1. Gym Leader (4.8 stars, 461 notes)
2. Ozzy's Elitaiko Four (4.94 stars, 1292 notes)
3. Pokemaniac (2.88 stars, 310 notes)
4. The Very Best (5 stars, 620 notes)
5. Youngster (1.55 stars, 217 notes)

Charles445 wrote:

General
EPIC SONG CHOICE
You might want to make the button on the pokeball hitcircle a bit transparent so you can see the number easier.

Youngster
This whole thing is like a copypasta'd Pokemaniacl except with more breaks. Don't do that.

Pokemaniac
00:35:332 - This 2 is too close to the 1
01:06:165 - Map this break
01:38:499 - Unrankable, move that 3 farther from the endpoint so you can tell what direction it goes in
02:10:165 - ^^
02:24:000 - ^^
02:55:499 - ^^
03:19:165 - Map this break

Gym Leader
00:09:832 - Move this 6 farther away
01:06:165 - Map this break
02:10:165 - ^^
02:24:000 - ^^
02:55:499 - ^^
03:09:499 - Unrankable, move that 3 farther from the endpoint so you can tell what direction it goes in
03:19:165 - Map this break

The Very Best
I would use OD 8 but that's just me
00:25:832 - Unrankable, it's unclear whether the circle goes up or down.
01:10:165 - Map this break
02:10:165 - ^^
02:24:000 - ^^
02:55:499 - ^^
03:09:499 - Unrankable, move that 3 farther from the endpoint so you can tell what direction it goes in
03:19:165 - Map this break


You put a lot of work into it and it's better than most second maps. Star.

1. Your offset is off. Use 5999 instead. The notes on the map follow the beat, but they are 1/2 too early to match the metronome. This affects all diffs.
2. The timing section at 00:49:332 is not used correctly. True, it removes kiai when needed but it inherits the previous timing value when instead it should be a new timing with same BPM because at this spot the metronome needs a reset. Just remove "inherits previous section" from timing options. This affects all diffs.

1. You use alot of notes on a 1/4 beat in this diff. This is generally a bit hard for a newbie who can only do easy stuff to read/play. Due to the nature of the song this is very hard to avoid though, so if you can't help it just leave it as it is.
2. 01:23:999 (1) - This spinner is way too short for an easy diff. Remove it, add a slider or something instead.

1. 00:17:332 (2) - 1 grid down so it stays in line with (1).

1. I suggest to lower AR by 1. It's okay like this though but the map plays better with -1 on AR. Some stuff just comes too sudden.

lolcubes wrote:

Hey, here's my mod. You can ignore green stuff completely if you wish, they are only design opinions and some minor nazi stuff. Stuff in red is critical and really needs a change.

[General]:

1. Your offset is off. Use 5999 instead. The notes on the map follow the beat, but they are 1/2 too early to match the metronome. This affects all diffs.
2. The timing section at 00:49:332 is not used correctly. True, it removes kiai when needed but it inherits the previous timing value when instead it should be a new timing with same BPM because at this spot the metronome needs a reset. Just remove "inherits previous section" from timing options. This affects all diffs.

[Youngster]:

1. You use alot of notes on a 1/4 beat in this diff. This is generally a bit hard for a newbie who can only do easy stuff to read/play. Due to the nature of the song this is very hard to avoid though, so if you can't help it just leave it as it is.
2. 01:23:999 (1) - This spinner is way too short for an easy diff. Remove it, add a slider or something instead.

[Pokemaniac]:

1. 00:17:332 (2) - 1 grid down so it stays in line with (1).

[The Very Best]:

1. I suggest to lower AR by 1. It's okay like this though but the map plays better with -1 on AR. Some stuff just comes too sudden.

In the other diffs I really couldn't find any general errors. Well done. You definitely need to fix the timing though.
I do have to say something about sliders though. Some of them could use a little more work. For example, even the simplest of sliders don't have symmetry. Try using more than 3 points to determine a simple curve and more than 4 points for bigger sliders. Also try to have endpoints at the middle of the circle of the endpoint of the slider.
Good luck~ :3

Drakeny wrote:

Lower 1 Star in HP Drain on: Gym Leader...

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Youngster]
Lol, 0.8 spacing isn't moe. Oh well.

01:43:998 - Note here?
A lot of notes end on a red tick or something which can be confusing, but I guess it's fine...
And that one part 02:15:998 I don't think the AR likes that, so distance it better.
[Pokemaniac]
02:40:749 (2) - Nope, move this. To 02:40:831.
Nothing really stands out (that much) I guess.

I don't like the same part as above here either.
[Gym Leader]
Urrrgh, I think this is fine (somehow)...

Hoi hoi hoi
[The Very Best]
00:59:998 - ;_; Don't do this, you have stacking on, remember?

02:40:749 (3,4) - NO BLUE TICKS

Anyways, holy crap, and yeah, good job. I might make a taiko so people don't cry playing the speed-up at the end, but rather, they cry at the intensity of the taiko (can I? :3).

Download: Powerglove - Gotta Catch Em All (Feat. Tony Kakko) (St Neon) [Ozzy's Elitaiko Four].osu

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[attachment=0:cbdd3]Powerglove - Gotta Catch Em All (Feat. Tony Kakko) (St Neon) [Ozzy's Elitaiko Four].osu[/attachment:cbdd3]

I think it came out pretty AMAZING.

ziin wrote:

[skin]
Sliderb moves really quickly. If you make it ~10+ images, it will move slower and look a whole lot better. The default skin is 10 frames, so it's best to try to match that.
hitcircleoverlay is very jagged. Please blur it/redo it/do something to remove the terrible aliased edges.
Since you're replacing hitcircleoverlay, you need a hit circle and approach circle, even if they are the default ones. Read More.
Use OverlayPosition:below under [general] in each osu file to make sure that the numbers are visible over the overlay.
Use AImod (press Ctrl+Shift+A) to check for spacing errors and unsnapped notes.
Some of your sliders are not perfect. In the case of vertical or horizontal sliders, this is easy to see, so it would be nice to fix those. Any other sort of slider is hard to tell, so you don't have to worry about those.
New combos are (usually) best placed on the long white tick. There are exceptions, but in long streams of 1/1 notes, it's good to start them on the long white tick.

[Youngster]
You have very few sliders in the map (41 vs 192 circles), and the map is laid out in very square patterns. Not that there's anything wrong with squares, but some variations and random curves would be nice.
01:02:665 (1) - example of non-perfect (but close!) vertical slider
01:13:332 (1,2,3) - try to avoid putting stuff over sliders, it just looks bad.
03:09:832 (2) - example of non-perfect (and not even close) diagonal slider, which looks fine and you don't need to fix.

[gym]
00:59:998 (1) - Use 1/3 snap. The notes are actually hendectuplets (11 notes in the span of 8 1/1 notes or 2 measures). It fits better to just make it sound like you're doing 12 even notes. You can approximate it if you use 1/8 snap to put in 11 notes.
01:15:665 - sounds weird without a note here.
02:40:499 (2,3) - these are 1/3 snap if you want to follow vocals.

[best]
see gym's 1/3 stuff.

I was pleasantly surprised at this map, gj.

Download: Powerglove - Gotta Catch Em All (Feat. Tony Kakko) (St Neon) [Ozzy's Elitaiko Four].osu

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Changed something

[attachment=0:e451f]Powerglove - Gotta Catch Em All (Feat. Tony Kakko) (St Neon) [Ozzy's Elitaiko Four].osu[/attachment:e451f]

CracK wrote:

Here goes my mod4mod:

[General]
I am not sure about tags, but I think Rock English TV Video Game - all these are not needed
Instead you should add OzzyOzrock to tags in all diffs

[The Very Best]
02:16:249 (3,4) - Ctrl+r
And move the whole 02:15:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - up a few grids so (3) is in the center of the playfield
02:30:165 (6) - Supernazi 1 grid down

[Gym Leader]
02:28:332 (2,3) - Supernazi 1 grid up

[Youngster]
00:11:332 (2) - It sounds a lot better if it is on 00:11:165

That's pretty much everything that caught my attention.
Solid mapset, no serious complaints. Star!
And just a suggestion for future mapping: Try not placing circles practically everytime in linear patterns
I don't know how to express it in english, but I hope you understand. It will make you map more appealing atleast for my taste :3

DragonSparta wrote:

Hello~
Youngster
00:12:498 (1) - Remove new combo
00:27:665 (1,2) - Switch (1) to have a clap and (2) to have a whistle sounds MUCH better
02:15:998 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2.....) - Create fun and not boring sliders! It gives the player the will to continue playing "seriously"
03:18:998 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - ^

Pokemaniac
In my opinion, you should change some notes into sliders Replacing the boring notes
00:47:665 (1,2,3) - Put them somewhere in the center seems better
02:21:331 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3....) - Woooahh, easy with the 1/3 notes, beginners would sure get tired of these notes as they play this repeatly...

Gym Leader
00:43:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make them form a septagon
No jumps in this map...
Oh well, cant win them all

The Very Best
HP Drain and Overall Diff +1
00:33:748 (2) - Move this 1/4 later
Easy with the streamers next time on your next beatmap okays?
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Conclusion : I love Pokemon~

• SB mod

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OzzyOzrock wrote:

YOU CAN DO IT