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dj TAKA - Frozen Ray (for EXTREME)

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Ruisu-kun_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 26 de diciembre de 2012 at 12:06:46

Artist: dj TAKA
Title: Frozen Ray (for EXTREME)
Source: Dance Dance Revolution EXTREME
Tags: DDR 8th Mix Stepmania Arcade Japan
BPM: 156,01
Filesize: 1725kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Basic (2,51 stars, 119 notes)
  2. Challenge (5 stars, 405 notes)
  3. Standart (4,45 stars, 40 notes)
Download: dj TAKA - Frozen Ray (for EXTREME)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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DDR map! yey!

I decided map this song because I love it, as simple as that XD

I'm asking for guest diffs!:

Begginer:
Heavy:
Taiko:

I'm workin in the skin! Accepting help :3

Edits:
-25/12/2012: p/2006928#p2006928

Last Re-download:
-18/11/2011: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=65810&p=1136942#p1136942
-26/12/2012: p/2008905#p2008905

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Topic Starter
Ruisu-kun_old

Ruisu-kun wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 31 de octubre de 2011 at 11:44:47

Artist: dj TAKA
Title: Frozen Ray (for EXTREME)
Source: DDR EXTREME
Tags: Dance Dance Revolution 8h Mix Arcade Japan
BPM: 156,01
Filesize: 1688kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Basic (2,48 stars, 119 notes)
  2. Challenge! (4,9 stars, 398 notes)
Download: dj TAKA - Frozen Ray (for EXTREME)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3rd DDR map

I decided map thios song because I love it, so simple as that XD

I'm asking for guest diffs!:

Begginer:
Standart:
Heavy:

Maybe a taiko diff :B

I'm workin in the skin! Accepting help :3

Edits:

Last Re-download:

*Next Map: Jondi & Spesh - Max 300 (Super-Max-Me-Mix) >:D!

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Delete this post please x.x
Zlew
I can make skin and Taiko diff
Topic Starter
Ruisu-kun_old

Zlew wrote:

I can make skin and Taiko diff
Really?! thank you! :)
jossieP
holaa de kei&kyon's queue
20th personal mod

waa DDRExtreme <3

Offset: 1575, el que tienes actualmente no se siente muy bien, luego dale "resnap all notes" en el menu timing, luego tienes hacer lo mismo manualmente con las "timing sections"

Sobre tu hitcircle, tal vez deberias "rellenarlo", es decir no se ve muy bien que quede "hueco", pero espera a ver que te dicen otros modders, yo no me fijo mucho en el skin x3

Ah si, no creo que esta cancion necesite el kiai, digo tiene el mismo ritmo todo el tiempo y no tiene una parte que destaque mas que otras, sigue esperando mas mods para ver que sigue.

Source: "Dance Dance Revolution EXTREME" sin comillas respetando los caps, fijate aca http://zenius-i-vanisher.com/v5.2/views ... egoryid=41

Tags: el "Dance" esta duplicado y si has cambiado el source solo deberias colocar los siguientes tags: "ddr", "stepmania", los tags "Arcade" y "Japan" no estoy seguro si los necesitas, si es asi quitale los caps

Combo colour: intercambia los colores para que queden asi: Combo 1, Combo 4, Combo 2 y Combo 3, los colores quedaran mas contrastados asi

Beginner

-Bastante bien, solo arregla el timing

Challenge!

-Cambia el nombre a "Challenge" sin el signo de admiración, si estas intentando hacer una referencia a DDR, fijate que no esta incluido ese "!"
-No estoy muy seguro si equivale a Insane, podrias usar mas jumps :)
-Si equivale a Insane, usa un spacing mas alto, x1,0 en los saltos puedes usar x1,5 o x1,7
-Aproach rate a 8
-Overall a 7
-Espera esto equivale a Hard o Insane????

00:25:767 (5) - no clap
00:25:863 (6) - no clap, el sonido tipo clap que tiene la cancion hace que los claps anteriores suenen un poco mal
00:26:536 (1) - clap en vez de whistle en el principio del slider,tambien clap en 00:27:305 (3), 00:28:843 (2), 00:29:613 (1) - al principio de este slider.
00:37:689 (6) - clap
00:38:266 (4) - ^
00:38:458 (6) - ^
00:42:208 (1) - algo asi? http://puu.sh/8b6Z esos circles en ticks azules no se sienten muy bien x3
00:49:419 (1,2,3) - x1,5 o 1,7 de spacing, queda bien este salto o=
00:50:188 (4,5,6) - ^
00:50:957 (1,2,3) - ^
00:51:727 (4,5,6) - ^
01:20:475 (4) - 2 circles en vez de este slider, o usalo al final del stream
01:35:378 (4) - finish en la repeticion
01:37:301 (3) - finish
01:38:070 (1) - ^

aun no estoy seguro si equivale a Insane, porque el spacing esta muy cerrado >_< se que quieres mantener esa simetria, pero queda bastante facil, unos jumps ayudarian mucho en la jugabilidad.

el taiko guest ya esta ocupado >: tal vez pueda hacer un Heavy x3
Topic Starter
Ruisu-kun_old

ikari_kyon wrote:

holaa de kei&kyon's queue
20th personal mod

waa DDRExtreme <3

Offset: 1575, el que tienes actualmente no se siente muy bien, luego dale "resnap all notes" en el menu timing, luego tienes hacer lo mismo manualmente con las "timing sections"

Sobre tu hitcircle, tal vez deberias "rellenarlo", es decir no se ve muy bien que quede "hueco", pero espera a ver que te dicen otros modders, yo no me fijo mucho en el skin x3

Ah si, no creo que esta cancion necesite el kiai, digo tiene el mismo ritmo todo el tiempo y no tiene una parte que destaque mas que otras, sigue esperando mas mods para ver que sigue.

Source: "Dance Dance Revolution EXTREME" sin comillas respetando los caps, fijate aca http://zenius-i-vanisher.com/v5.2/views ... egoryid=41

Tags: el "Dance" esta duplicado y si has cambiado el source solo deberias colocar los siguientes tags: "ddr", "stepmania", los tags "Arcade" y "Japan" no estoy seguro si los necesitas, si es asi quitale los caps

Combo colour: intercambia los colores para que queden asi: Combo 1, Combo 4, Combo 2 y Combo 3, los colores quedaran mas contrastados asi

Beginner

-Bastante bien, solo arregla el timing

Challenge!

-Cambia el nombre a "Challenge" sin el signo de admiración, si estas intentando hacer una referencia a DDR, fijate que no esta incluido ese "!"
-No estoy muy seguro si equivale a Insane, podrias usar mas jumps :)
-Si equivale a Insane, usa un spacing mas alto, x1,0 en los saltos puedes usar x1,5 o x1,7
-Aproach rate a 8
-Overall a 7
-Espera esto equivale a Hard o Insane????

00:25:767 (5) - no clap
00:25:863 (6) - no clap, el sonido tipo clap que tiene la cancion hace que los claps anteriores suenen un poco mal
00:26:536 (1) - clap en vez de whistle en el principio del slider,tambien clap en 00:27:305 (3), 00:28:843 (2), 00:29:613 (1) - al principio de este slider.
00:37:689 (6) - clap
00:38:266 (4) - ^
00:38:458 (6) - ^
00:42:208 (1) - algo asi? http://puu.sh/8b6Z esos circles en ticks azules no se sienten muy bien x3
00:49:419 (1,2,3) - x1,5 o 1,7 de spacing, queda bien este salto o=
00:50:188 (4,5,6) - ^
00:50:957 (1,2,3) - ^
00:51:727 (4,5,6) - ^
01:20:475 (4) - 2 circles en vez de este slider, o usalo al final del stream
01:35:378 (4) - finish en la repeticion
01:37:301 (3) - finish
01:38:070 (1) - ^

aun no estoy seguro si equivale a Insane, porque el spacing esta muy cerrado >_< se que quieres mantener esa simetria, pero queda bastante facil, unos jumps ayudarian mucho en la jugabilidad.

el taiko guest ya esta ocupado >: tal vez pueda hacer un Heavy x3
dale, arreglé el offsetlos tags y el source... No quiero arreglar el skin porque zlew me está ayudando (I don't want to change the skin yet because Zlew is helping me)... El challenge representa insane y si, puedes hacerme una diff... el heavy me parece bien :)
jossieP

Ruisu-kun wrote:

El challenge representa insane y si, puedes hacerme una diff... el heavy me parece bien :)
me acorde que el Heavy en DDR es mas dificil que el Challenge, deberia seguir la linea de dificultad? o la quieres mantener el Challenge como Insane, por lo que me queda hacer un Heavy tipo "Hard"
Topic Starter
Ruisu-kun_old

ikari_kyon wrote:

me acorde que el Heavy en DDR es mas dificil que el Challenge, deberia seguir la linea de dificultad? o la quieres mantener el Challenge como Insane, por lo que me queda hacer un Heavy tipo "Hard"[/color]
Es al revés... challenge es más dificil que heavy, por lo tanto heavy debe ser menos dificil que challenge... :B asi que hzlo así... hazlo tipo hard-insane (?) xD
Topic Starter
Ruisu-kun_old
I think I want this beatmap to get ranked, so let's go again! :D
CrestRising
Yay another DDR map. From my modding queue.
* = More suggested than others.
I'm assuming that Basic is Easy (with its low star rating) and that Challenge is an Insane (with its crazy streams).

[Basic:]

  • 00:15:420 (1,2,3,4) It looks weird scrunched up like this. You could duplicate the diamond pattern from before, if you want.
    * 00:16:958 (1,2,3) It would sound and feel better if instead of a (circle-slider-slider) pattern, you do a (slider-slider-circle) pattern.
    * 00:21:573 (4,5) It would sound better if 4 was a circle and the endpoint of 4 was a 1 beat slider (so the slider would go until 5).
    00:33:496 (1) Imo, would sound better if there was a clap at the endpoint.
    00:35:034 (2) ^
    00:39:264 (1) This spinner feels weird. If you are going to keep it though, you should put a clap on the endpoint.
    00:42:726 (2) Would sound better with a clap.
    00:43:495 (3) Would be better if there was a clap on the second repeat.
    00:48:879 (1) Another odd spinner, but this one is even weirder and doesn't really fit here.
    * 01:21:954 (1,2) Would better if 1 was a 1 beat slider and the endpoint of 2 was a circle. It would also match up with the next part of this section.
    01:29:646 (4,1) I think it would be better if 1 was deleted and a repeat is added to 4.
    01:44:645 (1) I don't like the slider's end sound, but I don't know what to suggest.
    The rest of these are parts where I would suggest you combine two circles into a single slider to make it sound or play better:
    SPOILER
    01:32:338 (2,3) and 01:33:107 (4,1) Do both or neither.
    01:38:491 (2,3) and 01:39:261 (4,5) Do both or neither.
[Challenge:]

  • In general, other then the crazy streams, nothing really justifies this as an Insane. In fact, if not for the crazy streams, this wouldn't even be a very good Hard. There were no jumps that I noticed, and jumps are a pretty big part of Insane/Hard difficulties. Without them, the difficulty seems a bit bland.
    01:15:031 (3,4) I think it looks kind of weird when stacked.
    01:31:088 (1) This new combo is kind of weird. Maybe there should be one around 5 or 6?
    01:44:645 (1) See Easy about the spinner.
I really don't think you should try to get four guest difficulties. Even if you do manage to get them, it will take longer to rank six difficulties rather than three. You at least need a difficulty in between Basic and Challenge, since you have to have a consistent progression of difficulties [Ex: Easy-Normal-Hard instead of Easy-Hard]. Good luck with mapping. :) Oh and btw, its a nice skin you have here.
Topic Starter
Ruisu-kun_old

CrestRising wrote:

Yay another DDR map. From my modding queue.
* = More suggested than others.
I'm assuming that Basic is Easy (with its low star rating) and that Challenge is an Insane (with its crazy streams).

[Basic:]

  • 00:15:420 (1,2,3,4) It looks weird scrunched up like this. You could duplicate the diamond pattern from before, if you want.
    * 00:16:958 (1,2,3) It would sound and feel better if instead of a (circle-slider-slider) pattern, you do a (slider-slider-circle) pattern.
    * 00:21:573 (4,5) It would sound better if 4 was a circle and the endpoint of 4 was a 1 beat slider (so the slider would go until 5).
    00:33:496 (1) Imo, would sound better if there was a clap at the endpoint.
    00:35:034 (2) ^
    00:39:264 (1) This spinner feels weird. If you are going to keep it though, you should put a clap on the endpoint.
    00:42:726 (2) Would sound better with a clap.
    00:43:495 (3) Would be better if there was a clap on the second repeat.
    00:48:879 (1) Another odd spinner, but this one is even weirder and doesn't really fit here.
    * 01:21:954 (1,2) Would better if 1 was a 1 beat slider and the endpoint of 2 was a circle. It would also match up with the next part of this section.
    01:29:646 (4,1) I think it would be better if 1 was deleted and a repeat is added to 4.
    01:44:645 (1) I don't like the slider's end sound, but I don't know what to suggest.
    The rest of these are parts where I would suggest you combine two circles into a single slider to make it sound or play better:
    SPOILER
    01:32:338 (2,3) and 01:33:107 (4,1) Do both or neither.
    01:38:491 (2,3) and 01:39:261 (4,5) Do both or neither.
[Challenge:]

  • In general, other then the crazy streams, nothing really justifies this as an Insane. In fact, if not for the crazy streams, this wouldn't even be a very good Hard. There were no jumps that I noticed, and jumps are a pretty big part of Insane/Hard difficulties. Without them, the difficulty seems a bit bland.
    01:15:031 (3,4) I think it looks kind of weird when stacked.
    01:31:088 (1) This new combo is kind of weird. Maybe there should be one around 5 or 6?
    01:44:645 (1) See Easy about the spinner.
I really don't think you should try to get four guest difficulties. Even if you do manage to get them, it will take longer to rank six difficulties rather than three. You at least need a difficulty in between Basic and Challenge, since you have to have a consistent progression of difficulties [Ex: Easy-Normal-Hard instead of Easy-Hard]. Good luck with mapping. :) Oh and btw, its a nice skin you have here.
Well I did almost everything. Thanks for your mod!! And yeah, you're right I'll do another diff... But I'm having problems with bancho, so I'll upload the map when those problems get resolved :D
KingKrishna
I guess it would be helpful for beginner players if you stayed on one beat.
Good job and best luck on your map!
BASIC
00:18:496 why did you just stop following the beat right here ?
00:26:573 ^
01:40:030(1,2,3) make these a little more curvey?

CHALLENGE
00:27:534(4) make it more curvy?
00:38:495(6) add a finish?
00:45:033(3,5) these two more curvy
01:14:647 You could put a stream here till 01:15:416
01:16:572 unnesscary streams ?

01:27:776(1) MAKE IT CURVY SLIDER


Please tell me what you liked about this mod and didnt, also tell me why you did not accept some of my suggestions so i can improve.
Topic Starter
Ruisu-kun_old

mebins wrote:

I guess it would be helpful for beginner players if you stayed on one beat.
Good job and best luck on your map!
BASIC
00:18:496 why did you just stop following the beat right here ? Maybe you're right, doesn't fit
00:26:573 ^ New section, new beats~
01:40:030(1,2,3) make these a little more curvey? ok!

CHALLENGE
00:27:534(4) make it more curvy? ok!
00:38:495(6) add a finish? Errr ok!
00:45:033(3,5) these two more curvy K
01:14:647 You could put a stream here till 01:15:416 Good idea~
01:16:572 unnesscary streams ? If you listen well, you'll hear those streams in the music c:

01:27:776(1) MAKE IT CURVY SLIDER ok~


Please tell me what you liked about this mod and didnt, also tell me why you did not accept some of my suggestions so i can improve.
Good mod, in the quote I'll tell you why I didn't accept some things... Thanks!! n.n! Well I also added a Standart diff, enjoy~ :D
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