1. Easy (1.48 stars, 78 notes)
2. Emdyion's Hard (4.51 stars, 154 notes)
3. Normal (3.52 stars, 112 notes)
4. Novice (0.59 stars, 53 notes)
5. SapphireGhost's Insane (4.81 stars, 206 notes)

Emdyion wrote:

Fix all of the above, and I might allow you to use my map.
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Emdyion wrote:

Not bad, but not good either.

Tip: Keep tapping the beat in the timing panel so that it will say BPM sensitivity 1 or 2 and remap.

Rename the song to Easy because the diff doesn't make sense that way.

Final thing, be creative. Don't copy the same thing at the chorus parts.

• 1. BPM 119.825 , Offset 9145

1. Some tags are unneccesary, remove these tags - Double Rainbow Gregory Brothers wikiLeon. These all appear in the title or as you, the creator.

1. Where do I start... I'll just give you some general directions. It's sometimes hard to make an Easy because you have to keep it simple. But you are keeping it too simple. Some sections of this, like the whole beginning is just notes... On every other white tick... With some random hitsounds thrown in. Map it more fun. Add more sliders, with sliders you can go on to red ticks without worrying about making the map too hard. Use different patterns, what you have here is like, 4 sloooow notes in a square, repeated some times. There are also some spacing errors, but I won't go deeper into them right now. This difficulty need polish first.

1. You did a much better job here compared to [Easy]
2. 00:10:647 (2,3) - Too close to (1)
3. 00:35:182 (5) - Too close to (4)
4. 00:42:693 (4) - Too far from (3)
5. 00:44:196 (7) - Too far from (6)
6. 00:57:840 (3,4) - It is hard to click these notes on blue ticks and such. Make them sliders maybe?
7. 00:59:843 (3,4) - These too!

1. Great job on this one!
2. 00:06:891 (1,2,3) - Center these
3. 00:08:894 (1,2,3) - And these
4. 00:35:182 (1) - Very nice effect you have got from the whistle on parts like these! I like it!
5. 00:49:203 (1) - Move this down a bit so it isn't covered by the slider before it!
6. 01:08:481 (5) - Make this a new combo!
7. 01:16:493 (5) - And this too!

Real1 wrote:

Welcome to a Real1 mod!

General

1. Some tags are unneccesary, remove these tags - Double Rainbow Gregory Brothers wikiLeon. These all appear in the title or as you, the creator.

Easy

1. Where do I start... I'll just give you some general directions. It's sometimes hard to make an Easy because you have to keep it simple. But you are keeping it too simple. Some sections of this, like the whole beginning is just notes... On every other white tick... With some random hitsounds thrown in. Map it more fun. Add more sliders, with sliders you can go on to red ticks without worrying about making the map too hard. Use different patterns, what you have here is like, 4 sloooow notes in a square, repeated some times. There are also some spacing errors, but I won't go deeper into them right now. This difficulty need polish first.

1. You did a much better job here compared to [Easy]
2. 00:10:647 (2,3) - Too close to (1)
3. 00:35:182 (5) - Too close to (4)
4. 00:42:693 (4) - Too far from (3)
5. 00:44:196 (7) - Too far from (6)
6. 00:57:840 (3,4) - It is hard to click these notes on blue ticks and such. Make them sliders maybe?
7. 00:59:843 (3,4) - These too!

Emdyion's Hard

1. Great job on this one!
2. 00:06:891 (1,2,3) - Center these
3. 00:08:894 (1,2,3) - And these
4. 00:35:182 (1) - Very nice effect you have got from the whistle on parts like these! I like it!
5. 00:49:203 (1) - Move this down a bit so it isn't covered by the slider before it!
6. 01:08:481 (5) - Make this a new combo!
7. 01:16:493 (5) - And this too!

Emdyion's Hard
Great job on this one!
00:06:891 (1,2,3) - Center these Nah, reason is because ofdistance snap
00:08:894 (1,2,3) - And these ^
00:35:182 (1) - Very nice effect you have got from the whistle on parts like these! I like it! Why, thank you.
00:49:203 (1) - Move this down a bit so it isn't covered by the slider before it! Done.
01:08:481 (5) - Make this a new combo! Got it.
01:16:493 (5) - And this too!

1. Reduce the square shaped combos such as 00:09:145 (1,2,3,4) , by making some sliders, different patterns.
2. Avoid close-range beats like 00:17:156 (1) - Which is too close to the previous combo, making it ugly and confusing, especially for newbies this map is intended for.
3. 00:57:215 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - If you want a map to be "mind-numbingly easy" avoid stacks like these.
4. 01:07:229 (4) - An example of spacing problem...
5. 01:08:231 (5,6) - Looks ugly being inside the upcoming slider.

SapphireGhost wrote:

Please more Gregory Brothers ranked maps.

Novice
MAYBE increase the slider tick rate just a little?
1:08:731 (1) This slider is counter-intuitive, I would suggest moving one beat to the right and making it a boomerang.

Easy
Upping the Distance Snap just a little wouldn't hurt.
1:19:497 Break here, perhaps?

Normal
0:37:185 Move slider one grid up and extend one quarter beat.
0:57:841 Important: it looks like you have two notes on the same beat here. I would advise changing that.