1. Easy (1.17 stars, 147 notes)
2. Hard (4.99 stars, 541 notes)
3. Normal (3.26 stars, 233 notes)

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hello :3 Here is my Mod

All IMO

General:
Sample volume in 60 fits more Nah.
I think are missing Level 2 & Level 4 Difficults ?? Nope.

Level 1

00:05:051 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider No. ._.
00:15:205 (4) - Remove clap ^
00:16:128 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider ^
00:31:359 (0) - Start break here like this http://puu.sh/b7BG I don't think that would be necessary...
00:53:051 (1) - Remove clap at the end of the slider Okay.
01:14:282 (0) - End kia here and start it again here 01:15:205 (0) Nah.
02:14:743 (0) - Start Break here like this http://puu.sh/b7Dv ^
02:57:666 (0) - End kia here and Start it again here 02:58:589 (0) Nope.

Level 3

00:31:359 (0) - Same as level 1 Start break here like this http://puu.sh/b7BG No.
00:59:512 (2) - Remove clap ^
01:14:282 (0) - End kia here and start it again here 01:15:205 (0) Nope
02:09:205 (5) - move to x:384 y:108 No.
02:14:743 (0) - Same as level 1 Start Break here like this http://puu.sh/b7Dv ^
02:27:897 (5) - Add clap at the end of the slider Nah.
02:57:666 (0) - end kia here and start it again here 02:58:589 (0) Nope.

Level 5

00:31:359 (0) - Same as level 1 Start break here like this http://puu.sh/b7BG Nope.
01:14:282 (0) - End kia here and start it again here 01:15:205 (0) ^
02:14:743 (0) - Same as level 1 Start Break here like this http://puu.sh/b7Dv ^
02:57:666 (0) - end kia here and start it again here 02:58:589 (0) ^

That's all i can do due I'm a new modder so hope it was helpful

Good Luck ! And Star

1. 02:41:993 (5,6,7,1) - The flow is not so good, how about changing them like below?
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Speaking of 2nd KIAI, I feel it's empty due to few number of note if I compare it with 1st one.
   But it's not an issue, just my mind

1. 00:54:916 (3,4) - I recommend you to use 1/4 rhythm because it's kinda confusing for normal-player imo. (in addition, it's not so easy to hear the vocal and follow it here.)
   
2. 01:17:070 (3) - Move left by 1 grid? (if you fix, move (4,5) too.)

1. 00:28:031 (5) - The shape can be more beautiful. How about one below?
   
   SPOILER

   
   If you need:
   

   416,192,27916,1,0
   416,192,28031,2,0,B|444:296|352:332,1,172.5,2|2

2. 02:04:608 (4,5) - The flow will become better if you try Ctrl+R imo.
3. 03:10:378 (2,3,4) - Looks a bit straight, how about the formation like below?
   
   SPOILER

   

• The red color doesn't make enough contrast imo...use lighter red or dark green instead to make diffs easier to read?

• 01:17:070 (2) - Straighten it?
  01:54:916 (5) - Whistle end? feel there should be some kind of hitsounds..
  02:00:454 (1,2,3) - ^
  02:09:685 (2) - ^

• 03:05:070 (4) - Remove whistle end?

• 00:59:762 (3) - New combo here instead of 00:59:878 (1)? Kinda hard to see it's a 1/4 here...
  02:25:147 (8,9,1,2) - Move to left for a little like this?
  02:43:147 (3) - Same reason, new combo here?
  02:49:608 (2,3) - I'd rather not to stack these...Try pattern like this?

Selee wrote:

[General]

• The red color doesn't make enough contrast imo...use lighter red or dark green instead to make diffs easier to read? Very well then. I changed the 1st combo color to green.

[Level 1]

• 01:17:070 (2) - Straighten it?
  01:54:916 (5) - Whistle end? feel there should be some kind of hitsounds.. Nah.
  02:00:454 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
  02:09:685 (2) - ^ ^

[Level 3]

• 03:05:070 (4) - Remove whistle end? Nope.

[Level 5]

AR-1? Since BPM isn't that high.. Okay.

• 00:59:762 (3) - New combo here instead of 00:59:878 (1)? Kinda hard to see it's a 1/4 here... I'll just remove the new combo from 00:59:878.
  02:25:147 (8,9,1,2) - Move to left for a little like this? Sure.
  02:43:147 (3) - Same reason, new combo here? Same result.
  02:49:608 (2,3) - I'd rather not to stack these...Try pattern like this? I'll consider it if someone else mentions the same thing.

Well, just minor suggestions, good luck.

LunarSakuya wrote:

hihi!

Light
01:03:685 (4) - Might be hard for beginners to get? I'm sure it's fine like that.
01:15:224 (1) - Move so it's not stacked under (4) Okay.
02:11:531 (3) - Could be placed a little neater like this: http://puu.sh/h3GT nazi Sure. v
02:37:378 (5) - Delete Okay. ._.

Standard
01:01:839 (3,4,5) - Make a stream instead of stack, the stack seems kinda random I disagree.
02:01:378 (3) - Ctrl + H and adjust, better pattern? Yeah, you're right.
02:07:147 - Add note Okay.
02:22:378 (2) - Don't stack under the previous, it seems inconsistent with the rest of the pattern Okay. ):

Heavy
01:06:224 (2) - Begin new combo here instead No. ._.
01:20:993 (2,3,4,5) - Replace these with doubles (move (4) to 01:21:339) Nah...
01:45:455 - Add note Nope. It was left intentionally. I like to mix things up a bit on my harder difficulties.
01:49:147 - ^ ^
02:35:070 (2) - Move to the right a little? Okay~
03:06:224 (1) - Flip horizontally and adjust http://puu.sh/h3PB Alright.
03:09:916 (1) - Make this horizontal Nah...

Good luck

GiNa wrote:

Sorry for taking forever to mod your map, I finally have vacation. It's cool~

[Light]
00:57:685 (5) – maybe NC here ? since other combos do not do through 7 Sure.
02:41:070 – maybe somewhere in this part to have another NC too ^
02:55:839 (5) – ^ I'm sure it's fine like that.

[Standard]
01:07:378 (8) – I think 8 is quite long, find somewhere to divide this part of combo ? I'm sure it's fine.

[Heavy]
I think this diff is good

And … sorry for my little poor mod, don’t give me kds if you feel like to do so.
Here you go, ☆

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Roddie ~

My mod to here ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Don't forgot Remove OSB file ><. Sure.

[Hard]

1. 00:07:378 (2) - Add new combo to here,vocal start to here,and Remove 00:06:916 (1). Nah....
2. 00:22:147 (2) - ^,^00:21:685 (1). ^
3. 02:05:531 (2) - ^,^02:05:070 (1). ^
4. 00:39:455 (2) - Try stack on 00:39:916 (4),flow much better. Sure.

[Normal]

1. AR+1 will be fun with me. Nah, I disagree.
2. 02:06:916 (1,2,3,4) - Try this rhythm. No. ._.
   

[Easy]

1. 02:54:916 (4) - Add new combo to here,long combo hard for beginner. Hm... Okay.

That's all ~ Nice map go ranked it ><

Good luck ~

Real wrote:

'sup Roddie \:D/

[Easy]

Fine !

[Normal]

01:06:916 (7,8) - Try this? If you use it, maybe use the same rythm pattern more often? Sure.

That's all \:D

[Hard]

00:27:916 (4,5) - Try this? I moved (4,5) and also made (5) look better. Okay.
01:03:108 (6) - Yeah, I spend my time making better sliders in pending maps I mod :v ^
01:45:455 - (and others like this one) You didn't add a note here on purpose? That's right. I didn't.

Woopity woop this map rocks o/

Good luck !