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HelloSCV

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-08-02T07:49:52+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 8월 13일 화요일 at 오후 12:09:19

Artist: xi
Title: Parousia
Source: BMS
Tags: Cytus Chapter 4 The Silence BOF 2011 of Fighters happy623 Niva Flask -kevincela- kevincela Nivalis
BPM: 158
Filesize: 3983kb
Play Time: 02:05
Difficulties Available:

623's Beginner (2.22 stars, 127 notes)
Another (5 stars, 411 notes)
Flask's Standard (3.92 stars, 163 notes)
-kevincela-'s Another (5 stars, 382 notes)
Niva's Hyper (4.91 stars, 270 notes)

Download: xi - Parousia
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Niflheimr

beautiful song~
　

Beginner - happy623
Standard - Flask
Hyper - Niva
Another - HelloSCV and -kevincela-

Last edited by HelloSCV 2013-10-12T07:33:11+00:00, edited 30 times in total.

happy623

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Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-08-02T07:55:43+00:00

Flower

1,740 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2013-08-02T08:38:08+00:00

Poke me when you need my mod

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-08-02T08:57:01+00:00

oh ok~ thanks about it lol

woshiguabi

71 posts

Joined November 2012

woshiguabi 2013-08-02T11:17:23+00:00

PM me in osu plz if u need my mod
>///< im a new modder(maybe cannot called a modder)

- Miomio Chii -

440 posts

Joined October 2012

- Miomio Chii - 2013-08-02T11:19:41+00:00

happy623 wrote:

Niva

Global Moderator

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Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-08-03T05:51:14+00:00

(:

Map is finished but not hitsounded yet, dropping this here for now because probably I'll continue hitsounding this from laptop instead

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: xi - Parousia.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 102700
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Parousia
TitleUnicode:Parousia
Artist:xi
ArtistUnicode:xi
Creator:HelloSCV
Version:Hyper
Source:BMS
Tags:Cytus Chapter 4 The Silence BMS BOF 2011 Bms of Fighters
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.55
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-08-03T06:24:21+00:00

updated! thanks Niva~

~~where is Flask~~

Flower

1,740 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2013-08-03T12:52:41+00:00

Hi :3

So let's go

[General]
Do you need a video? I have one here: http://puu.sh/3SFSF.flv. I'm confident enough that it's better than the one in Shiirn's.

well I can't mod much if you haven't add the hitsounds... I will skip hitsound check.
and please find a custom clap asap xD

[Another]
00:27:510 (1,2,3) - align to a straight line

SPOILER

00:33:586 (1,2,3) - kinda flow breaking imo.
00:35:105 (1,2,3) - delete 3 imo, the rhythm will sound cooler
00:45:358 (5) - I recommend a 3/4 slider+note. up to you ;p
01:35:485 (7) - adjust slider end to align with 01:35:105 (3,4,5,6) -

[Hyper]
00:16:118 (2,3) - I prefer a single kick slider. kinda tricky.
00:18:017 (5,6) - tricky rhythm. better change 5 to one-repeat.
00:39:282 (4,5) - jump maybe to far as Hyper. the player often only click on the slider start without moving, the sudden jumps can be confusing imo.
00:42:700 (7,8) - ugly overlapped by 00:41:371 (3) -
00:51:434 (3,4) - also the jump.
01:20:865 (1,2,3,4,5) - to far jump and too close from spinner. also the rhythm could be quite confusing, because of the slow SV and inconsistent spacing.
01:46:593 (1) - is it too short as Hyper?

[Standard]
00:12:320 (3) - move down the returning node (4th node) to make better shape.

SPOILER

00:16:877 (1) - blanket better. remember also to adjust 00:18:396 (3) -
00:29:029 (1) - end 1/2 earlier
00:52:574 (6) - reverse arrow partially overlapped
01:22:574 (1,2,3,1) - make a square? looks better

[Beginner]
00:12:320 (2) - better if put red nodes on the tick
01:02:447 (1,2) - blanket better
01:40:422 (1) - weird rhythm. maybe you can end it at 01:41:181 - or 01:41:688 -
01:59:409 (2,1) - blanket better

that's all. good luck~

happy623

1,437 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-08-03T13:16:52+00:00

Flower wrote:
Hi :3

So let's go

[Beginner]
00:12:320 (2) - better if put red nodes on the tick
01:02:447 (1,2) - blanket better
01:40:422 (1) - weird rhythm. maybe you can end it at 01:41:181 - or 01:41:688 -
01:59:409 (2,1) - blanket better all fixed

that's all. good luck~

thanks for modding =w=b

http://puu.sh/3SHn4.osu

(I changed the name again ;w; sorry!

Niva

Global Moderator

3,196 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-08-03T15:03:14+00:00

Here, hitsounded version~ xD (HelloSCV : Feel free to change the diff's name to Niva's Hyper if you want)

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: xi - Parousia.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 102700
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Parousia
TitleUnicode:Parousia
Artist:xi
ArtistUnicode:xi
Creator:HelloSCV
Version:Hyper
Source:BMS
Tags:Cytus Chapter 4 The Silence BMS BOF 2011 Bms of Fighters
BeatmapID:283992
BeatmapSetID:108470

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.55
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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320,127,75643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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119,70,107637,21,2,0:0:0:0:
71,155,107827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Regarding Flower's mod:

SPOILER

Flower wrote:
[General]
Do you need a video? I have one here: http://puu.sh/3SFSF.flv. I'm confident enough that it's better than the one in Shiirn's.

well I can't mod much if you haven't add the hitsounds... I will skip hitsound check.
and please find a custom clap asap xD I'll leave the video to HelloSCV, however I used standard claps in my diff and it sounds good already :3

[Hyper]
00:16:118 (2,3) - I prefer a single kick slider. kinda tricky. Err, it's fine imo...
00:18:017 (5,6) - tricky rhythm. better change 5 to one-repeat. Yep
00:39:282 (4,5) - jump maybe to far as Hyper. the player often only click on the slider start without moving, the sudden jumps can be confusing imo.
00:42:700 (7,8) - ugly overlapped by 00:41:371 (3) -It's not in play mode when I tested it o.o (AR 8)
00:51:434 (3,4) - also the jump. About this jump and the previous one... idk how to change without breaking the flow ._.
01:20:865 (1,2,3,4,5) - to far jump and too close from spinner. also the rhythm could be quite confusing, because of the slow SV and inconsistent spacing. Umm, yeah, the song is confusing as is here already, 01:21:434 (4) is 1/3, 01:21:814 (5) is 1/4, the following piano is 1/8... I've thought about extending (5) into one more repeat actually but I'd gather more opinion first
01:46:593 (1) - is it too short as Hyper? Hmm, Auto gets 2000 here though o.o

(sorry I didn't change much though, it's a good mod overall but quite hard to fix >_< - thanks anyway Flower!)

Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2013-08-03T21:19:06+00:00

Yooo, from my Queue :>

[General]

You could consider adding a silent Sliderslide, it doesn't fit the melody well here, in this case it sounds quite noisy in fact, so try if you like it.

[Another]

00:16:498 (1) - In fact, the 1/4 piano in the music ends here, considering that, you should remove those two notes behind it as they don't follow anything.
00:33:871 (2) - Ahh, I found this 1/4 note a bit sudden and hit it to early due to the jumps in the previous part, would you mind increase spacing?
00:39:947 (2) - If you do above, same applies here and the similar parts of course.
00:43:839 (1) - Ehh, combo doesn't work good here, it doesnt represent spacing at all and therefor, I'd remove the combo here and but it on 3 instead.
00:44:219 (3) - Looks a bit out of pattern if you ask me, you could either make a square or center it between 2 and 1.
00:53:143 (4) - I'd rather make this two hitcircles considering that the end plays on the heavy beat, you should try to make the heavy tones in the music clickable.
00:59:409 (1,2) - Uhmm, I'd find this much more beautiful if you could work straight with the grid, see if you like below suggestion :3
SPOILER
01:16:498 (1) - Better to remove this NC, it's pretty much useless here as you didn't use it on the previous part aswell, also it breaks your downbeat consistency.
01:22:953 (1) - You could try to use ctrl + G here, it would gives a cool transition to the next note while having a nice direction change in the pattern itself.
01:52:574 (1) - I would make this note a jump, to keep it consistent. You increased spacing on the last spot with that tone aswell, so it might be a good idea.

[Hyper]

Should be named Niva's Hyper? I got confused by that lol. Make it consistent please, either mention all guest differ's names in their diffs or leave them fully out. This is not to be annoying or something, but to make it reasonable xD
00:10:801 (1) - Uhmm, you could try to use whistles for this downbeat and the following to show that the melody is geting stronger from this moment, I assume that you planed to have less hitsounds because this part is quite, so I wanted to suggest this small thing xD
00:32:067 (1) - Ehh, you will want to add a finish to the start? It is in the music.
00:35:105 (4,5) - Do you think you could change this part to simple 1/2? That would make the beat easier to follow as I think you used a lot 1/4 in your previous patterns.
00:36:624 (8,10) - Add soft whistles to the end? Your current hitsounding is decent, that allows you to emphasizes important tones really good, so have a try.
00:38:143 (1,2) - I'd rather not use 1/4 here, it's not important to keep the beat at all, and you shouldn't forget that this diff is coming behind the Standard! Also, you will want to add a finish to the start, or?
00:42:890 (8) - Try a whistle at the start?
00:44:219 (1) - Did you miss a finish again?
00:47:257 (1,2) - Add softwhistles to the ends again?
00:48:776 (1) - If you agree with above ones, add it on the start here.
Well ughh, as it seems, HelloSVC didn't update your diff with hitsounds yet, as you talked about standard claps, but they are none, well, I hope above hitsounds at least give you some idea.. xD
01:19:156 (1) - Hmm, can you try to place that one below 4's end? I feel as if flow is not as good as it can be like this.
01:42:320 (4,5) - Of course your version of this pattern works and flows perfectly well, but I find it more interesting if you use ctrl + G on 4 and 5, just my opinion, see if you like it
01:46:593 (1) - This Spinner is far too short considering how sudden it comes and yea, while testing it, I think it's toooo surprising. I'd either remove it and leave a break or try to extend it a bit.
01:51:434 (2) - Uhh, I feel as if this Slider was foced, considering your previous parts after that tone on 1 were empty. You could try to remove it, see if you like it.

[Flask's Standard]

00:14:599 - Useless timing point, kinda doesn't really matter but when you're on it, you can remove it xD
00:21:055 (2) - I assume you planned to make this symmetrical, so I'd love if you could move it to the mid of the grid :>
00:31:688 (1) - I think this is far too soon after a Spinner :< Newbies won't have much time to recover, and this'll make it frustrating, could you maybe shorten the Spinner a bit?
00:53:523 (1) - The Spinner's end sounds empty and due to the high tone played on it, I think a whistle would be cool.
01:27:890 (4) - If you moved this a bit to the right, you could make the pattern symmetrical, as it is not at the moment.
02:00:169 (1) - Ahhh, cool stuff :>

[Beginner]

Same comment as on Niva's diff, either add the guest differ's name or remove it on Flask's diff.
SV multiplier is 8,999999 etc, it's not a big deal, but still worth a fix.
00:13:839 (1) - Again a Spinner that feels empty xD Try to add a whistle, it sounds really good in my opinion!
00:24:472 (3) - Try a finish here? You can hear it in the music aswell.
00:38:143 (3) - I think you miss a finish on the start? Also I'd love a NC here seeing how much the music changes.
00:43:460 (2) - Missing finish on the end?
00:51:814 (2) - Hmm, consider deleting one wavepoint, they make that Slider look a bit wry.
01:25:991 (4) - You could replace this Slider by a copy pasted 2 to make a symmetrical pattern, just try it, in my opinion it works better :>
02:01:688 (1) - You can clearly hear the high tone at the end of that Spinner, right? Add a whistle, this will prevent it from sounding empty and will give the high tone a little emphasis.

Yooo, that's about it.

Pretty good map in general, tho I wondered why Niva's diff didnt have hitsounds orz
If I'm not wrong, the update is in the thread.

Well, good luck :3

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-08-04T00:40:32+00:00

Flower

Flower wrote:
Hi :3

So let's go

[General]
Do you need a video? I have one here: http://puu.sh/3SFSF.flv. I'm confident enough that it's better than the one in Shiirn's. well i know this song has its own BGA but i don't want to add that ;w; sorry

well I can't mod much if you haven't add the hitsounds... I will skip hitsound check.
and please find a custom clap asap xD i think claps aren't need very much oh well ok i'll try

[Another]
00:27:510 (1,2,3) - align to a straight line fixed
SPOILER
00:33:586 (1,2,3) - kinda flow breaking imo. D: why? i think that looks fine
00:35:105 (1,2,3) - delete 3 imo, the rhythm will sound cooler fit with drum~
00:45:358 (5) - I recommend a 3/4 slider+note. up to you ;p keep it lol
01:35:485 (7) - adjust slider end to align with 01:35:105 (3,4,5,6) - ah of course

that's all. good luck~

Konei

Konei wrote:
Yooo, from my Queue :>

[General]

You could consider adding a silent Sliderslide, it doesn't fit the melody well here, in this case it sounds quite noisy in fact, so try if you like it. since i'm already using silence on slidertick, that is unrankable lol

[Another]

00:16:498 (1) - In fact, the 1/4 piano in the music ends here, considering that, you should remove those two notes behind it as they don't follow anything. you may hear if you set playback rate to 25%?
00:33:871 (2) - Ahh, I found this 1/4 note a bit sudden and hit it to early due to the jumps in the previous part, would you mind increase spacing? keep it~
00:39:947 (2) - If you do above, same applies here and the similar parts of course. oh ok if i change it
00:43:839 (1) - Ehh, combo doesn't work good here, it doesnt represent spacing at all and therefor, I'd remove the combo here and but it on 3 instead.
but i set those NCs for consistence with 00:31:688 (1,2) - here
00:44:219 (3) - Looks a bit out of pattern if you ask me, you could either make a square or center it between 2 and 1. i'm prefer such that pattern ;_;
00:53:143 (4) - I'd rather make this two hitcircles considering that the end plays on the heavy beat, you should try to make the heavy tones in the music clickable. i think slider feels better but ok consider it more
00:59:409 (1,2) - Uhmm, I'd find this much more beautiful if you could work straight with the grid, see if you like below suggestion :3 awesome xD
SPOILER
01:16:498 (1) - Better to remove this NC, it's pretty much useless here as you didn't use it on the previous part aswell, also it breaks your downbeat consistency. i set 1.2x SV on that part that's why i added NC
01:22:953 (1) - You could try to use ctrl + G here, it would gives a cool transition to the next note while having a nice direction change in the pattern itself. consider it more~
01:52:574 (1) - I would make this note a jump, to keep it consistent. You increased spacing on the last spot with that tone aswell, so it might be a good idea. hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm will think about it more~
Yooo, that's about it.

Pretty good map in general, tho I wondered why Niva's diff didnt have hitsounds orz
If I'm not wrong, the update is in the thread. my bad xD

Well, good luck :3

really thanks for mod! xDD

@Niva : i changed diff name to Niva's Hyper since you added your nickname on other GDs lol oh and thanks for setting Genre xD

happy623

1,437 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-08-04T05:57:21+00:00

Konei wrote:
Yooo, from my Queue :>

[Beginner]

Same comment as on Niva's diff, either add the guest differ's name or remove it on Flask's diff. changed the diff name
SV multiplier is 8,999999 etc, it's not a big deal, but still worth a fix. fixed o/
00:13:839 (1) - Again a Spinner that feels empty xD Try to add a whistle, it sounds really good in my opinion! very nice =w=b
00:24:472 (3) - Try a finish here? You can hear it in the music aswell. okey
00:38:143 (3) - I think you miss a finish on the start? Also I'd love a NC here seeing how much the music changes. both fixed
00:43:460 (2) - Missing finish on the end? added
00:51:814 (2) - Hmm, consider deleting one wavepoint, they make that Slider look a bit wry. I try to drag a wavepoint a bit more down instead
01:25:991 (4) - You could replace this Slider by a copy pasted 2 to make a symmetrical pattern, just try it, in my opinion it works better :> emm.. I want to keep 4 in order to make the flow better ;w; btw I changed slider 2 look
02:01:688 (1) - You can clearly hear the high tone at the end of that Spinner, right? Add a whistle, this will prevent it from sounding empty and will give the high tone a little emphasis. done

Yooo, that's about it.

Pretty good map in general, tho I wondered why Niva's diff didnt have hitsounds orz
If I'm not wrong, the update is in the thread.

Well, good luck :3

thanks for nice ideas

http://puu.sh/3TiMz.osu

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-08-04T07:10:54+00:00

for GD mappers : i changed soft-slidertick to soft-sliderslide~ well plz re-download if you want!

neonat

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neonat 2013-08-04T09:34:57+00:00

Another

00:22:858 - add a note
00:28:270 (1) - remove the whistle on the 2nd repeat at 00:28:460
00:41:846 - add a note
01:00:927 (3) - end is not snapped
01:04:726 (1,2,3) - it might have a better effect if they were closer together
01:14:599 (1,1,1) - circles instead of sliders?
01:31:972 - add a note

Hyper

00:28:460 (5,6,7,8) - confusing here, maybe try another rhythm

SPOILER

HelloSCV

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Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-08-04T22:41:00+00:00

neonat wrote:
Another

00:22:858 - add a note not fixed
00:28:270 (1) - remove the whistle on the 2nd repeat at 00:28:460 cool
00:41:846 - add a note sorry
01:00:927 (3) - end is not snapped lol fixed
01:04:726 (1,2,3) - it might have a better effect if they were closer together well i think that can cause confusing
01:14:599 (1,1,1) - circles instead of sliders? nope ;_;
01:31:972 - add a note consider it more

thank you for mod~~

birra

359 posts

Joined May 2011

birra 2013-08-05T01:55:16+00:00

M4M weee >w<
wee finally ;w; sowwy i got lag so i couldn't open my browser at all OTL

XIXIXIXIXIXIXIXI WEEEE YEYEYEYE- ok gotta stop being so over-excited >/////> -rolls away-

anyways, i'm more into placement and hitsound, so lets see what i can do here >~<

623's Beginner

00:10:042 (3) - remove whistle
00:22:194 (5) - move to x:432 y:220
00:22:953 (1) - remove whistle at the end of it
00:24:852 (4) - remove whistle at the beginning and at the end of it, add whistle at the reverse
00:36:814 (1) - move to x:236 y:312 (ctrl + leftclick it, 00:37:384 (2), and 00:38:143 (1) before you move it)
00:49:536 (3) - move to x:396 y:316
00:51:814 (2) - add whistle at the beginning of it
00:58:650 (4) - move to x:284 y:160
01:17:637 (1) - move to x:184 y:300
01:18:017 (2) - move to x:112 y:352
01:14:979 (2) and 01:16:498 (2) - remove whistle at the beginning and at the end of it, add whistle at the reverse
01:22:194 (3) - move to x:284 y:64
01:34:726 (4) - remove whistle
01:35:865 (1,2) - move whistle at circle 2 to the end of slider 1
01:51:055 (1) - remove slider at the end of it
01:57:131 (1) - move to 480 y:184
01:59:409 (2) - move to x:164 y:196
02:00:169 (1) - remove whistle at the beginning of it

Flask's Standart

00:16:118 (2) - move the tail of the slider to x:260 y:152
00:22:547 (4) - remove whistle at the beginning of it
00:25:232 (4) - ^
00:27:131 (2) - ^ at the end of it
00:21:055 (2) - move to x:256 y:120
00:49:915 (1) - add whistle at the beginning of it only
01:11:561 (1,5) - add whistle
01:18:776 (1) - remove whistle at the reverse
01:23:808 (1,2) - ----- ^ ----- (only at the reverse for the slider 1)
01:27:131 (2,4) - -----^
01:28:270 (5) - ------ ^ ------- at the reverse only
01:37:384 (2) - ------ ^
01:43:839 (4) - ------- ^
01:47:827 (2) - move to x:284 y:152 and remove whistle at the beginning of it
01:48:776 (2) - move to x:60 y:72 and remove whistle at the end of it
01:49:536 (3) - remove whistle at the reverse and at the end of it
01:51:055 (1) - remove whistle
02:00:169 (1) - remove finish at the beginning of it

Niva's Hyper

oh man, nibah asdfghjkl

00:16:118 (2) - move to x:220 y:60 (ctrl + leftclick it and 00:16:498 (3) before you move it)
00:17:637 (4) - add whistle
00:24:472 (1) - remove whistle
00:26:131 (4) - stack it to the slider 00:27:131 (1)
00:28:839 (7,8) - move to x:96 y:176
00:41:371 (3) - add whistle
00:49:536 (5) - remove whistle at the end of the slider
00:59:409 (3) - move to x:188 y:324
01:06:624 (2) - move to x:96 y:340
01:11:561 (3) - use auto-soft instead of normal-soft at the reverse and at the end of it. imo it shows the climax step by step with the next normal-softed sliders.
01:12:890 (5) - remove whistle
01:13:080 (1) - add whistle at the beginning of it as the beginning of the climax as well
01:29:219 (6) - move to x:456 y:272
01:35:105 (9) - move to x:136 y:304 (ctrl + leftclick it and 01:34:726 (8) before you move it)
01:50:675 (3) - add whistle and remove whistle at 01:50:865 (4)
01:53:713 (4) - use auto-auto at the beginning, the 1st, and 2nd reverse of the slider
01:57:131 (1) - use finish instead of whistle at the end of the slider.
02:01:688 (1) - move to x:256 y:268

Another

holy- omg i love those streams so much ;/////////;

00:16:688 (3) - remove whistle
00:26:181 (2,3) - ----^ at the beginning of the slider
00:28:175 (4) - ------^
00:28:270 (1) - move whistle from the 2nd reverse of the slider
00:28:650 (2) - add whistle at the beginning of it and remove whistle at the 1st and 2nd reverse of it.
00:31:877 (2) - remove whistle
00:49:156 (2,3) - add whistle at 2 and removed whistle at 3.
00:49:915 (1,2) - move whistle from the end of slider 1 to the end of slider 2
01:08:523 (1) - remove finish
01:11,561 (1,3,5,7) - add whistle at the beginning of the them
01:18:586 (3) - move to x:148 y:24
01:18:776 (4,5,6,7) and 01:19:156 (1) - ctrl + leftclick circle 4 until circle 1 (or block those circles) and drag circle 4 to x:156 y:160
01:25:042 (3) - remove whistle
01:26:371 (3) - ----- ^ ------- at the end of it
01:27:890 (7,9) - ---- ^
01:29:599 (6) - ----- ^
01:32:827 (1) - move to x:180 y:152
01:36:814 (7) - move to x:324 y:64
01:41:677 (6) - move to x:256 y:248
01:44:219 (1) - remove whistle at the end of it
01:49:156 (4) - ---------^
01:49:536 (1) - ---------^ --------------- ^ and at its reverse
02:00:358 (2,3) - move the whistle at 2 to 3

i hope this will get really really get ranked asjhdhddhakdhjadhkahdk i love this ;///////////////////; XIXIXIXIXIXIXIXIXIXI WE- ok i'll stahp ;w;
dear BATBATtachi ugudesudesu, please rank this when everything's really done omg ;;

ps: i never know how to mention/explain things whenever i mod something asdfghjkl. my bad desudesu orz

HelloSCV

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Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-08-05T03:45:39+00:00

sacchann wrote:
M4M weee >w<
wee finally ;w; sowwy i got lag so i couldn't open my browser at all OTL

XIXIXIXIXIXIXIXI WEEEE YEYEYEYE- ok gotta stop being so over-excited >/////> -rolls away- clam down lol

anyways, i'm more into placement and hitsound, so lets see what i can do here >~<

Another

holy- omg i love those streams so much ;/////////;

00:16:688 (3) - remove whistle cool
00:26:181 (2,3) - ----^ at the beginning of the slider uh well i think those whistles are fine
00:28:175 (4) - ------^ lol ok
00:28:270 (1) - move whistle from the 2nd reverse of the slider of course
00:28:650 (2) - add whistle at the beginning of it and remove whistle at the 1st and 2nd reverse of it. fixed
00:31:877 (2) - remove whistle sorry :<
00:49:156 (2,3) - add whistle at 2 and removed whistle at 3. no whistle on 3 already :/
00:49:915 (1,2) - move whistle from the end of slider 1 to the end of slider 2 not fixed
01:08:523 (1) - remove finish it fits well ;_;
01:11,561 (1,3,5,7) - add whistle at the beginning of the them hmm i think objects with out hitsounds are fine already
01:18:586 (3) - move to x:148 y:24 i'm prefer current
01:18:776 (4,5,6,7) and 01:19:156 (1) - ctrl + leftclick circle 4 until circle 1 (or block those circles) and drag circle 4 to x:156 y:160 ^
01:25:042 (3) - remove whistle sorry
01:26:371 (3) - ----- ^ ------- at the end of it ^
01:27:890 (7,9) - ---- ^ ^
01:29:599 (6) - ----- ^ ^
01:32:827 (1) - move to x:180 y:152 i think that's fine
01:36:814 (7) - move to x:324 y:64 ^
01:41:677 (6) - move to x:256 y:248 cool, fixed
01:44:219 (1) - remove whistle at the end of it nope
01:49:156 (4) - ---------^ ^
01:49:536 (1) - ---------^ --------------- ^ and at its reverse ^
02:00:358 (2,3) - move the whistle at 2 to 3 awesome

i hope this will get really really get ranked asjhdhddhakdhjadhkahdk i love this ;///////////////////; XIXIXIXIXIXIXIXIXIXI WE- ok i'll stahp ;w;
dear BATBATtachi ugudesudesu, please rank this when everything's really done omg ;; lol hope i can do it haha

ps: i never know how to mention/explain things whenever i mod something asdfghjkl. my bad desudesu orz that's ok i can understand hehe

thanks for mod xD

happy623

1,437 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-08-05T06:06:38+00:00

sacchann wrote:
M4M weee >w<
wee finally ;w; sowwy i got lag so i couldn't open my browser at all OTL

XIXIXIXIXIXIXIXI WEEEE YEYEYEYE- ok gotta stop being so over-excited >/////> -rolls away-

anyways, i'm more into placement and hitsound, so lets see what i can do here >~<

623's Beginner

00:10:042 (3) - remove whistle nope since I want to keep the whistle pattern consistent
00:22:194 (5) - move to x:432 y:220 Q_Q itsnt blanket enough
00:22:953 (1) - remove whistle at the end of it I wanna keep the pattern too
00:24:852 (4) - remove whistle at the beginning and at the end of it, add whistle at the reverse ^
00:36:814 (1) - move to x:236 y:312 (ctrl + leftclick it, 00:37:384 (2), and 00:38:143 (1) before you move it) ;w; nope
00:49:536 (3) - move to x:396 y:316 I moved to x400 y312 instead
00:51:814 (2) - add whistle at the beginning of it ok!
00:58:650 (4) - move to x:284 y:160 moved to x284 y156
01:17:637 (1) - move to x:184 y:300 no ;w;
01:18:017 (2) - move to x:112 y:352 okay
01:14:979 (2) and 01:16:498 (2) - remove whistle at the beginning and at the end of it, add whistle at the reverse ok its pretty nice owob
01:22:194 (3) - move to x:284 y:64 I moved slider 4 as well~
01:34:726 (4) - remove whistle no ;w;
01:35:865 (1,2) - move whistle at circle 2 to the end of slider 1 okay, I added some whistle at the following sliders too
01:51:055 (1) - remove slider at the end of it you mean whistle? XD nope, I want to keep the pattern too
01:57:131 (1) - move to 480 y:184 well I moved to x480 y180
01:59:409 (2) - move to x:164 y:196 okay
02:00:169 (1) - remove whistle at the beginning of it done

i hope this will get really really get ranked asjhdhddhakdhjadhkahdk i love this ;///////////////////; XIXIXIXIXIXIXIXIXIXI WE- ok i'll stahp ;w;
dear BATBATtachi ugudesudesu, please rank this when everything's really done omg ;;

ps: i never know how to mention/explain things whenever i mod something asdfghjkl. my bad desudesu orz MOE

thanks for modding XD

~~http://puu.sh/3U7hV.osu~~ o/ SCV!SCV!SCV!

edit : wrong uploaded XD http://puu.sh/3U7vM.osu

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,473 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2013-08-05T08:15:01+00:00

http://puu.sh/3UaSS.osu

Thanks for modding~ /lazy to reply (If you need it, feel free to pm me)

ts8zs

2,124 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-08-05T10:12:07+00:00

[Another]
00:29:029 (1) - move to 412,232?
01:11:561 (1) - Ctrl+G?
02:08:243 - BPM/2?
[Niva's Hyper]
00:22:953 Unused Green line by Not AImod:3
Other seems good
[Flask's Standard]
00:10:042 (4,1) - Swap NC
01:14:599 (1) - move up a tiny gird?

Unused Green line:3

00:04:726
01:14:789
01:16:118
01:16:308
01:17:637
01:17:827

[623's Beginner]
01:07:004 (1) - Doesn't fit 2's Approachcircle perfertly:3
01:28:650 (2) - Make angle less:3
00:07:763 Unused Green line by Not AImod:3

That's all
Good Luck:3

happy623

1,437 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-08-05T10:18:36+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[623's Beginner]
01:07:004 (1) - Doesn't fit 2's Approachcircle perfertly:3 fixed
01:28:650 (2) - Make angle less:3 not really understand. . .
00:07:763 Unused Green line by Not AImod:3 removed

That's all
Good Luck:3

thanks for modding o/

http://puu.sh/3UdRu.osu

Niva

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3,196 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-08-05T15:34:00+00:00

Konei wrote:
(yes, this mod was made before HelloSCV updated my diff with hitsounds xD)

[Hyper]

Should be named Niva's Hyper? I got confused by that lol. Make it consistent please, either mention all guest differ's names in their diffs or leave them fully out. This is not to be annoying or something, but to make it reasonable xD
00:10:801 (1) - Uhmm, you could try to use whistles for this downbeat and the following to show that the melody is geting stronger from this moment, I assume that you planed to have less hitsounds because this part is quite, so I wanted to suggest this small thing xD
00:32:067 (1) - Ehh, you will want to add a finish to the start? It is in the music.
00:35:105 (4,5) - Do you think you could change this part to simple 1/2? That would make the beat easier to follow as I think you used a lot 1/4 in your previous patterns. Ah, yep, 1/2 better here
00:36:624 (8,10) - Add soft whistles to the end? Your current hitsounding is decent, that allows you to emphasizes important tones really good, so have a try.
00:38:143 (1,2) - I'd rather not use 1/4 here, it's not important to keep the beat at all, and you shouldn't forget that this diff is coming behind the Standard! Also, you will want to add a finish to the start, or? Umm idk... Unlike the previous one I don't really hear a drum on 00:38:333, leaving this for now...
00:42:890 (8) - Try a whistle at the start?
00:44:219 (1) - Did you miss a finish again?
00:47:257 (1,2) - Add softwhistles to the ends again?
00:48:776 (1) - If you agree with above ones, add it on the start here.
Well ughh, as it seems, HelloSVC didn't update your diff with hitsounds yet, as you talked about standard claps, but they are none, well, I hope above hitsounds at least give you some idea.. xD
01:19:156 (1) - Hmm, can you try to place that one below 4's end? I feel as if flow is not as good as it can be like this. Oh, it's placed in the center of previous (1,2,3,4)... Adjusted slightly though
01:42:320 (4,5) - Of course your version of this pattern works and flows perfectly well, but I find it more interesting if you use ctrl + G on 4 and 5, just my opinion, see if you like it Prefer as is~
01:46:593 (1) - This Spinner is far too short considering how sudden it comes and yea, while testing it, I think it's toooo surprising. I'd either remove it and leave a break or try to extend it a bit. Kept as is for now, still no idea how to fix this ._.
01:51:434 (2) - Uhh, I feel as if this Slider was foced, considering your previous parts after that tone on 1 were empty. You could try to remove it, see if you like it. Adjusted rhythm here...

ts8zs wrote:
[Niva's Hyper]
00:22:953 Unused Green line by Not AImod:3 Removed

neonat wrote:
Hyper

00:28:460 (5,6,7,8) - confusing here, maybe try another rhythm Changed this into something else less confusing :3
SPOILER

sacchann wrote:
Niva's Hyper

oh man, nibah asdfghjkl Hi there sacchann~

00:16:118 (2) - move to x:220 y:60 (ctrl + leftclick it and 00:16:498 (3) before you move it) Umm, it'll make the spacing too close between this and (1)...
00:17:637 (4) - add whistle Done
00:24:472 (1) - remove whistle Err? It's to follow the synth :3
00:26:131 (4) - stack it to the slider 00:27:131 (1) It's intentional manual-stacking
00:28:839 (7,8) - move to x:96 y:176 Changed this according to neonat's mod
00:41:371 (3) - add whistle Great finding, done~
00:49:536 (5) - remove whistle at the end of the slider It's there to follow the synth
00:59:409 (3) - move to x:188 y:324
01:06:624 (2) - move to x:96 y:340 Err, I see nothing wrong with these two actually...
01:11:561 (3) - use auto-soft instead of normal-soft at the reverse and at the end of it. imo it shows the climax step by step with the next normal-softed sliders. Well, I get your point here but it's there to accompany the bass (:
01:12:890 (5) - remove whistle
01:13:080 (1) - add whistle at the beginning of it as the beginning of the climax as well These two are also following the bass (I don't really follow the synth on this part's hitsounds)
01:29:219 (6) - move to x:456 y:272 Made (4,5,6) in a line here
01:35:105 (9) - move to x:136 y:304 (ctrl + leftclick it and 01:34:726 (8) before you move it) Adjusted the (8) instead to get better encircle~
01:50:675 (3) - add whistle and remove whistle at 01:50:865 (4) Another nice finding, done!
01:53:713 (4) - use auto-auto at the beginning, the 1st, and 2nd reverse of the slider It's full 1/8 here o.o
01:57:131 (1) - use finish instead of whistle at the end of the slider. Adjusted finishes around here
02:01:688 (1) - move to x:256 y:268 Done

Thanks all for the mods :3

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:Parousia
Artist:xi
ArtistUnicode:xi
Creator:HelloSCV
Version:Niva's Hyper
Source:BMS
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-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,858 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2013-08-05T17:07:39+00:00

Cool \o\

If you want I can port my diff to your map if that's okay, I dunno if I will be ever able to finish my mapset :p

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-08-05T22:35:51+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[Another]
00:29:029 (1) - move to 412,232? i think that isn't good
01:11:561 (1) - Ctrl+G? consider this more
02:08:243 - BPM/2? i used bpm set on ranked parousia

That's all
Good Luck:3

thanks~

@-kevincela- : yup of course~ give your diff plz xD

MineC24

1,072 posts

Joined May 2010

MineC24 2013-08-06T02:37:49+00:00

from PM request~

623's Beginner

00:51:814 (2) - how about this slider curve?
ex :

beautiful slider shape

Flask's Standard

Diff name change -> Flask's Normal (follow IIDX/BMS diff name

)

00:07:003 (4) - not snapped (Editor error?)
00:48:776 (3) - change slider shape (this slider shape is so simple slider shape. and you can make better

)

Niva's Hyper

01:58:269 (4) - not snapped (Editor error?)
01:59:788 (4) - ^

Another

00:53:428 (1) - 스핀으로 채우기보다는 슬라이더로 들리는 음대로 찍는게 좋을 것 같아요
01:13:839 (7,8,9,10,11) - 이렇게 박자를 애매하게 두기보다는 이 구간을 그냥 스트림으로 쭈욱 찍는게 좋을 것 같아요

so nice diffs. so i can't point out

GL

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-08-06T04:05:59+00:00

MineC24 wrote:
Another
00:53:428 (1) - 스핀으로 채우기보다는 슬라이더로 들리는 음대로 찍는게 좋을 것 같아요 뒤쪽이 바로 다운비트라 슬라이더 보다는 여전히 스피너가 나은거 같아요
01:13:839 (7,8,9,10,11) - 이렇게 박자를 애매하게 두기보다는 이 구간을 그냥 스트림으로 쭈욱 찍는게 좋을 것 같아요 처음 찍을땐 몰랐는데 다시 들어보니 5연타가 되야하네요 ㅋㅋㅋ 이건 일단 좀더 생각해볼께요,

so nice diffs. so i can't point out

GL

감사합니다~

Guy

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2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-08-06T05:32:51+00:00

Hi! from your m4m queue

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

Clear.

[Another]

00:05:105 - hm, i think it volume is very low, it will confuse player. i recommend around 15%~20% imo.(also exist same pattern some)
00:14:599 (2) - add whistle?
00:51:434 (5) - add whistle on slider start.

omg nice diff.

[Niva's Hyper]

00:09:282 - same avobe comment in insane diff 00:05:105.
00:11:561 (2) - hmm,I felt a little confused. move to 00:11:941 - ?
00:16:118 (2) - add whistle on slider start.

beautiful hyper.

[Flask's Standard]

finish sound is little loud overall imo.

01:27:131 (2,3) - try Ctrl+G. more good flow.
01:34:726 (2,3,4) - remove finish? not fitting song and sound is very loud.
01:55:612 (3) - i guess from your pattern, add whistle on slider end.

[623's Beginner]

OD+1. 2/3/2 better than 2/3/1 imo.
00:33:586 (1,2) - hm, like this rhythm?
01:44:979 (2) - i think that remove slider repeat. and like this pattern?

That's all~
nice mapset!
Good luck

happy623

1,437 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-08-06T06:44:51+00:00

MineC24 wrote:
from PM request~

623's Beginner
00:51:814 (2) - how about this slider curve? OKAY!
ex :

beautiful slider shape

so nice diffs. so i can't point out

GL

thanks for modding >w<

Guy wrote:
Hi! from your m4m queue

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Clear.
[623's Beginner]
OD+1. 2/3/2 better than 2/3/1 imo. okay
00:33:586 (1,2) - hm, like this rhythm? ;w; a bit hard imo

01:44:979 (2) - i think that remove slider repeat. and like this pattern? I prefer current one QwQ
That's all~
nice mapset!
Good luck

thanks!!! o/

http://puu.sh/3UYiW.osu

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-08-06T09:04:38+00:00

Guy wrote:
Hi! from your m4m queue

[Another]
00:05:105 - hm, i think it volume is very low, it will confuse player. i recommend around 15%~20% imo.(also exist same pattern some) hmmmmmmmmmmmm well i think 10% volume is still hearable :<
00:14:599 (2) - add whistle? uh i tried to fit with piano sounds
00:51:434 (5) - add whistle on slider start. sorry

omg nice diff. thanks about it xDDD
That's all~
nice mapset!
Good luck

thanks for mod~~!

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,858 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2013-08-06T10:17:04+00:00

Finished porting my diff and hitsounded it as well, here it is

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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Countdown: 0
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ArtistUnicode:xi
Creator:HelloSCV
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Tell me if there's something wrong in the diff, as because of the different mp3 I had to readjust some things

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-08-06T13:14:38+00:00

updated another Another lol

Lust

osu! Alumni

2,667 posts

Joined January 2013

Lust 2013-08-06T19:08:51+00:00

from yo mod fo mod queue yo

623's Beginner

SPOILER

00:46:877 (1) - isn't carrying the rhythm well for me, maybe move it down a 1/2?
02:01:688 (1) - I feel like the spinner is a little long for a beginner (then again thats my own taste so)
01:28:650 (2,1) - sensing a missing note in between these two

Niva's Hyper

SPOILER

this is pretty good except for one minor qualm of mine

02:01:785 (1,1) - i think you can make this one long spinner instead of a double

-Kevinclea-'s another

SPOILER

01:31:308 (1,2) - i dont like the spacing here, maybe move them a little closer together

Another

SPOILER

00:49:156 (2,3,4) - a little confusing
02:01:688 (1) - remove nc
02:01:308 (1,2,3,4) - maybe move this inline with the previous stream

not really much to say, good luck!

happy623

1,437 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-08-06T19:58:05+00:00

Side Pocket wrote:
from yo mod fo mod queue yo

623's Beginner
SPOILER
00:46:877 (1) - isn't carrying the rhythm well for me, maybe move it down a 1/2? it is 1/2 already;w;
02:01:688 (1) - I feel like the spinner is a little long for a beginner (then again thats my own taste so) divided into 2 spinners~!
01:28:650 (2,1) - sensing a missing note in between these two added a note o/

not really much to say, good luck!

thanks! <3

http://puu.sh/3VnAP.osu

HelloSCV

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Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-08-07T01:13:02+00:00

Side Pocket wrote:
Another
SPOILER
00:49:156 (2,3,4) - a little confusing those are still visible imo
02:01:688 (1) - remove nc will consider this more
02:01:308 (1,2,3,4) - maybe move this inline with the previous stream sorry i like that pattern ;w;

not really much to say, good luck!

thanks for mod~~

Sorarei

1,420 posts

Joined August 2012

Sorarei 2013-08-07T03:10:12+00:00

i just found this , seems like this map ready to get ranked

Niva's Hyper

SPOILER

01:46:593 (1) - this spinner is too fast and sudden for me , suggesting change to slider or circle note

-Kevincela-'s Another

SPOILER

00:48:586 (4) - why not to change into circle note ?
01:04:726 (1,2,3) - i think at this beat change into slider pattern
01:32:068 (1,2,3) - same as above

scanter

2,394 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-08-07T03:14:33+00:00

별이나 처머겅

nice mapset :>

Niva

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Niva 2013-08-07T04:00:17+00:00

MineC24 wrote:
Niva's Hyper
01:58:269 (4) - not snapped (Editor error?)
01:59:788 (4) - ^ Should be fine now for both

Guy wrote:
[Niva's Hyper]
00:09:282 - same avobe comment in insane diff 00:05:105. Raised volume
00:11:561 (2) - hmm,I felt a little confused. move to 00:11:941 - ? 00:10:801 (1,2,1,2,1,2) are all following the background chimes actually (not the main piano~)
00:16:118 (2) - add whistle on slider start. Nice one, added!

beautiful hyper. Thanks (:

Side Pocket wrote:
Niva's Hyper
SPOILER
this is pretty good except for one minor qualm of mine
02:01:785 (1,1) - i think you can make this one long spinner instead of a double Oh, it's intentional, I wanted the whistle sound on 02:04:846

Reikosaka wrote:
i just found this , seems like this map ready to get ranked

Niva's Hyper
SPOILER
01:46:593 (1) - this spinner is too fast and sudden for me , suggesting change to slider or circle note As I've mentioned in previous mod replies - idk how to fix this one without decreasing this part's feel, leaving as is for now :3

Thanks for mods all~

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 82574
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Parousia
TitleUnicode:Parousia
Artist:xi
ArtistUnicode:xi
Creator:HelloSCV
Version:Niva's Hyper
Source:BMS
Tags:Cytus Chapter 4 The Silence BOF 2011 bms of Fighters happy623 Niva Flask -kevincela-
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Skystar

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Skystar 2013-08-07T15:01:42+00:00

M4M
[Another]

00:04:726 - 00:15:358 - In this part, I suggest you change some sections' volume according to the music, for example: 00:11:941 - Decrease the volume to 20% and add a 30% one at 00:12:320 - , that will fit better.
00:33:586 (1,2,3) - Use a higher spacing between them to hint player that rhythm has been changed?
00:39:662 (1,2,3) - Same here.
00:45:358 (5) - I highly dislike ending a slider on the downbeat, especially you haven't used it on the previous ones.
01:32:068 (1,2,3) - Personally, that finish sample is kinda loud and you have used a lot on the map, I suggest you decrease the volume for where it may be considered as a overuse, not only here.
01:34:346 (1,2,3,7) - ^ Another example.
01:40:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ LOL.

[-kevincela-'s Another]

In general, a nice diff!

00:16:308 (3,4,5) - Spacing error.
00:47:447 (2) - Move the 3rd point to x:352 y:128 to fix the blanket.
00:51:814 (1) - Move it further from the previous object to avoid the overlap issue, it looks ugly.

[Hyper]

I can't find anything o/

[Standard]

So many useless timing lines o/
Decrease the volume where you have used S:C1 finish samples continuously, as I said in SCV's diff.
00:10:422 (5) - Remove whistle.
00:16:118 (2) - Remove whistle on the head.
00:49:915 (1) - Move the 3rd point to x:252 y:188.
01:32:067 (1) - Replace by 2 sliders or 1 repeat slider + 1 circle?

[Beginner]

01:00:928 (2) - Move the 3rd point to x:208 y:204, for the blanket issue.
01:28:650 (2) - It looks too curve.

happy623

1,437 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-08-07T17:04:22+00:00

Amamiya Yuko wrote:
M4M

[Beginner]
01:00:928 (2) - Move the 3rd point to x:208 y:204, for the blanket issue. the 1st point is x208 y204 already ;w;
01:28:650 (2) - It looks too curve. hope the now one is okay owo

thanks <3333

http://puu.sh/3W7bb.osu

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,858 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2013-08-07T17:35:55+00:00

Side Pocket wrote:
-Kevinclea-'s another
SPOILER
01:31:308 (1,2) - i dont like the spacing here, maybe move them a little closer together Eh? I actually like this spacing here, and I really don't want to change it there, sorry!

Reikosaka wrote:
-Kevincela-'s Another
SPOILER
00:48:586 (4) - why not to change into circle note ? It wasn't my intention to use a triplet there, I really liked how the 1/4 slider played there
01:04:726 (1,2,3) - i think at this beat change into slider pattern Eh? It's already a "slider pattern"!
01:32:068 (1,2,3) - same as above I prefer to use circles there, sorry!

Amamiya Yuko wrote:
[-kevincela-'s Another]
In general, a nice diff! Thanks
00:16:308 (3,4,5) - Spacing error. Fixed it up
00:47:447 (2) - Move the 3rd point to x:352 y:128 to fix the blanket. Quite nazi, but ok I guess
00:51:814 (1) - Move it further from the previous object to avoid the overlap issue, it looks ugly. ? I see no overlap here o.O

Thank you all for the mods, guys! Much obliged

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Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2013-08-07T21:49:57+00:00

I SWEAR TO GOD I THOUGHT I MODDED THIS

WTF

I SWEAR

Another:
00:39:662 (1,2) - Maybe have this as a slider rather than 2 notes, as there's a lot of space compared to the other notes, and players might be tripped up by the need to wait
00:46:023 (1,2) - Make this into Slider-Note to give leniancy to the blue note
01:04:726 (1,2,3) - Kind of bugs me and I'd rather have it as a slider, but it works either way
01:32:320 (2,3) - Make these larger jumps to add more emphasis

Kevvie:
00:27:131 (5,6,7,8) - Every time I've seen this pattern anywhere ever people always get mad about it. I like it personally, but it's something worth pointing out
00:36:244 (3) - This 1/8th jump might be a bit much
01:46:118 (2) - I'm srs concerned about the playability of this jump

Niva:
00:04:726 (1,2,1,2) - I'd prefer to have this as an equally space pattern rather than what it is now
00:34:346 (2) - The flow of this bugs me since I'm forced to go in the opposite direction that I want to go, especially since the rest of the map has been good about flow
00:58:650 (1,2,3) - I know it's boring to have like the same spacing but like it doesn't make much sense to have a jump here

Flask:
Tick Rate 2 may help readability for newer players
00:14:599 - Do people still get mad about unneccesary inherited points these days?

Beqqinr:
Good

i was talking to other people about how I need to mod good maps every once in a while

but now that I'm doing it i'm just like

dam my mod posts be short.

gj

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,317 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2013-08-07T22:15:33+00:00

hiya, m4m!

[General]

Seems like you have some kiai time - issues You might wanna check them.

KIAI

02:01:688 - I don't think it's an over use of kiai flashes here, so you might add one

[623's Beginner]

00:12:320 (2) - Ahh, just a little nazi. Try to move the first red point a bit to the right to improve that blanket.
00:27:510 (2) - One or two grids to the right, to improve the blanket again.
00:39:662 (3) - Move the last white point to x:344 y:301 for guess what- blanket improving xD
00:46:877 (1) - This one sounds too early for me, i can hear something in the background, yet it feels wrong. Consider deleting the reverse and move it to 00:47:257 - Don't forget to extend it to the next white tick! Add a finish at the end as well, if you like, it emphasizes the song pretty well.
00:54:852 (1) - I don't know if you ever watched a beginners play, but they mostly click as soon as they see the circle / slider. So this spacing isn't really clever. Could you try shaping the slider a bit different, and move it to somewhere else?
01:16:118 - - What about making the hitsounds louder? You can hear the reason in the background lol
01:17:637 - Same here

01:22:194 (3) - NC? This whistle in the background is a new part of the song.
01:37:384 (3) - To get a better flow I suggest x: 223 y: 272
02:01:688 - I don't think it's an over use of kiai flashes here, so you might add one

I like that map, good job hello :3

[Flask's Standard]

00:04:726 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I don't really get that hitsounding, you make the slider end more quiet, but why? I think make it more quiet frequently would make more sense since the song gets more quiet o.o (00:09:282 (3) - so this one should be the most quiet one)
00:09:282 (3) - Remove this green line please, you don't need it.
00:28:270 (4) - I think you mapped the piano here? If yes i would make a NC, also for the beginners, to get this one more easily.
01:07:763 (4) - NC again, to make the stack more readable.
01:40:422 (1,2) - Is it on purpose that they are not paralell? Just wanted to remind you.

[Niva's Hyper]

00:18:017 (5,6,7) - 5 to 6 has a DS of 0.21, while 6 to 7 has a DS of 0.26, it's up to you whether you want to fix or not.
01:08:523 (1) - This slider would look even neater if you make the second part of it properly straight.
01:16:877 (3,4,5) - The DS failed again here, 0.26 > 0.29, idk why, but i can clearly see it. Just aesthetics obviously but still :c
01:18:776 (4,1) - Don't you wanna map this 1/4 beat here? It would make this part a bit more exciting.
01:41:941 (3) - You missed NC here.. i hate explaining NC's, so .. 01:40:422 (1,2) - this is a part, and then there's definetly a new one 01:41:941 (3) - here.

[-kevincela-'s Another]

00:07:763 (5) - NC to emphasize the bell in the background?
00:41:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - To give your map a bit more variety of different things i suggest http://puu.sh/3Wlhf.jpg this. Well, it might break your pattern, but it's just a suggestion. It looks nice, but most of all it's.. a bit boring.
01:00:928 (1,2,3,4,1) - I don't see why you don't space them properly, it looks odd. Is there a specific reason?
01:11:181 (6) - NC to signalize the sudden stress.
01:17:637 (1,2) - This disappointes me very much. 01:14:599 (1,2) - You stress the player here, 01:16:118 (1,2) - here, 01:17:637 (1,2) - and here you leave it out, even if it's the most powerful of these three. I suggest you to keep the pattern, for consistency.

Fun map.

[Another]

Hm, why don't you take another name for that diff? Maybe Lunatic, Extra, (i'm not familiar with diffnames, so just take 1 harder than another, or make kevincelas one below another)

00:11:941 (4,5,6) - I don't like the spacing between these, is there a specific reason why you put them like that? I would place 6 a bit more to the right.
01:36:814 (7,8) - I really dislike how you place slider / circle like this, can't you think of something that flows a bit more please? :3 A Curve would be pretty nice.
01:38:523 (8) - Same for this one here ^
01:51:244 (2,4) - Compare this blanket 01:52:574 (1,3) - with this one, it would be more consistent if they would look the same.
00:36:055 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - http://puu.sh/3WlJ7.jpg Could you try this? It's going up too much, like this it goes a bit more to the right (maybe use less DS than in the picture). I think going to the right is the better solution here because it makes it a bit more interesting.
01:14:599 (1,1,1) - Meh. I see what you wanna do here but please, replace these sliders by 2 circles and make a nice jump :C It emphasizes the song so much more!

Looks good~~

I hope it'll improve your map a bit (the mapset is really really good already)

And here, take a star

See you! ~

HelloSCV

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Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-08-07T22:53:55+00:00

Amamiya Yuko

Amamiya Yuko wrote:
M4M
[Another]
00:04:726 - 00:15:358 - In this part, I suggest you change some sections' volume according to the music, for example: 00:11:941 - Decrease the volume to 20% and add a 30% one at 00:12:320 - , that will fit better. awesome
00:33:586 (1,2,3) - Use a higher spacing between them to hint player that rhythm has been changed? well i.0x DS is enough for me
00:39:662 (1,2,3) - Same here. :<
00:45:358 (5) - I highly dislike ending a slider on the downbeat, especially you haven't used it on the previous ones. ok
01:32:068 (1,2,3) - Personally, that finish sample is kinda loud and you have used a lot on the map, I suggest you decrease the volume for where it may be considered as a overuse, not only here. fixed!
01:34:346 (1,2,3,7) - ^ Another example. of course
01:40:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ LOL. LOL
]

CDFA

CDFA wrote:
I SWEAR TO GOD I THOUGHT I MODDED THIS lolol

WTF

I SWEAR

Another:
00:39:662 (1,2) - Maybe have this as a slider rather than 2 notes, as there's a lot of space compared to the other notes, and players might be tripped up by the need to wait well i think notes are better still
00:46:023 (1,2) - Make this into Slider-Note to give leniancy to the blue note not fixed ;_;
01:04:726 (1,2,3) - Kind of bugs me and I'd rather have it as a slider, but it works either way yup it works nicely
01:32:320 (2,3) - Make these larger jumps to add more emphasis nice!

i was talking to other people about how I need to mod good maps every once in a while

but now that I'm doing it i'm just like

dam my mod posts be short.

gj

Irreversible

Irreversible wrote:
hiya, m4m!

[General]

Seems like you have some kiai time - issues You might wanna check them. you may know about GD can have different kiai times

02:01:688 - I don't think it's an over use of kiai flashes here, so you might add one well since spinner is start at that time, don't need new kiai times

[Another]

Hm, why don't you take another name for that diff? Maybe Lunatic, Extra, (i'm not familiar with diffnames, so just take 1 harder than another, or make kevincelas one below another) but i don't think my diff is harder than kevin's so current diff names are good enough for me

00:11:941 (4,5,6) - I don't like the spacing between these, is there a specific reason why you put them like that? I would place 6 a bit more to the right. seems fine for me
01:36:814 (7,8) - I really dislike how you place slider / circle like this, can't you think of something that flows a bit more please? :3 A Curve would be pretty nice. why people think straight slider isn't good for flow :<
01:38:523 (8) - Same for this one here ^ sorry
01:51:244 (2,4) - Compare this blanket 01:52:574 (1,3) - with this one, it would be more consistent if they would look the same. alright~
00:36:055 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - http://puu.sh/3WlJ7.jpg Could you try this? It's going up too much, like this it goes a bit more to the right (maybe use less DS than in the picture). I think going to the right is the better solution here because it makes it a bit more interesting. i think don't need to fix those
01:14:599 (1,1,1) - Meh. I see what you wanna do here but please, replace these sliders by 2 circles and make a nice jump :C It emphasizes the song so much more! keep it now

Looks good~~

I hope it'll improve your map a bit (the mapset is really really good already)

And here, take a star
See you! ~

~~i'll reply to your mods after i end up m4m requests~~~

thansk for mod guys! helpful enough for me~

Last edited by HelloSCV 2013-08-08T06:49:50+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

happy623

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happy623 2013-08-08T06:29:24+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
hiya, m4m!

[General]

Seems like you have some kiai time - issues You might wanna check them.

KIAI

02:01:688 - I don't think it's an over use of kiai flashes here, so you might add one

[623's Beginner]

00:12:320 (2) - Ahh, just a little nazi. Try to move the first red point a bit to the right to improve that blanket. done o/
00:27:510 (2) - One or two grids to the right, to improve the blanket again. moved one grid
00:39:662 (3) - Move the last white point to x:344 y:301 for guess what- blanket improving xD I tried to move it some grid to make it blanket ;w;
00:46:877 (1) - This one sounds too early for me, i can hear something in the background, yet it feels wrong. Consider deleting the reverse and move it to 00:47:257 - Don't forget to extend it to the next white tick! Add a finish at the end as well, if you like, it emphasizes the song pretty well. ;w; It seems to be harder, I increased the slidertick volume instead
00:54:852 (1) - I don't know if you ever watched a beginners play, but they mostly click as soon as they see the circle / slider. So this spacing isn't really clever. Could you try shaping the slider a bit different, and move it to somewhere else? okay
01:16:118 - - What about making the hitsounds louder? You can hear the reason in the background lol increased~ Also, I made some green lines at other places too
01:17:637 - Same here ^
01:22:194 (3) - NC? This whistle in the background is a new part of the song. ok looks nice
01:37:384 (3) - To get a better flow I suggest x: 223 y: 272 I moved to x228 y268 instead o/
02:01:688 - I don't think it's an over use of kiai flashes here, so you might add one added✧

I like that map, good job hello :3

I hope it'll improve your map a bit (the mapset is really really good already)

And here, take a star
See you! ~

thanks!!! xD
´◉‿ゝ◉`) http://puu.sh/3WFrx

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2013-08-08T09:55:51+00:00

don't forget for give nivalis in tags, HelloSCV

HelloSCV

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Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2013-08-08T12:10:06+00:00

Oh thanks about it i'll add it soon

sheela

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sheela 2013-08-08T20:23:02+00:00

[623's Beginner]
00:19:915 (4) - NC?
00:44:979 (3) - ^
02:05:667 (1) - I think the spinner isn't fitting with the music

[Flask's Standard]
00:10:042 (4) - NC?
00:51:814 (5) - ^
01:07:763 (4) - ^
01:13:080 (5) - ^

[Niva's Hyper]
00:10:042 (2) - NC?
00:37:194 (10) - ^
01:41:181 (2) - ^
01:41:941 (3) - ^

[-keincela-'s Another]
00:10:042 (6) - NC?

Good Luck and star!

happy623

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happy623 2013-08-08T20:42:32+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
[623's Beginner]
00:19:915 (4) - NC? no for this two, the melody didnt change too much imo
00:44:979 (3) - ^
02:05:667 (1) - I think the spinner isn't fitting with the music well I cant drag it too early because newbies may not handle it well

Good Luck and star!

thanks for mod

!!!

Roxas

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Roxas 2013-08-08T23:17:21+00:00

Remove "bms" from tags since that's the source :v

edit: no kud me <3

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-08-08T23:29:13+00:00

deleted, thanks Roxas <3

Niva

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Niva 2013-08-09T04:26:01+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Niva:
00:04:726 (1,2,1,2) - I'd prefer to have this as an equally space pattern rather than what it is now Ah, like this is more beautiful imo... I adjusted the spacing for both (2) though~
00:34:346 (2) - The flow of this bugs me since I'm forced to go in the opposite direction that I want to go, especially since the rest of the map has been good about flow Err, it's fine imo o.o
00:58:650 (1,2,3) - I know it's boring to have like the same spacing but like it doesn't make much sense to have a jump here Also did this for beauty actually (adjusted the next (4,1) a bit though so this would hopefully make more sense)

Irreversible wrote:
[Niva's Hyper]

00:18:017 (5,6,7) - 5 to 6 has a DS of 0.21, while 6 to 7 has a DS of 0.26, it's up to you whether you want to fix or not. Oh, I designed the streams here with dist. snap off actually... Hopefully fixed though
01:08:523 (1) - This slider would look even neater if you make the second part of it properly straight. Yep, done
01:16:877 (3,4,5) - The DS failed again here, 0.26 > 0.29, idk why, but i can clearly see it. Just aesthetics obviously but still :c :3
01:18:776 (4,1) - Don't you wanna map this 1/4 beat here? It would make this part a bit more exciting. Hmm, prefer as is~
01:41:941 (3) - You missed NC here.. i hate explaining NC's, so .. 01:40:422 (1,2) - this is a part, and then there's definetly a new one 01:41:941 (3) - here. Oh yep, adding NC would do

sheela901 : Only fixed 01:41:941 (which was also fixed through Irreversible's mod) - thanks everyone for the mod!

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woshiguabi

71 posts

Joined November 2012

woshiguabi 2013-08-10T17:56:59+00:00

HI SCV
sorry for so long time，i'm busy in several days，sorry again
↓here is my bad mod
[623's Beginner]
00:46:118 (5) - too hard for beginner?

SPOILER

i'm a baka and don't know how to place notes ><

[Flask's Standard]
00:49:915 (1) - I forget my idea XD. maybe have changed?
01:11:561 (1) - use finish?
01:13:080 (5) - ^
01:18:776 (1) - use 1/6?
[Niva's Hyper]
can hardly mod this diff...
02:00:928 (4) - add 1/4 beat and move the two sliders?

SPOILER

[-kevincela-'s Another]
00:54:282 (2) - move to 00:54:377(2)
01:40:422 (1) - too easy place? i think can make these note further

SPOILER

01:49:156 (3) - use 1/3 ,move to 01:49:282 (3) - and add a note on 01:49:029 (3) -

SPOILER

I love your diff so no change

ok
i think i shouldn't get kd XD

happy623

1,437 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-08-11T11:58:01+00:00

woshiguabi wrote:
HI SCV
sorry for so long time，i'm busy in several days，sorry again
↓here is my bad mod

[623's Beginner]
00:46:118 (5) - too hard for beginner? its okay I guess xD
SPOILER
i'm a baka and don't know how to place notes >< Σ(,,ﾟДﾟ) ?!

I love your diff so no change
ok
i think i shouldn't get kd XD

thanks for modding x)

woshiguabi

71 posts

Joined November 2012

woshiguabi 2013-08-11T12:29:27+00:00

happy623 wrote:
thanks for modding x)

殴打623

happy623

1,437 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-08-11T13:14:32+00:00

woshiguabi wrote:
happy623 wrote:
thanks for modding x)
殴打623

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,858 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2013-08-12T09:51:51+00:00

Some of the mods have been fixed, thanks!

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Nymph

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Nymph 2013-08-12T13:14:52+00:00

[Flask's Standard]
00:07:003 (4) - Aimod said here the object is unsnapped, just redid this slider a little bit would be fine

nothing else, good job.

Flask

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Flask 2013-08-13T03:07:39+00:00

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HelloSCV 2013-08-13T03:10:19+00:00

updated

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HelloSCV wrote:
nnzz

>: where did you learn this word

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HelloSCV 2013-08-13T03:18:18+00:00

From Flask w

thanks for bubble xD

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go~go~SCV

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