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Mizuki Nana - POWER GATE

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Lovely Crab
70 posts
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Lovely Crab
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年9月20日 at 21:52:56

Artist: Mizuki Nana
Title: POWER GATE
Tags: Yabuki Toshiro M-VOICE aesopl19193
BPM: 164
Filesize: 8587kb
Play Time: 03:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. aesopl's Normal (4.32 stars, 366 notes)
  2. Easy (2.77 stars, 152 notes)
  3. Hard (4.93 stars, 609 notes)
Download: Mizuki Nana - POWER GATE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my first map.
mizuki nana's 5th single.
Aug 20 /make a sb for warning,thx for luhan9527's picture
thx for:
SPOILER
Selee,Colin Hou,banvi,touko,DiamondCrash,Leorda,yangzd88,Zetsubou Sensei,wmfchris,ballban,Arusha Shuna,KuraiPettan,aesopl19193,GladiOol,Bikko,roflninja.
they help me before i remap it..
especially thank xier's help,tell me how to make the map more better.
Aug 28:remap hard and change the song's name and tags under wiki.
Aug 29:remap eazy.
Aug 29:add aesopl's normal.Thx a lot :3
Aug 29:Natsume Rin's mod.
Sep 11:Selee's mod.
pending.
Last edited by Lovely Crab , edited 30 times in total.
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
[General]
Artist: Mizuki Nana
Title: Power Gate
Delete all tags
按底下这个改名字好了
viewtopic.php?f=25&t=33919
取消Countdown会比较好吧...
所有难度都有叠加问题...按住Alt,把右上角Distance Spacing改0.0x之后叠加
另外感觉很多时候变成Normal音效会好一些 在Timing Panel的Audio里面设定 自己斟酌下吧
排版时候换到Grid Level3 很多Note都没摆齐...
Kiai Time在01:25:933结束
滑杠直来直去有些单调,建议在滑杠轴上点ctrl,之后移动下,增加下弧度
Note的排版也是,原地打不出激情啊


[Easy]
总体感觉这个Easy有点难.. OA可以减一
排版也有点混乱...
00:27:764 (3,4) - 不建议这种交叉
00:42:764 (1,1) - 距离差太远了 建议第二个Ctrl+r?....还有 关掉grid snap和中轴线对齐下?
01:21:543 (6) - 在01:22:275结束? 圈圈拉长并提前到红线?


[Normal+]
距离错误挺多...一个Normal+的话...感觉很多没必要的说 主要问题也在General里面了...
00:27:947 (8) - New Combo
02:09:103 从这里加kiai?
03:00:321 复制粘贴.? = =...

[Insane]
喂喂 这个Tag还不一样?
好小的圈圈...个人建议OA+1 Circle size-1...
00:27:947 (8) - New Combo 还有距离有点问题
00:54:105 (3) - 往下挪点? 这种距离使我想起了老图...
02:07:274 (3) - ^
02:17:151 (3,4,5) - 距离问题

主要问题都写在General里面了
Star~ 横触加油哦
Lovely Crab
70 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Lovely Crab

Selee wrote:

[General]
Artist: Mizuki Nana
Title: Power Gate
Delete all tags
按底下这个改名字好了
viewtopic.php?f=25&t=33919
取消Countdown会比较好吧...
所有难度都有叠加问题...按住Alt,把右上角Distance Spacing改0.0x之后叠加
另外感觉很多时候变成Normal音效会好一些 在Timing Panel的Audio里面设定 自己斟酌下吧
排版时候换到Grid Level3 很多Note都没摆齐...
Kiai Time在01:25:933结束
滑杠直来直去有些单调,建议在滑杠轴上点ctrl,之后移动下,增加下弧度
Note的排版也是,原地打不出激情啊


[Easy]
总体感觉这个Easy有点难.. OA可以减一
排版也有点混乱...
00:27:764 (3,4) - 不建议这种交叉
00:42:764 (1,1) - 距离差太远了 建议第二个Ctrl+r?....还有 关掉grid snap和中轴线对齐下?
01:21:543 (6) - 在01:22:275结束? 圈圈拉长并提前到红线?


[Normal+]
距离错误挺多...一个Normal+的话...感觉很多没必要的说 主要问题也在General里面了...
00:27:947 (8) - New Combo
02:09:103 从这里加kiai?
03:00:321 复制粘贴.? = =...

[Insane]
喂喂 这个Tag还不一样?
好小的圈圈...个人建议OA+1 Circle size-1...
00:27:947 (8) - New Combo 还有距离有点问题
00:54:105 (3) - 往下挪点? 这种距离使我想起了老图...
02:07:274 (3) - ^
02:17:151 (3,4,5) - 距离问题

主要问题都写在General里面了
Star~ 横触加油哦
非常感谢..改了将近一天差不多改好了..增加了很多弯曲的SLIDE,把很多的原地连打分了开来.感觉确实好了很多
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
触手做图的好处就是认真，不会做一些出格的东西

你现在只需要一些概念性的提示和经验的积累，具体这张图没什么好说的
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
SPOILER
嘻哈扁粉菜 参上 lol

[Easy]:
  1. 老实说这个难度不Easy的 lol
  2. 00:31:423 (1) - 取消new combo
  3. 00:56:666 (T) - 建议KIAI从这里开始
  4. 01:04:349 (1) - 取消new combo
  5. 01:04:349 (1,2) - 这个跳 lol 新手要哭的
[Normal+]:
  1. 00:55:934 (1,2,3,4) - x2.0 spacing snap lol
  2. 00:56:666 (T) - KIAI这里开始
  3. 01:01:971 (1) - 取消new combo
  4. 02:05:262 (1) - 单独把中间的那个circle的clap取消掉
  5. 02:09:835 (T) - KIAI这里开始
  6. 02:38:004 (T) - 将近30秒的Break TIme, 虽然无碍 但是建议填掉至少一半
  7. 03:01:053 (T) - KIAI这里开始
  8. 03:27:027 (1,1) - 两个new combo都取消
  9. 03:41:661 (T) - 把03:40:198 (1)复制过来
  10. OD 感觉应该+1或2 现在太低了
[Hard]:
  1. OD又太高了 -1 到7 否则这种歌打完一个三连下个三连都还没出来全 0.0
  2. 老实说Slider Velocity 1.0实在是慢啊
  3. 00:27:947 (7) - new combo
  4. 00:52:184 (9) - clap 取消
  5. 00:52:733 (11) - ^
  6. 00:56:666 (T) - KIAI这里开始
  7. 01:01:422 (12) - new combo
  8. 01:12:214 (9) - ^
  9. 01:50:811 (9) - ^
  10. 02:09:835 (T) - KIAI这里开始
  11. 02:14:408 (7) - new combo
  12. 02:25:382 (9) - ^
  13. 02:37:639 (T) - 加根线关KIAI
  14. 03:01:053 (T) - KIAI这里开始
  15. 03:05:626 (7) - new combo
  16. 03:16:601 (9) - ^
  17. 03:29:040 (10) - ^
  18. 03:34:710 (2) - new combo 或者03:33:613 (1,1,1) - new combo全取消
star~

音效方面 现在的状况是hitsound太少 :S 可能需要用到自定义音效了 然后基本上先试下踩鼓点
Lovely Crab
70 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Lovely Crab

LKs wrote:

触手做图的好处就是认真，不会做一些出格的东西

你现在只需要一些概念性的提示和经验的积累，具体这张图没什么好说的
感谢星..
第一张图肯定还有很多不足的地方..
遇到问题我也会在群里问的 XD
Lovely Crab
70 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Lovely Crab

Colin Hou wrote:

SPOILER
嘻哈扁粉菜 参上 lol

[Easy]:
  1. 老实说这个难度不Easy的 lol
  2. 00:31:423 (1) - 取消new combo
  3. 00:56:666 (T) - 建议KIAI从这里开始
  4. 01:04:349 (1) - 取消new combo
  5. 01:04:349 (1,2) - 这个跳 lol 新手要哭的
[Normal+]:
  1. 00:55:934 (1,2,3,4) - x2.0 spacing snap lol
  2. 00:56:666 (T) - KIAI这里开始
  3. 01:01:971 (1) - 取消new combo
  4. 02:05:262 (1) - 单独把中间的那个circle的clap取消掉
  5. 02:09:835 (T) - KIAI这里开始
  6. 02:38:004 (T) - 将近30秒的Break TIme, 虽然无碍 但是建议填掉至少一半
  7. 03:01:053 (T) - KIAI这里开始
  8. 03:27:027 (1,1) - 两个new combo都取消
  9. 03:41:661 (T) - 把03:40:198 (1)复制过来
  10. OD 感觉应该+1或2 现在太低了
[Hard]:
  1. OD又太高了 -1 到7 否则这种歌打完一个三连下个三连都还没出来全 0.0
  2. 老实说Slider Velocity 1.0实在是慢啊
  3. 00:27:947 (7) - new combo
  4. 00:52:184 (9) - clap 取消
  5. 00:52:733 (11) - ^
  6. 00:56:666 (T) - KIAI这里开始
  7. 01:01:422 (12) - new combo
  8. 01:12:214 (9) - ^
  9. 01:50:811 (9) - ^
  10. 02:09:835 (T) - KIAI这里开始
  11. 02:14:408 (7) - new combo
  12. 02:25:382 (9) - ^
  13. 02:37:639 (T) - 加根线关KIAI
  14. 03:01:053 (T) - KIAI这里开始
  15. 03:05:626 (7) - new combo
  16. 03:16:601 (9) - ^
  17. 03:29:040 (10) - ^
  18. 03:34:710 (2) - new combo 或者03:33:613 (1,1,1) - new combo全取消
star~

音效方面 现在的状况是hitsound太少 :S 可能需要用到自定义音效了 然后基本上先试下踩鼓点
非常感谢..
EASY中的跳已经改了.当时没有考虑周全..
NOMORL和HARD中间的BREAK部分已经补上.
HARD一开始做的时候没有考虑到SLIDE速度的问题..确实感觉有点慢了.
HITSOUND的话对于目前的我来说稍显困难了点..基本都是根据自己的感觉来下的.有余力的话我会再注意下的
感谢星~
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
hello :D
Easy
I suggest Circle Size -1 & Overall Difficulty -1
00:42:764 (1,1) how about adjusting this and make it more symmetrical? I think it's kinda long slider so you can make it better.
01:04:349 (2,3) spacing is too far
Normal+
I suggest Circle Size -1
00:48:252 (2) new combo?
00:48:617 (3) ^
Hard
00:23:008 (1) remove new combo?
01:08:739 (2) 1 grid right
01:14:958 (3) 1 grid down
02:21:908 (2) 1 grid left
02:47:516 (4,1) 1 grid left
02:49:711 (4) 1 grid up
02:32:150 (1) remove new combo
02:51:174 (4) 1 grid down
02:47:882 (1) remove new combo
02:53:004 (1) ^
02:54:467 (1) ^

nicemap for your 1st map o.o
star~ ;)
Lovely Crab
70 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Lovely Crab

banvi wrote:

hello :D
Easy
I suggest Circle Size -1 & Overall Difficulty -1
00:42:764 (1,1) how about adjusting this and make it more symmetrical? I think it's kinda long slider so you can make it better.
01:04:349 (2,3) spacing is too far
Normal+
I suggest Circle Size -1
00:48:252 (2) new combo?
00:48:617 (3) ^
Hard
00:23:008 (1) remove new combo?
01:08:739 (2) 1 grid right
01:14:958 (3) 1 grid down
02:21:908 (2) 1 grid left
02:47:516 (4,1) 1 grid left
02:49:711 (4) 1 grid up
02:32:150 (1) remove new combo
02:51:174 (4) 1 grid down
02:47:882 (1) remove new combo
02:53:004 (1) ^
02:54:467 (1) ^

nicemap for your 1st map o.o
star~ ;)
thx for your mod and your star xD

about easy,i make the long slide more symmetrical and make the space shorter than before~
about normal+,i dont want the circle big..because i want this diffcult just a little hard..i agree with you about the new combo.
about hard,i'm sorry for made so many small mistake...

thx a lot~
Furudo_Erika_old
53 posts
Joined September 2009
Furudo_Erika_old
我是看在横触的面子上给的星，不是看歌啊，我不喜欢奶奶的曲子
touko_old
33 posts
Joined July 2009
touko_old
- =猴山看到连接过来的

1/2拍的NOTE把间距弄大一点吧...不要搞得这么小气

还有注意下new combo的使用

--------------------------------------

01:13:861 new combo 12 改为new combo 1 2 3

01:51:908-01:52:640 个人感觉这个节奏下的不是很好...稍微修正了下



01:53:737 slider收尾没收好,我是这样改的



02:12:213 这个半拍的托条最好改成两个单音

02:27:029和第一条一样的问题

02:28:675 少了一个NOTE

02:46:419 这儿的节奏打得太单调了(楼主前面的节奏摆的很好的,怎么到这就变成这样了),可以去观摩一下alace的图学习一下,以下是我的摆法- =但愿能对楼主有启发(02:46:419-02:48:980)

02:18:247 问题同第一条

如果这是第一张图的话楼主还是很有天分的


aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
General;

Delete the .osb, full submit.

Easy;

00:24:106 (2) - 1/2 shorter?
00:33:252 (5,1) - Don't make these overlap so much.
00:45:691 (1,1) - Dat jump

Normal+;

Circle size is too small imo.
Tick rate; 1
I don't like the way this has the same slider speed as Hard.
00:48:617 (1,1) - Spacing.
00:55:934 (1,2,3,4) - Don't like this increased spacing; it seems random and completely unfounded in any musical sense, especially in a normal.
02:09:835 (5,6) - Are these really necessary? I'd replace them with straight 1/2 sliders myself.
03:01:053 (5,6) - derp
03:38:734 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Spacing kthx

EDIT; derp star
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI HAO

[General]
1) Offset : 6.924 (Please check, sometimes my offset is wrong. If right, please resnap all notes)
2) Your bg (01.jpg) is too large, the maximum is 1024x768 (current 1229x768)
3) Tags??

[Easy]
00:21:545 (7) - New combo, very long for easy diff
00:21:911 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:40:569 (6) - Move 2 grid right?

[Normal+]
00:21:179 (5,6) - Move 1 grid left?
00:37:093 (6,7) - Move 1 grid up?

[Hard]
00:52:095 (8) - New combo?
02:09:837 (5) - ^
03:01:055 (5) - ^

Nice song
STAR
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
水树串串……

[General]
额……为什么都用一样的slider速度

[EZ]
00:34:731 (1) - spacing 挨太近了
00:48:633 (1) - ^
00:53:755 (1,2) - 对于新手来说……有点困难
01:17:901 (3,4) - ^
01:22:657 (1) - 转盘静音

[NM+]
00:55:952 (1,2,3,4) - 不要如此多的使用finish……
01:14:244 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:17:171 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:31:802 - 从这开始用normal hitsounds吧
02:11:133 (1) - spacing
02:27:413 (1,2,3,4) - 又是finish…… :? (类似的地方很多)
03:16:619 (7) - spacing小问题
03:39:118 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5) - 轮到clap连用了吗……

[HD]
02:02:531 (5) - 和3 4 要在一条直线上吧……移上一点
02:27:042 (1,2,1) - 这个跳有一点严重…… (明明是你这个沙包自己过不去)

Star!
Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey.

[Easy]
00:20:096 (5) - extend this slider to end at 00:21:914 (removing the 6)
00:53:755 (1) - extend this slider to end at 00:54:304 (removing the 2)
00:19:732 (4) - UNSNAPPED!! (Its not on the tick properly)
00:20:098 (5) - ^ same thing
00:21:927 (2) - ^
00:22:293 (3) - ^
00:22:659 (4) - ^
00:27:415 (2) - ^
Then Resnap.

[Normal+]
:o OMG you have 281 UNSNAPPED NOTES!! (go into file and open the AIMOD and fix these!!)
^ they may look on ticks...but they aint
02:05:277 (1) - remove the repeat and extend to end at 02:05:460
Increase HP Drain Rate: +1

[Hard]
340 UNSNAPPED NOTES! FIX EM!
Increase HP Drain Rate: +1
02:27:411 (1) - OMG this is spaced to far! You can make it a jump yes...but thats just simply to far!
03:18:631 (1) - ^ same thing here...atleast bring the 3 notes closer...
This difficulty feels like Insane...Consider changing it from Hard to Insane (sing Normal+ is pretty much Hard)

Overall...Its a decent map, stil lneeds some work. But on its way. Just keep trying!

~STAR (you've earned my star)
xierbaliti
osu! Alumni
1,009 posts
Joined August 2008
xierbaliti
-General-
拍手声不合曲子 最好是用个自定义clap >_> normal-hitnormal似乎不错^

-Hard-
音效很乱 D:
00:17:990 - 没用的绿线 删掉
01:06:008 (3) - 这里间距不好._.
01:07:472 (3) - ^
01:09:666 (5) - ^
01:35:094 - 这里似乎放个circle比较好
01:37:838 (4) - 这个移到后面的白线上似乎好些

---------------------------------------
:< 节奏很糟糕 不能全按人声下note啊 D: 多找音乐的节奏比较好
如果有爱的话 希望能大改一下 尤其是后面的部分 ._.
第一张图很容易做成这样的<_< 比如我的爱大米._.
改好之后可以再找我看 有不懂也可以来问<_>

说的有些重 请原谅>_>
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Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey. You wanted me to do a recheck. So here I am! =3

[Easy]
00:20:096 (5) - extend this slider to end at 00:21:194 (removing the 6)...You didnt do this >.> ... Do it... 5 & 6 are to close! It would be confusing to new players.
00:53:755 (1) - extend this slider to end at 00:54:304 (removing the 2)... ^ same thing....Do it!
01:17:901 (3) - remove a repeat...Its because the end of the slider is to close to 4...making it hard to hit for new players
Be sure to resnap.


[Normal+]
HP Drain Rate: +1
Change the name to Hard.
00:31:802 (3) - extend this slider to end at 00:32:350 (resnap after doing so)
Seems fine.

[Hard]
Change the name to Insane.
Missing Kiai Times...
Seems fine.

Your map is getting better. Keep at it.
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
[Hard]
02:52:929(x),02:54:393(x) - You better make 2x warnings for these timing sections.
03:33:265 (1) - It's too close.Place it somewhere else.

I can't find anything wrong with it.Good job.
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi
Nice map, star
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[general]
try to resnap by grid level 3. There'are two different spacing for 1/2 streams in hard.

[hard]
0:26:314 (4) left 1 grid
0:42:777 (1,2,3,4,5) The spacing is different from those streams before like 0:38:753 (3,4,5). Fix this.
0:45:704 (1,2,3,4,5) ^
1:09:667 (5) Slightly adjust the second fix point so that it's symmetrical.
1:32:350 (1,2,3) right 1 grid
1:48:996 (2,3) (2) down 2 grids, (3) down 1 grid
2:22:838 (5) Slightly adjust the fixing point, too. Just make the map tidier~
2:52:929 neex 2X warning
3:!4:057 (5) Do the same thing to the slider~
3:38:753 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) What a mess here orz 1)Don't use too much new combo 2)3:39:118 (1,1,1,1,1) and 3:40:582 (1,1,1,1,1) is so weird

good luck, nice BG and star
miku
186 posts
Joined March 2009
miku
额...
我只是一只小小沙包而已 > <
玩了一下
提一点建议
[easy]
00:31:439 (2,3) - 这里中间加个note会不会好一点..? 感觉突然空一个出来很容易按错

[normal]
00:55:948 (1,2,3,4,1) - 突然距离变成2倍..感觉normal的话这样会不会难了一点? (我打到这掉了 OTL)

[hard]
00:53:569 (1,2,3) - 这3个的距离感觉有点问题..
01:19:727 (1) - 这里一个超长slider感觉好违和..
02:53:021 (1) - 突然slider加速! 吓一跳.. 如果有个SB提示就好了..
02:54:484 (1) - 同上

意见就是这么多..
请注意下面的> <
我只是一个player 不是mapper 我作图真的很渣OTL 上面的建议只是我个人的一点小建议 如果不同意我的说法的话请按照自己的想法

加油 >///<
star~
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted

Easy
no issues
Normal
00:55:948 (1,2,3,4) - i think this is a bit much for a normal
Hard
00:30:887 (1) - stack this with (9)'s slider end?
03:26:497 (6) - spacing issue, either stack it with (5)'s slider end or follow distance snap
03:36:009 (2,3) - 1 grid down

nice first map ;)
TRIPLE STAR!
Lovely Crab
70 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Lovely Crab
thank you all and your stars:3
i will try to make a picture to notice X2.
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
Hi :3

[Easy]
Fine ;3

[Normal+]
03:42:045 (1) - Move 1/2 earlier and end it at the same spot it was.

[Hard]
03:41:679 (1) - Move 1/2 later and end it at the same spot it was.

Star~
mayosiiiiii
329 posts
Joined September 2009
mayosiiiiii
nice map and song <3
star~ >A<
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
Umm...

I can't mod this map ;;

sorry

but It's good map ><

+SP
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
aesopl19193
Nana ><~
我很喜歡奈奈Live 的 Power Gate~ (不是太喜歡CD版本...哎..
Tag : 我也不知道...寫有唱Power Gate 的Live?

[Hard]
00:19:362(1) - no new combo
00:21:283(6) - new combo
00:21:923(1) - no new combo
(suggestion)00:24:118(1) - no new combo , 減一個repeat , 移至00:24:484
(suggestion)00:24:118(x) - add a note
00:26:188 - new combo
....總之長白線new combo 就好
(suggestion)00:27:411(1) - 轉為slider , end at 00:27:777 , 在完始位置加clap
01:35:277(x) - add note
02:22:838(5) - 畫得平衡一點0.0..左邊好像高了半格
03:28:692(9) - 移右一格

[normal]
new combo 跟hard一樣
00:48:631(1) - 太近 , 與前一節比較

加油~star~
有點想做個diff呢>_>
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
[General]
  1. You need TAGs
  2. Offset 6920
  3. Maybe some custom hit circle colors ?
[Hard]
  1. Why does the storyboard say 'Speed Up!' at 00:55:582 when there is no speed up? o.O
  2. Why doesn't the storyboard say 'Slow!' at 01:56:679 ?
  3. ^ but at 01:59:606.
  4. Again it says Speed Up when there is no speed up o.o 02:08:936. Delete~
00:19:362 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:23:021 (1) - ^
00:57:960 (5) - Add New Combo.
01:07:472 (3) - Move one grid level to the left. (Grid Level 3 / Most Precise)
01:13:875 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:42:594 (7) - Add New Combo.
01:46:070 (7) - ^
02:27:045 (1) - Remove New Combo.
02:50:826 (1) - ^
02:52:289 (1) - ^
03:18:265 (1) - ^
03:28:692 (9) - Move one grid level to the right. (Grid Level 3 / Most Precise)
03:34:728 (1,1,2) - Center these please~
03:38:752 (1) - Remove New Combo.


[Normal+]
  1. This is not really a Normal nor a Normal+. It feels way more like a Hard difficulty. ):
  2. Tick Rate 1 please.
  3. 00:42:773 - Why is there here no Storyboard telling Slow Down ?
  4. 01:56:676 - ^
00:19:359 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:21:188 (9) - Add New Combo.
00:21:919 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:45:334 (1) - ^
00:48:261 (1) - ^
00:55:944 (1,2,3,4) - Don't do jumps in a normal, even if it's a Normal+ This 2.0x spacing jumps WAY too hard...
00:59:054 (6) - Add New Combo.
01:00:883 (6) - ^
01:01:432 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:02:529 (1) - ^
01:12:224 (7) - Add New Combo.
01:13:871 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:46:066 (7) - Add New Combo.
02:08:566 (1) - Remove New Combo.
02:25:395 (7) - Add New Combo.
02:27:041 (1) - Remove New Combo.
03:16:615 (7) - Add New Combo.
03:18:261 (1) - Remove New Combo.
03:29:972 (1) - ^
03:38:752 (1) - ^


[Easy]
  1. Map till 02:34:730 please~
00:57:414 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:00:340 (7) - Add New Combo.
01:12:779 (1) - Remove New Combo.


Starred~
Lovely Crab
70 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Lovely Crab
SPOILER

aesopl19193 wrote:

Nana ><~
我很喜歡奈奈Live 的 Power Gate~ (不是太喜歡CD版本...哎..
Tag : 我也不知道...寫有唱Power Gate 的Live? 暫時就寫上j-pop了..

[Hard]
00:19:362(1) - no new combo
00:21:283(6) - new combo
00:21:923(1) - no new combo
(suggestion)00:24:118(1) - no new combo , 減一個repeat , 移至00:24:484
(suggestion)00:24:118(x) - add a note感覺很不錯,用了
00:26:188 - new combo
....總之長白線new combo 就好
(suggestion)00:27:411(1) - 轉為slider , end at 00:27:777 , 在完始位置加clap
01:35:277(x) - add note這個感覺不是很好..沒用>.>
02:22:838(5) - 畫得平衡一點0.0..左邊好像高了半格FIXED
03:28:692(9) - 移右一格FIXED

[normal]
new combo 跟hard一樣
00:48:631(1) - 太近 , 與前一節比較FIXED

加油~star~
有點想做個diff呢>_>
NEW COMBO根據GLADI的MOD以及你教我的一起改了..THX
SPOILER

GladiOol wrote:

[General]
  1. You need TAGsjust add a"j-pop"..
  2. Offset 6920FIXED
  3. Maybe some custom hit circle colors ?consider it
i have fixed all about new combo.thx a lot:3
[Hard]
  1. Why does the storyboard say 'Speed Up!' at 00:55:582 when there is no speed up? o.O
  2. Why doesn't the storyboard say 'Slow!' at 01:56:679 ?
  3. ^ but at 01:59:606.
  4. Again it says Speed Up when there is no speed up o.o 02:08:936. Delete~
FIXED
00:19:362 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:23:021 (1) - ^
00:57:960 (5) - Add New Combo.
01:07:472 (3) - Move one grid level to the left. (Grid Level 3 / Most Precise)i think they are right...
01:13:875 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:42:594 (7) - Add New Combo.
01:46:070 (7) - ^
02:27:045 (1) - Remove New Combo.
02:50:826 (1) - ^
02:52:289 (1) - ^
03:18:265 (1) - ^
03:28:692 (9) - Move one grid level to the right. (Grid Level 3 / Most Precise)FIXED
03:34:728 (1,1,2) - Center these please~FIXED
03:38:752 (1) - Remove New Combo.


[Normal+]
  1. This is not really a Normal nor a Normal+. It feels way more like a Hard difficulty. ):
  2. Tick Rate 1 please.
  3. 00:42:773 - Why is there here no Storyboard telling Slow Down ?
  4. 01:56:676 - ^
FIXED
00:19:359 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:21:188 (9) - Add New Combo.
00:21:919 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:45:334 (1) - ^
00:48:261 (1) - ^
00:55:944 (1,2,3,4) - Don't do jumps in a normal, even if it's a Normal+ This 2.0x spacing jumps WAY too hard...so i change the name to hard..
00:59:054 (6) - Add New Combo.
01:00:883 (6) - ^
01:01:432 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:02:529 (1) - ^
01:12:224 (7) - Add New Combo.
01:13:871 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:46:066 (7) - Add New Combo.
02:08:566 (1) - Remove New Combo.
02:25:395 (7) - Add New Combo.
02:27:041 (1) - Remove New Combo.
03:16:615 (7) - Add New Combo.
03:18:261 (1) - Remove New Combo.
03:29:972 (1) - ^
03:38:752 (1) - ^


[Easy]
  1. Map till 02:34:730 please~
consider it
00:57:414 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:00:340 (7) - Add New Combo.
01:12:779 (1) - Remove New Combo.


Starred~
thank you for your great mod..:3
Bikko
151 posts
Joined January 2010
Bikko
My english is not good. I'm sorry about this but my contury is not english-speaking world. keep in mind please.


Poof! Summoned!


RED : IMPORTANT
ORANGE : I RECOMMEND IT STRONGLY
BLUE : SUGGESTION, PERSONAL DISCONTENT
GREEN : NAZI
PURPLE : JOKE, DO NOT TAKE IT SERIOUSLY


[General]
- As wikipedia, Title of this song is 'POWER GATE', all capital. Title, Artist thing is must be correct. I don't know about this song, so you must check it one more and make you absolutely sure.
SPOILER
- remove 'j-pop' from tag. I'll be its genre when it is ranked. If you can not find words what have relationship with this song anymore, you can make it just blank.
- Difficulty gap between [Easy] and [Hard] is too big. Do something.


[Easy]
- Terribly short. IMO, We need to think about a noob, who can not enjoy whole of the song. Also, Your mapset doesn't have normal. If someone's skill is too suck so he can not enjoy even [Hard], It is unfair. Every person has their rights even he is a sucking noob. Please remind when you were a noob. When I was a poor noob, I always disappointed if map's easiest diff is a half map. map this for whole song likes another diffs.
- OD +1~2
00:40:212 (5,6) - Unnecessary overlap.
00:40:578 (6,1) - Unnecessary overlap.
00:42:773 (1,1) - Unnecessary overlap. I'll stop point out this but you should think about this kind of Unnecessary overlapping notes on noob diff. This kind of pattern on easy or normal diffs are terribly ugly because of thery are displayed in same time. we can read these, but noobs can confused. you can change these patterns, or use more farther distance snap and remap(or just repositioning) it. C'mon, This is just [Easy] diff you can remap this just in 1~2 hour.
01:14:235 (1) - Unsnapped.
01:16:430 (4) - Unsnapped.
01:21:186 (5) - Unsnapped.
01:21:552 (6) - Unsnapped.


[Hard]
-IMO, this one is just [Normal+]. You just change diff name beacuse of another modder's opinion. In this case, You don't need to afraid 'remap'. You are an experienced player. you understand logic of map enough and you already know about each map's pattern and style. you can make [Easy] or [Normal] diff just in 1~3 hour If you have valid SV and distance snap. and you already set all timing section. isn't it? (well, hurried map's quality is differnte issue...but anyway).
-You used too close distnace snap. even 1/2 interval notes are overlapped because of their too close distance snap. is it really [Hard] diff? too narrow and stuffy! you really need to remap!
01:19:723 (1) - I don't know what is this meaning. also, Your hardest diff has same slider at same timing. IMO, you need a slider art for this more looks good.


[Insane]
- Your warning 'slow' or 'speed up' things by storyboard is absolutely no meaning on this diff. just remove them all. why does those thing so much? huh? even you make them display on your all jumps and irregular spacing, players do not pay attention to that and just hit all notes by their feeling and reflex. isn't it? C'mon, This is [Insane], all pro players ready for this and they gonna FC or SS or +mods it anyway. You don't need detail annotation.


I apologize about my hysteric. but I still can't understand who play OSU! with mouse... and your mapping style is absolutley for mouse user. I can not enjoy this.

but I can agree this is not bad, it is good map. also This is your first map, yeah, I can say this is excellent. +star and good luck. I'm just hope you are not annoying because of my ... some nonsense discussion. I'm terribly sorry, but I'm hard to stand on this.


EDIT :

[General]
- Your all timing sections are not snapped. when you changed it's offset, you forgot to sort them out. you must fix them all. If you don't have any idea about this, check your all timing section and set them again.
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
Hi,
I didnt even notice the slow and speed up signs for a bit

[easy]
you have a few unsnapped objects, resnap them

[insane]
03:27:224 (3) - you could probably get a better curve on this
easyboyxh
1 post
Joined January 2010
easyboyxh
毛哥说啊，我来顶你啊，好兄弟啊！！
xierbaliti
osu! Alumni
1,009 posts
Joined August 2008
xierbaliti
modded in irc.

map looks better now :3

*star*

Thanks for remap it :D
Lovely Crab
70 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Lovely Crab

xierbaliti wrote:

looks better now :3

*star*

Thanks for remap it :D
thx a lot for a lot of things....
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
aesopl19193
my normal! :D

Download: Mizuki Nana - POWER GATE (40558019) [aesopl's Normal].osu
Lovely Crab
70 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Lovely Crab

aesopl19193 wrote:

my normal! :D
thx :)
aspara
121 posts
Joined June 2009
aspara
power gaaaate<3 :)
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Easy]
感觉不够Easy...
建议考虑下slider tick rate 1，更好听（另分也会略多）
01:15:700 (5) - nazi. 右一格，可以把23平行拖过来对照下。
02:05:456 (5) - 按之前的形状展开不好吗。。右上各一格。。。
02:24:115 (3,4,5,6) - 因为3是画弧线过来的，建议456也不要排的那么直，整体平滑一点。
02:28:871 (5) - 右一格。

[aesopl's Normal]
01:00:334 (4,1) - new combo位置换下吧。
02:00:334 (2,1) - 1和之前的slider平行不好吗。。
02:50:822 (1,2) - 这个错开是有意的么。。= =。。。对齐吧。
03:39:114 (2,3,4) - 间距很明显不等，调下位置吧。

[Hard]
00:42:773 (1...) - 建议变速时先用slider带一下，这样感觉更友善。只是建议。
00:50:822 (1,2,3,4) - 如果没有特殊用意的话，关上grid snap把它们的尾巴对好。
01:18:627 (5) - 这里还是按照spacing推出去吧。。和上下两个circle的一直线并没增加什么美感。
02:09:846 (5) - 下一格。
02:49:907 (6) - 从这里开始的几个红线clap和红线finish不好听。。。。真的。或者说很难听也可以
02:59:236 (3,4) - 与其对中央不如拉到正下去摆三角。还可以避免误读
03:39:114 (1,2,3,4,5) - 很扭曲。。自己看下。
03:40:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

整体问题的话就是我还是觉得直线slider太多了。。。扭来扭去，美感缺失。不过这不是一两张图能解决的问题，慢慢来吧。

Edit:
02:53:749 (1,2,3) - 这还有一个。。看来之前看的确实有点不仔细了，见谅。

Download: Mizuki Nana - POWER GATE (40558019) [ahahaha].osu
Lovely Crab
70 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Lovely Crab

aspara wrote:

power gaaaate<3 :)
THX~~~ :)

NatsumeRin wrote:

SPOILER
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Easy]
感觉不够Easy...
建议考虑下slider tick rate 1，更好听（另分也会略多）
01:15:700 (5) - nazi. 右一格，可以把23平行拖过来对照下。
02:05:456 (5) - 按之前的形状展开不好吗。。右上各一格。。。
02:24:115 (3,4,5,6) - 因为3是画弧线过来的，建议456也不要排的那么直，整体平滑一点。
02:28:871 (5) - 右一格。

[aesopl's Normal]
01:00:334 (4,1) - new combo位置换下吧。
02:00:334 (2,1) - 1和之前的slider平行不好吗。。
02:50:822 (1,2) - 这个错开是有意的么。。= =。。。对齐吧。
03:39:114 (2,3,4) - 间距很明显不等，调下位置吧。

[Hard]
00:42:773 (1...) - 建议变速时先用slider带一下，这样感觉更友善。只是建议。
00:50:822 (1,2,3,4) - 如果没有特殊用意的话，关上grid snap把它们的尾巴对好。
01:18:627 (5) - 这里还是按照spacing推出去吧。。和上下两个circle的一直线并没增加什么美感。
02:09:846 (5) - 下一格。
02:49:907 (6) - 从这里开始的几个红线clap和红线finish不好听。。。。真的。或者说很难听也可以
02:59:236 (3,4) - 与其对中央不如拉到正下去摆三角。还可以避免误读
03:39:114 (1,2,3,4,5) - 很扭曲。。自己看下。
03:40:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

整体问题的话就是我还是觉得直线slider太多了。。。扭来扭去，美感缺失。不过这不是一两张图能解决的问题，慢慢来吧。

Edit:
02:53:749 (1,2,3) - 这还有一个。。看来之前看的确实有点不仔细了，见谅。
变速SLIDE应该是这张图的唯一难点了.所以我想保留下来.. :oops: 其余地方全部修改完毕..GUEST DIFF部分我等他本人上来了询问之后再做修改..

thank you for your great mod:3
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
aesopl19193

NatsumeRin wrote:

[aesopl's Normal]
01:00:334 (4,1) - new combo位置换下吧。
-Fixed
02:00:334 (2,1) - 1和之前的slider平行不好吗。。
-Fixed
02:50:822 (1,2) - 这个错开是有意的么。。= =。。。对齐吧。
-Fixed
03:39:114 (2,3,4) - 间距很明显不等，调下位置吧。
-Fixed
Thanks! :)

Download: Mizuki Nana - POWER GATE (40558019) [aesopl's Normal].osu
Lovely Crab
70 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Lovely Crab

aesopl19193 wrote:

NatsumeRin wrote:

[aesopl's Normal]
01:00:334 (4,1) - new combo位置换下吧。
-Fixed
02:00:334 (2,1) - 1和之前的slider平行不好吗。。
-Fixed
02:50:822 (1,2) - 这个错开是有意的么。。= =。。。对齐吧。
-Fixed
03:39:114 (2,3,4) - 间距很明显不等，调下位置吧。
-Fixed
Thanks! :)
uploaded
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
[General]
第一根红线
BPM:164.000
Offset: 1,066
主要是hard的note在红线之前...

感觉音效不是很舒服...

[aesopl's Normal]
00:42:121 (T) - Unused time line, delete?
00:57:590 (3) - Remove the whistle in the slider?
01:09:114 (2) - Remove whistle ?
01:15:700 (1) - ^
01:36:188 (1) - ^
01:58:139 (1) - Add whistle in the begining of slider?
01:59:602 (1) - ^
02:22:468 (3) - Remove the whistle in the slider?
02:58:139 (1) - Remove Clap?
03:25:395 (3) -

[Hard]
复制粘贴太多了喂
New Combo感觉加的很乱 重新考虑下?
01:10:395 (4,5) - Stacking
02:05:092 (4,5,1) - ^
02:05:457 (1,2,3) - ^
02:04:724 (3,4) - Unsnapped 用Timing倒数第四项修复下
02:49:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段音效到底是什么? 试试看1 Clap 2 无 3 whistle 模式 还有就是02:50:090 (7) - 记得取消整体whistle
03:40:212 (1) - whistle
Ibuki Suika
1,254 posts
Joined March 2010
Ibuki Suika
[General]
大丈夫だ、问题ない！

[Easy]
大丈夫だ、问题ない！

[aesopl's Normal ]
大丈夫だ、问题ない！

[Hard]
大丈夫だ、问题ない！


Nice map,Star!~ :P
Last edited by Ibuki Suika , edited 1 time in total.
Lovely Crab
70 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Lovely Crab

Selee wrote:

[General]
第一根红线
BPM:164.000
Offset: 1,066
主要是hard的note在红线之前...FIXED

感觉音效不是很舒服...

[aesopl's Normal]
00:42:121 (T) - Unused time line, delete?
00:57:590 (3) - Remove the whistle in the slider?
01:09:114 (2) - Remove whistle ?
01:15:700 (1) - ^
01:36:188 (1) - ^
01:58:139 (1) - Add whistle in the begining of slider?
01:59:602 (1) - ^
02:22:468 (3) - Remove the whistle in the slider?
02:58:139 (1) - Remove Clap?
03:25:395 (3) -

ALL FIXED
[Hard]
复制粘贴太多了喂 :oops:
New Combo感觉加的很乱 重新考虑下?按照长白线重新加了下
01:10:395 (4,5) - Stacking FIXED
02:05:092 (4,5,1) - ^
02:05:457 (1,2,3) - ^
这两个我感觉没什么问题/.
02:04:724 (3,4) - Unsnapped 用Timing倒数第四项修复下 FIXED
02:49:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段音效到底是什么? 试试看1 Clap 2 无 3 whistle 模式 还有就是02:50:090 (7) - 记得取消整体whistle
我感觉这串HITSOUND还不错..虽然和前后的风格有点不太一样..
03:40:212 (1) - whistle FIXED
thx a lot:3
Selee
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Selee
[Hard]
01:10:395 (4,5) - Stacking FIXED
02:05:092 (4,5,1) - ^
02:05:457 (1,2,3) - ^
后两个的确有问题...自己开0.0x关掉grid snap看看
Lovely Crab
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Lovely Crab

Selee wrote:

[Hard]
01:10:395 (4,5) - Stacking FIXED
02:05:092 (4,5,1) - ^
02:05:457 (1,2,3) - ^
后两个的确有问题...自己开0.0x关掉grid snap看看
FIXED :oops:
Alace
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因為節奏的關係你的easy與hard有滿多clap的位子打在 1 3 拍上面
1 3拍的clap聽起來並不是那麼好聽,可以花點時間聽一下hard就會發現有一些部份的clap怎麼感覺比較急促

<Easy>
建議可以整首用normal音效 加入一些finish就可以了
Lovely Crab
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Lovely Crab

Alace wrote:

因為節奏的關係你的easy與hard有滿多clap的位子打在 1 3 拍上面
1 3拍的clap聽起來並不是那麼好聽,可以花點時間聽一下hard就會發現有一些部份的clap怎麼感覺比較急促

<Easy>
建議可以整首用normal音效 加入一些finish就可以了
我尝试着修改下..
Lovely Crab
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Lovely Crab
EAZY修改了一下,确实感觉有些clap很突兀,我把很多一串NOTA第一个NOTE的上的CLAP转到了第2个NOTE上,感觉好了挺多的..
至于HARD我感觉不到哪里的HITSOUND很突兀,如果有的话能指明一下么,THX
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