1. Easy - 4Key (1.23 stars, 538 notes)
2. Hard - 4Key (3.56 stars, 1657 notes)

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4K - |1|2|3|4|

arcwinolivirus wrote:

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue! "Simple Review Mod"

Take note that I'm only focusing on note patterns, note placements and note consistency. Not the actual hitsound itself (Just in case if you already implemented hitsounds).

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: It should be 800x600 / 1024x768 / 1366x768
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!

Remove the 720p in the title. MUST FIX.

Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|

[Easy]
I suggest to put some more variations to your easy so it will not end up being repetitive.

SPOILER

00:37:362 - add note to 3 for the starting hithat sound.
01:01:648 (61648|3) - reduce length until 01:02:362 then..
01:02:362 - add Long note to 3 until 01:03:077 for the violin.
01:50:219 - add note to 4 for the missing beat sound
01:51:648 - ^
01:57:362 - ^
02:03:077 - add note to 3 missing beat sound
02:25:934 - add note to 1 ^
02:31:648 - add note to 4 ^
02:37:362 - add note to 1
02:38:791 - add note to 3
02:41:648 - add note to 2
02:48:791 - add note to 4
03:33:077 (213077|1,213077|2) - reduce length until 03:35:934

[Hard]
Im sorry but I cannot mod this anymore. Too much 3-noted notes which leads to overmapped of some parts. I suggest use only 3 noted notes on a very strong sound like cymbals+beatsound+any other instrument. Snare + beat sound should be 2-noted. and if beat sound only shoud be 1-noted. I suggest rearrange this difficulty.

[Overall]
Keep it up mapping and ask more mods so you can get valuable information about it. Good luck~!

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hello, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 for 4K diffs)
Easy

Inside :3

00:17:362 (17362|1) - I think you can move this note to 0 column, it make this pattern less repetitive with your previous

00:33:077 (33077|2) - you can turn this note into LN with ending it here 00:33:434 - like you did it previously, it'll be well suitable here

00:47:362 (47362|0) - move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more suitable position for it rather than double note into 0 column

01:00:219 (60219|0,60219|1) - I recommend you to delete one of these LNs, no need to accent this sound with two LNs in easy diff, it'll be hard for novice player

From 01:14:148 to 01:19:863 - I suggest you to re-arrange all notes in this part, don't let your patterns repeat, it doesn't fit the music

02:33:791 (153791|2) - move this note to 3rd column, it's more comfortable position for it in this triplet

02:48:434 (168434|2) - delete this LN, no need to place here more than one, according to the song you can place here one LN + end note, don't overmap easy diff

03:08:077 (188077|2) - move this note to 1st column, it'll be suitable with your previous and next going pattern here rather than repeating note

03:24:327 - missed sound, add one more note here to 1st or 2nd column to accent this sound correctly

Hard

Inside :3

From 00:13:969 to 00:14:505 - I think you need to re-model these chords and make some difference, you don't have identical sounds for all of them

00:19:684 (19684|0,19862|0,20041|1) - I suggest you to move these notes to 2nd>1st>0 columns accordngly here, it'll be more suitable positions for them according to your patterns

00:20:934 (20934|3) - and this one you can move to 1st column, it'll be well suitable with your next going stair pattern here

00:37:719 (37719|1) - you need to delete this note, there's no any strong beat or other additional sound for this place, so it's enough to use only one note here

From 00:43:077 to 00:54:505 - you're using three note chords and I don't see any additional sound according to the music which you can accent with three notes, so I recommend you to cut some extra notes from three note chords

01:12:987 (72987|2,73344|1) - I recommend you to delete such double notes, they don't fit the music correclty, try to avoid such positions

From 01:35:219 to 01:37:362 - this part looks overmapped alot, reduce notecound here by 30% and cut some extra notes, it'll be beter after that

02:37:541 - breaktime starts here? it's not allower for mania charts, fix it please

02:43:077 (163077|2,163077|1,164505|2,164505|1) - these LNs don't follow the song correctly, you should replace them with single notes to make this part suitable with the song

03:00:532 (180532|2) - such fast jack here, remove it please, you don't have suitable sound to place it here

Hope this helps~
Good luck :3/