1. Rewrite Buster (4.99 stars, 697 notes)

Selee wrote:

...现在有一首rank了的 NR的还在坑里...前景黯淡啊...

嘛 祝你好运

• Artist: Mizutani Runa (Use this to change aritist ^ ^ viewtopic.php?f=25&t=33919
  
  Nice skin =w=, but if you have a hitcircle.png, you need to have hitcircleoverlay.png and approachcircle.png in your folder...
  
  Tags: Key Visual Novel Gal Game NanosizeMir (Delete the "," in tags, I don't think they would work in searching. Since Rewrite is the source, delete "Rewrite" in tags)
  
  Remove countdown in Storyboarding, countdown doesn't fit this song well.
  
  Also cancel the Letterbox during break since your map has a video.
  
  You need a preview point for the song (Timing--Set Current Position as Preview Point)
  
  Slider tick rate 1? rate 2 doesn't fit song well.
  
  Offset: +5?
  
  Remember to add some hitsound
  
  (http://osu.ppy.sh/b/63177 可以参考一下这张rank的啊)

• 
  Hmm, is it a Normal?
  Slider Velocity is little bit high for newbies...
  00:27:050 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest you to keep a constant spacing in Normal diff.
  00:28:925 (6) - New combo

• Hitsound ._.?
  Tick rate 1 please >_>
  00:06:800 (1) - Why 1/8 beat, it doesn't fit the rhythm at all. Just use 1/4 beats.
  00:08:487 (1) - Remove new combo
  00:09:987 (5) - New combo
  00:11:112 (1) - Remove new combo
  00:39:425 (1) - ^
  00:42:425 (1) - Remove 1 reverse sounds better for me
  00:47:862 (2) - hmm, put somes note after this?
  00:48:050 (3) - Just use 1/4 beat ...
  01:16:362 (1) - Spinner is too short, change it to slider? (spinner must be at least 2000 for auto)
  01:19:362 (6,7,8,9) - 1/4 ._.
  01:23:300~01:25:550 - map something?
  01:25:925 (1,2,3) - Slider like these would be totally unrankable...
  01:31:362 (6) - Extend 1/4 beat?
  01:36:800 (5) - Slider...Sigh...
  02:04:550 (1) - Spinner is too short, change it to slider?
  02:09:050 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing
  02:11:675 (T) - Add a slider?
  02:12:800 (3) - Remove all reverses and extend it to where ended before?
  02:18:050 (3) - Can you read the reverse here?...

• 
  ...Setting...
  Insane doesn't mean the extreme setting like this...
  HD drain rate -2
  AR and OD -2
  ...Copy paste from CHIHAYA?...make something different please...

Selee wrote:

SPOILER

[General]

• Artist: Mizutani Runa (Use this to change aritist ^ ^ viewtopic.php?f=25&t=33919 ->fixed
  
  Nice skin =w=, but if you have a hitcircle.png, you need to have hitcircleoverlay.png and approachcircle.png in your folder... ->I have just use the skin before rebuild,these two will be add after.
  
  Tags: Key Visual Novel Gal Game NanosizeMir (Delete the "," in tags, I don't think they would work in searching. Since Rewrite is the source, delete "Rewrite" in tags) ->fixed
  
  Remove countdown in Storyboarding, countdown doesn't fit this song well. ->fixed
  
  Also cancel the Letterbox during break since your map has a video. ->fixed
  
  You need a preview point for the song (Timing--Set Current Position as Preview Point) ->fixed
  
  Slider tick rate 1? rate 2 doesn't fit song well. ->fixed
  
  Offset: +5? ->umm,I think my's better,or need others to check?
  
  Remember to add some hitsound ->I know,it will be add soon.
  
  (http://osu.ppy.sh/b/63177 可以参考一下这张rank的啊)

->参考过了，但是感觉我还做不到那种水平

[SIZURU] ->this diff still work in progress now&what existed was the old ver.

• 
  Hmm, is it a Normal?
  Slider Velocity is little bit high for newbies...
  00:27:050 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest you to keep a constant spacing in Normal diff.
  00:28:925 (6) - New combo

Sigh...make a easier diff?

[CHIHAYA] ->这是个人的平均水平，相当于其他难度的参考了吧~由于做的使用用的是1/6，后来改成了1/2所以有很多点不对了

• Hitsound ._.?
  Tick rate 1 please >_> ->fixed
  00:06:800 (1) - Why 1/8 beat, it doesn't fit the rhythm at all. Just use 1/4 beats. ->fixed
  00:08:487 (1) - Remove new combo ->fixed
  00:09:987 (5) - New combo ->fixed
  00:11:112 (1) - Remove new combo ->fixed
  00:39:425 (1) - ^ ->fixed
  00:42:425 (1) - Remove 1 reverse sounds better for me ->how to remove 1 sound?set in timeing?
  00:47:862 (2) - hmm, put somes note after this? ->fixed
  00:48:050 (3) - Just use 1/4 beat ... ->fixed
  01:16:362 (1) - Spinner is too short, change it to slider? (spinner must be at least 2000 for auto) ->fixed
  01:19:362 (6,7,8,9) - 1/4 ._. ->fixed
  01:23:300~01:25:550 - map something? ->fixed
  01:25:925 (1,2,3) - Slider like these would be totally unrankable... ->I think so... |fixed
  01:31:362 (6) - Extend 1/4 beat? ->fixed,it's just a mistake in divisor change
  01:36:800 (5) - Slider...Sigh... ->eh,it must be modify?
  02:04:550 (1) - Spinner is too short, change it to slider? ->fixed
  02:09:050 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing ->fixed
  02:11:675 (T) - Add a slider? ->fixed
  02:12:800 (3) - Remove all reverses and extend it to where ended before? ->fixed
  02:18:050 (3) - Can you read the reverse here?...

->no,I can't too|fixed


[KOTORI] ->yes,it just copy paste from CHIHAYA&I think I need someone to make this diff(I can't play insane well)

• 
  ...Setting...
  Insane doesn't mean the extreme setting like this...
  HD drain rate -2
  AR and OD -2
  ...Copy paste from CHIHAYA?...make something different please...

从作图的角度看看别人的图学习下吧 ... 还差很远呢...

Crazy Jay wrote:

SPOILER

[KOTORI]
00:11:862 (11) - 只留开头第一个note->保留意见
00:14:675 (4) - 取消new combo ->fixed
00:15:050 (1) - new combo ->fixed
00:16:175 (1) - 取消new combo ->fixed
00:16:550 (1) - 取消new combo ->fixed
00:16:925 (4) - new combo ->fixed
00:23:675 (1) - 遮挡太严重->保留意见
00:48:800 (8,9) - 取消clap ->fixed
00:51:050 (16) - 加一个note，加上finish音效 ->fixed
01:27:050 (1) - new combo ->fixed

[CHIHAYA]
OA太低了，读谱太困难，调高 ->fixed
00:46:362 (3) - 取消new combo ->fixed
00:47:112 (1) - ^
00:47:862 (1) - new combo ->fixed
02:06:050 (3) - kiai 开头移到这里 ->fixed

[SIZURU]
同上问题，OA太低 ->fixed
做简单难度尽量把slide的速度改低一些

以上

samiljul wrote:

Hi^^
May I make taiko diff?

• 
  建议把Clap都加到弱拍
  需要一张spinner-approachcircle.png
  还有为什么各个难度Break Time和结束时间都不一样啊 还是统一一下比较好

• 
  00:15:050 (1): 把Clap换成Finish
  00:31:362 (8): 这个Slider停止的地方有点不合适 建议延长半拍
  然后在00:32:675和00:33:050加两个Circle
  01:07:362 (10,11): 有点容易误解 建议换成一个从01:07:362到01:07:737的Slider
  在01:08:112和01:08:300加两个Circle
  01:18:050 : Kiai Time 这里开始
  01:42:050 (1): 转盘在这里停止就好了
  02:28:362 (1): 结尾加Finish 并结束Kiai Time

• 
  00:12:050 – 00:13:362: 这么大的空间 放点东西吧
  00:15:050 (1): 转盘延到这（后面的Break有点太长了）
  00:39:050 (1): Finish
  01:08:112 (7): 去掉Finish
  01:09:050 (1): 开头加Finish（慢速完全没有必要啊）
  01:11:300 – 01:13:550: 这个Break一点都不合适
  01:18:050 : Kiai Time开始
  01:36:800 (5): 奇怪的Slider。Unrankable因为无法预测运动方向XD
  02:01:362 (4): 换成一个长Slider 到02:02:300来填补一下空间
  02:02:675 : 加个Circle
  02:06:050 (3): 开头加Finish
  02:46:737 : 结束的不是地方 建议把后面部分也map掉（要不就像其他难度一样 在Kiai结束处结束）

• 
  00:15:050 (1): 把Clap换成Finish
  01:18:050 (3): 开头加Finish
  01:42:050 (1): 转盘这里停止
  02:02:300 - 02:05:300 : 这里加个渐入~
  02:06:050 (1): 开头加Finish Kiai从这里开始

impossiblexu wrote:

[SIZURU]
这个难度的note间距有点太小了吧

• 
  00:15:050 (1): 把Clap换成Finish ->fixed
  00:31:362 (8): 这个Slider停止的地方有点不合适 建议延长半拍 ->fixed
  然后在00:32:675和00:33:050加两个Circle ->fixed
  01:07:362 (10,11): 有点容易误解 建议换成一个从01:07:362到01:07:737的Slider ->fixed
  在01:08:112和01:08:300加两个Circle ->感觉加了好奇怪
  01:18:050 : Kiai Time 这里开始 ->fixed
  01:42:050 (1): 转盘在这里停止就好了 ->fixed
  02:28:362 (1): 结尾加Finish 并结束Kiai Time ->fixed

[CHIHAYA]

• 
  00:12:050 – 00:13:362: 这么大的空间 放点东西吧 ->fixed
  00:15:050 (1): 转盘延到这（后面的Break有点太长了）
  00:39:050 (1): Finish ->fixed
  01:08:112 (7): 去掉Finish ->fixed
  01:09:050 (1): 开头加Finish（慢速完全没有必要啊） ->fixed
  01:11:300 – 01:13:550: 这个Break一点都不合适 ->fixed
  01:18:050 : Kiai Time开始 ->fixed
  01:36:800 (5): 奇怪的Slider。Unrankable因为无法预测运动方向XD ->fixed
  02:01:362 (4): 换成一个长Slider 到02:02:300来填补一下空间 ->fixed
  02:02:675 : 加个Circle ->fixed
  02:06:050 (3): 开头加Finish ->fixed
  02:46:737 : 结束的不是地方 建议把后面部分也map掉（要不就像其他难度一样 在Kiai结束处结束） ->fixed

[KOTORI]

• 
  00:15:050 (1): 把Clap换成Finish ->fixed
  01:18:050 (3): 开头加Finish ->fixed
  01:42:050 (1): 转盘这里停止 ->fixed
  02:02:300 - 02:05:300 : 这里加个渐入~ ->fixed
  02:06:050 (1): 开头加Finish Kiai从这里开始

• Decapitalized all diff? (SIZURU-->Sizuru...etc)
  
  The soft-clap hitsound really doesn't fit well...Also your hitsounds...
  Sigh...Take a look at these (http://tieba.baidu.com/f?kz=928245595 , http://tieba.baidu.com/f?kz=926097108)

• 00:26:300 (1) - Remove new combo? I think 1 combo is enough for these 3
  00:26:675 (1) - ^
  02:16:362 (11,1) - Increase the spacing due to low AR
  02:23:675 (3,4) - don't make stacking like these in easy or normal

• 00:28:925 (6) - New combo
  00:35:675 (7) - ^
  00:42:425 (1) - Remove 1 repeat at the end?
  00:50:300 (1) - Remove new combo?
  00:50:675 (1) - ^
  00:51:050 (1) - ^
  02:10:362 (6) - You don't necessary need slider like this to follow vocal, just remove 2 repeats and make the it 1/2 beat longer and repeat.
  01:14:300 (1,1) - ^ (Also I think 01:13:925 (1,1,1) can be arranged in a better shape..)
  02:17:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stacking. Not fun to play, not fun to mod.

• 00:47:862 (8) - New combo
  00:48:050 (1) - Remove New combo
  00:49:175 (9) - New combo (To avoid the combo number exceed 15)
  01:00:893 (12) - Move to 01:01:081 (You'd better start a 1/4 stream from red line instead of white lines)
  01:06:800 (3,4) - 1/4 beat backward?
  01:54:800 (2,4) - Remove clap