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Tmax - Almost Paradise

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Topic Starter
Sonnyc
이 맵은 사용자의 요청으로 삭제되었습니다.
minyeob
Analyzer sucks~

BPM: 126.00
Offset: 16,714

I'll use my kudosu stars when this map is completed~

[Not Yet]
28:142(4)-> Extend 1/4 beat
37:662(1)-> This slider will be SHIT after you resnapped. Move this slider 1/4 beat backward and this slider's bug(?) will be fixed.
40:519(4)-> 1/4 beat forward
minyeob
*Ahem*
Revived by mapper's request.
Topic Starter
Sonnyc

minyeob wrote:

*Ahem*
Revived by mapper's request.
Thx, I'll work hard for the rank.
Ra-s
나중에 하드 완성되면 모딩 ㄱ

[All]
대체적으로 사진이 화질이 않좋네요. 좀더 좋은걸로 구해봅시당

[Normal]
노말은 다 트집^^
00:47:214 - 오디오 변경할떄 노트 위에 바로 두면 안됩니다. 노트 한칸 전에 두세요. 다른분들 오디오 한거 보면 노트 위에 오디오 설정한거 없습니다. 오디오 노트 위에 설정하면 전에 있던거랑 오디오 섞인 애매한 소리가 나기때문
01:17:691 - 위에 꺼랑 마창가지
01:21:500(1,2,3) - ^
01:24:357 - 노말에서 5번노트 이렇게 배치해도 되나요? 4번노트의 모양을 좀더 안쪽으로 땡겨도 되고 좀 바꿔주시는게 좋을꺼 같음
01:28:167(5) - ^
01:37:691 - 이부분도 kiai있었으면 좋겠네요
01:38:643(2) - 슬라이더 모양이 조금 마음에 안드네요
01:43:405 - 여기에 노트를 하나 두고 6,7번을 없애고 싶네요
01:45:310(2) - 이걸 모양을 조금 바꿔서 3번노트의 공간을 마련해두시는게 좋을꺼 같아요
01:49:595(3) - 위치좀 좀더 남서쪽으로 이동했으면 좋겠네요
01:52:691(2) - 스페이싱
01:58:643(2) - 모양을 좀더 안쪽으로 집어넣었으면 좋겠음
02:00:548 - 왜 뉴콤보?? 이거 해체 하고 다음노트에 하시는걸 추천
02:02:214 - 이것도 왜 뉴콤보?
02:03:405 - 여기에 뉴콤보 했으면 좋겠음 그리고 이런 슬라이더는 노말에서는 않쓰는게 좋을꺼 같은데
02:22:214 - 여기도 왼쪽으로 끌어다 두는게? 뒤에있는것도 다 고칠꺼라 생각하고 이제 언급않함
02:25:310 - 내가 하드하던 시절에 이런노트 보고 급당황 했습니다. 이런거 되도록이면 노말에서 자제
02:26:262 - 뉴콤보 했으면 좋겠음 0.5배속 구간인데 많이 헷갈릴듯 다음노트 연타로 알아볼 수 있는 상황까지
02:32:929(1,2) - 이것도 마창가지로 위아래 구분 안가는 노말플레이어들
02:33:881 - 여기도 뉴콤보 했으면 좋겠네요 아까전과 마창가지로
02:49:595 - 뉴콤보 헤체하고 다음노트에 뉴콤보
02:54:595(1) - 이 노트 끝지점을 02:57:214 까지 했으면 좋겠음 그리고 피니쉬 넣는거 추천
02:57:691 - 피니쉬 추천
02:58:643(1,2) - 이노트도 그만 지적할께요
02:59:595(4,5,6,7) - ^
03:14:833(2,3) - 2번을 직선으로 왼쪽으로 집어넣고 3번을 조금 이동해서 직선으로 하시는게 좋을꺼 같음
03:21:500 - 좀더 안쪽으로 집어넣었으면 좋겠음
03:23:167 - 여기서 잠깐 키아이 풀리는거 않좋습니다. 0.5배속에서 잠깐 해체 그런건 되는데 갑자기 왜 여기서? 스핀에서 터뜨리려고? 어짜파 스핀은 스토리보드도 가리고 다 가려서 소용없어요.
03:23:405 - 03:25:310에서 끝내시는게??

[Hard]
WIP now

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Star
La Valse
여 일단 별 1개 반이고
플레이타임 2분 5초 ^^ ;

Download: Tmax - Almost Paradise (sonnyc) [hutka's Easy].osu
Gothic_old
스타
Tanmak
이 맵을 다운받아봤는데 넘버가 7000대......혹시 묘지에서 부활하신겨...;;

[Hutka's Easy]
Fine.

[Hard]

01:24:357 (4) All clap?
02:45:072 (4,1) Nazi...but spacing?
03:20:548 (5) Remove clap?

이 외에도 마지막 부분에 Clap이 좀 많아서 듣기가 조금 어색한 면도 있는 것 같네요..

[Insane]

00:16:738 (4) New combo.
02:36:738 (2,3,4,5,6,7) Very Tricky~ lol. I think that redisigning is better.
02:55:548 (1) 인세인이라지만 이건 좀....

Starred..
Topic Starter
Sonnyc

Tanmak wrote:

이 맵을 다운받아봤는데 넘버가 7000대......혹시 묘지에서 부활하신겨...;;
그건 중요하지 않습니다! ㅋㅋ
Thx for modding
Leorda
Ayeonghasaseyo!

[General]
1) Source?

[Hard]
00:17:453 (x) - Add note?
01:31:738 (x) - ^

[Insane]
01:34:595 (1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have bonus score at least 2000)
03:22:453 (6) - Move 1 grid left


Nice map!
STAR
Topic Starter
Sonnyc

Leorda wrote:

Ayeonghasaseyo! -> Anyeonghaseyo

[General]
1) Source? -> OK, I'll put in..

[Hard]
00:17:453 (x) - Add note? -> Ok..
01:31:738 (x) - ^ -> Fix
[/color]

[Insane]
01:34:595 (1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have bonus score at least 2000) -> Fixed, but I didn't know that the 2000 BP includes also to insane..
03:22:453 (6) - Move 1 grid left
-> Well.. Fixed

Nice map!
STAR
+ Did you check out Hutka's Easy?
Breeze
Hmm, can't read prtevious post
I don't know Korean ;_;
oh,花样男子o.o

well, mod start~

[General]
  1. Delete osb.file
[hutka's Easy]
  1. raise both OA and HPDR 3-5 tick, it's really tooooooooo low
  2. 01:36:500 - spinner stars here
[Hard]
  1. 00:23:167 (2,3) - no clap here
  2. 01:34:595 (1) - end at 01:37:214
  3. 02:26:262 timing section - put it 1/4 early in case of early hit result in different slider speed
  4. 02:33:881 timing section - ^
  5. 02:57:214 - spinner ends here
  6. 03:02:453 (4) - turn of grid snap and put it overlapped with the end of (3)
  7. 03:23:286 timng section - delete it, I don't think here need a fountain
[Insane]
  1. 01:01:500 (7) - unexcepted 1/2 x BPM
  2. 01:34:595 - 1 spinner is better than 2, start 01:34:595 and end 01:37:214 wirh finish
  3. 02:26:262 timing section - put it 1/4 early in case of early hit result in different slider speed
  4. 02:33:881 - ^
  5. 02:42:929 (5) - werid spacing
  6. 03:23:286 timng section - delete it, I don't think here need a fountain
That's all, good map
have a star
La Valse
Topic Starter
Sonnyc

Breeze wrote:

Hmm, can't read prtevious post
I don't know Korean ;_;
oh,花样男子o.o Flower Shaped Guy??

well, mod start~

[General]
  1. Delete osb.file
Yes, but what's the use of OSB file?

[hutka's Easy]
  1. raise both OA and HPDR 3-5 tick, it's really tooooooooo low He raised some
  2. 01:36:500 - spinner stars here
Actually, he doesn't want to

[Hard]
  1. 00:23:167 (2,3) - no clap here
  2. 01:34:595 (1) - end at 01:37:214
  3. 02:26:262 timing section - put it 1/4 early in case of early hit result in different slider speed
  4. 02:33:881 timing section - ^
  5. 02:57:214 - spinner ends here
  6. 03:02:453 (4) - turn of grid snap and put it overlapped with the end of (3)
  7. 03:23:286 timng section - delete it, I don't think here need a fountain
Fixed all~

[Insane]
  1. 01:01:500 (7) - unexcepted 1/2 x BPM
  2. 01:34:595 - 1 spinner is better than 2, start 01:34:595 and end 01:37:214 wirh finish
  3. 02:26:262 timing section - put it 1/4 early in case of early hit result in different slider speed
  4. 02:33:881 - ^
  5. 02:42:929 (5) - werid spacing
  6. 03:23:286 timng section - delete it, I don't think here need a fountain
Fixed all~

That's all, good map
have a star
Thanks for the star, and modding~~
fartownik
Add "hutka" into the tags.
Any custom colours?
There's an unused background picture in the folder called "F4.jpg". Please delete it.


[hutka's Easy]
It would be nice if you change the Circle Size to Large.

[Hard]
Raise HP Drain by 1-2 ticks. It's like Normal parameters.
00:20:548 (7,1) - Swap new combo.
00:54:357 (5) - Finish hitsound.
00:58:167 (3) - Distance it directly.
[01:38:643] - Add a kiai flash?
01:40:072 (4) - Add a repeat to this slider?
02:33:405 (2) - Hidden slider. No idea it's a slider or 2 notes. Reposition please.
02:58:643 (2) - New combo.
03:23:405 (1) - End the spinner here: 03:25:310.

[Insane]
Raise HP Drain by 2-3 ticks!
Raise Overall Difficulty by 1-2 ticks!
00:48:524 (5,6) - Move 1/4 back.
00:56:143 (5,6) - ^
[01:38:643] - Add a kiai flash?
[02:37:453] - I expected a note here.
02:41:976 (3) - Delete this note, move next slider 1/4 back and expand it by 1/4.
02:54:595 (1,1) - This section looks ugly. Try to make it like this: First spinner end: 02:55:786; second spinner start: 02:56:738; second spinner end: 02:58:167; add a note here 02:56:262.
03:24:476 (1) - End the spinner here: 03:25:310.

Star.
Topic Starter
Sonnyc

fartownik wrote:

Add "hutka" into the tags.
Any custom colours?
There's an unused background picture in the folder called "F4.jpg". Please delete it.


[hutka's Easy]
It would be nice if you change the Circle Size to Large.

[Hard]
Raise HP Drain by 1-2 ticks. It's like Normal parameters.
00:20:548 (7,1) - Swap new combo.
00:54:357 (5) - Finish hitsound.
00:58:167 (3) - Distance it directly.
[01:38:643] - Add a kiai flash?
01:40:072 (4) - Add a repeat to this slider?
02:33:405 (2) - Hidden slider. No idea it's a slider or 2 notes. Reposition please.
02:58:643 (2) - New combo.
03:23:405 (1) - End the spinner here: 03:25:310.

[Insane]
Raise HP Drain by 2-3 ticks!
Raise Overall Difficulty by 1-2 ticks!
00:48:524 (5,6) - Move 1/4 back.
00:56:143 (5,6) - ^
[01:38:643] - Add a kiai flash?
[02:37:453] - I expected a note here.
02:41:976 (3) - Delete this note, move next slider 1/4 back and expand it by 1/4.
02:54:595 (1,1) - This section looks ugly. Try to make it like this: First spinner end: 02:55:786; second spinner start: 02:56:738; second spinner end: 02:58:167; add a note here 02:56:262.
03:24:476 (1) - End the spinner here: 03:25:310.

Star.
Well, hutka doesn't want to change the circle size~
Thanks for your help anyways.
[Exit]
Wow. good map. I know this song.

anyway, I give a star :)

I think many modding makes this map so good.

but most of all, sonnyc is good at mapping, maybe :)
YGOkid8
hutka's Easy

Since this isn't a difficulty you made, I don't think you'll be able to change it. But, my opinions:

00:19:351 (4, 1) - It's fine, I just personally don't like it
01:36:738 (1) - Try shortening it to 01:38:167. Newbies aren't really good at spin recovery
01:39:119 (1 ~ 1) - Feels a bit empty. Maybe can add something here

Hard
00:45:310 ~ 00:47:214 - Seems a bit like a pointless break

Overall, I find it a bit easy for Hard. And slider velocity feels a bit slow for a hard.

Insane
Looking fine :)
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If Hard and Insane are gonna be your hardest difficulties, name Hard "Almost Paradise" and Insane "Paradise" or something. I think that'll work well

star ~ *
DJPop
~hutka's Easy~
Fine.

~Hard~
00:23:881 (4) - new combo
00:28:167 (5) - ^
00:33:881 (5) - ^
01:17:691 (1) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:20:548 (3,4,5) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:50:548 (5) - new combo
01:56:262 (4) - ^
02:02:214 (1) - remove new combo
02:03:405 (3) - new combo
02:24:119 (6) - ^
02:25:310 (1) - remove new combo
02:31:738 (6) - new combo
02:32:929 (1) - remove new combo
02:40:548 (3) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
02:47:214 (1) - remove new combo
02:47:691 (2) - new combo
03:02:929 (6) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
03:03:405 (8,9,10) - ^
03:15:786 (4) - new combo

~Insane~
00:37:453 (5) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:01:262 (6) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:32:214 (1) - remove new combo


+Star
Vanmonky
As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for the second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
I'm not so sure but the source is Boys Before Flower, isn't it?

[hutka's Easy]
01:51:976 (1) - Remove whistle. Add finish at the beginning and clap at the repeat.
02:00:548 - Add note here.
02:02:453 - ^
02:05:310 (1) - Extend one 1/1 tick. Add finish.

[Hard]
00:25:548 - Add note here.
01:01:500 (4) - Reduce one 1/8 tick, then add two more repeats. [?]
02:05:429 (1) - Add finish.
01:02:453 - Add note here. Then add finish.

[Insane]
Overmapped for some streams.
00:15:905 (2) - Don't really like the stream.
Star.
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