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The Cab - Angel With A Shotgun (Nightcore Mix)

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 13 февраля 2014 г. at 22:51:08

Artist: The Cab
Title: Angel With A Shotgun (Nightcore Mix)
Tags: techno trance rave remix
BPM: 142,59
Filesize: 3753kb
Play Time: 02:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,7 stars, 302 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 517 notes)
  3. Normal (2,3 stars, 121 notes)
Download: The Cab - Angel With A Shotgun (Nightcore Mix)
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Who loves angels?
And who loves shotguns?
Yeah, let's start our "Angel With A Shotgun Party"!
riffy
IRC mod

part 1 is missing, tho
part 2
12:55 Edwee: Ну, в принципе я свободен сейчас
12:56 -Bakari-: что там с бг?
12:57 Edwee: ты мне не скинул :<
12:57 Edwee: english maybe?
12:57 -Bakari-: nobody cares, actually
12:57 -Bakari-: црфеумук
12:57 -Bakari-: whatever
12:57 -Bakari-: [Normal]
12:58 -Bakari-: your comboing is inconsistent
12:58 Edwee: ;_;
12:58 -Bakari-: 00:16:083 (3) - consider adding NC here
12:59 -Bakari-: 00:53:759 (1,1) - not sure what to do.
12:59 -Bakari-: 00:54:812 (1,2) - I'd swap those new combos
13:00 Edwee: 00:16:083 (3) - chorus there
13:00 Edwee: i don't think, that NC is really needed here
13:00 -Bakari-: meh, they're quite inconsistent.
13:00 Edwee: 00:53:759 (1,1) - leave it, I'm also thought long
13:01 -Bakari-: oh, c'mon
13:01 Edwee: ye, swapped
13:01 Edwee: I agree!
13:02 -Bakari-: 00:13:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - too long / 00:21:135 (1,2) - too short / 00:23:029 (1,2) - too short / 00:24:713 (1,2) - this one is ok, tho
13:02 -Bakari-: 00:13:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - too long / 00:21:135 (1,2) - too short / 00:23:029 (1,2) - too short / 00:24:713 (1,2) - this one is ok, tho
13:02 -Bakari-: try to keep them consistent, otherwise it'll become unplayable in CtB
13:03 -Bakari-: 00:26:397 (2,1) - spacing is inconsistent, as you know it is a bad for an [Easy] diff
13:03 -Bakari-: easiest*
13:03 Edwee: 00:13:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can put NC on 4th note
13:03 -Bakari-: ^ that's ok
13:04 Edwee: oh, spacing is wrong, because i changed SV ;_;
13:04 Edwee: sorry about that
13:04 -Bakari-: sure
13:05 Edwee: http://puu.sh/2LT4y.jpg - ok?
13:05 -Bakari-: I guess it's ok
13:05 Edwee: 1.11x on next and prev distance
13:06 -Bakari-: 00:24:292 (2) -finish here, why?
13:07 -Bakari-: it'd be okay at 00:24:502 -
13:07 Edwee: i putted finish here, because of 00:21:977 (2) -
13:07 -Bakari-: g2g now :<

part 3
18:27 -Bakari-: you
18:28 -Bakari-: let's finish
18:28 Edwee: k
18:28 -Bakari-: Я кидал архив? :D
18:29 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/2LlO2
18:30 Edwee: OMG
18:30 Edwee: -BAKARI- SENT ME SOME PORN
18:30 -Bakari-: lel
18:31 -Bakari-: [Normal]
18:31 -Bakari-: comboing and etc.. blah blah blah
18:31 Edwee: colours and BG fixed
18:31 Edwee: k
18:31 -Bakari-: you already know it
18:32 -Bakari-: In fact, I don't like that vocal mapping when you ignore instruments. But it's your style, so it's ok.
18:33 Edwee: my "testers" said, that i'm cool, because i did vocal mapping :<
18:34 -Bakari-: 00:36:921 (1) - if you're folloving vocals, then follow them! Replace this slider with [http://puu.sh/2LYGi.jpg this pattern]
18:34 -Bakari-: I disagree ith that. In my opinion, music is symphony. Symphony of drums, vocals, guitar and keys mixed together.
18:35 -Bakari-: Mapping should reflect that symphone, so I map to everything I can hear.
18:35 -Bakari-: But it's just me.
18:35 Edwee: every man to his own taste
18:36 Edwee: said me the translater
18:36 Edwee: :D
18:37 -Bakari-: 00:39:447 (5,1) - do not use such pattern. (1)'s tail is too close to (5), so players might mistakenly click it.
18:37 -Bakari-: This is the easiest diff, and you should keep it in mind.
18:38 Edwee: where is the (5)? http://puu.sh/2LYLA.jpg
18:38 -Bakari-: 00:36:921 (1) - and I was serious about this pattern. You actually should change it.
18:38 -Bakari-: ahhhh.
18:38 -Bakari-: it's (4)
18:39 Edwee: 00:36:921 (3) - changed already
18:39 -Bakari-: great
18:39 Edwee: 00:40:289 (1) - changed the position
18:40 -Bakari-: Do you use x1.2 distance spacing everywhere?
18:40 Edwee: 1.1
18:40 Edwee: maybe somewhere is 1.2
18:40 -Bakari-: 00:41:341 (2,3) - check spacing here
18:41 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/2LYOG.png
18:41 Edwee: oh wow
18:41 Edwee: how did i do that
18:41 -Bakari-: who knows :V
18:42 -Bakari-: 00:43:656 (1) -
18:42 -Bakari-: yea, again
18:42 Edwee: could i do that?
18:42 Edwee: http://puu.sh/2LYQ8.jpg
18:43 -Bakari-: meh, spacing changes are pretty weird. And I don't recommend you to use them unless you have A REALLY DAMN GOOD reason
18:43 -Bakari-: meh, spacing changes are pretty weird. And I don't recommend you to use them unless you have A REALLY DAMN GOOD reason
18:44 Edwee: yes, my majesty! changing..
18:45 Edwee: changed
18:46 -Bakari-: 00:46:814 (1,1) - yea, this pattern is distance snapped, but it still looks a bit messy.
18:46 -Bakari-: Just saying, that overlaps always look messy, imo
18:47 Edwee: changefd
18:47 Edwee: d*
18:50 -Bakari-: 00:55:654 (2,4) -
18:50 -Bakari-: same :<
18:50 Edwee: 2 and...
18:50 Edwee: 4?
18:51 Edwee: http://puu.sh/2LZ3J.jpg
18:51 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/2LZ4A.jpg
18:52 Edwee: ah
18:52 Edwee: k
18:52 -Bakari-: 01:01:126 (1,1) - comboing here, you know
18:53 -Bakari-: 01:04:073 - по вокалам мапаешь, да? :D/
18:54 Edwee: Это нормал, ацтань
18:55 -Bakari-: это длинный и унылый слайдер :<
18:55 -Bakari-: алсо, ты знал, что Алекс и грумд ночами не спят, а читают чужие IRC моды, чтоб проверить заслужена ли кудоска
18:55 -Bakari-: алсо, ты знал, что Алекс и грумд ночами не спят, а читают чужие IRC моды, чтоб проверить заслужена ли кудоска
18:55 Edwee: нет
18:55 Edwee: :>
18:56 Edwee: алсо, ща поменяю
18:56 -Bakari-: я тебе точно говорю, у них уже глаза красные. Бедные они бедные, читают эти логи и перечитывают :<
18:57 Edwee: Changed the slider ^
18:57 -Bakari-: 01:24:700 - here, or 01:24:911 - here, But you sholdn't end this slider on BLUE tick
18:59 Edwee: oops
18:59 Edwee: changed
19:00 -Bakari-: 01:42:802 (3,1) - blah blah blah overlaps. At least, you could do something like [http://puu.sh/2LZh8.jpg this]
19:00 -Bakari-: You know it even better than I do
19:01 Edwee: yes
19:01 Edwee: changed
19:01 -Bakari-: 01:48:380 - I've re-arranged this pattern for your. More 1/2 notes, follows vocals closer
19:01 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/2LZjm.jpg
19:03 -Bakari-: 02:08:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - at least try to make them cuuuute :<
19:03 Edwee: my imagination sucks
19:03 Edwee: :<
19:04 -Bakari-: then use symmetrical patterns
19:04 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/2LZnI.jpg
19:07 Edwee: did some changind
19:07 Edwee: now looks better
19:08 -Bakari-: 02:33:317 (1,3) - overlaps, y'know
19:08 Edwee: k
19:08 Edwee: changed
19:08 -Bakari-: 02:47:630 (1) - джумпс а нот окей фор эн еасиест дифф
19:10 -Bakari-: 02:47:209 (4) - саундс реалли одд хере, трай то ремув вис финиш
19:12 Edwee: бат зере из алреади финиш
19:12 Edwee: он 4тх ноте
19:13 -Bakari-: йе, ай вонт ю ту ремув ит :<
19:13 Edwee: ах
19:13 Edwee: делетед
19:14 -Bakari-: I'm alright with that vocals mapping, but I don't think that it's a good idea.
19:15 -Bakari-: As for hitsound, I told you, that I disapprove that custom thing
19:15 -Bakari-: And we've fixed placement/rhythm mistakes.
19:15 Edwee: i'm think about it ;)
19:15 -Bakari-: So, [Normal] should be better now.
19:16 -Bakari-: It's totally up to you, anyway
19:18 -Bakari-: now [Hard]
19:18 -Bakari-: Diff settings are well-balanced here, btw
19:20 -Bakari-: 00:14:399 (1,2,1,4) - nazi-nazi - messy pattern here again.
19:21 Edwee: oh
19:21 Edwee: what i'm thought about
19:21 Edwee: lol
19:21 -Bakari-: 00:16:925 (1,2,3,4) - those finishes here are pretty weird, imo. They don't follow music at all :V
19:23 Edwee: hm
19:23 -Bakari-: 00:21:345 (1) - too soon after spinner. Players need some time to realize that spinner is over :V
19:23 Edwee: but my ears like this
19:23 -Bakari-: ask for more opinions, I really disagree with you here
19:24 Edwee: щлфн
19:24 Edwee: okay :D
19:24 -Bakari-: 00:26:397 (4,1) - this pattern is щлфн for me (\:D/) but I guess you can avoid that overlap :<
19:25 Edwee: it's playable, imo
19:25 Edwee: if one more modder looked at it - i'll change
19:25 -Bakari-: It looks messy, but it is perfectly playable \:D/
19:25 -Bakari-: So, no need to change it
19:27 -Bakari-: 00:33:869 - actually, that spinner doesn't fit with vocals good
19:29 Edwee: changed
19:30 -Bakari-: 00:40:394 (2) - 00:43:762 (2) - try to replace those 1/4s with reversed 1/4 sliders. Looks like there's no GOOD reason to have a triplet here. those 1/4 vocals are too weak
19:30 -Bakari-: 00:40:394 (2) - 00:43:762 (2) - try to replace those 1/4s with reversed 1/4 sliders. Looks like there's no GOOD reason to have a triplet here. those 1/4 vocals are too weak
19:32 -Bakari-: 00:55:864 (2) - spacing changes here are quite hard to understand. Are you sure?
19:35 -Bakari-: 01:21:227 (2) - I've already mentioned, that those 1/4s are not so necessary. Consider removing those, too.
19:38 -Bakari-: 01:27:437 (1,2,3) - ^
19:40 Edwee: all fixed
19:40 -Bakari-: great
19:42 -Bakari-: 02:07:218 - you can drag break's end here.
19:42 Edwee: k
19:43 -Bakari-: 02:09:849 (2,4,2,4,2,4,2) - not even close to vocals :D/
19:44 Edwee: all is good, ацтань
19:50 -Bakari-: 02:27:214 (3) -
19:50 -Bakari-: NC
19:50 -Bakari-: because
19:50 -Bakari-: (3)
19:50 -Bakari-: is
19:50 -Bakari-: slower
19:50 -Bakari-: than
19:50 -Bakari-: (1)
19:50 -Bakari-: so, to make those velocity changes readable, you should add a new combo
19:51 Edwee: yes, sir
19:51 -Bakari-: 02:36:475 (1,2,3) - same as always :<
19:52 Edwee: fixed
19:53 -Bakari-: 02:54:155 (2,3,4) - 02:54:997 (2,3,4) - 02:55:839 (2,3,4) -
19:55 Edwee: no, i like this moment at all :<
19:56 -Bakari-: 02:51:208 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - this pattern looks a little bit messy, btw
19:59 Edwee: fixed
19:59 -Bakari-: good
20:00 -Bakari-: check the diff for overlaps once again, I bet you can find some more
20:01 -Bakari-: [Insane]
20:01 -Bakari-: OD + 1 for the hardest diff. It'll improve the balance of your diff
20:02 Edwee: k
20:02 -Bakari-: 00:26:818 (1) - спэйсинг, ю форгот то чэйндж ит, бро :<
20:03 Edwee: fixed
20:04 -Bakari-: 00:34:185 (7) - claps appear here suddenly. feels kinda weird. try to remove some of them?
20:06 Edwee: no, because music is starting to increase her volume\
20:06 -Bakari-: 01:27:016 (1) - explain me, why there is a new combo? :V
20:07 Edwee: oos
20:07 Edwee: oopd
20:07 Edwee: oops
20:07 Edwee: :D
20:07 -Bakari-: huehuehue
20:08 -Bakari-: 02:13:111 (1) - i love creativity. Nice patterns. Cute shape <3
20:10 -Bakari-: 02:27:214 (3) - I like New Combo mods. And you know it :)
20:11 Edwee: already changed ;)
20:11 -Bakari-: great :)
20:15 -Bakari-: rest of the diff looks rankable
20:18 -Bakari-: should I post log or something
20:19 Edwee: ofc

We've fixed
  1. General things.
  2. Rhythm mistakes
  3. Combo placement
  4. Some nazis
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Edwee
Thanks, Baka-sensei :>
ZLOdeuka-
Добрый вечер.

[General]

Timing* BPM = 142,590 . offset 14422. реснап и подправь все нотки

[Normal]

00:19:451 (2) - слайдер совсем не звучит. предлагаю закончить слайдер тут 00:20:293. а сюда 00:20:714 (х) - поставить сиркл.
00:21:345 (1) - сбивает весь ритм, было бы хорошо еслиб слайдер начался на большом белом тике... но лучше если заменить слайдер сирклами,00:21:135 (х) - тут один и 00:21:556 (х) - вот тут.
00:28:081 (1) - этот тоже. 00:27:870 (х) И 00:28:291 (х) сирклы
00:35:869 (2) - этот слайдер заменить сирклом и от 00:36:079 (х) до 00:36:710 (х) - слайдер
00:43:656 (1) - слайдер лучше закончить тут 00:44:709
01:22:385 (2,3) - эти слайдеры нужно поменять местами. т.е. сначала длинный потом короче.
01:28:910 (2,3) - этот прыжок очень жесток для нормала. лучше его убрать
02:12:269 (3,4) - предыдущие два слайдера размещены по центру, симетрично. может и эти так разместить? например так http://puu.sh/35eXs.jpg
02:29:318 (1) - предлагаю заменить его на три сиркла. 02:29:529 (1) - тут 02:29:950 (2) - тут 02:30:371 (3) - тут

подправь тайминг и я смогу доделать моддинг, если захочешь, напиши мне в лс. будет проще модить если у тебя у самого уже будет верный тайминг... жду от тебя вестей
Topic Starter
Edwee

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

Добрый вечер.

[General]

Timing* BPM = 142,590 . offset 14422. реснап и подправь все нотки

[Normal]

00:19:451 (2) - слайдер совсем не звучит. предлагаю закончить слайдер тут 00:20:293. а сюда 00:20:714 (х) - поставить сиркл. Это нормал, делал длинные слайдеры, да и вроде звучит :\
00:21:345 (1) - сбивает весь ритм, было бы хорошо еслиб слайдер начался на большом белом тике... но лучше если заменить слайдер сирклами,00:21:135 (х) - тут один и 00:21:556 (х) - вот тут.
00:28:081 (1) - этот тоже. 00:27:870 (х) И 00:28:291 (х) сирклы Сложно для нормала. Фиксанул по-другому
00:35:869 (2) - этот слайдер заменить сирклом и от 00:36:079 (х) до 00:36:710 (х) - слайдер
00:43:656 (1) - слайдер лучше закончить тут 00:44:709
01:22:385 (2,3) - эти слайдеры нужно поменять местами. т.е. сначала длинный потом короче.
01:28:910 (2,3) - этот прыжок очень жесток для нормала. лучше его убрать
02:12:269 (3,4) - предыдущие два слайдера размещены по центру, симетрично. может и эти так разместить? например так http://puu.sh/35eXs.jpg
02:29:318 (1) - предлагаю заменить его на три сиркла. 02:29:529 (1) - тут 02:29:950 (2) - тут 02:30:371 (3) - тут

подправь тайминг и я смогу доделать моддинг, если захочешь, напиши мне в лс. будет проще модить если у тебя у самого уже будет верный тайминг... жду от тебя вестей Yes, my lord!
Beatox_old
Hey! I hope you don't mind my intrusion! :)

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:14:422 (1) => I would rather replace this with two shorter sliders instead. Fits the vocals better.
Slider1: 00:14:422 - 00:14:842
Slider2: 00:15:263 - 00:15:684
00:17:788 (1) => ^
Slider1: 00:17:788 - 00:18:209
Slider2: 00:18:629 - 00:19:050
00:19:471 (2) => Replace this with a plain slider, for a more identical beginning.
00:26:204 (2) => Make this two ticks longer, it should end on the red tick instead, to the right.
00:40:300 (1) => Replace with a repeated slider.
ReSlider: 00:40:300 - 00:40:721 - 00:41:141
01:40:893 (3) => Replace with a repeated slider.
ReSlider: 01:40:893 - 01:41:314 - 01:41:735
01:49:730 (2,3) => Replace with a repeated slider.
ReSlider: 01:49:730 - 01:50:151 - 01:50:571
Add slider here: 01:51:413 - 01:51:834
02:29:494 (1,2,3) => Give these some more spacing, might be a little confusing if they're too close to each other.
02:38:331 (2) => Replace with two shorter sliders.
Slider1: 02:38:331 - 02:38:751
Slider2: 02:39:172 - 02:39:593

[Hard]
SPOILER
Offset: 00:12:949
00:38:406 (4) => Replace with two shorter sliders.
Slider1: 00:38:406 - 00:38:617
Slider2: 00:38:827 - 00:39:038
00:54:817 (1) => Could need a new placement.
00:55:869 (2) => ^
01:04:285 (1) => Release new combo.
01:05:126 (2) => New combo here.
01:19:856 (6) => Replace with a repeated slider.
ReSlider: 01:19:854 - 01:20:275 - 01:20:695
01:35:213 (1) => Make this a repeated slider instead. Also, release new combo.
01:35:633 (2) => Delete.
01:40:052 (3) => Replace with two shorter sliders.
Slider1: 01:40:052 - 01:40:262
Slider2: 01:40:472 - 01:40:683
02:46:326 (6) => New combo here.
02:46:957 (1) => Release new combo.
02:47:798 (2) => New combo here.

[Insane]
SPOILER
Offset: 00:13:159
00:26:940 (2) => Delete, doesn't feel like it belongs here.
00:28:202 (2) => ^
00:41:878 (6) => ^
00:49:242 (5) => ^
00:51:240 (6) => Replace with a repeated slider and a hitcircle.
ReSlider: 00:51:240 - 00:51:451 - 00:51:661
Hitcircle: 00:51:872
00:52:398 (2) => Delete, doesn't feel like it belongs here.
00:56:185 (6) => ^
01:07:967 (6) => ^
01:18:697 (2) => ^
01:20:906 (8) => New combo here.
01:21:116 (1) => Release new combo.
01:30:900 (2) => Delete, doesn't feel like it belongs here.
01:36:159 (2) => ^
01:39:105 (8) => ^
02:29:915 (1) => Release new combo.
02:30:336 (1) => ^
02:32:545 (2) => Delete, doesn't feel like it belongs here.
02:35:070 (2) => ^
02:47:483 (4) => ^
02:50:849 (3) => ^

Overall: There were no major problems here. Just that my opinion oppose the triple hitcircles, as the song does not address a triple tone at those points.

These are just my opinions and statements, so no need to follow these.
Sincerely, Beatox / bTOX
neurosis
go for rank :<
Topic Starter
Edwee

emmy wrote:

go for rank :<
Lol, i leave from osu, but now i'm back
That's joke, ppv2 sucks, want to do maps.
Topic Starter
Edwee

Beatox wrote:

Hey! I hope you don't mind my intrusion! :)

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:14:422 (1) => I would rather replace this with two shorter sliders instead. Fits the vocals better.
Slider1: 00:14:422 - 00:14:842
Slider2: 00:15:263 - 00:15:684
00:17:788 (1) => ^
Slider1: 00:17:788 - 00:18:209
Slider2: 00:18:629 - 00:19:050
00:19:471 (2) => Replace this with a plain slider, for a more identical beginning.
00:26:204 (2) => Make this two ticks longer, it should end on the red tick instead, to the right.
00:40:300 (1) => Replace with a repeated slider.
ReSlider: 00:40:300 - 00:40:721 - 00:41:141
01:40:893 (3) => Replace with a repeated slider.
ReSlider: 01:40:893 - 01:41:314 - 01:41:735
01:49:730 (2,3) => Replace with a repeated slider.
ReSlider: 01:49:730 - 01:50:151 - 01:50:571
Add slider here: 01:51:413 - 01:51:834
02:29:494 (1,2,3) => Give these some more spacing, might be a little confusing if they're too close to each other.
02:38:331 (2) => Replace with two shorter sliders.
Slider1: 02:38:331 - 02:38:751
Slider2: 02:39:172 - 02:39:593

[Hard]
SPOILER
Offset: 00:12:949
00:38:406 (4) => Replace with two shorter sliders.
Slider1: 00:38:406 - 00:38:617
Slider2: 00:38:827 - 00:39:038
00:54:817 (1) => Could need a new placement.
00:55:869 (2) => ^
01:04:285 (1) => Release new combo.
01:05:126 (2) => New combo here.
01:19:856 (6) => Replace with a repeated slider.
ReSlider: 01:19:854 - 01:20:275 - 01:20:695
01:35:213 (1) => Make this a repeated slider instead. Also, release new combo.
01:35:633 (2) => Delete.
01:40:052 (3) => Replace with two shorter sliders.
Slider1: 01:40:052 - 01:40:262
Slider2: 01:40:472 - 01:40:683
02:46:326 (6) => New combo here.
02:46:957 (1) => Release new combo.
02:47:798 (2) => New combo here.

[Insane]
SPOILER
Offset: 00:13:159
00:26:940 (2) => Delete, doesn't feel like it belongs here.
00:28:202 (2) => ^
00:41:878 (6) => ^
00:49:242 (5) => ^
00:51:240 (6) => Replace with a repeated slider and a hitcircle.
ReSlider: 00:51:240 - 00:51:451 - 00:51:661
Hitcircle: 00:51:872
00:52:398 (2) => Delete, doesn't feel like it belongs here.
00:56:185 (6) => ^
01:07:967 (6) => ^
01:18:697 (2) => ^
01:20:906 (8) => New combo here.
01:21:116 (1) => Release new combo.
01:30:900 (2) => Delete, doesn't feel like it belongs here.
01:36:159 (2) => ^
01:39:105 (8) => ^
02:29:915 (1) => Release new combo.
02:30:336 (1) => ^
02:32:545 (2) => Delete, doesn't feel like it belongs here.
02:35:070 (2) => ^
02:47:483 (4) => ^
02:50:849 (3) => ^

Overall: There were no major problems here. Just that my opinion oppose the triple hitcircles, as the song does not address a triple tone at those points.

These are just my opinions and statements, so no need to follow these.
Sincerely, Beatox / bTOX
Fixed some problems, but different offsets is kinda bad.
winber1
You asked for a test play thru PM, I just decided to play it myself and see how it felt since you weren't online. I'm only going to talk about the insane difficulty.

Some of your spinners "fit" but they start a little too early in my opinion...
00:51:240 (6) - This is a little weird since it does not follow the emphasized main beats.
02:08:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - this whole part just feels weird to me. You try to match both the guitar and the vocals, and it just comes out like you aren't really following either. Secondly, the patterns look really awkwardly shaped, which adds to the awkward feeling of the section imo. If you used cleaner shapes, and perhaps did not connect the entire thing together, it might work better. Perhaps, use more 1/2 tick notes and try to follow the vocals more strictly. The 2/1 tick sliders detract from the feeling of the song imo.
02:29:284 (1) - this ends on the wrong beat. It should end on 02:29:704 -

Also the whole song consists of patterns in straight jagged lines. Nothing is really wrong with them, but i think it might be beneficial as a mapper to try and branch out then to use just patterns like these.

In general the map actually flows pretty well and is pretty good. Just some parts may need to follow the music a little more in my opinion.

You do not need to kudosu this.
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