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Sawashiro Miyuki - Ambivalent World (TV Size)

posted 2011-02-17T05:45:02+00:00

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6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-17T05:45:02+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2022年5月3日 at 22:38:11

Artist: Sawashiro Miyuki
Title: Ambivalent World (TV Size)
Source: Bakemonogatari
Tags: Kousaki Satoru Kanbaru Suruga fanzhen0019 Backfire
BPM: 174
Filesize: 2525kb
Play Time: 01:21
Difficulties Available:

fanzhen's World (4.04 stars, 278 notes)
Hard (3.96 stars, 228 notes)
Insane (4.36 stars, 282 notes)
Normal (2.14 stars, 152 notes)

Download: Sawashiro Miyuki - Ambivalent World (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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<6800cube's 1st map>
Thanks: fanzhen0019 Backfire happy30
Hope everyone like the songs and the map ~
11-2-17 Change the note and title.
11-2-18 Change the note and title again.
11-2-18 Add the video.
11-2-18 Add the "insane".
11-2-18 Change the sound of notes.
11-2-18 Add the "fanzhen's insane".
11-2-18 Change the shape of sliders.
11-2-19 Add the "easy".
11-2-19 Change the distance of sliders.
11-2-20 Change the combo.
11-2-21 Update the "fanzhen's insane".
11-2-22 Change the sound of notes again.
11-2-23 Change the kiai time.
11-3-3 Update the "fanzhen's World".
11-3-13 Change the BG of insane.
11-3-25 Change the MP3 file.
11-3-29 Change the hitsounds.
11-4-2 Remap the "insane".
11-4-7 Add the "Backfire's Taiko Oni".
11-4-17 Update the video.
11-5-3 Fix the distance again.
11-5-8 Change the BG.
11-6-12 Change the "hard".
11-8-1 Update "Backfire's Taiko Oni".
22-5-3 Update hitsounds.

Last edited by 6800cube 2022-05-03T14:37:56+00:00, edited 94 times in total.

Lucy_Heartfilia_old

Joined March 2010

Lucy_Heartfilia_old 2011-02-17T10:02:24+00:00

距离问题解决了。
接下来还有HITSOUND的问题，就是音效，一首MP3是不可能没有一点特殊音效的
还有你这歌就1分钟，多做几个难度吧，2个肯定不够，继续加油
你这歌有人做过RANK的，你可以下载下来，玩玩模仿模仿，初学者模仿不是一件坏事

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-17T10:17:47+00:00

谢谢~~
很有帮助阿~~
我还是第一次做MAP,谢谢你的指点~

PIZZAHUT_old

PIZZAHUT_old 2011-02-17T10:27:09+00:00

玩了,感觉尚可,继续努力!
(美化工作要加油啊)

ytcompany18a

Joined June 2010

ytcompany18a 2011-02-17T10:51:27+00:00

预定个难度可以么

PIZZAHUT_old

PIZZAHUT_old 2011-02-17T10:54:31+00:00

STAR~

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6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-17T10:55:50+00:00

Last edited by 6800cube 2011-02-17T11:03:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-17T10:56:53+00:00

KISS君说要多几个难度的..没问题~

asus10tu

Joined March 2010

asus10tu 2011-02-17T11:10:15+00:00

star~! 以后改名字你只要换其中一个难度的名字然后完整上传就好了之后再补别的难度..

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-17T11:11:04+00:00

感谢~~

Youmu_old_1

Joined October 2010

Youmu_old_1 2011-02-17T14:01:28+00:00

Star

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-17T14:03:16+00:00

谢谢SUMMER触手君~~

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

Joined July 2010

fanzhen0019 2011-02-17T14:27:27+00:00

Title:
Miyuki Sawashiro - Ambivalent World

easy的break有点多 @.@
hard的spacing...

那啥做图是不是没开Distance Snap
选好间距开DS把note全部重新排一次吧..

star~
(不会MOD 渣mapper我自重

Last edited by fanzhen0019 2011-02-17T14:47:51+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-17T14:46:55+00:00

谢谢~很有帮助了~

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

Joined July 2010

fanzhen0019 2011-02-17T14:48:14+00:00

BPM为174?

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-17T15:08:54+00:00

可是那样貌似过快了吧=w=

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

Joined July 2010

fanzhen0019 2011-02-17T15:55:36+00:00

这BPM..怪不得滑条速度是2.6呢Orz..
这歌听起来是快节奏啊 174很正常的说

Kochiya Sanae

Joined June 2010

Kochiya Sanae 2011-02-17T16:15:38+00:00

按SA要求来看看如果我蛋疼了我就会来mod的

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-17T16:21:31+00:00

不想做太高的BGM，因为是第一次做~~

=================

KOCHIYA~
那个鬼畜图是你的？不错啊~~

Kochiya Sanae

Joined June 2010

Kochiya Sanae 2011-02-17T17:18:53+00:00

蛋疼来了
BG大小必须是1024X768 或者800X600 好像是o.o
song setup---storyboard---把countdown去掉
[Hard]
00:11:861 X - 加一个note
你不是开了DS么怎么还是有距离的问题0.0?
00:19:446 (7,8) - 不建议这样和00:46:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 连打距离一样了很难分辨
第一次作图建议距离不要变太多0.0..
似乎没有音效?
01:23:929 (1,2,3,1,1) - 分开或者不要newcombo
[Easy]
必须3星或者3星以下把note换成最大 HP降低 AR降低

懒得看了好累0.0~

Sandpig

Joined September 2010

Sandpig 2011-02-17T19:31:19+00:00

在selee的queue看到的，应该是超过规定的request数了不过看到是华语MAPPER就稍微看了下，不算MOD

你的问题在于跟人声过多，造成整张图缺少一个系统的节奏，排列上比较随机但是距离问题似乎不大。

你需要一个timing setting（绿线）来结束kiai mode

不用给KDS

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-18T01:58:49+00:00

谢谢二位的帮助~
感激不尽!

Princess God

Joined June 2010

Princess God 2011-02-18T02:27:35+00:00

支持！

Selee

Joined February 2010

Selee 2011-02-18T03:15:23+00:00

今天太累..懒着用E文了...

BPM: 174.000

改BPM后Slider Velocity除2

tick rate 改到1会好不少吧

Title: Ambivalent World 用这个http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=25&t=33919 改title/artist 省的重复上传

mp3结尾怎么还带循环? 砍了吧

kiai在01:20:826结束就好

hard的countdown取消掉

你需要个preview point...Timing--Add preview point

加个空白sliderbody.wav吧..

Hard加些AR, 1/4三连和1/2的都没法分出来...而且堆得满屏都是不好看

Normal不用太追求人声 1/4的话对于Normal过难了 00:51:344 (9) - 如果实在想加这种用滑杠代替

normal注意下note和滑杠的取舍

短歌就别留太多空白了

http://osu.ppy.sh/b/47697 看这张参考着做吧

反正最后都要砍了重练 ╮(╯_╰)╭

嘛坑开多了就好了加油咯

PS: queue别乱贴看好规则乱贴会被讨厌

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-18T04:48:34+00:00

谢谢阿....
正在改...
对我很有帮助~

ytcompany18a

Joined June 2010

ytcompany18a 2011-02-18T07:40:01+00:00

newest version.

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

Joined July 2010

fanzhen0019 2011-02-18T10:09:33+00:00

guest diff xD
或许做的很渣 @.@
赶出来的因为明天就开学了 /.

have fun

Download: Sawashiro Miyuki - Ambivalent World(TV Size) (6800cube) [fanzhen's Insane].osu

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-18T14:00:24+00:00

能作出来已经很感谢了~

xinhe

Joined February 2010

xinhe 2011-02-18T16:16:43+00:00

看到你在群里找MOD～就来帮忙了～～～刚刚开始学MOD～～所以水平不好～～凑合看看吧～～

[总体]
offset：479（建议可以找神TIMING测测～我也不肯定～～之前的感觉不合适）
BPM应该没有错
加个三星以下的EZ～不然好像是不能RANK
音效声音太大～很吵～改小点一般非KIAI用5就差不多了

[normal]
00:23:065 (4,5) - SPACING
00:25:823 (3,4) - ^
00:26:685 (4,5) - ^
00:27:375 (5,6) - ^
00:48:065 (2,3) - ^
00:48:582 (3,4) - ^
00:49:099 (4,5) - ^
00:49:444 (5,6) - ^
00:49:789 (6,7) - ^
00:50:134 (7,8) - ^
00:50:479 (8,9) - ^
00:50:823 (9,10) - ^
00:57:547 (11,12) - ^
01:05:823 (5,6) - ^

nor难度开AIMOD最好是别留SPACING问题

[hard]
00:19:099 (6,7,8) - SPACING
00:22:547 (1,2) - ^
呃～～看了以下～～这个难度所有的问题都差不多～～还是距离问题～～～一组同颜色的COMBO内SPACING不要乱变啊～～那样图根本打不了～～～举个例子～在同一组COMBO内～明明刚才两个NOTE是隔了一拍距离怎么长～～～接下来两个NOTE明明隔得是相同的拍子，但是距离看起来像连打或者大跳～～～那样根本就打不了

[insane]
问题和HARD一样～～建议刚开始做图掌握不好距离～就从头开DS排到尾～～～这样至少BAT或者MAT在看你图的时候～基本上不会拿距离说事

[fanzhen's Insane]
00:20:309 -补个NOTE？～或者和后面的1变成一个SL
00:37:033 -补NOTE
00:22:895 (2) - NEW COMBO
00:24:447 (6) - ^
00:24:964 (8) - ^
00:23:240 (3) - ^
01:07:206 (2) - ^
01:07:551 (3) - ^
01:09:620 (8) - ^
01:18:930 (4) - ^
01:19:447 (7) - ^
01:19:964 (10) - ^
这个难度感觉问题不大～～NEW COMBO主要是为了让跳更好理解一点～～～改不改随意

STAR~~~

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-19T00:42:37+00:00

谢谢XINHE~~
很认真负责呢~~

你做的LOVE PLUS刷分图我很喜欢~~

angelsama_old

Joined October 2010

angelsama_old 2011-02-19T00:43:54+00:00

STAR

XD.....

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

Joined July 2010

fanzhen0019 2011-02-19T02:53:40+00:00

xinhe wrote:
[fanzhen's Insane]
00:20:309 -补个NOTE？～或者和后面的1变成一个SL
00:37:033 -补NOTE 不用吧 @.@
00:22:895 (2) - NEW COMBO
00:24:447 (6) - ^
00:24:964 (8) - ^
00:23:240 (3) - ^
01:07:206 (2) - ^
01:07:551 (3) - ^
01:09:620 (8) - ^
01:18:930 (4) - ^
01:19:447 (7) - ^
01:19:964 (10) - ^
这个难度感觉问题不大～～NEW COMBO主要是为了让跳更好理解一点～～～改不改随意

new combo啥的 @.@

2-19 add kiai and some notes redownload plz

Download: Sawashiro Miyuki - Ambivalent World(TV Size) (6800cube) [fanzhen's Insane].osu

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-19T03:49:19+00:00

感谢fanzhen0019~
咱的图实在很渣。。

xinhe

Joined February 2010

xinhe 2011-02-19T05:59:16+00:00

STRESS~~~KUD还没给我～～～>.<

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-19T06:03:41+00:00

咱是用手机。。。用电脑以后一定给~很喜欢你的图的说~

xinhe

Joined February 2010

xinhe 2011-02-19T06:08:29+00:00

>.<谢谢～～～

Fly light

Joined December 2009

Fly light 2011-02-19T06:13:50+00:00

嗯送星星来咯祝6800神触和18a神触百年好合祝SA神触打败18a 成功夺得6800美人过上幸福日子

Fly light

Joined December 2009

Fly light 2011-02-19T06:17:58+00:00

疼之前打不来星星~ 还是祝你们三人三角恋喜剧开场也喜剧收场哈~~ 小心被NICE BOAT了哦~

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-19T12:23:58+00:00

FLY .....
不要吐这种嘈= =
还是谢谢你~
XINHE 你的 KD~

ytcompany18a

Joined June 2010

ytcompany18a 2011-02-19T15:28:06+00:00

FLY LIGHT去尼玛的
你个渣B<stress>

senaya

osu! Alumni

Joined March 2010

senaya 2011-02-19T15:55:25+00:00

Hi. You've asked me to mod your map when my queue was full, but I decided to do it anyway. Sorry for the delay.

[General]
Preview Points are not set on all maps except for fanzhen's Insane. You can do it in Timing -> Set Current Position as Preview Point.
Interesting timing set you have.. don't you think that claps are too loud when compared with the rest of the song? Also, needs more hitsounds..

[Normal]
00:19:447 (5) - make this 1 tick shorter so it would follow lyrics better?
00:26:689 (4) - move this to 00:26:516 so it would follow lyrics better?
01:05:309 (4) - move this to 01:05:223 and make it 1 tick longer so it would follow lyrics better?
Maybe map empty sections like 01:07:895 - 01:09:792 and 01:12:895 - 01:15:309 ? No breaks, no notes.. not cool.

[Hard]
There are unsnapped notes here. Please use AIMod (File -> AIMod) to find and fix them.
01:24:964 (1) - make finish of this slider silent?

[fanzhen's Insane]
All good. Please remember that Preview Points should be the same for all diffs.
Also, consider making normal sound sections 10% less loud.

[Insane]
00:14:792 (1) - nazi: 1 grid down.
00:21:861 (5) - remove clap at and and add it at 00:22:206 (6) ? OR add a finish at 00:22:206 (6) ?
01:25:309 (1) - make finish of this slider silent?

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-20T00:25:32+00:00

Sorry....I hadn't see your queue was full...
Thank you very much~I'll give you 1kd~
my english is bad...XD..

sico91212

Joined February 2010

sico91212 2011-02-20T06:04:15+00:00

offset:10853 变更必须Resnap all notes！
[Insane]
音效做的不行，再下点心
00:10:654 (3) - 这note下的不好。我试着放了下，觉照这样放置会比较好

00:10:827 - 这里应该有个note
00:38:412 (8) - remove new combo
00:44:447 (1) - ^
01:01:861 (8) - new combo
01:03:240 (1) - remove newcombo
01:13:068 (4) - new combo
01:18:413 (4) - ^
01:23:930 (5) - ^
00:43:240 (3) - 距离和后面一样，放远些
01:04:620 (7) - new combo
01:24:275 (6) - 没人能意识到这是个1/4note，必须改
01:25:309 (1) - spinner的开始和结束位置请做出修改
[fanzhen's Insane]
用n-hitnormal的连打还是用s-whistle比较好

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-20T11:15:07+00:00

感谢~
很有价值的MOD~
KD~

Hushu_old

Joined October 2010

Hushu_old 2011-02-20T17:59:35+00:00

Lec being with the General stuff before doing anything else...

General:
Change title to have capital letter on the start of each word in the title (Miyuki Sawashiro - Ambivalent World) and
Better mp3 please... you can use this MP3.

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-21T03:32:30+00:00

Thanks...i think i fixed the letter...

Hushu_old

Joined October 2010

Hushu_old 2011-02-21T12:03:42+00:00

(If you changing title, full submission.)
mm... ok... Proper mod:

General:
Offset 10 857
BPM 174 002 (Timing Setup Panel) - Yes, it is a very small change ^^'
I would do 0,5 for tick rate or 0

Easy:
Approach Rate: 3, HP Drain Rate: 3 or 4, Overall Difficulty: 3 or 4
0:19:477 - End it at 0:19:822
0:40:511 - End it at 0:40:856
0:44:649 - Move to 0:44:304
0:44:994 - Move to 0:44:649 and repeat
0:55:683 - Move to 0:56:028
0:59:132 - End it at 0:59:649
1:00:511 - End it at 1:01:028
1:03:787 - Move to 1:03:614 please~
1:05:338 - Move to 1:05:166 please~
1:07:580 - Move to 1:07:407

Normal:
0:19:447 - End it at 0:19:792
0:23:068 - Too hard for normal, make it a circle or remove
0:29:275 - Remove circle, copy the slider at 0:28:068 to 0:29:102 and turn it vertically, then repeat it
0:47:895 - Too random, remove
0:48:068 - New combo
0:51:861 - Random, remove pls~
0:57:551 - Maybe New Combo
1:05:223 - Move 1/2 tick before, end it at 1:05:654

Last edited by Hushu_old 2011-02-22T13:42:08+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

IceBeam

osu! Alumni

Joined December 2009

IceBeam 2011-02-22T11:01:19+00:00

fanzhen is a guest mapper? I can't see his nickname in Tags.

Preview Points aren't set,please,add them to all diffs at 00:47:982.

Kiai times are so different,it'd be better if you keep it the same in all difficulties.And start it from 00:48:068.

And..in the title..is there shouldn't be a space between World and (TV Size)?

[Easy]
00:19:447 (5) - Finish it at 00:19:620.
00:20:999 - Add a note?
00:21:171 - Remove this one and add a single note to 00:21:516?
00:21:861 (1) - Change to finish.
00:42:551 (2) - Clap sounds bad.
00:46:689 - ^
00:48:068 (2) - ^
01:04:620 (3) - ^
01:10:137 (1) - ^
At first it wasn' really bad,but then..ugh..you don't follow any rhytm.
It's so random.Sometimes I need to wait like 3 seconds for a single hit and sometimes there're some hard patterns like 00:52:206 (1,2,3,1).
Map should be common,please,try to keep some rhytm next time,and about hitsounds - they're too loud,reduce volume.
Claps doesn't fit this song at all.You need to use whistles,add more of them.

[Normal]
Again,claps.Remove them.
And volume too,also add more whistles.
00:56:344 (9,10) - Move both of them to the previous red ticks(00:56:171,00:56:516)
Don't have to much to say,again,I can see a lot of spaces during the map,you could map them too.

[Hard]
What's with OD? Why it's on the lowest tick?
00:30:137 (1,1,1) - Combo spam,remove.
1/4 doesn't really fit this song..and again these claps..argh.

[fanzhen]
00:32:895 (1) - Finish?
00:38:413 (1) - ^
00:41:171 - ^
00:42:551 (1) - ^
00:48:068 (1) - ^
01:04:620 (1) - ^
01:09:878 (x) - Too loud for normal hitsounds.
01:20:482 (1,1,1) - Combo spamming.
Nice difficulty.

[Insane]
Uh,okay.

Sorry for poor mod,but your difficulties need a lot of more work.

6800cube

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

6800cube 2011-02-22T12:40:57+00:00

i had fixed the map~thanks~
kd~

ZLOdeuka-

Joined June 2009

ZLOdeuka- 2011-02-22T14:30:41+00:00

Hello 6800cube ^^

[General]

Preview Point ~ installed on all the diff ~ here 00:48:068

images must be the same size ! in this case 1024x768

Tags : add fanzhen ?

everywhere to do the same time Kiai

00:48:068 - start kiai and finish kiai 01:18:413

[Easy]

00:22:551 (1) - delete new combo

00:28:068 (3) - new combo

00:49:447 (3) - ^

00:52:206 (6) - ^

01:12:551 (4) - ^

[Normal]

00:19:447 (5) - finish on the white tick

00:45:309 (7) - delete. and start spinner

00:49:102 (5) - new combo

00:51:171 (11) - ^

00:51:861 (1) - delete new combo

00:57:551 (11) - new combo

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