1. Hard (4,77 stars, 76 notes)
2. Normal (3,37 stars, 239 notes)

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

well done . You set a preview point , your spacing is good , beatsounds sound well .
you get a star from me .

Snepif wrote:

Nice mapping, star :3

Selee wrote:

I'd put offset at 1412

btw, since the song is too slow to fit high AR, AR6 or AR7 sound a lot better than AR8 imo.

nice song, star ^^

Selee wrote:

I'd put offset at 1412

btw, since the song is too slow to fit high AR, AR6 or AR7 sound a lot better than AR8 imo.

nice song, star ^^

Ayeen wrote:

Selee wrote:

I'd put offset at 1412

btw, since the song is too slow to fit high AR, AR6 or AR7 sound a lot better than AR8 imo.

nice song, star ^^

I tried 1412 last night Selee, seem a bit off at the end of song. I tried at 1420 later on... though that was a quick check, not a thorough one

Ayeen wrote:

Selee wrote:

I'd put offset at 1412

btw, since the song is too slow to fit high AR, AR6 or AR7 sound a lot better than AR8 imo.

nice song, star ^^

I tried 1412 last night Selee, seem a bit off at the end of song. I tried at 1420 later on... though that was a quick check, not a thorough one

justnobody wrote:

[Hard]
01:28:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ehhhh... this kind of stream is really not fit for such a slow song... i like that so TT.TT
02:02:938 (1,2) - ugly overlap...?
most players/modders don't like overlaps like this...
02:45:470 (1,2) - spacing?
03:08:444 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - again... again TT.TT
03:18:508 (4,1) - spacing.

other than that everything is nice.

btw the source tag should be the name of producer.(i'm not sure about his/her name)
the name of album should be in the tags (not the source).

fixed everything
+star. thanks :3

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
tags and source is not the same in the 2 diffs. According to what we used to add them.... make the producer's name (minato or ryuuseiP, Shinxyn used ryuuseiP in Magnet) in the source, and put another name as well as the album's name in tags.
...why you have a 2ms lead-in in Normal, just curious.

[Normal]
00:53:255 (1) - remove
01:04:268 (1) - ^. it looks a little strange and not really easy to follow since you start with this note (for vocal), but the main beat is still following the drum
01:17:179 - add a note?
02:44:521 & 02:44:901 - remove clap
03:18:508 (4,1) - spacing error. people won't know it's a slowdown slider until they really hit it. so keep the normal spacing there.

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate -1, now it's unacceptable to me... since if i get 1*100 in every 20 combos i could just get my HP not drain... and it's easy to die at the end of the map... even you make no mistakes.
01:16:893 (10) - remove? i like the 1/8 before but not this one
01:26:673 (1,1) - too close... i don't think you should do this pretty hard thing for a relaxing song
02:11:483 (7,8,9,1) - could curve more smoothly
02:32:843 (9) - remove?
02:57:147 (6) - ^

RobotoRaccoon wrote:

Mod

Slow song :3

General
• Make the Background 1024x768 sure
• Audio Lead-in 500 or 1000? sure
• Stuff isn't on the grid? ehh... what do you mean?
No really, is grid snap on? Stuff just looks better on a grid.

[Normal]
02:14:331 (4) - Make this like so?

SPOILER

sure ^^
Nice diff thanks :3

[hard]
• OD +1? Scrap that. ok
02:32:938 (9) - Spacing on this fixed
Fun on Double Time :3 lol xD

Good mapping thanks ^^

Star

1. no error found, someone might nazi your slidertick though

1. i was wondering why 00:04:457 (2) didn't have a new combo while 00:07:495 (1) and 00:10:533 (1) have ones?
2. 00:26:483 (3,5) - i suggest going in grid LV4 and having white nodes like this so the slider looks perfectly:
   
   there're actually lots of sliders that makes me think you want them to be symmetrical but they didn't turn out to be, if you're indeed wishing them perfectly symmetrical, please fix them in grid LV4
3. 00:37:116 (1) - this is a transition between 2 paragraph, so i recommend lower the volume of these 2 claps
4. 00:40:913 (1) - del finish
5. 00:46:989 (1) - ^
   vocal not on these 2 beats (vocal is a glide starting from blue ticks) and is low (provides contrast to the 3 later finishes - which is high pitch - to be outstanding)
6. 02:04:078 (3,4) - combine into a single long slider or a repeat slider like 02:00:660 (3)
7. 02:05:976 (1,2,3) - suddenly going from follow the rhythm into follow the vocal..not a pretty idea, also vocal is offbeat here
8. 02:18:128 (1,1,1,1,1,2) - you can do a slight crescendo here
9. 02:26:863 (3) - clap
10. 03:00:280 (4) - clap startpoint

1. same as normal, you can make your sliders more delicious; also go through your diff and make sure the stacking is perfect, for example: 00:34:078 (6) - is not:
2. 00:37:115 (1,2,3) - same volume suggestion as Normal
3. 01:26:103 (9,10) - clap and clap
4. 02:03:508 (2) - not a good place to miss a whistle on white tick, use repeat slider instead so you'll have one?
5. 02:18:128 (1,2,3,4) - imo you can spam 1/4s (actually there's a 1/4 drum stream here) and place new combo every 3 circles like this (just clap every (1), don't clap (2,3)):
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:20:787 (4,5) - clap and clap
7. 02:24:964 (3) - missing clap?
8. 02:33:128 (10) - clap

loveFantasy wrote:

hi.

[General]

1. no error found, someone might nazi your slidertick though

[Normal]

1. i was wondering why 00:04:457 (2) didn't have a new combo while 00:07:495 (1) and 00:10:533 (1) have ones?
2. 00:26:483 (3,5) - i suggest going in grid LV4 and having white nodes like this so the slider looks perfectly:
   
   there're actually lots of sliders that makes me think you want them to be symmetrical but they didn't turn out to be, if you're indeed wishing them perfectly symmetrical, please fix them in grid LV4
3. 00:37:116 (1) - this is a transition between 2 paragraph, so i recommend lower the volume of these 2 claps
4. 00:40:913 (1) - del finish
5. 00:46:989 (1) - ^
   vocal not on these 2 beats (vocal is a glide starting from blue ticks) and is low (provides contrast to the 3 later finishes - which is high pitch - to be outstanding)
6. 02:04:078 (3,4) - combine into a single long slider or a repeat slider like 02:00:660 (3)
7. 02:05:976 (1,2,3) - suddenly going from follow the rhythm into follow the vocal..not a pretty idea, also vocal is offbeat here
8. 02:18:128 (1,1,1,1,1,2) - you can do a slight crescendo here
9. 02:26:863 (3) - clap
10. 03:00:280 (4) - clap startpoint

[Hard]

1. same as normal, you can make your sliders more delicious; also go through your diff and make sure the stacking is perfect, for example: 00:34:078 (6) - is not:
2. 00:37:115 (1,2,3) - same volume suggestion as Normal
3. 01:26:103 (9,10) - clap and clap
4. 02:03:508 (2) - not a good place to miss a whistle on white tick, use repeat slider instead so you'll have one?
5. 02:18:128 (1,2,3,4) - imo you can spam 1/4s (actually there's a 1/4 drum stream here) and place new combo every 3 circles like this (just clap every (1), don't clap (2,3)):
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:20:787 (4,5) - clap and clap
7. 02:24:964 (3) - missing clap?
8. 02:33:128 (10) - clap

star

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Request Accepted

General
BPM 158 (double the original BPM, it just doesn't feeel right using 1/8 in here :p) will change tomorrow, i am tired now >.<
delete .osb and full submit
{tags} maybe change "Vocaloid" to "Vocaloid2" OR add "Vocaloid2" to the tags
{map elements} find a BG that related to the title? (himawari -> sunflower) you don't have to though, it's already good enough
Normal
02:03:318 (2,3) - stack each other's slider end (ignore spacing)
02:06:546 (2) - (nazi) align it straight with (1)'s slider-end (hold shift to temporarily turn off grid snap, move the (2) a bit to the right, it should be snapped aligned straight w/ (1)'s slider-end)

good map!
STAR!