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Aa! - First Kiss (Brazilian Mix)

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Eddycted
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Eddycted
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on woensdag 14 oktober 2009 at 19:56:57

Artist: Aa!
Title: First Kiss (Brazilian Mix)
BPM: 185
Filesize: 2820kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 392 notes)
  2. Normal (3,83 stars, 169 notes)
Download: Aa! - First Kiss (Brazilian Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Eddycted , edited 40 times in total.
minyeob
osu! Alumni
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minyeob
BPM: 185.10

370 is craaaaaazy

Offset: 426
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Really cool, please, finish the Insane \o/
And as a brazilian, I'm really happy with that song.
by the way, i wanna make a diff. Can i? o/ *star*
Eddycted
132 posts
Joined October 2008
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Eddycted

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Really cool, please, finish the Insane \o/
And as a brazilian, I'm really happy with that song.
by the way, i wanna make a diff. Can i? o/ *star*
Sure, go ahead!
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
00:48:83 (4) - Reverse, and change 00:49:15 (5) - to the new end point if u do.
01:19:96 (4) - Could you possibly put this on the grid? Move 01:19:64 (3,4,5) - all up to keep spacing.

And you're not finished? Coming along though. I'll star when more is complete, just lemme know in #mod
Eddycted
132 posts
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Eddycted

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

00:48:83 (4) - Reverse, and change 00:49:15 (5) - to the new end point if u do.
01:19:96 (4) - Could you possibly put this on the grid? Move 01:19:64 (3,4,5) - all up to keep spacing.

And you're not finished? Coming along though. I'll star when more is complete, just lemme know in #mod
Fixed, and thanks!
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Insane:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
00:05:69 (3) - I think it is illegal for the 300 of the 1 to cover up the repeat sign
00:09:08 - add a note for consistency?
00:45:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the dark blue combo color makes it pretty hard to see the approach circle on the black background, so it is pretty hard for me to read the stacks. Change the comobo color?

I am not sure if you plan to finish up the map or not, but the current ending is slightly abrupt.

Nice map so far. It was quite fun. Star.
Feel free to ask me to mod your other diffs when they come.
Eddycted
132 posts
Joined October 2008
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Eddycted

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Insane:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
00:05:69 (3) - I think it is illegal for the 300 of the 1 to cover up the repeat sign
00:09:08 - add a note for consistency?
00:45:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the dark blue combo color makes it pretty hard to see the approach circle on the black background, so it is pretty hard for me to read the stacks. Change the comobo color?

I am not sure if you plan to finish up the map or not, but the current ending is slightly abrupt.

Nice map so far. It was quite fun. Star.
Feel free to ask me to mod your other diffs when they come.
Fixed, and thanks!
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
Finally made it! Sorry took so long!

First note, I think the overall difficulty could be turned down by one notch, but it's your call. I understand why you did it being 185 BPM, but I'll reinforce this in a minute here.

00:00:34 (1,2) - Maybe make this and others similar a bit closer, 2 nudges or so on grid 3.
00:28:88 (1) - 00:36:34 (6) - Going back to my first comment, this section with the current overall difficulty is really confused, at least for me. It's hard to react to the jump backs and such because the notes come so fast.
01:25:31 (1,2) - Maybe make these regular sliders, not increased speed.

~Hitsound Suggestion~
01:38:93 (1,2,3,4) - Add volume intervals on these and put a whistle on 01:40:88 (4)

This was really epic lol.
Eddycted
132 posts
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Eddycted

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Finally made it! Sorry took so long!

First note, I think the overall difficulty could be turned down by one notch, but it's your call. I understand why you did it being 185 BPM, but I'll reinforce this in a minute here.

00:00:34 (1,2) - Maybe make this and others similar a bit closer, 2 nudges or so on grid 3.
00:28:88 (1) - 00:36:34 (6) - Going back to my first comment, this section with the current overall difficulty is really confused, at least for me. It's hard to react to the jump backs and such because the notes come so fast.
01:25:31 (1,2) - Maybe make these regular sliders, not increased speed.

~Hitsound Suggestion~
01:38:93 (1,2,3,4) - Add volume intervals on these and put a whistle on 01:40:88 (4)

This was really epic lol.
Fixed, also lowered overall difficulty.
Eddycted
132 posts
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Topic Starter
Eddycted
Resurrect, please. :)
Larto
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Larto
Revived!
happy30
Featured Artist
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Joined August 2008
happy30
Offset: 380 (yeah, +51 ms ._.)

[Normal]

the only problems are those 2x bpm sliders, I don't think they fit in a normal diff.

[Insane]

nothing.
Eddycted
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Eddycted
Fixed, thanks Happy30. :)
yaya
osu! Alumni
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yaya
overall of normal should be +1 .
nothing else .

insane .WTH :lol:
Eddycted
132 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
Eddycted

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

overall of normal should be +1 .
nothing else .

insane .WTH :lol:
Thanks, I'll take that as a compliment ;D
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
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RandomJibberish
Great map. I only have a few preference things...

Normal:

01:38:97 (1,2,3,4) - I love how this increases in volume, but it's not very noticable; Maybe you could make it increase a little more?
01:51:94 (7) - Again, great volume change, but I'd probably make it louder on the final note, rather than quieter. Maybe that's just me XD

Insane is making me want to commit suicide, but it looks fine when I watch it in the editor.

Star~
Eddycted
132 posts
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Topic Starter
Eddycted
Thanks, fixed! ^_^
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Kerensa
WARNING ~ i like this in the same pattern and allignment >< sorry - so it's ussualy all suggestions on s hould you should you not change it///

Normal:
00:02:97 [1] one tiny square down?
00:18:54 [1] one tiny square to the right.
* then foloow along with the pattern, the er.. the [2] overals with the last beat of the preivious combo, loosk weird.
00:46:75 [1] one tiny space gap?
00:56:16 [1]^
00:59:40 [6]^
01:34:43 [5] ^
01:37:02 [2] ^
01:41:56 [1] ^

*okies, you get what i mean, i'm nbot sure if this was done purposely, but i think it maeks it look funn y>< *

Insane:
OH GOD...
mhmm... nothing wrong here.. or my eyes just can't keep up with it - even when i put it in slow-motion

this song is so cool :) really like it

star star for you you

haisha_
Eddycted
132 posts
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Topic Starter
Eddycted
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
sorry this took so long

Normal
nice diff, just fix all breaks

Insane
hmm Bpm is different in this one, wonder if it's the same, just sped up
00:17:24 (3) - New combo

kk that's pretty much, not naziing, also Insane was awesome
Eddycted
132 posts
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Eddycted

EEeee wrote:

sorry this took so long

Normal
nice diff, just fix all breaks done

Insane
hmm Bpm is different in this one, wonder if it's the same, just sped up Yeah, it's double Normal's.
00:17:24 (3) - New combo Fixed

kk that's pretty much, not naziing, also Insane was awesome
Thanks EEeee! <3
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
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Mafiamaster
Great! Didn't see anything too wrong~
Just a few confusing patterns in Insane but a couple of play throughs will fix that~
Eddycted
132 posts
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Eddycted
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mismagius
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Mismagius
Overall
3 lead-in seconds? 2 looks good for me
LOUD hitsounds >.>'

Normal
nothing~

Insane
01:23:73 (11) - new combo

I like the map and the song!
[yeah, I'm brazilian.]
ShaggoN
689 posts
Joined September 2008
ShaggoN
[Normal]
Perfect :)
[Insane]
  1. 01:07:51 (1) - Not big deal, but it's hidden uder slider. Maybe flip whole combo vertically?
Awesome beatmap. And song is awesome too. :D Starrr
Eddycted
132 posts
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Eddycted
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
Insane
wow... a lot of chaos, but after playing it one more time is pretty fun.. good work

Normal
00:59:40 (6) - how about if you make this slider 1 beat length then repeat?
01:17:24 (4) - 1/2beat earlier, removing (3)
01:17:89 - if you do that, add note here
01:18:21 (5) - end this 1/2 beat earlier

cool map
star!
Eddycted
132 posts
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Eddycted
Fixed, thanks Lizbeth!
Armin
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Armin
-Normal

00:13:352 (5,6) Add two finish
00:17:244 Finish
00:21:136 Add a finish?
00:22:758 Remove the finish at the end and on the reverse arrow [00:22:920]
00:26:325 Add a finish
00:27:947 as in 00:22:758
00:34:109 (1,2,3,4) Finish at the start
00:36:704 (1,3,5,7) Finish
01:10:434 add a finish

-Hard
00:10:352 Remove this break o_o'
00:14:861 ^
00:21:136 Add a finish
00:22:271 (x) add a hitcircle
00:23:082 Add a finish
00:26:325 ^
00:27:623 (1,4) ^
00:34:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) Add hitsounds like in 00:28:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6)
00:36:704 (1,3,5,7,9) Add a finish
01:07:839 (2,6, 10) ^
Eddycted
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Eddycted
Fixed, thanks!
Alice
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Alice
Hi Eddycted (:

Normal
00:39:46 (ohi) - break? I more feel like a spinner around there.
awesome damnit

Hard
00:39:46 (ohi) - break? I more feel like a spinner around there.
awesome damnit

no I didn't copy/pasted ):

Ok, ok, star. <3
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Comments and suggestions, not orders

Normal
SPOILER

Note: Timing > Snap Divisor > 1/4 beats

00:20:650 : Add a beat here.
00:23:244 : Add a beat here.
00:54:21 (7) : Extend this slider to the blue tick.
00:55:352 : Add a beat here.

Insane
SPOILER

00:16:10 (2) : Make this slider repeat one more time.
00:41:89 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) : I dislike how all these notes are all in the corner.
Eddycted
132 posts
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Topic Starter
Eddycted
Fixed, thanks AM and Loogie!
Azure_Kite
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Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
No Problems found

[Insane]
Whoa.... but no problems found

Awesome song, awesome insane. Starred :D.
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
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minyeob
This is awesome~
Nice work!
Eddycted
132 posts
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Topic Starter
Eddycted
Thanks Azure and minyeob! :)
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
No problem for me~
Star~
Larto
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Joined June 2008
Larto
This is what you do before school. Rank maps.
NoHitter
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NoHitter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Larto
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Larto
I uploaded one. no idea why it didn't show up
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