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Katakiri Rekka - Your little sister (Short Ver.)

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Flandre Scarlet
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Topic Starter
Flandre Scarlet
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年2月27日 at 0:33:07

Artist: Katakiri Rekka
Title: Your little sister (Short Ver.)
Source: Real Imouto ga Iru Ooizumi-kun no Baai
Tags: ALcot Honey Comb
BPM: 141
Filesize: 18227kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.62 stars, 82 notes)
  2. Hard (4.75 stars, 190 notes)
Download: Katakiri Rekka - Your little sister (Short Ver.)
Download: Katakiri Rekka - Your little sister (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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リアル妹がいる大泉くんのばあい OP
片雾烈火 - your lilittle sister ShortVer.
Last edited by Flandre Scarlet , edited 15 times in total.
zw5046525
3 posts
Joined July 2010
zw5046525
支持
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
2,881 posts
Joined March 2009
Charles445
General
SPOILER
Make the lead in time 1.5
Offset 659 - It won't be perfect but it will be an improvement
End the Kiai time at 00:48:956
Make a Normal Difficulty
Easy
SPOILER
Tickrate 1
00:04:701 Add Finish
00:08:105 ^^
00:11:510 ^^
00:13:212 ^^
00:28:531 ^^
00:31:935 New Combo
00:38:743 ^^
00:38:743 Add Finish
00:39:595 ^^
00:42:148 ^^
00:55:765 ^^
01:02:573 ^^
01:02:573 New Combo
01:05:977 Add Finish
01:14:488 ^^
01:17:892 ^^
01:21:296 ^^
01:24:701 ^^

Hard
SPOILER
00:04:701 Add Finish
00:08:105 ^^
00:11:510 ^^
00:13:212 ^^
00:22:786 This is too close to the 2
00:25:978 ^^
00:28:105 Add Finish
00:28:531 ^^
00:38:743
00:42:148 ^^
00:48:956 ^^
00:52:350 ^^
00:54:063 ^^
00:55:765 ^^
01:01:616 Remove this 8
01:02:148 Add Finish
01:02:573 ^^
01:05:765 New Combo
01:05:977 Add Finish
01:06:828 ^^
01:14:488 ^^
01:17:892 ^^
01:21:296 ^^
01:22:999 ^^
01:24:701 ^^
01:26:403 ^^

This is a very solid beatmap and a very good job for your first map.
Star, and good luck!
Flandre Scarlet
9 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Flandre Scarlet

Charles445 wrote:

This is a very solid beatmap and a very good job for your first map.
Star, and good luck!
thanks
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
moe BG~

[hard]
0:08:531 (2,3) right 1 grid?
0:25:765 (3,4) 1/2 beat backward, adjust their position
1:01:722 (8) up 1 grid
1:05:978 (7) up 1 grid
1:17:254 (9) left 1 grid

star
Disoy
209 posts
Joined February 2010
Disoy
首先 你的offset有點問題阿...所以拍子都沒對準..

[Easy]
00:06:829 (4) - 這裡的circle移到00:07:254
00:16:616 (4) - slider延長到00:17:893結束
00:17:893 (5) - 同上延長到00:21:297結束
00:36:616 (4) - 同上延長到00:37:893結束
00:38:743 (5) - 這裡new combo
00:40:020 (4) - slider的結束加個hitfinish?
01:16:616 (4) - 移至01:17:041
01:24:701 (3) - slider的結束加個hitfinish?

[Hard]
00:04:063 (10) - 這circle去掉?
00:07:254 (6) - 這slider改成一個circle?
00:10:658 (8) - ^
00:14:275 (9) - 這circle去掉?
00:16:616 (6) - 這裡new combo
00:20:020 (6) - ^
00:23:424 (4) - 加個note?
00:24:276 (8) - ^
00:24:701 (9) - ^
00:57:467 (5) - new combo?
01:01:297 (6) - ^
01:06:616 (8) - ^
01:24:701 (10) - slider的結束加個hitfinish?
Lonely_Krait
9 posts
Joined August 2010
Lonely_Krait
蛤蛤蛤 你2 懒得说你
Fapfrit
804 posts
Joined December 2009
Fapfrit
Oh, the bit must begin with white stripes. but your have it all starts with the reds :?

for a start

Timing:
BPM: 141
Offset: -10

ok, now to change the BPM and Offset. put everyone in rhythm. write a request to mod again, I'll help you :3

Good map. realy. Star!
Yusu Aoi
214 posts
Joined October 2009
Yusu Aoi
Hey!:))
Modding as requested ^^ You dont have to update Your Beatmap with my moddings ;)

Easy:
00:31:904 (4)new combo
00:38:713 (5)new combo
00:55:734 end this on 00:56:585 and add clap on the ending of slider?
00:59:138 New combo, End this on 00:59:990 and add clap on the ending of slider?
01:02:543 New combo,
01:03:394 add clap
01:07:755 - 01:10:947 Insert break
01:17:862 (1) end this on 01:19:564?
01:20:415 add note?
01:21:266 (2) New combo, end this slider on 01:22:968?
01:23:816 add note?
01:24:670 (3) New combo

Hard:
00::03:607 add note?
00:04:245 add note?
00:05734 add note?
00:06:160 add note?
00:07:011 add note?
00:11:053 note?
00:21:266 distance between (10) and (1)
00:22:755 the distance between slider (3) and notes (4,5,6) is too low
00:23:819 (4,5,6) place it somewhere else ;)
00:25:947 (3)move it to 00:25:734
00:26:585 add note?
00:38:500 (4) new combo
00:51:904 (5) 1 grid left
01:01266 (6) it;s too high, make it in the same line as note (5)
01:05:734 (6) New combo?


Nice song ^^ :))
Star~
makimiku
3 posts
Joined August 2010
makimiku
星星` :D
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Disable countdown,it's not used.

Lead-In for 2 seconds will be fine enough.

[Easy]
00:14:884 (1) - Finish.
00:18:288 (1) - Fix spacing,it's too far from previous object.
00:21:692 (1) - ^ Same,don't use jumps in Easy,please.
00:31:905 (4) - New combo.
00:38:713 (5) - ^
00:42:118 - Finish.
00:55:735 - ^
00:59:138 (4) - New combo.
01:02:543 (6) - ^
01:31:904 - Finish your last spinner right here.

[Hard]
00:14:884 (1) - Finish.
00:23:820 (4,5,6) - It doesn't really fit,follow my suggestions:
00:23:607 - Add a note.
00:23:819 - ^
00:24:245 - ^
00:24:458 - ^
This pattern plays/sounds better in this way,try it.

00:42:118 (1) - Finish.
00:55:735 (1) - ^
01:05:734 (6) - New combo.
01:30:202 - Same suggestion to finish your spinner at the point.

Well,nice relaxing map,cute song.
Best wishes to you,have my star~
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
554 posts
Joined March 2010
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
GJ
Soaprman
1,392 posts
Joined January 2008
Soaprman
Nothing wrong with the maps. It looks kind of weird though in Hard when you have circles in a curve and there are straight sliders in the curve. Maybe curve the sliders, too? You don't have to if you don't want to though. :P
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Hijiri Tezuka
Orz It's....perfect I can't point out anything wrong wit this!
eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
2,930 posts
Joined March 2010
eldnl
[Easy]

Do not get out of the snap grid. Maybe not bother now, but when it ranked bother.


SPOILER

[Hard]

00:25:947 (3) Spacing
01:24:670 (10) Suggestion: make this slider go up.

Good job, but could be improved.

you do not plan to do another dificulty? I could make one :) let me know by mp.

star.
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
[General]

  • realsis.avi is 18.8 MB..Consider to re-encoding the video? ( Perhaps you already did so, but the quality of video isn't that nice, also when you re-encoding this, please increase some brightness...I saw the HD one is brighter than this..)

    I remember the comboburst.png limit is 500x700...resize this?

    I think it's better to make spinner-circle.png more transparent? So that spinner-background can be seen.

    Title of the song : Your Little Sister (viewtopic.php?f=25&t=33919 ---How to change title =w=)

    Source: Real Imouto ga Iru Ooizumi-kun no Baai

    Remove the countdown in Setup (Also letterbox during breaks)

    BPM: 140.950
    Offset: 3ms~5ms

    Your combo colors are different in your diffs...Make them same, also it's not necessary to use 5 colors...(Delete one of the blue please)
[Easy]
Technically no error...but...Your notes/slider arrangement make me feel borring...

  • Try to curve your sliders a little bit (You can select your slider and type d or s)
    and arrange some different note position

    Also you can use more hitsounds in your map instead of keeping a clap pattern.

    Btw, I think Tick rate 0.5 (or 1) is definetly better.
[Hard]
Same as Easy...Don't stick with the spacing...If you have a idea, you can have some different spacing. Just don't make it impossible for players.

  • 00:03:820 (9,10) - Try whistle
    00:25:948 (3) - Extend 1/2 beat and start from 00:25:734?
    00:43:394 (4,5) - I don't think this spacing is reasonable...Decrease?
    00:46:799 (4,5) - ^
    00:58:713 (7) - move the here?
    01:05:735 (6) - New combo?

Since your beatmap size is pretty huge, and include a video...I suggest you to have more difficulties.

Good luck =w=

有问题来找我 别客气
有机会的话 请来我的queue给我评分
谢谢
Hakeru
2,360 posts
Joined May 2010
Hakeru
[Easy]
Do not get out of the snap grid D:
except you increase the circle size ( +1 )
Slider tick rate : 1

01:26:798 (1) - Silence at the end

[Hard]
hmm ..same as easy , Do not get out of the snap grid D:
approach rate -1 / circle size +1 :D

but its nice ..
and use bezier slider is better (?)

00:39:777 - add finish

well , just a suggestion :D
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,233 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Mod....
--------------------------------
ReD=I think you should fix this
BluE=just a suggestion

General
~The offset should be1226 :!:
~Resnap after correct the offset.

Easy
00:48:500(x)add a note here
00:48:925(1)add finish
01:08:500(x)add break here
01:14:031(x)add a note here

Hard
AR-1
00:03:180(1)left 1 grid/color]
[color=#FF0000]00:21:691(8)spacing(not a Hard jump)
00:35:095(x)Remove this spinner
00:59:135(1)x0.5BPM?
01:06:585(8)New combo?
01:24:670(10)X1 BPM?
01:26:478(x)Move to 01:26:585

Less than 5 red mistake>.<
STAR*
Cuuuuri
315 posts
Joined April 2009
Cuuuuri
Hi(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
[General]
offset -10..? I feel the best offset 433

nice song.
meng_da_nai199
1 post
Joined November 2010
meng_da_nai199
;)
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Comboburst再大一点？


Hard

00:24:245 - 我总感觉这里停顿太长了，试试在00:24:458和00:24:670加两个音 (或者00:24:033 (6) 做成slider)
00:25:948 (3) - 如果和前边节奏一致的话这个slider应该从00:25:734开始然后结束在00:26:160，然后00:26:585加个音（建议而已）
00:37:862 - 还是感觉停顿太长了，00:38:075和00:38:287加两个音。（或者00:37:650 (3) 做成slider）
00:45:096 - 来个音- -？停顿太多总有不连贯的感觉，不一定要完全按照人声来做=w=
00:58:713 (7) - 感觉应该和6结束的位置重叠


Easy

01:08:075 - insert break time


总体来说差不多了，既然你的tick rate是2就找大姐要泡去吧……（雾

star 8-)
xyj909
10 posts
Joined July 2010
xyj909
;)
Flandre Scarlet
9 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Flandre Scarlet
　　　　　　　　　　　　
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Aoi_sora_old
2 posts
Joined August 2010
Aoi_sora_old
:P
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi~

Easy
01:08:075 - add break
01:17:862 (1,2) - 1 grid down

Hard
00:27:437 (8) - 1 grid left
00:49:990 (3) - 2 grids down

Good, star
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Special service~

Overall:
Hmm... I'm not really satisfied with the rhythm.
But there are too many differences from my expectations that I believe this should be your "rhythm-style".
Still, try following the music more if you can...

[Easy]
I had an urge to remap... :o

00:42:991 (4,5,6) - what are you following here?
00:46:396 (4,5,6) - ^

[Hard]
Allow me to point some examples of how I'd have placed the rhythm...
SPOILER
00:03:629 (x) - this just bugs me... Why not put a note here? It fits the music...
00:04:055 (11) - I'd move this to next white tick...
00:04:906 (x) - add a note?
00:05:331 (x) - ^
00:05:544 (5) - remove?
00:05:757 (x), 00:06:182 (x) - add notes?
00:07:246 (6) - move to previous red tick?
00:07:672 (x), 00:07:884 (x) - add notes?
... etc etc etc

00:39:161 (7) - up one grid?
00:44:480 (7) - too far! (if you want to keep this, you better do something with 00:42:140 (1,2,3,4))
00:47:884 (7) - ^


A star of encouragement! (patterns are pretty good by the way)
But I'd really like to see some changes to rhythm though...
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Timing : try +5 ms to all offset,don't forget resnap all notes and green lines.

[Easy]

試著填滿 1:07:246 ~ 1:10:225 ?
也許可以把spinner移到1:07:672,然後補滿前面空白的地方?
或是用其他的下法填滿

ps.以上只是建議,你不想做任何更動的話也可以

[Hard]

01:06:608 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - 這有點挑毛病,把這串移下來一點? 因為已經碰到HP Bar了

star for now.
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
tags 推荐用小写

Easy
slider tick rate:1？

00:39:592(8) - 结束在00:40:443
00:40:868(x) - circle
00:41:081(x) - ^
00:41:506(x) - ^

Hard
slider tick rate:1？

suggestions(imo)
00:42:889(x) - circle
00:46:294(x) - ^

star
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
Hard:
resnap all notes plz.

easy:
try this file.
Download: Katakiri Rekka - Your little sister (Short Ver.) (FlandreChyan) [Easy_].osu
tsuka
1,499 posts
Joined May 2009
tsuka
:) 看了下标题 两个字 你妹
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