From my mod for voice queue!
I really should play Rewrite, I heard it was awesome.
Again, I'm pretty new to modding, so feel free to treat everything below as suggestions. For some things, I'd recommend asking a few other people about it before you actually implement it.
[General]
I would recheck timing...I get an abnormally large amount of 100s when playing your hard difficulty. You could lower the OD to 6 though, but I would still recheck timing.
[Hard]
Generally, vary up your patterns and beats. Try using more sliders sometimes. Also, try using distance snap more often.
Maybe decrease the slider ticks? There seems to be too many of them for a hard.
00:16:300 (2,3) - Align these so that the 2nd note falls in the middle of the 3rd slider, looks better imo
00:22:000 (1,2,3) - Check distance snap
00:28:000 (1,3) - Either try blanketing these two sliders, or move them apart so they don't overlap.
00:40:000 (1,8) - Around here, it would be kinda cool if you followed the piano part while mapping
00:56:800 (7) - Add New Combo
00:58:000 (1) - Remove NC
00:59:200 (3) - Add NC
01:04:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part and the same patterns after it are hard to read for a "hard" difficulty. Consider distance snapping this!
01:10:450 (4,1) - This jumps feels out of place
01:44:138 (1) to 02:18:257 (3) - For this entire section, the HP drain is too high. When people play with HR, they're going to die here. Consider either adding more objects, decreasing overall HP drain, or adding more new combos. You could consider following the vocals here rather than the bass to fix this problem.
You might want to ask some others before doing this.02:25:300 (6,7) - Try to align these with the previous pattern to look better
02:29:200 (7) - Add NC
03:45:400 (4) - Try to align that note with the previous pattern
03:49:000 (9) - Consider changing it like this:
http://puu.sh/6Xuv9.jpg04:19:300 (5,6,7,8) - Spacing is weird, use distance snap
Once again, vary up your patterns a bit! A lot of your hard are just continuous notes every white tick (01:51:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)) or every white and red tick (03:18:700 (10)). Use sliders some more wherever they fit the music - you don't always have to follow one music line (in this case, I think you're following the bass a lot. Try following the vocals more? Just a suggestion though,
you might want to ask some others before doing this.)
[Normal]
00:59:800 (2,1) - The lack of objects between these two notes is kind of awkward, consider mapping stuff there
01:14:200 (2,3) - Use distance snap here
01:20:800 (5) - Add NC
01:27:700 (6,1) - The lack of objects between these two notes is kind of awkward, consider mapping stuff there
02:03:154 (6) - Add NC
02:11:658 (1,2,1,2) - Consider changing these to sliders
03:30:100 (1) - Shorten this slider by one tick so that it's a 1/4 slider, and then repeat it for the same length as the original slider. I think it fits the rhythm better.
03:32:500 (3) - Add NC
03:42:100 (1,3) - Either put the 3rd note where the 1st slider ended, or move it so they don't overlap.
03:49:000 (5) - Same as the hard difficulty, apply a similar fix here.
By the way, I love the song from 3:01 to 4:11. Is there a specific name for the song that corresponds with this section, or is this all original? If there is an original, tell me! I wanna hear the original!
I hope this was helpful! Contact me later in game or somehow so we can determine what you're gonna sing
