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Jessica&Onew - One Year Later

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Topic Starter
Sunny Holic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 10월 12일 화요일 at 오후 11:16:29

Artist: Jessica&Onew
Title: One Year Later
Tags: SNSD SHINee Tiny stone Girls Generation
BPM: 65
Filesize: 19654kb
Play Time: 03:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.44 stars, 162 notes)
  2. Tiny stone's DIFF!! (4.57 stars, 460 notes)
Download: Jessica&Onew - One Year Later
Download: Jessica&Onew - One Year Later (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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6th Track of Girls' Generation 2nd Mini Album - Genie

Video: 090829.Jessica&Onew - One Year Later@MBC Music Core

Skin by Gens
Vikon
[General]
1) add a [N] diff ?
2) add a silence sliderside file ?

[Easy]
00:05:637 - (1) add clap here?
00:08:406 (1,2,3) - turn up the volume slowly using these sliders?
00:37:945 (1) - turn up the volume slowly instead of increase it suddenly?
01:48:098 (1) - ^
03:17:637 (2) - add clap here?
03:25:021 (3) - ^

[tiny stone's DIFF!!]
about the diff name...
1) players may find those 2 "!" awful
2) use "Difficulty" instead of "DIFF" ?
00:09:329 (6) - add clap here?
-----------------------
00:11:868 add a timing section here and change the audio to "soft" ?
if you do this^, 00:14:868 (1) - add whistle here?
00:18:791 (3,4) - ^
00:20:406 (1,4) - ^
00:24:098 (11,1) - ^
00:26:868 (2) - ^
00:30:560 (6) - change clap to whistle?
00:33:329 (6) - ^
00:37:714 add a timing section here and change it back to "Normal"
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00:37:945 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - turn up the volume slowly ?
00:43:022 (8) - new combo
00:54:329 (5) - end at 00:55:022 ?
01:10:945 the volume of this part is toooo soft, turn up the volume a little bit?
01:16:714 (10) - it seems better to let the break start at 01:18:098, so remove the clap at01:16:714 (10) , and add notes at01:17:175, and 01:17:637 (this one with clap) ?
01:52:483 (11) - end this slider at 01:52:714 and add clap at the end ?
02:07:252 (7) - similar to ^, end at 02:07:483 and add clap at the end.
02:09:098 (12) - ^
03:34:945 turn up the volume a little bit?
03:39:329 (1) - make a fade out effect of sound instead of silence it suddenly?

star~
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) add a [N] diff ?
2) add a silence sliderside file ?

[Easy]
00:05:637 - (1) add clap here?
00:08:406 (1,2,3) - turn up the volume slowly using these sliders?
00:37:945 (1) - turn up the volume slowly instead of increase it suddenly?
01:48:098 (1) - ^
03:17:637 (2) - add clap here?
03:25:021 (3) - ^

[tiny stone's DIFF!!]
about the diff name...
1) players may find those 2 "!" awful
2) use "Difficulty" instead of "DIFF" ?
00:09:329 (6) - add clap here?
-----------------------
00:11:868 add a timing section here and change the audio to "soft" ?
if you do this^, 00:14:868 (1) - add whistle here?
00:18:791 (3,4) - ^
00:20:406 (1,4) - ^
00:24:098 (11,1) - ^
00:26:868 (2) - ^
00:30:560 (6) - change clap to whistle?
00:33:329 (6) - ^
00:37:714 add a timing section here and change it back to "Normal"
-----------------------
00:37:945 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - turn up the volume slowly ?
00:43:022 (8) - new combo
00:54:329 (5) - end at 00:55:022 ?
01:10:945 the volume of this part is toooo soft, turn up the volume a little bit?
01:16:714 (10) - it seems better to let the break start at 01:18:098, so remove the clap at01:16:714 (10) , and add notes at01:17:175, and 01:17:637 (this one with clap) ?
01:52:483 (11) - end this slider at 01:52:714 and add clap at the end ?
02:07:252 (7) - similar to ^, end at 02:07:483 and add clap at the end.
02:09:098 (12) - ^
03:34:945 turn up the volume a little bit?
03:39:329 (1) - make a fade out effect of sound instead of silence it suddenly?

star~
thank your modding with great effort
many suggestions are helpful thank you
Skyblue_old_1
star~~
weixiaootaku
star :) sica jjang
Kurai
:3


Green = Suggestion
Orange = You should fix it
Red = You need to fix it

[Easy]
00:09:329 (2) - Add clap at the beginning
00:12:098 (1) - Add clap at end
00:14:868 (1) - Add clap at the beginning
00:16:714 (3) - Add clap
00:19:483 (1) - Add clap at end
00:22:252 (1) - Add clap at the beginning
00:37:022 (5) - ^
01:12:098 (2) - ^
01:13:022 (3) - Add clap at end
01:47:175 (3) - Add clap at the beginning
01:56:406 (2) - ^
02:11:175 (2) - Add clap
03:19:021 (4) - Remove clap at end and add finish
03:27:791 (1) - Add clap at the second reverse


[Tiny Stone's DIFF]
00:04:714 (9) - New combo
00:05:637 (4) - [Nazi] Move 2 grid left
00:06:098 (5) - [Nazi] Move 2 grid down
00:23:637 (8) - New combo

00:23:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part sounds weird, I think you need to change it
00:25:945 (1) - Add clap at the beginning
00:58:252 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning
01:00:098 (5) - Remove clap
01:01:945 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning
01:02:637 (5) - Remove clap at end
01:05:637 (5) - Remove clap
01:07:252 (10) - Remove clap at end
01:12:098 (4) - Add clap at the beginning
01:50:868 (6) - Add clap
03:12:098 (7) - Add clap


Nice map ;D Star
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

KuraiPettan wrote:

:3


Green = Suggestion
Orange = You should fix it
Red = You need to fix it

[Easy]
00:09:329 (2) - Add clap at the beginning
00:12:098 (1) - Add clap at end
00:14:868 (1) - Add clap at the beginning
00:16:714 (3) - Add clap
00:19:483 (1) - Add clap at end
00:22:252 (1) - Add clap at the beginning
00:37:022 (5) - ^
01:12:098 (2) - ^
01:13:022 (3) - Add clap at end
01:47:175 (3) - Add clap at the beginning
01:56:406 (2) - ^
02:11:175 (2) - Add clap
03:19:021 (4) - Remove clap at end and add finish
03:27:791 (1) - Add clap at the second reverse


[Tiny Stone's DIFF]
00:04:714 (9) - New combo
00:05:637 (4) - [Nazi] Move 2 grid left
00:06:098 (5) - [Nazi] Move 2 grid down
00:23:637 (8) - New combo

00:23:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part sounds weird, I think you need to change it
00:25:945 (1) - Add clap at the beginning
00:58:252 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning
01:00:098 (5) - Remove clap
01:01:945 (3) - Remove clap at the beginning
01:02:637 (5) - Remove clap at end
01:05:637 (5) - Remove clap
01:07:252 (10) - Remove clap at end
01:12:098 (4) - Add clap at the beginning
01:50:868 (6) - Add clap
03:12:098 (7) - Add clap


Nice map ;D Star
all done.
thank you~
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
i guess add a Normal is better... (also, a Easy diff by the mapper and a Hard by guest...is kind of weird imo)

[Easy]
02:54:791 (1) - emm... i don't think you need to mute this..
03:12:560 - add a note?
good enough as a Easy diff.

[Tiny Stone's DIFF]
00:18:329 (1,2,3,4) - ...what is this for, make players try again..? this is a SLOW song.
00:35:868 (6,7,8) - spacing.
00:44:175 (4,5,6) - spacing.
00:53:868 (4) - make this note farther so people won't misread it as 1/2.
00:55:714 (7,8,9) - .... if you really want to use this at least new combo on 7, and i have to say i can't agree such spacing in such a song, just stupid.
01:41:637 (1,2,3) - ...
01:49:021 (10) - at least a new combo
01:55:483 (8,9,10) - ...tbh i don't know where's the "jump" feeling?
tired of spacings like this... won't continue to find problems like this since it's obvious you made them this way. but i just can't agree.
Leorda
Annyeonghaseyo

[General]
You need a score-x, score-percent, score-dot, and score-comma

[Easy]
00:56:868 (5) - New combo?
00:57:791 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:28:714 (7) - New combo, very long for easy diff

01:29:637 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:42:560 (1) - This object is too far from spinner, or else, the new player would be difficult to get it

[Tiny stone's DIFF!!]
Some jumps are not fit to the song, I guess

01:10:252 (13) - New combo?
01:36:098 (9) - ^
01:44:175 (8) - ^

Not bad
STAR
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
i guess add a Normal is better... (also, a Easy diff by the mapper and a Hard by guest...is kind of weird imo)
:arrow: 我试了很多次,做一半全删,做一半又删…… 也问了一个人做guest diff,结果那人也放弃。 最后还是放弃了……
[Easy]
02:54:791 (1) - emm... i don't think you need to mute this..
:arrow: done~
03:12:560 - add a note?
:arrow: done~
good enough as a Easy diff.

[Tiny Stone's DIFF]
00:18:329 (1,2,3,4) - ...what is this for, make players try again..? this is a SLOW song.
00:35:868 (6,7,8) - spacing.
00:44:175 (4,5,6) - spacing.
00:53:868 (4) - make this note farther so people won't misread it as 1/2.
00:55:714 (7,8,9) - .... if you really want to use this at least new combo on 7, and i have to say i can't agree such spacing in such a song, just stupid.
01:41:637 (1,2,3) - ...
01:49:021 (10) - at least a new combo
01:55:483 (8,9,10) - ...tbh i don't know where's the "jump" feeling?
tired of spacings like this... won't continue to find problems like this since it's obvious you made them this way. but i just can't agree.
:arrow: 虽然不是我做的难度…… 我觉得这难度挺好玩的。 只是观点不同~ 我相信也有人会喜欢这难度

Leorda wrote:

Annyeonghaseyo

[General]
You need a score-x, score-percent, score-dot, and score-comma
:arrow: why? :3

[Easy]
00:56:868 (5) - New combo?
00:57:791 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:28:714 (7) - New combo, very long for easy diff

01:29:637 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:42:560 (1) - This object is too far from spinner, or else, the new player would be difficult to get it
:arrow: done~ good~~ thank you~

[Tiny stone's DIFF!!]
Some jumps are not fit to the song, I guess

01:10:252 (13) - New combo?
01:36:098 (9) - ^
01:44:175 (8) - ^
:arrow: done~

Not bad
STAR
thx~~
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. suggest silent the normal-sliderslide.wav
[Easy]:
  1. 00:01:022~00:39:791 (T) - use soft-hitwhistle as normal-clap works much better for this section
  2. 01:22:252~01:49:945 (T) - ^
  3. 03:38:868 (3) - the sliderslide suddenly disapeared in the middle :O and how about end this diff at the same time as tiny stone's?
[Tiny stone's DIFF!!]:
  1. same hitsounds suggestion as Easy and 萨米的童鞋泥嚎 :D
  2. 有写地方跳的太过了 Orz 对我这样的沙包来说 ;_;
nice~
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. suggest silent the normal-sliderslide.wav
:arrow: 呃……我觉得还是挺配音乐的说……

[Easy]:
  1. 00:01:022~00:39:791 (T) - use soft-hitwhistle as normal-clap works much better for this section
  2. 01:22:252~01:49:945 (T) - ^
    :arrow: 我一开始是用soft hitsound,发现 'hit' sound 在这首好难听……所以用了normal。不是clap的问题 ;_;
  3. 03:38:868 (3) - the sliderslide suddenly disapeared in the middle :O and how about end this diff at the same time as tiny stone's?
    :arrow: good done~
[Tiny stone's DIFF!!]:
  1. same hitsounds suggestion as Easy and 萨米的童鞋泥嚎 :D
  2. 有写地方跳的太过了 Orz 对我这样的沙包来说 ;_;
:arrow: 呃…… 我支持图的多样性 ;p

nice~
3Q~
Andrea
Revived.
IceBeam
[Easy]
You have so beautiful Finish hitsound,it perfectly fits the song,why don't you add them? Follow my suggestions:
00:26:868 - Finish.
00:30:560 (5) - ^ (optional)
00:34:252 (1) - ^
00:41:637 (1) - ^
00:49:022 (2) - ^
00:56:406 - ^
01:03:791 (1) - ^
01:22:252 (1) - ^
01:29:637 (1) - ^
01:40:714 (4) - ^ (optional)
01:44:406 - ^
01:51:791 - ^
01:59:175 - ^
02:06:560 (2) - ^
02:13:945 (3) - ^
02:21:329 (1,2) - You may add finishes to both of them.
02:43:252 (2) - Finish.
02:44:406 (3) - I'm not sure if these repeats are in the right place,at least last 2 of them seems a bit out.Maybe change this slider to something else,using different notes?
02:47:175 (4) - Finish.
02:50:868 (4) - ^
03:05:637 - ^
03:09:329 (4) - Again,I'm not sure if this reverse-slider is correct.
03:13:021 (1) - Finish.
03:27:791 (1) - ^
03:31:483 (1) - ^ (optional)
03:35:175 (1) - ^

[Tiny stone]
The song is cute and relaxing,and this diff seems overmapped to me.
Distance changes randomly sometimes,also,it needs a lot of hitsound work.
I'm not sure,but I suggest you to remap it.Make a normal instead,it will look much better,in my opinion.

I like relaxing songs and maps,they don't really need to be hard at all.
And I'm also wish you will use my finish suggestions.
Cute,star~
wmfchris
[Tiny stone's DIFF!]
0:28:714 (2,3,4,5,6) spacing of (2,3,4) = 1.00x but (4,5,6) = 1.06x?
0:35:637 (1,2,3) put (2) about the mid-pt of (1,3)?
0:45:791 (3) right 1 grid
1:00:791 (4,5,6) uneven spacing
2:51:098 (2) left a bit?

nice arrangement and star~

*imo that's fine, not overmapped in terms of note density and it still fits the song~
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic
except technical problem, everyone have different opinion so problems that wrong completely are can not be existent
so i hope modders don't maintain own opinion when modding

wmfchris wrote:

[Tiny stone's DIFF!]
0:28:714 (2,3,4,5,6) spacing of (2,3,4) = 1.00x but (4,5,6) = 1.06x?
i think it's because of grid snap
Joon
hi

my modding

[Easy]
00:25:945 (1) - End Notes add finish
02:47:175 (4) - Start Notes add finish
02:50:868 (4) - End Notes add finish?
03:22:252 (2) - End Notes add finish

[Tiny storne's DiFF!!]
00:41:637 (7) - Start Notes add finish
00:49:022 (3) - ^
00:56:406 (5) - ^
01:29:637 (1) - ^
01:36:098 (1) - add clap
01:37:021 (1,2) - why clap? remove clap. it awkward
01:51:791 (9) - Start Notes add finish
01:57:098 (8) - End Notes remove clap
02:00:098 (5) - Start Notes add clap
02:01:945 (12) - ^
02:06:560 (5) - Start Notes add finish
02:10:252 (3) - ^
02:11:175 (5) - remove clap. it awkward
03:06:329 (7) - End Notes add clap
03:08:175 (5) - ^
03:20:175 (7) - End Notes add finish
03:20:868 (8) - add clap?


yeah~ K-pop
+star
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

Joon wrote:

hi

my modding

[Easy]
00:25:945 (1) - End Notes add finish
02:47:175 (4) - Start Notes add finish
02:50:868 (4) - End Notes add finish?
03:22:252 (2) - End Notes add finish

[Tiny storne's DiFF!!]
00:41:637 (7) - Start Notes add finish
00:49:022 (3) - ^
00:56:406 (5) - ^
01:29:637 (1) - ^
01:36:098 (1) - add clap
01:37:021 (1,2) - why clap? remove clap. it awkward
01:51:791 (9) - Start Notes add finish
01:57:098 (8) - End Notes remove clap
02:00:098 (5) - Start Notes add clap
02:01:945 (12) - ^
02:06:560 (5) - Start Notes add finish
02:10:252 (3) - ^
02:11:175 (5) - remove clap. it awkward
03:06:329 (7) - End Notes add clap
03:08:175 (5) - ^
03:20:175 (7) - End Notes add finish
03:20:868 (8) - add clap?


yeah~ K-pop
+star

우왕good
HeatKai
Jessica with onew D: !!!
QAQ I love Jessica QAQ !!!!
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