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Delirious? - Deeper

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Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
Alarido
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 14 de julho de 2013 at 18:36:30

Artist: Delirious?
Title: Deeper
Tags: Original Version Deeper Martin Smith Stuart Garrard captin1
BPM: 206
Filesize: 6323kb
Play Time: 04:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. captin's Normal (2,67 stars, 210 notes)
  2. Easy (1,81 stars, 155 notes)
  3. Hard (4,36 stars, 283 notes)
  4. Insane (4,97 stars, 547 notes)
Download: Delirious? - Deeper
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Este mapa foi cancelado. Mais detalhes? Aqui, sir.
Last edited by Alarido , edited 26 times in total.
captin1
osu! Alumni
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Joined February 2011
captin1
Hey! Saw in your queue that you're looking for a GD. What difficulty are you looking for?
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
Alarido

captin1 wrote:

Hey! Saw in your queue that you're looking for a GD. What difficulty are you looking for?
You could make 1 GD, easier than [Hard] (:
captin1
osu! Alumni
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Joined February 2011
captin1

cFiszpan wrote:

captin1 wrote:

Hey! Saw in your queue that you're looking for a GD. What difficulty are you looking for?
You could make 1 GD, easier than [Hard] (:
Will do!
wonders
610 posts
Joined December 2011
wonders
sorry, i can't mod for you.
my mapping idea is depends on the rhythm, not the vocal, so please do more work on listening the music.
Alarido
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Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
Alarido

angelfix wrote:

sorry, i can't mod for you.
my mapping idea is depends on the rhythm, not the vocal, so please do more work on listening the music.

Well well, thank you anyway...
I focused on the vocals too... Maybe captin1 make her GD following the drums, thence could you mod just her GD?
I still lookin' for people to mod it...

And someday I maybe do an Insane diff based just in the drums (:

(Hm...good idea! I'll try next holiday -- march 29 -- holy friday here)

:D
Alarido
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Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
Alarido
I started on doing the [Insane], more closely to drums than the [Hard], that's primarily based on voice (:
The [Insane] is now READY.

I'll remapping [Hard] on next days!

And captin1: you could make a [Normal] to the mapset, to fulfill the nicer diff spread (: and please make your diff based on the drums (according to angelfix said), and I hope I'll appreciate and add it to mapset... And depending on your mapping style, maybe we try collab the [Insane] too, here or in another song in the future.

For all modders: don't make any M4M to this mapset until I say it's ready for mods (:
captin1
osu! Alumni
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captin1
welp, sorry for taking so long :x

SPOILER
osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: Delirious - Deeper.mp3
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Title:Deeper
TitleUnicode:Deeper
Artist:Delirious?
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Creator:cFiszpan
Version:captin's Normal
Source:
Tags:Original Version Deeper Martin Smith Stuart Garrard
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Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
Alarido

captin1 wrote:

welp, sorry for taking so long :x
Sorry for my lack of patience (:

I'm Thankful for you work, captin1 ^^
-- (Added your dif ^^)

and let's go for Ranking <3

Feel free to ask a GD from me (: Broccoly too (:

By now I declare this thread OPEN for all kind of modders ^.^ C'mom Modders!

and fabriciorby you're invited to play my Insane!!!
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
GugUCorn
from my queue

[General]
Kiai 1 start 01:01:328 ~ 01:16:765 End
Kiai 2 start 01:57:250 ~ 02:13:561 End
Kiai 3 same

[Easy]

  1. 00:32:784 (1,2) - (1) Remove NewCombo, (2) Add NewCombo
  2. 00:37:445 (1) - overlap on 00:35:114 (3)
  3. 00:42:687 (1,2) - change Distance 1.45x to 1.05x
  4. 00:45:017 (3,4) - change Distance 1.26x to 1.05x
  5. 00:47:347 (1) - start on 00:47:056 and end on 00:49:095..and If you want,add note here 00:49:678
  6. 00:56:668 (1) - start on 00:56:377
  7. 01:24:046 (1) - Previous distance is 1.09x..please change distance 1.05x
  8. 01:42:979 (1) - end here 01:45:017
  9. 01:47:930 (4) - add hitsound soft or normal Finish
  10. 01:49:678 (2) - Previous distance is 1.08x..please change distance 1.05x
  11. 02:11:231 (1) - end here 02:13:561
  12. 02:18:221 (2) - so many repeat...it's confusion..
[captin's Normal]

  1. 01:40:648 (4) - overlap on 01:41:959 (1)
  2. 01:49:969 (4) - ^
  3. 02:04:823 (4) - move to (87,172) for perfectly stacking
  4. 02:11:231 (5) - Newcombo and can you end here 02:11:231 (5)?
  5. 02:33:367 (1) - move to (276,40)
  6. 03:16:037 (1) - finish
[Hard]

  1. 00:33:367 (5) - NC
  2. 00:34:532 (1) - remove NC
  3. 00:35:697 (5) - NC
  4. 00:36:862 (1) - remove NC
  5. 00:38:027 (5) - NC
  6. 00:39:192 (1) - remove NC
  7. 00:52:008 (1) - add hitsound soft or normal finish
  8. 00:58:706 (4) - move to (114,114)
  9. 01:25:795 (4) - overlap on tail of 01:24:629 (2)
  10. 01:29:580 (1) - remove NC
  11. 02:33:076 (2) - perfectly overlap
  12. 02:43:852 (1) - 5th point is not red..
  13. 02:48:076 - Breaktime start 02:49:678 or add note here 02:49:678
[Insane]

  1. 00:37:736 (11) - perfectly overlap
  2. 00:40:066 (8) - ^
  3. 01:00:745 (1) - i think don't need to NC
  4. 01:14:872 (6) - overlap on 01:14:289 (4)
  5. 01:16:911 ~ 01:19:678 - add breaktime
  6. 01:38:610 (6) - it's little boring in Insane
  7. 01:40:940 (8) - ^
  8. 02:22:809 (1,2,3,4) - it's strange?
  9. 02:38:027 - i think don't need to slow...
hmm...it's all..
GL
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,608 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1

[Pisces] wrote:

from my queue

[General]
Kiai 1 start 01:01:328 ~ 01:16:765 End
Kiai 2 start 01:57:250 ~ 02:13:561 End
Kiai 3 same

[captin's Normal]

  1. 01:40:648 (4) - overlap on 01:41:959 (1)
  2. 01:49:969 (4) - ^
  3. 02:04:823 (4) - move to (87,172) for perfectly stacking
  4. 02:11:231 (5) - Newcombo and can you end here 02:11:231 (5)?
  5. 02:33:367 (1) - move to (276,40)
  6. 03:16:037 (1) - finish
All fixed, kiai not exactly what you said but mine fits a bit better

hmm...it's all..
GL
Oh, and can you add captin1 to tags?
SPOILER
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PreviewTime: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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Artist:Delirious?
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Creator:Alarido
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Tags:Original Version Deeper Martin Smith Stuart Garrard captin1
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432,172,176668,6,0,L|372:88,1,100
140,152,177542,2,0,L|200:236,2,100,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,292,178998,6,0,P|448:240|472:200,2,100,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,124,180017,2,0,P|288:176|280:216,1,100
172,68,180745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,284,181328,6,0,P|112:344|152:368,2,100,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,248,182202,2,0,P|120:212|80:204,2,100
248,156,183076,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,56,183658,6,0,P|468:168|424:264,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,328,184823,2,0,P|204:216|248:120,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,185988,12,4,188318,0:0:0:0:
392,52,188901,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,148,189192,2,0,L|312:224,1,50
280,248,189483,2,0,P|220:232|152:232,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,264,189920,2,0,P|84:240|52:192,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,144,190357,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,124,190648,6,0,P|252:72|268:48,2,100,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,336,191813,2,0,P|404:320|488:324,2,150
180,288,192979,2,0,P|180:220|152:164,1,100
48,180,193561,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,60,194144,6,0,P|324:136|392:184,2,150
180,152,195309,2,0,P|228:204|240:240,1,100
132,288,195891,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,196037,12,4,197639,0:0:0:0:
72,56,198221,5,8,0:0:0:0:
100,148,198512,2,0,L|112:228,1,50
92,256,198804,2,0,P|108:328|148:360,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,308,199241,2,0,P|256:308|300:332,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,340,199678,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,228,199969,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,148,200260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,264,200551,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,88,201134,2,0,P|180:168|116:196,2,150
368,84,202299,6,0,B|148:216|136:312|204:352|312:356|372:308|368:216|136:80,1,700,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,101,204629,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,4,204920,1,2,0:0:0:0:
225,44,205212,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,164,205503,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,200,205794,1,8,0:0:0:0:
Alarido
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Alarido

[Pisces] wrote:

from my queue

[General]
Kiai 1 start 01:01:328 ~ 01:16:765 End
Kiai 2 start 01:57:250 ~ 02:13:561 End
Kiai 3 same

→ All Fixed on my diffs !

[Easy]

  1. 00:32:784 (1,2) - (1) Remove NewCombo, (2) Add NewCombo → Fixed!
  2. 00:37:445 (1) - overlap on 00:35:114 (3) → well, I don't see any *great* problem here... then not fixed... but if other people say about this then I'll change (: → Reconsidered and Fixed.
  3. 00:42:687 (1,2) - change Distance 1.45x to 1.05x → Fixed! Pattern changed.
  4. 00:45:017 (3,4) - change Distance 1.26x to 1.05x → Fixed! Pattern changed.
  5. 00:47:347 (1) - start on 00:47:056 and end on 00:49:095..and If you want,add note here 00:49:678 → Fixed and Added!
  6. 00:56:668 (1) - start on 00:56:377 → Fixed!
  7. 01:24:046 (1) - Previous distance is 1.09x..please change distance 1.05x → Fixed!
  8. 01:42:979 (1) - end here 01:45:017 → Fixed!
  9. 01:47:930 (4) - add hitsound soft or normal Finish → Fixed!
  10. 01:49:678 (2) - Previous distance is 1.08x..please change distance 1.05x → Fixed!
  11. 02:11:231 (1) - end here 02:13:561 → Fixed!
  12. 02:18:221 (2) - so many repeat...it's confusion.. → Fixed!
[Hard]

  1. 00:33:367 (5) - NC → Added!
  2. 00:34:532 (1) - remove NC → Removed!
  3. 00:35:697 (5) - NC → Added!
  4. 00:36:862 (1) - remove NC → Removed!
  5. 00:38:027 (5) - NC → Added!
  6. 00:39:192 (1) - remove NC → Removed!
  7. 00:52:008 (1) - add hitsound soft or normal finish → Added!
  8. 00:58:706 (4) - move to (114,114) → Fixed!
  9. 01:25:795 (4) - overlap on tail of 01:24:629 (2) → Fixed!
  10. 01:29:580 (1) - remove NC → I added NC here to signal SV change but... Removed! 'coz a little more challenge isn't evil.
  11. 02:33:076 (2) - perfectly overlap → Fixed!
  12. 02:43:852 (1) - 5th point is not red.. → Fixed!
  13. 02:48:076 - Breaktime start 02:49:678 or add note here 02:49:678 → Fixed! Added a note at place you pointed, and stretched spinner by 2 little white ticks.
[Insane]

  1. 00:37:736 (11) - perfectly overlap → Fixed!
  2. 00:40:066 (8) - ^ → Fixed!
  3. 01:00:745 (1) - i think don't need to NC → Fixed!
  4. 01:14:872 (6) - overlap on 01:14:289 (4) → Fixed!
  5. 01:16:911 ~ 01:19:678 - add breaktime → Fixed!
  6. 01:38:610 (6) - it's little boring in Insane → Fixed by splitting it in two
  7. 01:40:940 (8) - ^ → Fixed in the same way as prior
  8. 02:22:809 (1,2,3,4) - it's strange? → Changed to a pair of opposite jumpy sliders
  9. 02:38:027 - i think don't need to slow... → Well, I think song suggest any slowing soul here. But not too slow, you're right. Velocity changed to 0.75 (was 0.50) and patterns redesigned.
hmm...it's all..
GL
Thanks For Advance, Pisces!

All diffs updated (:


captin1 wrote:

Oh, and can you add captin1 to tags?
Done!
Alarido
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Fixed a bit!

C'mom Modders!
Accepting any kind of modding!
Don't matter if it is Nazi, Marxist, Bankster, Ecologist etc...

If you think the song is so long for you to mod, feel free to choose one diff to mod ^^ it'll be fine :)

If you think the song is long but you're DARE to mod it properly, if you mod ALL the diffs, I'll mod your map back. :D

This case, if you have 2 or more pending, you can say what you want I mod or let me choose one of them randomly (:

If you have NO pending maps, don't worry (: You'll earn a Ticket from the Coffee Party Queue!
Alarido
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[Important Note]

captin's Userpage wrote:

Any and all gd's that I have in your sets are yours to do as you wish with, you can delete them, edit them, apply mods, all up to you :3 I'll try to tell everyone that has one individually but yeah. don't bother modding any of my own sets cause I won't be able to apply mods haha.
This means I'll apply all mods by myself in all diffs, including the [captin's Normal]. I'll NOT delete it, and I hope no one say to remap it (since it follows the song rhythm). I want rank this mapset, too.

Thence...

C'mon Modders!

Don't Be Afraid about captin's Normal, please mod it as it were made by me, and all will run good (:
Helios_Zul
91 posts
Joined September 2012
Helios_Zul
Hello M4M Request ~

EASY
I dont see much wrong in there but
03:04:823 I Prefer Like this On the Slider
SPOILER

NORMAL
00:25:794 (1) Put More Futher than circle hit (4) so Player dont confuse
00:33:367 add notes ?
02:10:648 ^

HARD
01:01:911 try to make it visible so people didnt confuse like this
SPOILER
01:07:590 (2,3) put more further each other
01:08:901 same like 01:01:911
01:09:920 ^
01:11:231 ^
01:57:833 Put the circle hit below the slider
01:58:415 ^
02:00:163 ^
02:00:745 ^

INSANE
00:42:396(8,9) Cant see the circle hit
01:14:872(6) ^
01:25:212(7,8,9,10)^
01:47:056(1) put it on the slider instead out from slider
02:27:687(3) same like 00:42:396(8,9)
02:28:270(6) ^
02:28:852(9) ^
02:29:435(12) ^
02:40:357(5) put it more further
03:03:585 (1,2,3,4,5) the sound feel different maybe long a little the slider?
03:21:571 (3) cant see
03:24:629 (1,2,3,4,5) make more proper endings like this pic
SPOILER

Hope It Helpful :)
Alarido
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Mod Applying Legenda wrote:

Deep Blue → Changed as modded said.
Pale Blue → Changed in my own way - the mod still helpful by pointed the problem I fixed.
Green → Comments
Pale Rose → Reasons why not changed that point.
Deep Pink → No change.

Helios_Zul wrote:

Hello M4M Request ~

EASY
I dont see much wrong in there but
03:04:823 I Prefer Like this On the Slider
SPOILER
→ Done.

NORMAL
00:25:794 (1) Put More Futher than circle hit (4) so Player dont confuse → Done.
00:33:367 add notes ? → Done.
02:10:648 ^ → Done.

HARD
01:01:911 try to make it visible so people didnt confuse like this → Done.
SPOILER
→ Done. Well I changed radically the pattern, make a jumpy one here, like → http://puu.sh/32EaG.jpg → http://puu.sh/32EbT.jpg → http://puu.sh/32EcT.jpg → Still quite simple, however.
01:07:590 (2,3) put more further each other → Done.
01:08:901 same like 01:01:911 → Done.
01:09:920 ^ → Done.
01:11:231 ^ → Done.
01:57:833 Put the circle hit below the slider → Done.
01:58:415 ^ → Done.
02:00:163 ^ → Done.
02:00:745 ^ → Done.

INSANE
00:42:396(8,9) Cant see the circle hit → Done like http://puu.sh/32Elb.jpg
01:14:872(6) ^ → Done like http://puu.sh/32EnG.jpg
01:25:212(7,8,9,10)^ → Made like http://puu.sh/32EEF.jpg
01:47:056(1) put it on the slider instead out from slider → I tested it (autoplay) and by the gameplay seems great, but by aesthetics no. I kept it, sorry.
02:27:687(3) same like 00:42:396(8,9) → Done like http://puu.sh/32Fn0.jpg
02:28:270(6) ^ → Done like ^
02:28:852(9) ^ → Done like ^
02:29:435(12) ^ → Done like ^
02:40:357(5) put it more further → Changed like http://puu.sh/32Frz.jpg ← http://puu.sh/32FtL.jpg ← http://puu.sh/32Fuv.jpg
03:03:585 (1,2,3,4,5) the sound feel different maybe long a little the slider? → Really. Changed (:
03:21:571 (3) cant see → Fixed.
03:24:629 (1,2,3,4,5) make more proper endings like this pic → Done (:
SPOILER
→ Done (:

Hope It Helpful :)
Very very helpful, man! Thank you very much ^w^
Improved some patterns too (: especially on [Insane]

I'll mod your map soon (may be tomorrow?)

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Naryuga
782 posts
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Naryuga
Hi!
Challenging m4m for your queue

[Easy]
  1. I highly recommend you reduce HP/OD by at least 2 tick, because they are more than the ones in Normal diff. In short, make HP/OD 2
  2. 00:24:046 (2) - umm... make a better symmetry? It doesn't looks good because of a small spacing issue.
    344,84,24046,2,0,B|364:164|425:192|425:192|364:220|344:300,1,280
  3. 00:26:377 - once you applied the slider above, copy and paste it
  4. 00:42:105 (3) - add whistle? and whistles on the every 2nd and 4th white tick sounds great to me
  5. 00:50:261 (2) - place the start at (x:76, y:72) to fix the spacing (set x1.05)
  6. 02:22:299 - I want a circle to fulfil this empty place... maybe on (x:320, y:164)?
  7. 02:26:377 (4) - you lack consistency with the hitsounds. As well as 02:22:882 (1,2,3) - , put whistle at 02:26:377 - (slider head), too
[captin's Normal]
  1. 00:25:066 (4) - make a slider from 00:24:920 - to 00:25:066 - instead? This rhythm is hard to read since 00:24:629 - is on the white tick and 00:25:066 - is on the red tick so players, especially beginners, would be confused with this
  2. 01:31:911 (6) - start from 01:31:765 - sounds much better, as this part you mainly follow the vocal
  3. 02:11:231 (1,1) - this overlap doesn't looks nice... It would brake the heart. Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/791481 move the slider in order not collapse like this
  4. 02:32:202 (4) - obviously you missed a clap on the end of the slider
  5. 02:52:881 (2) - repeat once and fix the spacing with (3)? like 03:02:202 (2,3) - ... oh, you miss the clap again on 03:03:076 (3) -
  6. 03:21:134 (4,1) - this overlap also ruins the nice pattern...
[Hard]
  1. Try AR6?
  2. 00:41:813 - add a circle here? feels empty
  3. 01:15:163 (1) - end this spin and KIAI at 01:17:639 - ? The end sounds very strange
  4. 03:04:532 (2) - Begin at 03:04:678 - to fit the guitar sound
[Insane]
  1. AR8 is more appropriate for this high BPM insane difficulty than AR7
  2. 01:07:736 (4) - this slider sounds bad as the vocal is off and the spacing issue with 01:08:173 (1) - . Try moving this slider's start at 01:07:590 - and an additional circle on 01:08:027 - . Example picture: http://puu.sh/37kxf.jpg
  3. 02:11:085 (1) - lol this is awesome, so many points :oops:
I see some nice placement patterns, while the hitsounds needs a lot of work...
That's all by me, hoping this helps. Good luck!
Alarido
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Deep Blue - Changed as you said
Sky Blue - Changed, but in another way (your mod still helpful by pointed the problem)
Pink - Not changed
Pale Rose - Reason why I didn't changed something

Naryuga wrote:

Hi!
Challenging m4m for your queue

[Easy]
  1. I highly recommend you reduce HP/OD by at least 2 tick, because they are more than the ones in Normal diff. In short, make HP/OD 2 ► Done.
  2. 00:24:046 (2) - umm... make a better symmetry? It doesn't looks good because of a small spacing issue. ► Done.
    344,84,24046,2,0,B|364:164|425:192|425:192|364:220|344:300,1,280
  3. 00:26:377 - once you applied the slider above, copy and paste it ► Done.
  4. 00:42:105 (3) - add whistle? and whistles on the every 2nd and 4th white tick sounds great to me ► Done.
  5. 00:50:261 (2) - place the start at (x:76, y:72) to fix the spacing (set x1.05) ► Done.
  6. 02:22:299 - I want a circle to fulfil this empty place... maybe on (x:320, y:164)? ► Done.
  7. 02:26:377 (4) - you lack consistency with the hitsounds. As well as 02:22:882 (1,2,3) - , put whistle at 02:26:377 - (slider head), too ► Done.
[captin's Normal]
  1. 00:25:066 (4) - make a slider from 00:24:920 - to 00:25:066 - instead? This rhythm is hard to read since 00:24:629 - is on the white tick and 00:25:066 - is on the red tick so players, especially beginners, would be confused with this ► Done.
  2. 01:31:911 (6) - start from 01:31:765 - sounds much better, as this part you mainly follow the vocal ► Done.
  3. 02:11:231 (1,1) - this overlap doesn't looks nice... It would brake the heart. Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/791481 move the slider in order not collapse like this ► Done.
  4. 02:32:202 (4) - obviously you missed a clap on the end of the slider ► Done.
  5. 02:52:881 (2) - repeat once and fix the spacing with (3)? like 03:02:202 (2,3) - ... oh, you miss the clap again on 03:03:076 (3) - ► Fixed.
  6. 03:21:134 (4,1) - this overlap also ruins the nice pattern... ► Fixed.
[Hard]
  1. Try AR6? ► Done.
  2. 00:41:813 - add a circle here? feels empty ► Done.
  3. 01:15:163 (1) - end this spin and KIAI at 01:17:639 - ? The end sounds very strange ► Done. but all KIAI in this time fixed to 01:18:804 to keep Kiai consistency in all diffs.
  4. 03:04:532 (2) - Begin at 03:04:678 - to fit the guitar sound ► No changes here, it sounds me better as is.
[Insane]
  1. AR8 is more appropriate for this high BPM insane difficulty than AR7 ► Done.
  2. 01:07:736 (4) - this slider sounds bad as the vocal is off and the spacing issue with 01:08:173 (1) - . Try moving this slider's start at 01:07:590 - and an additional circle on 01:08:027 - . Example picture: http://puu.sh/37kxf.jpg ► Done.
  3. 02:11:085 (1) - lol this is awesome, so many points :oops: ♥ Thank you
I see some nice placement patterns, while the hitsounds needs a lot of work...
That's all by me, hoping this helps. Good luck!
♥ Thank you very much ♥
♥ どうもありがとうございます♥

And I'll mod your map tomorrow -- now is 11:21 p.m. here (GMT+3) ~.~

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Helios_Zul
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Helios_Zul
I totally Like This Song ++

Star :)
Alarido
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Helios_Zul wrote:

I totally Like This Song ++

Star :)

Thank You Very Much :D for the star and support :)

And we'll going ahead, evolving, improving ^^
Alarido
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Alarido
This map need so much mods, mods, mods, a lot of them.
Mainly captin's Normal
but I feel I can improve the Insane a bit more.
I'll work this map a bit more, this night or later.
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
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jonathanlfj
swag

more swag
22:02 *Alarido is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/230857 Delirious? - Deeper]
22:02 Alarido: the insane
22:02 jonathanlfj: kk
22:02 jonathanlfj: dling
22:02 Alarido: the hard I might can do
22:03 jonathanlfj: dat bpm xD
22:03 jonathanlfj: i think u doubled it
22:03 Alarido: few streams, it's more jumps
22:03 jonathanlfj: lets take a look
22:07 jonathanlfj: troll x
22:07 Alarido: streams are harder than jumps
22:07 jonathanlfj: u followed distance snap pretty tightly in this map xD
22:07 jonathanlfj: well i wont consider those streams
22:07 jonathanlfj: they are really fast single taps
22:08 jonathanlfj: but yeah its quite difficult when they suddenly change direction
22:08 jonathanlfj: and the sound quality...
22:08 Alarido: it's true
22:08 Alarido: what?
22:08 jonathanlfj: the mp3 quality
22:08 jonathanlfj: sounds like a youtube rip
22:09 Alarido: hm... I don't own their CD, but...
22:09 jonathanlfj: let me get u a better one
22:09 Alarido: do you will do?
22:10 jonathanlfj: i already got it xD
22:10 jonathanlfj: puushing
22:10 jonathanlfj: let me play some troll maps
22:11 jonathanlfj: do you have happy30's old yuanxian?
22:11 *jonathanlfj is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/205205 Demetori - Old Yuanxian]
22:11 Alarido: yet no, but it's downloading
22:11 jonathanlfj: kk
22:11 jonathanlfj: im uploading the mp3
22:11 jonathanlfj: will get u an offset too
22:11 Alarido: right
22:12 jonathanlfj: u can study happy30's mapping
22:12 jonathanlfj: favorite mapper of mine
22:13 jonathanlfj: once you learn his ways distance snap will seem useless to you xD
22:17 jonathanlfj: orz
22:17 jonathanlfj: http://puu.sh/3mR51.mp3
22:17 jonathanlfj: rename it to the one u have in ur song folder and replace
22:18 Alarido: updating...
22:19 jonathanlfj: let me get u a new offset
22:26 Alarido: (:
22:26 jonathanlfj: so do -275 on all ur timing sections
22:26 jonathanlfj: 00:28:432 (1) - select all ur objects and start here
22:27 jonathanlfj: u probably need to redo ur green sections cause they are all off by a few bars now
22:27 jonathanlfj: actually do -280
22:28 jonathanlfj: 00:28:427 (1) - and start here
22:28 Alarido: the current main offset (the red) is 746
22:28 jonathanlfj: 466 then
22:28 jonathanlfj: and then let ur objects start at 00:28:427 (1) -
22:32 jonathanlfj: oh yeah open up ur .osu file
22:32 jonathanlfj: see the line
22:32 jonathanlfj: Video,0,"Delirious-Deeper.avi"
22:32 Alarido: hm...
22:33 jonathanlfj: change it to
22:33 jonathanlfj: Video,-280,"Delirious-Deeper.avi"
22:33 jonathanlfj: for all diffs
22:33 Alarido: true
22:33 jonathanlfj: the lets the video star earlier which keeps it in sync with the audio
22:43 Alarido: the .mp3 seems to be a longer version
22:44 jonathanlfj: yes in the beginning the intro is longer
22:45 Alarido: map goes right until 02:21:728 , this chorus is longer than I mapped
22:45 jonathanlfj: oh i see
22:45 jonathanlfj: u can cut it out
22:45 jonathanlfj: actually i will do it
22:46 Alarido: I could map the part...but [captin's Normal] will get a leak if I do
22:47 Alarido: (or I'll map it, making an unpredicted 'collab')
22:47 jonathanlfj: actually i can cut it
22:47 jonathanlfj: give me a sec
22:48 Alarido: right (:
23:01 jonathanlfj: http://puu.sh/3mSER.mp3
23:02 jonathanlfj: offset 486 (+20)
23:04 jonathanlfj: remember to changr video offset too
23:04 jonathanlfj: -260 will replace -280
23:09 Alarido: the 'extra' part wasn't at the end of file
23:09 Alarido: it was in the middle
23:09 jonathanlfj: oh what
23:09 jonathanlfj: thats...interesting
23:10 Alarido: well, don't need worry about (:
23:10 jonathanlfj: ok then xD
23:10 Alarido: I'll take the longer .mp3 and work in the map
23:10 Alarido: and map the 'holes'
23:10 jonathanlfj: lol ok
23:40 Alarido: i'm back
23:48 jonathanlfj: srry was afk too xD
23:52 Alarido: my sis took pc from me
23:52 jonathanlfj: lol
23:53 Alarido: I'll put delirious map in WIP
23:53 jonathanlfj: yeah that would work
23:54 Alarido: feel free to post the irc log and the link of the file there
23:54 Alarido: so I can give kd
23:54 jonathanlfj: lol is it even worth a kd
23:54 Alarido: yes (:
23:54 jonathanlfj: ok then ><
Alarido
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Alarido
Thank you very much, my dear ♥
Helped a lot !!!
[And for other modders]
ths map is currently WIP, so don't mod it ... until I finish it (:

captin1 will be afk 'till August/September, so I'll complete his diff too.
Alarido
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Alarido
TERMINATION NOTICE

This map was canceled. He will not be continued. Not at all.
I do not feel more inspired to continue to invest in it. I do not feel and I have no hope of ever having that 'feeling' that I need to have to map this specific song.
Since my quality of mapping depends AND MUCH of my intimacy with the music itself, I decided on DELETION of this mapset.
I see I have no other choice but to do this, since I too would be dishonest to continue with something that myself (my inside) has not the slightest intention of doing so.

AVISO DE CANCELAMENTO

Este mapa foi cancelado. Ele não será continuado. Não mesmo.
Eu não me sinto mais inspirado para continuar a investir nele. Não sinto e não tenho a menor esperança de voltar a ter aquele 'feeling' que eu preciso ter pra mapear esta música.
Desde que minha qualidade de mapeamento depende E MUITO de minha intimidade com a música em si, decidi pela DELEÇÃO deste mapa set.
Vejo que não tenho outra alternativa a não ser fazer isso, visto que eu seria desonesto por demais em continuar com algo que eu mesmo (de meu foro íntimo) não tenha a menor intenção de fazê-lo.

Espero que NINGUÉM se meta nesta minha decisão.
Esta minha decisão é PEREMPTÓRIA, FINAL e CONCLUSIVA. Não voltarei atrás desta minha decisão.

Somente este Mapa aguardará o seu devido prazo de expiração e respectivo transporte automático para a área dos mapas Graved. Nos meus cálculos, isto levará pouco mais de três semanas.

Conto com a compreensão de todos, e aviso mais:

Se alguém não entender esta minha decisão e decidir se afastar de mim, que o faça. Não estou aqui para escravizar ninguém.
Eu não quero escravos. Eu não quero servos. Eu não quero empregados.
Quero apenas amigos sinceros e que estejam comigo ATÉ O FIM, PARA O QUE DER E VIER.
E que nunca me deixem, assim como eu jamais o farei.

E a ti, meu caro*, meu amado* e mui estimado*, mais do que todos aqui...

Muito obrigado pela ajuda, agradeço de coração.
pena eu não poder continuar este projeto, e dói-me ter de pará-lo.
Faço isto para o bem de todos. Será um mapa ruim a menos no osu!
E um peso a menos nos servers do peppy.

A música abaixo resume tudo!!!!


Meu Mundo e Nada Mais
Guilherme Arantes

Quando eu fui ferido
Vi tudo mudar
Das verdades
Que eu sabia...

Só sobraram restos
Que eu não esqueci
Toda aquela paz
Que eu tinha...

Eu que tinha tudo
Hoje estou mudo
Estou mudado
À meia-noite, à meia luz
Pensando!
Daria tudo, por um modo
De esquecer...

Eu queria tanto
Estar no escuro do meu quarto
À meia-noite, à meia luz
Sonhando!
Daria tudo, por meu mundo
E nada mais...

Não estou bem certo
Que ainda vou sorrir
Sem um travo de amargura...

Como ser mais livre
Como ser capaz
De enxergar um novo dia...

Eu que tinha tudo
Hoje estou mudo
Estou mudado
À meia-noite, à meia luz
Pensando!
Daria tudo, por um modo
De esquecer...

Eu queria tanto
Estar no escuro do meu quarto
À meia-noite, à meia luz
Sonhando!
Daria tudo, por meu mundo
E nada mais...
(3x)



kanpakyin se recusou a deletar este lixo. Só notificando ao pessoal.
Serei obrigado a carregar este pêso pelos próximos dias, até ele entrar no Graved.

Att.

E em lugar deste mapa, comunico que reerguerei das cinzas e do pó do monturo aquele outro... Sim, GENESIS - In Too Deep. Todas as diffs por mim, não aceitarei guest diffs nem collabs! Será tudo por minha conta!

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* Favor considerar estes verbos como conjugados no Pretérito Mais-que-perfeito.
Alarido
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Delirious - Deeper was canceled.
I'm waiting for Hatsuka and Sade maps get Ranked to start another Delirious song I like more: "Our God Reigns". Yeah, the Live version at Willow Creek as recorded on their DVD Disc. It's Low BPM song too, probably with 1/4 and might 1/8 notes on it :) and a bit longer, so I'll provide Normal and Hard only, not accepting any GD (but I still open to a collab on Hard).
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