This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 26 de septiembre de 2009 at 11:34:06 p.m.

Artist: Yuria
Title: You (TV size)
Source: Shuffle!
Tags: Yuria you shuffle Shuffle!
BPM: 130
Filesize: 19239kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Asa (Asa) [HARD] (4,63 stars, 152 notes)
2. Kaede (Kaede) [INSANE] (4,86 stars, 173 notes)
3. Lisianthus (Sia) [EASY] (1,31 stars, 83 notes)
4. Nerine (Rin) [NORMAL] (2,77 stars, 88 notes)
5. Primula (Rim) [NORMAL+] (4,13 stars, 123 notes)
6. Shuffle! (5 stars, 211 notes)

Download: Yuria - You (TV size)
Download: Yuria - You (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first Beatmap ^^

It's Shuffle! 's opening hope you like it ^^

Edit:
Update 10 (2nd Sep 2009)

*Changed video's codec and resolution (now 704x396), now it looks better and weights less
*Added a skin due to the extra MBs of the video change

Note: people who downloaded this beatmap before the 2nd of Sep may have to download the beatmap again

Update 11 (4th Sep 2009)

*HolyBoy's fixes

Update 12 (27th Sep 2009)

*Nothing, just keeping it alive

Good Beatmap.
The first slider are really original

I like very much, maybe you can do the Insane mode more difficult. But it's not necessary

Good song, I really like it, and it's very well mapped. The sliders at the beginning are great, it surprised me a lot when I first played the song and I started laughing because I thought it was a very good idea. You definitely get a star from me .

I'm new to modding, but here are my thoughts.

Overall comments: Good song choice and creative sliders. Timing is more or less ok, but there are some notes in weird places (timing-wise) and you need to use distance snap more carefully, as some notes are spaced incorrectly.

Easy
Sometimes, in general, I found your choice of which notes to map odd; the notes don't always flow very intuitively. Still good overall, though it could use tweaking.
~1:10:75 (3): This seems off-beat. If it was intentional, it doesn't seem like it belongs there, especially on an Easy map where everything should be on a simple beat. I think it should be re-aligned to the white tick just before it.

Normal
0:31:32 (8): The spacing between this and 7 is the same as the spacing between 6 and 7, but the distance between 7 and 8 should be longer because of the longer time between the notes. Re-check your distance snapping.
0:41:82 (1): The endpoint of this slider is about a 1/8th tick too early.
1:08:59 (2): It feels to me like this slider should start a 1/4th tick later. It should end at about 1:09:74 (white tick), too.
1:23:36 (2): This would sound better if it started 1/4th of a tick later. Also, the endpoint is 1/8th of a tick early.
1:25:44 (1): This spinner's ending is about 1/8th of a tick off. It was fine on Easy though.

Normal+
0:10:67 (1): The ending should probably be on a white tick.
0:25:21 (4): If this is timed how you want it, the distance is technically off; I'd say to make it closer to 3. You'll have to change to a more precise grid size to do this.
0:33:05 (2): The endpoint needs to be earlier by about 1/8 of a tick.
0:34:90 (8): Should end ~1/8th tick earlier.
0:41:13 (3): Distancing is wrong; needs to be further away from 2.
0:44:82 (3): Distancing is wrong, same as above.
0:47:59 sequence (1,2,3): Distancing is wrong on this. Use Distance Snap.
1:01:25 (3): Endpoint should be ~1/8th tick later.
1:02:82 (1): This doesn't work well as this kind of slider because the midpoint of the slider isn't on the actual note between the start and end point. Change this around.
1:07:44 (2): Same as above; doesn't work as this kind of slider.
1:08:59 (4): (Same as Normal) It feels to me like this slider should start a 1/4th tick later. It should end at about 1:09:74 (white tick), too.
1:10:55 (3): Distance is wrong; must be closer to 2, redo with distance snap.
1:17:59 (1): Endpoint is ~1/8th tick late.
1:19:21 (5): Spaced too far away from 4, based on how the notes around it are spaced.
1:25:44 (1): This spinner's ending is about 1/8th of a tick off, just like on Normal.

I'll leave Hard, Insane, and Shuffle! to someone else for now. You have some work to do, but this is more or less on-track to being a great map if you make some corrections. I'll give you a star.

Thanks for those stars

Now...

Z-Ramm wrote:

Overall comments: Good song choice and creative sliders. Timing is more or less ok, but there are some notes in weird places (timing-wise) and you need to use distance snap more carefully, as some notes are spaced incorrectly.

Easy
Sometimes, in general, I found your choice of which notes to map odd; the notes don't always flow very intuitively. Still good overall, though it could use tweaking. I feel the same about notes before second break, notes after that break try to follow the beats and the instruments, if it comes to be a serious problem I'll fix it for sure
~1:10:75 (3): This seems off-beat. If it was intentional, it doesn't seem like it belongs there, especially on an Easy map where everything should be on a simple beat. I think it should be re-aligned to the white tick just before it. fixed

Normal
0:31:32 (8): The spacing between this and 7 is the same as the spacing between 6 and 7, but the distance between 7 and 8 should be longer because of the longer time between the notes. Re-check your distance snapping. fixed
0:41:82 (1): The endpoint of this slider is about a 1/8th tick too early. fixed
1:08:59 (2): It feels to me like this slider should start a 1/4th tick later. It should end at about 1:09:74 (white tick), too. Actually I try to follow the voice in this part, so as the singer's voice cuts there i'll keep it finishing there. About starting it 1/4, i'll do it since that part of the word sounds stronger
1:23:36 (2): This would sound better if it started 1/4th of a tick later. Also, the endpoint is 1/8th of a tick early. same as last point
1:25:44 (1): This spinner's ending is about 1/8th of a tick off. It was fine on Easy though. WEIRD but FIXED

Normal+
0:10:67 (1): The ending should probably be on a white tick. fixed BIG PROBLEM. but that explains why it looked a lot smaller ¬¬
0:25:21 (4): If this is timed how you want it, the distance is technically off; I'd say to make it closer to 3. You'll have to change to a more precise grid size to do this. fixed
0:33:05 (2): The endpoint needs to be earlier by about 1/8 of a tick. fixed
0:34:90 (8): Should end ~1/8th tick earlier. fixed
0:41:13 (3): Distancing is wrong; needs to be further away from 2. fixed
0:44:82 (3): Distancing is wrong, same as above. fixed
0:47:59 sequence (1,2,3): Distancing is wrong on this. Use Distance Snap. OMG. FIXED
1:01:25 (3): Endpoint should be ~1/8th tick later. fixed
1:02:82 (1): This doesn't work well as this kind of slider because the midpoint of the slider isn't on the actual note between the start and end point. Change this around. made a simple slider. you're right
1:07:44 (2): Same as above; doesn't work as this kind of slider. SAME
1:08:59 (4): (Same as Normal) It feels to me like this slider should start a 1/4th tick later. It should end at about 1:09:74 (white tick), too. As before, but the start point will be the same just because this is harder and I think i'll take the entire "sound"
1:10:55 (3): Distance is wrong; must be closer to 2, redo with distance snap. fixed
1:17:59 (1): Endpoint is ~1/8th tick late. fixed
1:19:21 (5): Spaced too far away from 4, based on how the notes around it are spaced. fixed
1:25:44 (1): This spinner's ending is about 1/8th of a tick off, just like on Normal. WEIRD... FIXED

I'll leave Hard, Insane, and Shuffle! to someone else for now. You have some work to do, but this is more or less on-track to being a great map if you make some corrections. I'll give you a star.

Thank you!


I'll upload as soon as I'm sure my coneccion works perfectly (having problems with provider right now )

sorry,i speak japanese only

私は、YURIAとSHUFFLE!が大好きなので凄くやりたかったマップです！
最初のスライドも特徴的で良かったです！

Excite Translation(エキサイト翻訳)

I like YURIA and SHUFFLE.
The first slide was do a feature and was also good.

ありがとう

I can't speak japanese. But I could see that you liked it

Whatever.... thanks for the STAR. Hope you like this beatmap too

normal+

00:27:05 (5) - Maybe make it so that it starts on 00:27:28
01:17:59 (1) - Too close
01:21:28 (1) - I think it would sound nice if you end at 01:21:74 at put a finish sound at the end of the slider
01:22:20 (2) - Same thing as above~


normal

00:38:70 (x) - I think add a note here


hard

01:05:82 (9) - I think it would look better as a pattern if you moved to align on top to where (5) is
01:08:59 (7) - Make this a single note instead and then move the slider to start at 01:08:70. i think..


insane

00:44:76 (3) - too far
01:17:99 (3) - Finish
01:18:97 (3) - ^
01:19:89 (7) - ^
01:20:82 (10) - ^

star!

Yes wrote:

normal+

00:27:05 (5) - Maybe make it so that it starts on 00:27:28 Hmmm.. there's a strong sound on both points, and 5 is the same as 4 so i'll make a little change there
01:17:59 (1) - Too close Fixed
01:21:28 (1) - I think it would sound nice if you end at 01:21:74 at put a finish sound at the end of the slider Fine, it's done
01:22:20 (2) - Same thing as above~ same

normal

00:38:70 (x) - I think add a note here Done


hard

01:05:82 (9) - I think it would look better as a pattern if you moved to align on top to where (5) is If I undestood it right, then I did it , but even if I didn't it looks better
01:08:59 (7) - Make this a single note instead and then move the slider to start at 01:08:70. i think.. done


insane

00:44:76 (3) - too far Fixed
01:17:99 (3) - Finish Done
01:18:97 (3) - ^ Done
01:19:89 (7) - ^ Done
01:20:82 (10) - ^ Done

star!

Thanks for the Star!


I'll check for errors and update

KAEDE SLIDER!!!

you can have for my star just for the first sliders your made

Key Words

( Tick = Line )
... ^ = Repeate

Easy




Normal



Normal +

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

HolyBoy wrote:

Key Words

( Tick = Line )
... ^ = Repeate

Hard

SPOILER

01:08:755 (8) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Longer I think it's ok where it is now
01:17:576 (1) - Try to Change this in a way, so that it can be finished at 01:17:946 (Blue Tick)

Insane

SPOILER

01:18:078 (3) - Move this Note 1 Tick back ( should end up on 01:17:944 (Blue Tick) )

Shuffle!

SPOILER

00:01:454 (1) - Move this Note 1 Tick Back
00:15:965 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here
00:35:014 (1) - i think its better, if this finishes at 00:35:359 (Red Tick), And Delete the Note that was here (Your Choice)
00:38:359 (1) - i Think it is better if you Make this Slider 1 Tick Longer, (IF you do this remember to delete the Note that was there)
00:56:364 (1) - I think it is Better of you Make this Slider 1 Tick Longer and Delete that is there <--- did that on purpose to make it harder ^_^
01:08:717 (1) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Longer same as in hard

Realy Good Beatmaps =) Aewsome job =) Star! for you ^_^

THANK YOU!

(already done in-game but it's better this way.)

did everything on the first post, things i have not changed are marked in the quote

[Easy]

I didnt feel the rhythm of the song while playing this.
To make a good easy you should use white ticks only and maybe a few red ticks.
Also it's not a problem to not follow the vocals.
I suggest remap.

[Normal]

Slider tick rate 0.5 please.
I think you used blue ticks too much again. It's not really a problem but the small spacing kinda makes it harder to know the timing of the beats. Also, because the spacing is small I suggest to set the "overall Difficulty" some ticks higer.

01:23:47 (2) - This should really end on a white tick.

[Normal+]

Also here slider tick rate 0.5

00:24:62 (1,2,3,4) - change this in something with less blue ticks please.
00:56:35 (3,4,5) - look, 4 and 5 are placed further than 3 and 4, but the timing between them is the same. Conbine this with the fact that this map uses alot of blue notes and has small spacing.......

If you didnt use distance snap please space it again with it turned on.

01:08:59 (4) - Start point on white tick, end point on white tick too. Can't you hear this sounds wrong? >_>
01:17:59 (1) - endpoint on white tick
01:21:28 (1,1) - ^ those blue ticks break the flow of the map, when you use this alot there won't be any flow, and that's like playing a bad timed beatmap.

01:23:47 (3) - end on white

[Hard]

00:10:66 (1) - end on white please.

This spacing... please respace using distance snap. If you dont know what it is please read the beatmapping FAQ.

Not saying again you should use less blue ticks, yes even for a hard this isnt fun to play.
Although this was better than the normals / easy

[Insane]

00:10:66 (1) - This slider is unrankable since you can't really know which way it will go, also end it on white.
You should know by now that you also will have to fix the spacing here.

[Shuffle]

It's crap, remove this diff please

happy30 wrote:

[Easy]

I didnt feel the rhythm of the song while playing this.
To make a good easy you should use white ticks only and maybe a few red ticks.
Also it's not a problem to not follow the vocals.
I suggest remap.

I'll do this last since it will take more time, but yes I too feel it doesn't follow the song too much specially after the second break

[Normal]

Slider tick rate 0.5 please. ok
I think you used blue ticks too much again. It's not really a problem but the small spacing kinda makes it harder to know the timing of the beats. Also, because the spacing is small I suggest to set the "overall Difficulty" some ticks higer. Increased overall difficulty and made some sliders end in white ticks so that it uses less blue ones

01:23:47 (2) - This should really end on a white tick. Done

[Normal+]

Also here slider tick rate 0.5 ok

00:24:62 (1,2,3,4) - change this in something with less blue ticks please. Actually that's where it sounds and I won't remove it =S. But as it makes a change when you come to 4 and 5 as it uses red and white ticks I removed 4, so that you have more time to prepare for this change jumping directly to a white tick
00:56:35 (3,4,5) - look, 4 and 5 are placed further than 3 and 4, but the timing between them is the same. Conbine this with the fact that this map uses alot of blue notes and has small spacing....... done

If you didnt use distance snap please space it again with it turned on.

01:08:59 (4) - Start point on white tick, end point on white tick too. Can't you hear this sounds wrong? >_> Actually the slider ends when the sound fades not in another sound but i guess i can't really end a slider when there's no sound. Done
01:17:59 (1) - endpoint on white tick done
01:21:28 (1,1) - ^ those blue ticks break the flow of the map, when you use this alot there won't be any flow, and that's like playing a bad timed beatmap. Done (may I stop ending sliders when sound fades? XD)
01:23:47 (3) - end on white ^

[Hard]

00:10:66 (1) - end on white please. ok

This spacing... please respace using distance snap. If you dont know what it is please read the beatmapping FAQ. O_o Don't even ask me what happened here XD

Not saying again you should use less blue ticks, yes even for a hard this isnt fun to play.
Although this was better than the normals / easy

[Insane]

00:10:66 (1) - This slider is unrankable since you can't really know which way it will go, also end it on white. should be visible now
You should know by now that you also will have to fix the spacing here.

[Shuffle]

It's crap, remove this diff please

Thanks , I'll upload as soon as I remap Easy X_X

Awsome map!! ~star~

May HP Drain'star a little decrease,and acc's star a litte upper.

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