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Masaki Osami - Dream Believer (TV Size)

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tutuhaha
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年12月8日 at 7:36:49

Artist: Masaki Osami
Title: Dream Believer (TV Size)
Source: The Prince of Tennis
Tags: Megurine Luka Kiiwa cmn_891127 Alace Tenisu no Oujisama
BPM: 175
Filesize: 8275kb
Play Time: 01:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.94 stars, 166 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 312 notes)
  3. Kiiwa's Normal (3.75 stars, 102 notes)
  4. Luka's Easy (2.67 stars, 90 notes)
  5. Pangko (4.94 stars, 353 notes)
Download: Masaki Osami - Dream Believer (TV Size)
Download: Masaki Osami - Dream Believer (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thank you for Breeze's BPM help
XD moe!

22/10/11 Up
22/10/11 Add Luka's Easy and Kiiwa's Normal, Thank you XD
24/10/11 Add cmn_891127's SB, Thank you XDD
28/10/11 Add Alace's Taiko (Pangko) ! Thank you XDDD
terametis
good map :)
I wish your map is Ranked~
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

terametis wrote:

good map :)
I wish your map is Ranked~
Thank you XD!
Megurine Luka
Easy

记得另外保存一个Normal clap 为normal-slidertick2

Download: Masaki Osami - Dream Believer (TV Size) (tutuhaha) [Luka's Easy].osu
Gomo Psivarh
NO ******* BIG FAST HUMAN HEART :)
Kiiwa
QAQ I tried to attack file but failed•••
LunarSakuya
hi random mod because i saw prince of tennis I'm not gonna say much because I'm still kinda new with this ;_;


Hard
00:07:285 [3] Move to x: 164 y:104
00:28:880 Fuji! :oops:
1:10:870 Add note

Insane
00:44:133 [4] weird positioning?

But I LOVE this map :) :) Good hitsounds too xD :) :)
I would give star except I don't have any
:cry: Edit: STAR :D
Nymph
我是打酱油的
General:

一点Tag都不写嘛= =最好还是写点

大哥's Easy:
Hitsound
00:38:135 (4) - 有点空 加个finish?其实我感觉加了效果也一般……只不过不加更水一点……
我个人不喜欢这种Slider tick的加法 感觉如果真想那么加24CLAP 为何不直接用短slider呢=_= 然后过渡的不加24的地方就可以用13白线的长SLIDER 我个人偏向这样

Kiiwa's Normal:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:24:766 (1,2,3,4) - I don't see why to increase spacing here..especially 1 is already touching the HP bar...
rhythm pattern seems a little werid for me.... not very comfortable to play with, but fine.

Hard:
对我来说一点问题没有

Insane:
对我也没问题 NAZI什么的别人干吧=_=

完全没说出什么东西……算了 反正是打酱油的
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ 兔兔~ :)

一些建议哦~ 网球王子 没看过...

[Insane]

00:44:476 (5) - 这里加NC.
00:45:676 (4,5) - 这个改长一条Slider会好很多.像这样:
01:02:815 (6) - 这里加NC.
01:06:242 (5,6) - 建议这里弄个3个NOTE跳.
01:08:299 (6) - 这里加NC.


[Hard]

HP+1或者OD+1
00:16:711 - 这里加个NOTE,像这样:
00:34:707 (3) - 这里加NC.
00:54:588 (2) - 这个Slider应该结束在蓝线上.像这样:
01:02:815 (4) - 这里加NC.
01:13:784 (4) - ^

[Kiiwa's Normal]

00:11:226 - add note to here.
00:24:766 (1) - change position,can't touch HP bar.
00:55:959 (1) - start point add finish.


[Luka's easy]

00:16:197 (2) - NC应该在这里,前面1删掉.
00:53:902 (2) - ^

还不错的歌~~加油兔兔~
S h i o n
Hi,22haha~


Luka's Easy
Nothing. Fine~


Kiiwa's Hard
- AR-1
00:23:052 (1) - I don't why here is not so readable for me. @_@ Maybe let the slider start on 00:22:881 and end on 00:23:395 (6).
00:44:990 (1) - Tail,not stacked properly.
256,11,44990,6,0,B|256:131,1,120,4|8
00:47:732 (1,2) - Very confusing.Try to keep them on white lines ?


Hard
- maybe AR-1 ?
00:52:531 (5) - New combo ?
- nice diff


Insane
00:28:537 (1) - Remvoe new combo
00:38:906 (x) - add one note ?
00:38:992 (x) - ^
- nice


The mapset is good enough to rank and I didn't find many things...T.T
Good luck~
YTYuyu
Yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Luka's Easy:
00:07:285(3) - try to even this out by following these co-ordinates for the 2nd and 3rd point of the slider. 2nd point: x:356 y:164 3rd point:272 y:124
00:19:625(2) - 2 grids up
00:39:849(2) - x:392 y:20

Kiiwa's Normal:
00:35:392(4) - this slider is too high. its touching the score and Draining bar.
00:44:990(1) - Stack this perfectly by going 1 grid down(no distance snap)
00:55:959(1,2,3) - same as 00:35:392

Hard:
00:07:970(4) - NC
00:10:712(4) - ^
00:18:768(4) - ^
00:21:681(4) - ^
00:32:650(5) - ^
00:35:392(5) - ^
01:03:500(5) - ^
01:06:928(5) - ^

Insane:
00:07:970(4) - NC
00:10:712(4) - ^
00:13:283(4) - ^
00:18:939(4) - ^
00:21:681(6) - ^
00:29:908(5) - ^
00:32:650(5) - ^
00:35:392(5) - ^
00:44:476(5) - ^
00:49:275(6) - ^
01:02:815(6) - ^

This is the best i can do. GL :D
Megurine Luka
Raging Bull
Can't seem to open file...keeps saying it failed. o.o
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Raging Bull wrote:

Can't seem to open file...keeps saying it failed. o.o
SB have some bug Orz................
FIx and full over~~~~~
Nymph
bakatutuhaha lololololllllll
Tenshi-nyan
heya...

Insane
00:13:283 (4) - remove clap
00:20:139 (9) - ^


Hard
01:06:242 (3) - add finish
01:06:242 (3) - ^

Kiiwa
00:03:857 (1) - add finish
00:04:542 (2,3,4) - flip horizontally?
00:24:766 (1) - touches HP bar
00:35:392 (4) - ^
00:55:959 (1,2,3) - ^
01:10:356 (1,2,3) - move (1) to center, flip (2) horizontally

Luka
00:45:676 (2) - add clap to repeat
00:50:475 (1) - add clap to slidertick
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
总体的
01:14:298加跟绿线表结束,否则你最后跟绿线在01:09:670,我以为歌在那就没了
音效绿线要放在拍子的前一格,不过我AFK了一段时间,我当时是需要的,现在我也不清楚,不需要的话就不用改了

Guest dif EASY
00:14:483(4) 加clap
00:46:361结尾加个FINISH,因为又是重音,又是拉长音的开始
00:57:330 ~
01:11:727 (4) 加CLAP,否则这里听起来就像结束了

Guest dif Normal
00:05:228 (3)(4) Bad hitsound and Rhythm.My suggesting is: First slider begin at 00:04:542 end at 00:05:056
Second slider begin at 00:05:056 end at 00:05:399 with two repeat
Third slider begin at 00:05:742 the same as slider two
00:11:398(?) Add note(4)
00:14:48(4) Remove clap 00:14:654 and 00:14:997 and 00:15:683 add CLAP
00:35:932(4) end of slider one grid down,make the slider balance
00:40:191(2)~(4)remove clap change finish?
00:48:418(?) and 00:48:761(?) add NOTE,delete your old note.Strange Rhythm
00:55:959~00:58:016 make the three slider balance and the Top of slider cover HP bar.Change it

HARD
很好,而且个人最喜欢HARD和INSANE的音效,两个简单的难度是为新手,而多加很多音效,但是反而听起来不舒服

INSANE
几个流的摆位不太美观像00:06:085弧度稍微再好点,或者摆成直的

后面两个难度很不错
总体很不错,还有字幕SB。今天投你的歌,KUSUDO到,星到,谢谢
Teru21
Hi! from teruteru modding & guest diff queue sorry for the late..

[Kiiwa's Normal]
00:48:589 (2) - doesnt fit with the music. try move it to 00:48:761.
00:48:589 - add circle

just suggestion
[Insane]
00:01:457 (3) - how bout adding clap at 00:01:629 too?
00:02:143 (6) - how bout adding clap at 00:02:314 too?
00:03:171 (5,6) - add clap?
01:10:013 (3) - how bout adding clap at 01:10:184 too?
01:10:699 (6) - how bout adding clap at 01:10:870 too?
01:11:384 (2,3,4,5) - add clap?

Thats all!! Good Luck :)
Yuzeyun
Remember that they are all suggestions and comments.


[General]

MP3 : 192
BG : Ok
Preview Point : Ok
Diff. Spread : Good but Easy is close to make the map unrankable D:
Offset and BPM Unicity : Ok

[Easy]
AR-1 ?

00:20:996 (4) - Move the red point 1 grid left.
01:08:299 (1,2) - 1/1 sliders instead ?
00:31:279 (1,2) - Unstack ?
00:34:021 (1,2) - ^

[Kiiwa's Normal]
AR -1 or OD +1 ?

00:24:766 (1) - Pretty high, move down 1 grid ?
00:34:707 (3,4,5) - Try avoiding the uppest part of the playfield... It totally touches the HUD *shot*
00:55:959 (1,2,3) - ^
01:00:072 (4) - Asymmetrical.
344,80,60072,2,0,B|352:24|256:-8|160:24|168:80,1,240

[Hard]
OD +1 ?

[Insane]
OD+1 ?
aston_old
[Luka's Easy]
- 01:08:299 (1,2) - beginners will find these to be hard; I recommend just regular 1/1 sliders, but your choice on how to do it.

^That's only problem, everything else was fine.

[Kiiwa's Normal]
- 00:49:104 (1,2,3,4) - move these 4, distance spacing is confusing to sightread for normal. If you select all 4 at the same time and move them to x:156,y:148, it's a good spot where distance is kept, shape is intact and doesn't cover up other notes.
- 00:59:730 (3) - move to x:304,y:200

[Hard]
- Nothing but you could've made a few jumps or small streams. I suggest adding some.

[Insane]
- 00:54:588 (1,2,3) - orz, I don't know what to do there. Keep it like that, I guess. 4 distances used - I don't know, keep it like that if you think it plays well enough (no, don't keep it cause you're too lazy to change, actually think about it!)
- 01:06:757 (6) - place somewhere like 256,292, the distance is confusing the first 3 times. At that spot, it keeps distance and makes the map a little harder.

good map /o/
Takos
Hi tutuhaha >w</
Mod Request accepted from my queue
All suggestions, feel free to ignore them

Insane
00:14:483 (8) - curve the other way?
00:43:619 (1,2,3,4) - This looks pretty random. Maybe make a square? http://puu.sh/7G0b
00:47:047 (3,4,5,6) - Make a smooth curve instead?

Hard
No probelem

Normal
Some parts are confusing because the notes placed suddenly follows a different rhthym (Vocal, drums, guitar)
00:05:742 - Add note here? You seem to follow the guitar, so you're missing a sound.
00:18:939 (2) - Flip horizontally?
00:24:252 (3,1) - Merge these two into one slider?
00:35:392 (4) - Too high, it touches the hp bar.
00:44:990 (1) - ^
00:48:589 (2) - Sounds awkward because it doesn't follow the vocal. The vocal sounds at 00:48:675 -
00:55:959 (1,2,3) - HP bar~ ;w;

Easy
00:25:109 (1) - Change this somehow? This slider seems to long for me... I don't know what the beats are following...

Fun map to play, good luck for rank~
Alace
Done

EDIT:你原本的Timing off了
BPM:175.000000
Offset:1108


Download: Masaki Osami - Dream Believer (TV Size) (tutuhaha) [Pangko].osu
imRitaka
Mod request.

[General]
Try ending the Kiai time at 00:55:622 and then starting it again at 00:55:965.

[Luka's Easy]
Luka always makes these amazing easy difficulties that I can never find anything wrong with. ;-;

[Kiiwa's Normal]
00:24:250 (3) - Extend this slider 1/2 beat? (Or do what Takos suggested and merge these into one slider.)
Fix all of the sliders/circles that touch the HP bar. (They can be found in mods prior to this one.)
And that's it.

[Hard]
Nothing bad here.

[Insane]
I've got no complaints here.

Overall, I like the map. Nice job to the creator and guests.
Niva
Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

[General]
-> .mp3 volume is quite low for me >< Maybe increase the .mp3's volume?
-> Personally, I think tick rate 2 sounds better to this song because there are lots of 1/2 guitar sounds (:

[Luka's Easy]
  • 00:14:479 (4,5) - One grid up for both, definitely
    00:18:250 (1) - Move the middle waypoint one grid right
    00:23:736 (3) - If you CTRL+H this, the slider is somewhat placed higher than 00:22:365 (1)... Is it intentional?
    00:31:279 (1,2,1,2) - I don't think stacks like these are friendly for beginners... 1/2 slider better imo
    00:45:679 (2) - Add clap on the repeat?
    01:07:622 (4) - ...sounds like you're missing a clap here (:
[Kiiwa's Normal]
-> HP Drain and OD +1? (idk if you feel it's to high, but imo it's more balanced this way)
  • 00:05:222 (3) - Alter to a 1/1 slider perhaps?
    00:10:707 (3) - Add a repeat? I can hear the guitar is still continuing after the slider
    00:13:450 (3) - Make the slider tick in the center? osu.ppy.sh/ss/172407
    00:22:022 (3,4,1) - ... I personally think this continued stack is trick for a 3.5-star Normal ):
    00:29:908 (2) - Make the slider tick in the center?
    00:55:965 (1) - Add hitsound finish at slider's start?
    01:04:193 (1) - You can try create a slider wave here :3
[Hard]
  • 00:12:765 (2,3) - I prefer to alter them into a 1/1 slider, but it's just personal opinion though
    00:26:308 (3) - Two grids left and one grid down?
    01:13:793 (4,5,6,7) - I can't get the pattern... Standard arc shape better imo...
[Insane]
  • 00:11:565 (7) - I think it would be better if the triples were here rather than on 00:11:736 (8,9,10)
    00:22:536 (9) - Same as above
    00:41:907 (3) - Extend slider by 1/4?
    00:49:622 (8,9,10) - Add clap on (8)'s end, and remove the clap on (9)'s start and (10)?
    00:59:907 (4) - CTRL+R here better imo :3
    01:08:650 (2) - Clap on slider's start?
    01:09:336 (7) - Clap here?
Neat map :3
Good luck, I hope my mod helps~
AoiX
就不给你Mod~~~lol谁叫你不走后门了

EDIT:没什么大的问题,就是。。。
[Kiiwa's Normal]
00:06:593 (1) - 超出边界了。这是神mapper的习惯么?
00:35:393 (4) - 这个肯定会被挡
00:57:336 (3) - ^

太鼓皮肤最好还是做一下

[insane]
00:56:650 (1) - 最好还是和(3)叠在一起吧,不然会看不清
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

AoiX wrote:

就不给你Mod~~~lol谁叫你不走后门了
。。。。。。。。。。
我不走后门都有错么Q口Q.........
nimi
Hey, modding as requested~

[Luka's Easy]
  1. 00:01:108 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern would sound better with 3 and 4 being sliders, as the previous ones. buut that's up to you
[Kiiwa's Normal]
  1. Uhh, the AR seems a bit fast >< Reduce it by 1 tick?
  2. 00:33:336 (5) - kinda nazi but.. stack it correctly with 00:31:965 (3)
[Hard]
  1. 00:40:193 (1) - I suggest either removing NC or moving it to 00:39:679 (5)
And that's all. Hope it's useful :)
Ryafuka
hi~ ></
from my modding queue :)

SPOILER
my mod is all suggestions :)


[General]
fine :)


[Insane]
fine :)


[Hard]
HP +1?
00:44:993 (2) - add new combo


[Kiiwa's Normal]
OD +1?
00:04:536 (2,3) - spacing
00:14:479 (4,1) - change new combo
00:24:250 (3,1,2,3,4) - spacing
00:55:965 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:59:393 (2,3) - spacing


[Easy]
00:33:336 (4,1) - spacing

sorry,this map was highly.
i can't many mod :(

nice mapset :)
fight~~
jossieP
hi x3 from keii&kyon's queue
15th personal mod

Hard

00:05:050 (3) - delete this? feels better without it
00:03:165 (5,6,7) - maybe use a bounce slider like 00:01:793 (2) ?
00:29:050 (x) - a note here?
00:29:736 (x) - ^
00:32:479 (x) - ^

Pangko

-yeah being a bit overmaper at taiko is not so bad at all, think about that, lazy taiko x3

00:01:108 (1) - from here can use the combo d d k k d d k k d d k k
00:04:193 (11) - then here a triple kkk for those k k
00:07:279 - d ddk
00:09:508 (37) - ddk
00:10:193 (39) - a note here
00:11:050 (40) - kkd
00:11:908 (44) - k
00:12:765 (47) - move this to 00:12:593
00:12:593 - a little don here
00:13:279 (49) - delete
00:16:536 (69) - five notes stream
00:17:241 - katsu
00:17:393 (72) - delete
00:20:307 (85) - ddd
00:20:993 (89) - move to 00:21:165
00:30:765 (138) - 3 notes stream
00:32:136 (144) - ^
00:33:508 (150) - ^
00:34:879 (156) - ^
00:40:879 (185) - from here ddd ddk dkk kkk ddddkkkkddddk k~
00:45:850 (213) - 3 notes stream
00:47:222 (219) - ^
00:48:593 (225) - 5 notes stream
00:49:365 (229) - delete it? is on a blue tick
00:51:422 - don
00:54:165 - don
00:55:622 (255) - ok from here get better :D
01:00:337 (284) - blue tick )=
Alace

ikari_kyon wrote:

hi x3 from keii&kyon's queue
15th personal mod

Hard

00:05:050 (3) - delete this? feels better without it
00:03:165 (5,6,7) - maybe use a bounce slider like 00:01:793 (2) ?
00:29:050 (x) - a note here?
00:29:736 (x) - ^
00:32:479 (x) - ^

Pangko

-yeah being a bit overmaper at taiko is not so bad at all, think about that, lazy taiko x3

00:01:108 (1) - from here can use the combo d d k k d d k k d d k k
00:04:193 (11) - then here a triple kkk for those k k
00:07:279 - d ddk
00:09:508 (37) - ddk
00:10:193 (39) - a note here
00:11:050 (40) - kkd
00:11:908 (44) - k
00:12:765 (47) - move this to 00:12:593
00:12:593 - a little don here
00:13:279 (49) - delete
00:16:536 (69) - five notes stream
00:17:241 - katsu
00:17:393 (72) - delete
00:20:307 (85) - ddd
00:20:993 (89) - move to 00:21:165
00:30:765 (138) - 3 notes stream
00:32:136 (144) - ^
00:33:508 (150) - ^
00:34:879 (156) - ^
00:40:879 (185) - from here ddd ddk dkk kkk ddddkkkkddddk k~
00:45:850 (213) - 3 notes stream
00:47:222 (219) - ^
00:48:593 (225) - 5 notes stream
00:49:365 (229) - delete it? is on a blue tick
00:51:422 - don
00:54:165 - don
00:55:622 (255) - ok from here get better :D
01:00:337 (284) - blue tick )=
I am sorry that i won't change anything here,can you explain what the lazy taiko diff is ?
I found the patterns which fit the music, they don't really overmapped i guess
jossieP

Alace wrote:

I am sorry that i won't change anything here,can you explain what the lazy taiko diff is ?
I found the patterns which fit the music, they don't really overmapped i guess
I mean this taiko is very lazy, Im not a great taiko mapper or player but when I played this I almost get sleep, I suggest to put more streams for make it more funny to play, that is all, I like funny taiko diffs whit many streams
Shiirn
Luka
A few awkward spots for an easy but that's okay.

Kiiwa
00:15:508 (3) - remove repeat?

Hard
ok

taiko
i hate people who do this with diff settings srsly.
it also doesn't even seem to bother trying to follow the song at all, but maybe i just suck at taiko.

Insane
fairly good.
Natteke

ikari_kyon wrote:

Alace wrote:

I am sorry that i won't change anything here,can you explain what the lazy taiko diff is ?
I found the patterns which fit the music, they don't really overmapped i guess
I mean this taiko is very lazy, Im not a great taiko mapper or player but when I played this I almost get sleep, I suggest to put more streams for make it more funny to play, that is all, I like funny taiko diffs whit many streams
Wut? If you like hard maps, it doesn't mean every taiko map has to be hard. It perfectly fits the song in my opinion.


Shiirn wrote:

taiko
i hate people who do this with diff settings srsly.
it also doesn't even seem to bother trying to follow the song at all, but maybe i just suck at taiko.
Circle size and approach rate do not affect maps in taiko mode, the only settings that matter are HP drain and Overall difficulty which are not supposed to be changed for taiko maps. And which part of this map doesn't follow the song? I don't see any.

mancuso_JM_
Mod Request :P

General:
Audio Lead-In 500

Luka's Easy:
Slider Tick Rate in 2
00:31:279 (1,2): Don't stack please, is quite difficult to read to new players
00:34:022 (1,2): ^^
00:41:565 (4): Clap at the end

Kiiwa's Normal:
00:24:765 (1): This note is hidden by HP Bar, Please move it.
00:31:108 (1): I think that reverse arrow is unnecesary, only the slider it's ok. Remove it please.
00:35:993 (4): The slider is hidden by HP Bar. You can move it or take another form
00:36:422 (5): If you are going to stack (5), please stack with the next slider (1), is more predictable
00:52:193 (3): New Combo
00:58:708 (1): This slider goes to 00:59:393 (with reverse arrow) and delete the note
01:13:793 (1): Remove all hitfinishes

Hard:
00:27:165 (5): New Combo
01:14:308 (7): Remove hitfinish

Insane:
01:14:308 (4): Remove hitfinish at the end

Pangko:
In general it's OK, but I'm with kyon. I think that BPM is high, and you can add some streams.
But I also know that it is your mapping form :)

Nice map in General. Good Luck with your beatmap ;)
jossieP

Natteke wrote:

Wut? If you like hard maps, it doesn't mean every taiko map has to be hard. It perfectly fits the song in my opinion.
It fits good, but Im just saying it can be more funny to play


mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Pangko:
In general it's OK, but I'm with kyon. I think that BPM is high, and you can add some streams.
But I also know that it is your mapping form :)
I see his mapping way is like on standard mode, but on standard mode you have jumps for make it more funny, at taiko just left the streams?
wmfchris

ikari_kyon wrote:

Alace wrote:

I am sorry that i won't change anything here,can you explain what the lazy taiko diff is ?
I found the patterns which fit the music, they don't really overmapped i guess
I mean this taiko is very lazy, Im not a great taiko mapper or player but when I played this I almost get sleep, I suggest to put more streams for make it more funny to play, that is all, I like funny taiko diffs whit many streams
What meant to be a taiko diff is to make use of the potential of song and assist the song for me, and in this sence the current one is great enough. Again we don't need to make taiko fun "because it's challenging" but to "let others enjoying it".

00:19:973 - d maybe fit here so that it emphasizes the accent on the next white tick that is represented by k

Only one suggestion. In overall the diff is nice enough. Instead of saying diff "is lazy" (I don't agree for this), I would say there're pretty much repition here, but it sounds fine. At the same time, the song itself don't give a streamy feeling so 1/2 as the majority is fine as well.

A stylish big note applocation and looks good to me. The only thing I would like to mention is that I'm a bit against the 1/4 dk before a sentences start like 00:58:965 becoz different from solo diffs, they sounds equally loud and looks a bit odd to me.

Nice job, no kd here.
jossieP
:D is ok dont mind me, Im newbie at moding and stuff so this is +1 on taiko moding experience :3
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

ikari_kyon wrote:

:D is ok dont mind me, Im newbie at moding and stuff so this is +1 on taiko moding experience :3
^ ^
bossandy
哈~ 我來mod摟~
Luka's Easy:

SPOILER
00:18:250 (1) - 這個slider可以更對稱( 這要改不改其實沒差多少 只不過我打起來感覺有點差lol

Kiiwa's Normal:

SPOILER
00:55:965 (1) - 中間加clap
00:56:993 (2) - 加clap
00:57:336 (3) - 中間加clap
00:58:365 (4) - 加clap
00:59:736 (3) - 加clap

Hard:

SPOILER
00:09:165 (7) - 開頭加clap
00:09:508 (X) - 加個note?
00:11:908 (6) - 開頭加clap
00:19:450 (6) - 中間跟結尾加clap
00:20:479 (X) - 加個note?
00:22:708 (6) - 中間加clap?
01:13:793 (4,5,6,7) - 改成jump不? (這是Hard 給點Jump吧 >_<

Insane:

SPOILER
00:02:993 ~ 00:03:679 前面節奏都一樣很無聊 加加看這節奏吧 ~

00:06:250 (6) - 加clap
00:17:565 (12) - 加NC
00:17:908 (1) - 刪除NC

做的真好~ 祝好運 !
Leorda
Hello there

General
* I found the Thumbs.db in SB subfolder, ask the modder to help you http://puu.sh/86kG
* I recommeded to set the preview point to 00:44:479

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Luka's Easy
00:33:336 (4,1) - Replace this object into one slider for following vocal?
00:48:765 (x) - Add note here for good flow
00:59:736 (x) - ^
01:08:307 (1) - This slider are not allowed in Easy diff. It'll confusing for beginners becuase it has a hidden sliderpath
01:08:993 (2) - ^
01:11:050 (3,4) - Replace this object into one slider? Just my feeling, though

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Kiiwa's Normal

00:02:993 (4) - Move forward to 00:03:165, it doesn't following the rhythm if you keep this
00:05:222 (3,4,5,6) - I feel confusing. Try move 00:05:907 (5,6) to 00:05:736 for following the rhythm. Keeping this will make confusing for beginners
00:06:593 (1) - The tail slider is almost offscreen
00:10:707 (3,4) - Add an object between this object? I feel empty here~
00:24:765 (1) - This object is touched the HP Bar and it's included in new Guidelines
00:26:136 (3) - This notes is almost offscreen
00:35:393 (4) - The sliderpath is almost offscreen
00:51:165 (2) - The tail slider touched the HP Bar and it's included in new Guidelines
00:55:965 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern needs more hitsound
01:13:793 (1) - You using a repeating slider more than one and you use a short slider. And it makes confusing for beginners

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I'm sorry for long mod!!! :cry:
phonic
Hello~ :)

from phonic & Laurier's Modding Queue


[Insane]

  1. 00:17:050 (6) - add new combo?
  2. 00:39:165 (5) - ^
[Pangko]

  1. Does not BG for drums make it?
[Hard]

  1. OD-1
  2. 00:36:593 (8) - add new combo
  3. 00:47:050 (x) - add note?
[Kiiwa's Normal]

  1. 00:10:707 (3,4) - It is suggestion from me 
  2. 00:44:993 (1) - I do not see it behind a slider of 00:44:479 
  3. 01:13:450 (x) - add note?
[Luka's Easy]

  1. There is no problem
that's all

It is a wonderful map
Please try Rank hard!
I support you

I like your map

Star~
Mafiamaster
Hmm, yeah. This mapset is pretty much solid.

One thing though, I agree with phonic about 00:10:707 (3,4) on [Kiiwa's Normal].
That "slightly-longer-than-normal" pause can be a little confusing for beginners. It'd be great if you kept the flow going like it is throughout the map.

That's about it, awesome job.
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
Thank you for all modder ^ ^, I will go to change
Kotone
General
Tag 'Tenisu no Oujisama' ?
SB的想法不錯,不過好浪費,用color代碼改顏色不就好了嗎

Kiiwa's Normal
00:05:222 (3,4) - 改成這樣如何 http://puu.sh/8x0x
00:29:222 (1) - spinner擋住了slider尾...看這 http://puu.sh/8x0P
00:44:479 (1) - ^..這次擋頭

Hard
01:13:793 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡來個小跳如何,(1)newcombo

Insane最後的加速帥爆了
網王裡我喜歡不二
Suzully
Thank you for mod request~

[General]
  • [Easy]
  1. 01:13:793 (3) - Add finish at the end of slider as well as other diffs.
[Kiiwa's Normal]
  1. 00:05:908 (4) - It doesn't follow the music. Move it to 00:05:736 and change place with DS.
  2. 00:10:022 (2,3) - IMO it's hard for normal player to read them because of the pattern which includes 3/8 length slider.
  3. 00:55:965 (1) - Add finish at the start of slider.
[Hard]

  • Fine.
[Insane]
  1. 00:30:936 (9) - Move it to x:256 y:352? (7,8,9,10,1) will be symmetry.
Nice mapset! I couldn't find a big issue.
Good luck~ :)
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

karenying wrote:

General
Tag 'Tenisu no Oujisama' ?
SB的想法不錯,不過好浪費,用color代碼改顏色不就好了嗎

Kiiwa's Normal
00:05:222 (3,4) - 改成這樣如何 http://puu.sh/8x0x
00:29:222 (1) - spinner擋住了slider尾...看這 http://puu.sh/8x0P
00:44:479 (1) - ^..這次擋頭

Hard
01:13:793 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡來個小跳如何,(1)newcombo

Insane最後的加速帥爆了
網王裡我喜歡不二
没错没错没错不二简直帅爆了> </

谢谢~

Suzully wrote:

Thank you for mod request~

[General]
  • [Easy]
  1. 01:13:793 (3) - Add finish at the end of slider as well as other diffs.
[Kiiwa's Normal]
  1. 00:05:908 (4) - It doesn't follow the music. Move it to 00:05:736 and change place with DS.
  2. 00:10:022 (2,3) - IMO it's hard for normal player to read them because of the pattern which includes 3/8 length slider.
  3. 00:55:965 (1) - Add finish at the start of slider.
[Hard]

  • Fine.
[Insane]
  1. 00:30:936 (9) - Move it to x:256 y:352? (7,8,9,10,1) will be symmetry.
Nice mapset! I couldn't find a big issue.
Good luck~ :)
Thank you XD
Backfire
Taiko -
00:36:422 (162,163) - Shouldn't be finishes.
01:03:850 (300,301) - ^
Actually, lay off of the finish spam at the end. Its not healthy.
Name the taiko something that isn't "Pangko"
Name it Taiko Oni or something.
Drianel
i wanna this on ranked, i play this every day and is so good map! i love it and i love Prince of tennis :)
Gamu
Good map!!

I could not find the problem...

Ranked go~ go~ :)
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
thank you XD!!!!!!!!!!
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