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Asuca Hayashi - Chiisaki Mono

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aquabluu
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mm201
Love it!

I S'ed Gym Leader on the first time through. It contains patterns that usually foil me up, but none of them did this time around. I guess you did a good job hinting to the player what's coming up. I loled at the ending star--just like in EBA, but more stout and "Jirachified!" :D
Topic Starter
aquabluu
Thanks for that~
Okay, does ANYONE ELSE see this?
mm201
I was actually thinking of bumping this. It's an excellent song and an excellent map.

Here is my mini-mod for the day:

All difficulties:
  1. Not all of the notes appear to be snapped properly. Resnap and fix any 1/6 sliders by hand.
  2. 1:10'29: Strange how short this break is. I dislike breaks that don't show you your O or your accuracy.
Easy:
  1. Looks to be around a 0.6x spacing, so that is what I'm using. It's good through most of the song and all the streams.
  2. 0:28'95, 0:32'38, ...: Someone is going to tell you to move these notes back 1/4 to the offbeats. (I agree with your placement for Easy, but that's besides. :P)
  3. 0:39'66: Spacing. Just tuck (2) in a bit closer to (3) and the end of (1).
  4. 1:03'44 and 2:35'98: The timing for this note is kind of non-obvious for an Easy level. It's on the last syllable of "marune" / "ubete" (if I'm hearing the Japanese right), but there are no notes on any of the other syllables. Suggesting to add a note back by 1/2. (much like you did at 2:21'84)
  5. 1:26'36 and 3:22'90: Spacing.
  6. 1:53'78: Minor spacing.
  7. 2:08'35, 2:09'21, 2:18'63, 2:19'49: Spacing. They're a hair too close. There are other examples of this which I won't mention.
  8. 2:27'20: Spacing.
  9. 3:03'19: Move back 1/4 on the timeline. (same as 0:28'95) Also, the end of the slider sort of overlaps its start, which looks bad.
  10. 3:29'75: Same with the slider's end overlapping its start. (Shouldn't the star-shaped slider only rebound on the harder difficulties, as in EBA? :P)
Medium:
  1. Looks closer to a 1.2x spacing here, so this is what I'm using.
  2. 0:26'16: Spacing is too close. You have 1/4s elsewhere that don't overlap, so why do these? Applies pretty much everywhere where a dot overlaps another.
  3. 0:34'95: Spacing. You'll need to reshape this slider.
  4. 1:58'92: Spacing.
  5. 2:35'55: Spacing. This note is near-impossible to place properly without moving the previous slider, but at least give it some more distance than what it currently has. (Looks like a plain beat off.)
  6. 2:38'34: This is the only time in the song you arrange a bunch of notes in a square pattern rather than the curvy swooshes, and it looks lazy.
  7. 3:02'33: The slider overlaps itself in an awkward way at the end. Fatten it up a bit at the right.
Hard:
  1. Using same 1.2x spacing as in Medium.
  2. 0:15'02: Spacing too close. Same goes for any other overlapping 1/4s.
  3. 0:15'88, 0:29'59: Spacing a bit too wide.
  4. 1:48'43, 2:02'14: Spacing.
  5. 2:13'28: Spacing. Especially since the previous 5 notes use identical spacing but are plain beats.
  6. 2:24'20: Spacing.
  7. 2:37'91: Spacing.
  8. 2:49'48: This second slider perfectly overlaps the first. Even on a Hard level, the player ought to be aware of its existence, which approach circles aren't going to help him with.
All in all, a great map and a great song choice which puts me in mind of Ai - "Believe." I'd star it if I was more than some random dude. I have no clue why it's not getting any attention.
Topic Starter
aquabluu
The 1/6 sliders were meant to be that way :P
And I've never been too rigid with the spacing, as long as it doesn't jump out at the player, it's fine. Plus the perfectly overlapping slider, I don't know, but I've seen worse traps in other ranked maps than this. I'll take most of your suggestions though. Thanks.
And as for the short break, ever seen Caramelldansen on Insane? Now THAT'S a short break. But anyway, removed for good measure
mm201
You misunderstood. Hitting Resnap breaks 1/6 sliders. It turns them into these oddities that might be snapped to 1/8 timing or something. Of course they're good being there. :)
Topic Starter
aquabluu
Ohh :)
Good thing I only have like 2 or 3 of them in Hard mode~
minyeob
Oh no!
I'm making this beatmap too!!
I started to make this beatmap 2 weeks ago.

But I have no time!
Because I have to study!
Mid-term exam.. :( :(

I want to compete with you.... But

Big problem is.. I have two pending beatmaps. So I can't submit this..
Topic Starter
aquabluu
And by the way this looks, no one's gonna come mod for some time...And I don't know how to grab people's attention on IRC
Wait...You don't have a ranked map yet?
minyeob

aquabluu wrote:

And by the way this looks, no one's gonna come mod for some time...And I don't know how to grab people's attention on IRC
Wait...You don't have a ranked map yet?
I can't play osu at my pleasure for few months because of study. So a lot of my beatmap has gone to graveyard.

Wait...You don't have a ranked map yet?<< I think this sentence saids "You don't have a ranked beatmap so you have no requirement to compete with me."

My mind hurts :( :( :(
But I think your sentence's meaning doesn't accord with my guess. :) :)

I don't know how to grab people's attention on IRC too.
Topic Starter
aquabluu
No, I meant I thought you had a ranked map already. I remember seeing one of your pending maps and assumed you had it ranked already :/
Everyone deserves a chance at a ranked map.
minyeob

aquabluu wrote:

No, I meant I thought you had a ranked map already. I remember seeing one of your pending maps and assumed you had it ranked already :/
Everyone deserves a chance at a ranked map.
Ahh. You meant that? I'm Sorry. I'll try to look on the bright side of things. XD
On the contrary your mind hurts. :( :(

Everyone deserves a chance at a ranked map <----- You give me a deep impression. Thanks :) :)
Your beatmap image is pretty good.

By the way, I submitted my Chiisaki Mono.
Try it.

Download: Chris Daughtry - Home (Roddie).osb
minyeob
Why don't you using clap sound effects?
I'll give you 9 star.(vote)
Topic Starter
aquabluu
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mm201
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minyeob

MetalMario201 wrote:

Open up the .osu file for each difficulty. Change PreviewTime from -1 to 72655. This will start the preview just into the first chorus, which sounds better than the default. (I'm picky to the extreme like that. :P)

Why has no BAT come around and modded this yet? /me pesters on IRC
Don't blame BAT.
They have to mod so many beatmaps...
Creator have to call them.

Download: BanYa - Papa Gonzales (Bass-chan) [Sushi's Crazy].osu
Topic Starter
aquabluu

MetalMario201 wrote:

Open up the .osu file for each difficulty. Change PreviewTime from -1 to 72655. This will start the preview just into the first chorus, which sounds better than the default. (I'm picky to the extreme like that. :P)

Why has no BAT come around and modded this yet? /me pesters on IRC
Preview? What's that? (this sounds bad, doesn't it)
mm201
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Topic Starter
aquabluu
Ah, you can set that? I didn't know. Cool, thanks a lot!
Topic Starter
aquabluu
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mattyu007
Revived & moved to Help
mm201
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Topic Starter
aquabluu
Alright, I'll try out what you just said.
minyeob
This beatmap needs to get more attention.
*User Star'd"
I'll mod it later.

P.S give a kudosu to MetalMario!!
Topic Starter
aquabluu
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Topic Starter
aquabluu
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minyeob
Before modding this, The spacing of [Trainer] is not same.
It's for beginner, isn't it?
My beatmap just have been ranked few days ago(finally).
Before rank, BAT said "Spacing difference is not good for beginners"
So I have to say this.
[Trainer]
2:39:271(2),(3),(4) This is fine but

2:17:850(1),(2),(3) Spacing is too long.
2:50:429(4),(5),(6) Same as above.
These are example about the extremely long spacing(for beginners)
Topic Starter
aquabluu
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flyboy87
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Topic Starter
aquabluu
Okay, I'll do just that. Thanks :)
minyeob
Remod

[Gym leader]
1:17:436(3)-> Spacing is wrong.

[Wish Maker]
2:02:205(4)-> Extend 1/4 beat.
2:03:064(5)-> Remove this.

EDIT:mar 13,2009 (I don't want to make a double post.)
[Trainer]
1:23:849(6)-> This is too far from (5).
3:20:417(5)-> Same as above.
Topic Starter
aquabluu
Okay, all done.
Zekira
I WANT THIS MAP RANKED! *EXPLODES*

Saying that, I will help with my fullest ability. So let's start with the offset nazi-ing!

EDIT: WTF, my internet keeps dying and I can't download this map right now. Will update you later.
Topic Starter
aquabluu
Ah, thanks for your willingness to help :)
minyeob
Can I add my difficulty? lol

EDIT: minyeob stars. (I gave two stars)
I can give lots of Kudo stars if you want.

EDIT 2: I've just found your reply! lol Sorry, it gonna be late
Topic Starter
aquabluu
Ah, sure, go ahead~

And thanks for the stars. I know you've got a crapload of kudosu to spare :P
Yuukari-Banteki
[Trainer]
00:24:71 (3) - remove the finishes (maybe use one whistle)
00:29:85 (3) - clap the end
00:33:28 (6) - ^
00:34:99 (1) - remove middle whistle and make it a bit ah...prettier?
00:37:56 (2) - clap
00:50:42 (4) - clap the end
00:52:13 (1) - only finish every other hit
01:03:49 (2) - whistle
01:16:99 (2,3) - claps
01:23:84 (6) - spacing
01:32:41 (4) - whistle
01:34:13 (2) - start 1/4 earlier and whistle
01:39:27 (4) - clap
01:46:99 (1) - in this section there is a drumbeat in the music that you can pattern claps to
02:16:98 (3) - spacing
geez i give up this map is long and boring =.=
Zekira
...I was wondering why the hell this had a Jirachi image until I remembered where the song came from... *bonks me for being such an unfaithful Pokéfan*

*subscribes to thread waiting for response if aqua allows me to contribute a diff or what*

*might also mod this sometime*

SFG wrote:

geez i give up this map is long and boring =.=
tl;dm ?
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