1. Fear (4.84 stars, 976 notes)
2. Normal (3.84 stars, 294 notes)

raririn wrote:

咦居然有沙发

eldnl wrote:

[Fear]

Use hitsounds! Also the volume is too low, use 70% at least and 40% for slow or quiet parts! I'm adding~
Use AR9 please U are not the only one think so ._. fixed.
00:00:704 - I'm sure that a soft sound works better for this slow part!
00:04:340 (8,1) - These notes are too close, increase the spacing a bit please! This part is rather slow,and I don't think spacing matters._.
00:09:794 (5,6) - ^ Same as above ^^^
00:28:454 (4) - Seems hard to read, move the slider somewhere else? reverse arrow is hidden,you are right
00:36:704 (1,2) These sliders feels too weird, what if you use two repeats for both, instead of one repeat? hmmm good idea
00:47:016 - This part is so confusing, I guess you can use AR9 to make it perfectly readable!
01:11:766 (9) - I guess, hidding sliders by other slider's track is unrankable, move it. I checked the ranking criteria and found that it seems doesn't matter
01:51:516 (1) - Impossible to read the velocity change here, strongly suggest to do something else! The three sliders before are now slower and the 4th is faster
02:38:579 - ^ Same as above, the hidden slider stuff.
02:41:204 - This part will be a lot easier to read with AR9 I guess
02:50:954 - Usually, sliders-between-streams have two repeats, random repeats are hard to read. fixed.
03:23:204 - The slider is too close to the previous stream, move it a little!
03:52:079- Hidden slider stuff

that's all, really fun map!!
good luck:3 thanks :<3

liuyiqiangbu wrote:

不错啊 不过应该再加点hit sound。ibaka那个diff觉得很喜欢。

1. from the ranking criteria the easier diff should be under 3.25 stars,this means that you need a easy in your mapset or try to make Normal simplier òwò
2. your BG is 1280x720 wich is not a rankable size, use 1024x768 :O
3. Your mp3 is 115 kbps wich is not rankable try to bring it to 128 - 192 :3
4. ae652c1d.jpg this file is not used owo delete it
5. You have different combo colours owo try to keep it the same in all diffs since i don't see different BG :O

1. personally i don't like the many overlaps in all the diff like : 00:25:829 (4,5) - are very ugly to see and very difficult to read,this should be a difficult for beginners,try to keep it in mind
2. The second thing that i don't agree is to use many stacks, this diff looks more like a Normal+/easy Hard as a Normal for beginners

Lally wrote:

hi from : Lally's Modding Queue (๑╹ω╹๑) ~

o3o -> suggestion/normal things
o3o -> must be fixed

[General]

1. from the ranking criteria the easier diff should be under 3.25 stars,this means that you need a easy in your mapset or try to make Normal simplier òwò;w; I used to thought it was 4
2. your BG is 1280x720 wich is not a rankable size, use 1024x768 :Ofixed
3. Your mp3 is 115 kbps wich is not rankable try to bring it to 128 - 192 :3this is a VBR mp3 so in fact the quality is not bad ,but as it conflicts with the criteria,I'll find a better one
4. ae652c1d.jpg this file is not used owo delete itIt used to belong to a GD that was deleted on the creator's words...deleted
5. You have different combo colours owo try to keep it the same in all diffs since i don't see different BG :O

for some visual reason I need two blue in Fear diff ;w; but i can't use the same color for 2 combos nearby

[Normal]

1. personally i don't like the many overlaps in all the diff like : 00:25:829 (4,5) - are very ugly to see and very difficult to read,this should be a difficult for beginners,try to keep it in mind
2. The second thing that i don't agree is to use many stacks, this diff looks more like a Normal+/easy Hard as a Normal for beginners

you're right ;w; i can't even read it with hidden mod....may be fixing them wil make it easier and rankable ;w;

about 01:11:766 (9) - this kind of overlap are not rankable or sliders like : http://puu.sh/32ffB.jpg example : the orange slider is under the dark blue slider , this thing is not rankable,is the kinda the same case of your slider fixed
You need for first to fix the red things >.< you need to work fefore on diff spread because how it looks now Normal + Insane is not so goodi'm waiting for my roommate's hard <3 but i think finally i'll have to map a hard myself
good luck owo/

vipto wrote:

Mapper Help Team

Helping out with the mp3.
Here, use [url=this]http://puu.sh/34q71.mp3[/url]
Dont forget to adjust all sections after you have changed the mp3

baldrace wrote:

粗略看一下，礼拜五考完试再来
吐槽一下。。感觉是随性而做，不是为了rank？ 其实是鬼畜实验。。。

normal

02:33:329 这种遮档不该有 已经全程没遮挡了

03:56:391难看了

01:18:402(5,1) 可以摆开就避免无谓的遮挡

00:50:520(1,2)normal感觉最好不要这样摆



normal不要变速，会很鬼蓄。



Fear

HP-1

连打太多了，00:59:016比如这种就不合voval，这边应该是滑条。
梗用的很杂，感觉排版是用心思的不过看起来挺乱
特别是这边02:48:699，一下子用一串这个梗一下子用一串那个梗 诶？有吗？长串里面塞滑条不是很常见嘛

00:31:641变距还是换一下颜色，或者换NC fixed
01:10:735 遮挡太过 类似的遮挡已经全改掉了
02:42:291莫名变距 我也觉得好蠢……

02:52:283擦好长的串 或许可以改……不过改串好麻烦……再看看吧

02:21:516做的圆润一点就好了，另外变距尽量规则，不然打起来会感觉别扭 这是在绕屏幕中心旋转啊
03:31:454(5,6,7)这个不是人类打的啊 已缩短
02:23:860(3,4,5,6)这样的换成单点比较好 前面都是这样……观望


为何你们都喜欢做图用这些个梗。。。
其实是最近看的几个图都有两边滑条飞来飞去的梗

需要大改。。恩