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ClariS - Neo Moon

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eveless
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年5月18日 at 18:01:50

Artist: ClariS
Title: Neo Moon
Tags: eveless irony sorda s_o_r_d_a Alace Alazy
BPM: 74
Filesize: 6458kb
Play Time: 03:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alace's Taiko (4.94 stars, 856 notes)
  2. Hard (4.74 stars, 582 notes)
  3. S o r d a's Normal (2.71 stars, 229 notes)
Download: ClariS - Neo Moon
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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05.02 Add lyric sb
05.03 Changed new bg
05.07 Add S o r d a's Normal
05.07 Add ugly skin/deleted sth
05.08 Finished Hard , move to pending
05.14 Add Alace's taiko
kiririn_
NanaDesu
再見姐
Curisu
求E姐做专辑里的ココロの引力
嘛~这首也挺喜欢的 :D

star
Natteke
0.0/
banvi
hi eveless sama >~</
S o r d a
JoJo
8-)
Orgol
fight eveve
Kiiwa
kyaa eve-sama~!
比起前一個我喜歡新的背景 :oops:
Cyril Scarlet
:shock:
Raging Bull
Tried doing M4M, but nothing really bothered me. >.< Starred. Good map.
wcx19911123
E姐好 > <

All suggestions

[General]
BG不1024×768么?

[S o r d a's Normal]
00:02:840 (1) - try this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86005
00:20:272 (2) - 1 gird left
00:22:704 (X) - try this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86006
00:36:084 (5,6) - I think not to track is better
00:50:273 (7) - end at 00:50:476
00:55:341 (x) - add circle
01:41:152 (8,9) - spacing
01:46:625 (5,6) - stream should be the same spacing between circles imo
02:04:463 (5) - move to 02:04:260
02:10:138 (6) - clap
02:10:949 (8) - vol down finish
02:15:003 (4) - clap , I ignored same suggestions after this

[Hard]
00:10:948 (3,4,5) - spacing
01:19:260 (3,4) - ctrl+r
02:25:138 (2,3,4,5,6) - lol , nowcombo or remap plz
awesome diff > <

OK,that's all
Star
chungskale
I can't see the insane diff. :S
did you full submitted? or maybe sever delay

I enjoy this song! Relaxing :D
Ok..not much to pick, opinions~
[S o r d a's Normal]
  1. i dont understand Normal diff. much :S but just imo there are some places should add some notes or slider. A bit waiting too long~
  2. 00:09:326 (1) - not really match o.o maybe start on blue line
  3. 00:12:164 (3) - maybe half it and start at 00:12:569 -
  4. 02:56:354 (4) - move to 02:56:152 -

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:448 (2,3) - this confused me. maybe try to be like this?
  2. 02:55:341 (5) - use clap instead?
  3. 02:58:179 - clap too?
  4. 02:58:584 (2) - use finish instead?
Topic Starter
eveless

wcx19911123 wrote:

E姐好 > <

All suggestions

[General]
BG不1024×768么?

[Hard]
00:10:948 (3,4,5) - spacingk
01:19:260 (3,4) - ctrl+rno , on purpose
02:25:138 (2,3,4,5,6) - lol , nowcombo or remap plz new combo
awesome diff > <

OK,that's all
Star

chungskale wrote:

I can't see the insane diff. :S
did you full submitted? or maybe sever delay
oh...mistake , it's Hard not Insane lol
I enjoy this song! Relaxing :D
Ok..not much to pick, opinions~
[S o r d a's Normal]
  1. i dont understand Normal diff. much :S but just imo there are some places should add some notes or slider.I think is fine , this map just follow the lyric..old mapping style i guess , likes this map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/15950 .
    Any ways , leave Normal's mod to Sorda o.o



    [Hard]
    1. 00:03:448 (2,3) - this confused me. maybe try to be like this?changed , another way tho
    2. 02:55:341 (5) - use clap instead?[/color]
    3. 02:58:179 - clap too?^
    4. 02:58:584 (2) - use finish instead?k[/color]
ertyukjh010
Good Map, Star.
swish
claris :)
S o r d a

wcx19911123 wrote:

[S o r d a's Normal]
00:02:840 (1) - try this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86005
00:20:272 (2) - 1 gird left
00:22:704 (X) - try this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86006
00:36:084 (5,6) - I think not to track is better
00:50:273 (7) - end at 00:50:476
00:55:341 (x) - add circle
01:41:152 (8,9) - spacing
01:46:625 (5,6) - stream should be the same spacing between circles imo
02:04:463 (5) - move to 02:04:260
02:10:138 (6) - clap
02:10:949 (8) - vol down finish
02:15:003 (4) - clap , I ignored same suggestions after this
All Fixed

chungskale wrote:

I can't see the insane diff. :S
did you full submitted? or maybe sever delay

I enjoy this song! Relaxing :D
Ok..not much to pick, opinions~
[S o r d a's Normal]
  1. i dont understand Normal diff. much :S but just imo there are some places should add some notes or slider. A bit waiting too long~
  2. 00:09:326 (1) - not really match o.o maybe start on blue line Changed
  3. 00:12:164 (3) - maybe half it and start at 00:12:569 - no changed
  4. 02:56:354 (4) - move to 02:56:152 -Fix
thanks mod
wcx19911123 and chungskale
and some changed
IRC some advice by swish

Download: ClariS - Neo Moon (goodbye) [S o r d a's Normal].osu
Suzully
ClariS :!:
loveFantasy
液 渣mod

[General]
- LetterboxInBreaks統一, 一個有開一個沒開..
- 勾display storyboard in front of combo fire.
- 有些歌詞sb左邊的字邊框被切了一些啊233
- 由於有custom hitcircle, 建議強迫白色slider邊框. 我的custom skin是黑邊框啊T_T

[Sorda's Normal]
<00:09:529> (1,2) delete (2) and repeat (1) 1 more time bring better visual effect
<00:17:434> (2) add whistle here
<00:52:098> (3,4) is this spacing intentional..?
<01:05:273> (2) adjust shape a bit (2nd node: x:125 y:80) pic:
<01:09:125> add a note
<01:21:490> (6) whistle here instead, clap is barely hearable
<01:24:327> (T) unused timing section, remove
<01:35:273> (4) add clap or whistle here
<01:39:936> (5) new combo for consistency
<01:41:354> (9) add clap or whistle here
<01:43:584> (1) finish endpoint instead of startpoint
<01:52:300> (T) hmm..end KIAI during break? move it to 1:50:679?
<02:45:409> (T) unused timing section, remove
- 2nd KIAI: almost same rhythm to 1st KIAI, so apply same mods
<02:54:530> (4) new combo here, keep the same combo color arrangement as 1st KIAI?
<03:07:503> (4) new combo

[Hard]
- 有些同時下了whistle和clap的地方都感覺只需要clap? 像是
<01:18:652> (2), <01:37:503> (1) <01:39:733> (2,5) 等等...

<00:09:934> (2) new combo挪來這?
<01:10:341> (1,2,3) 微調一下位置keep 1.0x spacing
<01:23:922> (1) new combo move to <01:24:530> (3)?
<01:31:017> (7) 拔掉whistle?
- 好多高白線前的紅線finish啊o.o..
<02:19:057> (3..) 個人感覺下這樣的節奏比較好聽

<02:48:246> (6) keep spacing imo
<02:50:273> (5) 移到(3)和(4)起點的中間?
- 這張排得真好看:3
Topic Starter
eveless

loveFantasy wrote:

液 渣mod

[General]
- LetterboxInBreaks統一, 一個有開一個沒開..fixed
- 勾display storyboard in front of combo fire.fixed
- 有些歌詞sb左邊的字邊框被切了一些啊233我懒o.o
- 由於有custom hitcircle, 建議強迫白色slider邊框. 我的custom skin是黑邊框啊T_T加过可是不好看:_;


[Hard]
- 有些同時下了whistle和clap的地方都感覺只需要clap? 像是因为clap和wh是分开来加的 算是两套o.o...
<01:18:652> (2), <01:37:503> (1) <01:39:733> (2,5) 等等...

<00:09:934> (2) new combo挪來這?咦怎么会在这里lol
<01:10:341> (1,2,3) 微調一下位置keep 1.0x spacingk
<01:23:922> (1) new combo move to <01:24:530> (3)?还是觉得现在比较有整体感O_o
<01:31:017> (7) 拔掉whistle?k
- 好多高白線前的紅線finish啊o.o..
<02:19:057> (3..) 個人感覺下這樣的節奏比較好聽微妙违和感

<02:48:246> (6) keep spacing imok
<02:50:273> (5) 移到(3)和(4)起點的中間?k
- 這張排得真好看:3
thanks o.o
S o r d a

loveFantasy wrote:

[Sorda's Normal]
<00:09:529> (1,2) delete (2) and repeat (1) 1 more time bring better visual effect
<00:17:434> (2) add whistle here
<00:52:098> (3,4) is this spacing intentional..?
<01:05:273> (2) adjust shape a bit (2nd node: x:125 y:80) pic:
<01:09:125> add a note
<01:21:490> (6) whistle here instead, clap is barely hearable
<01:24:327> (T) unused timing section, remove
<01:35:273> (4) add clap or whistle here
<01:39:936> (5) new combo for consistency
<01:41:354> (9) add clap or whistle here
<01:43:584> (1) finish endpoint instead of startpoint
<01:52:300> (T) hmm..end KIAI during break? move it to 1:50:679? Deleted Break
<02:45:409> (T) unused timing section, remove
- 2nd KIAI: almost same rhythm to 1st KIAI, so apply same mods
<02:54:530> (4) new combo here, keep the same combo color arrangement as 1st KIAI?
<03:07:503> (4) new combo
All fixed
thanks mod ~>_<

Download: ClariS - Neo Moon (goodbye) [S o r d a's Normal].osu
net45291
Star ~
Alace
KanaRin
老師's Taiko Irc modded.

Edit: Rating: 9 / 10
Alace
Kotone
8-)
gdeath
[General]:
  1. Add Alazy into tag.
  2. 唔唔唔。竟然用Moira中双子的图来做这首歌的背景wwwーー
  3. 图本身没看出什么问题。以下我就说说SB的issue吧。
[SB Stuff]:
  1. 7.png - 歌词给人感觉凑得过于紧凑,都快挨边了(不,都已经挨边了www,觉得分成两句来会显得更美观些)* nazi
  2. 12.png - 往右再稍微移动点,为了和前面的位置感保持一致。
  3. 15.png - 由于歌词太长,第一个假名a一半消失到边框外了。(分两句作SB效果……)
  4. 20.png - 唔。拉那么长的时间做淡出处理感觉总不太舒服。既然是最后一句,效果弄的华丽些会感觉有种质上的提升。比如字体、大小、颜色、效果等等重新焕然一新下。
[Alace's Taiko]:
  1. 用auto君自动看了下音效很赞。特别是开头和高潮部分给我留下了很深印象。
Good stuff.
/me shoots a star.

Nazi mod, no kds.
lepidopodus
Played Taiko map via Alace's recommendation. (Yeah, it's his map anyway.) Just some suggestions.

Alace's Taiko
- Can feel a bit awkwardness in pulse of very first part, but as BPM is low, barlines are appearing in every beats, so, no issues.

00:24:326 (60) - Remove this would be better? There's not that big sound relevant for this big note.
01:24:733 (1) - Might consider remove this to emphasize 01:24:530 (31), as strongest beat moves to that? Not that important though. (Can be applied to 2nd kiai time, too.)
01:37:706 (1) - Similar with above.
01:52:098 (7,8,9,15) - How about Changing 7,8,9 to big notes(or to D?), and changing 15 to ordinary one?

Yeah, nice as always. Neet Neat map XD
Alace
thanks for your suggestions
they are important to me XD

Download: ClariS - Neo Moon (goodbye) [Alace's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
eveless

gdeath wrote:

[General]:
  1. Add Alazy into tag.
  2. 唔唔唔。竟然用Moira中双子的图来做这首歌的背景wwwーー
  3. 图本身没看出什么问题。以下我就说说SB的issue吧。
[SB Stuff]:
  1. 7.png - 歌词给人感觉凑得过于紧凑,都快挨边了(不,都已经挨边了www,觉得分成两句来会显得更美观些)* nazi
  2. 12.png - 往右再稍微移动点,为了和前面的位置感保持一致。
  3. 15.png - 由于歌词太长,第一个假名a一半消失到边框外了。(分两句作SB效果……)
  4. 20.png - 唔。拉那么长的时间做淡出处理感觉总不太舒服。既然是最后一句,效果弄的华丽些会感觉有种质上的提升。比如字体、大小、颜色、效果等等重新焕然一新下。
[Alace's Taiko]:
  1. 用auto君自动看了下音效很赞。特别是开头和高潮部分给我留下了很深印象。
Good stuff.
/me shoots a star.

Nazi mod, no kds.
偷懒的修了下SB...
statementreply
:o
Mety
hihi
給你一些我的建議 :D

[S o r d a's normal]

00:10:542(2) 不太好讀 ~.~


[ hard ]

00:59:570(4) 下去1小格
02:18:044(8)左3小格 下1小格
02:43:787(4)左2小格
03:11:557 +1個whistle 會不會更好>-<

(不是很好的mod.. 多多包涵 :? )

nice song & mapset ^^
Topic Starter
eveless

Mety wrote:

hihi
給你一些我的建議 :D

[S o r d a's normal]

00:10:542(2) 不太好讀 ~.~
I think Sorda cant read chinese , so translate here : hard to read / 読みにくい


[ hard ]

00:59:570(4) 下去1小格k
02:18:044(8)左3小格 下1小格changed spacing
02:43:787(4)左2小格changed new combo
03:11:557 +1個whistle 會不會更好>-<k

(不是很好的mod.. 多多包涵 :? )

nice song & mapset ^^
S o r d a
>>eveless
Thank you for translating it
Sorry late

>>Mety
Deleted note
thanks mod~

Download: ClariS - Neo Moon (goodbye) [S o r d a's Normal].osu
ibavnoci
This is good. Don't give up! 8-)
kioukiou
[S o r d a's Normal]



02:55:138 (1) - Remove new combo?(Just a suggestion)

Others are good.
Topic Starter
eveless

kioukiou wrote:

[S o r d a's Normal]



02:55:138 (1) - Remove new combo?(Just a suggestion)

Others are good.
fixed :3

thanks moe moe kiou oneesama >A<
kioukiou
Bubbled.
S o r d a
finally bubble :P
KRZY
BL.
Topic Starter
eveless

KRZY wrote:

BL.
where is BL..

kowareta KRZY...
Clare
YO!
minyeob
fixed lol things and rank~
Topic Starter
eveless

minyeob wrote:

fixed lol things and rank~
really sorry T.T i'm really careless....

<(_ _)>
yurai3103
Congratulations ranked ;)
I m, this map is downloading,I love ClariS (´▽`)~♥
Natteke
Congrats evewwwwwwwwwwwwwww
S o r d a
yey congrats~
Topic Starter
eveless
Thanks >A<
My1_old
that is a nice map and I have only one thing to complain

[Style]
plese correct the sliderbordercolor, when you use a skin with colored sliderborder it doesnt look so nice...
just open the .osu file with a text editor and insert the line
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
in the [Colors] section after the combocolors
hasel17
Good Beatmap!
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