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Mineko Yamamoto - Snow Flake* (Short ver.)

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Topic Starter
CrystilonZ
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hanabi
Sana's modding from M4M~~

[Insane]

00:05:023 (7) - awkward slider -> http://puu.sh/305LF.jpg ir's more better
00:08:623 (6,7,8) - mover left -> http://puu.sh/305Nr.jpg
00:12:394 (7) - NC
00:17:708 (7) - MAKE IT -> http://puu.sh/305Ps.jpg
00:21:480 (3) - NC
00:27:823 (2) - stack with 00:28:165 (4)
00:28:680 (1) - stack with 00:27:994 (3)
00:30:223 (4) - ctrl +G
00:35:365 (7) - NC
00:37:080 (7) - NC
00:41:194 (8) - NC
00:43:423 (8) - make not to overlap with 00:42:565 (7) -
00:49:594 (4) - NC
00:54:908 (6) - NC
00:59:023 (5) - stack with 00:57:651 (1)
01:00:394 (4) - NC
01:03:137 (3) - NC
01:09:137 (4) - NC
01:11:365 (4) - NC
01:14:451 (3) - not overlap
01:20:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much revers arrow..!
01:29:365 (3) - NC
01:30:051 (5) - NC

[Hard]

00:08:623 (4,5,6) -> http://puu.sh/305Wq.jpg
00:14:623 (4) - 2grid up
00:16:508 (9) - NC
00:16:680 (1) - remove NC
00:23:880 (7) - NC
00:27:994 (2) - space exactly
00:34:680 (5) - NC
00:37:423 (5) - NC
00:42:394 (5) - NC
00:48:565 (2,4) - stack exactly
00:56:451 - remove KIAI time
01:05:023 (6,7,8) - slider reverse MUST NOT be hidden by others! fix it
01:08:623 (3) - NC
01:18:051 (6,7,8) - TOO HARD TO READ
01:30:051 (3) - NC

[ PAN's Normal ]

00:35:365 (5) - NC
00:38:965 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/3064A.jpg
00:45:823 (4) - 4GRID RIGHT
01:30:394 (4) - 2grid left

ok good


i hope it's helpful to you!!

nice map Nice song~~ GOOD LUCK~!! ;)
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ
Thx for modding, Sana
xHappy-
P A N
m4m in-game

[PO5's Easy*]

00:07:423 (3) - should start at 00:07:080
00:08:965 - try to add spinner here. the beat doesnt fit the song. imo
00:15:651 (5) - overlap. you should avoid that in easy diff. try to move to another place
00:18:737 (3) - same as above
00:23:537 (2) - fix distance spacing
00:31:423 (1) - I dont want to say this but... the slider is ugly shape D: maybe remake that?
00:35:880 (1) - try to use just 3 point to make slider -.- I think its looks better
00:10:394 (1) - make this curve for avoid the overlap.
01:07:251 (1) - fix distance spacing
01:16:337 - use this beat instead http://puu.sh/30Qq0.jpg also add finish on tail
01:19:765 (1) - this slide is confuse beginner for sure. move it to another place
01:29:365 (1,2) - use this. more much better for me

[P A N's Normal*]

00:55:423 (1) - add finish. sounds better for me
01:27:994 (6) - maybe NC?
01:29:365 (1) - add finish?
01:29:708 (2) - move it to stack with 01:27:308 (5) for clean pattern. also add finish
01:30:394 (4) - add finish on tail

[Hard*]

00:11:194 (4) - make it like this. the current one is weird
00:15:137 (5) - left 1 grid, dont forget to fix 00:16:165 (7) to stack with tail
00:21:994 (4) - I think stack like this doesnt a good idea for me. maybe move to another place?
00:24:223 (3) - move it to perfect stack with 00:23:708 (6)
00:28:165 (3) - overlap
00:34:680 (1,2,3) fix these distance. also move (3) to stack with 00:33:651 (3)
00:38:794 - move them to this pattern. looks much better for me
00:44:451 - lol this part. im not sure is it ok but maybe try another pattern? like square or something
00:49:251 (4) - move tail to 24|240 and move 00:49:765 (5) to 100|248. looks better
00:51:994 (3) - stack with 00:52:165 (4) I think its better
00:53:365 (7) - move to 184|224
01:00:908 (4) - make this curve for blanket
01:11:365 - perfect stack
01:13:251 (9) - perfect stack
01:15:308 (7) - NC here?
01:18:051 (6,7) - I think kick slide in hard diff doesnt a good idea
01:30:051 (3,4,5,6) - maybe try another pattern? like square or something. just saying..

GL
xHappy-
P A N's Normal*
ช่วงแรก ส่วนใหญ่ไม่มีตัวคุม slider ช้าหรือเร็วนะ ; w ;
Snow*
00:02:280(3) - ลองเอาไปทับหัวโน้ตตัวแรก มันจะงาม ; w ;
00:05:023(7) - ซ้อน slider ให้สวยหน่อย
00:10:765(1) - น่าจะเอาออกนะ มันไม่ตรงกับเพลง
00:17:023(5) - clap
00:17:708(7) - ^
00:18:223(8) - nc
00:18:394(2) - clap
00:19:080(6) - ^
00:19:765(1) - clap ปลาย slider
00:20:451(3) - clap
00:37:594(8) - nc
00:46:680(8) - ^
00:48:051(1) - remove nc
00:50:780(8) - nc
00:54:908(6) - ^
00:56:451(2,3,4) - เอาให้ใกล้โน้ตตัวแรกแล้ว โน้ตที่ 4 ใช้ distance
01:01:080(6) - nc
01:04:337(6) - ^
01:06:051(8) - ^
01:06:737(1) - remove nc
01:09:480(6) - nc
01:11:880(5) - ^
01:15:308(6) - ^
01:16:851(8) - ^
01:18:051(1) - remove nc
01:18:565(9) - nc
01:22:508(6) - ^
01:25:251(7) - ^
ปล.ให้ทำตามขั้นตอน บนลงล่างนะ ; w ;
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ
thx P A N He just mod his own diff LOL
and Peeoil555 for mod
xHappy-
http://puu.sh/30SKR.rar
อันใหม่ แก้มาแล้ว
THX P A N for mod my diff :D
P A N

P A N wrote:

m4m in-game

[P A N's Normal*]

00:55:423 (1) - add finish. sounds better for me ok
01:27:994 (6) - maybe NC? will concider
01:29:365 (1) - add finish? ok
01:29:708 (2) - move it to stack with 01:27:308 (5) for clean pattern. also add finish ok
01:30:394 (4) - add finish on tail ok

GL
thanks P A N for modding :D

update: http://puu.sh/30TPR.osu
xHappy-
mod เอง แก้เอง P A N lol
23HANNA32
M4M

[General]
Title is Snow Flake* (TV Size) Batter

[PO5's Easy*]

00:16:680 (1) - Finish at the beginning?
00:58:680 (2) - Awkward time
01:22:680 - Why It notes right? 01:29:023 - Please mapping here ~

[P A N's Normal*]

00:46:851 (1) - Remove NC
00:48:051 (2) - NC
00:48:565 (1) - Remove NC
01:26:794 (4,5) - Ctrl + g?

[Hard]

00:10:765 (1,2,3) - Hmm ... This pattern does not like personally. Why not look at change differently?
00:13:080 (9) - Repeated once to remove 00:13:594 - Add a note here


Ok~ Good Luck~
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ
Thanks for modding !
But I didn't fix anything in hard . . .
koreapenguin
\o/

IRC MOD
11:56 koreapenguin: hey :3
11:56 CrystilonZ: hi
11:56 koreapenguin: just suggestion.
11:57 koreapenguin: I think so... Snow Flake* (Short ver.)
11:57 koreapenguin: add (Short ver.)
11:57 koreapenguin: and, AudioLeadIn 2000 is enough here, imo! Don't make us wait too long!
11:57 koreapenguin: :)
11:57 CrystilonZ: I'm not sure that it have longer version
11:58 koreapenguin: hum..
11:58 CrystilonZ: so, I'm not sure that i shoud add short ver. or not
11:59 koreapenguin: wait.
12:07 CrystilonZ: did you find anything ?
12:07 koreapenguin: searching :) wait a min
12:07 CrystilonZ: roger ~
12:08 koreapenguin: this eroge?
12:08 CrystilonZ: yes
12:16 koreapenguin: maybe..
12:18 koreapenguin: title, keep.
12:18 CrystilonZ: ok~
12:25 CrystilonZ: nothing more ?
12:25 koreapenguin: um.
12:26 koreapenguin: I don't know :)
12:26 CrystilonZ: post in forum if you want kds then~
12:36 koreapenguin: your diff [Snow]
12:36 koreapenguin: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/776250 it better
12:36 koreapenguin: if you need CODE, tell me
12:36 CrystilonZ: the pattern ?
12:36 koreapenguin: yea.
12:37 CrystilonZ: can you tell me x and y ?
12:37 koreapenguin: sure
12:38 koreapenguin: 00:21:480 (3) - 196 276
12:38 koreapenguin: 00:21:651 (4) - 256 88
12:39 koreapenguin: 00:21:823 (5) - 316 276
12:39 koreapenguin: 00:21:994 (6) - 156 160
12:39 koreapenguin: 00:22:165 (7) - 356 160
12:39 koreapenguin: this star pretty
12:40 CrystilonZ: fixed~
12:40 koreapenguin: 00:27:823 (2) - this not
12:40 koreapenguin: note*
12:40 koreapenguin: 00:28:165 (4) - slider tail stack
12:40 CrystilonZ: it is already stack ?
12:41 koreapenguin: um.
12:41 koreapenguin: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/776256 compare
12:43 koreapenguin: 00:56:451 (1,2) - what the...
12:43 koreapenguin: 00:57:137 (5) - one grid down
12:44 CrystilonZ: lol
12:44 CrystilonZ: just 1/4 jump
12:45 CrystilonZ: It doesn't too hard for insane , i think
12:45 koreapenguin: hum.. ok :)
12:45 CrystilonZ: fixed the stack~
12:48 koreapenguin: [Insane] that all :)
12:48 CrystilonZ: fixed all except that super jump lol
12:48 koreapenguin: \o/
12:49 koreapenguin: your individuality
12:49 CrystilonZ: :D
12:50 koreapenguin: [Hard]
12:50 koreapenguin: 00:21:137 (2) - 172 296 it better
12:51 CrystilonZ: fixed~
12:53 koreapenguin: 01:05:023 (6,7,8) - Unrankabel
12:53 CrystilonZ: hmm
12:53 CrystilonZ: reverse is visible ?
12:53 CrystilonZ: I think it visible
12:53 CrystilonZ: i test play it
12:53 koreapenguin: maybe \o/
12:54 koreapenguin: 01:08:623 (3) - add finish slider head
12:55 koreapenguin: 01:11:365 (3) - ^
12:55 CrystilonZ: how about insane diff ?
12:55 koreapenguin: 01:13:594 (1) - ^
12:55 koreapenguin: um...
12:55 koreapenguin: not good.
12:56 koreapenguin: 01:15:480 (2) - ^add finish slider head
12:56 koreapenguin: 01:16:851 (1) - ^
12:56 koreapenguin: 01:19:251 (3,4,5,6,7) - .....
12:57 koreapenguin: 01:19:251 (3,4,5,6,7) - replace plz
12:57 koreapenguin: 01:25:251 (4) - add finish
12:58 koreapenguin: 00:57:651 (1) - add finish head
12:58 koreapenguin: 01:00:394 (3) - ^
12:58 koreapenguin: 01:03:137 (3) - ^
12:58 koreapenguin: that all :)
12:59 CrystilonZ: fixed~
12:59 koreapenguin: end :)
12:59 CrystilonZ: I updated it
13:00 CrystilonZ: is the pattern ok ?
13:00 CrystilonZ: change a bit
13:00 koreapenguin: um.
13:00 CrystilonZ: 01:19:251 (3,4,5,6,7) -
13:00 CrystilonZ: here
13:00 koreapenguin: um.
13:01 CrystilonZ: thanks for modding :D
13:01 koreapenguin: Good luck ><

P A N's Normal IRC MOD
12:20 koreapenguin: hey :3
12:20 P A N: hey :D
12:20 *koreapenguin is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/255299 Mineko Yamamoto - Snow Flake* [P A N's Normal*]]
12:20 koreapenguin: your diff look.
12:20 P A N: lol
12:21 koreapenguin: 01:19:765 (1,1) - need more rhythmic space between this spinner and the next note
12:21 koreapenguin: maybe..
12:21 koreapenguin: and,
12:22 koreapenguin: 00:08:451 (1,1) - ^
12:23 koreapenguin: 00:55:423 (1,1) - ^
12:25 koreapenguin: 01:04:337 (3) - 196 120
12:27 koreapenguin: 01:11:023 (5) -
12:27 koreapenguin: 01:11:023 (5) - one grid down
12:28 koreapenguin: 01:18:908 (2,3) - one grid up?
12:30 koreapenguin: 01:23:537 (2,3) - it is not symmetry?
12:31 koreapenguin: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/776244
12:31 koreapenguin: replace ^
12:33 koreapenguin: 00:42:908 (3) - this slider 172 60 , 256 88 , 340 60 it better
12:33 koreapenguin: that all :)
12:33 koreapenguin: your diff too good \o/
12:33 P A N: thanks :3
12:36 P A N: what about other diff lol
12:36 koreapenguin: um...
12:36 P A N: LOLL
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ
Thanks for mod >,<
xHappy-
http://puu.sh/32aB4.rar
แก้ละเด้อ Thank 23HANNA32
yurunneram
Hi! :D Modding time~

EASY

00:11:194 (1,2,3) - Make it symmetrical. Also 00:13:251 (3) - Doesn't fit. Change please.
00:31:423 (6) - Move to x240 y296. Also, there is no need for so many points
00:32:794 (1) - Doesn't look very nice. If you insist on having so many points, bring the last point (x148 y243) and move it closer to your first point

Not bad, I'd say. Just need polish here and there.

NORMAL

00:18:908 and 00:20:280 - Add note

This diff is good. :3 Great job.

HARD

01:28:680 (4) - Delete a repeat

This diff was good too :3

That's all~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ
Thx for modding
for hard diff, if another modder says it again, I will change it.
It has a drum sound so, I don't know I should del it or not.
Pipse Cola
Mod Request

GENERAL:
Think about resizing your BGs, the recommended size is 1024x768.

Easy*

00:40:337 (2) - I'd suggest a Slider from 00:40:337 - to 00:40:508 -
00:41:365 - Make a Slider to 00:41:708 - and reverse it.
00:45:480 (3,4) - Make a Slider from 00:45:480 - to 00:45:823 - and reverse it.
00:49:594 (4) - this doesn't really fit to the song imo... how about replacing it with something?
E. g. :
00:49:594 - Make a Slider to 00:49:937 - and reverse it;
00:50:623 - Insert Note here;
00:50:965 - Make a Slider to 00:51:308 - and reverse it:

00:56:451 - to 00:56:537 - is this kiai really necessary?^^

00:57:651 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - Playing this feels strange to me, maybe u shouldn't go with the lyrics and then change to the beat... It would be better to go with the beat the whole time especially in Easy Diff imo.
01:13:594 - to 01:14:108 - Keep kiai here.

P A N's Normal*
Nice Diff!

00:20:451 (4) - Try to put this more into the room
00:34:165 (3) - ^
00:56:451 - to 00:56:537 - Are you sure about this kiai?^^
01:13:594 - to 01:14:108 - Keep kiai here.

Hard*

00:21:994 (4,5) - I'd change the position of these ot x: 415, y: 296
00:32:794 (5,1) - Not that good for a hard map, try to make it easier for that part.
00:56:451 - to 00:56:537 - You really like this kiaii?^^
01:13:594 - to 01:14:108 - Keep kiai here.
01:18:051 (6,7) - Maybe a bit too hard for Hard
01:19:508 (6,7) - If you want it like this, you really need to put the 7 nearer the 6.
01:28:680 (4) - I read u maybe want to remove it, personally, I think it's fine to keep the reverses.


Snow*

00:56:451 (1,2,3) - The slider should be next to the circles, and its impossible to guess that this one slider is that fast,
Think of reducing the speed to 1,5 or 1,25 or something.
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ
Many one complains about the kiai with2.00x slider
It's somehow fits with the video, anyway if another modder say about it, I will remove

Edit : Decrese 2.00x slider speed, make it playable with a hold.
xHappy-
http://puu.sh/34pgJ.rar
อันใหม่ =w=
Thank for mod my diff :D
yurunneram
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