1. Hard (4.9 stars, 456 notes)
2. Normal (4.03 stars, 130 notes)

wojiushi2p wrote:

[Hard]
00:41:138 (3) -
00:42:852 (6) -
00:44:566 (3) -
00:46:280 (6) -
00:47:995 (5) -
00:49:709 (5) -
00:51:423 (5) -
01:42:848 (10) -
02:11:989 (5) -
02:13:703 (3) -
02:15:417 (5) -
02:17:131 (3) -
↑ 这几个slider可以搞成1/4的，或者把声音弄小一点，不然会让人紧张的（QAQ我最怕这种)

01:10:493 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
01:16:493 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
↑ 全是点. 适当替换成slider怎么样

01:19:492 (4,5) -
02:00:632 (4,5) -
02:27:416 (1,2,3,4) -
02:45:843 (4,1) -
↑ 点距问题

Nymph_ wrote:

OK Nymph_'s mod request~

General:
建议使用GRID LEVEL 3 这样能使一些SPACING更整齐

Easy:
01:20:349 (1) - 建议转盘结尾加FINISH 音量调高

Normal:
00:20:140 (1) - 结尾CLAP
00:33:639 (4) - 这里建议75音量
01:00:208 (1) - 结尾CLAP？
01:07:708 (4) - 这里半遮挡不觉得是什么好主意
01:07:708 (4,5,6) - 这3个去掉HITSOUND？
01:22:064 (6) - 这里也建议FINISH大声 能给一种段落结束的感觉
02:08:346 (4) - 这里建议从08:132开始用红白线的回转滑条 也是都加WHISTLE 不过你的方法也没有什么不好 只是建议
02:29:987 (2) - 这白线不太好吧。。有点突然 用2个红线怎么样？
02:36:844 (6) - 这里的音量放低？鼓声好震喔。。
02:49:700 (4) - 这后面跟鼓声放HITSOUND 似乎没什么大的必要
03:20:555 (3) - 同上 建议2红线
03:40:268 - 加个NOTE？

Hard：
Ok 由于我不太懂得RANDOM SPACING 所以排列我不予评价 基本上我能FC 所以不能说哪里有错误..这里等别人来提意见好了.
00:13:926 (1) - 这后面的中间第三白线也加个NOTE吧？有点空了
00:40:281 (2) - 加NOTE？
00:41:138 (4) - OK 这里用了八分之一的拍子和静音 不过我不觉得有什么好的效果？试试这样

音量还是使用了100 用跟00:40:495一样的滑条的一半做一个重叠 然后在00:41:567加一个NOTE过渡到00:41:781 (6) 我觉得这样
更舒服一些 建议可以试一下 后面相同的地方一样
00:53:566 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是一样 并不建议用鼓声HITSOUND跟音乐里的鼓声重合 个人这样感觉很闷 或者可以使用CUSTOM 1的CLAP？
后面基本跟前面就是一样的问题了 有的我觉得应该强调的地方你都设置的静音= =我不知道可能你设置静音是为了反衬这里是重点？ 不过建议鼓声不要一直跟着音乐的鼓声放 可以在平时放一些做点缀 音乐的鼓声那里还是建议用CUSTOM 1 CLAP， 2个鼓声重叠确实震得我有点头晕..

以上都是意见呢 请自己挑选能接受的进行参考~

star~

00:41:138 (4) - OK 这里用了八分之一的拍子和静音 不过我不觉得有什么好的效果？试试这样

音量还是使用了100 用跟00:40:495一样的滑条的一半做一个重叠 然后在00:41:567加一个NOTE过渡到00:41:781 (6) 我觉得这样
更舒服一些 建议可以试一下 后面相同的地方一样

Avadon wrote:

star o.o

soulfear wrote:

要難度么.
我覺得BPM應該是整的...140

soulfear wrote:

那個工具 測的不準確的.
140我看了下 沒什麽不對.
如果你要改140的話我可以幫你調 不麻煩的 很簡單.

soulfear wrote:

小MOD了一下
OFFSET 215
BPM 140

所有難度countdown沒必要 取消掉
在Song setup里 storyboarding里取消

另外你改TIMING和OFFSET后PreviewTime重新設置一下 也就是大黃線 歌的預覽點

SB沒用到的話刪掉文件夾里.OSB文件重新完整上傳一次

圖的一些地方我覺得有點別扭
[Hard]
00:41:138 (4,5,6,7,8) -
02:03:424 (8,9) -

BakaHuang wrote:

~.~hi, sorry for my later modding

just suggestions

[Easy]
00:21:215(3)-从这点开始 后面全部往后移一格白线 比如(3)移到00:21:643-

所有难度:
每个难度都只选定一种DS来放note 很多地方的snap仍然有问题
所以当你决定好用多少间距的时候 每个note都碰一下 看看DS是否有误

修改好pm我 update

[Easy]
00:21:215(3)-从这点开始 后面全部往后移一格白线 比如(3)移到00:21:643-

Hellzero wrote:

Random mod
Easy
00:20:143 (1) - add clap (for normal and hard too)
Add more note for diversity. Example:
00:23:572 - add circle (clap)
00:27:000 - ^
00:30:429 - ^ ect.
00:41:786 - add circle (clap)
00:42:215 - ^
00:42:643 - ^ ect.
this will make map more fun

01:10:072 - timing point move to 01:09:215
01:09:215 - add circle (clap)
02:38:357 - ^
03:16:929 - ^
03:27:429 (3,4) - it's not follow for music + confusing for new players

Normal
Add more note for diversity. Like Easy.

Hard
00:07:072 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this lonely circles too boring for hard
00:37:500 (9) - (nazi) 1 grid up
00:41:143 (4) - it's not follow for music. replace for triplet?
00:54:644 - add note
01:07:714 (4) - (nazi) 1 grid right
01:07:500 (3) - 1 grid up

Oh... need more work. Any way good luck and star

Cirno wrote:

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.

[Hard]
Easy Hard
有些折线slider画的不太好看 建议画成对称或者改为曲线slider
...我觉得你那些1/8 slider的repeat很诡异
00:30:215 (1,2,3) - 三角形摆的不是很好看 或许(2)往左一格?
00:41:143 (4) - 拉长一点改1/4 slider 我觉得更好听一点...
00:42:857 (8) - 加1repeat?
00:44:572 (3) - ^
00:46:286 (7) - ^
00:48:000 (5) - ^
00:49:714 (5) - 减1repeat并改成1/4 slider?
00:51:429 (5) - 加1repeat?
00:59:786 (5,1) - 这两个之间的anti-jump感觉有点不合理... 按正常spacing排?
01:42:857 (10) - 加1repeat?
01:49:714 (4) - ^
02:07:072 (1) - 这个遮挡有点违和 可以考虑stack到02:06:643 (7)末尾, 然后调整02:07:500 (2)的spacing
02:08:250 - add note here?
02:12:000 (5) - 减1repeat并改成1/4 slider?
02:13:714 (3) - 加1repeat?
02:15:429 (9) - ^
02:17:143 (4) - ^
02:18:857 (4,5,6) - 1/8三连在这里没啥意义 改为1/4三连吧
03:28:393 - add note?

[Normal]
00:42:643 (5,1) - swap new combo?
02:23:786 - add note here?
02:26:786 (2) - move to 02:26:572, 对vocal契合度更好
02:27:643 (3,4) - move to 02:27:429
02:29:786 - add note here. 没有这个音直接到02:30:000 (2)的话对新手有点难..
02:30:429 - ^, 理由同
03:20:357 - ^
03:21:000 - ^

[Easy]超过了时间限制(3:41 * 3 = 11mins > 10mins)所以不mod了>.> 简单看了下 感觉没啥大问题
Star~

02:12:000 (5) - 减1repeat并改成1/4 slider?

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

Timing off? Im not good at timing, but sounds a little off to me.
...习惯性敲成英文了orz
Easy
00:13:929 (1,2,3,4) - 这个应该不难，但是和前面比起来距离忽然增加得太大了，稍微把间距调小一些
00:23:572 (6,7) - 这种得都做成slider好一些，你整体难度要平衡，就是说每个部分难度差别都不是很大，这里就明显比前面忽然难了很多，给人感觉不舒服。做成slider其实都比较难，建议这种长度的slider都延长到下一个红线或白线。
00:27:000 (4,5) - ^
这样的我就不再一一指出了，你自己看看都改了
00:53:572 (9) - 这个也难其实，最好做成长slider.
02:08:357 (1) - 这个...也难.
这一类的东西下面出现我都不重复了，你自己改改就好了

Normal
做成一个repeat slider更好
01:04:286 (4) - 不明白为什么要做成repeat slider
01:07:714 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 可能会有些难，对于整个图的难度来说,这里倒是可以用repeat slider.
02:22:500 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:36:643 (5,6) - 做成一个repeat slider
03:14:572 - 加note
03:15:000 - ^
03:15:429 - 加一个和03:15:857 (1) - 一样的slider
03:27:215 (3,4,5,6,7) - 对于整体难度来说过难了，你也许想想其它办法，比如长slider


Hard
00:43:500 (1) - 做成slider直到下个红线结束
00:46:929 (1) - ^或者做成slider在00:47:357 (2) - 这个位置结束
01:00:214 (1,2,3,4) - 这里我觉得用vocal更好一些，01:00:000 - 01:00:429 (2,4) - 这3个位置有beat，做成note，或者slider+note或者repeat slider都可以
01:05:357 (6) - 这里，从01:05:143 - 开始到下一个红线结束，做成一个slider
01:05:786 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这里也是跟vocal更好一些，这个歌曲就应该跟vocal多一些，你把2个vocal声音比较重的地方都空下了，想想办法把它们填上
01:10:286 - ^
01:15:429 - ^
02:10:393 - 加一个note
02:10:393 - 距离错了
02:23:786 (6) - ^不过这个好像问题不大
03:14:572 - 加note
03:15:000 - ^
03:15:429 - slider像03:15:857 (1) - 一样的
03:16:500 (2,3) - 往前移动到上一个红线上再在03:17:143 - 加note
03:18:000 - 加note
03:21:429 - ^
03:23:143 - ^
03:24:857 - ^
03:26:786 (1) - 延长到上一个红线
整体感觉就是很多不该有beat的地方你有slider或note，而需要突出vocal的地方却没有\

很多时候并不是你这个东西多难打，而是放在你这个难度里面很难，前面都很简单又慢，忽然出现一个非常夸张的jump或者很长的stream就会给人感觉很不舒服

Aleks719 wrote:

Easy
OD-2 (or -3, I'm not sure)
00:20:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use distance snap in easy please.
00:39:643 [T] - 0.5x speed... oh, okay~
But, please make notes, like 00:41:786 (2) - are visible. It hard to read.
00:45:215 (4) - ^
00:48:643 (6) - ^
00:52:072 (8) - ^
02:08:357 (1,2) - hard to read
02:36:857 (1,2) - ^
03:15:857 (1,2,3) - hard to read
03:27:214 (2,3,4,5) - ^

Normal
01:22:072 (6) - add finish
02:51:215 (1,1,1,1) - Try to avoid this

Hard
AR -1 ?
00:41:143 (4) - This slider's repeat is hidden by a hitburst
00:44:572 (3) - ^
00:46:286 (7) - ^
00:54:214 (4) - You change distance here, add new combo
01:22:072 (5) - remove clap, add finish
01:50:357 (1,2) - reverse notes
03:41:357 (8) - add finish

star.

Suzully wrote:

Thank you for request

SPOILER

General

• Preview time of [Hard] is different from other diffs.
  Resnap green line.

Easy

1. 00:55:072 ~ 01:07:715 (1) - I think this break time is not needed. Put some note?
2. 02:03:643 (2,3) - I think easy player can't play with following this rhythm.
3. 02:08:357 (1,2) - difficult pattern for easy player.
4. 02:24:214 ~ 02:36:857 - same as previous one.
5. 02:39:214 (3,4,5,6) - spacing
6. 03:15:857 (1,2,3) - difficult pattern for easy player.
7. 03:19:500 (5,6,7) - ^
8. 03:27:215 (2) - same as Normal
9. 03:41:143 (6) - spacing

Normal

• 
  I think SV1.50 is a little high for normal diff. Maybe...decrease it to 1.20~30?

1. 00:13:929 (1,2,3,4) - wide spacing for normal player.
2. 00:37:929 (1,2,3,4) - difficult patten for normal player.
3. 00:42:857 (1) - delete it. and new combo at 00:43:072 (2).
4. 01:00:857 (2) - put this slider at 01:01:072 and end it 01:01:500.
5. 01:38:786 (4,1) - they are hidden by HP bar.
6. 01:55:929 (4,5,1) - change pattern or delete (5).
7. 02:49:715 (4,1) - spacing
8. 03:27:215 (3) - OMG please make this slider's length to be twice as long as current one.
9. 03:41:357 (x) - finish KIAI at this time.

Hard

• 
  I recommend you to use Slider Tick Rate 1.

1. 00:39:643 (1,3,4,5) - not stacking them looks good for me.
2. 00:53:572 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think almost players are confused by these spacing. Change pattern or...increasing AR by 1 maybe solve this problem.
3. 00:58:072 (5,6,1) - Change them like this ↓. I feel your pattern don't follow vocal.
   
4. 01:06:000 (2,3,4) - random spacing
5. 01:22:072 (x) - finish KIAI at this time.
6. 01:49:072 (1,2,3,4) - get them into shape like this↓?
   
7. 01:59:143 (1,2,3,4) - close spacing
8. 02:20:786 (5) - spacing
9. 02:23:357 (5) - new combo
10. 02:24:643 (2,3) - spacing
11. 03:16:286 (x) - put a note

I love Girls Dead Monster <3
And I like this song very very much!!
Good luck! Star~

net45291 wrote:

Hi~!

Sound mod and a little mod

SPOILER

[General]

Hit sound to loud ' ่ีjust 70 - 80

[Easy]

*use x1 speed, don't use a slowslider in easy , slow just in a hard and insane diff.

00:39:644 (1) - add finish

00:43:072 (3) - ^

00:59:786 (4) - remove clap on red tick

02:03:643 (2) - remove finish

02:29:786 (5) - add clap on white tick

02:29:786 (5) - remove clap on red tick

02:36:857 (1) - remove kiai

02:37:715 (1) - add kiai here

03:16:286 - remove kiai

03:16:286 - add kiai here

03:19:500 (4) - remove clap

03:41:143 (6) - remove clap on red tick

[Normal]

*This diff should be easier

00:27:215 (6) - add clap

00:43:072 (1) - add finish

01:07:715 (4) - remove whistle on last white tick

01:21:429 (5) - remove whistle on white tick

01:56:786 (1) - add finish

02:10:500 (4) - add finish on last white tick

02:13:929 (6) - add finish on first white tick

02:17:357 (6) - ^

02:24:214 (1) - add kiai here

02:24:643 (2) - remove kiai

02:37:929 - add timing and add more Noisiness

03:20:357 (3) - add clap on white tick

03:20:357 (3) - remove clap on red tick

03:28:072 (3,4,5) - to hard in normal

03:28:179 (4) - remove this note

03:41:143 (5) - remove clap

[Hard]

00:42:857 (8) - add finish on white tick

00:55:286 - remove kiai

00:42:857 (8) - add kiai here

01:00:000 (5) - remove clap on last red tick

01:01:929 (7) - remove finish

01:15:429 (5) - add finish on red tick

01:49:714 (4) - add finish on white tick

01:53:357 (1) - add finish

01:56:786 (9) - ^

02:12:000 (5) - add finish on white tick

02:15:429 (9) - ^

02:29:572 (2) - add clap on white tick

02:30:000 (3) - remove clap

02:52:072 (5,6) - ^

02:52:286 (6) - add finish

02:53:786 (5,6) - ^^^

02:55:500 (5,6) - ^^^

03:41:143 (7) - remove clap

์good map and spacing XD , star ~

banvi wrote:

hi~ :3
I like Girls Dead Monstar & AB <3

SPOILER

[Easy]
I suggest you should use distance snap all note.
Changing/random spacing in easy/normal are comfused beginner player.
00:41:786 (2,4,6,8) remove
00:43:072 (2) hwo about adjust this slider more symmetrical?
00:46:501 (4) new combo
00:55:072 (T) starting kiai here
02:24:215 (5) new combo
02:26:357 (1) remove new combo
02:50:786 (T) actually , ending kiai here?? as far as looking other diff.
03:16:500 (T) starting kiai here

[Normal]
HP +1 or +2
02:36:857 (T) cancel kiai
02:37:072 (T) ^
02:38:357 (T) this timing point is needless??
02:50:786 (T) starting kiai here

[Hard]
adjust some kiai time like other diff >:
AR +1
00:18:215 (6) move 1 grid up

hmm , to be honest , mapset needs more work.
Try to make things look pretty in all diff.
But I often see such things in beginner mappers.
So you don't need depressed.
fight~

Selee wrote:

Timing:
BPM: 140.000
Offset: 201

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx request

[Hard]
1.19.058(2) - spacing
1.20.129(6) - spacing(x0.0 and offgrid)
1.41.343(5,6) - 2grid right 5grid down(level3)
1.42.415(8) - 1grid right(level4)
2.07.058(1) - spacing(x0.0 and offgrid)
2.23.129(4) - 1grid left
2.25.701(4) - spacing
2.29.558(2) - spacing(x0.0 and offgrid)
2.42.629(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - like it pic.
2.44.986(3) - 1grid right and down
2.45.843(4) - 1grid right

+star

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

[Overall]
Better to add a silenced 'soft-sliderslide.wav' imo

[Easy] - Very boring, just having one note every 2nd beat of a bar, try to make more variations
00:39:630 (1) - Stack with 00:39:201 (4)
02:13:486 (1) - 2nd point: x:224 y:248
03:41:129 (6) - Finish? (Slider end)

[Normal]
00:07:058 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Is this the same as [Easy]??? Please remap here
00:59:343 (5) - 2nd point: x:340 y:368
03:28:915 (1) - Too close to the previous note imo

[Hard] - Please try not to overlap so much
00:54:200 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:54:415 (5) - New Combo

Star~!

Very boring, just having one note every 2nd beat of a bar, try to make more variations

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
Notes look sort of randomly placed... try adding sliders with regular circles more often, because it helps create more flow. Not only that, make some sliders longer, and make more prettier shapes, rather than the repetitive beat you have.

I'd also recommend changing some colors, because it doesn't seem to fit. It also feels like the sliders you have would look better if it had some other color to it, I don't know.
[Normal]
Pretty much the same as above... 'cept less random, I guess
[Hard]
AR -1. It's too fast for this kind of song... it's only a hard map...

Aaand the same as above ._.

Keep trying ><

1. 01:22:486 (T) - note with finish, cancel the finish on 01:22:058 (5).
2. 02:00:843 (4,1) - use x0.8 or more spacing snap
3. 02:20:343 (4,1) - spacing
4. 03:28:486 (10,1) - ^
5. 03:34:915 (8,1) - too close

1. 01:22:486 (T) - same as in Hard
2. 00:37:915 (1,2,3) - spacing

1. 01:20:343 (1) - cancel finish
2. 01:22:486 (T) - make the break start from here? drag the line on the notes' bar to change the starting point.

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]:

1. 01:22:486 (T) - note with finish, cancel the finish on 01:22:058 (5).
2. 02:00:843 (4,1) - use x0.8 or more spacing snap
3. 02:20:343 (4,1) - spacing
4. 03:28:486 (10,1) - ^
5. 03:34:915 (8,1) - too close

[Normal]:

1. 01:22:486 (T) - same as in Hard
2. 00:37:915 (1,2,3) - spacing

[Easy]:

1. 01:20:343 (1) - cancel finish
2. 01:22:486 (T) - make the break start from here? drag the line on the notes' bar to change the starting point.

star~

osuplayer111 wrote:

Revived.

SPOILER

Short message and stuff, you know it.