1. DC's Easy (1,43 stars, 110 notes)
2. Garven's Normal (3,71 stars, 189 notes)
3. Insane (4,94 stars, 327 notes)

• • You should make another diff
  • Delete the .osb, then "Full submission"
  • The mp3 you are using is a lot longer than the part which is mapped. Consider cropping it to reduce filesize

• • 00:12:034 (5,1) - Spacing
  • 00:14:508 (4,1) - ^
  • 00:16:982 (4,1) - ^

• • Remove countdown
  • Add kiai
  • 00:29:663 (1,2) - Delete these sliders and add a stream
  
  
  
  
  • 00:45:745 (5,6) - ^
  • 00:48:219 (5,6) - ^
  • 01:21:622 (1) - End this slider here 01:22:085 (red tick)
  • ^ 01:22:395 (red tick)
  • 01:22:781 (4) - Move this circle here 01:22:704 (red tick)
  • 01:23:168 (1,2,3) - Delete these sliders and add a stream
  • 02:14:585 (6,7) - ^

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Delete .osb and full submit.
-- Cut the mp3 if your not going to use the end.
-- Parts of this should be in 1/3 and 1/6
-- It's become the new trend to add Easy difficulties, maybe make one? XD


Hard:

-- The beggining starts off a bit loud maybe reduce the volume a little until about 00:19:766 (1) -

00:06:312 (5) - Should probably be snapped to 1/3 (you can't notice that much in game I guess...)
00:08:477 (8) - ^
00:21:158 (5) - ^
00:21:467 (7) - ^
00:23:323 (4) - ^ etc a lot of your 1/2 beats should be landing on 1/3 instead. Checked the whole map for 1/3. Thanks alot. Sounds a lot better :D
00:29:663 (1,2) - First play through I thought wth, now I can do it fine. I hope its more playable now. Changed the part after sliders to 1/3
00:42:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This bit doesn't play to well imo, the double stacks get tiring. But I like it :o
00:45:745 (5,6) - ^ 5 and 6 is fast but catching 00:46:055 (7) - after this is a pain. We need re-playing. Changed to 1/3
01:05:384 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - I though the pattern at 01:00:591 (7,8,9,10,11) - played better. The circles fit the music in this part alot better imo
01:06:467 (11) - New combo. Fixed
01:21:620 (1,2,3,4) - 1/6 (Make sure the slider ends hit 1/6 and 01:22:754 (4) - needs snapping to 1/6 to)
01:30:281 (5,6) - 1/3
01:31:364 (7) - ^ All fixed
01:52:240 (9) - New combo. Fixed
02:11:106 (7) - ^ Fixed
02:14:585 (6,7,8,9,10) - 1/3
02:16:832 - ^
02:19:250 (2) - ^
02:19:766 (3,4,5,6) - ^ All fixed

Nice diff, but watch out for the 1/3 beats it's deceptive because it plays fine, but I'm certain a lot of this should be in 1/3.

Good overall :D
~ Star.

Sakura301 wrote:

[Overall]
The mapping ends earlier than the mp3, please consider cutting it

[Garven's Normal]
No problems

[Hard]
Ehh use more combos? I was thinking of tag mode when I decided to make the combos long. In 2-player tag its more fun with longer combos
00:07:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Why do u have to make stuff so confusing ;_; but no problem here anyways Changed due to 1/3. BUT I LOVED how it was before. Now it sounds better though
01:00:591 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^ I love it :3
01:54:405 (2,4,5) - umm is this allowed? X_X I guess it might be kinda confusing. But it suits the music pretty well, so no change.

H-boy wrote:

First of all
del .osb and full submit

Normal
Nice~

Hard
00:04:921~00:09:560 reduce volume Done

00:19:147(7) - new combo? Naww
02:20:694(6) - spacing Well the spacing is still jumpy but I rearranged the circles becouse it was silly.

star~

1. Set the Preview Point at the last part with Kiai Time?

1. Nothing here

1. Add claps on notes where the bg music has claps?

1. Those 1/3 beats sound off

Symbolic wrote:

- in General

1. Set the Preview Point at the last part with Kiai Time? Done

- DC's Easy

1. Nothing here

- Garven's Normal

1. Add claps on notes where the bg music has claps?

- Hard

1. Those 1/3 beats sound off :( Whaaat? I highly disagree :O

Starred *

Lokamp wrote:

DC's Easy
01:58:170 (2) - no clap here
02:20:748 (spinner) - start it on 02:21:057 (same end point)

Garven's Normal
02:18:583 (1) - finish here

Hard
00:09:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Refine better hitsoundplacing, please... it changes VERY often, sometimes without following the song's rhythm... Fixed

The guest modes don't have too much problems... it's your Hard mode that makes me unsure... apart the repeated 1/3 beat sections, some of the short, rapid sliders with crepeats make the map's song annoying tyo follow... try with some hitsounds and spacing re-arrangement, the rest was fine. I don't understand. If sliders with repeats are the problem, how is spacing and hitsounding going to fix it? I don't even know what you mean so I guess I won't be doing anything to fix it here D:
Have a star!

LKs wrote:

all diffs

kiai start at [02:13:654]
kiai end at [02:23:551]

haha i like the song~

1. Delete osb.file then full submit, before submit, make sure osb.file is DO deleted
2. [Garven's Normal] has a different previewtime to other 2 diff., please use same one

1. OA and HP drain rate seem a little high for a Easy diff. Fine for me then
2. 00:49:511 (S) - Finish
3. 00:59:407 (1) - Finish
4. 01:22:758 (1) - Ends here werid, try ends at 01:22:913
5. 01:26:624 (1) - ^, try ends at 01:27:861
6. 01:58:170 (2) - Remove clap
7. 02:10:232 (2) - Slider starts here, ends at 02:10:851, remove sliderslide sound, just keep the whistle on note

1. 00:39:614 (1) - Finish
2. 00:59:407 (1) - ^
3. 01:09:304 (1) - ^

1. 00:19:201 (7) - New combo better, here spacing changed too sudden
2. 00:30:129 (x) - Add a note seem better
3. 00:30:232 (4) - Remove whistle, add whistle at (5), (6), slider(7) and note (7), remove clap of (7)
4. 00:48:892 (5) - No clap
5. 00:49:511 (x) - Add a note here with finish more like a end
6. 00:59:407 (1) - Finish
7. 01:13:325 (4) - Spacing too far
8. 01:24:150 (3) - Finish
9. 01:29:098 (1) - Finish
10. 02:23:531 (S) - Finish

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. Delete osb.file then full submit, before submit, make sure osb.file is DO deleted I did that like 3 times.. Let's hope it works now.
2. [Garven's Normal] has a different previewtime to other 2 diff., please use same one fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:19:201 (7) - New combo better, here spacing changed too sudden Since you're the 3rd person to tell me this, i'll fix it.
2. 00:30:129 (x) - Add a note seem better Nahh
3. 00:30:232 (4) - Remove whistle, add whistle at (5), (6), slider(7) and note (7), remove clap of (7) Aww I don't understand. There is no clap in (7) and (7) can't be a slider and a note at the same time. I think you misspelled something
4. 00:48:892 (5) - No clap I want to have a clap there becouse theres a clap in previous (3)
5. 00:49:511 (x) - Add a note here with finish more like a end Don't feel very comfortable doing that. That is where it ends but its also where the next part starts. Where its currently ended, is like the beginning of the ending which is better imo.
6. 00:59:407 (1) - Finish Agreed
7. 01:13:325 (4) - Spacing too far Did that on purpose.. Changed the pattern though.
8. 01:24:150 (3) - Finish Agreed
9. 01:29:098 (1) - Finish Agreed
10. 02:23:531 (S) - Finish Oh my.. Can't believe I hadn't put a finish on that. Thanks

Nice map
double star

RandomJibberish wrote:

General
I think the BPM should be half what it is now, but I guess it doesn't matter

DC's Easy
02:20:748 (1) - I'd start this a beat later

Garven's Normal
I would up the OD and Drain rate to about half, but it's your call.

Hard:
00:31:418 (7,8,9) - I'd make these a straight line or smooth curve. Would rather not change it.
00:48:273 (5,6) - Make these 1/6 not 1/8. One could be shorter than the other or you could make them both have one repeat with a beat after Great
01:23:222 (1,2,3) - These sound much better 1/6 too. Great
01:46:418 (3) - Looks better like [urlhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7498]this[/url] Ooh, fixed.

Fabulous map, Star~

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Use 4,969 offset, it's a little off right now.

DC's Easy
Good job!

Garven's Normal
Mmm, nice

Hard
This is more of an Insane, really. Now that you mention it.. Okay, I will propably change it
00:31:418 (7) - This is out of time. It needs to be on 1/4, like the rest of the combo. Fixed
00:48:273 (5,6) - These are just silly... the player will find it very hard to judge when one slider ends and the next begins. Okay changed to just 1.
01:00:645 (7,8,9,10,11) - Raaagh I hate reverses like this. Just keeping the pattern flowing works so much better.
01:05:438 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ Meh.. I'll change it if I come up with a pattern or something
01:14:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Add some hitsounds to this combo, it feels empty. Done
01:27:475 (2) - Move back 1/4 and extend by 1/4
01:43:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - This whole section needs more hitsounds. Added some whistles but only few. Only in appropriate parts.
02:03:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Added like.. 3 claps? They fit though

Hehe that background is cuuute :3

Louis Cyphre wrote:

!Favourite game request maximum priority :D

Must
Should
Suggestion
Strange

[General]
Offset: 26 It doesn't make any difference so I will leave it

[DC's Easy]

01:21:676 - end this slider at 01:22:913 Done

[Normal]
00:40:310 - Add note Done

[Insane]
00:31:418 - new combo Fixed
00:34:975 - distance No
00:40:542 - ^
00:43:325 - new combo
00:48:273 - This slider sounds bad, hmm try to low volume of sound Ok
00:49:124 ~ 00:58:480 Fill this place with notes :3
01:05:438 - New combo Done
02:14:665 - these notes were placed by 1/3 (1/6) Snap Divisor, you can use them only when your BMP can divide by 3. (194/3 = 64,(3)) But they are perfect O_o Actually, the map is full of 1/6 :D

Nice Map. good luck :3
STAR!!!

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~DC's Easy~
No problems here~

~Garven's Normal~
No problems here~

~Insane~
01:18:583 (3) - Fix spacing? It's a bit unintuitive imo =x Tried to do some accelerating spacing. Fixed though. Too little space to make a nice acceleration.
01:31:263 (7) - This slider is kinda hidden because of (5) hitburst x.x Fixed

I love it o.o Awesome map!! *star* + *star*

Shinxyn wrote:

:D


Insane-
00:15:490 (3) - add whistle like combo before and after? No, I wanted it to be like this.
00:35:052 (2) - 1/3, not 1/4 >_<? Fixed
01:04:975 (4) - add finish? to sound like 01:00:026 (5) & 01:02:500 (4)? Added o/
01:17:036 (7) - add whistle to repeat? (to try to fill in hitsound gap...?) Added whistle to this and 6 of the same combo
01:44:871 (5) - 1/3 not 1/4? Oh.. Fixed :D
01:49:820 (1) - ^ ^
01:52:294 (1) - ^ (...most of these don't matter since they're sliders... I guess..) Still fixed. I didn't pay much attention since they sounded fine in 100% speed.
02:11:469 (2) - ^ ^
02:19:279 (2) - errrrr what? this is a 1/3 slider that's snapped to 1/4! basically this is "unsnapped"
Most of those "1/3 not 1/4" were sliders... so I don't mind letting those slide Fixed
Good~

Willing to Bubble~

Shinxyn wrote:

DC's-
01:26:625 (1) - hmm... either end this on a 1/1 or end it properly on the 1/3 sound it seems (01:27:758)... (this doesn't sound like 1/4 at all), preferably extend to the 1/1 to match 01:21:676 (1) Sure.
01:58:170 (2) - ? whistle AND clap? I don't think the clap was supposed to be here (the other notes that sound like this only has whistle) Good catch.
02:13:944 (1) - why not start the note on the kiai...? Why would you...?

Shinxyn wrote:

:D

Garven's-
01:16:418 (7) - this sounds like 1/3, not 1/4 :x Crap.
01:22:294 (2) - mmm, the beats are actually on 01:22:294 - 01:22:500 - 01:22:603 - 01:22:821.... (1/3)... this slider is 1/4 :< Crap crap.
01:27:706 (5) - actually starts on 1/3 Boooop.
Good~

DiamondCrash wrote:

Shinxyn wrote:

02:13:944 (1) - why not start the note on the kiai...? Why would you...?