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Yuumai Kosaka - _summer

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Topic Starter
owl13
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年3月21日 at 下午 11:30:44

Artist: Yuumai Kosaka
Title: _summer
Source: _summer
Tags: shearwater
BPM: 158
Filesize: 8238kb
Play Time: 02:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.57 stars, 155 notes)
  2. Hard (4.94 stars, 552 notes)
  3. Normal (4.06 stars, 331 notes)
Download: Yuumai Kosaka - _summer
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The Song is from _SUMMER OVA ED
Kotone
relax~mod~?

green=suggest
Normal

  • 01:47:067-delete circle
    02:31:687-Extend to 02:31:887
    02:47:257-or add a circle?
Hard

  • 03:17:252-move to 03:17:447
我無聊lol
Topic Starter
owl13

karenying wrote:

relax~mod~?

green=suggest
Normal

  • 01:47:067-delete circle 忘了拉後半拍
    02:31:687-Extend to 02:31:887 本來有打算的,但因為拉長了就JUMP太遠沒拉到
    02:47:257-or add a circle? 那我add 吧-v-
Hard

  • 03:17:252-move to 03:17:447
歌詞貌似不配

我無聊lol
Thank 無聊人
kodomonoyume
nice :)
Topic Starter
owl13
THANK :D
kiddly
0.0/

[general]
你的combo color 1和4好相似...删一个算了...
soft C1的clap说实话我玩的时候根本没听出来...后来仔细一听觉得一般。
(小声)BG崩了啊崩了……游戏原画多好啊 :o
这个hitcircle的皮肤个人觉得有一点花,改成单色的应该就不错。
血槽空了的部分和有血的部分也是有点相似啊...

[Easy]
02:53:617 - 这条线有必要存在么……要改音量的话前面一条就可以啊。
别的挺好。

[Normal]
好偷懒@_@ 嘛我也理解做简单的难度很痛苦的……
貌似没什么问题。

[Hard+]
03:25:801 (1,2) - 第一次打的人绝对会miss。
别的不错的。

star :)
Topic Starter
owl13

kiddly wrote:

0.0/

[general]
你的combo color 1和4好相似...删一个算了...
soft C1的clap说实话我玩的时候根本没听出来...后来仔细一听觉得一般。 其實我還在找更好的聲音,因為聲檔數量太多,找適合的需時。。。
(小声)BG崩了啊崩了……游戏原画多好啊 :o _summer的圖不易找 我也想找更好的說 :o
这个hitcircle的皮肤个人觉得有一点花,改成单色的应该就不错。 我試一下
血槽空了的部分和有血的部分也是有点相似啊... 本來是想看小鳥就可以www,,,不過...也是的....我改一下好了 ;)

[Easy]
02:53:617 - 这条线有必要存在么……要改音量的话前面一条就可以啊。
别的挺好。

因為,一直有人跟我說
, (这里的绿线同时担任了kiai和加音量两个任务,这是不可行的,请在前面加入一条绿线来变更音量。)

[Normal]
好偷懒@_@ 嘛我也理解做简单的难度很痛苦的……
貌似没什么问题。

我是想再排列一次的,現在跟EASY 其實跟本沒太大分別, 可是因為時間問題必須等休息天才能做修改這件事。所以我都還沒有正式找人MOD :oops:

[Hard+]
03:25:801 (1,2) - 第一次打的人绝对会miss。
别的不错的。

(我要跟音樂, 沒辦法,就算是增加難度好了 :twisted: (我是很邪惡的)

star :) THANK YOU :)
Vikon
Dotsu
Hi~

以下只是建议:

[General]

  • 需要一张approachcircle
[Easy]

  • 00:22:763(1):这个转盘感觉静音掉效果更好
    01:22:383(4,5):距离太近

[Normal]

Hp Circle Size OD都-1

  • 00:22:763(1):同Easy
    02:52:763(5):重复+1
    03:22:383(1):上一格
[Hard+]

我看不算太难 要不直接叫Hard算了 :D

  • 00:50:105(7):结尾处+Finish
    01:19:915(2):对称一下
    01:37:573—01:42:130 :加Break
    02:10:991(4):开头处加Finish
    02:30:738(1):加Finish
    03:26:940(2,3):距离太近
    03:46:497(1):结尾处加Finish

好图好图 ~—~

@STAR@ + *KUDOSU STAR*
Topic Starter
owl13
Thank you , 很好,把你九成的建議都接受了 :)

本來真的是Hard+的,只是因為....MAX分數太過高,不得不減小NOTE數量,令難度容易了不小,不過暫時就先叫HAED+吧....
roflninja
Hi,
everythings fine for me

[normal]
maybe hp drain -1 and od +1?

just that one suggestions. great map
Leorda
NI HAO

[General]
No sliderball? No cursortail? No fail-background? No tags?

[Easy]
00:37:573 (2) - Clap? When I added, It's seems nice, IMO
00:39:092 (4) - ^
00:40:611 (2) - ^
00:42:130 (4) - ^
00:43:649 (2) - ^
00:45:168 (4) - ^
00:56:940 (x) - Add note with clap?
01:05:674 (4) - New combo?
01:22:383 (4) - ^
01:28:459 (5) - New combo, it's too long for easy diff
01:34:535 (3) - New combo?
01:36:054 (1) - Move backward to red tick and extend?
02:06:054 (4) - New combo?
02:07:383 (6) - Add 1 repeating slider?
02:39:852 (5) - New combo, it's too long for easy diff

[Normal]
00:37:573 (3) - Clap? When I added, It's seems nice, IMO
00:39:092 (3) - ^
00:40:611 (3) - ^
00:42:130 (7) - ^
00:43:649 (3) - ^
00:45:168 (7) - ^
00:50:295 (6) - Not stack with 5 at end
02:10:991 (7) - New combo?
02:17:067 (5) - ^
02:34:535 (3) - Clap at end is not fit, IMO

[Hard+]
00:36:814 (1) - Add clap at end?
00:39:092 (4) - Clap?
00:40:611 (3) - Clap at start?
00:42:130 (7) - ^
00:43:649 (4) - Clap

Good song
(((((っ´Θ`)っ <- STAR
Topic Starter
owl13

roflninja wrote:

Hi,
everythings fine for me

[normal]
maybe hp drain -1 and od +1?

just that one suggestions. great map
thank you , i'm hp - 1 only

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[General]
No sliderball? No cursortail? No fail-background? No tags?

(((((っ´Θ`)っ <- STAR
Thank , [General] Yes i will add sliderball or cursortail, No fail-background No tags on song i think

suggestions is good , i use now , thank :)
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. Artist: Kosaka Yuumai
[Normal]:
  1. 03:14:788 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
[Hard+]:
  1. 01:31:497 (1) - 1 grid up
  2. 03:00:738 (4,5,1) - 间距有偏差
  3. 03:00:738 (4,5,1) - ^
  4. 03:03:776 (4,5,1) - ^
  5. 03:40:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
Topic Starter
owl13
貌似 Yuma Kosaka 也可以 , 不過算了 Kosaka Yuumai 也有看見 , 轉吧....

DONE ~ THANK~
Vikon
趁著wmf未知我蛇王之前,我要完成呢個mod 囧 

[General]
1) 有SB, 所以有.osb唔奇... 但我見到有2個 .osb 檔 囧
2) tag裏面或者加d野好d
3) 話說 scorebar-kidanger 呢個檔ge size會唔會大左少少,d 「!!」出晒界面了

[Easy]
00:15:168 - 加whistle?
00:17:826 (4) - 在reverse和end上加whistle?
01:03:396 (1) - 或移離01:01:117 (6) ?太近新手分唔到
01:30:928 - 加whistle?
02:53:52 - 我唔明呢個timing section有咩用-_-, 如果話想要多次煙花效果,或者係 02:53:143 加一timing section 終止左kiai time先.

[Normal]
00:16:307 (3,5) normal 有jump會唔會有d難-_=
00:15:168 - whistle~?
00:17:447 - ^
00:17:826 (6) 在reverse和end上 whistle~?
01:47:636 whistle?
01:57:700 (3,6,9,11) - ^
02:01:117 (1,2,3,4) - 在這4個slider的尾 都加whistle?

[Hard]
00:15:168 (7) - whistle?
00:18:016 whistle?
00:18:206 (1) - ^
01:40:421 把kiai time的終結移至 01:37:573? (與hitobject一齊終止好d)
01:44:978 whistle?
01:47:826 (4) - 在頭和reverse 加whistle?
01:52:763 (1,3) - 在2個slider的尾都加whistle?
02:53:52 - 與easy一樣,不明所以的timing section 囧
03:25:801 (1,2) - 使人混淆的spacing?
在03:41:371 (5), 03:42:130 (8) 的頭,03:42:510 (9)的尾 加whistle? 如此推類直到03:45:927 (7) ?
03:43:079 (10) - 在頭和reverse加whistle?
03:46:117 (8) - 加whistle , 另取消(9)的whistle?

nice map, owl已經成為一個不錯的mapper了 (淚目
Topic Starter
owl13
Edit Done , thank you :)
Pokie
General
  • - 統一 Stack Leniency
    - osb必須死 (我看不到任何需要用上osb的地方>_>)

Easy
  • - 1/2 slider 有點多._.
01:00:358 (5) - 結尾clap


Normal
  • 00:49:535 (5,6,1) - 有點難讀...試試通過移動前面的note來提高些這三個note的位置?
    01:24:282 - 加circle ._.?
    01:26:940 (5,7) - 同道理._.
    01:51:624 (5) - 移到01:52:383 (7) - 正下方
    01:56:560 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 這串1/2拍circle有點長0.0 把一些換成slider?
    02:10:991 (1) - 開頭finish


    Hard+
    [list:280db]
01:05:295 (9) - new combo
01:05:485 (1) - 取消new combo
01:22:193 (9) - 換成兩個1/2拍的circle?
03:57:700 (6) - 沒什麼必要的0.5x ._. 換掉如何?


Skin不錯看:D
Topic Starter
owl13

Pokie wrote:

General
- 統一 Stack Leniency
- osb必須死 (我看不到任何需要用上osb的地方>_>) 這東西我一直刪怎麼一直生>_>


Easy
- 1/2 slider 有點多._. slider 算easy了._.
01:00:358 (5) - 結尾clap k


Normal
  • 00:49:535 (5,6,1) - 有點難讀...試試通過移動前面的note來提高些這三個note的位置?
    01:24:282 - 加circle ._.?k
    01:26:940 (5,7) - 同道理._. 了解
    01:51:624 (5) - 移到01:52:383 (7) - 正下方 再調一下
    01:56:560 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 這串1/2拍circle有點長0.0 把一些換成slider? 改一點
    02:10:991 (1) - 開頭finish k


    Hard+
    [list:9412b]
01:05:295 (9) - new combo k
01:05:485 (1) - 取消new combo k
01:22:193 (9) - 換成兩個1/2拍的circle? 沒所謂這本來是用來嚇人的 lol
03:57:700 (6) - 沒什麼必要的0.5x ._. 換掉如何? 這音slider我不想太快 , 所以不改


Skin不錯看:D
Thank you ;)
banvi
Hello :D
Easy
fine
Normal
00:14:788 (6) 1 grid right (grid lv3)
00:36:814 (1,2) 2 grid down
00:37:573 (3,4) 1 grid down
00:40:231 (2) 1 grid left
00:40:611 (3) 2 grid left
00:42:130 (7) 1 grid down
00:42:890 (1,2,6) 1 grid up
00:55:041 (9) new combo?(this is long)
01:01:117 (9) ^
01:17:826 (6) 1 grid down
01:52:004 (6) 1 grid left
Hard+
01:03:396 (5) 1 grid right?
01:06:244 (4) 1 grid down
01:06:434 (5,6) 2 grid down
02:33:016 (5,6,7,8) 1 grid up
03:23:712 (1,2,3,4) 1 grid right & 1 grid down?
03:58:839 (2,3) 1 grid left
03:59:219 (4,5) 2 grid left

overall thsmap nice. great skin
star & gl ;)
Topic Starter
owl13
done now

thank you ;)
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
hitcircle有点妨碍视觉,以及不建议用灰色。都是个人意见。

[Easy]
00:42:130 (4,1) - spacing
1.00的Slider Velocity在拉直线时是不能完全齐平的。(0.96可以),所以比如01:16:307 (1,2,3,4) - 这里,建议手动对齐。
02:47:447 (3) - 这里就用1拍折返3次不好吗。。。或者为了位置,折返两次加一个原地circle?

[Normal]
00:37:953 (4,1) - ...em...
00:39:472 (5,1) - 如果说之前的还好意识到这个略有点过了。
01:06:434 (2) - 尾点往下拉一格是不是和1的平行能更好?
01:22:383 (4,1) - 啊哈哈。
02:31:497 (3,4) - 这里可能换成slider好些。因为之前这里并非这个节奏= =
03:00:928 (3,1) - 这里开始spacing很混乱。。怎么回事?这个距离突然变成1/2拍,之后又有是一拍的点。。。希望修一下

[Hard+]
没必要+,不过建议HP-1
01:01:117 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的whistle是忘掉了= =?
01:28:079 (10) - 位置有点奇怪。。。关了grid右调点把。。
01:52:004 (8,1) - 这个距离更容易理解为1/2
03:44:409 (3) - 左一格和1那里重合上比较好吧。。。当然2的位置也要配合下。。

这图不错呢。。。继续加油~
Topic Starter
owl13
THANK , 已經作出了部分修改
bearing019
Easy;

Map it all please.

Normal;

00:14:788 (6,1) - Spacing.

Hard+;

Rename to Hard?
01:02:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - What's with these jumps?
01:32:257 (2,3,4) - Spacing.
02:30:738 (1,2,3) - ^
02:46:687 (8,9) - ^
03:25:801 (1,2) - ^
03:27:320 (3,4) - ^
03:49:630 (10) - Delete.
03:55:801 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing.
Why is there 0.5x sections here? They aren't in the other difficulties, plus they don't make a lot of sense... I'll star once you've had a think about it.
Topic Starter
owl13

DiamondCrash wrote:

Easy;

Map it all please. NO, Full i think this is bored

Normal;

00:14:788 (6,1) - Spacing. done

Hard+;

Rename to Hard?
01:02:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - What's with these jumps? so it is hard+ , I don"t want too easy :roll:
01:32:257 (2,3,4) - Spacing. K
02:30:738 (1,2,3) - ^ K
02:46:687 (8,9) - ^ K
03:25:801 (1,2) - ^ K
03:27:320 (3,4) - ^ K
03:49:630 (10) - Delete. OK
03:55:801 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing. I will keep this
Why is there 0.5x sections here? They aren't in the other difficulties, plus they don't make a lot of sense... I'll star once you've had a think about it. Fix here to 1x now.
Krisom
Sorry, I "kinda" skipped this one because I did not like the song :(

I'm saying "kinda" because, well, I am posting here and I actually had a look at all the difficulties.

Everything looks pretty solid, specially Normal, I'm just sad about Easy not really being an easy because, well, It feels like a normal to me, though you may want a second opinion. I think that removing some notes at Easy (transforming some sliders into just one long slider, for example) would make it much easier, and I'm sure that you can map something solid and easier than that.

Star
Topic Starter
owl13
ok thank , i made more easy for [easy] now
wmfchris
"_summer"seems strange, I don't know the song name ._.

[hard]
0:43:459 (3) down half grid
0:48:966 (5) spacing
1:06:434 (5) left 1 grid
1:18:396 (6,1,2,3) not symmetrical, (6,1)different from (1,2)... try to move (1,2,3) up a bit?
1:26:940 (5,6) (5) left 1 grid, (6) right 1 grid
2:30:738 (1) right 2 grid

need re-snapping??

star
Topic Starter
owl13
fixed thank :)
YGOkid8
General:
- Maximum kbps for audio is 192kbps. Yours is 219kbps. Get this fixed first, and I'll continue modding.
Topic Starter
owl13
Ok i fix it now thank :)

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
- Maximum kbps for audio is 192kbps. Yours is 219kbps. Get this fixed first, and I'll continue modding.
YGOkid8
Just realised map is in violation of modding queue rules:

YGOkid8 wrote:

3c. 3 Difficulties ~ under 3:00 - 3:30 minutes
please read next time.
Topic Starter
owl13
yes i know , i not know are you consideration break time or not , so if you no want to mod , you can skip it thx
jericho2442
mp3 is pretty much a vbr 192 so seems fine

Easy

01:01:117 - add a note here and it makes the flow a lot better :)
01:33:016 (1) - remove this combo, runs smoother without it
02:45:928 (1) - remove this new combo so that you are consistent with your pattern
02:47:447 - a note here works great

Normal
00:41:371 (5) - new combo to follow your pattern
00:44:409 (5) - same
01:28:839 (2,3) - this spacing is very weird, but tbh it does work and have a nice flow so i wont complain ;)
01:52:763 (8) - this should have a new combo for your pattern right?
02:20:105 (1,2,3,4) - maybe point the sliders like this, looks better
02:35:105 (4) - add a new combo here or remove the one at 02:32:067 (1) either way works good and keeps it consistent
(suggestion) 02:52:004 (3) - new combo here
02:58:079 - add break time like the other diffs

Hard
01:13:839 (2,3) - spacing, this jump dont really work, move these closer like the rest of the pattern
01:34:535 (2,3,4) - plays nicer close rather than a jump
03:20:674 (4) - how about making this slider as long as the one at 03:17:636 (3) makes more sence to the music, and also flows abit better
03:55:801 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern might look nice, but the anti jumps in it really really dont play good, please give this all the same spacing

-----------------------------------

hmmm i really likes these maps, they was fun, nice job :)
Topic Starter
owl13

jericho2442 wrote:

hmmm i really likes these maps, they was fun, nice job :)
Fixed now , Thank you very much :)
James2250
Start kiai time on the notes themselves, not on the blue ticks before them. Same for ending them.
The 'star' in folder will only effect the stars on the outside of the beatmap, do you need it?
Is the combo burst designed to face that way? (check in test)
Try and keep kiai time the same on every difficulty
Delete 100g from folder, it will never be used

Easy:
01:00:438 (2,3,1) - spacing
02:46:008 (4,5,1) - ^

Normal:
00:12:592 (1) - resnap
00:21:704 (3) - clap sounds out of place
00:46:008 (1) - follow clap rhythm on this too?
03:16:387 (1) - extend to white tick
03:19:425 (3) - ^
03:43:729 (6) - new combo

Hard:
Don't have kiai during a break
00:12:580 (1) - resnap
01:02:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - keep spacing slightly more equal
02:01:577 (6,1) - jump doesn't really fit
02:18:286 (8,1) - move further apart
02:38:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kind of odd spacing but I guess it can pass
03:23:033 (5,1) - space further?
03:33:096 (4,5) - spacing
03:44:489 (3) - semi hidden repeat
03:48:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - keep spacing equal?

Nicely done maps, just some small things to fix~~
Star'ed
Topic Starter
owl13

James2250 wrote:

Nicely done maps, just some small things to fix~~
Star'ed
OK I Fixed now , thank you :)
aesopl19193
all comments are suggestion only, feel free to ignore them

[General]
感覺NOTE有點花..

[Hard]
01:33:666 (x) - add a note?
01:59:678 (7) - clap at the second?
02:00:438 (x) - add a silder end at 02:00:628
02:01:957 (2,5) - whistle?
02:08:413 (2,3,4,5) - like this?
03:32:716 (3) - clap

[normal]

03:36:703 (X) - add a note
03:39:172 - like this?

[Easy]
01:44:868 (5) - delete the note
01:48:286 (x) - like this?

Good mapset, 但音樂玩起來有點悶
star


Topic Starter
owl13
some look is good , i edited some now , thank
yaya
feels good.
bubbled
Dotsu
希望这张图能早日Rank掉哈 :D
Topic Starter
owl13
THANK :)
Kyonko Hizara
:)
ztrot
pew! pop! the offset is a tad off, 12,582 works better.... pm me right away after this fix I want to rebubble this and I've EVEN lined up another
BAT to look at it afterwards seeing as you have been waiting so nicely :p
Topic Starter
owl13
done , thank :)
ztrot
no problem
James2250

ztrot wrote:

I've EVEN lined up another BAT to look at it afterwards seeing as you have been waiting so nicely :p
~

Just some general comments

-Seeing as almost everything in your map has a blue color tone to it why not skin the "sliderfollowcircle" in a similar way too?
-Not going to ask you to do it now but in future try to map all of your difficulties to the same place (including Easy)
-Might want to make your spinner metre a slightly darker color so it stands out against the background more
-Can't decide which way the combo burst looks better facing..so I guess it can stay like that
-Might as well end the final spinner at the same place on the last 2 difficulties?

The maps all look good, call me back after fixes and I will rank~
Topic Starter
owl13

James2250 wrote:

ztrot wrote:

I've EVEN lined up another BAT to look at it afterwards seeing as you have been waiting so nicely :p
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Just some general comments

-Seeing as almost everything in your map has a blue color tone to it why not skin the "sliderfollowcircle" in a similar way too?
-Not going to ask you to do it now but in future try to map all of your difficulties to the same place (including Easy)
-Might want to make your spinner metre a slightly darker color so it stands out against the background more
-Can't decide which way the combo burst looks better facing..so I guess it can stay like that
-Might as well end the final spinner at the same place on the last 2 difficulties?

The maps all look good, call me back after fixes and I will rank~
ok

i add sliderfollowcircle now,
i Edit the final spinner end on same place
And i Edit spinner metre slightly darker

i thank this is ok now, Thank you ;)
ztrot
/me pokes James2250 AHEM
James2250
Hum.......I suggest you get someone to double check your offset (or ask ztrot to make sure)

It seems kind of off to me (Alace recommends +15)
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