1. Easy (2.87 stars, 184 notes)
2. Hard (4.9 stars, 474 notes)
3. Normal (4.3 stars, 240 notes)

DarkDunskin wrote:

The official translated Name of that song is "Lullaby of Deserted Hell" and it is the stage 5 theme from touhou 11.
just letting you know :3

Wiinter wrote:

Hey there. ^-^ hi~

Easy
00:19:523 (1) - finishing this slider at 00:20:313 sounds better imo ok
01:28:207 (3) - make this shape like this http://puu.sh/1IBu ? done
02:15:971 (3) - Ctrl+H here done

Normal
This slider speed is kinda fast for a normal >_<" i think it's ok
01:42:023 (x) - add a note here done
01:46:365 (7) - add another repeat to this slider added

Hard
-1 Approach Rate? ok
00:21:201 (5) - Ctrl+H on this slider done

Well, what can I say. Really nice job here. Good luck to get it ranked. Starr'd ~ thank you so much

lkp wrote:

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii~ Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii~

[Easy]

00:20:313 (x) - 我聽到這兒有鼓聲,加一個note如何?? 好
01:57:813 (1) - 在這個note開new combo的意義不太大吧... 嗯，去掉了

[Normal]

01:02:155 (x) - 加一個note吧...感覺比較好打一些... 我感觉加了note后有点不好排，所以就在前面的slider加了一个repeat
沒什麼可以挑的...感覺良好~

[Hard]

00:23:076 (6,7) - 這個2連打給我的感覺不太好,而且也不太好打,變成3連打如何..? 我感觉变成三连打后不好听，干脆改成了单点
00:27:615 (5) - 這一條長slider不像跟音樂似的...大概是早了1/2吧... 嗯，重新弄了一下，现在听起来好多了
00:50:510 (9,10) - Spacing,too close. 嗯，拉开了
01:01:957 (x) - 在這個位置到之後的白線加一個3連打如何??感覺像好打一些...Hard的難度,不要緊吧xD 不要紧！加了
02:17:944 (4) - New combo吧... 好
02:28:602 (4) - New combo吧... 好
02:32:155 (4) - New combo吧... 好
02:37:089 (4) - New combo吧... 我感觉这里加了new combo后容易迷惑人，所以干脆不加了
02:43:207 (1) - 前一條slider已經開了new combo..而這裡又開多一個...意義也不是太大吧...改一改吧.. 恩，去掉了
03:14:885 (1) - 建議整個spinner也伸到01:17:155會比較好吧... 嗯
問題不大,不錯的diff xD

star~ 谢谢

啊,還有,我看你3個diff也不用map後面的歌,不如cut掉mp3後面的那部份吧..減低檔案大小啊~好的，只保留03:38:471之前的，明天再去裁，今天没时间了

nold_1702 wrote:

看來大大的MAPPING技巧已進步不小ww

大家新手mapper繼續努力吧~"~

BakaHuang wrote:

hi ~.~ mod time! Hiiii~

just suggestions

[Easy]
01:01:760(5)-remove finish and add 01:02:155(6)- to finish? done~

其他难度没什么问题~.~
加油/

don't give kds

starr

Sarys wrote:

Sorry i'm late~

General

The mp3 is a lot longer than your map, it will be good to cut it in order to reduce the size of the folder. don't forget to full submit if you fix this. Ok

dBu - Lullaby of Deserted Hell (wojiushi2p).osb Huh? For some reasons it's your previous name on the .osb file, i don't know if you can change it though. deleted

Add, Orin, Subterranean, Animism, to the tags. ok

I think the HS are a litlle too soft, but just a little.

Easy

All good~

Normal

02:36:892 (2,4) - Mhh, i'm not very fan of that, stack them perfectly or don't superpose it at all, but well it's just an esthetic opinion.done

Hard

00:13:799 (2,4) - Same as Normal, stack them perfectly or don't superpose it at all, but well it's just an esthetic opinion. done
00:19:030 (6) - Remove whistle done
00:19:128 (7) - Add whistle. done
00:37:286 (3) - Just a suggestion here, it's alway better to announce pattern hard to read such as anti-jump with new combo. done
01:38:668 (5,7) - Same as Normal, stack them perfectly or don't superpose it at all, but well it's just an esthetic opinion. I don't want to change them, and the following two
01:58:010 (2,4) - ^
01:58:010 (2,4) - ^
02:12:023 (6,8) - Stack them perfectly. done

I Like this map, very S i r i r u-ish, and Touhou song <3


Star~

Ayeen wrote:

Hi

Hitsound suggestion from me including the custom set (I only do the hitsound until 01:58:997
[attachment=2:db9dc]dBu - Lullaby of Deserted Hell (Shiki) [hitsound sample].osu[/attachment:db9dc]
Custom hitsound:
[attachment=1:db9dc]Hitsound.zip[/attachment:db9dc]
If you dont like the hitclap there,
[attachment=0:db9dc]soft-hitclap.zip[/attachment:db9dc] I like it and the finish

1.Delete the .Osb file ok
2. You only map half of the song, even in hard too. Either cut the mp3 or map till end of song ok
3. Bg name is too long ok
4. If you like my hitsound there, full submit it with new hitsound
5. Dont forgot to kudos me if it useful

karenying wrote:

Hi~>w</ Hi~ www
All
good bye .osb good bye, .osb
去countdown 去掉了

Easy
那些短spinner(00:29:096 (1) - 00:50:411 (1) - 00:57:517 (1) - 01:51:990 (1) - 02:13:306 (1) -) 建議用circle/slider代替done
以下建議加finish

SPOILER

00:31:365 (2) - added
00:34:918 (3) - added
00:38:865 (3) - added
00:52:681 (2) - added
00:59:786 (2) - added
01:32:944 (2) - added
01:37:681 (1) - added
01:40:839 (2) - added
01:51:497 (5) - added
01:54:260 (2) - added
02:03:734 (1) - added
02:13:207 (3) - 这个没有加
02:15:576 (2) - added
02:20:313 (7) - added
02:23:865 (2) - 这个也没加
02:36:892 (2) - added
02:41:628 (3) - added

02:55:839 - 無用timingsection 刪

Normal
hitsounds 同 Easy done
節奏缺新意 我试着去改变一下

Hard
hitsounds 同 Easy done
00:28:602 (8) - 注意箭嘴 fixed
01:46:563 (2) - ^ fixed

Katsuri wrote:

General
Use Grid level 3, because grid level 4 is the same thing than no grid, but it's just a suggestion, my mod is bases on grid 3. OK, i will use grid level 3 to fix with your mod
The map is good, I really like your mapping style
Starred~ Thanks you
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Hard
00:14:392 (5) - 1 grid down done
00:21:299 (5) - use the start of the slider on the red risk, and the end on the white risk, it looks better. yes
00:30:576 (1) - add a clap and resnap to grid 3. done
00:32:549 (1) - 2 grid left to align with 00:30:576 (1) - done
00:31:563 (4) - 1 grip up. done
00:43:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is horrible, Look this.. fixed

SPOILER

SPOILER

01:39:260 (7) - Align the star of this slider with the end of 01:38:668 (5) - done
01:44:786 (4) - The end 2 grid right ok
01:55:444 (1) - Something like..

SPOILER

Normal
00:25:444 (3) - This slider is really strange, try to make it like.. done

SPOILER

01:00:971 (3,4,5,6,7) - hmm, looks better. ok

SPOILER

Easy
Fine~

loveFantasy wrote:

hi

[General]
- 各難度的<01:02:155> SC1的finish太不明顯了, 這個點用S:finish似乎較好 done

[Easy]
<02:16:760> (1) x:436 y:160 done

[Normal]
- slider的速度偏難啊._. ._. OD提高了一格变成4.5星了，我想玩4.5星的人应该有这个觉悟吧
<00:25:049> (1,2,3) 排的不夠精確 现在应该好点了
<00:38:865> (4) finish到(3)的尾巴? 嗯
<01:02:155> (1) 移到正中央, 別重疊? 嗯
<02:21:102> (1) 這個箭頭想指去哪啊Orz fixed..

SPOILER

<02:36:892> (2,3,4,5) 在Normal稍嫌蛋疼了點 移开了

[Hard]
- 有些1/4感覺是map到沒梗擺的, 此外蠻好的 的确找不到什么新梗了，节奏重复
<02:37:089> (4) new combo done

這首歌節奏太簡單了, 的確不容易做出讓人印象深刻的map ._.
star

Cirno wrote:

Hi again All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.

[Easy]
00:47:944 (1) - 这个重叠对[Easy]难了 重新安排一下这一小段，stack可以有但是不要遮为好... done
00:52:681 (2) - ^, 几乎完全遮住了啊D: done..
01:00:971 (3) - 考虑stack回(1)的结尾..? 好
02:23:865 (2) - ....这是[Easy]... 这slider已经完全遮住了吧.... 新手会很困惑的 没有完全遮住嘛，还有一点点边露出来.. 重新排了一下
others fine, 主要是有些遮pattern对于Easy太难...

[Normal]
比[Hard]短好多..是没梗了么XD QAQ 这歌就是不停的重复嘛
00:27:418 (6) - 叠到 00:25:444 (3) 结尾底下? done
00:40:642 - add note? added
01:36:497 (3) - 不大好看...what about this done

SPOILER

[attachment=0:41de9]2p_dbsldr2.JPG[/attachment:41de9]

136,188,96497,2,0,B|260:172|200:256|316:224,1,160.000000596046,2|8

01:50:707 (8,9) - 右下一格手动stack? 自动stack后前面的几个note会变难看:o 嗯
02:14:786 (1,3) - 可否移到结尾不重叠的位置...? 对normal来说这个重叠有点难 容易认成circle嗯
02:22:681 (1) - 同01:36:497 (3) fixed

[Hard]
OD-1 for easier SS (炸 嗯 ._.
OD7费了好几PC :<
00:18:734 (4) - whistle? 嗯
00:28:602 (8) - add clap on 00:28:602 - 00:28:799 - 00:28:898 ? 加了，不过貌似听不出来
01:24:063 (3,5,6) - 或许这样...? 嗯，我本来就觉得这段排得特别难看

SPOILER

[attachment=2:41de9]2p_dbsldr.JPG[/attachment:41de9]

01:30:971 (3,4,5) - 感觉有点堵...01:31:168 - 01:31:563 - add note 然后摆开一点? 或许可以考虑这样... done ._.

SPOILER

[attachment=1:41de9]2p_dbcirc.JPG[/attachment:41de9]

01:58:405 (4) - grid 4 下移3格 我觉得更好看点 嗯
02:55:839 (1,2,3,4) - 有点诡异，建议(1,2)移到02:55:938, 然后02:56:431加note
声音是从02:55:839开始的，后移了很奇怪的感觉

nice mapset, Star~