1. Collab (5 stars, 825 notes)

KRZY wrote:

[Collab]
Try using the smallest grid size and see if you can straighten out the spacing between patterns like 00:13:108 (1,2,3,4). Currently, x0.96 and x1.04 are used among those four notes; by using a smaller grid you can arrange them so that the spacing between the four notes is consistent (x1.00).
00:15:023 (3) - Make this symmetrical?
00:17:736 (1) - NC
00:27:789 (3) - NC. Also keep the spacing among these three notes (00:27:789 (3,4,5)) consistent.
00:31:300 (2,3,4,5) - Make the spacing consistent.
00:39:757 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:46:459 (2) - One grid up
00:47:576 (9) - Place at the center of the screen
00:49:970 (6) - NC, and remove NC at 00:50:130 (1) -
00:53:321 (8) - NC
00:54:917 (5) - NC
00:55:236 (1) - Remove NC
01:03:693 (4) - NC
01:30:661 (5) - NC
01:32:098 (7) - Use x1.00 instead of x1.50 imo, but up to you. If you intend to keep it this way, NC on 01:31:938 (6)
01:34:491 (5) - NC
01:40:874 (5) - NC
01:59:864 (5) - NC
02:10:076 (4) - NC
02:37:683 (2) - Remove NC
03:02:257 (4) - NC
03:03:374 (4) - NC
03:04:651 (4) - NC
03:09:917 (9) - Use x0.70 instead of x0.97
03:15:183 (9) - NC
03:16:938 (1,2,3,4) - Make the spacing consistent.
03:23:321 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This whole part could use the same spacing, I see no special reason to be mostly using x1.00 and then suddenly use x0.85 on each new combo. Keep it at x1.00 imo

Starred

C R E A M wrote:

Hi~
Here is a modding by KRZY's request.

[General]
Pretty well done beatmap. I can't find any major defect on this map. However, this map can be graphically improved IMO. hmm you mean like skin and sb wise?

[Collab]
00:47:576 (9) - NC? done
00:57:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream can be graphically neater imo. Try to use symmetry or make it more smooth like this. done (i think)

SPOILER

00:58:747 (8) - NC? done
01:27:111 - Is this timing section intended? I don't know why you put this.
02:07:044 (2) - make it perfectly to circle aruond 02:07:523 (3).
03:24:278 - There is a beat obviously on here. And same for last parts. I think adding a note is better but it's up to you.

last 3 things are in rickybois sections, so I ask him first!

Good luck~~

C R E A M wrote:

Hi~
01:27:111 - Is this timing section intended? I don't know why you put this. - Oops that was supposed to be on 01:26:513. Thanks for pointing this out.
02:07:044 (2) - make it perfectly to circle aruond 02:07:523 (3). - Okay
03:24:278 - There is a beat obviously on here. And same for last parts. I think adding a note is better but it's up to you. - Yes, there are drum beats in there but those parts were supposed to follow the little techno beats.

rickyboi wrote:

C R E A M wrote:

Hi~
01:27:111 - Is this timing section intended? I don't know why you put this. - Oops that was supposed to be on 01:26:513. Thanks for pointing this out.
02:07:044 (2) - make it perfectly to circle aruond 02:07:523 (3). - Okay
03:24:278 - There is a beat obviously on here. And same for last parts. I think adding a note is better but it's up to you. - Yes, there are drum beats in there but those parts were supposed to follow the little techno beats.

Done.

Reisen Udongein wrote:

Hello. I'm here to mod cuz of KRZY's request ^w^

[Collab]

00:10:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about fix those like this? http://puu.sh/i03V

00:11:832 (1) - too close to previous slider imo

00:15:023 (3) - weird Shape

00:20:449 (1) - add whistle to whole slider

00:27:949 (2,3) - how about add whistles here

00:30:023 (3) - add clap

00:37:044 (1) - add whistle

00:42:151 (4) - ^

00:50:927 (6) - stack it to previous slider with 0.0x spacing and tuirning off grid snap

00:54:917 (1) - add clap

00:57:630 (6,7) - add clap,finish

00:58:747 (1) - add whistle

01:03:055 (2,3) - if that clap in the '2' is intended, add clap in the '3' too, or not intended, erase '2' 's clap and add clap in '3'

01:05:768 (3) - add clap

01:36:247 (1,3) - ^

01:38:800 (2) - add clap in the first,last part of that slider

01:48:534 (4) - add whistle

02:04:013 (6,1) - add clap,finish

02:28:427 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - add clap in all the white lines is more fitable for drum line

02:35:768 (6) - add clap

02:37:683 (2) - add clap in the first part of that slider

02:42:789 - add clap ,finish

02:43:906 - ^

02:44:385 (1) - ^

03:04:491 (3) - add clap

03:08:002 (1) - delete clap,finish

03:08:321 (3) - add finish

03:08:401 (4,5) - delete clap

03:08:640 (1) - add finish

03:08:800 (2) - add clap,finish

03:08:960 (3) - delete clap

03:09:119 (4,1) - add finish

03:10:076 (1) - add whistle to whole slider

03:24:438 (8) - add whistle

03:26:991 (8) - ^

03:29:544 (8) - ^

03:30:821 (8) - ^

03:32:098 (8) - ^

-All done

I did my best , Good luck!

Reisen Udongein wrote:

Oops I forgot General modding. Also you need to set kiai times in the highlight parts. -done

rickyboi wrote:

Why is this graveyarded? damn it Mez! update this map.