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IOSYS - Marisa Stole The Precious Mahjong Things

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Entozer
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, May 18, 2010 at 1:21:56 PM

Artist: IOSYS
Title: Marisa Stole The Precious Mahjong Things
Source: Touhou
BPM: 170
Filesize: 8294kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3.57 stars, 135 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 954 notes)
  3. Normal (4.94 stars, 400 notes)
  4. SHD (4.77 stars, 1272 notes)
  5. Super Easy (1.44 stars, 81 notes)
Download: IOSYS - Marisa Stole The Precious Mahjong Things
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Strongest map. Cirno can FC this.

is SHD and Hard approvable?

(I'm guesssing SHD isn't so:) would it get past the radar if I make it a tag4 diff?

About the title: Marisa stole the precious mahjong things OR Marisa tanked my score with an incredible hand?

Any suggestions would be appreciated, no matter what it is.


I don't (at most) care on what will happen to this beatmap. I expect lots of wtf, though. This song has been haunting me and I can't work on earth quake.

EDIT: (Some) Ctb players will love SHD... at least until they reach the hyperdash part.
Shohei Ohtani
The official title of "Marisa Tanked My Score With An Incredible Hand" :3~
TheVileOne
In General

Make Super Easy the Easy mode, Easy the normal mode, Normal the hard mode, and Hard, the insane mode. Normal cannot be 4.93 stars.

Super easy and easy shouldn’t be more than half as short as the rest of the difficulties. This is much too short and there is no reason for it. I don’t star maps that have easy diffs more than half as short as the other difficulties.

Super Easy [Easy]

It feels like it ends much too short. All the best parts of the song are left out.


00:26:411 (3,4,5) – If these are vocal notes. 4 belongs on the previous red tick and 5 doesn’t fit in the ½ snap.I suggest that you put both of them on the previous red tick since they aren’t doing any good appearing after the sound.


Easy [Normal]

Same thing as easy. It is just not right to end it so early in the song. I feel scammed out of quality. If I were a BAT I wouldn’t rank such a travesty.

00:10:882 (7) – This note really sounds awkward by itself. It should be a new combo. Try to map the vocals a bit after this so that it doesn’t sound like an empty note with an awkward pause after it.

00:15:823 (2,3) – These belong on the previous red ticks.

00:49:882 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) – These notes aren’t straight. Fix this by moving the notes to the left until they are straight.

00:53:235 (3) – Starts on the previous red tick. Should be similar in length as note 4 in the combo. The length is not really an issue.


SHD

00:10:882 (13) – I can tell just by looking at the speed of this note that the slider velocity is too high. Tone it down.

00:20:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22) – This can be broken down into smaller combos.

00:29:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) – Combo is to high. Unrankable. Split it into smaller combos.


00:32:057 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – This is impossible. Remap.

00:35:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) – Again you can’t have combos over 20 or it wont be rankable. Split every stack into a separate combo.


00:37:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) – Split into new combos. The beat changes within this. There is no reason to keep the combo going.

00:46:881 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) – Unrankable combo


00:51:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) – Unrankable

Okay ‘I think I’ve made enough examples about that. You should keep your combos ideally under 15.


01:12:644 (17,18) – Sliders are hidden. Unrankable.

01:18:820 (11) – New combo. The snap changes,

01:24:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – Sort of a random pattern. It doesn’t look like parts of the rest of the map. Not entirely wrong, but I don’t like it.

01:29:938 (23) – Confusing slider. I believe it will be unrankable. You can’t tell which way it’s going to go in the minute amount of time you have to hit it.


01:32:937 (10,11,12,13) – Confusing. It doesn’t follow the beat and it should be remapped.

01:35:584 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^ These are more indications that the slider velocity is too high.


01:37:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) – This is too extreme when there is only two colors in the palate. This will not do at all.

01:44:231 (10,11,12,13,14) – More confusing sliders that don’t follow the beat at all.

01:45:113 (14) – Slider point is hidden. Unrankable.

01:47:319 (12,13,14,15,16,17) – Yea about that? This should be more consistant. Although it’s snapped right, the pattern needs to stay the same but the angles of the sliders changes.


02:12:113 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) – Again more of those sliders.

02:51:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) – Not gonna get away with this.

02:54:817 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - …..


03:01:170 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) – Way too confusing!!!!!

03:17:582 (2) – Hidden slider. Unrankable.

03:18:287 (2) - ^

IMO this should never be ranked or approaved or anything. It needs to be completely remapped. When you do remap it, add more breaks. You’re absolutely beyond insane to map that without breaks.


Normal [Hard]

01:44:058 (1) – Cut back this spinner.

01:45:647 (1) – This belongs on the previous white tick where the spinner ended.


(This is all I’m doing after reviewing the last difficulty.)


Hard[Insane]

00:33:292 (1) – Hidden slider. Unrankable. Plus shouldn’t be a new combo.

Okay that’s really all I’m doing. I don't want to listen to this song ever again.
Topic Starter
Entozer
TheVileOne: Editing. Thanks for your hard work. Really. You survived that?

I will fix the other diffs as soon as I get on my computer.

TheVileOne wrote:

In General

Make Super Easy the Easy mode, Easy the normal mode, Normal the hard mode, and Hard, the insane mode. Normal cannot be 4.93 stars.

Super easy and easy shouldn’t be more than half as short as the rest of the difficulties. This is much too short and there is no reason for it. I don’t star maps that have easy diffs more than half as short as the other difficulties. [Entozer: I'll change it, but not now.]

Easy [Normal]
00:10:882 (7) – This note really sounds awkward by itself. It should be a new combo. Try to map the vocals a bit after this so that it doesn’t sound like an empty note with an awkward pause after it.
00:15:823 (2,3) – These belong on the previous red ticks.
00:49:882 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) – These notes aren’t straight. Fix this by moving the notes to the left until they are straight.
00:53:235 (3) – Starts on the previous red tick. Should be similar in length as note 4 in the combo. The length is not really an issue.
[Entozer: Fixed.]

SHD

You’re absolutely beyond insane to map that without breaks. [Entozer: thank you. SHD is a joke (or is it?) I'll change and re-map SHD when the time comes.]

Normal [Hard]

01:44:058 (1) – Cut back this spinner.
01:45:647 (1) – This belongs on the previous white tick where the spinner ended.
[Entoer: Fixed.]

Hard [Insane]

00:33:292 (1) – Hidden slider. Unrankable. Plus shouldn’t be a new combo.
[Entozer: Fixed.]

Okay that’s really all I’m doing. I don't want to listen to this song ever again. [Entozer: ok thanks again. :­)]
h3k1ru
:3
TheVileOne
I might mod the rest. I've gotten over the shock of that one difficulty.
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. these 2 combo colors are very alike. make them a little different
  2. the background's size is larger than 1024x768, do some changes
  3. remove the .osb file and do a full submit
[Super Easy]:
  1. Fine
[Easy]:
  1. Fine
[SHD]:
  1. OA10?
[Normal]:
  1. 01:09:470 (T) - add a note here
  2. 01:18:999 (T) - ^
  3. 01:20:443 (T) - ^
  4. 01:20:764 (T) - ^
  5. 01:20:941 (T) - ^
  6. 01:21:029 (T) - ^
  7. 01:39:823 (16) - new combo
  8. 01:41:588 (T) - add note
  9. 01:41:941 (T) - ^
  10. 01:42:117 (T) - ^
[Hard]:
  1. OA9 is too high.
  2. It's total score make it can only be approved.
Topic Starter
Entozer

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. these 2 combo colors are very alike. make them a little different [Entozer: I'll find a color.]
  2. the background's size is larger than 1024x768, do some changes [Entozer: kk.]
  3. remove the .osb file and do a full submit[Entozer: I was pretty sure I deleted it the first time.]


[Normal]:
  1. 01:09:470 (T) - add a note here
  2. 01:18:999 (T) - ^
  3. 01:20:443 (T) - ^
  4. 01:20:764 (T) - ^
  5. 01:20:941 (T) - ^
  6. 01:21:029 (T) - ^
  7. 01:39:823 (16) - new combo
  8. 01:41:588 (T) - add note
  9. 01:41:941 (T) - ^
  10. 01:42:117 (T) - ^
[Entozer: Thanks.]

[Hard]:
  1. OA9 is too high.
  2. It's total score make it can only be approved.
Astom
[General]
-Delete IOSYS - Marisa Stole The Precious Mahjong Things (Entozer).osb and full submit
-Change name of Hard to Insane, Normal to Hard and Easy to Normal.
-U diff spread is E - N - I - I - I (easy,normal,insane,insane,insane), U only can have 2 insane for song except if one of them is goin for aproval and u need ask for that to BATs. (And it's a pain rank-aproval a song)

Uhmm.. sry I don't like songs long and hard xD but I don't see something bad in Super Easy and Easy.
Topic Starter
Entozer
Ah. thanks. I don't really know why but I'm pretty sure I deleted it AGAIN last time. the .osb.

Three people said that I should change diff name. I guess I should now.Edit: I need opinions.

I wil make Super Easy[Easy] and Easy[Normal] The same length as Normal[Hard]. Edit: but not now. lol.

SHD will become TAG4, but not now.
Dusty

Astom wrote:

-U diff spread is E - N - I - I - I (easy,normal,insane,insane,insane), U only can have 2 insane for song except if one of them is goin for aproval and u need ask for that to BATs. (And it's a pain rank-aproval a song)
That's not how it works, there's only 2 "Insane" difficulties in this set, [Hard] and [SHD].

The squares in the pending beatmap browser are inaccurate and don't matter at all. D: jeez

SHD still has to go for approval, though, it's ridiculously hard and has 65 million max score -_-;
Sakura
[General]
Lazy mapping FTL, you know unless your Super Easy, Easy and Normal are fully mapped this will be very hard to get ranked. it has happened before
Both combo colors are too similar, consider changing one of them, and maybe adding more if you want

[Super Easy]
Stack leniency 1?... full stack lenience will tend to look ugly in the end, up 2 you if you want to keep, however please take in mind that 0 or very low leniency is unrankable, try to stick to the default or close to it.
This isnt even easy... some notes are too cluttered to be readable by a newbie, also many sliders dont make sense at all with the song, aditionally:
00:12:294 (1) - This and all sliders with a really small turn at the end... could look better, make them turn earlier, or just dont turn at all

[Easy]
Stack leniency 1?... full stack lenience will tend to look ugly in the end, up 2 you if you want to keep, however please take in mind that 0 or very low leniency is unrankable, try to stick to the default or close to it.
Again, there are many notes and sliders that make no sense with the music, are you mapping to the lyrics or the background instruments?, please stick to one of theese :<
00:24:294 (2) - A perfect example of the stack leniency uglifying your map, look how it looks in gameplay: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9911

[SHD]
FIRST THING OD 10 IS HELL, DONT USE IT!!! DO NOT USE IT AT ALL!!!

[Normal]
Again it doesnt seem to be following the song well, i suggest remapping

[Hard]
No words... can express what i feel from playing this map... it's beyond... humanity...

[Overall]
Yeah it needs lots of fixing and remapping and also, fix that ENIII diff spread
Astom

Dusty wrote:

Astom wrote:

-U diff spread is E - N - I - I - I (easy,normal,insane,insane,insane), U only can have 2 insane for song except if one of them is goin for aproval and u need ask for that to BATs. (And it's a pain rank-aproval a song)
That's not how it works, there's only 2 "Insane" difficulties in this set, [Hard] and [SHD].

The squares in the pending beatmap browser are inaccurate and don't matter at all. D: jeez

SHD still has to go for approval, though, it's ridiculously hard and has 65 million max score -_-;
matters because some BATs unrank for that :roll: well it's only a warning
Leorda
Kumusta!

First of all

Entozer wrote:

Edit: but not now. lol.

but not now.
Entozer, if you say not now, all modder will be frustrate you. You have to fix it, otherwise you'll be trouble. Please!

[File]
Your bg (1269443516318.jpg) is too large, the maximum of bg must 1024x768 (current 1398x767)

[Super Easy]
I think the Super Easy must below 1,00 of Star Rating, lol

00:05:588 (x) - Add note?
00:12:294 (1) - Remove one point (Click the slider, right-click the point)
00:15:117 (1) - ^
00:17:941 (1) - ^
00:26:411 (3) - New combo
00:32:058 (3) - ^
00:52:529 (6) - ^

00:57:470 (1) - Add a finish?

[Easy]
00:33:294 (2) - Move forward to white tick and cut short to white tick
00:52:352 (2) - ^
00:53:058 (3) - ^
00:53:764 (4) - ^


[SHD]
Oh God, OD 10!!!! Are you crazy!!!~ I know you want this diff is approve, but don't get do the crazy. This diff is more dificult than Lesjuh's TAG......l

00:14:410 (15) - New combo
00:17:234 (16) - ^
00:22:175 (13) - ^
00:30:645 (13) - ^
00:32:057 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - You should remap this, it's hard to read
00:48:998 (9) - New combo
00:50:410 (25) - ^
00:51:381 (34) - Unsnapped lol
00:54:644 (9) - New combo
00:56:056 (25) - ^
01:08:762 (1) - This slider is hard to read
01:11:938 (15) - New combo
01:12:291 (16,17,18,19,20) - This slider is hard to read
01:23:232 (14) - New combo
01:25:526 (8) - ^
01:29:938 (23) - Remap this, lol
01:39:819 (16) - New combo
01:41:231 (24) - ^
01:45:113 (14) - Hidden 0.0
01:52:525 (24) - New combo
01:55:348 (8) - Unrankable Slider LOL (Don't let endpoint overlap startpoint, it could be confuse)
01:58:260 (6) - New combo
01:59:672 (11) - ^
02:00:996 (16) - ^
02:03:731 (6) - ^
02:05:231 (12) - ^
02:06:643 (19) - ^
02:09:466 (17) - ^
02:22:525 (13) - ^
02:24:554 (21) - ^
02:30:819 (17) - ^
02:36:113 (9) - ^
02:40:525 (29) - ^
02:41:230 (31) - ^
02:48:817 (11) - ^
02:57:464 (13) - ^
03:00:287 (10) - ^
03:04:699 (18) - ^
03:27:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These 1/8 stream is unrankable

[Normal]
00:33:470 (9) - New combo
01:29:941 (1) - Delete the spinner, the 01:29:058 (10) at the end and the spinner is having same tick.....
01:35:588 (9) - New combo
01:41:588 (9) - ^


[Hard]
00:48:998 (9) - New combo
00:54:644 (9) - ^
01:07:350 (9) - ^
01:11:938 (15) - ^
01:28:526 (15) - ^
01:29:938 (23) - ^
01:52:526 (24) - ^
01:55:350 (8) - Unrankable Slider LOL (Don't let endpoint overlap startpoint, it could be confuse)
02:24:556 (22) - New combo
02:30:819 (17) - ^
02:36:466 (10) - ^
02:40:525 (29) - ^
02:46:524 (13) - ^
02:50:405 (18) - ^


Not bad
STAR
Topic Starter
Entozer
About the length problem, I posted on 2 mod queues that has a rule about length, and increasing it would technically disobey their length rule. Editing.

Done.

About easy: I changed the slider to my suiting, if that's okay.
About SHD Sliders: I'll find a way.

About the heart slider: I'll add a direction...?
Natteke
You should really drop mapping
Heatherfield

Natteke wrote:

You should really drop mapping
i accidently found this map in my osu, and i played it, and i was scared
and i was just about to say that!!
Frc
You should totally try to rerank this, it totally fits today mapping standards :D
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