOILER
00:55:717 (4) - slider 1/4 beat long and repeat until 00:56:235 (5) - - OK, but a bit changed (since it's too hard)
SPOILER
Some rhythms could be changed for the better of the map overall

Role

Kiai times not snapped - fixed
Blue lines as well - OK
00:15:476 (1) - slider should end at 00:15:786 - OK
01:04:407 - add a note - OK
01:06:166 - ^ - OK
01:20:028 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm should be as such (sounds chaotic right now): - OK
SPOILER
02:02:442 - add a note - OK
02:19:304 - ^ - OK
02:42:786 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm would fit better (sounds chaotic right now): - OK
SPOILER
02:45:269 (9) - should be 1/2 beats instead of 1/1 beats - OK
02:55:097 - add a note - OK
02:58:407 - ^ No, I think it's tight enough.
02:59:131 (3) - add finish - OK
In my opinion, I do not like some/quite a number of the rhythms used in the difficulties, I believe/think they could be made better

Good luck
Thanks a lot for the "very helpful" mod :) I'll try more to make the map smoother.
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,547 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
Oh whoops, I thought they were storyboard lines. My bad, forgot they were bookmarks.
Cloudchaser
2,327 posts
Joined May 2012
Cloudchaser


General
:arrow: MozaikRoleNano.jpg size is unrankeable. sizes rankeables are 1336x768 (wide screen, recommend), 1024x768 (Normal) or 800x600 (not recommended)

Role
:arrow: Inconsistent NC in some parts of the song
:arrow: There are inherited points unsnapped.
:arrow: 00:03:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - be more creative and create a new pattern here! more funny ~

Mozaik
:arrow: I think hitsounds are kinda poor ):
:arrow: 02:06:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - boring pattern

Hard
:idea: HD 6

nothing else I can see, good luck
madabau
50 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
madabau

-Cloudchaser wrote:



General
:arrow: MozaikRoleNano.jpg size is unrankeable. sizes rankeables are 1336x768 (wide screen, recommend), 1024x768 (Normal) or 800x600 (not recommended) - changed to 1024x768

Role
:arrow: Inconsistent NC in some parts of the song - fixed
:arrow: There are inherited points unsnapped. - Don't really know where it is... If you mean kiai times, I think I've already snapped it. But AI mod keeps telling me it's unsnapped. :o
:arrow: 00:03:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - be more creative and create a new pattern here! more funny ~ - created one.

Mozaik
:arrow: I think hitsounds are kinda poor ): - added more. I hope it gets merrier.
:arrow: 02:06:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - boring pattern - changed.

Hard
:idea: HD 6 - Since HP 6 is for Mozaik, I changed it to 5 instead.

nothing else I can see, good luck
Thanks a lot for the mod~ :) Hope it gets better now.
Osu Tatakae Ouendan
osu! Alumni
333 posts
Joined December 2010
Osu Tatakae Ouendan
( =w=)

Starting with less detailed changes for now on Role
overall: like how it plays. not too hard and not boring. in my opinion the shapes of the sliders are fine, though i'm not sure how everyone else will look at it. some of them could use some fixing, though i'm unable to do them now due to lack of time (and apparently sleep). same goes for Mozaik diff
[Role]
00:13:821 (1,2) - unsnapped slider ends. it isnt allowed. please snap on the 1/2 red tick and not the 1/16
00:14:855 (5) - ^
00:17:131 (1) - ^
00:18:786 (7) - ^
00:16:304 (10) - ^
00:17:131 (1) - ^
00:18:786 (7) - ^
00:28:717 (6) - too far from (5), though not much of a problem
00:54:373 (4,5) - i think its better if you place a note in between these two, because it feels a little weird to have empty space there, since you're following the drums on this part
01:01:407 (4,5,6) - the empty space in between 4 and 5 can get confusing. i suggest you fill that with a note or map differently
01:22:511 (7) - NC to make it more noticable as a slowdown
01:57:683 (4,5,6) - same with 01:01:407 (4,5,6)
02:11:752 (6,7) - move a little farther from (5). it can be confusing if its too close to it
02:44:028 (5) - too close to (4)
02:56:855 (3,4,5) - too close to (2)


will do a mod on the sliders next time
madabau
50 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
madabau

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:

( =w=)

Starting with less detailed changes for now on Role
overall: like how it plays. not too hard and not boring. in my opinion the shapes of the sliders are fine, though i'm not sure how everyone else will look at it. some of them could use some fixing, though i'm unable to do them now due to lack of time (and apparently sleep). same goes for Mozaik diff
[Role]
00:13:821 (1,2) - unsnapped slider ends. it isnt allowed. please snap on the 1/2 red tick and not the 1/16 - Didn't notice it :o Fixed~
00:14:855 (5) - ^ - Fixed
00:17:131 (1) - ^ - Fixed
00:18:786 (7) - ^ - Fixed
00:16:304 (10) - ^ - Fixed
00:17:131 (1) - ^ - lol, double typed
00:18:786 (7) - ^
00:28:717 (6) - too far from (5), though not much of a problem - moved it closer, it plays better~
00:54:373 (4,5) - i think its better if you place a note in between these two, because it feels a little weird to have empty space there, since you're following the drums on this part - OK
01:01:407 (4,5,6) - the empty space in between 4 and 5 can get confusing. i suggest you fill that with a note or map differently - Just moved (5) in the timeline. Please check it again if you can :)
01:22:511 (7) - NC to make it more noticable as a slowdown - OK, also applied to all difficulties. (except Normal)
01:57:683 (4,5,6) - same with 01:01:407 (4,5,6) - OK
02:11:752 (6,7) - move a little farther from (5). it can be confusing if its too close to it - OK
02:44:028 (5) - too close to (4) - OK
02:56:855 (3,4,5) - too close to (2) - OK


will do a mod on the sliders next time
Thanks for the mod! :D I'm looking forward to your next mod.
Osu Tatakae Ouendan
osu! Alumni
333 posts
Joined December 2010
Osu Tatakae Ouendan
ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLRIIIIGHT
let's see what we have here


apply mods indented to the right only if you choose to apply the mod before it
[ALL DIFFS]
00:00:683 - dont understand the extra inheriting section here


[Newtoniorock8's Normal]
00:12:579 (4) - second slider point x 48 y 176
third slider point x 48 y 96
last slider point x 104 y 48
don't know if this was the shape you were going for though http://puu.sh/2xWwH

00:41:545 (2) - move to x 288 y 256
00:41:959 (3) - move to the left three times
-----------00:43:200 (4) - move to x 328 y 224
00:53:545 (1) - too far from previous note
00:56:028 - why is it so empty here.
00:56:442 (5) - too close to previous note
01:03:062 (5) - too close to previous
01:06:373 (6) - too close to previous
01:06:786 (1) - have the last slider point at x 248 y 352
01:16:304 (4) - i dont recommend 1/4s here. but its not too serious
01:22:511 (4) - second slider point x 320 y 240
third point x 208 y 240
last point x 208 y 204
it turns out this way http://puu.sh/2xWRb
01:46:097 (5) - too close to previous
01:49:407 (6) - too close to previous
01:59:338 (5) - too close to previous
02:02:648 (6) - too close to previous
02:04:924 (2,3,4,5) - make it like this ? : http://puu.sh/2xWVM
02:12:580 (6) - not recommending 1/4. either way, change it so that the slider seems to flow into the next note which is above. the slider ends downward, so naturally the next note should be downward. flipping the next pattern isnt a good idea imo. so try making it lean diagonally to the right
02:21:269 (1) - second point x 128 y 64
third point x 128 y 168
last point x 72 y 200
turns out like this http://puu.sh/2xWZJ

02:22:924 (2) - choose between http://puu.sh/2xX0 or http://puu.sh/2xX0M

02:24:580 (3) - second point x 152 y 280
third x 96 y 240
last x 96 y 160

02:48:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move everything to the right one snap so it will be perfectly symmetrical
--------02:52:717 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - copy paste flip from above pattern



[Hard]
00:17:131 (1) - too close to previous. might wanna move once up and the one snap right. you will have to adjust spacing on next part if you do this though
00:28:717 (4) - too close to previous
00:34:717 (2) - first point x 432 y 248
second point x 376 y 312
last x 296 y 328
00:36:373 (5) - too close to previous. move higher a little
00:39:269 (5) - too close to previous

00:44:442 (3) - too close to previous
00:46:304 (8) - move to the right two snaps
-----------00:46:511 (9) - move up once

00:46:924 (1) - too close to previous
00:57:476 (2) - 2nd slider point x 304 y 168
00:58:511 (4) - too close to previous
01:02:855 (7) - move one grid higher to make it look cleaner
01:03:476 (1) - move red point two points lower
01:22:511 (3) - new combo to read slow down



[Mozaik]
00:13:821 (1) - 3rd point x 136 y 216
last x 224 y 176
00:16:304 (7) - 2nd point x 160 y 288
00:18:786 (1) - just a suggestion cause i cant think of any good slider movement here especially on grid size 3 (dont mind the different combo in the pic)http://puu.sh/2xXZl
00:24:373 (2) - 2nd point x 352 y 56
3rd x 296 y 32
4th x 240 y 72
00:45:890 (4) - best of i could think of was this http://puu.sh/2xY2m
01:05:028 (4) - umm, should be on the red tick, then shorten it by one 1/4.
01:22:511 (4) - new combo to read slowdown
01:48:786 (3) - too far from previous. i don't see any other 1/4 jump in the map (unless i missed some) so move it closer
02:01:304 (4) - same with 01:05:028 (4)

[Role]
00:34:304 (4) - 2nd point x 184 y 312
3rd point x 216 y 240
last x 160 y 216
00:46:924 (1) - move the second point to the right once
01:01:614 (5) - too far from previous in terms of spacing, though it would fit better in terms of rhythm. its fine if you make it a jump i guess but not too far
01:38:855 (8) - 2nd point x 368 y 104
3rd point x 304 y 104
last x 320 y 32

01:57:890 (5) - same as 01:01:614 (5)


i guess this is all. good luck with the map. the map flow is pretty nice imo
madabau
50 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
madabau

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:

ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLRIIIIGHT
let's see what we have here


apply mods indented to the right only if you choose to apply the mod before it
[ALL DIFFS]
00:00:683 - dont understand the extra inheriting section here - This is only for Hard, Mozaik, and Role. The intro's hitsounds seem too loud. So I decided to decrease the timing point's volume, then moved this inheriting point to 00:13:407 and increased the volume.

[Hard]
00:17:131 (1) - too close to previous. might wanna move once up and the one snap right. you will have to adjust spacing on next part if you do this though - OK
00:28:717 (4) - too close to previous - OK
00:34:717 (2) - first point x 432 y 248
second point x 376 y 312
last x 296 y 328 - OK
00:36:373 (5) - too close to previous. move higher a little - OK
00:39:269 (5) - too close to previous - OK
00:44:442 (3) - too close to previous - OK
00:46:304 (8) - move to the right two snaps - OK
-----------00:46:511 (9) - move up once - OK, moved to right a bit.

00:46:924 (1) - too close to previous - OK
00:57:476 (2) - 2nd slider point x 304 y 168 - OK
00:58:511 (4) - too close to previous - OK
01:02:855 (7) - move one grid higher to make it look cleaner - OK
01:03:476 (1) - move red point two points lower - OK
01:22:511 (3) - new combo to read slow down - done before.



[Mozaik]
00:13:821 (1) - 3rd point x 136 y 216
last x 224 y 176
00:16:304 (7) - 2nd point x 160 y 288
00:18:786 (1) - just a suggestion cause i cant think of any good slider movement here especially on grid size 3 (dont mind the different combo in the pic)http://puu.sh/2xXZl - OK
00:24:373 (2) - 2nd point x 352 y 56
3rd x 296 y 32
4th x 240 y 72 - OK
00:45:890 (4) - best of i could think of was this http://puu.sh/2xY2m - OK
01:05:028 (4) - umm, should be on the red tick, then shorten it by one 1/4. - OK, also filled the empty space.
01:22:511 (4) - new combo to read slowdown - done
01:48:786 (3) - too far from previous. i don't see any other 1/4 jump in the map (unless i missed some) so move it closer - OK, didn't see it before :o
02:01:304 (4) - same with 01:05:028 (4) - OK, the same fix

[Role]
00:34:304 (4) - 2nd point x 184 y 312
3rd point x 216 y 240
last x 160 y 216 - OK
00:46:924 (1) - move the second point to the right once - OK
01:01:614 (5) - too far from previous in terms of spacing, though it would fit better in terms of rhythm. its fine if you make it a jump i guess but not too far - OK, didn't see it again xD moved closer to previous.
01:38:855 (8) - 2nd point x 368 y 104
3rd point x 304 y 104
last x 320 y 32 - OK

01:57:890 (5) - same as 01:01:614 (5) - OK, the same fix


i guess this is all. good luck with the map. the map flow is pretty nice imo
Wow, another big mod! :) Thanks a lot~
Update for Hard, Mozaik, and Role. Waiting for Newtoniorock8's fix and I'll update again. (Newtoniorock, I updated only the tags. Please update it.)
Lapis-
407 posts
Joined June 2011
Lapis-
Mod queue request



[Normal

01:38:235 (4) Make this silder go towards the (5) like this?
SPOILER
01:48:476 (4) This 1/4 doesn't match much in the song. I suggest you delete this note.

Hard
Audio lead in clashes with Mozaik?

HP Drain 5? 4's a bit low for a hard I feel.
00:23:545 (8) I really don't like where this circle is. I think you should move it so it doesn't go backwards into the silder: Like this:
SPOILER
00:46:511 (9) I think this silder should be snapped to 1/2 and not 1/4. You could delete the note before it and put it there so that its still a repeat.
Mozaik
Seems solid! No suggestions.


Role
00:07:614 (1) I don't like how the clap sounds on this. I suggest you remove it?
02:00:166 (2) I don't like how this notes hidden under a slider end, move it out towards the end of the slider maybe?
02:15:476 (9) This jump. Not a big fan of it. I suggest you bring it closer and prehaps do a triangle pattern?





GL!
madabau
50 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
madabau

PortalLife wrote:

Hard
Audio lead in clashes with Mozaik? - fixed

HP Drain 5? 4's a bit low for a hard I feel. - changed it to 5
00:23:545 (8) I really don't like where this circle is. I think you should move it so it doesn't go backwards into the silder: Like this: - No, I think it doesn't have correct spacing. Instead, I moved it elsewhere.
SPOILER
00:46:511 (9) I think this silder should be snapped to 1/2 and not 1/4. You could delete the note before it and put it there so that its still a repeat. - OK

Mozaik
Seems solid! No suggestions.

Role
00:07:614 (1) I don't like how the clap sounds on this. I suggest you remove it? - OK
02:00:166 (2) I don't like how this notes hidden under a slider end, move it out towards the end of the slider maybe? - OK
02:15:476 (9) This jump. Not a big fan of it. I suggest you bring it closer and prehaps do a triangle pattern? - OK, applied to the same patterns too.





GL!
Thanks for the mod! :)
StickyPicky
509 posts
Joined October 2012
StickyPicky

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:

[ALL DIFFS]
00:00:683 - dont understand the extra inheriting section here


[Newtoniorock8's Normal]
00:12:579 (4) - second slider point x 48 y 176
third slider point x 48 y 96
last slider point x 104 y 48
don't know if this was the shape you were going for though http://puu.sh/2xWwH

00:41:545 (2) - move to x 288 y 256
00:41:959 (3) - move to the left three times
-----------00:43:200 (4) - move to x 328 y 224
00:53:545 (1) - too far from previous note
00:56:028 - why is it so empty here.
00:56:442 (5) - too close to previous note
01:03:062 (5) - too close to previous
01:06:373 (6) - too close to previous
01:06:786 (1) - have the last slider point at x 248 y 352
01:16:304 (4) - i dont recommend 1/4s here. but its not too serious
01:22:511 (4) - second slider point x 320 y 240
third point x 208 y 240
last point x 208 y 204
it turns out this way http://puu.sh/2xWRb
01:46:097 (5) - too close to previous
01:49:407 (6) - too close to previous
01:59:338 (5) - too close to previous
02:02:648 (6) - too close to previous
02:04:924 (2,3,4,5) - make it like this ? : http://puu.sh/2xWVM
02:12:580 (6) - not recommending 1/4. either way, change it so that the slider seems to flow into the next note which is above. the slider ends downward, so naturally the next note should be downward. flipping the next pattern isnt a good idea imo. so try making it lean diagonally to the right
02:21:269 (1) - second point x 128 y 64
third point x 128 y 168
last point x 72 y 200
turns out like this http://puu.sh/2xWZJ

02:22:924 (2) - choose between http://puu.sh/2xX0 or http://puu.sh/2xX0M

02:24:580 (3) - second point x 152 y 280
third x 96 y 240
last x 96 y 160

02:48:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move everything to the right one snap so it will be perfectly symmetrical
--------02:52:717 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - copy paste flip from above pattern

PortalLife wrote:

[Normal

01:38:235 (4) Make this silder go towards the (5) like this?
01:48:476 (4) This 1/4 doesn't match much in the song. I suggest you delete this note.
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Mozaik Role.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 70097
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Mozaik Role (English ver.)
TitleUnicode:Mozaik Role (English ver.)
Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:nano
Creator:madabau
Version:Newtoniorock8's Normal
Source:
Tags:newtoniorock8 gumi megpoid deco*27 kazyuP trio amatou
BeatmapID:230725
BeatmapSetID:83573

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"MozaikRoleNano.jpg",1,1
Video,0,"mozaikrolenano.flv"
//Break Periods
2,83538,95260
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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70097,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
83338,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
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152442,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
152855,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
166097,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0


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Combo1 : 0,128,64
Combo2 : 0,102,255
Combo3 : 128,0,128
Combo4 : 255,128,0

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336,200,119338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,119752,6,0,P|413:249|339:293,1,135,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,328,120786,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,312,120993,2,0,P|184:280|160:256,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,208,121717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,122028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,72,122648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,40,123062,6,0,P|328:32|456:88,2,180,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,64,124924,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,112,125131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,152,125338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,192,125545,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,144,126373,6,0,P|344:216|264:288,2,180,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,128442,2,8,P|272:56|216:56,2,90,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,129683,2,0,P|208:200|96:232,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,320,130924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,320,131338,2,0,P|264:256|376:224,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,132580,2,0,L|424:128,4,22.5,0|8|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,77,133407,5,8,0:0:0:0:
344,128,133821,2,0,P|304:160|256:176,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,80,135062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,128,135476,2,0,P|224:160|272:176,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,136717,5,8,0:0:0:0:
152,264,137131,2,0,P|184:288|240:304,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,216,138373,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,240,138786,2,0,P|360:248|400:280,2,90,0|8|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,40,141269,6,2,B|136:64|128:136|80:208,1,180
264,176,142924,2,2,B|336:176|360:256|400:296,1,180
216,280,144580,2,2,B|152:288|136:224|96:160,1,180
256,72,146235,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,160,147062,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,304,147890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,216,148717,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,72,149545,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,160,150373,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,151200,12,0,152855,0:0:0:0:
176,152,153683,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,144,154097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,154511,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,240,154924,2,0,P|376:272|336:296,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,248,155752,6,0,P|208:264|168:264,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,184,156580,2,0,L|48:152,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,192,157821,2,0,L|328:160,2,90,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,104,159062,2,0,L|120:80,1,90
144,168,159890,6,0,L|231:189,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,272,160717,2,0,L|120:248,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,328,161959,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,288,162373,6,0,P|424:264|440:224,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,200,163200,2,0,P|304:168|256:176,2,90,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,256,164442,2,0,P|232:280|184:272,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,288,165269,2,0,P|112:240|152:200,1,90
256,192,166097,12,0,167752,0:0:0:0:
96,160,168579,6,0,P|144:120|184:112,2,90
160,224,169821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,240,170235,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,170648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,168,171062,2,0,P|360:128|320:120,2,90
448,248,172304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,168,172717,6,0,P|360:128|320:120,2,90
336,224,173959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,240,174373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,216,174786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,160,175200,2,0,P|136:120|176:112,2,90
40,240,176442,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,288,176855,2,0,P|176:296|216:296,1,90
280,240,177683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,178097,2,0,B|304:104|304:104|320:56,1,90
360,72,178717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,80,178924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,88,179131,1,0,0:0:0:0:

fixed some ~ thank you for the mods :)
Azer
World Cup Organiser
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Azer
m4m :D

Role
  1. 00:29:028 (7) - I wouldn't reverse that slider, it would sound better.
  2. 00:35:959 (8) - Slider end not stacked properly.
  3. 00:55:511 (9) - I wouldn't reverse that slider, it would sound better.
  4. 01:02:235 (7) - Time on 01:02:131 instead.
  5. 01:11:338 (6) - Feels out of place - I would put a circle instead.
  6. 01:17:545 (4,5,6) - Snap 1/2
  7. 01:38:545 (7) - I wouldn't reverse that slider, it would sound better.
  8. 02:12:166 (8) - Snap 1/2
  9. 02:37:821 (1,2,3) - Snap 1/2
  10. 02:40:304 (4,5,6) - Snap 1/2

Good song, good map, have a star! ^w^
madabau
50 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
madabau

AzerFrost wrote:

m4m :D

Role
  1. 00:29:028 (7) - I wouldn't reverse that slider, it would sound better. - OK
  2. 00:35:959 (8) - Slider end not stacked properly. - fixed
  3. 00:55:511 (9) - I wouldn't reverse that slider, it would sound better. - OK
  4. 01:02:235 (7) - Time on 01:02:131 instead. I don't want to move it. Instead, I added a beat on 01:02:131.
  5. 01:11:338 (6) - Feels out of place - I would put a circle instead. Uh... No. >< I like the drag here.
  6. 01:17:545 (4,5,6) - Snap 1/2 - OK
  7. 01:38:545 (7) - I wouldn't reverse that slider, it would sound better. - OK
  8. 02:12:166 (8) - Snap 1/2 - OK
  9. 02:37:821 (1,2,3) - Snap 1/2 - Only snapped (1) and (2). (3) seems good enough to me. Applied to the previous reff too.
  10. 02:40:304 (4,5,6) - Snap 1/2 - For this one I want a different variation. So I changed (5) only.

Good song, good map, have a star! ^w^
Thanks for the mod :) The flow is getting better.
and of course for the star~
madabau
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Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
madabau
Revive~
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