Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)

Shogo Sakai - PictoChat

posted
Total Posts
66
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
NoHitter
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, January 09, 2010 at 4:11:57 PM

Artist: Shogo Sakai
Title: PictoChat
Source: Super Smash Bros Brawl
Tags: SSBB Nintendo wii DS
BPM: 138
Filesize: 3455kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bonus (4.75 stars, 166 notes)
  2. Hard (4.44 stars, 156 notes)
  3. Normal (1.95 stars, 66 notes)
Download: Shogo Sakai - PictoChat
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Super Smash Bros. Brawl Discography

Composer: Shogo Sakai
Based On: PictoChat
Source: Super Smash Bros. Brawl
Genre: Techno

Super Smash Bros. Brawl included a song based on PictoChat, the chat system from the Nintendo DS.
The song itself is made up of sounds and noise from the PictoChat which makes for an unusual song.

Storyboard by: strager
Skin with help from: Matma Rex
Last edited by NoHitter , edited 72 times in total.
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
Offset: Good
01:06:005 - AAAA cmon no kiai there plox (hard only, because appearntly Normal already doesn't have kiai?)

Normal:
00:05:019 (1) - Make it end on white tick, just better for rhythm clicking
Starred
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All seems fine.

[Normal]

00:02:014 (2) - New combo.
00:53:001 (4) - ^

[Hard]

00:14:086 (3) - 1/8 backward and adjust all the stream.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Easy
SPOILER

No visible problem found.

Hard
SPOILER

00:03:088 (1) : Repeat this slider one more time, and move it back by 1/4.
00:11:005 (1) : Spacing. (Suggestion)
00:14:080 (1) : New combo.
00:14:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) : Move so that 1 is on the white tick. (Like this)
00:29:053 (1,1,1,1) : Add Clap hitsound to the first beat of each slider.
01:08:033 (1,2,3,4,5) : Nuuuu- stacks.

Fix the skin.
Finish the maps.
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
NoHitter

Loogiesquared wrote:

Easy
SPOILER

No visible problem found.

Hard
SPOILER

00:03:088 (1) : Repeat this slider one more time, and move it back by 1/4.
00:11:005 (1) : Spacing. (Suggestion)
00:14:080 (1) : New combo. Done
00:14:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) : Move so that 1 is on the white tick. (Like this)
00:29:053 (1,1,1,1) : Add Clap hitsound to the first beat of each slider. Done
01:08:033 (1,2,3,4,5) : Nuuuu- stacks.

Fix the skin.
Finish the maps. They're done. I just need help in cutting the .mp3
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Normal
00:00:084 (1) - move it 8 squares down (plus, add whistle on this slider's start and on its 2nd repeat)
00:05:019 (1,3) - start the 3rd slider with a whistle; finish the other one with a whistle, too

Hard
00:00:084 (1,5) - whistle here
00:14:080 (1,5) - ^

The whole map is very fun to play, but the skin is pretty ugly... -_-"
Try to improve it and to set more hitsounds to gain Bat members's attention! ;3
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
Needs a louder mp3.


....lolwut, nothing found. Don't kd this.
Froslass
Beatmap Nominator
9,342 posts
Joined July 2008
Froslass
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
thepianist
544 posts
Joined March 2009
thepianist
Normal
Seems fine.

Hard
00.03.016 (4,5) Maybe move these so it makes a straight line?
01.10.185 (3,4) ^ (I'm just mentioning these since you don't have these bent patterns consistently so it looks a bit weird. Just an IMHO.)

Skin
The eight's a bit chopped off ^^

MP3
Trimmed and attached.

:) Star

Download: Nintendo_DS_-_PictoChat CUT.mp3
Nakata Yuji
471 posts
Joined April 2009
Nakata Yuji
This is a great song. Let's hope the map is too :]

General:
I don't like the skin at all. I get that you're trying to get the messy look, but if you really want to, make the graphics look hand drawn. You can keep the skin, if you want though. Make an easy, too.

Normal:
00:57:003 (3) - Take this out and increase the break time.
The rest is ok.

Hard:
I would make this harder and rename it insane. The streams are pretty intense.
00:03:099 (1) - Consider putting a note here.
The rest is ok.

Nice map, * for you.
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
very nice maps

[Easy]
fine

[Hard]
on thing i dont like in it is this
01:13:011 (1,2,3,4) - the way this goes with the combo after feels ugly to me

___________________-
great song,great maps star :)
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
um, please put a "Note" on your OP post that we should redownload your map coz of mp3 crop thing.
Kitty McWittles
141 posts
Joined September 2008
Kitty McWittles
[Normal]
00:46:016 (4) - Add this with a finish? (maybe whistle)
00:49:064 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:14:053 (1,2) - Delete
00:14:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Fall between ticks, move back so (1) starts on the big white tick
00:31:038 (1) - Extend 1 repeat, add claps on the last repeat and end of slider
01:12:024 (2,3) - Acceptable, but I personally hate spacing like that, maybe move (2) 2-3 squares up?
01:17:002 (2,3,4) - Fix the shape?

Personal bitch below
SPOILER
The majority of the part between breaks seems dull to me, especially near the end when it turns to notes on every beat - maybe you should've mapped to the techno-ish beat in the background instead, to keep up with the upbeatness of the streams and speed of the other parts.

Ignoring my bitch... :oops: nice map overall, have a star~
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
Normal:

01:12:068 (3) - clap

Hard:

00:15:067 (8) - missing here a circle

cool map :)
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Hello~~

[Normal]
Fine.

[Hard]
00:16:381 (9) Move time line(Green vertical line)which was placed 00:16:272, to this tick.
00:31:380 (1,1) Make confuse...I think. And spacing..
01:08:443 (1,2,3,4,5) Undo Stack. Because Background color is similar with circle line color. Or You need to change white color.
01:12:247 (2,3,4,5,6,7) ^


Great~ :)
Starred~
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Skin the spinner somehow?
The lighter hitcircle colour blends a bit into the background..

[Normal]

A bit easy for a Normal, I think.

01:13:011 (1,2,1) - Spacing inconsistency.

[Hard]

00:09:042 (2) - Turn off grid snap and place this a bit more evenly between 1,3.
00:12:025 (1,2,3,4) - Too many finishes.
00:15:072 (9) - New combo? Also, perfectly silent notes aren't so great, consider boosting the volume a tiny bit.
01:18:044 (1) - Whistle may be more fitting than a clap.

Star.
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
BPM: 138
Offset: 78ms
Essien_old
21 posts
Joined November 2009
Essien_old
Easy:
no problems found

Hard:
00:11:164 (1): In my opinion, this jump is kind of crazy, especially after a short deathstream.


These are just suggestions ~
star
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Kerensa
hey ^^

normal:
00:24:425 [2]two tiny squares to the right, i think it's abit to far away from eacher compared to the preiouc one which are the same.
00:32:251 [4] why don't you just link it up with [1]?
01:13:121 [1]two tiny squares to the right. make it right in btween the before and after note.
01:15:730 [1] i think 2 tiny squares to the left.

hard:
01:06:164 [1]one tiny square to the right?

lol cool map ^^

star star for you you ^^
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Normal]

It's ok

[Hard]

00:33:099 (6) - New combo

Starred~
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
BPM should be 276
Then resnap everything with 1/3 BSD

Call me via in-game after you fix them ;)
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
NoHitter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop

NoHItter wrote:

DJPop wrote:

BPM should be 276
Then resnap everything with 1/3 BSD

Call me via in-game after you fix them ;)
Hmmm, not quite sure about that...

It sounds the same.
Listen while using 50% or 25% speed.
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
All I can do is starring your map because I don't see any mistake on your map. I love the music! Notice me when this map's ranked.
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
You haven't resnap all notes yet = ="
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
NoHitter

DJPop wrote:

You haven't resnap all notes yet = ="
Oh shoot; forgot to upload with the resnapped notes.

I'll just put it in a different diff.
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
uh offset -4
wtf is Hard Test difficulty

Great map. No problems in either of the difficulties and I would definitely like to see this map ranked.
Shinde
osu! Alumni
707 posts
Joined April 2009
Shinde
I don't really have anything to say besides it screams 'Storyboard me!' As-is the song is a little boring, so you should put on a show atop that BG.

I dunno what the skin you were using looked like, but I don't think a hitcircle would be a bad idea.

BPM should be 138, not 276. I don't know why DJPop suggested that, that just created work for nothing, and caused the osu! pulse to be doubled. 138 with 1/6 would've worked. Don't bother changing it back unless a BAT complains though.

Anyways, starred.

I believe these should be all the points in the song that should be 1/3 snapped. Both difficulties. Forgive me if the timestamp is inconsistent, I might've moved them 1/3 before Ctrl+V'ing, but you get the idea.

00:02:017 (2) -
00:05:072 (2) -
01:10:000 (2) -
01:16:095 (2) -

If anything should be said, I didn't even notice they were 1/3 off until careful examination in 50%, and it plays fine as-is. Also, feel free to disregard this entire post. Modding this song made me a sadpanda.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
[Normal] (Feels more like a easy to me :P )
0:00:93 (1,1) - This sounds so much better if the slider has one less reverse arrow and move the circle to 0:01:813
0:05:291 (1) - Make this slider end on a white tick

[Hard]
I suggest you add more beats to the slow part or have a bit less beats on the fast part :/
It's stupid how much the difficulty changes in this diff.
(Also if you don't add more beats on the slow part, lower the HP drain)

This is one of the songs in brawl that i doubted would be a good map but this map was pretty good :D
*star*
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate
NoHItter, i'm only suggesting these modifications. If you do not wish to use them, then dont.

Overall:

Artist: ~
Title: ~
Diff: It's not really hard, but i also aint normal.. Maybe Hard -
Source: ~
Tags: ~

Normal:

01:09:063 (1,2,3) - I really think noobs are gonna have a hard time on ticks like this, but he! it's not called normal for nothing!

Hard:

01:15:072 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1 ( lvl 3 grid ) up
01:17:003 (2) - put on a white beatline
01:17:003 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - re-distance snap these 5, they look a bit messy :P
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I really like it, i do. Maybe you might like these custom hitsounds:


Download: Custom Hitsounds.zip
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
Seriously, snap everything to 1/3.
Believe me ;__;
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
NoHitter
Can you give a point in the song where it needs 1/3 snap besides the ones we put in?

:(
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop

NoHItter wrote:

Can you give a point in the song where it needs 1/3 snap besides the ones we put in?

:(
Whole song.
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
NoHitter
Did you redownload the new .mp3?
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
Oh oh battle of BPM and 1/3 or 1/4 from the previous modders. xD

HARD
00:15:072 (9) - Finish at the end of slider ?
00:29:063 (1,1) - Remove the clap from the start of both sliders, put them at the end instead, to correspondent with the "clap" in the music.
00:31:813 - Clap at this point of slider ?
00:32:068 (3) - Clap
00:40:007 (1) - Remove clap here, put them on 00:40:050 (2) instead ?
00:53:098 (1) - Remove clap here and put it on 2 ?
01:18:044 (1) - Finish at the end of spinner.

NORMAL
00:10:050 (1,1) - Remove both claps here ? ;_;
00:51:037 (2) - Hitsound this so that it sounds exactly like this 00:47:090 (2) ?
00:52:024 (3) - Finish
01:16:059 (1) - Finish

Hitsounds sound a bit random at some part, but I guess it's fine for me. ^.^

What a cute map. Star~
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
I think djpop is right, it should be snaped to 1/3

Bonus
this is why i think it should be snaped at 1/3 00:14:085 - try this with beat snap 1/3: note at: 00:14:085 - 00:14:099 - 00:15:006 - 00:15:021 - 00:15:028 - 00:15:043 - 00:15:050 - 00:15:064 - 00:15:072 and listen to it with playback rate 25%
00:33:098 (1) - reverse arrows at: 00:34:085 - 00:35:072, and finish : 00:36:059

i didnt find any spacing problems. though you should fix the beat snaping

cya good luck
btw... nice skin!
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
NoHitter
It does but it doubt it would affect gameplay much.
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira

NoHItter wrote:

It does but it doubt it would affect gameplay much.
IT WOULD. >_> I should've foreseen that... no wonder I felt that the notes weren't on-beat... it's a 1/3 song >_>

YOU try playing with those notes not snapped to 1/3. Even if you suck you must at least notice the immense number of slider ends that will sound off
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
NoHitter
This is gonna take a while to fix...

Edit: in which I'm finished
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
[Normal]
00:03:117 (3) - remove finish from tail
00:06:595 (3) - ^
00:08:769 (1,2) - remove whistle from heads
00:13:987 (2) - remove finish?
(IMO Finishes don't fit this part of the song)
00:19:204 (1) - whistle on tail or remove the whistle from 2
00:22:682 (1) - ^
00:26:160 (1) - ^
00:52:247 (3) - err...
01:06:160 (1) - ^
01:07:030 (3) - remove finish from tail
01:08:552 (1,2,3) - uneven stack a bit blargh-ish for Normal
01:09:639 (1,2,3) - ^
01:12:030 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:856 (1,1) - remove whistle from first head and tail

[Hard]
00:01:813 (1) - really these finishes sound a bit too noisy lol
00:03:552 (6) - ^

EDIT: wait a minute right now aside from my pricking about the number of Finish hitsounds used here, I don't really have much a of a problem with this map anymore. Maybe consider going through the hitsounds again or something, but other than that it's really fine except for the issues I pointed in Normal above.
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
NoHitter
Done
arien666
6,312 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Normal]
00:11:37(1,2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?

[Hard]
Overall difficulty - [Suggestion] +1~2 seems better
00:12:24(1,2,3) - [Suggestion] Distance seems little different. But it isn't major issue. I prefer to check these notes :3
00:48:33(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?

[Bonus]
00:51:37(3,4,5) - [Suggestion] Distance seems little different. But it isn't major issue. I prefer to check these notes :3
00:52:24(5,6,7) - ^



Umm???
Epic skin seems good XD
Anyway good song but...?
I don't think that this song is pubble-able(As now)...
Anyway good luck XD



Here's my star :3
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
I'm leaving a p-bubble here but a bit shaky on my decision though since I can't really anticipate the song too much... In any case, good luck.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Popping Pubble.

Timing:
BPM: 138.00 - That way the metronome and the pulsating osu! cookie on the main menu won't go insane. You of course have to double all slider velocities, then.



Hard:
Increase the Overall Difficulty by 1 or 2 ticks please.
00:00:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This is hard to play, even though it's snapped correctly. I suggest you turn some of that stuff into sliders. it would definitely make it more playable. If you want to know what I mean...
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1780
Sort of like this.
00:09:276 (1) - Move onto the white tick? It's a bit weird right now.
00:14:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as for the last stream.
01:05:291 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
01:12:610 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:17:247 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Weird/Ugly spacing.

Normal:
Good

Bonus:
00:02:175 (3) - Move onto the white tick. Would be way more fun to play.
00:04:131 (1,2,3,4) - Oh god. Well... keep it.
00:14:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - On this difficulty, you can keep the weird streams if you want to. The map is overall pretty hard, after all.
00:33:987 (1) - This sounds extremely weird. Remap? The repeats just don't work.
01:06:523 (3) - Move onto the white tick. Would be way more fun to play.
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
NoHitter
Done
Skyripper
osu! Alumni
1,016 posts
Joined August 2008
Skyripper
[Hard]
00:02:030 - add a beat here
00:02:175 (1) - move this to 00:02:247
01:06:378 - add a beat here
01:06:523 (1) - move this to 01:06:595

[Bonus]
01:18:914 (2) - This note doesn't make sense to me
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Why not.
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
NoHitter
Thanks for the bubble :)
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
Very bad colours for widescreen, score and combo are completely unreadable. Please fix.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
Hard
00:00:943(1,2,3,4,5) - this should be a 1/4 divisor part like in the Bonus diff
01:05:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

EDIT : there are 1/4 streams when its supposed to be 1/6 and vice versa
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
NoHitter

Kytoxid wrote:

Very bad colours for widescreen, score and combo are completely unreadable. Please fix.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932

Sadly I don't know how to fix this. Unless I remove the custom score numbers and comboburst

ouranhshc wrote:

Hard
00:00:943(1,2,3,4,5) - this should be a 1/4 divisor part like in the Bonus diff
01:05:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

EDIT : there are 1/4 streams when its supposed to be 1/6 and vice versa
Listen in 25%.
And you can hardly hear the difference in Bonus.

Moved to WIp first
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
lol

Download: Shogo Sakai - PictoChat (NoHItter) [Hard].osu
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Why hello there.

Download: Shogo Sakai - PictoChat (NoHItter) [Bonus].osu
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
1 / 66