1. Easy (1.02 stars, 91 notes)
2. Hard (2.19 stars, 222 notes)
3. Insane (-1 stars, 337 notes)
4. Normal (1.15 stars, 133 notes)

pinataman wrote:

Hi! I found this map somehow and love the song. This will be my first mod, so sorry if it's not that good XD. Also I can't really mod easy or normal, but they looked fine (though they seem so similar in difficulty).

General:
Started abruptly(esp. in Insane). Consider giving more time to lead it in.

Insane:
00:01:630 (2,3) - move in line with the following slider (y=90) (fixed)
00:04:533 (4) – move in line with the previous notes (x=40) (I prefer to keep it like before)
00:28:404 (3,4,5,6) – move in line with the following slider (y=140) (on purpose)

00:33:727 (1,2,3,4) - was expecting a stream here the first time I played it. Don't know why, might have been because of the jump. It's fine though. (on purpose :p )

01:05:662 (4,5,1,2) – looked a little off. I liked moving the first note to x=434 (fixed)

01:10:179 (1,2) – Could not read at all. This pattern was fine before (even if it was a little confusing), but here the slider is hidden, so I read it going the other way. (I picked up on it eventually, but its still preferred to change it) (fixed)
01:11:469 (1,2) – Couldn't read probably because of the one before it. This kind of stacking of notes is probably gonna get you a lot of flack. I recommend keeping the stuff before, but finding a different pattern to use after 1:10. (fixed, but only changing the color so it didn't confusing)

01:16:146 (1,2,3) – spacing is problematic. I suggest either make the spacing .5 or make it a stack (on purpose)

01:19:856 (1,2) - ^^^ (fixed)

The map is really impressive overall. I had a lot of fun with it, and would love to see this get ranked. It's just hard to read towards the end.

wendao2000 wrote:

Hello~ sorry late & maaf kalo lebih fokus ke diff Insane :/

[General]

1. Inconsistency Hitsound better fix it all
2. Disable Countdown, bugged, soalnya intro diff ga ada
3. Disable Letterbox during breaks, soalnya ga ada break

[Easy]

• 
  kebanyakan note untuk sebuah diff EZ

1. 00:10:985 (1,2) - wow, kok dari 0.8x DS jadi 1.2x? | pindahin (1) ke 292,232 *fixed
2. 00:53:566 (3,4,5,6) - gw lebih prefer kayak gini *fixed

[Normal]

• 
  overall sudah bagus *thanks

[Hard]

• 
  nah, ini diff paling "well mapped" diantara diff yang lain

1. 01:23:243 (3,5) - dua note ini kasih New Combo, konsistensi sama 01:02:598 (1,1) - *fixed

[Insane]

• 
  stack everywhere huh

1. 00:01:953 (3) - Stack sama ekor slider 00:01:146 (2) *fixed
2. 00:03:082 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ganti irama nya kayak gini? *fixed
3. 00:04:372 (3,4,5) - stack *nope, enakan yg awal
4. 00:06:792 (4) - gimana kalo dipindahin kayak gini? *fixed
5. 00:07:759 (4) - end slidernya kasih Soft Sampleset, soalnya masih kedengeran "dg" kalo pake Normal Sampleset *fixed
6. 00:18:727 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - sumpah, ini flow nya ga karuan, menurut gw *fixed
7. 00:30:985 (2,3,1) - ^^ *fixed
8. 00:40:824 (1,2,1,2) - ^^ *bagi gw ngga tuh
9. 00:44:695 (1) - dibikin simetri sama (3)? *fixed
10. 00:47:275 (2,3,4) - same case as 00:18:727 *nah, it's fine
11. 00:47:759 (4,1) - jump ga karuan, slider (1) tiba-tiba ga ngikutin vocal *aku rasa gpp sih
12. 00:57:921 (2,3) - stack yang ini, kesannya jauh berbeda dengan 00:50:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) | lebih baik pindahin 00:57:921 (2) - ke 292,280 *fixed
13. 00:58:082 (3,4) - ^ | also, NC at (4), konsisten dengan yang sebelumnya *fixed
14. 01:01:308 (6) - New Combo, coz' ganti multiplier disini... orz *fixed
15. 01:03:888 (3) - kenapa ga di stack aja sama note sebelumnya? *fixed
16. 01:05:985 (5) - gw bingung napa mesti jadi 1/8 disini, samain kayak slider belakangnya aja, 1/4, tentu saja dengan multiplier 0.5x *fixed
17. 01:14:211 (1,2,3,4) - jumpnya kok motong gitu dari (1,2) terus (3,4) ?? *fixed
18. 01:21:953 (6) - same case as 01:01:308 *fixed
19. 01:26:308 (1,2,3,4) - disini udah bagus, cuman jarak antara 01:26:792 (4,5) - yang bikin flownya jelek, try to improve it a bit *iya juga sih, but I'll fix it later

btw, Easy < Normal < ~~ < Hard < Insane
jarak diff antara Normal sama Hard jauh, banget... orz

good luck

THANKS FOR YOUR TIME TO MODDING THIS MAP

neonat wrote:

Normal

00:00:663 (1,2,3) - finishes on all the starts of the slider
00:04:533 (1) - finish
00:05:501 (3) - finish on end of slider
00:13:566 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:18:404 (2) - finish on both ends of slider
00:21:308 (2) - finish on end of slider
00:22:598 (1) - ^
00:28:404 (4) - ^
00:29:050 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:31:792 (2,3) - change both of them to 1/1 beat repeat sliders

SPOILER

00:50:985 (3) - finish on start of slider
00:56:146 (3) - ^
01:01:308 (1) - ^
01:06:308 (3) - ^
01:10:662 (4,1) - don't let them touch each other
01:15:179 (2) - finish on end of slider
01:16:146 (3) - ^
01:21:953 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:24:533 (2) - finish on end of slider

Implement the finishes on all difficulties, basically where the cymbals are in the music

Hard

00:05:824 (1) - ending with the vocals 00:06:308 would be better
00:07:114 (3) - ^
00:18:404 (5,1) - finish on start of sliders
00:52:921 (1,2,3,4,1) - don't have the anti-jump underneath 00:52:275 (5) - this can confuse and wouldn't play well

Insane

00:04:533 (5) - end it with the vocals at 00:04:775
00:05:421 (4) - shift to 00:05:501 where the vocals are
00:07:114 (1) - end at 00:07:356
00:31:308 (3) - slider end at 00:31:469 and have another note at 00:31:630 to emphasize on the music
00:31:792 (1) - there's an important beat at 00:32:275
00:38:969 - drum beat, add a note?
00:45:017 (3) - change to a slider ending at 00:45:179 to hold on to the note with the vocals
00:52:114 (5,6) - if 00:52:114 (5) was where 00:52:275 (6) starts and vice versa, the flow would be better. even so, I'm not sure how readable 00:50:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) is to others, it might not be a good idea actually. Or differentiate them to different combos like 01:12:114 (2,1)
01:04:856 (1,2,3) - don't slow down here with anti-jump. I suggest normal spacing or jumps
01:25:662 - heavy beat here but 01:25:501 (1) goes over it, make 1/2 beat repeat slider or something
01:27:114 (6) - change to 1 circle at 01:27:114

Good luck

• 1. Source should be "ガンダムビルドファイターズ"
  2. Add tags like "op" "Gundam Build Fighters"
  3. Disable "widescreen support"?
  4. Shouldn't the preview point be snapped? (ai mod; it conflicts with insane)
  5. I'd change HP on normal, hard and insane (4,5,6)
  
  Easy
  
  
  • 1. 00:00:663 (1) - make it symmetrical and copy paste + 90° rotation here> 00:04:533 (2) -
    2. 00:16:146 (1,2) - Maybe more symmetrical http://puu.sh/9CLzs/28d39a6dfc.jpg (so 00:17:437 (2) - slidertail connect with 00:13:566 (1) - sliderhead)
    3. 00:21:953 (4) - make it like this? http://puu.sh/9CLYu/9e609d1812.jpg so it fits with others sliders, and make it overlap with 00:18:727 (1) - tail and 00:23:888 (1) - head as you did
    4. 00:27:114 (4) - same height as 00:23:888 (1) - head and 00:25:179 (2) - tail ?
    5. 00:27:759 (5) - this is not perfectly allign with 00:29:050 (1) - head
    6. 00:29:050 (1,2,3,1) - improve blankets
    7. 00:36:469 (4) - next object is at 1.10x, fix it
    8. 00:40:662 (2) - next object is at 1.15x, fix it
    9. 00:42:598 (4) - overlap with 00:40:662 (2) - and fix 00:41:308 (3) - ?
    10. 00:50:340 (3,4,5,6) - make it a perfect square
    11. 00:55:824 (4) - overlap it with 00:53:243 (2) -
    12. 00:56:792 (1) - previous object 1.59x? fix it; and make these 00:55:824 (4,5,1) - symmetrical straight, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1736271 although, i'd prefer to change the places a bit, it's up to you
    13. 00:57:437 (2,3,1,2) - if you're goint to make a square, make it perfectly
    14. 01:01:308 (2,1) - improve blanket?
    15. 01:05:824 (2) - make it large to 01:06:469 ? it can be a bit hard for easy i guess and Put it at the same height of 01:03:888 (2) - tail
    16. 01:10:340 (1) - i dont like where it is, maybe complete the square and try to overlap with 01:12:275 (1) -
    17. 01:12:275 (1,3) - same Y ?
    18. 01:18:727 (5,1) - align them
    19. 01:23:243 (3) - a bit higher? x208 y52 maybe and overlap with 01:26:469 (2) - ; and finish square on 01:23:888 (1) -
    
    Normal
    
    
    • 1. I'd increasy SV since you used 0.7 on easy
      2. 00:00:663 (1,2,3) - why 1.12x ?>.< you're using 1.2 all over the map
      3. 00:04:533 (1,3) - same Y please
      4. 00:06:146 (4,2) - these doesn't overlap, fix it
      5. 00:11:630 (2,4) - these touch each other, maybe move 00:12:275 (3) - a bit up
      6. 00:16:146 (1,2,3,4) - improve this square, if that what you meant to do
      7. 00:19:050 (1) - i dont like this kind of repeating on normals, maybe 2 circles?
      8. 00:24:211 (2,2) - same y:(172)
      9. 00:28:404 (4) - >.<
      10. 00:31:630 (1,2) - is it possible? if you like this, try aligning 00:30:985 (4,1) -
      11. 00:31:792 (2,3,4) - im pretty sure that you have to use same spacing on normals
      12. 00:33:727 (4) - if you kept 00:31:630 (1,2) - try using this pattern http://puu.sh/9CSBC/2c63c2bb6a.jpg
      13. 00:41:953 (5,6,7) - align them better
      14. 00:50:662 (2,6) - same Y
      15. 01:02:275 (2) - improve blanket
      16. 01:10:662 (4,1,2,3,4) - improve alignment
      17. 01:14:211 (1,2) - improve blanket and try not to touch with 01:13:888 (4) -
      18. 01:21:953 (1) - you've used circle style for this pattern before, it's up to you change it
      19. 01:24:533 (2) - somehow it doesnt look nice
      
      Hard
      
      
      • 1. 00:01:630 (2,3) - improve blanket
        2. 00:08:404 (4,1) - i dont like that the spinner begin at that point, i'd remove 00:08:404 (4) - and move the spinner
        3. 00:15:501 (4) - move to (x289 y112) to make it perfectly overlap
        4. 00:18:404 (5) - (x288 y143) altrough i think there's a miss note at 00:18:243. Try it if you want http://puu.sh/9CUPa/0740158695.jpg
        5. From 00:34:533 (1) - i'd increase spacing to not overlap every note (until here 00:39:533 (1) - )
        6. 01:14:211 (1,2,3,4) - same^
        7. 00:36:953 (1,2) - change it to a slider?
        8. 00:38:082 (1) - just slider, no reapeting?
        9. 00:38:082 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - i'd change it to something like this http://puu.sh/9CVBH/9f1c488231.jpg
        10. 00:40:985 (1,2,3) - use the same spacing, so the blankets will be better
        11. 01:01:308 (1,2,1) - same^
        12. 00:43:404 (7) - i'd prefer this http://puu.sh/9CWgc/0b2fb8d66f.jpg
        13. 00:49:372 (1,2,3,4,5) - change it a bit so you can get a better fan
        14. 01:08:404 (3,2) - they almost touch each other try rotating 2 a bit
        15. 01:19:695 (3) - ctrl+g ?
        16. 01:21:953 (1,2) - blanket can be improve
        17. 01:14:050 (4) - next object is at 0.41x, should be at 0.3x , if you did it purposely, i'd move 01:13:888 (3) - at 0.4x too
        
        Insane
        
        
        • 1. 00:04:372 (1,2,3) - move it a bit down o make the slider curve, also why 00:04:533 (3) - ends in a blue ?
          2. 00:05:421 (1) - i hear a sound on the blue but i dont know.. maybe timing is bad or it's that way
          3. 00:10:824 (3,1) - align them
          4. 00:12:114 (5) - (x151 y156)
          5. 00:14:533 (1,1) - their tails doesnt overlap, they should i think-
          6. 00:18:566 add note?
          7. 00:26:146 (4) - (x399 y204)
          8. 00:31:630 (5,1) - it feels empy, add notes?
          9. 00:36:630 (2) - try this http://puu.sh/9CXVx/ac70cfa4ec.jpg
          10. 00:44:292 (7,8,9) - did you want to make this part curve?
          11. 01:27:114 (6) - i dont like this, i'd remove it and move the spinner, but its fine i guess. It's up to you
          
          I would rework many sliders, some look ugly or doesn't fit too much i think. any doubts tell me, my english isnt good. Also say what you changed please >.<
          
          Good luck with your map, was fun <3
          
          PD: i suck at this game