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Linkin Park - Waiting For The End

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Naikaze
2,401 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Naikaze
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, March 17, 2013 at 2:29:20 PM

Artist: Linkin Park
Title: Waiting For The End
Tags: Magicphoenix A Thousand Suns
BPM: 170
Filesize: 5708kb
Play Time: 02:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.12 stars, 97 notes)
  2. Hard (4.66 stars, 309 notes)
  3. Insane (4.95 stars, 430 notes)
  4. MPX (4.94 stars, 417 notes)
  5. Normal (3.3 stars, 175 notes)
Download: Linkin Park - Waiting For The End
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy - me 100%
Normal - me 100%
Hard - me 100%
Insane - me 100%
Guest Diff - Magicphoenix 100%
Need Mods!
Last edited by Naikaze , edited 32 times in total.
Rei Hakurei
1,983 posts
Joined February 2011
Rei Hakurei
wew waiting for the end yang ada di f*p f*p revenge ^^ *kabur ?
Mercurial
Mercurial
A Thousand Suns is the WORST album of Linkin Park ever.

Sorry, but this song sucks.
Naikaze
2,401 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Naikaze

iMercurial wrote:

A Thousand Suns is the WORST album of Linkin Park ever.

Sorry, but this song sucks.
Well everyone has their own opinion :D

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

wew waiting for the end yang ada di f*p f*p revenge ^^ *kabur ?
Yoi rei
Magicphoenix
2,142 posts
Joined April 2010
Magicphoenix
Guest diff needed? :D
ED : That means no ? :(
Last edited by Magicphoenix , edited 1 time in total.
Naikaze
2,401 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Naikaze
Sure..

Edit : Nevermind...
Edit : well okay..
Thelma
1,264 posts
Joined October 2011
Thelma
star ~
mau bikin taikodiff tapi gabisa ugu
Saturnalize
1,490 posts
Joined March 2011
Saturnalize
Oke... kita mulai Bl

=General=
1. Semua diffnya pake warna masing". Tolong diganti biar semua diff punya satu set warna (jadi kaga beda")
2. Apus ini di .osu (udah mention di chat sih..)
Video,-1200,"Linkin Park - Waiting for the End (HD).avi"
3. Di .osb apus yang ini
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"A Thousand Suns.jpg",320,240
4. Secara keseluruhan banyak overlap. Silakan dicek mana aja yang overlap dan dibetulkan, apalagi di diff easy & normal.
5. Seinget doang sih, slider tick di tiap diff harus sama. Jadi mungkin ubah ke 1 / 2.

=Easy=
1. Spacing 1.0x biar tidak banyak overlap.
2. Difficulty setup-nya belom diubah. Menurut gue enaknya Drain 3, CS 3, AR 3, OD 2
3. Spacing juga kaga begitu konstan.
4. Saran doang ya, kalo misal buat Easy, sering" cek AImod. Usahain kesalahan minimal, biar beatmapnya bagus 'u'
5. Pattern" susah juga jangan dikeluarin di sini. Kasihan pemain baru.
Saran sih, mending diremap, tapi terserah sih.

=Normal=
1. Difficulty setup belom diubah. Kali ini ga tau mau rekomendasi begimana ;n;
2. Spacing 1.0x biar kaga banyak overlap.
3. 00:28:253 (1,2,3) - Mungkin yang (1) bisa di copas buat yang (3)?
4. 00:31:077 (1) - Ilangin whistle?
5. 00:36:724 (1) - Buat sedikit melengkung biar cantik?
6. 01:38:842 (5) - Agak condong ke arah kiri slidernya. Buat simetris?
7. 02:03:900 (1) - Spinner berhenti di 02:04:959 supaya ada waktu buat gerak?
8. 02:07:077 (3,4,5) - Pisahin sedikit biar kaga overlap.
9. 02:32:489 (1,2,3) - ^
10. 02:38:842 (7) - Dirubah sedikit biar lebih simetris. Ilangin juga titik merahnya kalau merasa tidak perlu.
11. 02:41:312 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Pattern stacking kayak gini ga direkomendasikan di diff normal. Ubahlah.

=Hard=
1. Percaya ato kaga, SV di diff ini terlalu pelan (di Normal juga sih, tapi masih rada tak apa imo). Naikkan. Kitar" minimal 1.5 kalo mau.
2. 01:13:077 (4,5) - Pindahin (5) biar kaga overlap.
3. 01:22:606 (2,3) - ^ (3)
4. 02:07:783 (7,8,9) - Tolong diganti.

=Insane=
1. Semuanya hanya masalah overlap.

Bakal coba mod lagi kalo udah dibetulin overlapnya
Terus, mungkin bakal sign-up buat taiko diff. Mungkin... Bakal kasih coba dulu.

Edit = Hard no.1
Edit = General no. 3 (ah begonya gue~ XD)
Last edited by Saturnalize , edited 1 time in total.
Naikaze
2,401 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Naikaze

Loli Cjj wrote:

Oke... kita mulai Bl

=General=
1. Semua diffnya pake warna masing". Tolong diganti biar semua diff punya satu set warna (jadi kaga beda") Done
2. Apus ini di .osu (udah mention di chat sih..) Done
Video,-1200,"Linkin Park - Waiting for the End (HD).avi"
3. Di .osz apus yang ini
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"A Thousand Suns.jpg",320,240
4. Secara keseluruhan banyak overlap. Silakan dicek mana aja yang overlap dan dibetulkan, apalagi di diff easy & normal.
5. Seinget doang sih, slider tick di tiap diff harus sama. Jadi mungkin ubah ke 1 / 2. Done

=Easy=
1. Spacing 1.0x biar tidak banyak overlap. 1.2?
2. Difficulty setup-nya belom diubah. Menurut gue enaknya Drain 3, CS 3, AR 3, OD 2 okay
3. Spacing juga kaga begitu konstan. well :<
4. Saran doang ya, kalo misal buat Easy, sering" cek AImod. Usahain kesalahan minimal, biar beatmapnya bagus 'u'
5. Pattern" susah juga jangan dikeluarin di sini. Kasihan pemain baru. yang gajelas dah diilangin tuh ( owo)b
Saran sih, mending diremap, tapi terserah sih.

=Normal=
1. Difficulty setup belom diubah. Kali ini ga tau mau rekomendasi begimana ;n; diubah
2. Spacing 1.0x biar kaga banyak overlap. okay
3. 00:28:253 (1,2,3) - Mungkin yang (1) bisa di copas buat yang (3)? Done
4. 00:31:077 (1) - Ilangin whistle? Done
5. 00:36:724 (1) - Buat sedikit melengkung biar cantik? changed
6. 01:38:842 (5) - Agak condong ke arah kiri slidernya. Buat simetris? Okay
7. 02:03:900 (1) - Spinner berhenti di 02:04:959 supaya ada waktu buat gerak? Okay
8. 02:07:077 (3,4,5) - Pisahin sedikit biar kaga overlap. Done
9. 02:32:489 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
10. 02:38:842 (7) - Dirubah sedikit biar lebih simetris. Ilangin juga titik merahnya kalau merasa tidak perlu. Okay
11. 02:41:312 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Pattern stacking kayak gini ga direkomendasikan di diff normal. Ubahlah. Changed

=Hard=
1. Percaya ato kaga, SV di diff ini terlalu pelan (di Normal juga sih, tapi masih rada tak apa imo). Naikkan. Kitar" minimal 1.5 kalo mau. Percaya kok
2. 01:13:077 (4,5) - Pindahin (5) biar kaga overlap. Oke
3. 01:22:606 (2,3) - ^ (3) ^
4. 02:07:783 (7,8,9) - Tolong diganti. Done

=Insane=
1. Semuanya hanya masalah overlap. Okegan ( owo)b

Bakal coba mod lagi kalo udah dibetulin overlapnya
Terus, mungkin bakal sign-up buat taiko diff. Mungkin... Bakal kasih coba dulu.

Edit = Hard no.1
Ty for mod :)
Magicphoenix
2,142 posts
Joined April 2010
Magicphoenix
:D

Download: Linkin Park - Waiting For The End (Gatyaa) [MPX].osu
Unknownable_old
Unknownable_old
Hello Gatyaa..
This just Little Mods (Suggestion)
[General]
Add "Magicphoenix" in Tags
[Easy]
Looks Fine

[Normal]
01:24:736 (4) Move it to here?
02:50:148 (2) This Pattern looks ugly, change it like this?

[Hard]
01:13:089 (4) 1 Grid to right?
01:37:089 (6) 1 Grid to left?
01:42:030 (4) 3 Grid to right?

[Insane]
00:35:854 (10) Whistle?

[MPX]
02:28:606 (3) This Patten looks ugly, change it like this?

Good Luck ~(^.^~)
Naikaze
2,401 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Naikaze

Unknownable wrote:

Hello Gatyaa..
This just Little Mods (Suggestion)
[General]
Add "Magicphoenix" in Tags
[Easy]
Looks Fine

[Normal]
01:24:736 (4) - Move it to here? Done
02:50:148 (2) - This Pattern looks ugly, change it like this? Okay

[Hard]
01:13:089 (4) - 1 Grid to right? Done
01:37:089 (6) - 1 Grid to left? Done
01:42:030 (4) - 3 Grid to right? Done

[Insane]
00:35:854 (10) - Whistle? Done, i don't know why i put clap > . >

Good Luck ~(^.^~)
Thanks for the mod ^.^
Magicphoenix
2,142 posts
Joined April 2010
Magicphoenix

Unknownable wrote:

[MPX]
02:28:606 (3) This Patten looks ugly, change it like this?
I'll keep it sorry :D
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010


Hello, :)

[General]

Offset Inconsistent
and Are you sure the BPM is 170.000098478211 ?

[Easy]

00:18:030 - Useless inherited point
02:18:353 - Unsnap inherited point
02:29:647 - ^
03:03:529 - ^

[Normal]

00:18:030 - Useless inherited point
02:18:353 - Unsnap inherited point
02:29:647 - ^
03:03:529 - ^

[Hard]

00:18:030 - Useless inherited point
01:41:677 (1) - NC bug
02:18:353 - Unsnap inherited point
02:29:647 - ^
03:03:529 - ^

[Insane]

00:18:030 - Useless inherited point
02:18:353 - Unsnap inherited point
02:29:647 - ^
03:03:529 - ^

[MPX]

00:18:030 - Useless inherited point
02:18:353 - Unsnap inherited point
02:29:647 - ^
02:41:136 (1) - NC bug
03:03:529 - ^ Unsnap inherited point
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

hi mapper, this mod is so delayed due to the amount of requests stay ahead yours is so vast. anyway enjoy my mod:3

[General]

  1. Make red section in[MPX] the same with others
  2. Kiai times should be begins and ends on down-beat(long or regular white ticks)
  3. Unsnapped sliders in Hard
    00:23:677 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:28:265 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:28:618 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:28:971 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:31:795 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:32:501 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:33:912 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:34:971 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:35:324 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:36:736 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:37:442 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:39:559 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:40:265 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:40:971 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:41:324 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:42:030 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:43:089 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:43:442 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:44:324 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:44:677 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:13:089 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:15:207 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:16:265 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:16:971 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  4. issues in Normal
    Snapping 02:56:666 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
    Spinner New Combo 02:41:136 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly.
  5. There isn't a video in your folder but there is a option can be choosen to DL with video, what happened:3
  6. remove lead-in
  7. offest 11309
[Easy]

tick rate 2 is weird, just use 1

Nothing to point out, but your easy plays like a stack of objects but not linking with the music tightly. Practice more you could catch the sense of mapping the music :3

[Normal]

02:09:896 (1,2,3,4) - this part seems like a mass of slider tracks

[Hard]

01:11:324 (3) - stacck
01:12:736 (3,4) - ^
02:44:148 (3) - spacing
03:04:618 (4) - ^

[Insane]

Ah, again, there is a common problem happenes on your map. Mappers somtimes(mostly new mappers) map a 4 diff-song that plays very very similiar. Normal is like a adcanved Easy and Insane feels like Hard that has smaller CZ, higher AR and faster slider velocity. Absolutely this is boring to play. You'd have the concept that mapping difference :3

[MPX]

this one is fun
Naikaze
2,401 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Naikaze

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Hello, :)

[General]

Offset Inconsistent
and Are you sure the BPM is 170.000098478211 ?

[Easy]

00:18:030 - Useless inherited point
02:18:353 - Unsnap inherited point
02:29:647 - ^
03:03:529 - ^

[Normal]

00:18:030 - Useless inherited point
02:18:353 - Unsnap inherited point
02:29:647 - ^
03:03:529 - ^

[Hard]

00:18:030 - Useless inherited point
01:41:677 (1) - NC bug
02:18:353 - Unsnap inherited point
02:29:647 - ^
03:03:529 - ^

[Insane]

00:18:030 - Useless inherited point
02:18:353 - Unsnap inherited point
02:29:647 - ^
03:03:529 - ^
Fixed

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

hi mapper, this mod is so delayed due to the amount of requests stay ahead yours is so vast. anyway enjoy my mod:3

[General]

  1. Make red section in[MPX] the same with others
  2. Kiai times should be begins and ends on down-beat(long or regular white ticks)
  3. Unsnapped sliders in Hard
    00:23:677 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:28:265 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:28:618 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:28:971 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:31:795 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:32:501 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:33:912 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:34:971 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:35:324 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:36:736 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:37:442 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:39:559 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:40:265 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:40:971 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:41:324 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:42:030 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:43:089 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:43:442 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:44:324 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:44:677 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:13:089 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:15:207 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:16:265 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:16:971 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  4. issues in Normal
    Snapping 02:56:666 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
    Spinner New Combo 02:41:136 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly.
  5. There isn't a video in your folder but there is a option can be choosen to DL with video, what happened:3
  6. remove lead-in
  7. offest 11309
[Easy]

tick rate 2 is weird, just use 1

Nothing to point out, but your easy plays like a stack of objects but not linking with the music tightly. Practice more you could catch the sense of mapping the music :3

[Normal]

02:09:896 (1,2,3,4) - this part seems like a mass of slider tracks

[Hard]

01:11:324 (3) - stacck
01:12:736 (3,4) - ^
02:44:148 (3) - spacing
03:04:618 (4) - ^

[Insane]

Ah, again, there is a common problem happenes on your map. Mappers somtimes(mostly new mappers) map a 4 diff-song that plays very very similiar. Normal is like a adcanved Easy and Insane feels like Hard that has smaller CZ, higher AR and faster slider velocity. Absolutely this is boring to play. You'd have the concept that mapping difference :3
Fixed, and I end up remapping insane > . >
nicktoons
174 posts
Joined June 2010
nicktoons
Hi! a bit late ( week or so) but still my mod here. This are only, I repeat ONLY the suggestions, you may follow them or not. Oh, it's LP, cool. Why don't you use one of LP skins? So here goes:
[Easy]
Ok the main problem is rhythm, I mean there is no rhythm in this diff =/, most of the tim it's just "tap tap tap" I know it's hard to keep rhythm in easy diff but still, the song isn't that hard to follow rhythm. Some times there are no sounds but some times they are spontaneous and not needed for e.g.
00:22:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - not a single sound =/
01:57:206 (5) - here I was even a bit scared when heared whistle, like, all of a sudden O_o
and so on
01:15:207 (1) - isn't it to fast spinner for an easy diff? no?
02:35:324 (1,2,3) - oh look, this follows rhythm!Ofcourse it's abit challenging for easy but still.
Overall the diff is fine.
[Normal]
00:42:383 (5) - 2 tics down
01:13:442 (3) - 1 tic left maybe?
01:17:324 (1) - 1 tic right
01:24:736 (4) - spacing? and I don't think it fits here...
01:50:148 (6) - 1 tic left and 2 tics down.
01:50:854 (1) - finish maybe?
01:54:383 (1,2,3,4) - =/ I don't likt it =/ but if it's fine for you then k.
02:03:559 (5) - 1 tic down
a bit rhythm would be nice it's normal already, not easy.
this would be fine:
02:51:383 (5) - add circle

now it sounds better
02:59:854 - and here - add circle
and so on.
Overall this is good.
next is
[Hard]
This follows rhythm a bit more but still not enough some times. Sounds are used like:"Um... ugh... I don't know... ok, I add here and here...cool!" Some times they are not necessary and if you do add them - you don't add them later =/ The combo is a bit strange, some times not more than 7 and some times even 11, looks strange. As soon as it's hard diff, I think you could change Distance spacing to 1.0, I'm just saying.
01:54:383 (1,2,3,4) - ok, this could be changed on this:
01:54:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - abit hard for hard but follows rhythm =/ Or make slider, or several sliders =/ IMHO

00:30:736 (1,2) - Jumpy?
00:34:265 (2,3) - spacing?
02:18:736 (2) - too close?
02:43:618 (1) - too close?
02:44:148 (4) - ^
02:44:501 (5) - ^
02:44:854 (6) - ^
02:45:206 (7) - ^
02:46:795 (2) - spacing?
02:55:795 (3) - spacing?
03:11:324 (7,8,9) - ok...
anyway it's fine too.
next is
[MPX]
The diff it self is pretty much OK, but still some suggestions will be.
Now that's what i call rhythm, specific but still rhythm! I personally liked playing this. I heared alot of finish sounds, aren't they supposed only in spesific places?I don't say it sounds bad but still. Like why here 01:20:489 (6) - or here 01:21:900 (8) - or here 01:24:724 (6) - . Here, it fits just fine 01:30:371 (3) -
01:08:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is boring =/ I mean yeah, it's jumpy but it's just "tap tap tap"
maybe:
01:09:548 (5) - delete and make another pattern so it would follow rhythm even more.
03:00:724 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - holy sh*t this is confusing, but I like that ^^
ok This one is the best, IMHO.
next is
[Insane]
Last time I played it it was "tap tap tap" style, let's see what's it like
*after 30 seconds in game* omg that is hard >.< ( I mean for me, for hardcor played it will be fine I think) You redid it? Now it's rhythmmical, I like it.
My first try:

Now the mod:
00:45:191 - maybe add? with finish?
That's all i think, for me it's fine, there are some moments but they are fine for insane.

Good one, good luck with ranking that, here is your star.


JMC
osu!artist
1,899 posts
Joined April 2011
JMC
yang diff insane spinnernya sampe 17 kali, apa ga kebanyakan itu gan?

trus ini
SPOILER
hehe, kok posisinya kebanyakan disitu terus ya gan? agak bosen juga seh, [cmiiw]

maaf ga mudeng dunia modding, sekedar tes doank, ane suka lagunya soalnya...
oya gan, diff insane blom kerasa "insane-nya" gan, hehe....
Magicphoenix
2,142 posts
Joined April 2010
Magicphoenix
No changes :D
Also Gatyaa ! You have to give the people who helped you kudosu >:(
L_P
1,370 posts
Joined July 2011
L_P
from my mod queue

hello, first of all, few tricks to make good looking sliders

like 00:12:543 (4) - usually we use 4 dots like this http://puu.sh/v0Uo

in most long sliders in your map, you can use 4 dots to make it , because 4 dots usually provides more symmetrical slider

00:16:249 (5,6,7) - all change to whistle

00:19:073 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ (can threat these as a pattern

00:21:896 (10,11,12,13,1) - at this part i feel like using bigger spacing, not antijumps

00:30:896 (12) - spacing, from 00:30:014 (7) - to note 8 is a big spacing, 9 to 10 also big spacing, so expecting 11 to 12 also big spacing

00:42:896 (14) - try stack with note 13

01:55:072 (5,6) - exchange 5 with 6

02:18:367 (5) - finish

02:21:543 (1) - finish

02:26:838 (1) - finish

02:38:838 (1) - finish

02:46:602 (1) - finish

02:52:249 (2) - head finish

02:57:896 (1) - head finish

03:00:720 (1) - finish

missed a lot of finish at the back, can figure it out yourself




MPX

00:16:959 (3) - cancel last finish

00:24:547 (9,1) - finish spam doesnt sound good

not really much i could say, but try closing your eyes and listen to the music, you will find some finish doesnt match the song


Hard
i think you changed slider velocity before, but you have to manually resnap all slider length , yes, ALL.
after slider velocity changed, system itself wont resnap it, you have to do it...
if not, the sliders will be longer or shorter than it should be...
like 01:16:265 (1) - and 01:16:971 (2) - they were so obvious that the slider end was out of the beat

~~

thats all, and good luck and you forgot to give nicktoons kudos dude
Naikaze
2,401 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Naikaze

Magicphoenix wrote:

Also Gatyaa ! You have to give the people who helped you kudosu >:(
i kno.. i haven't changed yet lawl
Naikaze
2,401 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Naikaze

nicktoons wrote:

Hi! a bit late ( week or so) but still my mod here. This are only, I repeat ONLY the suggestions, you may follow them or not. Oh, it's LP, cool. Why don't you use one of LP skins? So here goes:
[Easy]
Ok the main problem is rhythm, I mean there is no rhythm in this diff =/, most of the tim it's just "tap tap tap" I know it's hard to keep rhythm in easy diff but still, the song isn't that hard to follow rhythm. Some times there are no sounds but some times they are spontaneous and not needed for e.g.
00:22:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - not a single sound =/
01:57:206 (5) - here I was even a bit scared when heared whistle, like, all of a sudden O_o
and so on
01:15:207 (1) - isn't it to fast spinner for an easy diff? no?
02:35:324 (1,2,3) - oh look, this follows rhythm!Ofcourse it's abit challenging for easy but still.
Overall the diff is fine.
[Normal]
00:42:383 (5) - 2 tics down
01:13:442 (3) - 1 tic left maybe?
01:17:324 (1) - 1 tic right
01:24:736 (4) - spacing? and I don't think it fits here...
01:50:148 (6) - 1 tic left and 2 tics down.
01:50:854 (1) - finish maybe?
01:54:383 (1,2,3,4) - =/ I don't likt it =/ but if it's fine for you then k.
02:03:559 (5) - 1 tic down
a bit rhythm would be nice it's normal already, not easy.
this would be fine:
02:51:383 (5) - add circle
[attachment=2:39b8d]rhythm.jpg[/attachment:39b8d]
now it sounds better
02:59:854 - and here - add circle
and so on.
Overall this is good.
next is
[Hard]
This follows rhythm a bit more but still not enough some times. Sounds are used like:"Um... ugh... I don't know... ok, I add here and here...cool!" Some times they are not necessary and if you do add them - you don't add them later =/ The combo is a bit strange, some times not more than 7 and some times even 11, looks strange. As soon as it's hard diff, I think you could change Distance spacing to 1.0, I'm just saying.
01:54:383 (1,2,3,4) - ok, this could be changed on this:
01:54:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - abit hard for hard but follows rhythm =/ Or make slider, or several sliders =/ IMHO
[attachment=1:39b8d]rhythm1.jpg[/attachment:39b8d]
00:30:736 (1,2) - Jumpy?
00:34:265 (2,3) - spacing?
02:18:736 (2) - too close?
02:43:618 (1) - too close?
02:44:148 (4) - ^
02:44:501 (5) - ^
02:44:854 (6) - ^
02:45:206 (7) - ^
02:46:795 (2) - spacing?
02:55:795 (3) - spacing?
03:11:324 (7,8,9) - ok...
anyway it's fine too.
next is
[MPX]
The diff it self is pretty much OK, but still some suggestions will be.
Now that's what i call rhythm, specific but still rhythm! I personally liked playing this. I heared alot of finish sounds, aren't they supposed only in spesific places?I don't say it sounds bad but still. Like why here 01:20:489 (6) - or here 01:21:900 (8) - or here 01:24:724 (6) - . Here, it fits just fine 01:30:371 (3) -
01:08:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is boring =/ I mean yeah, it's jumpy but it's just "tap tap tap"
maybe:
01:09:548 (5) - delete and make another pattern so it would follow rhythm even more.
03:00:724 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - holy sh*t this is confusing, but I like that ^^
ok This one is the best, IMHO.
next is
[Insane]
Last time I played it it was "tap tap tap" style, let's see what's it like
*after 30 seconds in game* omg that is hard >.< ( I mean for me, for hardcor played it will be fine I think) You redid it? Now it's rhythmmical, I like it.
My first try:
[attachment=0:39b8d]try.jpg[/attachment:39b8d]
Now the mod:
00:45:191 - maybe add? with finish?
That's all i think, for me it's fine, there are some moments but they are fine for insane.

Good one, good luck with ranking that, here is your star.
Fixed, oh and i remapped the easy

L_P wrote:

from my mod queue

hello, first of all, few tricks to make good looking sliders

like 00:12:543 (4) - usually we use 4 dots like this http://puu.sh/v0Uo

in most long sliders in your map, you can use 4 dots to make it , because 4 dots usually provides more symmetrical slider

00:16:249 (5,6,7) - all change to whistle

00:19:073 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ (can threat these as a pattern

00:21:896 (10,11,12,13,1) - at this part i feel like using bigger spacing, not antijumps

00:30:896 (12) - spacing, from 00:30:014 (7) - to note 8 is a big spacing, 9 to 10 also big spacing, so expecting 11 to 12 also big spacing

00:42:896 (14) - try stack with note 13

01:55:072 (5,6) - exchange 5 with 6

02:18:367 (5) - finish

02:21:543 (1) - finish

02:26:838 (1) - finish

02:38:838 (1) - finish

02:46:602 (1) - finish

02:52:249 (2) - head finish

02:57:896 (1) - head finish

03:00:720 (1) - finish

missed a lot of finish at the back, can figure it out yourself


Hard
i think you changed slider velocity before, but you have to manually resnap all slider length , yes, ALL.
after slider velocity changed, system itself wont resnap it, you have to do it...
if not, the sliders will be longer or shorter than it should be...
like 01:16:265 (1) - and 01:16:971 (2) - they were so obvious that the slider end was out of the beat

~~

thats all, and good luck and you forgot to give nicktoons kudos dude
fixed, except the first one since i dont know what diff are you modding lol
L_P
1,370 posts
Joined July 2011
L_P

Gatyaa wrote:

fixed, except the first one since i dont know what diff are you modding lol
i mean the slider in Insane diff
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,473 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
Hi :3 Request From CLANNAD Mod queue~
[General]
KIAI TIME set is wrong , should be at 01:55:779 - ~ 02:41:136 - , but it's too long so it depends on you ~
[Insane]
00:16:955 (7) - nc
00:20:132 (6) - ^
00:27:014 (7) - move down 1 gird and move right 1 gird (gird level3)
00:27:367 (9) - move up 1 gird (gird level3)
00:36:367 (8) - nc
00:45:191 (12) - ^
01:10:426 (8) - ^
01:14:132 (7) - i think it's too high for me ._.
01:15:543 (10) - nc
01:19:426 (8) - ^
01:23:661 (4) - overlap on 3 , it's ugly ._.
01:36:720 (6) - nc
02:01:779 (10) - nc
02:37:779 (10) - how about this ?
02:47:132 (3) - please overlap on (1)
02:59:661 (9,10,11) - can't read this part , because it's hard to find hitobjects .

[Easy]
Please use CS 3 to map , it's an Easy diff , it's for newbie !
HP+1 OD+1
All unrankable parts , please change these objects to be snap.

00:25:430 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:17:665 (7) - nc
01:19:077 (1) - remove nc
01:32:501 (5) - nc
01:54:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't do this in an Easy Diff , this is for newbie players , change them to some sliders .
01:56:501 (6) - nc
02:08:842 (x) - put a break in here
02:18:383 (x) - un-snap green line . Change it to Offset 138371
02:29:501 (x) - ^ (Offset 149312)
02:29:677 (x) - ^ (Offset 149665)


That's all , good luck.
Naikaze
2,401 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Naikaze

Flask wrote:

Hi :3 Request From CLANNAD Mod queue~
[General]
KIAI TIME set is wrong , should be at 01:55:779 - ~ 02:41:136 - , but it's too long so it depends on you ~
[Insane]
00:16:955 (7) - nc
00:20:132 (6) - ^
00:27:014 (7) - move down 1 gird and move right 1 gird (gird level3)
00:27:367 (9) - move up 1 gird (gird level3)
00:36:367 (8) - nc
00:45:191 (12) - ^
01:10:426 (8) - ^
01:14:132 (7) - i think it's too high for me ._.
01:15:543 (10) - nc
01:19:426 (8) - ^
01:23:661 (4) - overlap on 3 , it's ugly ._.
01:36:720 (6) - nc
02:01:779 (10) - nc
02:37:779 (10) - how about this ?
02:47:132 (3) - please overlap on (1)
02:59:661 (9,10,11) - can't read this part , because it's hard to find hitobjects .

[Easy]
Please use CS 3 to map , it's an Easy diff , it's for newbie !
HP+1 OD+1
All unrankable parts , please change these objects to be snap.

00:25:430 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:17:665 (7) - nc
01:19:077 (1) - remove nc
01:32:501 (5) - nc
01:54:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't do this in an Easy Diff , this is for newbie players , change them to some sliders .
01:56:501 (6) - nc
02:08:842 (x) - put a break in here
02:18:383 (x) - un-snap green line . Change it to Offset 138371
02:29:501 (x) - ^ (Offset 149312)
02:29:677 (x) - ^ (Offset 149665)


That's all , good luck.
Fixed~ Thanks :)
Frizz
4,131 posts
Joined April 2011
Frizz
durr

irc mod
SPOILER
17:24 Frizz925: : oit faggotyaa
17:24 Frizz925: : :U
17:25 Gatyaa: : ha
17:25 : *Frizz925 is editing (Linkin Park - Waiting For The End)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/47622]
17:25 Frizz925: : gue mod ye o3o
17:25 Gatyaa: : oke
17:25 Frizz925: : irc mod aja biar gampang o3o
17:25 Gatyaa: : jeh
17:25 Frizz925: : insane dulu de
17:25 Frizz925: : 00:21:543 (4,5) - spacingnya ngebingungin
17:26 Gatyaa: : dah
17:27 Frizz925: : 00:29:838 (1) -
17:27 Frizz925: : nc disini
17:28 Frizz925: : 00:32:485 (1) - ^
17:28 Gatyaa: : dah
17:28 Frizz925: : 00:41:132 (1) - ^
17:29 Frizz925: : atm gue liat dulu flow sama nc ntar gue liat hitsoudnya o3o
17:30 Frizz925: : 01:24:543 (6) - slider ini coba dipanjangin sampe 01:25:077
17:31 Gatyaa: : enakan gasampe 25:077
17:32 Frizz925: : well up2u seh
17:32 Gatyaa: : ini suggestion atau
17:32 Frizz925: : 90% suggestion
17:32 Frizz925: : o3o
17:32 Frizz925: : sabar aja kalo rada nazi o3o
17:32 Gatyaa: : gaoaoa
17:32 Gatyaa: : gapapa
17:32 Frizz925: : 01:25:426 (1) - spinner sampe 01:28:607
17:32 Frizz925: : atau sekitar situ lah
17:33 Gatyaa: : dah
17:33 Frizz925: : 01:30:367 (9) - ganti sama slider
17:33 Frizz925: : panjangnya sampe tick putih berikutnya
17:34 Gatyaa: : done
17:34 Frizz925: : 01:36:014 (5) - ^
17:34 Frizz925: : 01:44:838 (1) - NC
17:35 Frizz925: : 01:52:959 - opinion gue doang: coba kasih break aja disini
17:35 Gatyaa: : dha
17:35 Gatyaa: : terlalu pendek gapapa tuh..?
17:35 Frizz925: : aturan gpp sih
17:36 Frizz925: : wah gat
17:36 Frizz925: : banyak snapping errors
17:36 Frizz925: : coba lo buka aimod
17:36 Gatyaa: : mana
17:36 Gatyaa: : oiya gua ganti offset
17:36 Gatyaa: : sama bpm
17:36 Gatyaa: : lupa ganti itu
17:37 Frizz925: : oke lanjut
17:37 Frizz925: : 01:57:896 (1) - NC
17:37 Frizz925: : 02:00:720 (1) - ^
17:38 Frizz925: : 02:10:959 (1) - taro note disini atau slider sampe tick putih
17:38 Frizz925: : imo bagusan slider seh
17:39 Frizz925: : 02:32:838 (1) - NC
17:39 Frizz925: : 02:36:720 (1) - ^
17:40 Frizz925: : 02:45:190 (1) - ^
17:40 Gatyaa: : dah
17:40 Frizz925: : 02:50:838 (1) - ^
17:41 Frizz925: : 02:59:132 (1) - ^
17:41 Frizz925: : lol kebanyakan NC :V
17:41 Gatyaa: : lol
17:41 Frizz925: : 03:18:014 (1) - ^
17:41 Gatyaa: : nc lagi
17:42 Frizz925: : 03:22:955 (6) - keknya bagusan jadi slider de
17:42 Frizz925: : oke gue cek hitsound dolo
17:42 Gatyaa: : dah
17:42 Frizz925: : oya ketinggalan
17:42 Frizz925: : 00:13:077 (1) - NC
17:43 Gatyaa: : jah
17:43 Frizz925: : lol
17:43 Gatyaa: : keknya enakan di sini deh
17:43 Gatyaa: : 00:13:430 (1) -
17:43 Frizz925: : up2u seh
17:44 Frizz925: : oke hitson
17:44 Frizz925: : 00:16:249 (5,6) - whistle di setiap end slider
17:44 Frizz925: : biar konsisten sama pattern sebelumnya
17:44 Gatyaa: : ok
17:45 Frizz925: : 00:21:896 (5,6,7,1) - clap
17:47 Gatyaa: : mana lagi
17:47 Frizz925: : ewait
17:48 Frizz925: : 00:22:077 (6) - remove clap deng
17:48 Frizz925: : 00:22:602 (1) - ganti finish
17:48 Frizz925: : :|
17:48 Gatyaa: : keknya enak di 00:22:430 (8) - remove clapnya
17:49 Frizz925: : terserah sih '-'
17:49 Frizz925: : 00:27:191 (8,10) - clap?
17:50 Gatyaa: : ok
17:50 Frizz925: : 00:28:960 (4,5,6) - 3 not baru di putih merah putih
17:51 Frizz925: : terus clap di 4 sama 6
17:51 Gatyaa: : hah
17:51 Frizz925: : maksudnya masukin not baru
17:51 Frizz925: : setelah slider 00:28:602 (3) -
17:51 Gatyaa: : not baru..
17:51 Gatyaa: : emang ada slider kan disitu
17:52 Frizz925: : tunggu
17:52 Frizz925: : http://puu.sh/FwkW
17:52 Gatyaa: : koq beda
17:52 Frizz925: : ya soalnya gue bilang "bikin not baru"
17:52 Gatyaa: : http://puu.sh/Fwlm
17:53 Gatyaa: : diganti gitu slidernya?
17:53 Frizz925: : nggak
17:53 Frizz925: : di 00:28:960 (4) - sampe 00:29:312 (6) - kan kosong tuh
17:53 Frizz925: : nah terus masukin 3 not disitu
17:53 Gatyaa: : siapa bilang osong..
17:53 Gatyaa: : coba anda lihat http://puu.sh/Fwlm
17:53 Frizz925: : ada slider?
17:53 Frizz925: : poot
17:54 Gatyaa: : iya...
17:54 Gatyaa: : '_ '
17:54 Frizz925: : loh slidernya kemana D:
17:54 Gatyaa: : kedelet ama lo?
17:54 Frizz925: : okelah abis reload
17:54 Frizz925: : iya keknya kedelet :|
17:54 Frizz925: : orz
17:54 Frizz925: : 00:28:955 (4) - slider end kasih clap
17:55 Gatyaa: : kedengeran aneh
17:56 Frizz925: : ya terserah sih :|
17:56 Frizz925: : eniwei
17:56 Frizz925: : 00:30:014 (7,9,10) -
17:56 Frizz925: : clap
17:57 Gatyaa: : oke
17:57 Frizz925: : ya pokoknya coba2 aja dulu
17:57 Frizz925: : kalo kedengeran bagus buat lo yauda
17:58 Frizz925: : soalnya ini purely suggestion
17:58 Frizz925: : 00:34:955 (4) - slider end clap
17:58 Frizz925: : 00:35:661 (6,7) - clap
17:59 Frizz925: : 00:36:367 (1) - clap
17:59 Frizz925: : 00:37:779 (6,8,9) - slider end 6 kasih clap, terus 8 9 clap
17:59 Gatyaa: : udah
17:59 Frizz925: : biar konsisten
18:00 Frizz925: : 00:39:191 (1) - clap
18:00 Frizz925: : brb bentar
18:00 Frizz925: : back
18:00 Gatyaa: : wb
18:00 Frizz925: : 00:40:602 (6,8,9) - sama kek 37:779
18:01 Frizz925: : slider di 9 kasih clap di awal
18:01 Frizz925: : 00:42:014 (10,12) - crap
18:01 Frizz925: : *clap
18:02 Gatyaa: : dah
18:02 Frizz925: : nah ini biar climax suaranya
18:02 Frizz925: : 01:06:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ctrl+e
18:02 Gatyaa: : ctrl e?
18:02 Frizz925: : reset hitsound
18:02 Frizz925: : terus
18:02 Frizz925: : 01:06:367 (1,5,7,8,9) - whistle
18:02 Gatyaa: : ho
18:03 Frizz925: : kalo udah coba dengerin
18:03 Gatyaa: : udah
18:03 Gatyaa: : bagus
18:03 Frizz925: : oya 9 replace sama finish biar cocok
18:03 Gatyaa: : cuma yang 9 gua ganti finish
18:03 Gatyaa: : nah kan wkwkwk
18:07 Frizz925: : sori abis ambil burger king
18:07 Gatyaa: : eak
18:07 Frizz925: : :9
18:08 Frizz925: : 01:09:543 (4,5,7) - clap?
18:08 Frizz925: : 01:11:838 (4) - slider end clap
18:09 Frizz925: : 01:12:720 (1,3,4) - clap
18:09 Frizz925: : 01:14:661 (8) - clap @ end
18:09 Gatyaa: : no @ the 2 end
18:09 Gatyaa: : :x
18:10 Frizz925: : sementara itu dulu de o3o
18:10 Frizz925: : lanjutannya ntar di trid
18:10 Frizz925: : gue post buat kds ya \o3o/
18:11 Gatyaa: : ok
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache
From my modding queue.
Just 3 diffs...

Easy
00:36:724 (1) - Looks better like this:
SPOILER
00:40:959 (3) - ^
SPOILER
01:57:194 (3) -
SPOILER
02:07:077 (3) -
SPOILER

Normal
00:26:854 (3) - Looks better like this:
SPOILER
02:13:430 (7,8) - ^
SPOILER

Hard
00:32:854 (8) - Looks better like this:
SPOILER

I stopped modding here because I found a problem, go to easy, normal and hard, and click on resnap all notes (on the timing in black letters)
And check the spacing errors on AiMod (found on File)
Naikaze
2,401 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Naikaze

ezek wrote:

From my modding queue.
Just 3 diffs...

Easy
00:36:724 (1) - Looks better like this:
SPOILER
00:40:959 (3) - ^
SPOILER
01:57:194 (3) -
SPOILER
02:07:077 (3) -
SPOILER

Normal
00:26:854 (3) - Looks better like this:
SPOILER
02:13:430 (7,8) - ^
SPOILER

Hard
00:32:854 (8) - Looks better like this:
SPOILER

I stopped modding here because I found a problem, go to easy, normal and hard, and click on resnap all notes (on the timing in black letters)
And check the spacing errors on AiMod (found on File)
Fixed, Thanks
pw384
Beatmap Nominator
2,321 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384
Hi gatyaa~ :)

I like this song very much >_<
Cuz i'm a new mapper and modder, some of the mods are not very good and unhelpful...>_< :(

[General]
* Remove the source, you can add the name of the album in the tags
* (suggestion) i prefer all the diff ends at the same time

[Insane]
* 00:15:371 (3) - imo 4 control point is enough
* 00:20:489 (2,3) - not very good-looking, what about these?


and then stack 00:21:547 (4) ~
* 01:16:959 (2) - the same as above~ make it more awesome
* 01:42:371 (1) - ^
* 02:10:959 (1) - move the second control point to make it symmetrical~
* 02:24:724 (1) - what about this?


[MPX]
* awesome

[Hard]
* 00:45:195 - maybe a hitcircle here with finish hitsound is better
* 02:32:312 (7) - this is not a good-looking slider..

[Normal]
* 01:35:312 (9) - add finish
* 01:38:842 (5) - add finish at the end of the slider
* 01:59:312 - add a hitcircle here is better
* 02:19:430 (3) - erase clap

[Easy]
* 02:09:195 - this break is not necessary.. remove it and change it into a slider

[Others]
Click here to find more awesome and interesting sliders

-----

Good luck~

by the way, can you help me mod my map >_< thx~
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,425 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
Go finish dat map.
Mercurial
Mercurial
I'd like to see more "OLD STYLE" Linkin Park maps, as Roddie did some time ago.
Xakyrie
667 posts
Joined February 2011
Xakyrie
Oops, forgot to post last night. I hope it's okay if I post this here!
IRC Modding done to MPX diff~

Mod
17:47 Xakyrie: idle talk
17:47 Magicphoenix: idle talk
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18:29 Xakyrie: 00:11:665 (2,3) - for (2), do you think you could curve it more? pull the middle slider point down vertically a bit
18:29 Xakyrie: and for (3), fix the alignment of the points so it's not bugged
18:29 Magicphoenix: ah
18:29 Xakyrie: btw just noting you don't have to follow distance snap for everything (in case that's what you thought made a 
18:29 Xakyrie: good map)
18:29 Magicphoenix: bugged ?
18:30 Magicphoenix: ahaha, does this map make the impression of that ?
18:30 Xakyrie: nono
18:30 Magicphoenix: ah fixed the alignement points
18:30 Xakyrie: I'm just mentioning it in case orz
18:30 Xakyrie: okay thanks -w-
18:30 Magicphoenix: :p just wondered
18:30 Xakyrie: tis fine ~
18:30 Xakyrie: it's just
18:31 Xakyrie: I'm not sure about you, but
18:31 Xakyrie: 00:11:665 (2,3) - see how these two are slightly overlapped?
18:31 Magicphoenix: yep
18:31 Xakyrie: I find that sort of ugly... more like, it should either be overlapped like http://puu.sh/1ec31 or not at all like 
18:31 Xakyrie: http://puu.sh/1ec3e
18:32 Xakyrie: it's just... more aesthetically pleasing to the eye
18:32 Magicphoenix: though in my opinion, it feels connected, yet not too cramped for me
18:32 Magicphoenix: it's the lowered distance snap for the quite intro
18:32 Xakyrie: as long as you have your reasons for it
18:32 Magicphoenix: i wouldn't do the huge distance 
18:32 Xakyrie: right right, makes sense
18:33 Xakyrie: 00:12:547 (4) - could we try blanketing this o:
18:33 Magicphoenix: ah
18:33 Magicphoenix: k did it
18:34 Xakyrie: okay ^^
18:35 Xakyrie: 00:17:842 (4) - same thing here?
18:35 Xakyrie: 00:16:253 (1,2) - these aren't connected so technically not everything has to in order to be playable
18:35 Magicphoenix: ah nop, made it intentionally linear
18:36 Magicphoenix: i like to add mini-jumps to my maps to make it more livelier
18:36 Xakyrie: nono not the shape, I just meant like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/459890 xD if not, it's totally fine since it's not a 
18:36 Xakyrie: huge deal
18:36 Magicphoenix: not very difficult but to keep up the interest =p 
18:36 Xakyrie: I see :3
18:36 Magicphoenix: ah hmm, nope, i like it the current way 
18:37 Magicphoenix: i made this map with the intention of doing it "cool", means messy hitsounds, unorthodox spacing and 
18:37 Magicphoenix: stuff like that
18:38 Magicphoenix: it fits to the rap of mike shinoda :D
18:38 Xakyrie: haha yeah that other thing I was wondering was the hitsounding
18:38 Magicphoenix: coolest japanese-american alive
18:38 Xakyrie: he's japanese o_O?
18:38 Magicphoenix: yeah his parents are japanese !
18:38 Magicphoenix: shinoda is not a stage name
18:38 Magicphoenix: =p
18:39 Xakyrie: lol well... I didn't even know his name o.e
18:39 Xakyrie: I just knew him as the rapper orz
18:39 Magicphoenix: aaah haha 
18:39 Magicphoenix: :P 
18:39 Xakyrie: shows how much of a fan I am orz
18:39 Magicphoenix: well, i actually ONLY know LP so ...
18:39 Magicphoenix: i'm not any better i guess -w-'
18:40 Xakyrie: haha oh well :3 music is music ^^
18:40 Magicphoenix: right
18:40 Xakyrie: 00:19:430 (2,3,4,5) - does this really fit the music?
18:40 Magicphoenix: my fav band is Mayday Parade tho, you may or may not know them, maybe you can listen to their songs 
18:40 Magicphoenix: later
18:40 Magicphoenix: it flows :p and there's slight echoes 
18:41 Xakyrie: isn't that the same in parts before it o.o I don't hear anything different
18:42 Xakyrie: btw: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e-wCyQXvri8
18:42 Magicphoenix: ah right 
18:42 Xakyrie: best song
18:42 Magicphoenix: :D i tried mapping that
18:42 Magicphoenix: 1/3, really difficult
18:42 Xakyrie: yeah orz
18:42 Magicphoenix: but awesome song
18:42 Xakyrie: would be fun to have a map for though T^T
18:43 Magicphoenix: ye u were right, 3 circles of them followed the drum, the last one didnt
18:43 Magicphoenix: fixed that
18:43 Xakyrie: alrighty then C:
18:43 Magicphoenix: i had like 7 finished Insanes for Mayday Parade songs
18:43 Xakyrie: *0*
18:43 Magicphoenix: now i only got 3 online
18:43 Magicphoenix: the others...well, deleted ._.
18:43 Magicphoenix: i deleted all my osu! songs
18:44 Xakyrie: oh right I remember you saying that
18:44 Xakyrie: wow orz
18:44 Magicphoenix: . ye 
18:44 Magicphoenix: lol ... 
18:44 Magicphoenix: fuck, now i remember and regret all I've lost
18:44 Magicphoenix: lol
18:44 Xakyrie: D:
18:44 Magicphoenix: w/e, faster computer yey \:D/
18:44 Xakyrie: haha always worth it u.u
18:45 Xakyrie: had you mapped Jamie All Over? That's a lovely song but sort of slow
18:45 Xakyrie: orz
18:45 Magicphoenix: let's remember what I've mapped
18:45 Magicphoenix: anywhere but here - ranked
18:45 Magicphoenix: get up - ranked
18:45 Magicphoenix: jersey - graveyard
18:45 Magicphoenix: ocean and atlantic
18:46 Magicphoenix: I'd Hate To Be You When People Find Out What This Song Is About
18:46 Magicphoenix: (yes i had to copy paste that)
18:46 Xakyrie: LOL
18:46 Xakyrie: omg Jersey
18:46 Magicphoenix: You Be The Anchor That Keeps My Feet On The Ground, I'll Be The Wings That Keep Your Heart In The 
18:46 Magicphoenix: Clouds (YES THIS TOO OMG TITLE LENGTH)
18:46 Xakyrie: omg
18:46 Xakyrie: what
18:46 Xakyrie: the hell
18:46 Magicphoenix: Everything's an Illusion
18:46 Magicphoenix: Black Cat
18:47 Magicphoenix: collabed Kids in Love with p3n
18:47 Magicphoenix: A Shot Across the Bow
18:47 Magicphoenix: so yeah, i mapped MP hardcore
18:47 Magicphoenix: now i only have 3 of them, the uploaded ones lol
18:47 Xakyrie: ;w; that's such a shame
18:47 Magicphoenix: ye = ='
18:47 Magicphoenix: :3 back to modding xD
18:48 Xakyrie: right right @ @
18:49 Magicphoenix: oh, Kids in Love collab is actually uploaded by p3n, just saying
18:49 Xakyrie: I'll check it out later 0.0
18:49  *Xakyrie is interested
18:49 Magicphoenix: :D
18:49 Xakyrie: 00:22:077 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - also here, the transition of spacing from (3) to (1) makes it sort of hard to play
18:49 Xakyrie: even if it sort of fits, since the drums in the first (1,2,3) would be good spaced widely
18:50 Xakyrie: I don't know, I just think the transition is sort of off
18:50 Xakyrie: maybe stack notes in a pattern or try using sliders to introduce the vocals?
18:50 Magicphoenix: there's a really heavy drum so i kinda expanded the distance there
18:50 Xakyrie: right right
18:50 Magicphoenix: the NC + shortened distance is actually doing that job for me
18:51 Xakyrie: 00:22:959 (3,4) - you wouldn't even like to make this a 1/2 slider? I think maybe it would fit the vocals nicely
18:52 Magicphoenix: every circle follows each word, so i think i wouldn't
18:53 Xakyrie: alright
18:53 Xakyrie: 00:24:547 (9) - definitely this, the repeat doesn't really follow at all
18:53 Magicphoenix: ye lol
18:54 Xakyrie: it would be wise to take the repeat out and place a 1/2 slider on the following white tick
18:54 Xakyrie: then arrange it how you like
18:54 Magicphoenix: k, fixed
18:56 Xakyrie: 00:33:724 (4) - not saying it's completely wrong, but it's generally unadvised against having sliders end on 
18:56 Xakyrie: downbeats
18:56 Xakyrie: it just, sounds strange...downbeats are supposed to be strong
18:56 Xakyrie: where you click a note or hold a slider
18:56 Xakyrie: I mean you hear how strong the sound is 
18:56 Magicphoenix: i'm emphasizing the scratch-sound getting louder and louder
18:56 Magicphoenix: and it finishes at the sliderend of (4)
18:57 Magicphoenix: and his sentence also finished there :p
18:57 Xakyrie: alright if you don't want to o.o
18:58 Xakyrie: 00:39:195 (7,1) - okay see here? how the slider and note on downbeat still follow the music
18:58 Xakyrie: 00:36:371 (5) - as opposed to something like this
18:58 Xakyrie: the first thing I linked accents the vocals much better
18:59 Magicphoenix: 00:36:900 - i added a circle here
18:59 Magicphoenix: this should do it
19:00 Xakyrie: better than before I guess, moving on
19:01 Xakyrie: 00:40:606 (1,2,3,4) - see how this flow is circular
19:01 Magicphoenix: yes
19:01 Xakyrie: (5) and (6) after that would flow much nicer if you stacked (5) on (1)
19:03 Magicphoenix: hm true
19:07 Xakyrie: when you're done with that xD;
19:07 Xakyrie: 00:42:724 (2) - doesn't typically follow anything...
19:07 Magicphoenix: ah sorry ye i was done with that
19:07 Xakyrie: lol it's fine -w-
19:08 Magicphoenix: it follows the bell
19:08 Xakyrie: it`s not noticeable when you follow the vocals
19:08 Magicphoenix: on (2) & (3) is a bell sound
19:08 Magicphoenix: well yeah, my focus i vocal but i don't dislike switching to the beat at times
19:09 Magicphoenix: gives the diff a livelier feel, more variable
19:09 Xakyrie: well at least add a note to 00:42:900 then so it still consistently follows the vocals D:
19:09 Magicphoenix: at least IMO
19:09 Xakyrie: unless that sounds too muddled to you
19:10 Magicphoenix: ah well, how do i say it
19:10 Magicphoenix: mmh, when you rap there's always 1/4 beat
19:10 Magicphoenix: and most rapper focus their word on the 2nd & 4th beat/syllable
19:10 Magicphoenix: and swallow the 1st one
19:11 Magicphoenix: and 00:42:900 -  is a swalloed syllable
19:11 Magicphoenix: so i don't want to add a note there
19:11 Magicphoenix: but rather focus on the instrumental/the strong pronounciations .....if you get what i mean = =''
19:11 Xakyrie: lol yeah I get it, alright then :3
19:13 Xakyrie: 00:44:312 (7) - could you blanket (5) with this and line up the end of this slider possibly in the center?
19:13 Magicphoenix: nop, the focus lies on the Y-axis
19:14 Xakyrie: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/459912 not like that?
19:14 Magicphoenix: oh
19:15 Magicphoenix: sure why not lol
19:15 Xakyrie: -w- sorry orz
19:15 Magicphoenix: sry i misunderstood
19:16 Xakyrie: it's fine :3
19:16 Xakyrie: 01:11:842 (1) - I assume this is one of your twist-ups? haha
19:16 Xakyrie: because not gonna lie, that threw me off on the first playthrough
19:17 Xakyrie: probably because everything is spaced by 1/1 here in a slower section
19:17 Xakyrie: a sudden 1/2 combo feels strange and harder to read
19:17 Magicphoenix: but it's stacked right
19:17 Magicphoenix: so it should be pretty easy to read imo
19:18 Xakyrie: if you find it so
19:19 Xakyrie: I just thought it was worth a mention, especially since we don't see the note density increase until about 
19:19 Xakyrie: 01:25:430 (1,2,3) - 
19:20 Magicphoenix: let me see
19:21 Magicphoenix: ah now i know why
19:21 Magicphoenix: 'coz
19:21 Magicphoenix: he's singing a word on every 1/1
19:21 Magicphoenix: but between 01:11:312 - and 01:12:018 - 
19:21 Magicphoenix: there's nothing
19:22 Magicphoenix: so I'm trying to fill the gap by following the instrumental at that point
19:22 Xakyrie: I see o.o
19:23 Magicphoenix: but nice eye though
19:23 Xakyrie: lol
19:23 Magicphoenix: this is so worth it so far
19:23 Magicphoenix: the mod i mean
19:23 Magicphoenix: :3
19:23 Xakyrie: @ @
19:23 Xakyrie: t-thanks x~x
19:23 Xakyrie: 01:14:842 (7) - I like this slider, but it covers the track and looks messy
19:23 Xakyrie: orz
19:23 Xakyrie: it's like
19:24 Xakyrie: IT'S GONNA LOOK NICE AROUND THE NOT--wow it's half covered
19:24 Xakyrie: >:
19:25 Magicphoenix: it
19:25 Magicphoenix: covers the track?
19:25 Magicphoenix: track ?
19:27 Magicphoenix: . what track ?
19:28 Xakyrie: er
19:28 Xakyrie: sorry
19:28 Xakyrie: @ @
19:28 Xakyrie: the slider track
19:28 Xakyrie: at the end of (7)
19:28 Magicphoenix: shit, i'm out of time... would it bbe fine if we only cover up until the 2nd minute ? sorry for not clearing my
19:28 Magicphoenix:  schedule fully
19:28 Xakyrie: er
19:28 Xakyrie: lol that's fine o.o
19:28 Xakyrie: I'm only here to help xD
19:29 Magicphoenix: i guess it's ok with the slider
19:29 Xakyrie: yeah it's fine
19:29 Xakyrie: leave it
19:29 Xakyrie: unless otherwise directed by some MAT or BAT e.e
19:29 Xakyrie: I'll point out everything up to 2 minutes I think is worth mentioning right now then xD
19:30 Magicphoenix: kay
19:30 Magicphoenix: sorry 
19:30 Magicphoenix: and thanks
19:30 Magicphoenix: love it 
19:30 Xakyrie: 01:26:842 (3) - don't have this stacked so it's like 01:27:900 (4,5,6) - 
19:30 Xakyrie: haha no problem D:
19:30 Xakyrie: 01:27:900 (4,5,6) - oops
19:31 Magicphoenix: nope, this fits into the pattern
19:31 Xakyrie: 01:28:253 (6) - and fix this so it's not curved funny >< make it smooth, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/459922
19:31 Xakyrie: and alright o.o 
19:31 Magicphoenix: ah rgiht
19:31 Xakyrie: 01:33:018 (6) - not sure how this follows the vocals like the pattern before it did orz
19:32 Xakyrie: up to you but something like http://puu.sh/1edbS would be nicer
19:33 Magicphoenix: right
19:33 Xakyrie: 01:34:783 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I know the drums increase but this is very anti-climatic...it's not like anything 
19:33 Xakyrie: special happens after it S:
19:34 Xakyrie: 01:37:959 (5,6) - fix the placement here, (6) is covered too much. if you want it still connected to the pattern, 
19:34 Xakyrie: go with something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/459925
19:34 Magicphoenix: i think these exact drums make it worth the increase in spacing & volume
19:34 Xakyrie: if you'd like
19:34 Xakyrie: lol
19:34 Magicphoenix: fixed 2nd
19:34 Xakyrie: I guess I can see it still working; alright -w-
19:36 Xakyrie: 01:46:606 (2,3) - ctrl + G to make it flow better
19:36 Xakyrie: the current is a bit stiff when moving
19:36 Magicphoenix: oh nice
19:36 Magicphoenix: yep
19:36 Magicphoenix: oh actually, this is an intentional jump
19:36 Magicphoenix:  and flows just as good when you play it IMO
19:36 Xakyrie: I know D: if you think so, tis fine
19:36 Xakyrie: but
19:36 Xakyrie: 01:55:783 (1,2) - 
19:36 Xakyrie: this
19:37 Magicphoenix: ahaha ^^
19:37 Xakyrie: I mean
19:37 Xakyrie: the pattern is nice but
19:37 Xakyrie: it ends on that downbeat
19:37 Xakyrie: :V
19:37 Xakyrie: so it should start something new >:
19:38 Xakyrie: and that should be my last (but most crucial) suggestion up to 2 minutes
19:38 Xakyrie: xD
19:38 Magicphoenix: fixed
19:38 Xakyrie: woo
19:38 Xakyrie: yaaay
19:38 Magicphoenix: :D 
19:38 Xakyrie: alright that should be good then xD
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Disable letterboxes during breaks please, it cuts the vocalist's head during breaks. Thanks.

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pw384
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wtf why graveyarded again..
i hope to see this map ranked! :)
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Still not ranked? The hell? This beatmap is great!
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