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Dark PHOENiX - Stirring an Autumn Moon

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_lolipop
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年8月21日 at 18:19:28

Artist: Dark PHOENiX
Title: Stirring an Autumn Moon
Source: Touhou
Tags: Mooned Insect Wriggle Nightbug Crazy Jay climbb65588
BPM: 194
Filesize: 9846kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Boring Moon (3.46 stars, 117 notes)
  2. Climbb's Taiko Oni (5 stars, 669 notes)
  3. Crazy Moon (5 stars, 603 notes)
  4. Lunatic Moon (5 stars, 572 notes)
  5. Stirring Moon (4.69 stars, 211 notes)
Download: Dark PHOENiX - Stirring an Autumn Moon
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my 2nd beatmap
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Boring Moon done
Stirring Moon by CJ
Lunatic Moon done
Crazy Moon by Crazy Jay
Climbb's Taiko Oni
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SB of Crazy Moon is by Crazy Jay and SB of Lunatic Moon is by me.
LKs
:)
first
Pokie
o.o Source Touhou 就可以了..
後面的不用加上去..

第二顆star!
XiaoWei
star :)
Saten ruiko
雨點><~~
Meteor
音乐不错。可惜俺是做图彩笔,不会找毛病
vb5944590
star~
Neethime
:D Touhou map~
star~
digiaria
这叫8颗星,才不是6颗呢
哼~~~~
KanbeKotori
;)
LirsRosso
star
IppE
Oh my, star because Dark PHOENiX.
hvick225
star :)
rustbell
pokedigi
科多是我老婆
Nagato Yuki_old
Dotsu
我的建议:
[General]

  • offset应该是1172吧
    另外02:59:316这里为什么要换BPM
[Boring Moon]

  • 00:29:625(3):Finish
    00:36:739(4,1):不要重叠
[_lolipop Moon]

  • 有些地方遮挡比较严重
    00:49:574(2,3,4,5,6):不太明显
    00:58:388:去掉Break
Good map!! ~STAR~
boy15174
star
Mei_coN
来一发~ 8-)
climbb65588
Crazy Jay
star
kodomonoyume
= =+
haruhiteamsos
nice map
;)
kiddly
yeah Dark PHOENiX :)

red=you have to fix this
black=just suggestion

[general]

rank规定必须有一个小于等于3星的难度。

难度跨度好大……如果需要的话我可以提供hard的diff。

[Boring Moon]
slider tick:2比较好。
作为一个192BPM的简单难度最好还是不要出现二分拍了……
normal系音效的部分多用用whistle比较好。

[_lolipop Moon]
00:01:017 (1) - 最好不要出现在offset之前的note。统一把offset改成-65就行了。要改的话记得所有diff都要改。
01:20:192 (1,2,3) - 和前面一串分的开一点会比较好看。
01:30:863 - 01:50:038 (break) - 这break长的蛋疼……还是建议map掉。
01:50:038 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 个人觉得稍微排下形状比较好。

[Crazy Moon]
00:01:017 (1,2) - 同上面一个难度相同的位置。

00:32:409 (7) - new combo比较好读。
00:52:202 (5) - ^

sorry i cant mod taiko :(
nice map
star
Topic Starter
_lolipop

kiddly wrote:

yeah Dark PHOENiX :)

red=you have to fix this
black=just suggestion

[general]

rank规定必须有一个小于等于3星的难度。
啊???不是3.5么?!!!!!!!!
难度跨度好大……如果需要的话我可以提供hard的diff。 如果你愿意做的话,我将十分感谢. 正好缺一个Stirring Moon难度

[Boring Moon]
slider tick:2比较好。 fixed
作为一个192BPM的简单难度最好还是不要出现二分拍了…… 尽量减少中.....
normal系音效的部分多用用whistle比较好。 fixing

[_lolipop Moon]
00:01:017 (1) - 最好不要出现在offset之前的note。统一把offset改成-65就行了。要改的话记得所有diff都要改。 额.....这个我有和别人讨论过 这是一个弱起小节 不这样的话 offset应该再往前数一个小节 这样就会出现负数.. 所以我觉得就这样比较好
01:20:192 (1,2,3) - 和前面一串分的开一点会比较好看。 fixed

01:30:863 - 01:50:038 (break) - 这break长的蛋疼……还是建议map掉。 分数会超的 > < 我也是忍痛删掉的
01:50:038 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 个人觉得稍微排下形状比较好。

[Crazy Moon]
00:01:017 (1,2) - 同上面一个难度相同的位置。

00:32:409 (7) - new combo比较好读。 fixed
00:52:202 (5) - ^ fixed

sorry i cant mod taiko :(
nice map
star




Thanks a lot.
kiddly
关于三星那个是三妖告诉我的,我之前也有个最低难度3.5星的图.....应该就这样了.
只需要降到3.25以下,看上去就是3星了。
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
星数的问题说过了233。。
kiai时间各难度请统一。
颜色不用自定义的么。。。
tag都小写,我印象有这条,貌似。。

[Boring]
00:19:728 (3) - 这里渐强吧。
00:55:914 (3) - 右一格(或者没那么多,0.8格什么的)

[_lolipop]
00:01:018 (1) - 起音建议三连。
00:07:976 (4) - whistle
00:58:079 (4) - 00:59:161 (1) break去掉,太短了
后面还有短break也请相同处理。复制段同处理……我懒了……
01:50:038 (1,2) - 这里开始你学学人家CJ...别在中间不挪窝


[CJ]
这很强力啊。满分。
02:26:532 (8) - 不过这slider碰血条了,大概率被挑,其他也有几处,这个最为严重。

[Taiko]
01:37:511 (595) - 换o ooo
banvi
Hello.
I don't know Touhou a little , but I like this song.

mod
SPOILER
Boring Moon
00:14:780 (1) move 1 up?(spacing a bit far)
00:15:708 (4) move 1 left?(^)
00:42:306 (3) move 1 down?
_lolipop's
00:01:481 (4) move 1 left?(spacing a bit close)
01:07:048 (2) ^(^)
02:45:243 (3) move 1 right and 1 up?
02:56:377 (7) move 1 right?
02:56:532 (9,10) compose with 02:57:306 (6,7,8) about spacing, please.
Crazy
I think okay.
Taiko
I can't mod Taiko.

Thismap is great! :)
Of course , star & gl ;)
Topic Starter
_lolipop

banvi wrote:

Hello.
I don't know Touhou a little , but I like this song.

mod
SPOILER
Boring Moon
00:14:780 (1) move 1 up?(spacing a bit far)
00:15:708 (4) move 1 left?(^)
00:42:306 (3) move 1 down?
_lolipop's
00:01:481 (4) move 1 left?(spacing a bit close)
01:07:048 (2) ^(^)
02:45:243 (3) move 1 right and 1 up?
02:56:377 (7) move 1 right?
02:56:532 (9,10) compose with 02:57:306 (6,7,8) about spacing, please.
Crazy
I think okay.
Taiko
I can't mod Taiko.

Thismap is great! :)
Of course , star & gl ;)

thanks for your modding.
Babble
Hiya

Boring Moon
01:18:800 (1) - Add finish maybe?

Couldn't really find anything major. Star :D
Topic Starter
_lolipop

babble wrote:

Hiya

Boring Moon
01:18:800 (1) - Add finish maybe?

Couldn't really find anything major. Star :D


thanks for your star~~.
uranuss8600
:)
Numbers 596108
只試了老闆的太鼓
意見如下:
01:00:052_(X) Add Kiai Time
01:20:346_(X) Add Normal Time

Star~
Cyril Scarlet
(*´ェ`*)
Cyril Scarlet
EDIT : sorry Double posted....
Topic Starter
_lolipop
8600,数字君 and S i R i R u thanks for your stars.
abalee
timing in taiko diff. is different......(1171 ms offset vs 1172 ms)

lolipop's
looks this diff. need a epilepsy warming.
01:10:141 (1) - ,02:29:316 (1) - : use soft override seems better.
I'd say... it messes up that you use such spacing and stacked notes in the end.... but yeah it is my own opinion.
arien666
Just for a support this song ;_;?

Good luck yay!
Doomsday
Woah

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

  1. Timing seems fine
  2. your "spotlight.png" is very big. its 1100x900, while the maximum size for storyboard elements is 800x600 I believe. you should shrink it down to fit that size
  3. Also, your Warning says "Waring". Shouldn't it be "Warning"? :P
[BORING MOON]

01:18:800 (1) - Maybe this should start at 01:19:110? It seems to fit better there.

[STIRRING MOON]

Feels more like an insane than a hard. Nothing I can actually complain about though

[_LOLIPOP MOON]

01:30:863 (x) - This break here is massive, and it jumps in at an awkward time. It doesn't make much sense how this break starts. I guess that you put this in because your score was getting very high, but putting a massive break here doesn't work very well. Maybe you could have little breaks all over the map, rather than one big break in the middle?

[CRAZY MOON]

<3. I really like this map. I think this is the only map where I liked the whistles, meaning the hitsounds are great too.

Nothing seems to bother me

[CLIMBB'S TAIKO ONI]

Probably one of the more fun Taiko maps I've played. The patterns in this seem to make more sense to me. I couldn't see any problems worth talking about.

Awesome stuff. I really like Crazy moon. The other difficulties are nice also, but Crazy Jay's difficulties steals the show.

Starred
Crazy Jay
I'm a stupid lol
顺便把我的难度有些别扭的地方改了



Download: Dark PHOENiX - Stirring an Autumn Moon (_lolipop) [Crazy Moon].osu
Topic Starter
_lolipop

Doomsday93 wrote:

Woah

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

  1. Timing seems fine
  2. your "spotlight.png" is very big. its 1100x900, while the maximum size for storyboard elements is 800x600 I believe. you should shrink it down to fit that size
  3. Also, your Warning says "Waring". Shouldn't it be "Warning"? :P
[BORING MOON]

01:18:800 (1) - Maybe this should start at 01:19:110? It seems to fit better there.

[STIRRING MOON]

Feels more like an insane than a hard. Nothing I can actually complain about though

[_LOLIPOP MOON]

01:30:863 (x) - This break here is massive, and it jumps in at an awkward time. It doesn't make much sense how this break starts. I guess that you put this in because your score was getting very high, but putting a massive break here doesn't work very well. Maybe you could have little breaks all over the map, rather than one big break in the middle?

[CRAZY MOON]

<3. I really like this map. I think this is the only map where I liked the whistles, meaning the hitsounds are great too.

Nothing seems to bother me

[CLIMBB'S TAIKO ONI]

Probably one of the more fun Taiko maps I've played. The patterns in this seem to make more sense to me. I couldn't see any problems worth talking about.

Awesome stuff. I really like Crazy moon. The other difficulties are nice also, but Crazy Jay's difficulties steals the show.

Starred
thanks for your modding.
abalee
does Crazy Jay's diff fixed?, "not downloaded yet" :/
and seems that "waring" haven't fixed too.
Topic Starter
_lolipop

abalee wrote:

does Crazy Jay's diff fixed?, "not downloaded yet" :/
and seems that "waring" haven't fixed too.
> < i'll fix it soon....

edit:fixed
kino77
Star~
abalee
:o

lolipop's
01:29:472 (2) - isn't snapped
Topic Starter
_lolipop

abalee wrote:

:o

lolipop's
01:29:472 (2) - isn't snapped
thanks


fixed.
Leorda
NI HAO

[Skin]
You need a approachcircle.png and section-fail.png

[Boring Moon]
No Kiai?

00:36:430 (3,4,1) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14740
00:38:285 (3) - New combo?
00:45:708 (2) - ^
00:52:203 (5) - ^
01:00:553 (1,2) - Move 2 grid left?

[Stirring Moon]
Stack Leniency lv. 0 is unrankable, increase it and No Kiai?

00:56:068 (2) - Move 1 grid right?
01:12:460 (4,5) - Move 2 grid right?
01:37:512 (1) - ^

[_lolipop Moon]
Remove "_lolipop" since this map is yours

00:04:728 (x) - Add note?
00:09:677 (x) - ^
01:04:110 (x) - ^
01:09:058 (x) - ^
02:23:285 (x) - ^
02:28:233 (x) - ^

[Crazy Moon]
Fine~

[Climbb's Taiko Oni]
The Slider Velocity must 1,40. Other are fine

Not bad
(((((っ´Θ`)っ <- STAR
SamiPale
> < _lolipop is big bad egg
tankms
star
Tomoka Rin
star~
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