This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, December 7, 2013 at 10:43:15 PM

Artist: ZUN
Title: Tsukimade Todoke, Fushi no Kemuri
Source: Touhou
Tags: Rei_Fan49 Reach the Moon, Immortal Smoke Meraih Bulan, Asap Abadi Fujiwara no Mokou Eiyashou Imperishable Night
BPM: 158
Filesize: 5437kb
Play Time: 02:50
Difficulties Available:

1. 16~36 (LN) Bulan Waxing Gibbous - 7Key (5 stars, 1859 notes)
2. 01~03 (EM) Bulan Baru - 7Key (0.88 stars, 278 notes)
3. 04~08 (NM) Bulan Sabit - 7Key (1.65 stars, 527 notes)
4. 09~15 (HD) Bulan Seperempat Awal - 7Key (3.03 stars, 969 notes)

Download: ZUN - Tsukimade Todoke, Fushi no Kemuri
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st Mania Mapset

I wonder, if i remove the [Full Moon ~ EX 64~81], could this one get ranked?
Meraih Bulan, Asap Abadi

apakah diriku ini dapat mengalahkan sang putri?
apakah pertarunganku ini akan selesai?

i'll reject EZ, for all cost.

lul gila timechange nya

time change apa ? o.o

Rei Hakurei wrote:

time change apa ? o.o

Nevermind, just like o2jam ._.

The title translates into :Reach for the Moon, Immortal Smoke

i know , but i'll pick this one instead

rank this pls

Hello Rei . ^^ Rumi chan is here to mod u
[osu!mania]♪ ♫~O2Jam-based Style Modding Team~♫ ♪


[General]
add 7k on diff name on each diffs
timing points http://puu.sh/3Mcjz.txt
[EM]
OD -->5
HP --->7
volume 65%
00:04:506 (4506|6) - remove whistle
00:09:058 (9058|3) - ^
00:13:600 (13600|1) - move to 7th
00:13:600 (13600|0) - make 1/1 hold
00:16:161 - add
00:16:893 - ^
00:58:587 (58587|1,58587|2,59319|2,59319|3,60050|3,60050|4,60782|4,60782|5) - this pattern really hard for beginner (recommend change)
01:04:441 (64441|0) - add finish
01:14:685 (74685|5) - finish
01:15:416 (75416|3) - whistle
01:36:636 (96636|2) - move to 2nd
02:01:527 add hold
02:29:840 (149840|1,150206|1) - remove whistle
02:41:914 (161914|0) - move to 4th ( different pitch)

[NM]
volume 60%
OD -> 6
00:06:405 (6405|0) - remove whistle
00:14:698 (14698|3,15064|2,15430|3,15796|4,16161|3) - add 1 more note like this part 00:17:625 (17625|2,17625|4,17991|3,17991|5,18357|4,18357|2,18722|3,18722|1,19088|4,19088|2,19454|5,19454|6) -
00:30:500 - add
00:31:269 - ^
01:13:770 - ^
01:14:319 - ^
01:27:398 (87398|3) - unsnapped
01:30:325 (90325|6) - ^
01:40:660 (100660|1) - remove whistle
01:42:855 - add
01:43:587 - add
01:54:745 - add triplet
02:01:514 - map the snare, its a strong beat eg : http://puu.sh/3MaEg.jpg
02:03:736 - add
02:05:825 (125825|3) - remove
02:13:040 - add
02:16:268 - add
02:23:863 - add
02:26:711 - add
02:26:901 - add
02:26:995 - add
02:27:090 - add
02:27:185 - add
02:48:133 (168133|4,168133|5) - remove whistle

[HD]
Volume 45%
00:01:091 - add
00:01:279 - add
00:07:165 - add(2)
00:11:140 - add
00:11:518 - ^
00:11:897 - ^
00:12:559 - ^
00:13:032 - ^
00:13:127 - ^
00:13:222 - ^
00:13:411 - ^
00:13:506 - ^
00:14:698 - ^
00:33:192 (33192|6) - remove whistle
00:32:615 (32615|3) - ^
00:33:192 (33192|4) - ^
00:35:307 - add
00:36:076 - ^
00:36:461 - ^
00:36:846 - ^
00:37:230 - add stream snare beat at collumn 1 and 5 respectively until 00:37:713
00:39:869 - add
00:41:369 - ^
00:42:119 - ^
00:44:369 - ^
00:47:369 - ^
00:47:744 - ^
00:48:119 - ^
01:05:172 (65172|4) - remove clap
01:13:221 this part again http://puu.sh/3MaEg.jpg
01:16:331 - add
01:17:794 - ^
01:19:258 - ^
01:33:526 - ^
01:36:453 - ^
01:43:038 - ^
01:49:258 - add at 7th
01:49:349 - add at 1st
01:49:532 - ^
01:49:715 - ^
01:49:624 - add at 2nd
01:49:806 till 01:51:270 fill every 1/4 beat
02:18:356 - add
02:18:736 - add
02:19:116 - add
02:19:495 - add
02:23:293 - add
02:24:052 - add
02:34:414 - add
02:38:255 - stream here , remove these 02:38:255 (158255|2,158255|0,158438|1,158621|4,158804|2,158987|5) - fill 1/4 beat

[LN]
Volume 45%
00:01:091 - add
00:01:279 - add
00:37:038 (37038|5,37134|1,37230|5,37326|1,37423|5,37519|1,37615|5,37711|1) - remove
00:38:932 - add
00:40:441 - add
00:40:338 (40338|1,40525|5) - remove
00:43:432 - add
00:48:307 (48307|1,48400|5,48494|1,48588|5,48682|1,48775|5,48869|1,48963|5,49057|1,49150|5,49244|1,49338|5,49432|1,49525|5,49619|1,49713|5,49807|1) - remove
00:48:307 (48307|5,48400|1,48494|5,48588|1,48682|5,48775|1,48869|5,48963|1,49057|5,49150|1,49244|5,49338|1,49432|5,49525|1,49619|5,49713|1,49807|5,49807|3) - add ( doubles)
00:58:587 - ad 1/1 hold
00:59:319 - ^
01:00:050 - ^
01:00:782 - ^
01:37:276 - add (2)
01:37:367 - ^
01:49:075 - ^
01:49:166 - ^
01:49:258 - ^
02:01:880 (121880|5,121971|5,122063|5,122154|1,122246|1,122337|1,122428|3,122520|3,122611|4,122611|2,122703|4,122703|2,122794|2,122794|4,122886|4,122886|2) - i dun prefer this jack
02:07:533 start follow the hold beat ( idk is it trumpet or something? xD )
02:27:280 ^

[EX]
Volume 40%
00:01:091 - add
00:01:279 - add
oh god this diff is too overmap , i cant mod sorry ;w;

- R u m i a - wrote:

Hello Rei . ^^ Rumi chan is here to mod u
[osu!mania]♪ ♫~O2Jam-based Style Modding Team~♫ ♪


[General]
add 7k on diff name on each diffs since each diff have same key amount, its discouraged instead.
timing points http://puu.sh/3Mcjz.txt ?? isn't that hard diff speed changes??

sounds like my diff curve raises exponentially..
slight difficulty increases from 70% progress

[EM]
OD -->5 ok
HP --->7
volume 65% 75% all diff for now,
00:04:506 (4506|6) - remove whistle D: it fits the main piano
00:09:058 (9058|3) - ^ ^
00:13:600 (13600|1) - move to 7th ok
00:13:600 (13600|0) - make 1/1 hold umm i didn't feel any "hold" here
00:16:161 - add ok
00:16:893 - ^ sounds like intro pattern didn't have 1/1 after the chime
00:58:587 (58587|1,58587|2,59319|2,59319|3,60050|3,60050|4,60782|4,60782|5) - this pattern really hard for beginner (recommend change) ok
01:04:441 (64441|0) - add finish i prefer chime sample, thanks for pointing
01:14:685 (74685|5) - finish there's no cymbal o.o ?
01:15:416 (75416|3) - whistle ok
01:36:636 (96636|2) - move to 2nd ok
02:01:527 add hold i prefer rest part
02:29:840 (149840|1,150206|1) - remove whistle ok
02:41:914 (161914|0) - move to 4th ( different pitch) 02:41:548 (161548|3) instead

[NM]
volume 60%
OD -> 6 ok
00:06:405 (6405|0) - remove whistle D: it fits the main piano
00:14:698 (14698|3,15064|2,15430|3,15796|4,16161|3) - add 1 more note like this part 00:17:625 (17625|2,17625|4,17991|3,17991|5,18357|4,18357|2,18722|3,18722|1,19088|4,19088|2,19454|5,19454|6) - that part actually to point the area that looks like thicker, so no.
00:30:500 - add i didn't follow the upbeat or "snare?", it's following the main piano while on relax way,
00:31:269 - ^
01:42:855 - ^
01:43:587 - ^
01:13:770 - ^ supposed to be rest-part on NM or lower
01:14:319 - ^
01:27:398 (87398|3) - unsnapped 3/4 isn't it?
01:30:325 (90325|6) - ^ ^
01:40:660 (100660|1) - remove whistle since less difference, then ok
01:54:745 - add triplet this is NM, it's too harsh using a 1/3 (esp. jack hammer) for me,
02:01:514 - map the snare, its a strong beat eg : http://puu.sh/3MaEg.jpg isn't this a NM ?
02:03:736 - add ok
02:05:825 (125825|3) - remove o.o why?
02:13:040 - add sounds like too thick ?
02:16:268 - add considering this,
02:23:863 - add idk but rejecting,
02:26:711 - add no stream on NM
02:26:901 - add
02:26:995 - add
02:27:090 - add
02:27:185 - add
02:48:133 (168133|4,168133|5) - remove whistle umm nope? there are some trumpet that sounds like a ping-pong and it's on "whistle" part o.o

as the diff+ part from here getting more harder than previous one, i'll apply more difficulty increasing suggestion on first part.
first part looks calm with 1/1 and 1/2 right?
[HD]
Volume 45%
00:01:091 - add
00:01:279 - add
00:07:165 - add(2)
00:11:140 - add sounds like making thicker pattern while it was planned to be NM+ part (take a look on previous diff again). oh well i guess i should keep it 1/1~1/2 till later on
00:11:518 - ^
00:11:897 - ^
00:12:559 - ^
00:13:032 - ^
00:13:127 - ^
00:13:222 - ^
00:13:411 - ^
00:13:506 - ^
00:14:698 - ^
00:33:192 (33192|6) - remove whistle ok
00:32:615 (32615|3) - ^ ok
00:33:192 (33192|4) - ^ no
00:35:307 - add there's something that i follow, sounds like back-piano; so i didn't pick full 1/2 part around here
00:36:076 - ^
00:36:461 - ^
00:36:846 - ^
00:37:230 - add stream snare beat at collumn 1 and 5 respectively until 00:37:713 nope
00:39:869 - add
00:41:369 - ^
00:42:119 - ^
00:44:369 - ^
00:47:369 - ^
00:47:744 - ^
00:48:119 - ^
01:05:172 (65172|4) - remove clap ok
01:13:221 this part again http://puu.sh/3MaEg.jpg done with 1/2 beat instead 1/4
01:16:331 - add idk what instrument, but 1/1
01:19:258 - ^
01:17:794 - ^ ok
01:33:526 - ^ i'm following something that 1/2, but excludes this... (a piano ?)
01:36:453 - ^
01:43:038 - ^ following a o-o-o---o-o-o snare i think.. so no
01:49:258 - add at 7th sounds like no stream during hold for this part?
01:49:349 - add at 1st
01:49:532 - ^
01:49:624 - add at 2nd
01:49:715 - ^ umm nope?
01:49:806 till 01:51:270 fill every 1/4 beat o.o i didn't even put a long 1/4 stream on this diff...
02:18:356 - add yes
02:19:116 - add
02:34:414 - add
02:18:736 - add no
02:19:495 - add
02:23:293 - add
02:24:052 - add
02:38:255 - stream here , remove these 02:38:255 (158255|2,158255|0,158438|1,158621|4,158804|2,158987|5) - fill 1/4 beat sounds strange for me to put a stream that longer than 5/4 on this diff... really (considering stream rate)

it should hardly resemble EX.
[LN]
Volume 45%
00:01:091 - add
00:01:279 - add
00:37:038 (37038|5,37134|1,37230|5,37326|1,37423|5,37519|1,37615|5,37711|1) - remove i'll see other opinion about 1/4 jacks
00:40:338 (40338|1,40525|5) - remove
00:48:307 (48307|1,48400|5,48494|1,48588|5,48682|1,48775|5,48869|1,48963|5,49057|1,49150|5,49244|1,49338|5,49432|1,49525|5,49619|1,49713|5,49807|1) - remove
00:48:307 (48307|5,48400|1,48494|5,48588|1,48682|5,48775|1,48869|5,48963|1,49057|5,49150|1,49244|5,49338|1,49432|5,49525|1,49619|5,49713|1,49807|5,49807|3) - add ( doubles)
00:38:932 - add i'll wait opinions by putting a note on 4th column
00:40:441 - add
00:43:432 - add
00:58:587 - ad 1/1 hold nope, i'm doing it for falling note part
00:59:319 - ^
01:00:050 - ^
01:00:782 - ^
01:37:276 - add (2) i pick this instead below, that might be removed later
01:37:367 - ^ (i picked above)
01:49:075 - ^ added
01:49:166 - ^ empty beat! :<
01:49:258 - ^ i picked 75ms one, so i won't pick this
02:01:880 (121880|5,121971|5,122063|5,122154|1,122246|1,122337|1,122428|3,122520|3,122611|4,122611|2,122703|4,122703|2,122794|2,122794|4,122886|4,122886|2) - i dun prefer this jack waiting for opinion
02:07:533 start follow the hold beat ( idk is it trumpet or something? xD ) i prefer playing with the piano on this part *EX*
02:27:280 ^ supposed to be 1-key stream before getting able to try EX,

[EX]
Volume 40%
00:01:091 - add
00:01:279 - add
oh god this diff is too overmap , i cant mod sorry ;w; (well it's full of stream o.o)

1. sounds like 1ms mess on first two red points
2. some hold that didn't even snapped
3. intro notes that beyond uninherited one, i didn't prefer it...

marking this to be high priority that i just fixed it

thanks for the mod and suggestion, well i most likely replying the non-replied mods with the previous reason or similar suggestion reply,

Rei Hakurei wrote:

I wonder, if i weaken the [Full Moon ~ EX into 49~64], could this one get ranked?

i think you shouldn't. it depends on star prioity and ranking criteria in your mapset mod also be helpful for get ranked easily ( if this one was bubbled too )

also, your mapset and note arrange was very cool but still needs more fix in hitsounds, because i think some hitsounds are doesn't fit especially for clapping hitsounds

istilahnya, telaten banget ngerjain SV changes nya, sampai banyak banget dan bikin pusing, tapi gpp, itu tantangan menurutku

Remillion Cross wrote:

Rei Hakurei wrote:

I wonder, if i weaken the [Full Moon ~ EX into 49~64], could this one get ranked?

i think you shouldn't. it depends on star prioity and ranking criteria in your mapset mod also be helpful for get ranked easily ( if this one was bubbled too )

also, your mapset and note arrange was very cool but still needs more fix in hitsounds, because i think some hitsounds are doesn't fit especially for clapping hitsounds

istilahnya, telaten banget ngerjain SV changes nya, sampai banyak banget dan bikin pusing, tapi gpp, itu tantangan menurutku

well, mungkin maksud km apa itu rankable dan etc.nya kan; iya gw tau kok :3 Bulan Purnama bakal gw cabut aja dari mapset, soalnya terlalu gila daripada Bulan 3/4

Rei Hakurei wrote:

Remillion Cross wrote:

i think you shouldn't. it depends on star prioity and ranking criteria in your mapset mod also be helpful for get ranked easily ( if this one was bubbled too )

also, your mapset and note arrange was very cool but still needs more fix in hitsounds, because i think some hitsounds are doesn't fit especially for clapping hitsounds

istilahnya, telaten banget ngerjain SV changes nya, sampai banyak banget dan bikin pusing, tapi gpp, itu tantangan menurutku

well, mungkin maksud km apa itu rankable dan etc.nya kan; iya gw tau kok :3 Bulan Purnama bakal gw cabut aja dari mapset, soalnya terlalu gila daripada Bulan 3/4

Ya gitu lah, tapi disimpan aja diff yg paling gila itu, jangan dibuang gitu aja, bisa jadi tantangan tuh, taruh aja di puu.sh atau dropbox, kayak map LeaF - I gitu deh di creator words nya ada unsubmited diffnya, kayak gitu aja, udah susah2 kamu buat tuh diff wkwkwwk

hitsoundsnya jangan terlalu besar yg pas di jackhammer nya kalau bisa sih. Jujur sih, enak banget ni map , sering gw main soalnya menantang aja di SV changes nya wkwkwk

emangnya gw mau hapus gitu aja? looool

oke deh gw pelanin, tapi yang LN doang.

mod

[01~03 (EM) Bulan Baru]

-Im not really sure about the sv change thing but make sure it is clean remember this is the easiest

00:09:816 add note here since you addded note at 00:08:302 to keep your pattern place it in the 1st column because the sound was such a downbeat or place it near the holder
00:12:087 - 00:12:8443 you should do this pattern more
00:13:966 why did you not place a note here? intentionally you did follow the clap in the following notes
00:16:893 ^
00:39:307 move this note to the 7th column.. you broke your pattern
00:58:587 - 01:01:148 http://puu.sh/4x9p6.jpg try this pattern it follows much more better
01:16:148 try to add holder here that ends in 01:17:246 same as 01:19:075 that ends in 01:20:172
02:13:989 wrong placement.. place this note on 5th column

[04~08 (NM) Bulan Sabit]

00:03:938 place a note here this is where the beat started
00:06:406 this note isnt following something doesnt this? delete
00:30:115 00:30:500 00:30:884 you can still add notes in here remember beat beat.. i suggest for the placement is stack them no other patterns
01:15:782 move to 4th column
01:16:148 - 01:17:977 it should be like this http://puu.sh/4xa0L.jpg the pattern before is much messy
02:04:875 delete the hitsound its annoying

[09~15 (HD) Bulan Seperempat Awal]

00:03:558 move to 6th column
00:47:369 missing a note here try to follow more of the beat

[16~36 (LN) Bulan Waxing Gibbous]

looks nice

YunoFanatic wrote:

mod

[01~03 (EM) New Moon]

-Im not really sure about the sv change thing but make sure it is clean, remember this is the easiest i know, well least SV change effects on lower diff, but it feels empty if i didn't put them

00:09:816 add note here since you addded note at 00:08:302 to keep your pattern place it in the 1st column because the sound was such a downbeat or place it near the holder due to lower tone, 1st col instead.
00:12:087 - 00:12:844 you should do this pattern more i want a relax one D:
00:13:966 why did you not place a note here? intentionally you did follow the clap in the following notes sounds not so relax? its used later on, but not on early section i think... (recalling)
00:16:893 ^
00:39:307 move this note to the 7th column.. you broke your pattern i didn't D:, some patterns are based the tone itself, while some patterns are based from instrument column... (i didn't sure if i use the 2nd one)
00:58:587 - 01:01:148 http://puu.sh/4x9p6.jpg try this pattern it follows much more better considering about this, well i prefer a lot of 2/1 instead 1/1
01:16:148 try to add holder here that ends in 01:17:246 same as 01:19:075 that ends in 01:20:172 considering about this
02:13:989 wrong placement.. place this note on 5th column i think i use this one instead.. A, A-1, A-2, A+1, A+2

[04~08 (NM) Crescent Moon]

00:03:938 place a note here this is where the beat started well, i feel it looks too early to give those 1/2 on beginning part.. a "lot" of 1/1 will give a better feeling of calm normal lol
00:06:406 this note isnt following something doesnt this? delete piano
00:30:115 00:30:500 00:30:884 you can still add notes in here remember beat beat.. i suggest for the placement is stack them no other patterns i'm focusing on hold/piano hold in here, same for the next section
01:15:782 move to 4th column applied this and below..
01:16:148 - 01:17:977 it should be like this http://puu.sh/4xa0L.jpg the pattern before is much messy
02:04:875 delete the hitsound its annoying turned into soft-clap

[09~15 (HD) First Quarter Moon]

00:03:558 move to 6th column accepting both, well i think it looks better and i'll learn people modding style too lol
00:47:369 missing a note here try to follow more of the beat

[16~36 (LN) Waxing Gibbous Moon]

looks nice thanks

nice mod, (btw you need to practice more about pointing something that subjective and objective... imo)

this grave map make me curious just see the difficult

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