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Masuda Toshio - Osanaki Hi no Nanami

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ZLOdeuka-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 17 июня 2015 г. at 15:42:44

Artist: Masuda Toshio
Title: Osanaki Hi no Nanami
Source: 神様はじめました
Tags: Marmowka kamisama hajimemashita momozono kotodama syuu 桃園奈々生 神様はじめました◎音霊集◎
BPM: 95
Filesize: 4753kb
Play Time: 01:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beginner (1,65 stars, 89 notes)
  2. Challenging (2,32 stars, 132 notes)
  3. Marmo's Advanced (1,98 stars, 95 notes)
Download: Masuda Toshio - Osanaki Hi no Nanami
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thank you, dear fergas, for amazing hitsounds ~
Battle

[Easy]
Isn't a SV of 1.4 on an Easy not something you see much?
00:03:994 (6) - Slider looks jagged
00:09:047 (6) - ^ try to make these look smoother
00:17:573 (1) - Remove NC
00:22:942 (4) - NC
00:27:994 (4) - NC
00:28:310 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:047 (4) - NC
NCs are kinda just what I think would look better (I'm not very good at modding Easy so)

[Hard]
00:03:994 (4) - ^
00:11:257 (2) - The point where you made the red thing makes it look a lot edgier than I think it should look
00:14:099 (4) - Smooooth
00:17:573 (1) - imo you should remove the NC here and put it on 00:19:468 (2) - instead
I think the slider could look smoother

Overall, I kinda think that the more "calming mood" is interrupted by the really long sliders that kinda just appear out of nowhere every once in a while.

Hope this helps~ It probably didn't
XiMerx
Hello ZLOdeuka-.
Use 増田 俊郎 as the artist, and the Masuda Toshio as romanised artist.
And where did you get these information from????
Add this to tags: 神様はじめました

[Hard]
00:34:310 (3) - The red anchor should be on a straight line http://puu.sh/igJsp/988f4b2d84.jpg
00:38:731 (3) - Bring third slider point to 272,152 to perfect blanket with 00:38:415 (2)

[Easy]
00:20:731 - You need to emphasise on this strong instrument. I would suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/igJHh/d74c61f65c.jpg
00:22:942 (4) - ^

very nice map. no kudosu lol
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

XiMerx wrote:

Hello ZLOdeuka-.
Use 増田 俊郎 as the artist, and the Masuda Toshio as romanised artist.
And where did you get these information from????
Add this to tags: 神様はじめました

I took them from an untrusted source.So thank you for your help! I needed it

[Hard]
00:34:310 (3) - The red anchor should be on a straight line http://puu.sh/igJsp/988f4b2d84.jpg
00:38:731 (3) - Bring third slider point to 272,152 to perfect blanket with 00:38:415 (2)

[Easy]
00:20:731 - You need to emphasise on this strong instrument. I would suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/igJHh/d74c61f65c.jpg
00:22:942 (4) - ^

very nice map. no kudosu lol
but you deserve kd!

Thank you ^)
DeletedUser_3821342
Easy
00:05:257(6) -The 6 slider should end here
00:05:573(1) -Delete the 1 & then add a repeat slider here like the 2
00:10:310(6,1) -Same as above 2 ^
00:28:310(1) -I think this would be better as a repeat slider

Hard
00:01:468(3) -The 3 should end here then add a note at 00:01:784 This just gives the player more stuff to click
00:05:257(4) -Similar to above ^
00:06:521(2) -^
00:10:310(4) -^
00:22:626(4) -^
00:25:468(3) -^
00:29:889(3) -^
01:10:942(3) -^
nazzinoz
My mod from m4m pm:
[Easy]
  1. 00:03:047 (3,4,5,6) - This look quite hard for a start of an easy map. May be make 00:03:047 (3,4) - as a slider?
  2. 00:17:573 (1) - Slider speed change suddenly. It's a trap which can make players feel uncomfortable, not only for an easy map, but for hard... I don't think slider speed change should be use in easy/normal maps, and if you like it, try 0.75. It makes 2/1 slider look different from 1/1 x1.00 sliders (Another suggestion is make 00:16:626 (2) - to be in 0.75x slider speed and keep the 00:17:573 (1) - in 0.5x)
  3. 00:20:731 - The sound here is quite loud, as it's in a big tick. I don't think it should be the end of a revert slider. Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3232403
  4. 00:28:626 - The sound here is clearly, may be you should make a fold? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3232455
  5. 01:14:415 (1,1,1,1) - This is a BPM changing section. I don't think you should use 1/16 beat snap divisor. Please ask someone who is really good at finding multi BPM. This is my suggestion but it may be bad, cuz I am not good at finding multi BPM :( : http://puu.sh/iijUb.png
[Hard]
  1. 95 BPM, 2.32* => AR 6-7, OD 6-7. I think AR 7 and OD 6.5 is the best. Especially the AR 8 make the map so empty, need to be reduced
  2. 00:16:626 (2) - Make it a 0.75x slider speed
  3. 00:24:205 (3) - Boring slider... :o May be this is better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3232696
  4. 00:28:310 (1) - Make the combo start at 00:27:994 (3) - instead
  5. 00:49:468 (4) - Move the start point of the slider to x:420 y:256 and keep the others
  6. 01:14:731 (1,1,1,1) - BPM change
[Normal]
Look like you are not done mapping this diff yet, but I think I should have some suggestion here:
In general, I think slider speed changing in normal and easy maps is annoying. From 00:40:942 (50) - , I think it's overmapped, too hard for a normal map
  1. 00:23:257 (31) - Fix this slider length
  2. 00:30:205 (37) - Move to x:128 y:276
  3. 00:38:731 (48) - Do Ctrl + G, then change the position of 00:39:678 (49) -
That's all my modding. Hope this helps
Good luck ^^
YellowManul
привет

Easy

00:08:099 (3,4,5,6) - сложновато для изи, лучше бы так сделать - http://puu.sh/in6Rj/0f4890517e.jpg
00:13:152 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:21:678 (2,3) - сделай слайдер о3о
00:43:468 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:48:521 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:54:205 (5,6) - ^ (вообще очень часто встречается, хотя бы из двух сделай слайдер о3о)
01:14:415 (1,1,1,1) - почему тут нк? о3о


Normal
00:05:573 (5) - нк? ох я понял.
00:20:099 (27,28) - сделай слайдер тут
00:24:205 (32) - удали ноту и поставь слайдер от белого до красного - http://puu.sh/in72W/09aa554f66.jpg
00:30:205 (37,38) - можно бланкет сделать
00:40:942 (50) - удали второй слайдер и скопируй туда первый, получше будет оуо


Hard
perfect sry
rank
01:14:731 (1,1,1,1) - кроме нк этих блин







nyan
GiantZarz
M4M queue

[General]
Marmo's Normal volume feels too low, at least it must be at 25%

[Easy]

00:13:152 (3,4,5,6) - Patterns like this are not for beginners, Since they click slowly I recommend you to use 1/2 slider for all of patterns like this instead.
00:17:573 (1) - Use other shape due to speed change some beginners think it's the same speed as 00:15:678 (1,2)
00:30:836 (1,2,3,4) - Feel like this has too much space and beginners don't have much aim
01:01:152 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^

[Marmo's Normal]

WIP no mod.

[Hard]

00:44:415 (4,5) - Doesn't fit. Try extend (4) to replace (5)
00:49:468 (4,5) - ^
00:54:521 (4,5) - Extend (4) to 00:55:152

Good luck! o3o :)
riffy
Yo, did a little IRC check.

Changes:
  1. Pointed a few unrankable issues
  2. General rhythm fixes
  3. Diff settings changes
IRC log (Russian)
22:44 -Bakari-: E/H сеты неранкабильны. 
22:45 ZLOdeuka-: беззвучные?
22:45 -Bakari-: Easy>Hard
22:46 -Bakari-: ренеймни в Simple/Advanced
22:46 -Bakari-: Relaxing/Challenging
22:46 ZLOdeuka-: а
22:46 -Bakari-: Что угодно
22:46 ZLOdeuka-: хорошо
22:46 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/ioIeN.png
22:47 ZLOdeuka-: о, я расчитывала на спиннеры ._.'
22:47 ZLOdeuka-: удалила
22:50 -Bakari-: soft-hitnormal.wav очень тихий
22:51 -Bakari-: Если ставишь на 25% громкость то вообще не слышно
22:51 -Bakari-: Это тоже неранкабильно, лол
22:51 ZLOdeuka-: ну, я догадывалась
22:52 ZLOdeuka-: удалила.
22:52 -Bakari-: по СБ можно юзать файлы до 1366х768
22:52 -Bakari-: Для лучшего качества фоновой картинки
22:52 -Bakari-: Особенно если ты ее растягиваешь
22:52 -Bakari-: А можно и не юзать, да
22:53 ZLOdeuka-: ок
22:54 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/713881 Masuda Toshio - Nana Students of Infant Day [Easy]]
22:54 ZLOdeuka-: ок
22:54 -Bakari-: 00:03:994 (6,1) -
22:54 -Bakari-: что-то типа http://puu.sh/ioILL.jpg
22:54 -Bakari-: или http://puu.sh/ioINd.jpg
22:55 -Bakari-: Не стоит оставлять основные биты невыделенными
22:55 -Bakari-: На белых тиках стоят основные удары в музыке, а ты не даешь новичкам их прожать и почувствовать
22:55 -Bakari-: 00:09:047 (6,1) - угу
22:56 ZLOdeuka-: тогда теряется нотка же на красном тике
22:56 -Bakari-: 00:17:573 (1) - новички только привыкают к осу, избегай замедлений, когда есть возможность
22:56 -Bakari-: В самой легкой дифе можно опускать слабые ноты же
22:57 -Bakari-: 00:23:257 - я понимаю, что слайдер тут работает нормально
22:57 ZLOdeuka-: хорошо
22:57 -Bakari-: но опять игнорится удар, чуть ли не самый сильный за весь трек
22:57 -Bakari-: если это изи, то ОД лучше снижать
22:58 -Bakari-: Да вообще сбей ОД
22:58 -Bakari-: С таким ритмом это вполне покатит
22:58 -Bakari-: 01:14:415 (1,1,1,1) - чекни там тайминг с кем-нибудь потом, ладно?
22:58 ZLOdeuka-: ок
22:59 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/713859 Masuda Toshio - Nana Students of Infant Day [Hard]]
22:59 -Bakari-: 00:03:994 (4,1) - аналогично
22:59 -Bakari-: 00:09:047 (4,1) -
23:00 -Bakari-: Да не нужен тут АР8 :o
23:01 -Bakari-: И еще, СБ куда-то улетел далеко
23:01 ZLOdeuka-: 7?
23:01 -Bakari-: Ага
23:01 ZLOdeuka-: это в редакторе он улетел
23:01 ZLOdeuka-: в игре норм
23:01 ZLOdeuka-: или ты про что?
23:01 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/ioJfJ.png
23:01 -Bakari-: 00:40:316 -
23:02 ZLOdeuka-: всё из-за кружочков
23:03 -Bakari-: Не оптимизировать?
23:03 ZLOdeuka-: я исправлю
23:03 ZLOdeuka-: удалю несколько
23:03 ZLOdeuka-: они мне кажутся лишними
23:03 -Bakari-: На моды все-таки стоит отвечать :c
23:04 -Bakari-: А так вроде все
23:04 -Bakari-: Метадату не чекал

Should be fine if you fix the stuff we've discussed.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, did a little IRC check.

Changes:
  1. Pointed a few unrankable issues
  2. General rhythm fixes
  3. Diff settings changes
IRC log (Russian)
22:44 -Bakari-: E/H сеты неранкабильны. 
22:45 ZLOdeuka-: беззвучные?
22:45 -Bakari-: Easy>Hard
22:46 -Bakari-: ренеймни в Simple/Advanced
22:46 -Bakari-: Relaxing/Challenging
22:46 ZLOdeuka-: а
22:46 -Bakari-: Что угодно
22:46 ZLOdeuka-: хорошо
22:46 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/ioIeN.png
22:47 ZLOdeuka-: о, я расчитывала на спиннеры ._.'
22:47 ZLOdeuka-: удалила
22:50 -Bakari-: soft-hitnormal.wav очень тихий
22:51 -Bakari-: Если ставишь на 25% громкость то вообще не слышно
22:51 -Bakari-: Это тоже неранкабильно, лол
22:51 ZLOdeuka-: ну, я догадывалась
22:52 ZLOdeuka-: удалила.
22:52 -Bakari-: по СБ можно юзать файлы до 1366х768
22:52 -Bakari-: Для лучшего качества фоновой картинки
22:52 -Bakari-: Особенно если ты ее растягиваешь
22:52 -Bakari-: А можно и не юзать, да
22:53 ZLOdeuka-: ок
22:54 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/713881 Masuda Toshio - Nana Students of Infant Day [Easy]]
22:54 ZLOdeuka-: ок
22:54 -Bakari-: 00:03:994 (6,1) -
22:54 -Bakari-: что-то типа http://puu.sh/ioILL.jpg
22:54 -Bakari-: или http://puu.sh/ioINd.jpg
22:55 -Bakari-: Не стоит оставлять основные биты невыделенными
22:55 -Bakari-: На белых тиках стоят основные удары в музыке, а ты не даешь новичкам их прожать и почувствовать
22:55 -Bakari-: 00:09:047 (6,1) - угу
22:56 ZLOdeuka-: тогда теряется нотка же на красном тике
22:56 -Bakari-: 00:17:573 (1) - новички только привыкают к осу, избегай замедлений, когда есть возможность
22:56 -Bakari-: В самой легкой дифе можно опускать слабые ноты же
22:57 -Bakari-: 00:23:257 - я понимаю, что слайдер тут работает нормально
22:57 ZLOdeuka-: хорошо
22:57 -Bakari-: но опять игнорится удар, чуть ли не самый сильный за весь трек
22:57 -Bakari-: если это изи, то ОД лучше снижать
22:58 -Bakari-: Да вообще сбей ОД
22:58 -Bakari-: С таким ритмом это вполне покатит
22:58 -Bakari-: 01:14:415 (1,1,1,1) - чекни там тайминг с кем-нибудь потом, ладно?
22:58 ZLOdeuka-: ок
22:59 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/713859 Masuda Toshio - Nana Students of Infant Day [Hard]]
22:59 -Bakari-: 00:03:994 (4,1) - аналогично
22:59 -Bakari-: 00:09:047 (4,1) -
23:00 -Bakari-: Да не нужен тут АР8 :o
23:01 -Bakari-: И еще, СБ куда-то улетел далеко
23:01 ZLOdeuka-: 7?
23:01 -Bakari-: Ага
23:01 ZLOdeuka-: это в редакторе он улетел
23:01 ZLOdeuka-: в игре норм
23:01 ZLOdeuka-: или ты про что?
23:01 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/ioJfJ.png
23:01 -Bakari-: 00:40:316 -
23:02 ZLOdeuka-: всё из-за кружочков
23:03 -Bakari-: Не оптимизировать?
23:03 ZLOdeuka-: я исправлю
23:03 ZLOdeuka-: удалю несколько
23:03 ZLOdeuka-: они мне кажутся лишними
23:03 -Bakari-: На моды все-таки стоит отвечать :c
23:04 -Bakari-: А так вроде все
23:04 -Bakari-: Метадату не чекал

Should be fine if you fix the stuff we've discussed.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!
fixed o/ thank you!
Kobold84
В общем:
− Могут придраться к чисто белым комбо. я бы поменял на более тёмные (или убрал бы вообще?).
− Я бы добился того, чтобы разница в характеристиках первой и второй сложности была поменьше, а то переход от од2 и хп2 к од7 и хп7 — немного странно.

Чалленжинг:
00:02:099 (4) - мне кажется, лишняя нота, не слышу звука для неё.
00:12:205 (3) - тоже лишней кажется.
00:28:310 (1,2) - вместо этого лучше подойдёт реверс-слайдер, как по мне.
00:39:678 (1) - нужно ли тут новое комбо?
00:55:468 (6,7) - может, заменить на слайдер?
01:14:731 (1,1,1) - вот в этих местах я бы сделал постепенно уменьшение спейсинга, так как музыка затихает.

Релаксинг:
00:03:994 (6,1) - как-то плохо играется этот момент, может пододвинуть слайдер короткий чуть правее?
00:17:573 (1,1) - чересчур резковат переход св в этом моменте, мне кажется, особенно для карты такой сложности.
01:14:099 - здесь, мне кажется, ноты не хватает.
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Kobold84 wrote:

В общем:
− Могут придраться к чисто белым комбо. я бы поменял на более тёмные (или убрал бы вообще?).
− Я бы добился того, чтобы разница в характеристиках первой и второй сложности была поменьше, а то переход от од2 и хп2 к од7 и хп7 — немного странно.

Чалленжинг:
00:02:099 (4) - мне кажется, лишняя нота, не слышу звука для неё.
00:12:205 (3) - тоже лишней кажется.
00:28:310 (1,2) - вместо этого лучше подойдёт реверс-слайдер, как по мне.
00:39:678 (1) - нужно ли тут новое комбо?
00:55:468 (6,7) - может, заменить на слайдер?
01:14:731 (1,1,1) - вот в этих местах я бы сделал постепенно уменьшение спейсинга, так как музыка затихает.

Релаксинг:
00:03:994 (6,1) - как-то плохо играется этот момент, может пододвинуть слайдер короткий чуть правее?
00:17:573 (1,1) - чересчур резковат переход св в этом моменте, мне кажется, особенно для карты такой сложности.
01:14:099 - здесь, мне кажется, ноты не хватает.
спасибо! подправила некоторые моменты о/
Kodora
[Relaxing]

01:15:078 (1,1) - здесь нужен клап на начале каждого слайдера
00:17:573 (3) - закончи слайдер тут и зеленую секцию отсюда 00:18:836 передвинь сюда 00:18:836
01:14:415 (1,1,1,1) - спейсинг. Подправь по 1.2
00:03:994 (6) - на начало слайдера поставь финиш. С низким колоколом звучит, но только вместе с финишем
00:09:047 (6) - то же самое, на начало слайдера финиш.
00:14:099 (6) - ^
00:20:731 (1) - клап
00:23:257 (4) - ^
00:25:784 (1) - ^
00:28:310 (1) - ^
00:30:836 (1) - ^
00:33:363 (5) - ^
00:40:942 (1) - ^
00:45:994 (1) - ^
00:51:047 (1) - ^
00:53:573 (1) - ^
01:08:731 (1) - ^

[Challenging]

точно в тех же местах и те же самые хс нужно расставить как в Relaxing
00:15:047 - уменьши звук на конце этого слайдера на 15%
RuberusuScarlet
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metadate source : http://bridge.shop-pro.jp/?pid=87533330 and http://mikagesha.com/index.html

Artist : 増田 俊郎 :arrow: 増田俊郎
  • (delete space 増田 to 俊郎)
Romanised Artist : ok
Title : ok
Romanised Title : Nana Students of Infant Day :arrow: Osanaki Hi no Nanami
  • 奈々生=ななみ(Nanami)
source : 神様はじめました
tag change : 神様はじめました :arrow: kamisama hajimemashita
tag add : 桃園奈々生 momozono 神様はじめました◎音霊集◎ kotodama syuu
  • 桃園奈々生(Momozono Nanami)=Hero of the story
    神様はじめました◎音霊集◎(kamisama hajimemashita ◎kotodama syuu◎) :arrow: album name
good luck
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

metadate check request from osu!chat

metadate source : http://bridge.shop-pro.jp/?pid=87533330 and http://mikagesha.com/index.html

Artist : 増田 俊郎 :arrow: 増田俊郎
  • (delete space 増田 to 俊郎)
Romanised Artist : ok
Title : ok
Romanised Title : Nana Students of Infant Day :arrow: Osanaki Hi no Nanami
  • 奈々生=ななみ(Nanami)
source : 神様はじめました
tag change : 神様はじめました :arrow: kamisama hajimemashita
tag add : 桃園奈々生 momozono 神様はじめました◎音霊集◎ kotodama syuu
  • 桃園奈々生(Momozono Nanami)=Hero of the story
    神様はじめました◎音霊集◎(kamisama hajimemashita ◎kotodama syuu◎) :arrow: album name
good luck
Thank you! :)
Marmowka
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[General]
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TitleUnicode:幼き日の奈々生
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ArtistUnicode:増田俊郎
Creator:ZLOdeuka-
Version:Marmo's Advanced
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Marmowka
Какая же хорошая мелодия ^^
Reip
Вот небольшой мод , как и обещала:

Marmo's Advanced

00:33:035 (4) - убрать нк
00:33:351 (1) - нк
01:03:666 (3) - не ровный какой то
01:05:561 (4) - убрать нк
01:06:193 (1) - нк
01:16:624 (1) - удали спинер , и поставь слайдер до красного тика

Остальные две диффы нормальные , все в порядке.
Rmdy_old
Привет.

Marmo's Advanced

00:14:087 (3) - Немного странно выглядит слайдер
00:20:719 (1) - Здесь можно хитсаунды снова убавить (или где-нибудь рядом, например пока идет слайдер)
00:35:877 (1,2,3,4,5) - А тут можно снова увеличивать громкость перед киаем
Под конец можно потихоньку поубавлять звук, к концу спиннера придя к 5, что бы спиннер почти не слышать
бтв, может было бы круто увеличивать громкость на каждый большой белый тик, когда звучит колокольчик

Надеюсь мод поможет ^^
Песня звучит прекрасно
Ayana Hana
Хэй~ ヽ(*・ω・)ノ

Marmo's Advanced

00:03:982 (4) - http://puu.sh/irqN8/94f9959eae.jpg.
00:14:087 (3) - x124 y48 и из за этого 00:13:772 (2) - x112 y136.
00:42:193 (2) - Он стоит не идеально горизонтально http://puu.sh/irrqL/92276ee131.jpg, так что скопируй, вставь на 00:42:193, ctrl+h, ctrl+g.
01:03:035 (2) - x256 y40.
01:03:666 (3) - ^ прямо под ним, x176 y224.

Удачи (o´▽`o)
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-
Спасибо ребята! Ждем Мармо :3
Marmowka
ААА боже, спасибо вам ребятки :*

Marmo's Advanced
osu file format v14

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Title:Osanaki Hi no Nanami
TitleUnicode:幼き日の奈々生
Artist:Masuda Toshio
ArtistUnicode:еў—з”°дїЉйѓЋ
Creator:ZLOdeuka-
Version:Marmo's Advanced
Source:神ж§гЃЇгЃг‚ЃгЃѕгЃ—гЃџ
Tags:marmowka kamisama hajimemashita momozono kotodama syuu 桃園奈々生 神ж§гЃЇгЃг‚ЃгЃѕгЃ—た◎音霊集◎
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Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-
Done!
Kodora
Looks good~
MirinH
From ingame req(oh its bubbled now? so fast 0.0
[General]
  1. change audio lead in to 1491 which change ur map to total 2000ms audio lead in
  2. soft-hitfinish.wav have about 50% is blank audio, plz cut that out for having smaller map size
[Beginner]
  1. 00:11:245 (1) - the note is touching the hp bar, recommended to move it a bit down
  2. 00:20:719 - the beat in bgm here is a start of a new section, also its a very important note because of that. I think you should use a hitable object(ex:circle or the head of a slider) to show the music more, not to put this on the reverse of the slider which cant really shows music
  3. 01:16:624 (1) - suggest to end at 01:16:999 because there is where really have beats in the bgm, same for all diffs include challenging
[Marmo's Advanced]
  1. 00:15:666 (1,3) - y dont u just stack it lol... it just looks so wrong imo
  2. 01:16:624 (1) - same as beginner diff, plz change the end of the slider located
call me back
Marmowka
Alex Li mod

Alex Li wrote:

From ingame req(oh its bubbled now? so fast 0.0
[General]
  1. change audio lead in to 1491 which change ur map to total 2000ms audio lead in
  2. soft-hitfinish.wav have about 50% is blank audio, plz cut that out for having smaller map size
[Beginner]
  1. 00:11:245 (1) - the note is touching the hp bar, recommended to move it a bit down
  2. 00:20:719 - the beat in bgm here is a start of a new section, also its a very important note because of that. I think you should use a hitable object(ex:circle or the head of a slider) to show the music more, not to put this on the reverse of the slider which cant really shows music
  3. 01:16:624 (1) - suggest to end at 01:16:999 because there is where really have beats in the bgm, same for all diffs include challenging
[Marmo's Advanced]
  1. 00:15:666 (1,3) - y dont u just stack it lol... it just looks so wrong imo
  2. 01:16:624 (1) - same as beginner diff, plz change the end of the slider located
call me back

/// Я исправил свою диффу, принимай, сб на последней ноте сама исправишь. /// I fixed all. ///

Diff
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Masuda Toshio - .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 40930
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15678,35889,41573,56099,67468,77020
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Osanaki Hi no Nanami
TitleUnicode:幼き日の奈々生
Artist:Masuda Toshio
ArtistUnicode:増田俊郎
Creator:ZLOdeuka-
Version:Marmo's Advanced
Source:神様はじめました
Tags:Marmowka kamisama hajimemashita momozono kotodama syuu 桃園奈々生 神様はじめました◎音霊集◎
BeatmapID:720363
BeatmapSetID:320856

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"sb/1.jpg",320,240
S,0,35889,,1.104727
F,0,35889,39678,0,1
M,0,38573,,318,240
F,0,39678,40942,1
F,0,40942,43468,1,0
F,0,43468,71099,0
F,0,71099,71257,0
F,0,71257,76626,0
F,0,76626,77020,0,0.3694545
F,0,77020,81363,0.3694545,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/cr2.png",320,240
F,0,35719,35877,0,1
S,0,35719,35877,0.215484
M,0,35877,,382,227
F,0,35877,40930,1,0
S,0,35877,40930,0.215484,0.7605163
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/cr3.png",320,240
F,0,36666,36824,0,1
S,0,36666,36824,0.2072257
M,0,36824,,325,366
F,0,36824,40930,1,0
S,0,36824,40930,0.2072257,0.7357419
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/cr4.png",320,240
M,0,37614,,125,301
F,0,37614,37772,0,1
S,0,37614,37772,0.215484
F,0,37772,40930,1,0
S,0,37772,40930,0.215484,0.5953549
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/cr1.png",320,240
S,0,76874,77032,0.232
F,0,76874,77124,0,1
M,0,77032,,322,70
S,0,77032,78374,0.232,0.4301937
F,0,77124,78374,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/cr1.png",320,240
F,0,351,509,0,1
S,0,351,509,0.232
M,0,509,,142,240
F,0,509,1140,1,0
S,0,509,1140,0.232,0.4301937
F,0,1140,1772,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/cr5.png",320,240
M,0,38561,,201,333
F,0,38561,38719,0,1
S,0,38561,38719,0.2154837
F,0,38719,40930,1,0
S,0,38719,40930,0.2154837,0.504516
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/cr1.png",320,240
F,0,39509,39666,0,1
M,0,39666,,342,214
F,0,39666,40930,1,0
S,0,39666,40930,0.2237419,0.6036128
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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18824,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
19140,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
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19772,-100,4,2,1,19,0,0
20087,-100,4,2,1,22,0,0
20403,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
20719,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
21351,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
40930,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,1
71245,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
74403,666.666666666667,4,2,1,35,1,0
75069,705.882352941176,4,2,1,35,1,0
75421,750,4,2,1,35,1,0
75796,800,4,2,1,35,1,0
76196,857.142857142857,4,2,1,35,1,0
76624,1000,4,2,1,35,1,0
76999,1000,4,2,1,25,1,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 196,255,196
Combo2 : 255,176,176
Combo3 : 187,233,253
Combo4 : 192,192,192
Combo5 : 255,209,72
Combo6 : 211,169,169

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Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Alex Li wrote:

From ingame req(oh its bubbled now? so fast 0.0
[notice][General]
  1. change audio lead in to 1491 which change ur map to total 2000ms audio lead in I think this is the best time.2000 is too long
  2. soft-hitfinish.wav have about 50% is blank audio, plz cut that out for having smaller map size it uses 100%.listen there playing bell о.о and if I make it shorter. map will be the less to 20-50 bytes
[Beginner]
  1. 00:11:245 (1) - the note is touching the hp bar, recommended to move it a bit down fixed
  2. 00:20:719 - the beat in bgm here is a start of a new section, also its a very important note because of that. I think you should use a hitable object(ex:circle or the head of a slider) to show the music more, not to put this on the reverse of the slider which cant really shows music not fixed
  3. 01:16:624 (1) - suggest to end at 01:16:999 because there is where really have beats in the bgm, same for all diffs include challenging
fixed
call me back
thank you !
MirinH
looks fine
good luck
Topic Starter
ZLOdeuka-

Alex Li wrote:

looks fine
good luck
wow, thank you ~
nazzinoz
Congratz :D
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